Phenomenal Cosmic Power (Harry Potter/Multicross SI)

That is interesting!
Triumvirate Holdings eh?
Well, I'm pretty sure Caligula would want to skin you for this...
Nero might just want to recreate a very historic scene on your person now...
And Commodus...might go after you too.

Very nice, yes yes.
The world will hurl as much challenges at thee...
And will do its best to not let your turtle again.
 
Sitting in a Dennys, just east of Zanesville, Ohio,
Wanna hear something freaky?

I am a Long haul Truck Driver.
Means I travel all over the United States in a Semi Truck.
I occasionally park somewhere to get a shower, food, restock supplies, ECT.

I am currently, as of the moment I started reading this chapter and that first sentence, sitting in a Love's Travel Center.
Basically a Truck Stop.
Off I-70.
Exit 160.
In Zanesville, Ohio.
Across the street from me, is a Denny's.

Freaky right?
 
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You know something, if this man tries to turtle up to much, then ALL the Fate-Weavers may weave him into, EVERY PANTHEON to do a quest for, and even the Cross-Pantheonic war to save the world, cause that happens, not even a decade later, also forgot but how long is he supposed to live for, since he may have to stay here till the Literal end of the world, which starts with the coming of Ragnarok, and then everyone else joins on the ride to oblivion.
 
Never really got into the series once the Roman stuff started. Only got as far as the first book and a bit in the second. Been years since then.
Triumvirate Holdings sounds like Wolfram and Hart from Buffyverse.
Wanna hear something freaky?

I am a Long haul Truck Driver.
Means I travel all over the United States in a Semi Truck.
I occasionally park somewhere to get a shower, food, restock supplies, ECT.

I am currently, as of the moment I started reading this chapter and that first sentence, sitting in a Love's Travel Center.
Basically a Truck Stop.
Off I-70.
Exit 160.
In Zanesville, Ohio.
Across the street from me, is a Denny's.

Freaky right?
Was...was there any car accidents recently occurred around there too?
if this man tries to turtle up to much,
Just got told to knock the shit off and was told that the adventure would come to him if he avoided the call at the very start.
Not surprised he got forced like this.
Personally I'd go for the Egyptians. Being mortal is fine there. Might have issues if he doesn't have any old Egyptian blood, especially Pharaoh in him but the magic he does weild should help. Only issue is sharing headspace with a god but they got plenty crafts that be very interesting and the magic system is highly modifiable. Just avoid making dolls and enslaving demons.
 
Personally I'd go for the Egyptians. Being mortal is fine there. Might have issues if he doesn't have any old Egyptian blood, especially Pharaoh in him but the magic he does weild should help. Only issue is sharing headspace with a god but they got plenty crafts that be very interesting and the magic system is highly modifiable. Just avoid making dolls and enslaving demons.
Unfortunately the SI seems to have a bias against everyone but Camp Halfblood. Sigh.
 
"Harry Potter, Percy Jackson, and My Hero Academia," I said, blurting out the first three that came to mind.

Really? Not putting any thought into it at all? This dolt would entirely deserve showing up in HP without magic, into PJ without being a demigod, and into MHA without a quirk, all because he forgot to even think that all of those are birthrights that he doesn't have. Also, no thought as to progression at all. Even IF he's lucky enough to get all the "protagonist abilities", by the time he gets to MHA there won't be much point in a quirk, AND 95% of quirks suck. I just started reading this and already I'm not sure if I'm going to like it; thoughtless idiot MCs tend to piss me off quickly.
 
Edit: Just looked up Skiritae on Wikipedia. They're were a group of people of lived rural lives serving the Spartans as elite light infantry. Irl they were just people with poor farmland, but in a strategic location for Sparta. Here, if the Snakeman is to be believed then they're in service to the Emperor since the British.

These are the Skiritae. They pretty much have only one line in Pliny the Elder's history. You can tell I'm digging deep to find new monsters to make all this 'unique.'

I am completely lost on what is going on. Is this emperor business after the second series, or in side books? It seems to be in the trials of Apollo but I have never read past the second series finale. Is a wiki dive sufficient to follow the story beats on this part of the story? And if you could elaborate in the future a little bit when introducing these plot points I would really appreciate it.

Unfortunately, this will be containing plotpoints and villains from the Trials of Apollo series. I will try and properly explain the new characters (but that means there'll be spoilers, so consider this the warning for those who haven't read up on the series yet).
 
Men in black
Standing in a 7-Eleven bathroom, I leaned against the bathroom counter, stinging hands gripped on the edge of the basin as I stared my reflection in the eye.

I was older now, around the age I had been when the ROB had first grabbed me. It was strange, although not exactly unwelcome. At least I wouldn't have to worry about people underestimating me because of my age now.

A spike of pain drew my attention back to my white-knuckled hands. The cuts were mostly gone now, thanks to a granola bar containing ambrosia, but they still weren't quite back to normal.

Flexing my fingers again, I watched as the lacerations slowly closed. Ambrosia was the food of the gods, and if I'd been mortal, I'd have burst into flame upon eating it. Even with the knowledge that I was the child of a deity, I was still surprised at how quickly I was recovering.

I glared at my hands and the closing cuts. After being around Harry Potter magic for five years, this shouldn't have been so fascinating. Yet I was still unnaturally intrigued. Shaking my head, I put it down to the ROB screwing with me, even as I turned towards the door. I needed to get moving.

The teller gave me a nervous look as I strode through the store and out into the dark carpark, but I ignored them, blearily rubbing my eyes as I glanced at the light-polluted sky above. I'd been traveling all day, and I was beyond exhausted. But I was also so close to my destination.

"Oy!"

I glanced back at the speaker. A man in a black suit, flanked by two identically dressed spooks.

"You Hal Walker?" the man demanded, stopping beneath a streetlamp.

Wearily, I pulled out the silver flashlight. They had to be more monsters sent by the Triumvirate. Holding back another yawn, I squared off against them, preparing for the fight. I was too tired for this shit… but at least I now knew the full name of the ROB's fabrication.

"Yeah," I said slowly. "Who're you lot?"

"The Emperor has asked us to escort you to New York," the head spook said, ignoring my question.

I nodded slowly. Triumvirate Holdings was run by three emperors. Caligula in the west, an emperor with a Hercules fetish (whose name I couldn't remember) in Kansas or Oklahoma or one of the flyover states, and Nero in New York.

Nero, the guy who burned Christians. He wanted to see me.

Slowly nodding again, I glanced up. It'd be easy enough to leave, but I needed more info than I had. I knew the Emperors were Jeff Bezos level rich, that they financed Cronus when he attempted to overthrow the Greek gods, and that they were working with Apollo's enemy, the Python, but there were still gaps in my knowledge. I hadn't finished the Trials of Apollo series, where they were the main antagonists, so I didn't know how they were brought down. I needed to learn more.

Hopefully, these spooks were the monologuing type. It worked on the Skiritae after all.

"If you'd just follow us, please," the guy said, gesturing towards the dark street beyond the carpark.

"What does Nero want with me?" I queried, stepping forward, even as I prepared to switch on the flashlight.

"I don't know," the man said with a shrug. "We were just dispatched 'cause we were closest."

"What tribe are you?" I asked. As far as I knew, the Emperors employed mythical tribes, like the Skiratae, Germani, Blemmyae, and Pandai. If I figured out who this lot were, I'd have more success in taking them out.

"Tribe?" the spook asked. "What…?"

"Probably the supernatural shit," one of the other men in black said. "You a demigod?"

"Wait… you aren't monsters of demigods?" I queried. This wasn't good. There was some degree of separation between the regular world and the world of monsters and heroes and gods. The fact that these muggle goons were in on it…

"This is going nowhere," the third goon commented. "The Emperor doesn't like to be kept waiting!"

I grimaced. I wasn't going to get answers here, and I sure as hell wasn't going to throw myself back into the triumvirate's clutches.

"Let's move," the head spook said firmly, but I ignored him, slowly backing away.

I needed to get out of here.

"Walker," spook two said, watching me as he flicked his jacket aside to reveal a gun. "I wouldn't-"

In an instant I lunged, jamming the silver flashlight under his jaw and flicking it on. The silver lance flashed through the top of his skull, and he gasped, stepping back, the lance shimmering through his head as if it wasn't even there.

"The fuck!"

"Put down the spear!" the head goon yelled, as guns were levelled at my chest. "Put it down!"

I stared at the lance for a second, mind whirring. The lance was a magic weapon. Magic weapons didn't work on regular people… I'd forgotten!

"Protego!"

Shots rang out as the shield spell flashed into existence. I stared in shock as bullets crumpled against it, tinkering against the tarmac. The goons stared at me wide-eyed, and I grimaced.

Too close. Far too close.

"Expelliarmus!" I said, and the guns were snatched out of their grips and flung off across the carpark. "Vestio anima."

"What the fuck!" goon number one screamed as his black suit began to move on its own accord.

"Incarcerous!" I intoned, and ropes shot out of my fingers, wrapping around the two remaining goons, leaving them to collapse to the tarmac in squirming bundles.

"Jesus fucking Christ!" the head spook screamed, fighting against his suit to glance at his teammates as they began to scream and cuss.

'That was too easy,' was my first thought. My second was the fact that this fucker was screaming for Christ when his boss was known for turning Christians into burning corpses.

"What the fuck are you!" the goon screamed as his suite slammed him into the ground. "Jesus Christ! What the fuck!"

Shaking my head ruefully at the easy takedown, I stepped forward and wordlessly fired off three stunners to knock out the goons.
Standing there, in the now-silent carpark, I couldn't help but shake my head again.

After so many fights for my life, It was bloody weird to have an easy takedown… and now I've jinxed myself. Great.

With one final glance at the three unconscious goons and the still-flailing suit, I shot up, once more, into the night.

I needed to get to Camp Half-Blood before I killed myself by tempting fate.
 
You temp fate by suddenly appearing on their tapestry.They probable take some time to spot you,because you have a past, but when the rob did made any error, they would probable want to talk with you about scissors.
 
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Where did he call them muggles in this chapter?
He's back to thinking everyone around him is inferior. Especially non-magicals. Its as though the ROB didn't take the curse off him he's still as arrogant, thoughtless and reckless as he was under the curse. The Demigod boost is exacerbating the condition.
 
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Thank you for your reply about explaining the story characters better. BTW should the name not change to percy jackson now that we are in that universe? Outside that how do they keep finding him when he is flying to travel, I think he should check his clothes for bugs.
 
wel its tempting those 3 fate's i think in this story ^^
will be fun to see them complain about the mc
 
"He's just upset we beat your team a hundred and ten to nil."

You literally can't have that score. The snitch alone is 150 points, so that's the minimum that the winning team could possibly have even if they scored no more points.

Someone was right on the money. Good job.

I'd sent Glirus to his death. I hadn't taken the Dark Lord seriously, and an innocent elf had paid the price for my folly.

Honestly, it was blatantly, painfully obvious and literally the first thing I thought of when he sent an idiot to follow a murderer. I know there's this idea that having an SI be hypercompetent is bad, but this was just a stupid idea. Having a house elf steal something is fine, since it's a one-off event, but "follow this guy around for a year" is prima facie dumb and bound to fail.

After reading more recent commentary on the story, I see that this MC's idiocy only gets worse. And that's a clue for me to drop this story. I like when MCs have challenges, but when their challenges are all due to their own stupidity (e.g. plot forcing) I find that annoying to read. So I'm out.
 
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You literally can't have that score. The snitch alone is 150 points, so that's the minimum that the winning team could possibly have even if they scored no more points.

Maybe the speaker just… decided not to include the Snitch in that count?
I mean, if you're not a viewer or a Seeker, you'd want to exclude the Snitch's points to emphasize the part of the score that was due to you, not the opponent.
 
Kinda enjoying how terrible the protag-kun is ngl
This story writing has entered the realm of it's so cringe its good (to read and laugh at)
When a god-like being literally removes his Malfoy-like arrogance
and through sheer stubbornness, protag-kun consistently continues as a snobby jerk
Effin LMAO XD
 
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