@SkyRig - I am thoroughly enjoying this story to an immense degree. I found the world of SWTOR to be engaging and fascinating, but you have somehow made it better by adding extra layers of believability and immersion to the world.
I like how you hinted at the ways in which the Dark Side of the Force impacted and changed the planet of Korriban and its ecology. It reminded of Dune by Frank Herbert. I think you could lean into that a bit more.
I particularly liked how you saved Kory. That is something I wanted to do when I played SWTOR. I wonder if Taylor/Reyzl can convince Zash to add Spindrall and Kory to her retinue.
Is this an excerpt from a work of prophetic future history?
I like how you hinted at the ways in which the Dark Side of the Force impacted and changed the planet of Korriban and its ecology. It reminded of Dune by Frank Herbert. I think you could lean into that a bit more.
I particularly liked how you saved Kory. That is something I wanted to do when I played SWTOR. I wonder if Taylor/Reyzl can convince Zash to add Spindrall and Kory to her retinue.
There is also the fragmented hallucination of Skitter that Taylor has to deal with. Is Skitter a manifestation of Queen Administrator?
I think the story should have something on the trading of favors and other aspects of the political shenanigans to keep away from being a copy-and-paste of the Sith Inquisitor's missions.
Yes, I, too, am hoping that Taylor/Reyzl will get to have a slightly more meaningful duel with Ffon prior to Zash slaying him.
Ah yes. The Sith Inquisitor's old 'Assassin or Sorcerer' question. I, too, am curious as to which path Taylor will follow and whether or not signs of that future decision will be hidden in the prior to it being made.
