Once your cognisant enough, you finally take a look at person who caught you.

"Make sure I keep mine too, there's extras in your room. Make sure that I don't use it until… uh, this me that's talking to you right now comes back in a couple days. If the me that'll… take over for a bit does, things get a lot more complicated. I'll need to have access to it though."
Does she mean "use" as in, a soft jump? A hard jump would probably not affect the timeline more than usual.

If the Prescotts realize Max is a time manipulator, and it is only the method that's unknown, it should not take them long to try taking her out in one hit while she is unaware of the threat - either asleep, backstabbed by a supposed ally, or from long enough range that she has no way to see it coming. It's just the most logical step, to assume that her power requires conscious effort, and denying her the time to think or react.

I'd say "we should be careful", but there really isn't much one can do against an approach like this.

Of course, they could keep holding on to the idiot ball instead and send in martial artists to subdue us. Because Nathan was so helpful during Jefferson's assault.

[x] Read Kate's books with her while Chloe does her own thing.
[x] Begin purchasing furniture for the living spaces, you won't be able to haul it in today, in all likelihood, but you could store it in the Price's garage overnight if you wanted to.


"How is the… asset?" He asks.

"In agony," the Woman replies sharply. "Same as last time."
[...]
"Alert me when the asset is capable again," he says.

"Of course."
I wonder who the "asset" is, and what they do for them.
 
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I'd say "we should be careful", but there really isn't much one can do against an approach like this.
Stop letting interrogations have happened is a big one. This kind of thing is why we voted to undo the visit to the police. I'm pretty sure there's no mechanical reason Max couldn't have rewound in the first soft reset and done exactly what she did in the second.
I wonder who the "asset" is, and what they do for them.
I'm thinking Rachel is their Dinah.
 
Stop letting interrogations have happened is a big one. This kind of thing is why we voted to undo the visit to the police. I'm pretty sure there's no mechanical reason Max couldn't have rewound in the first soft reset and done exactly what she did in the second.

I didn't make it very clear so it's probably worth clarifying: the final conversation with Amelie took a long enough time of doing rewinds to find out lil information tidbits, then using them, and filling space with very corporate seeming minutiae to establish a power dynamic before Max finally asked and justified the big question. By the time she had gotten to it, she was well past the point where she could have rewound the entirety of the call. Max and the gang roughly expected this, which is why they opted for the soft jump, which when done twice in a row works roughly the same for erasing events as rewind does, in Max's experience with the alt timeline. Though, obviously, it's riskier.

I skipped a fair number of "minor" conversations like the one that would've established that plan in favour of tryyying not to bloat this update too much more than it is, and while I think most are self-evident, this info definitely was not.
 
Stop letting interrogations have happened is a big one.
That would go a long way towards not letting them know where we are, and where we will be going next, thus avoiding the confrontation, yes. Although it would do nothing to deter them if they catch up.

It'd be nice to know how they did it in the "wrong timeline", and why we failed to avoid capture as opposed to another fight in the same update. I know it was done for the purpose of dramatic tension, but missing a pretty vital piece of info irks me a little. It's not often you get an opportunity to escape after being laid low.
I'm thinking Rachel is their Dinah.
That's what I think was implied, but... who is Dinah, again?
 
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[X] Hauling Jefferson's shit outside and hiding it in the barn. Maybe make the Dark Room a little less… Dark Room-like.

[x] Read Kate's books with her while Chloe does her own thing.
 
Woo! The quest is back on. This was a wonderful update, and ended on something resembling a hopeful note.

"Yes, you can do a little crime, as a treat."
>Be Gay
>Do Crime
>Cry
>Hug
>Profit

She freezes. The armed men lower their weapons as Nathan Prescott steps from between their ranks. "Huh, shit,"

I'm never not going to be a little creeped out by Nathan's resistance/immunity to supernatural shit. It equalizes things in ways that don't let me relax if he's in an update.
He gives me Weapon X vibes, for sure.

You scribble a note to yourself,

Max has such a supportive relationship with herself, I envy that. Though a therapist might not be so supportive...

Subject may be Arcanist (possibly Infused? Monitor) or talented Wytch, proceed with caution.'

Ooh, jargon. Me likey.

I'll go out on a limb and assume that whatever's going on with Nathan is either of those first two. His passive resistance to magic, but without any actual major magic abilities (as far as I can tell) seems like what the first could be describing. His hyper-awareness of things that go on while time is being manipulated could maybe be the second thing. (Like a passive kind of clairvoyance).

As an aside: I'm assuming Wytch could be a term for self-educated amateurs?

Does she mean "use" as in, a soft jump? A hard jump would probably not affect the timeline more than usual.
Never Cross Streams.
I'm thinking Rachel is their Dinah.
Precognitive who's kidnapped and drugged into compliance in Worm. Sorry, I shouldn't have referenced something unrelated to the quest.
I don't think that's anything to apologize for. It's the only way to learn about new stuff if we all bring something to the table.
There's a lot of Worm stuff on the forum, so it's not too unrealistic to assume somebody here knew what you were talking about.
Even if I wasn't one of them.

[X] Read Kate's books with her while Chloe does her own thing.

Not knowing more about magic is just a bad move, full spectrum. There's not a single place where being ignorant doesn't hurt us. When all we had was the Hospital Woman and Kate, we could justify putting it off. But now we have full on mages. We gots to study.

[X] Sesh with the girls, shakah brah.

I'd like us to keep unit cohesion to a Max(imum). We should all be at the point where we can read each other's minds a little, and bonding helps that. Chloe's got both us and Kate down to a science, but Max and Kate could use a little work. Kate probably still feels a little like a third wheel along for the ride than a full member, if that makes sense.
 
[X] Hauling Jefferson's shit outside and hiding it in the barn. Maybe make the Dark Room a little less… Dark Room-like.

[X] Begin purchasing furniture for the living spaces, you won't be able to haul it in today, in all likelihood, but you could store it in the Price's garage overnight if you wanted to.
 
OK super stoked we're back! Most important things first.
"What are you thinking, Max?" Kate asks. She leans in towards you a bit and cocks her head. Her flower scented- Shampoo? Perfume? You think it's shampoo- floods your senses and you force yourself to turn away since it'd be super weird of you to lean in as well like you were about to- BUT ANYWAY.
We're gay we're gay we're gay we're gay we're gay
Kate leans back away from your personal space, and you chance looking back at her. Her eyes twinkle as she says, "suit yourself," with a strange smirk that you can't quite place the meaning of.
She knows. Is Kate flirting with Max? I don't think Max can mentally cope with adding Kate to The Tension.

Anyway.
Super cool update! Hope the holidays weren't too stressful.

After not as much consideration as I've previously given, my vote is:
[X] Read Kate's books with her while Chloe does her own thing.
I agree that Chloe and Kate kinda have a thing going, and that we don't hang around with Kate much on her own. And as everyone else is saying, we've left this magic stuff for too long.
[X] Sesh with the girls, shakah brah.
Bonding time! We've been fuckin' busy, and we deserve a break. Plus I can further my Pricemarshfield agenda.
 
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Saw a few new names perusing the thread, and though the quest has gotten... pretty damn lengthy by now, figure I'll leave the vote open a bit longer in case any of them manage to catch up and wanna participate.

I really liked using Jason as the POV just to start us off, helps give us a very different view of Max (and cChloe to a smaller degree) and how they look like to others.
Thanks! That's basically what I was going for, plus writing it from Max and Chloe's PoV was for some reason just not meshing with my brain, so I kinda tried to get creative to sidestep the issue. I think it worked out rather well though.
Max has such a supportive relationship with herself, I envy that. Though a therapist might not be so supportive...
Depends who's paying the therapist :^)
Super cool update! Hope the holidays weren't too stressful.
Thank you! They certainly weren't a walk in the park, but they're over now at least.

Thanks all for your support, as always. I'm very very excited for this to continue now that we're past that headache of an update, a good deal of my time going through the Retail Motions was spent daydreaming different story seeds and ideas and scenes and plot threads and the like that I want to include, so there should be plenty of interesting content coming up.
 
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[X] Read Kate's books with her while Chloe does her own thing.

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[X] Hauling Jefferson's shit outside and hiding it in the barn. Maybe make the Dark Room a little less… Dark Room-like.
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[] Sesh with the girls, shakah brah.
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[] Begin purchasing furniture for the living spaces, you won't be able to haul it in today, in all likelihood, but you could store it in the Price's garage overnight if you wanted to.
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[] (Takes both actions) Go clothes shopping, finally, and spend the evening in Portland. Grab some grub, take in the city.
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Sounds like a chill evening. It might be time to see if you can borrow some of Kate's clothes too since shopping hasn't occurred yet.
 
3.12
"So is there anything we do wanna keep?"

You regard the Dark Room from the entrance to the rest of the Bunker with a frown, flanked on either side by Kate and Chloe. You wait a second to see if Kate answers Chloe's question, but it looks like they're waiting on you, little miss trauma. Ha ha.

"Well…" You take a few steps forward and gingerly lean down and touch the camera, still facing what used to be Jefferson's shooting space on it's tripod. 'Used to be Jefferson's'... ya, no thank you. With a snort, you stand up, rear back, and kick the stupid thing partway across the room. You wince internally as you hear something in the very expensive camera crack as it hits the floor. No, better that it's gone. Pointedly ignoring Chloe and Kate's respectively amused and pitying smirks, you start to talk. "The camera equipment can go, all of it. We could resell it, but that'd be opening ourselves up to trouble if the Prescotts decide to use the law against us."

Chloe rolls her eyes and gives the camera a swift kick of her own. Crunch. "I don't think they even have to consciously decide to. The law is just passively on their side."

You sigh. "Ya, I guess so." Another look around the room brings your attention to the office corner. "We'll definitely be keeping the cabinet, it's probably gonna be a huge source of info for us. We should also probably keep the computer, at the very least there's probably even more incriminating photos in there that didn't 'make the cut' for his binders."

"Good call," Kate mutters, walking forward a bit. She pokes her head into the room separated by the plastic flaps. "What about the storage space?"

You follow, pushing through the flaps to look around. Hm, I didn't really see much of this part while I've been here other times. More important stuff going on then. You survey the shelves. Nonperishable food, water bottles, medicine and antiseptics. You wonder again briefly if Jefferson or the Prescotts were somehow aware of the storm. Nah, too far fetched. Plus the storm didn't come this time, but this is all still here.

Some medicine you don't recognize on one shelf catches your eye. You move closer to get a better look. Hm, some unmarked packages, restricted substance markers- ah. With a frown, you take a step back. "We can keep everything in here but those drugs."

"What are they?" Kate asks, setting down the cereal she had been looking at judgmentally.

"Kidnapping drugs," you state simply. Trying not to think about how one of those needles kept in their sealed packaging is probably the exact same one that had been used on you a… few times.

"Right." Chloe gently shoulders past you, holding a garbage bag she'd procured from the other end of the storage room. You control your breathing and try to watch calmly as she reaches one arm out across the shelf, and shovels the assortment of sedatives into the bag. She watches you sigh in relief with a grin. "So, that it? Ready to trash more of his expensive camera shit?"

You pause a moment and try to let the uneasy feeling in your gut dissolve into something else. Jefferson isn't here. This is my space now. It percolates, and resolves into something like a wild exhilaration that brings a grin to your own face. "Chloe, I am hella ready." You look to your right. "Kate?"

The blonde girl smirks. "You two have fun, I'm going to start bringing down my stuff from the truck."

With a cheer, Chloe turns and practically jogs back into the Dark Room, and you eagerly follow. Kate's bemused expression might feel a touch condescending, but this already feels like it's going to be cathartic, and you're ready to let this strange mania guide you in absolutely trashing this fucking place.

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It goes well, all things considered. You stub your toe a couple times, and it's still throbbing painfully, but the Dark Room is… basically empty. With just bare, smooth, polished concrete, it's barely recognizable. You kept the cabinet, binders, and computer, of course, but they've been moved down to the meeting room of the Bunker.

It turns out, breaking photography equipment is really fun when you're doing it on purpose. You're definitely feeling a bit tired out now though, and your legs absolutely feel like pure jelly. Going up and down those stairs over and over again was not fun, not to mention hauling all those binders and the cabinet all the way to the meeting room.

Kate's items from Blackwell, including sheets and bedding and clothes, are haphazardly piled in the corner of the first floor Rec Room, where you all sit. Chloe's bluetooth speaker that'd been playing upbeat music during your renovation/trashing now echoes a relaxing track around the empty, hard walls of the bunker.

"We should probably put up some wall drapings to take care of that echo…" Kate muses, playing with a strand of hair. She's sitting up against the smooth concrete wall, a pillow making the hard surface more palatable.

Chloe grunts in affirmation, watching with interest as the bunker ventilation pulls the smoke from her cigarette to the vent near her.

You're physically tired, but you've got some mental stamina left, so you turn to Kate. "Now that your stuff is here… are you okay with us looking through some of your books?"

She immediately perks up, letting her hair falling perfectly back into place. How does she do that? "Absolutely!" She says with a wide smile. "Wanna join us, Chloe?"

"Ehhhhhh…" Chloe's avoiding eye contact with a sheepish expression. "I'm- y'know, the whole magic thing is cool and all, but uh, I don't think it's really 'for me', y'know?"

You smile warmly at her. "It's okay Chloe, nothing wrong with sitting this study session out."

She looks relieved, and shoots a thankful glance your way. "Thanks, maybe I'll try to get into Jefferson's files while you two do that."

"Ouh, good idea," Kate says, "want us to turn the music off at all?"

"Nah. In fact, could you move the speaker closer to the conference room so I can still hear?"

"For sure."

Arrangements made, Chloe heads into the conference room, to the corner where Jefferson's computer desk is set up, and Kate moves the speaker and fiddles with her Spotify. Meanwhile, you're making an absolute mess of Kate's bedding in an attempt to make a cozy study nook in the corner of the room.

She finishes whatever music setup she needed to do, and turns back to you, only to find you burrowed in a corner padded with propped up pillows. "Wow," she says, a teasing smile rising to her lips, "did you just use time travel to throw that together?"

You grin and shake your head. "Nope! I just work fast."

She rolls her eyes. "I guess even destroying all that photography equipment earlier didn't sate your appetite for destruction ."

You giggle and push your voice as low as you can make it to put on your best 'evil overlord' voice. "Max Caulfield, Render of Time, Destroyer of Bedsheets!"

Kate openly laughs as she drags a storage bin over to your study corner. "Alright 'Render of Time', we don't have time to go through all of these tonight, so give me a second to pick through them for likely choices, then you can pick one or two out."

You hum affirmatively, content to stay snuggled in the blankets for the moment. Kate starts to pick through the bin at a rapid rate, scarcely glancing at book's titles before sorting them into one of three piles. She looks cute right now, you decide. Well, honestly, Kate always looks cute. But right now with her brow furrowed, eye narrowed, gently biting her lip in thought… yeah. You would be content to be snuggled here with this view for a while.

"Something on my face?" Kate teases, without even looking at you.

Your muscles tense and you quickly turn away, cheeks burning. "N-No…" What are you doing Max? I'm here for Chloe, aren't I? I- Chloe is… We almost… almost kissed at the lighthouse, the very first time, before I went back and started the loops. I care about her. You scrunch your face up. No, fuck that, I love Chloe. It isn't- It's not okay for me to feel like this about Kate, is it?

You blink your eyes clear and quickly wipe your face, banishing the thoughts from your head as Kate gets to the bottom of the bin. If she noticed your slightly teary complexion, she thankfully isn't commenting on it.

"Alright," says Kate, "we can prooobably handle two of these at most tonight. The information that's collected in these isn't organized quite as nicely as it is in… well, anything modern. The women who wrote these were amateur writers, compiling writing on things no one but them, and maybe a few close confidantes, knew about." You nod slowly, and Kate continues. "For a lot of the more modern texts, they cross-reference each other to a pretty high extent, which is what this pile is for," she indicates the middle pile of books with a wave of her hand, "these are what I think will be likely reference materials. The… less modern books tend to be more archaic, so we'll probably have to use my phone to decipher some parts of them."

This is pretty impressive. "You have a whole system worked out, don't you?"

Kate smiles proudly, preening a bit. "I do, it's been a few years of collecting and sorting out how best to understand them all. It would've been helpful to have another head to bounce ideas off of…" Her smile disappears for a second as she breaks eye contact, looking down, but it quickly comes back as she looks back up at you. "But now I have you! Trust me, studying these is so interesting , it's like a whole secret history of the world!"

You smile at her infectious enthusiasm, maybe this will be a good time. "So what books do you have for me?"

"Let's see here…"

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Which books do you want to study with Kate? Pick two.

[] M.A Glischer - Preferred Environs and Gathering Spots of Fae - 1923

"This one was a pretty hefty read that I never really got around to finishing… it seems like it's one of the more comprehensive books about the Fae though!"

[] Käthe Rottmann - The New Encyclopaedia of Magical Phenomena - 1899
"It calls itself an encyclopaedia, but I'm pretty sure the author gave up on even alphabetical ordering partway through. This one documents all sorts of supposedly magical stuff, mostly from eyewitness reports of other witches."

[] Maliika Hamidova - My Time In The Forest - 1874
"This one is one of my absolute favourites. It's kind of… weird to study, since it combines prose and narrative with actual substantive thoughts on the nature of Verdant magic and it's uses. I don't know how much it'll help us find out about the different mysteries we're thinking about… but I think it'd help you understand more about Verdant magic! And… also… I'd really like to share it with you…"

[] Talibah Mubarak - Untitled Study of Stones and Fossils - 1934
"I read this a while ago, but I think I remember her talking about some kind of rock that was like, a sink for Fae? I really don't remember that well, but it reminded me of how the Fae react, or don't react, to Chloe."

[] Uyeno Nari - Japanese Spirits and the Fae - 1885
"This is another great one! Uyeno Nari was a Japanese Priestess who used Verdant magic, who happened to meet an American witch that was travelling through Japan. They collaborated to publish this book, it's mostly about how sapient Fae are responsible for a lot of Japanese mythology, but by doing that it has a lot of good info about Sapient Fae."

[] Merouda Sleeman - The World We Live In: Interconnectedness and the Root of All Things - 1944
"I'm… not a huge fan of this one. It's a little too, um, New-Agey for me. I heard that Chloe, don't you laugh at me! That said, it does have some insights about how Fae interact with crowds and large groups of people, it might be worth reading for some more background."

[] Elinor Shoshan - Verdant Energy and the Fae - 1828
"This! This is the seminal work that revolutionized how witches thought about Verdant Magic. Elinor Shoshan was a Jewish scholar living in the Austrian Empire who, using methodologies consistent with the fast-growing research of electricity in years prior, managed to disprove the Fae as being a form of energy, and instead posited the correct theory that they were alive! It's a… little technical, but I'm sure there's something useful in it!"

[] Jimena Varela - Observations from Catalonia during the Spanish Civil War - 1942
"This is another one of my favourites… it's a really raw account from a lesbian witch during the Spanish worker's revolution during the Spanish Civil War. It's kind of a mix of descriptions of Anarchist Barcelona, to recipes, to magic recipes, to really unique musings on the nature of Fae. She also collected a fair amount of knowledge about magical phenomena that takes a much more modern perspective than the encyclopaedia over there."

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The trick when you're not sure what information to give, is to make the proles vote.
I had a lot of fun coming up with the concepts for all of these books, I hope of couple catch you guys' interest! All of them will likely be useful about the thing they appear to be useful for, but some will have additional information you might not expect too...
Voting is not in plan format FYI, just vote for the 2 you want, highest votes win.
 
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[x] Käthe Rottmann - The New Encyclopaedia of Magical Phenomena - 1899

This one sounds like the most likely to help us figure out what our enemies are doing and what to do about it.

[x] Maliika Hamidova - My Time In The Forest - 1874

I can't say no to the face I imagine Kate's making.
 
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[x] Elinor Shoshan - Verdant Energy and the Fae - 1828
[x] Talibah Mubarak - Untitled Study of Stones and Fossils - 1934
 
[X] Käthe Rottmann - The New Encyclopaedia of Magical Phenomena - 1899
[X] Maliika Hamidova - My Time In The Forest - 1874


Oh, how I would love to see the anarchist book....

However, I think these are the best choices.

For the Rottman, we've seen a lot of off-kilter stuff in our encounters, trying to figure out what's going on with them by looking at more standard books is probably not going to work.

For Hamidova, this is just about bonding with Kate. She wants to share the book with us, so we should indulge. It's probably interesting anyway.
 
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[X] M.A Glischer - Preferred Environs and Gathering Spots of Fae - 1923
[X] Maliika Hamidova - My Time In The Forest - 1874
 
[X] M.A Glischer - Preferred Environs and Gathering Spots of Fae - 1923
[X] Maliika Hamidova - My Time In The Forest - 1874
 
[X] Maliika Hamidova - My Time In The Forest - 1874
"This one is one of my absolute favourites. It's kind of… weird to study, since it combines prose and narrative with actual substantive thoughts on the nature of Verdant magic and it's uses. I don't know how much it'll help us find out about the different mysteries we're thinking about… but I think it'd help you understand more about Verdant magic! And… also… I'd really like to share it with you…"

Damn you for pulling adorable Kate nerding! We can't not read this now! I can see her bouncing about with excitement!

[X] M.A Glischer - Preferred Environs and Gathering Spots of Fae - 1923
"This one was a pretty hefty read that I never really got around to finishing… it seems like it's one of the more comprehensive books about the Fae though!"

I haven't re-read, but from what I remember, Fae are like magic fuel. If we can get better at using them to make Kate's spells more efficient, or how to deprive the area around someone of Fae or something, that's really useful. And if it's comprehensive, there's a (slim) chance it might answer some of our questions regarding our power, or Chloe's immunity, or... something else we might have got from another book.
 
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[X] Elinor Shoshan - Verdant Energy and the Fae - 1828
I like the idea of understanding at a more technical level

[X] Talibah Mubarak - Untitled Study of Stones and Fossils - 1934
This here might be useful to create a hard magic counter
 
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