Of Grimm and Malevolence [A RWBY x Tales of Berseria crossover story]

I'm really loving this crossover. You've really got me wondering about the worldbuilding in the crossover, which is always something to get excited about in my book. I'm guessing that daemonblight isn't a problem on Remnant (yet?) because all of the malevolence is being 'redirected' to produce Grimm or perhaps the world is still under some form of divine protection (perhaps the Two Brothers? other gods maybe?)
 
I'm really loving this crossover. You've really got me wondering about the worldbuilding in the crossover, which is always something to get excited about in my book. I'm guessing that daemonblight isn't a problem on Remnant (yet?) because all of the malevolence is being 'redirected' to produce Grimm or perhaps the world is still under some form of divine protection (perhaps the Two Brothers? other gods maybe?)
If you play the bonus dungeon of Berseria, you find out that Malevolence affecting humans (and turning malakim into dragons instead of just killing them) isnt natural. The residents of the malak homeland are just racist douchebags who got sore about the possibility of losing a bet that malakim couldnt live alongside humans without getting killed by the toxic effects of malevolence, and tried to sabotage the process by artificially making malevolence's effects worse.

If the malakim coexistence faction never tried to colonize Remnant, the isolation faction wouldn't have had reason to make malevolence work there the way it does in the world of Berseria/Zestiria.
 
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@Zap Rowsdower, thanks for the information. I wonder what it would mean for Malevolence to affect the people of Remnant like it does in Berseria/Zestiria? I imagine that killing daemons in villages would be even more of a priority (and radicalized) since their malevolence would, I have to assume, attract the Grimm.

@Macros, would you say that Velvet drinking Grimm is more or less effective, in regards to making her stronger, than drinking humans, or daemons for that matter, on average?
 
@Macros, would you say that Velvet drinking Grimm is more or less effective, in regards to making her stronger, than drinking humans, or daemons for that matter, on average?

On average, I'd say eating Grimm would often be a little less effective at strengthening Velvet than eating your average human/daemon. My interpretation would be that a lack of soul means that there's no real substance to a Grimm, and while it does provide a source of raw malevolence for Velvet, it doesn't beat eating a being that can actually generate malevolence. Even if she eats a pretty big Grimm, while the initial intake of malevolence would be substantial, she would quickly burn through it, while corrupted humans and daemons would be more filling.

Interestingly, it would also mean that eating malakhim, on average, doesn't do much for Velvet, though for different reasons - they have a soul, but they don't generate malevolence. Which could explain why in the game, she comments on them not really suiting her palate. In that regard, Remnant humans would feel rather similar, as she already noticed. There are exceptions to this, which will be covered in later parts of the story.

Anyway, that's my two cents on it. Aaaand suddenly, I have this image of Velvet making a cooking show on that very topic.
 
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On the other hand, pretty sure Velvet gets way less trouble for eating grimm than other types of food, even though it will be kinda of off putting for the average guy.
 
Interlude 1: The Pursuing Hunters
The Pursuing Hunters

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For the first time in a week, Zaveid allowed himself to relax a bit.

The small inn in the middle of Loegres made for a reassuring, if rather cramped setting. The wind malak couldn't help but appreciate the irony of knowing that this unassuming establishment, built in the shadow of the Royal Castle of Midgand, was perhaps the safest place from the law one could find – and that meant the safest place from the Abbey's reach. The ideal place for fugitives such as Zaveid to catch their breaths.

Under normal circumstances, he would have had little need for such a refuge. Zaveid had spent years giving the Exorcists the slip - and when some were lucky enough to catch up to him, he was more than willing to provide a good beatdown to his pursuers. But over the last week, the Abbey's dogs had been unusually persistent, dogging his every step across the seas, in too great a number for Zaveid to be confident in his ability to punch his way out of trouble. He supposed infiltrating into their secret island doubling up as a portal toward their very own private dimension was bound to piss them off.

Still, Zaveid would probably have taken up his chances and not involve anyone else into his problems had he been alone. But for the first time in a long, long while, he had a travelling companion. Sitting across the table and looking into his plate with a vacant face – perhaps tinted by the slightest bit of curiosity? - was the silver-haired malak child he rescued from Melchior's clutches. The newly christened Silva had stuck with him ever since, even though Zaveid suspected it was more due to him having no clue on how to be alone than a real proof of affection.

No matter, Zaveid would win him over yet. If there was one thing he was confident in – aside from his good looks, terrific skills, world-savvy knowledge and general awesomeness - it was his way with children.

And in his experience, much like women, the way to a kid's heart often went through his stomach. "What's the matter, kid? Food's not to your taste?"

The malak child raised his head, a somewhat worried look in his blue eyes. "I'm- not really sure."

Zaveid sighed. That had been the answer to most of his questions over the course of the week. The kid might have been freed from the Abbey, but their hold on his mind was still strong. After years of complete servitude, it was no wonder the little guy had so much trouble even doing something as simple as expressing likes and dislikes. That could have been him, Zaveid reminded himself not for the first time. That would have been him had he not been rescued, all these years ago. And now it was time to repay the favour.

That was what Aifread would have done.

"Don't force yourself. If you're hungry, eat. If you don't like it, I'll ask for something else. Still," the wind malak grinned. "All that food spattered over your face tells me you don't seem to dislike it too much, eh?"

Silva's eyes widened in surprise, before he brought his hands to his mouth, furiously wiping his mouth clean to Zaveid's delight. Finally, progress!

His moment of triumph was cut short by the sound of the tavern's door slamming open, letting in a dishevelled Benwick, whose gaze immediately zero-ed in on him.

"Zaveid! I got your message. Where's the First Mate?!"

It was hard for the wind malak to not pity the guy. The pirate's youthful face was wracked with worry, his usually unkempt blonde hair even more in disarray than usual. Even the bird nesting in his large hat seemed frazzled. Yet Zaveid could offer little in the way of reassurances.

"Don't know. Last time I saw Eizen and his group, we were all fleeing Innominat and the exorcists from that pocket dimension they had set up. I went through the portal to leave this place first, and they didn't – or couldn't – follow."

"But then," Benwick stammered "does that mean the First Mate and the others are-"

"Hey, we can't be sure of anything yet," Zaveid reassured him. "Besides, Eizen and his bunch are tough. For all we know, they just ended up dropping somewhere else and are on their way back to the Van Eltia."

The wind malak had to admit though, the odds didn't look good. If Eizen had managed a successful escape, he probably would have contacted Benwick by now – he'd have an easier time doing so than Zaveid. That it had not happened increased the likelihood that Magilou's Menagerie had been captured at best, killed at worst. He nonetheless tried to remain hopeful, pulling a chair for the young man to fall onto.

"Here, try not to worry too much, will ya?" he said, offering a glass of whiskey to the pirate. "I asked Tabatha to look into this, she should have answers for us soon."

As if summoned by that very sentence, the old woman entered the common room. With her plain dark dress, her grey hair put in a simple bun and a kind and wrinkled face, Tabatha Baskerville certainly didn't cut an imposing figure. Yet as the head of the infamous Bloodwings, the chief – and possibly last – underground movement acting in opposition to the Abbey, there were few people as well-informed as her across all the Kingdom.

"Glad to see our young guest seems to enjoy himself," the newcomer said with a smile, looking at Silva. "And I'm glad to see someone from the Van Eltia could join our meeting", she added, nodding at Benwick.

The latter seemed ready to throw himself at Tabatha in search of answers, but Zaveid preempted him. "If it isn't my favourite old coot! You got any answers for me?"

"For you dear, always," she answered. "First, let me reassure you. As far as I know, no-one among your missing friends are dead – nor are they in the Abbey's hands."

"Tha-that's great news!" Benwick exclaimed. "Where are they then? We need to get there fast!"

"That might prove difficult," the inn's proprietess sighed. "According to my sources, they have left this world entirely. The portal they crossed sent them to an entirely different place, one that the Exorcists have been hard at work to find."

Zaveid couldn't help but let out an appreciative whistle. "That bastard managed to get stranded into another world entirely? This 'Reaper's Curse' of his really is no joke."

"Wait, another world? Is that even a thing?" Benwick looked flabbergasted. He could actually remember the First Mate rambling about theories and ancient scholars speaking of such a thing, but had kind of dismissed it as another of Eizen's passing fancy.

The malak tended to be really passionate about the latest book he would read.

"It is very much a 'thing', it would seem," Tabatha said, "and the Legate Melchior apparently managed to exhume an Arte able to reach that distant land. Details are scarce on how he managed this. All I could learn was that it involved the previous head of the Exorcists." She paused. "As we speak, Artorius Collbrande and his two Legates have apparently crossed over to that new world, with a sizable force of Exorcists."

Frankly, Zaveid cared little about the how. All that mattered was that there was a way. "So you're sayin' the Abbey got a portal, and that all their big guys aren't around to defend it. Well then! Guess all that's left to do is storm the place and follow!" The wind malak cracked his knuckles, eager to jump back into action.

"I'm afraid it won't be so simple," Tabatha chastised him. "The Abbey opened the rift in the Empyrean Throne. As you might remember, the temple is defended by a powerful barrier. One that can only be broken by four Greater Malakhim working in concert."

Zaveid couldn't help but swear. "I thought we got rid of it ! If they got it back up again- well that's a problem."

Four greater malakhim. That was why Velvet Crowe and her group of misfits had sought him out several months ago. And the three others that helped in this endeavour were now on the wrong side of the Rift.

"Where the hell are we going to find three more malakhim?!" Benwick pointed at the obvious. "We were lucky last time, but now-"

Tabatha shook her head. "I am afraid I won't be able to help you there. The Abbey's control on Malakhim is tight, and-"

"Maybe- I can help."

Three pairs of eyes turned toward Silva, who was speaking up for the first time in this conversation. The child blushed under this newfound attention, but continued nonetheless while looking at the ground. "Mistress Theresa said I- qualified as a Greater Malak. I don't know what it means, but I want to help you. If I can."

"Well aren't you a Godsend!" Zavied grinned before afectionately patting the kid's head. "As long as you're sure that's what you want to do, I'll gladly take your help." Silva gave a shy nod. "Well that's two! As for the others," he turned toward Benwick, "maybe Grimoirh can help?"

"I don't know. Maybe?" It was hard to believe that an unassuming Normin would count as a Greater Malak, but then again, Bienfu had been one, so it was still a possibility. "Even if she does, that still leaves us one Malak short."

Silence. Zaveid tried to remember any old acquaintance that would make the bill, only to come up short. If only he could find a way to-

"Oh no."

Benwick seemed to have come to a conclusion on his own, and didn't appear to like it. Still. "Any idea then?" Zaveid said. "Spit it out!"

"Well- I might know someone – know of someone. But if we ask her-" Benwick gulped. "No, we can't! Even if we save the first mate that way, he'll kill me!"

Well that was a mood. "Don't be so overdramatic, man!" Zaveid laughed. "Surely it can't be that bad."

"No, you don't understand!" Benwick was literally shaking. "When some crew members joked about inviting her on the Van Eltia, the first mate almost choked them! And then he threatened to throw anyone with similar ideas overboard!"

Huh. To think Eizen could be bent out of shape over a girl. Zaveid swore to himself to never let the pirate live it down. "Well, it's either risking your first mate's wrath, or never seeing him again. What will you choose?"

For a long minute, Benwick seemed to actually hesitate over which option to pick, before letting out a defeated sigh. "Fine."

"Atta boy. So, who's Mystery Girl?"

Benwick steeled himself. "Eizen's sister. Her name is Edna."



Notes: Well, it's been ages. I'm afraid I have no good excuses for the *checks* two years hiatus, apart from the usual 'busy with life' stuff. But I found the time and the will to finally kick myself back into gear. So, if you're a new reader, welcome aboard, and if you're an old one, you have all my gratitude for being willing to pick up this story again.

Also, not really happy with this chapter. I spent hours writing and rewriting this piece - and the one that will follow. But after a while, I just have to accept that if I do not settle for what I have now, I could spend another two years procrastinating - and with no guarantee that the end result would even be better than what I have now. So here we go, feel free to tear into it, and any criticism you might have is welcome.
 
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For the first time in a week, Zaveid allowed himself to relax a bit.
For a second there, I thought the Zestiria cast were about to get involved. Then I remembered Zaveid was in Berseria.

This 'Reaper Curse' of his really is no joke."
"Reaper's Curse"

"It is very a 'thing'
"very much a 'thing'"

"As we speak, Artorius Collbrande and his two Legates have apparently crossed over to that new world, with a sizable force of Exorcists."
And here I thought he was just stranded over there like Velvet's group.

That was why Velvet Crowe and her group of misfits had seeked him out several months ago.
"sought"

Huh. To think Eizen could be bent out of shape over a girl. Zaveid swore to himself to never let the pirate live it down. "Well, it's either risking your first mate's wrath, or never seeing him again. What will you choose?"

For a long minute, Benwick seemed to actually hesitate over which option to pick, before letting out a defeated sigh. "Fine."

"Atta boy. So, who's Mystery Girl?"

Benwick steeled himself. "Eizen's sister. Her name is Edna."
Now the only question that remains is: Will Eizen kill the crew for bringing Edna into this, or will Edna kill Eizen for getting himself stranded in another world without her? :V

"hiatus"

"busy"

"So here you go"
 
And so it rises from the ashes!

So happy to have you back man! So the exorcist can basically come and go to Remnant whenever they want? That could be really bad. Also was expecting to at least see a scene like Magilou's to get an idea of where Eizen ended, but I guess that has to wait. Would be convenient if he did end up in the boat that Blake was in Vol4
 
Well, Eizen's appearance is planned to occur soon-ish. ANother member from Magilou's Menagerie is scheduled first, though.
 
You know I benn wondering are Laphicet and Bienfu ok without a vessel? Or did I get that part wrong?

Well, depends. On the plus side, they're now in a place where humans don't seem to generate malevolence, so that helps. Of course, any prolonged contact with Grimm creatures would be extremely dangerous for malakhim without vessels - in fact, Phi would have turned without his ability to burn away malevolence. Bienfu doesn't have that luxury, so hopefully he landed in a more pleasant place.

Remaining without a vessel would probably become dangerous in the long run, but it's not an instant dragon sentence either. At least that's how I made things work here, I admit Berseria and Zestiria can be a little vague about things like that.
 
A Land of Snow and Steel I - Plans


Part Three: A Land of Snow and Steel – Plans
"We're the ones that keep the world safe from the evils no-one even knows about. It's why we meet behind closed doors, why we work in the shadows."



The sound of blades clashing echoed through the inner sanctum of the Empyrean Throne.

With an ease born from years of experience, Artorius Collbrande deflected his opponent's lunge, before retaliating with a flick of the wrist, his sword rippling through the air in a wide arc. In return, his foe jumped backward, letting out an appreciative laugh.

"Not bad! I see you haven't let your recent failures dull your blade!"

Were he a less composed man, the head of the Abbey would have scoffed at the provocation. Instead, the silver-haired man took the offensive once again, calmly probing his sparring partner's defences with a series of one-handed thrusts. Most would have found it difficult wielding a longsword such as his with only their left hand, but after years of gruelling practice, this had become second nature for the Shepherd of Midgand. The saviour of the world could not let such a trivial handicap slow him down, after all.

The oversized curved sword of his opponent blocked every strike, before taking the fight back to him with renewed ferocity. True to his usual style, Shigure Rangetsu was a moving storm, his blows coming with inhuman strength and speed, threatening to crush Artorius' guard. Each swing was like a hurricane, a definite proof that the ancient sword his opponent wielded was well-deserving of its Stormhowl moniker.

A sparring match it might be, but the leader of the Abbey held no illusion; the slightest mistake on his part would be his last. Through strength and sword skills alone, the foreign warrior had become a Legate, the third individual ever to hold that rank. The older man was under no illusion; in a contest of pure power, it was clear Shigure Rangetsu was his better. The black-haired swordsman was taller and broader than Artorius, and the white and black shirt covering only his shoulders left his impressive musculature for the world to see.

In order to overcome such a force of nature, Artorius could only rely on his skills, his wits and his will.

Once again, his sword led Stormhowl away from him and counterattacked with two sharp jabs. Shigure was almost caught off-guard by the sudden reversal in momentum, stepping back with a delighted laugh. Unwilling to give him time to regroup, the Shepherd pressed the offensive, his longsword a blur. This time Shigure stayed on the defensive, though that didn't prevent him from casual banter.

"So, how was the trip?"

One step forward, one step to the side, swing. "Instructive. Beacon's Headmaster certainly is an interesting figure."

The two swords clashed again, and Shigure started pushing forward in a bid to break the bind. "How so?"

Rather than try to overpower the Legate, Artorius moved with the sword, stepping inside Shigure's guard and delivering a swift kick to his midsection. The blow was more surprising than really hurtful, but helped to keep his opponent off-balance. "Let's just say he reminds me of my old master."

Ozpin had been unfailingly polite and helpful, but had been careful with his words and thoughts. But it had been his eyes that had reminded Artorius of Claudin so much. The headmaster of Beacon shared with his late mentor the same gaze. One that belied experience, too much to have been acquired in a single lifetime.

Shigure recovered swiftly and retaliated with a vicious lateral swing, forcing Artorius to block in order to avoid being bisected. The effort drew a low grunt from the Shepherd before he could disengage. "Think he's gonna help us then?"

"Maybe." The swords clashed several times in a shower of sparks, each swordsman trying to outmanoeuvre his opponent. "He did promise to give us information about the fugitives should he hear about them. And he did offer us some interesting opportunities."

Truth be told, Artorius suspected Ozpin's generosity to be calculated. The headmaster clearly wanted to learn more, and keeping the newcomers close certainly was a way to achieve that. This was fine. The Abbey needed to learn about this new world as well, and an open access to one of its Academies could be incredibly helpful in that respect. Not to mention-

Shigure moved again with a fierce swing. "Well good. So, I might go look for my little brother soon, yeah?"

Artorius danced away, weaving between blows while keeping his opponent at a distance. "Velvet and her companions could be anywhere on this planet. For now, the Abbey doesn't have the manpower to meaningfully contribute to the search." He ducked under Shigure's next blow and aimed at his leg. His opponent evaded. "The headmaster might be able to deliver them to us. If not, I believe a bait might be in order. I will need your help for that."

That was enough to make Shigure pause. "Huh? How so?"

As the Saviour of the World, Artorius was above petty gratifications. Will and Reason guided his actions, personal satisfaction was to be ignored. So when his answer turned Shigure's laid-back attitude into an almost comical expression of disbelief, the Shepherd most definitely did not commit the image to his memory.

"No freakin' way."




Ozpin's conversation with Artorius had lasted through most of the evening and well into the night. After his visitor left, Beacon's headmaster remained in his chair for several minutes, the silence only broken by the slow grind of the cogs and gears of the clockwork tower. Bathed in the green lights of the luminous spheres outside the tower, the man pondered on the recent events while looking from his window. Usually, gazing from the top of Beacon's tower into Vale's nightly sky was a comfort, a warm reminder of how far he came, and what he was fighting for. But tonight, the darkness only served to remind me that even after millenia, there was still so much he didn't know.

Even his cane, the only thing to have made it through the aeons, seemed colder today. After several minutes at his desk, he called out.

"So, what do you make of our new visitor?"

A door opened to let in Glynda Goodwitch, his right-hand woman having listened to the whole exchange from the next room. The bespectacled blond teacher seemed just as pensive as him.

"Some of his claims certainly were... extraordinary."

Ozpin humed. A complete stranger barging into his office and claiming he was coming from another world certainly beggars belief. This Artorius Collbrande didn't feel like a liar – nor a madman – but he certainly made quite a few outlandish assertions during their talks. And yet, in this particular matter, Ozpin was inclined to believe him.

"He did mention Claudin though."

More than mentioned, in fact. From the way Artorius had talked about him, it was clear the head of the Abbey knew him intimately. When he started the day, Ozpin had not expected a figure from his distant past – distant pasts – to come back into his life via someone claiming to have been the disciple of one of the very few people Ozpin – Ozma – would have considered a friend.

A friend that had been an occasional ally in his long-standing war against Salem. A friend that had held as many secrets as he did. A friend who had seemed just as immune to the passage of time as Ozpin was, if in a different way. And a friend that did claim, once, to have come from another world.

When Artorius told him that Claudin had been dead for years now, Ozpin couldn't help but feel grief. It had been comforting to know someone else – beside Salem – would remain a constant through the ages, despite his numerous absences. But it seemed Claudin's brand of immortality wouldn't compare to the curse of an ancient god.

"I do not quite understand what this Claudin was to you," Glynda interrupted his musings, "but does it mean his disciple should be deemed as trustworthy?"

"It remains to be seen." Ozpin's finger mechanically tapped his cane. He could feel Claudin's influence on Artorius, and at no point had he felt like the man was lying to him. Yet he had clearly kept things to himself. And more importantly, the self-proclaimed exorcist had a hardness to him that Ozpin found unsettling.

"And yet you agreed to help him," Glynda said, barely hiding the accusation in her voice. "And offered his ward a place as a student. And one of his companions a place as a teacher."

"Assistant-teacher," Ozpin automatically corrected. "And the offer is contingent on your own approval once you'll get the chance to see them. I wouldn't dare go above your head in such matters, Glynda" he offered with what he hoped to be a placating smile.

"And how am I supposed to accommodate one more student now that we just formed the teams for this year?" Glynda pointed out with an irritated scowl. "Are we to have a 5-man team for the first time ever? Or should I expel someone else on the spot to even the numbers? Like, say, someone who blatantly faked his way in?"

Ah, so she was still mad about that. "Let's just treat him as an outside observer for the time being," Ozpin suggested. "This – Laphicet Crowe, was it? – would get access to our classroom, and remain with our teachers during team activities."

"That could work," she begrudgingly answered, "but that doesn't explain why you're giving these strangers such a wide rein."

"Why, I believe that much is obvious," the headmaster smiled. "Just as they have expressed a desire to learn about our world, I do intend to learn about them. And the only way to do that is to keep them close." He also hoped that the people Artorius had chosen would be easier to read than the stern-faced Shepherd.

"That's a dangerous game," Glynda admonished him. "And if anything happens to our students because of it, I'll hold you responsible." Fair enough, Ozpin supposed. The Beacon staff member kept her gaze on him for a few seconds before sighing in defeat. "Very well, I'll begin by taking an appointment with assistant-teacher Rangetsu then. And what about the other thing this Artorius asked? About those presumably wanted criminals?"

That had seemed to be Artorius Collbrande's main concern. And truth be told, if half of what he said about the band of rogues he was going after was true, Ozpin could definitely understand where he was coming from.

"Well. I promised him our assistance in this matter, and I intend to keep my word. Of course, if we happen to catch one of those criminals first, nothing is forcing us to give them to our guest immediately. I'm sure a conversation with someone from the opposite side would be enlightening, if nothing else."

Glynda gave a short nod before taking her leave, Ozpin remaining once again alone with his thoughts. The blond teacher didn't seem to have noticed he hadn't been entirely honest here, and he dearly hoped Artorius hadn't caught on either. Because among the many incredible things the Abbey's leader had said today, the one thing that stuck the most to Ozpin had been his brief description of the fugitives. A pirate brawler. A mercenary swordsman. A spear wielding deserter. An evil witch. A child taken hostage.

A woman who consumed souls.

If this was true – if this was really true – then this could change everything. After hundreds of years of stalemate, new players seemed to have appeared on the board he and Salem had so carefully crafted. Whether or not he could make use of them remained to be seen.

And he knew exactly where to start looking.






James Ironwood was a busy man.

Someone in his position would have to be. Being the headmaster of Atlas Huntsmen's Academy, general-in-chief of Atlesian armed forces, and a member of the kingdom's council, left him with very little free time. And knowing the threat that was lurking out there made him disinclined to take advantage of the brief moments of respite he might have been able to find. With humanity threatened by nothing less than extinction, rest would have to wait.

Especially when so many things seemed to happen all at once lately.

As if to illustrate his point, a blue light started blinking on his desk, signalling an incoming call. Ironwood looked at the sender, then sighed. This wouldn't be a quiet day.

A few commands on his keyboard made sure that his door was locked. The dark blue windows from the circular office faded to become opaque, as the holographic projection table rose from the ground. In these matters, secrecy was of the utmost importance. Finally, the image of the caller illuminated the room.

"Ozpin."

"James. You wouldn't believe who just left my office." His old mentor had that wry smile he showed when he was about to make a grand reveal. Knowing better than trying to guess, Ironwood simply gestured for him to continue. "I was visited by a man claiming to come from another world."

The Atlesian general froze. This couldn't be a coincidence. "The timing is suspicious."

Ozpin's face remained unreadable. "Perhaps. Tell me again about that person. The one who also made a similar claim."

James Ironwood closed his eyes, summoning back the details of that particular file.

"Nine days ago, my men found a red-headed female wandering in a restricted zone. She claimed to be named Eleanor Hume, and to have come from another world." Ozpin's face shifted slightly, almost seeming – disappointed? The fleeting expression vanished as quickly as it came. "Given her extraordinary claims, I've decided to keep her at Atlas Academy under the surveillance of Specialist Schnee."

"And what do you make of it, James?"

The general sighed. "A spy remains the most plausible explanation, as I told you last week. However, I'm willing to concede this would be a very strange cover story. And this Hume did give our scientists some pause."

That certainly got Ozpin's attention. "Do tell."

"First is her spear. It's an almost primitive weapon – no mechanical augment or secondary weapon system. But the analysis revealed it was forged with rather... unique alloys. We actually haven't been able to identify all of the metals used. And then there is the matter of her aura. It seems... half-awakened."

Even Ozpin didn't bother to conceal his frown. "I don't understand."

"Me neither," Ironwood confessed. "It is as if her aura had been awakened, only for her to later lose access to part of it. As far as I know, that shouldn't be possible." He gave Beacon's headmaster a pointed look. Ozpin had far more experience with the unusual than anyone else on this planet – bar one being. If anyone knew about this, it would be him.

However, Ozpin seemed as puzzled as he was – if far more eager. "Truly fascinating. Could I ask for a copy of the report? Another world... This certainly doesn't seem so ridiculous now, does it?"

"You believe it then? Just from that?" Ironwood had trouble hiding his disbelief.

"Let's just say I'm keeping the option on the table." Ozpin was once again unreadable, and the Atlesian general couldn't help but think he was kept in the dark about some details his mentor refused to share. A distressingly common occurrence these days. "And what does Winter make of your new guest?"

"Specialist Schnee's evaluation seems to have been positive so far," Ironwood begrudgingly conceded. "Eleanor Hume seems like a rather honest, hard-working individual driven by a strong sense of justice. Is your last visitor a friend of hers?"

"Hardly," smiled Ozpin. "He informed me that he was looking for a band of hardened criminals. I believe 'Eleanor Hume' was indeed a name on that list."

The general frowned. "If that's the case, I can deliver her to you within the week-"

Ozpin raised a hand. "Let's not be hasty. There's still too many things we don't know. As long as Miss Hume remains under your supervision, I see no reason to rush things – or to inform our new guests for now. Let's try to learn about who we're dealing with first."

James Ironwood couldn't quite hide his frustration. Ozpin's taste for secrets had always been a point of contention between them – and every time he saw it on display, he couldn't help but wonder what Beacon's headmaster kept from him. Still, he buried the unpleasant feelings that came with those thoughts. Sometimes such things were necessary. "Very well. I'll continue my observations and keep you informed. Is there anything else?"

"Nothing for now," Ozpin nodded. "I'll send you the wanted posters later, just in case. I believe I might call you more often in the coming weeks."

Atlas' headmaster sighed. "Very well. I'll keep you informed."

With a nod, the image of Ozpin vanished, leaving the room in the dark. And despite the many tasks needing his attention, Ironwood allowed himself the luxury of a few minutes alone with his thoughts.

War was coming, he knew it. And now the world seemed to become a more complicated place by the day. What it would mean for Atlas remained to be seen. But come what may, he would do everything he could to defend his kingdom.

No matter the cost.


Notes: well, that's another chapter that went through countless rewrites and I have come to progressively hate it more and more. Hopefully it's not too exposition-heavy, and the payoff for the various set up is worth it. For now, strap up, we're staying in Atlas for a little while.

Nothing bad ever happens in Atlas.
 
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"Not bad! I see you have let your recent failures dull your blade!"
"haven't"

this had become second nature for the Shepherd of Midgard.
"Midgand"

before taking back the fight to him
"taking the fight back to him"

Usually, gazing from the top of Beacon's tower into Mistral's nightly sky was a comfort
"Vale's"?

a warm reminder of far he came
"of how far"

the darkness only served to remind me that even after millenias
"millennia"

Ozpin's finger machinally tapped his cane.
"mechanically"?

and had no point had
"and at no point"

Being the headmaster of Atlas Huntsmen's Academy, general-in-chief of Atlesian armed forces, and de-facto member of the council
Actually, Ironwood isn't just a de-facto member the council, he's an official member of the council (with two seats by Volume 4, although I'm not sure if that's the case at this point).

threatened by nothing left than
"less"

Tell me again that person
Either "Tell be about that person again" or "Tell me again about that person". Personally, I prefer the former.

This certainly doesn't seem so ridiculous now, isn't it?"
"does"

"I'll send you the wanted posters later, just in case.
*later*

Eleanor: "Is that supposed to be me!?"
 
A Land of Snow and Steel II - Purpose
A Land of Snow and Steel - Purpose



Eleanor Hume went on the offensive with a flurry of blows, her spear darting left and right to try to break her opponent's defence. The thrusts were parried, but her foe was nonetheless forced to take a step back. Capitalising on her momentum, the renegade exorcist pressed the attack, taking full advantage of her longer reach. Quick jabs without overextending, never attacking the same spot twice to keep her opponent guessing, all while remaining mindful of her steps in the snowy grounds, and not letting her current advantage disturb her heart.

Control your feelings to control the flow of battle.

Yet it was hard to entirely suppress a pang of elation when one her blows almost made it through. That small instant was her undoing. With a flick of her blade, her opponent slightly deflected the tip of the spear, and with a flash of light became a blur, too fast for Eleanor's eyes to follow. She did manage to block a body blow in the nick of time, only for her feet to be kicked from under her, sending her tumbling on the steel floor, the impact barely softened by the thin layer of snow.

Before the red-headed spearwoman could get up, she found herself with the tip of a blade threatening her throat. Eleanor could only sigh.

"The match is yours."

If Winter Schnee felt any satisfaction at her victory, she showed no sign of it, instead extending a hand to the fallen exorcist, just as the remnants of the speed glyph she just used to end their sparring session vanished into thin air.

"Well fought. If not for my Semblance, the outcome might have been different."

Still short on breath, Eleanor grabbed the offered hand, pulling herself up before dusting herself off. The morning had been an exercise in humility, several sparring sessions with the Atlesian operative all ending in the same way. Winter Schnee had impeccable swordplay, an incredibly versatile semblance and a cool mindset allowing her to keep calm under pressure.

By contrast, Eleanor felt crippled. Without Laphicet, Bienfu or any other malakhim to bond with, the former exorcist had not only lost any access to her malak artes, but even her physical abilities felt diminished. It was common knowledge that someone with no malak was no match for daemons - with a handful of exceptions, like the legate Shigure Rangetsu - and she was acutely feeling that loss.

Apparently, Winter had felt it too. She had made a comment on her aura - a term those in this world used to describe the power found within all souls - seemingly being only half-awakened. One part of Eleanor was intrigued by the notion ; she was always taught that her powers as an exorcist came from her bonds with malakhim, but the Atlesian operative had implied at least some of it came from herself. Another, more childish voice that Eleanor did her best to suppress, couldn't help but complain at the unfairness of the situation.

"Fairness has no place on the battlefield. One must simply use the tools at their disposal."

Even now, she could still hear Shepherd Artorius' admonishments. She might have broken off with the Abbey, but she could still find value in his teachings.

She gave Winter Schnee a self-deprecating smile. "Thank you for the spar. It seems I still have a long way to go."

The white haired soldier hummed in response. "You are improving. Your condition is… peculiar, but I believe your body is adapting. Given time, I'm confident you'll end up awakening your aura in full, as long as you remain diligent."

"Well," answered the red-headed exorcist, "it's not like I have much else to do." She tried to affect a light tone, but couldn't quite suppress a small note of resentment in her voice. She understood why the Atlesian leadership was cautious, truly she did. But not being able to leave the floating city to search for her companions was frustrating. She could do little other than train, read about this new world, and worry about her friends.

The Atlesian operative had the good grace of looking contrite. "I know being confined to the city is hardly ideal. I've been talking with General Ironwood about bringing you for a few missions. If it goes well," she hesitated for a couple of seconds, "I believe it would be enough to convince him to raise most of the restrictions surrounding your stay."

Most, not all. Eleanor let out a sigh. This was still progress, she supposed. The two women eventually left the chilly atmosphere of the training platform, and walked side by side through the long hallways, white and grey walls illuminated by blue lights. Winter was eventually the first to break the silence.

"Are you getting used to Atlas Academy?"

Eleanor gave her a sheepish smile. "Well, it's certainly been... an experience."

In more ways than one, Atlas felt like a strange place for Eleanor.

That some aspects of it would be challenging was obvious. Eleanor Hume was in a city floating in the sky. That alone would be enough to give her pause, not to mention all the unfamiliar devices she kept stumbling upon. Flying ships. Men of metal. There were a thousand new things to discover, and Eleanor had trouble wrapping her head around most of them.

But what disturbed her the most was how familiar Atlas was to the renegade exorcist despite all of this. Technology might have marched on, but any exorcist's trainee would have felt at home in the Atlas military academy. Even as an outsider, Eleanor could recognize all the things she had left behind since the day she fell into the orbit of Velvet Crowe.

It wasn't just the strangely similar aesthetics – though the Atlas white and grey uniform she was currently wearing wasn't all that different from her old praetor outfit. But discipline born from a sense of duty. Trust towards a distant, yet fair leadership. Fellowship between men and women fighting to save the world. The atmosphere in Atlas Academy was no different than the one in Lothringen Tower. Ironwood's soldiers were as devoted in their missions as any exorcist she knew. Even their goals seemed eerily similar: protecting humanity from the daemon-like Grimm.

To an extent, the praetor exorcist had missed that atmosphere. That purity of purpose.

Which was why she couldn't allow herself to let her guard down. Her unconditional faith in the Abbey had made her blind to its flaws. From the outside, the Atlesian military seemed just as immaculate as the Abbey had appeared to be; Eleanor could only hope that this wasn't just a facade. But until she knew for sure, she'd keep her eyes and ears open.

Once burned, twice shy, after all.

For now, she had little choice but to play nice, though. She was a stranger in a strange land, and the Atlesians had been polite - if suspicious - hosts so far. Truth be told, they had let her have more freedom than what she would have expected - the Empyreans knew the Abbey would probably have been way more strict with a potential threat.

Was it a sign that Atlas was more even-handed? Or perhaps more secure in their power? She'll learn soon enough.

At the very least, Winter Schnee had proven to be pleasant company, if not of a particularly expansive mood. She might be her custodian - though her position meant she often had to delegate that duty - but Eleanor had learned to appreciate her company. Even if the spars never failed to bruise her body and her ego.

She decided to change the conversation toward a lighter topic. "So, any news of your sister?"

Winter did not often smile, but mentioning her sibling seemed to be a soft spot for her. "She's settling in at Beacon Academy. She's now waiting for the teams to be announced. From what she tells me, she's already aiming at becoming its leader." The white haired woman couldn't help but sigh. "Honestly, I worry that she might push herself too hard."

Eleanor couldn't help but laugh. "From what you told me, she certainly seems driven."

"That she is." Winter turned her eyes toward her. "Do you have any siblings?"

"Ah, no, I-" The red-haired exorcist swallowed her discomfort. "-I'm an only child. Then again…" The image of a smiling Laphicet came to her mind, "there is someone I came to consider my little brother. I can only hope he's alright."

In a rare display of support, Winter put a hand on her shoulder. "I'm sure-"

Whatever she was about to say was cut by a beeping sound coming from her wrist. The Atlesian operator frowned as the screen of her electronic scroll lit up, reading the message she just received.

Finally, she turned back to Eleanor. "Well, you might receive your first chance at stepping outside the Academy. The general is calling us."

***
"Thank you for coming. We have an emergency down in Mantle."

James Ironwood stood at the center of his office, a grim expression on his face as he looked at each person in attendance. Aside from Eleanor and Winter, a team of five huntsmen stood at attention. From what she had been told, those five men and women were known through Atlas as Ironwood's elite taskforce, underlining the seriousness of the situation.

"We received an emergency report coming from the Schnee Dust Company mine 4 six hours ago." Eleanor's gaze fell on the woman next to her. Schnee? Winter's face remained expressionless. "A first investigation team reported destroyed military mechs and missing shipments. We lost contact with them soon after."

Well that certainly sounded bad. The leader of the Atlesian operatives, a tall man with short brown hair - Clover Ebi, her memory supplied - raised an eyebrow. "Any suspected culprit?"

Ironwood shook his head. "The situation is unclear. It could be local malcontents, or some Grimm creatures might have found a way to the mine. Our services also tell us that there are possible White Fang operatives currently in Mantle."

Eleanor blinked. White Fang?

Sensing her confusion, Winter provided a short explanation. "An anti-Atlesian extremist group. We'll talk more about it later."

One member of the Ace Ops – Marlowe? - looked about to say more, but a glance from one of his teammates seemingly convinced him to drop the matter. The Atlesian general continued, both hands behind his back.

"Specialist Schnee is in command of this operation. Find out what happened, and eliminate the threat. Any questions?"

A short, dark-skinned girl with shaved brown hair on the side and a lock of platinum hair in the center, raised a hand, before turning her head toward Eleanor. "Any reason for the new girl to come?"

Several of her teammates looked uncomfortable at the blunt remark, but Winter Schnee took it in stride. "We've decided to give Miss Hume a chance to prove herself. She will remain under my supervision during the mission. I trust this won't be a problem?"

The girl still seemed doubtful, but nodded nonetheless. Their team leader eventually broke the tension with an easy smile. "Well if it's fine with Specialist Schnee, it's fine with me. When do we leave?"

"Immediately," answered Ironwood. "A ship is waiting for you on platform 15. I'm counting on you all. Dismissed!"

Several 'yes sir!' echoed through the office. Eleanor followed suit, not letting her apprehension show on her face. There was nothing strange about feeling nervous at the prospect of fighting in an unknown land among unknown people, all while being weakened by Laphicet's absence. Yet her unease seemed to have deeper roots.

As a praetor exorcist, Eleanor had led her fair share of operations against pirates and bandits. And at the time, she had carried those with almost the same zeal as her battles against daemons. She was fighting for the greater good, after all. But her experience among the Van Eltia crew made her realise things rarely were so simple.

And now her first mission in Atlas potentially involved 'local malcontents' or 'extremist groups'. And she had no way to know the truth of the matter, besides trusting the words of those around her. She didn't believe Winter Schnee to be a deceitful person, but her sense of duty might blind her to certain truths.

It certainly had blinded Eleanor back then.

With a silent sigh, the red-headed exorcist steeled herself for the coming mission. She could only hope that nothing but Grimm awaited under Mantle. Monsters she knew how to deal with.

***

"Cargo is secure. Should we keep going?"

Several faunus in grey and white uniforms and white masks turned toward their leader, awaiting his instructions.

"Let's continue. We should have a little more time before the Schnee puppets make their move, and we'll need as much dust as possible."

One of his subordinates frowned. "Plans say the area ahead should be heavily fortified. Several military mechs, at least."

"Well then." The masked leader turned toward someone standing at the back of their group. "Time to earn your keep, Reaper."

As his only answer, the blonde man in a black coat flipped a gold coin, before frowning at the result. He had a bad feeling about this.



Notes: so, still not dead. It took forever to get there, but I have too many ideas for Atlas to just give up on it. Next chapter should follow up shortly. Definitely grateful for anyone still following this!
 
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I for one an happy to hear that Eleanor is about to find a friend, even if the situation is going to get very politically sticky the moment that she sees the unluckiest dragon of the seas.
 
She could do little else than train
Either "else" should be "other" or "than" should be "but". Personally, I prefer the former.

I've been talking with general Ironwood about bringing you for a few missions.
I feel like "general" should be "General" in this context.

"Are you getting used to Atlas Academy ?"
There's an extra space here.

"Well, it's certainly been- an experience."
I'm pretty sure that dash should be an ellipsis.

Technology might have marched on, but any exorcist's trainee would have felt at home in Atlas military academy.
Pretty sure that this should be "in the Atlas military academy".

The confidence toward a distant, yet fair leadership.
"towards"?

Even their goals seemed eerily similar : protecting humanity from the daemon-like Grimm.
There's another extra space here.

"From what you told me, she certainly seems- driven."
I'm pretty sure that dash should also be an ellipsis.

The Atlesian operator frowned as the screen of her electronic scroll lighted up, reading the message she just received.
"lit"

Eleanor blinked. White Fang ?
Another extra space.

Several faunus in black uniforms and white masks turned toward their leader, awaiting his instructions.
I distinctly remember the White Fang's uniforms being grey and white. *thinks* Maybe the hoods were black, but not the torso parts.

but I have to many ideas for Atlas to just give up on it.
"too"

Also, some general points regarding the Ace Ops; If I'm remembering Ironwood's explanation at the start of Volume 7 correctly, the Ace Ops were formed at some point after the fall of Beacon (on the grounds that Ironwood needed his own inner circle of people he could trust, which is also why Winter and Penny were brought into the loop regarding Salem), but I might be misremembering some details. Also, Harriet mentioned during Volume 8 that Marrow replaced someone named Tortuga, who from the sound of things died but (unless it was mentioned in Volume 9 or supplementary materials) we don't know when.
 
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