[X] A pile of clothes on the sandy shore, a tan form half submerged in the waves and a hazy figure before him.
[ ] A kid sitting by himself at lunch, doodling some monster in a speckled composition notebook.
[ ] A teenager sitting at a washed out dining table, sullenly staring at his plate as his family eats around him.
[ ] A young man in a hooded jacket, sitting on the edge of his bed with a leatherbound book open in his lap.
[ ] A pile of clothes on the sandy shore, a tan form half submerged in the waves and a hazy figure before him.
[ ] A nightmare void that pulses and flexes, filled with bruised colors and slick black stone, details running and flowing.
That was honestly my first thought after browsing the wiki.But I'm not fully sure. Perhaps Ten is trolling us and we turn out to be playing a Beast character, moment in which we wouuld realize he's a really cruel man.
But I'm not fully sure. Perhaps Ten is trolling us and we turn out to be playing a Beast character, moment in which we would realize he's a really cruel man.
But is he the radfem Beast that needles people until they Mansplain so he has an excuse to knock them out or the health inspector Beast which the terrifying power to do his job so well that your business has to close down ooOOooOooo~?
You're thirteen and absolutely furious about it. You spend every morning before school glaring at yourself in the mirror, pushing up your round dimpled cheeks and raking your feathery mess of hair with the gel your mom bought. Trying to look fierce in your reflection while you practice your growl. Trying to look cool. It's a doomed effort: there isn't an angle you can find where you don't look like a slightly feral Cabbage Patch kid and the goopy, lime-scented stuff just makes your hair limp and greasy. Try to push in your beaky nose. Tug at your sharp, prominent chin like maybe you can break it off. Suck in your stomach as far as you can and then just hunch over when that doesn't work (and it never works). Puppy fat clings to your belly, rounding you out and making you feel like a half-risen loaf of dough. Your aunties think its cute, they fawn over you whenever they see you, fill your plate up with browned strips of beef and mountains of yellow rice. Another fried flauta for the growing boy! Another bowl of rich red stew. You eat it because, well because of course you do. It's better than anything at home and they'll pitch a fit if you don't. And it's not as if it's bad it's just...
Sometimes you wish you looked like other boys. Like your cousins who are already in 9th Grade, 10th Grade, who're already juniors and seniors and started to bulk up, put on proper muscle. Like Leon in your class who everyone says is going to be a soccer star. You glance out from under the lank fringe hair that droops over your forehead. You can see him half a dozen tables away, talking to ffffffuuuucking Hannah~ from history. She says something and he smiles, rows of straight white teeth flashing in the dull yellow light. You hunch down on reflex.
Your cousins just tease you when you see them, call you little puppy dog and ask you to show off your snarl. You do it because it makes them laugh, you do a lot to make them laugh, but you're still waiting on Felix to take you to the gym like he promised his mom. You're not really sure you want to but you need to do something. Because you're thirteen and nothing feels like it fits right. Your shirts are too big, your shoes too tight, and you've started hiding inside your hoodies. Pretending it's normal to wear a windbreaker in the slow, sweltering roast of late-summer. Sweat drips down your scalp as you touch the tip of your sharpened pencil back to the paper.
It's okay Levi, I think your OC is cool.The picture's not drawn so much as hacked out. Indentions raised on the reverse side, you could probably close your eyes and read them like Braille. Wild colors splashes over the page, ruby red dripping from the monster's teeth, sea green on the clumsy scales. You have a few books that are supposed to teach you how to properly draw but they're not very interesting; usually just trace until you get bored then doodle until your pencils break. You read through the chickenscratch notes you made on the preceding pages. You haven't named this one yet and you feel bad about it. Naming them's so hard, you want it to sound good. But you have his story all written down! And it's a good one too.
He's a pirate, a captain who cut out his own heart and tossed it into the sea as his ship sank. And now he's a big, bloodthirsty, bat-faced monster with vampire jaws and dragon scales and a huge skull hat that looks like a half-melted candle 'cause you couldn't get the brim even. He has hooked hands that he uses to crawl over the ropes and rigging, dropping and landing on people walking below. Biting them and dragging them up to eat them! But really he wants to find a new ship so he can...uh. Um. Hrm.
S'a work in progress. But you're really sure about the heart-thing (it sounds good right? You think so). Maybe he wants to make a new ship, a new vampire ship with a skeleton crew and living sai-
FuckGoBackButWithMemeMotionBlur.jpeg"Leeeeviiiiiii~." She drags it out into an off-key singsong. She probably thinks she sounds sweet. You think she sounds like a sick dog. "I-"
A lunch monitor drifts past, ponderously slow, pale blue eyes probing. Conversation dies in her wake. The two of you watch her sweep on before Pigtails leans in conspiratorially. "I heard you haven't asked anyone to the daaaaance."
"Y-yeah?" You blink, unsure where she's going with this.
"Wwwweeeeeell~," you want to hit her with your notebook until she stops, but the last time you tried that a teacher nearly saw and the girl kicked you in the shins anyway, "do you wanna go with me?"
Silence.
"No?"
You half expect, half-hope that she'll freak out. That she'll make a scene. You wonder if she'll run back and her friends'll all giggle and look over at you but...she doesn't and they don't. She just frowns, little watery eyes dropping to the table. Round, sun-reddened cheeks working.
"Oh," she says and then she gets up and leaves. Just like that. You warily watch every step she takes until she vanishes into the crowd. There's no sudden burst of laughter, no sirens, no...anything. Nobody noticed. Nobody cares. You wonder if she would've been scared if you growled at her. You do it sometimes to people who walk too close when you're sitting in the hallway, when the bus dropped you off early and you're just waiting for classes to start. But the other guys mostly just tell you to stop so, you dunno, maybe it wouldn't have worked.
I sure can't see any way that a stint in Arcadia could've worsened these personal problems, no sir.This is you.
It flows into place, filling in the furrow through your head. This is you, this is how you were, how you are: bitter and caustic, toxic and smoking, acid poured into a jar and carefully sealed off from the rest of the world. Watching life pass through the curved glass wall.
Literally being fished out? Well that's uh... new.O-oh. No that's...there's a fishing line in your chest. A silvery filament feeding straight into your sternum, you feel a tug behind the bone. A cool, liquid pressure in the shape of a hook. You feel your spine bow as it starts to reel you in as it drags your limp body against the current. You're not entirely sure when this happened. Touch a curved black claw to the lead, strum it like a guitar chord. It shivers but doesn't split. The vibrations resonate in your chest and you cough out a small jet of water.
You pluck at the line again, flinching a bit as a serpent butts against your neck. Tongue flickering, fluttering out. The steady pressure of passing water pulling it lopsided. You hesitantly reach up to stroke the thing.
Everyone sits with their friends, the friends of their friends, in sloppy circles that sprawl across whole sections of the hall; big confused clots, squabbling knots of knees and elbows as kids cram themselves onto the narrow benches. Eager for even a sliver of space so long as it's by their bestie.
You sit in the corner with your back to the wall. The farther part of the single table farthest away from everyone else; surrounded by a desert of empty seats on all sides..
You're thirteen and absolutely furious about it. You spend every morning before school glaring at yourself in the mirror, pushing up your round dimpled cheeks and raking your feathery mess of hair with the gel your mom bought. Trying to look fierce in your reflection while you practice your growl. Trying to look cool. It's a doomed effort: there isn't an angle you can find where you don't look like a slightly feral Cabbage Patch kid and the goopy, lime-scented stuff just makes your hair limp and greasy
He's a pirate, a captain who cut out his own heart and tossed it into the sea as his ship sank. And now he's a big, bloodthirsty, bat-faced monster with vampire jaws and dragon scales and a huge skull hat that looks like a half-melted candle 'cause you couldn't get the brim even. He has hooked hands that he uses to crawl over the ropes and rigging, dropping and landing on people walking below. Biting them and dragging them up to eat them! But really he wants to find a new ship so he can...uh. Um. Hrm.
"Leeeeviiiiiii~." She drags it out into an off-key singsong. She probably thinks she sounds sweet. You think she sounds like a sick dog. "I-"
Aww, it's okay. Some people like the world's most adorable scaly edgelord this side of Raiden after a sexual awakening, and some people have shit taste. There's room for both of us on this planet we call Earth~If only to avoid being a wet blanket like the OP's other MC, I really like his writing style but I wish he would occasionally give us a main character that we could actually respect.
I mean yeah Christoph isn't exactly Randy Savage but I doubt you can call him a wet blanket at this point.[X] Confident, courageous, and brave. Maybe a bit of swagger if you can work up the strength to stand, some all-purpose posturing if you can't.
If only to avoid being a wet blanket like the OP's other MC, I really like his writing style but I wish he would occasionally give us a main character that we could actually respect.