A Naruto quest. The title and such will be changed as the quests direction becomes more obvious.
Naruto quest
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Prologue 1
"When the tree leaves dance,
One shall find flames.
The fire's shadow will illuminate the village,
And once again, tree leaves shall bud anew."
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"What are you doing here Naruto? You failed the Genin test."
"No! I'm a certified Genin now, see the head band?"
"Naruto! Get to your seat!"
"Fine, fine, sorry Sensei…"
"Now that you're finished disrupting class we can continue graduation. Where were we?"
Iruka Sensei takes a quick moment to glare at the laughing, lounging, and chittering students, which quickly brings the noise to a minimum. Seemingly happy with the situation, he resumes assigning teams.
"Team seven, your team consists of Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, and Sakura Haruno. Your Jonin Sensei is Kakashi Hatake."
It takes Sensei a brief moment to get the complaining to stop before he continues again. You knew you'd be happy to make Genin, but you didn't realize you'd be this happy to get away from Naruto, at least for a bit.
"-and you're in last place, Naruto. That's why… Now quiet down!"
"Idiot."
"The last team will be Team four, with Kiba Inuzuka, Ryusei Gekko, and Ahma. Your Jonin Sensei is-"
Iruka Sensei just called you! It's time to prove what real ninjas are made of. In due time everyone will know the name…
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[ ] Your name is Kiba Inuzuka, the most badass beast in Konoha. You may not be the smartest, or even the most talented… But you just know when you get your Ninken you'll be a force to be reckoned with!
+ Legendary Perception stat and moderate Insight. He can feel Naruto's prank coming a mile away. Ahma is in for a treat. He can also hear the shinobi in the hall, and the academy students in the yard, and merchants sell- you get the idea.
- Very weak Judgment stat. How can he hear bugs scuttling in Shinos coat, smell the smoke of a cigarette outside the building, and still not notice the consequences of his actions?
? Kibas talent with Ninken is the best Konoha has ever seen, he just has to get one. According to Kiba at least. This also means he has not gained his Ninken partners yet.
[ ] Your name is Ahma. You may be of foreign blood, but the great tree is what powers your heart and mind. With an S class parent at the head of your training you'll show them what the will of fire truly means.
+ Because Ahma has trained from a young age her base stat total will be higher than your average genin.
- Awful charisma stat… It's almost amazing how many times she can say the exact opposite of what she should.
- Ahma is an immigrant from the Land of Rain, and as such she is faced with immense distrust by most of the population.
? Starts with training in a Hidden Technique developed by one of Konoha's few S class ninja. Also Ahmas parent… who she can't stop bragging about. Constantly.
[ ] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
+ Being born of the two total swordmasters of Konoha you think his talent in Kenjutsu would be good, but it's better than anyone could have imagined.
- Ryusei is crippled with a terminal lung disease, and will live to 30 at the most. It's presence taints every thought he has, and every action he takes.
- While he may get some training from his mother, she works in anbu and isn't around very much. Self training and instruction from his Jonin Sensei are what he's going to have for the time being.
? Ryusei is set to inherit the Gekko family heirloom, The Crescent Blade.
One shall find flames.
The fire's shadow will illuminate the village,
And once again, tree leaves shall bud anew."
~~----------~~
"What are you doing here Naruto? You failed the Genin test."
"No! I'm a certified Genin now, see the head band?"
"Naruto! Get to your seat!"
"Fine, fine, sorry Sensei…"
"Now that you're finished disrupting class we can continue graduation. Where were we?"
Iruka Sensei takes a quick moment to glare at the laughing, lounging, and chittering students, which quickly brings the noise to a minimum. Seemingly happy with the situation, he resumes assigning teams.
"Team seven, your team consists of Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, and Sakura Haruno. Your Jonin Sensei is Kakashi Hatake."
It takes Sensei a brief moment to get the complaining to stop before he continues again. You knew you'd be happy to make Genin, but you didn't realize you'd be this happy to get away from Naruto, at least for a bit.
"-and you're in last place, Naruto. That's why… Now quiet down!"
"Idiot."
"The last team will be Team four, with Kiba Inuzuka, Ryusei Gekko, and Ahma. Your Jonin Sensei is-"
Iruka Sensei just called you! It's time to prove what real ninjas are made of. In due time everyone will know the name…
—
[ ] Your name is Kiba Inuzuka, the most badass beast in Konoha. You may not be the smartest, or even the most talented… But you just know when you get your Ninken you'll be a force to be reckoned with!
+ Legendary Perception stat and moderate Insight. He can feel Naruto's prank coming a mile away. Ahma is in for a treat. He can also hear the shinobi in the hall, and the academy students in the yard, and merchants sell- you get the idea.
- Very weak Judgment stat. How can he hear bugs scuttling in Shinos coat, smell the smoke of a cigarette outside the building, and still not notice the consequences of his actions?
? Kibas talent with Ninken is the best Konoha has ever seen, he just has to get one. According to Kiba at least. This also means he has not gained his Ninken partners yet.
[ ] Your name is Ahma. You may be of foreign blood, but the great tree is what powers your heart and mind. With an S class parent at the head of your training you'll show them what the will of fire truly means.
+ Because Ahma has trained from a young age her base stat total will be higher than your average genin.
- Awful charisma stat… It's almost amazing how many times she can say the exact opposite of what she should.
- Ahma is an immigrant from the Land of Rain, and as such she is faced with immense distrust by most of the population.
? Starts with training in a Hidden Technique developed by one of Konoha's few S class ninja. Also Ahmas parent… who she can't stop bragging about. Constantly.
[ ] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
+ Being born of the two total swordmasters of Konoha you think his talent in Kenjutsu would be good, but it's better than anyone could have imagined.
- Ryusei is crippled with a terminal lung disease, and will live to 30 at the most. It's presence taints every thought he has, and every action he takes.
- While he may get some training from his mother, she works in anbu and isn't around very much. Self training and instruction from his Jonin Sensei are what he's going to have for the time being.
? Ryusei is set to inherit the Gekko family heirloom, The Crescent Blade.
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System mechanics
Stats consist of multiple sub stats that join to make the total. The stats are,
Vigor
-Strength
-Constitution
Control
-Agility
-Dexterity
Perception
-Detection
-Sense
Mind
-Intelligence
-Will
Judgment
-Wisdom
-Wit
Charisma
-Presence
-Insight
The rolling system is d10s, and each point in a stat gives you another d10 to roll.
There are also skills, each skill moves up to 9. To succeed on a roll our protagonist will have to roll a certain amount of successes set by the opponents roll/DC. They get successes by rolling under their skill number.
Example - Water Lee wishes to use the Hidden Vortex Technique on Maara of the Cloud. Maara of the cloud has the ultimate epic cloud defense though, so he must beat his roll.
Water Lee has a Control of 25 and a Taijutsu of 7. He rolls 25 d10s and gets 16 successes.
Garra, using a stat and skill your not gonna know about yet, rolls 15.
Water Lee does 1 damage base, from the difference in successes. He then performs the Hidden Vortex technique and its effects.
More will be added to this as needed.
Vigor
-Strength
-Constitution
Control
-Agility
-Dexterity
Perception
-Detection
-Sense
Mind
-Intelligence
-Will
Judgment
-Wisdom
-Wit
Charisma
-Presence
-Insight
The rolling system is d10s, and each point in a stat gives you another d10 to roll.
There are also skills, each skill moves up to 9. To succeed on a roll our protagonist will have to roll a certain amount of successes set by the opponents roll/DC. They get successes by rolling under their skill number.
Example - Water Lee wishes to use the Hidden Vortex Technique on Maara of the Cloud. Maara of the cloud has the ultimate epic cloud defense though, so he must beat his roll.
Water Lee has a Control of 25 and a Taijutsu of 7. He rolls 25 d10s and gets 16 successes.
Garra, using a stat and skill your not gonna know about yet, rolls 15.
Water Lee does 1 damage base, from the difference in successes. He then performs the Hidden Vortex technique and its effects.
More will be added to this as needed.
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This is my first quest and I'm trying to improve. Anything you see that isn't as it should be let me know.
Also how do I open a vote.
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I found it.
Also how do I open a vote.
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I found it.
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- Location
- France
[X] Your name is Kiba Inuzuka, the most badass beast in Konoha. You may not be the smartest, or even the most talented… But you just know when you get your Ninken you'll be a force to be reckoned with!
- Pronouns
- Reader
[X] Your name is Kiba Inuzuka, the most badass beast in Konoha. You may not be the smartest, or even the most talented… But you just know when you get your Ninken you'll be a force to be reckoned with!
GamingandReading
Browses and Replies With Haste
- Pronouns
- He/Him
[X] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
Fluffy_serpent
a snake pretending to be human
[X] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
Itachi what are you doing here?
Itachi what are you doing here?
[X] Your name is Ahma. You may be of foreign blood, but the great tree is what powers your heart and mind. With an S class parent at the head of your training you'll show them what the will of fire truly means.
[X] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
[X] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
- Location
- Philippines
[X] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
[X] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
There's just something appealing about the candle that burns twice as fast.
There's just something appealing about the candle that burns twice as fast.
[X] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
[X] Your name is Kiba Inuzuka, the most badass beast in Konoha. You may not be the smartest, or even the most talented… But you just know when you get your Ninken you'll be a force to be reckoned with!
Lets get the doggos!
Lets get the doggos!
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Ryusei is an interesting pick but he seems to be winning. He's the son of two very strong ninja who is uniquely talented with swords, but his parents aren't around much due to their job and he has to deal with his illness. I like that he doesn't really have a major force backing him up, sure his parents are strong but in the scheme of things it doesn't mean anything compared to an S rank or a Clan looking out for you. Ryusei has a compelling motivation and need that the other choices don't have.
Warmach1ne32
Machine of War and Quests
- Location
- Indonesia
[X] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
I think swords are cool, but I'm guessing he'll either be a med-nin in the future so that he can be a harmacist to develop a cure himself, go find Tsunade and ask her to heal him, or go full traitor and ask the snake to transplant him artificial lungs, which is going to be fun and be full of drama.
I think swords are cool, but I'm guessing he'll either be a med-nin in the future so that he can be a harmacist to develop a cure himself, go find Tsunade and ask her to heal him, or go full traitor and ask the snake to transplant him artificial lungs, which is going to be fun and be full of drama.
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[X] Your name is Ahma. You may be of foreign blood, but the great tree is what powers your heart and mind. With an S class parent at the head of your training you'll show them what the will of fire truly means.
[X] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
[X] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
always_confused
Perpetually unwanted
- Location
- SEA
[X] Your name is Kiba Inuzuka, the most badass beast in Konoha. You may not be the smartest, or even the most talented… But you just know when you get your Ninken you'll be a force to be reckoned with!
[X] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
Ryusei is really cool and apparently a good base for a male MC but do not if there is a real chance for him to be cured?
Most likely with Tsunade's or Orochimaru's expertise something could be done(at what price I do not know) but if the lad is being sold to us as "he will die on his 30's" is not very encouraging(who knows the QM could be ambiguous by choice but despite all can be solved if we meet the right people), true that this type of quests are usually abandoned before long or do not continue beyond the end of Naruto canon but if this somehow has a Boruto chance (perphaps switching to one of the MC's children) it would be a tad disappointing not to see our man walk that setting as he should.
Ryusei is really cool and apparently a good base for a male MC but do not if there is a real chance for him to be cured?
Most likely with Tsunade's or Orochimaru's expertise something could be done(at what price I do not know) but if the lad is being sold to us as "he will die on his 30's" is not very encouraging(who knows the QM could be ambiguous by choice but despite all can be solved if we meet the right people), true that this type of quests are usually abandoned before long or do not continue beyond the end of Naruto canon but if this somehow has a Boruto chance (perphaps switching to one of the MC's children) it would be a tad disappointing not to see our man walk that setting as he should.
Ryusei could be the son of an older Hayate Gekko and Yugao which would explain an earlier canon divergence or straight up the heir of Hayate's clan related to him but the kid of the Gekko clan leaders, no matter how you see it means lore expansion and exploring a set of characters that are pretty minor overall.
Hayate had this perpetual cough and sick looking appearance perhaps in quest could be said he is suffering from a softer version of Ryusei's terminal illness which manifests on members of the clan sometimes.
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[X] Your name is Ryusei Gekko, and you've finally taken the first step. You know you only have so long, so you're gonna become as strong as possible and find the cure you need. Even if you need to chop a few necks to get it.
Boys we got them the itachi and kimimato diseases but it just kicks in later haha.
Question would we be older then naruto or his age ?
Boys we got them the itachi and kimimato diseases but it just kicks in later haha.
Question would we be older then naruto or his age ?
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