Remove ads

Mythos

Created
Status
Ongoing
Watchers
14
Recent readers
0
Threadmarks
12
Trigger Warning: Expect the worst just in case​

The City Of Mythos floats above a lifeless world, born from the depths of this empty heavenly metropolis are celestial beings of great strength, Gods, guide them, and hopefully you create an interesting world together
Threadmarks Informational
Reader mode
Remove ads
Da Premise/Da Rules
  • Threadmarks
    • D

    Donald Darf

    The monoliths of Mythos cast a great shadow upon the landscapes of the desolate World, winds of great strength and intensity blow the grey sands through the countless gargantuan halls, and eventually the winds reach the centre, a gigantic ball of celestial energy rests in the city's centre, and once it was tickled by the dust on the wind, it's surface began to deform, like something was trying to crawl it's way out
    And there was
    Soon the surface burst, whatever was inside got out, the celestial energy knitted itself back together while incubating another creature within itself
    Golden amniotic fluid dissipates, beings of great power rise

    Onwards young gods

    Da Rules
    (Ask questions about the rules, polishing this will do the quest good)
    Each of you will create and control Deities, you won't be restricted to controlling a single Deity, you control them together with everyone else, but you can only give a single God a single action each turn
    Turns last an in-game amount of time of 2 weeks or less, the exact amount of days varying

    Turns mechanically are divided into the Actions and Results sections, during the Action part you write down what you want the God to do, certain actions will be diluted or rewritten if it goes against that specific individual's personality and or if they're incapable of doing that specific action, like making a pacifist try to murder someone or trying to make a god of war without wings or a flying-ability fly, rewrites will be necessary for those actions to not just be wasted

    Results is obviously when I write down what happens, I will determine the success of an action based off 2 dice rolls, one representing success, the other representing failure, both sides increase in size depending on every aspect of the situation that pushes the scales in their favour (If your alcohol god is trying to make the perfect beer, the die for success will be larger, and the die for failure will increase if they're a god of sobriety) every support vote will increase the success die by 5, if your success die rolls higher, you succeed

    If there are two or more votes that fundamentally contradict each other, like a single Deity trying to use their last pieces of demon bone to make an idol while another wants that deity to construct a cursed blade, I'll go for the one with more votes, if equal I'll just flip a coin or do some kinda rewrite or dilution for a compromise

    If an God opposes another God, it will be resolved similarly, but both sides will be each other's representation of failure, highest sum wins

    (No crossovers with past quests RUSH, looking at you!)

    Now let me make the info post
     
  • Threadmarks
    • Remove ads
    World
  • Informational
    • The planet as it currently is

    The Moon-Smitten
    - Aspects: The Moon/Idiocy/Music
    - Is completely absolutely utterly in love with the moon, does not comprehend the fact it is a non-sapient pile of rock, plays love songs to it every night
    - A small figure wearing white and blue pyjamas, always smiling, almost always holding a violin, hopping around gleefully
    - They Make Me Feel Lighter Than Air: Can manipulate the gravity around himself to be similar to that of the moon, allowing him to hop all over the place with minimal effort, and control the tides to a small degree
    - They Make Me Act Like My Brain Took A Hike: Can loudly play a song on their violin that greatly decreases the intelligence of almost everyone nearby without a very strong will
    - They Make Me Wanna Play An Ode To Their Beauty: Can summon an abundance of musical equipment of all kinds, which repairs quickly when broken, prefers the violin
    - Sees the Twins as friends and plays theme music for them whenever he is available and when it's needed
    - Lives in the Tallest Tower

    March Of Cogs
    - Aspects: Technology/War/Golems
    - A god of technology March Of Cogs loves all things mortal and wants to see them thrive, unfortunately for the mortals her concept of thriving is a constant war that never ends and technology advancements are to be made even when at the cost of safety
    - Gears In The Guise Of Life: Can create Golems called Cogs out of any material or object, these golems can look like any mortal creature but will have they appearance modified to incorporate the material/object used in they creation along with their properties. All golems are part of a hive mind that she controls but if a golem is old enough there's a chance that they will gain free will and leave the hive mind
    - Teacher Of The Gadgets Secrets: Can give an individual enhanced learning speed when it comes to technology
    - Atrocity Seer: Knows of every war that is happening and can instinctively tell who will most likely win
    - Has a scar left by the Machine Of Unspeakable Horror

    The Storyteller
    - Aspects: Monsters/Stories/Dreams
    - A vaguely humanoid figure with ashy grey skin, a pair of black feathery wings and eyes that seems to know every story ever told
    - Moulding Monstrosities: I able to create various types of monsters to serve as characters in future stories and legends by summoning some weird black goop and moulding it into a horrific entity
    - Dreamland Lord: is able to manipulate and change the realm of Dreams and Nightmares any way he desires
    - Keeper Of Fables: instantly knows every story that have ever been told

    Ruliana
    - Aspects: Order/Hierarchy/Ascension
    - "Accept your place or learn to rise above it. Either way, you will not break the order I have created"
    - A three-meter-tall woman with perfectly symmetrical features, long golden hair, an alabaster face, and cold, golden eyes that betray no emotion
    - Path to Ascension: Ruliana can see the roadblocks preventing someone from ascending in any given hierarchy and how to remove them
    - Chaos Removal: Ruliana can eradicate the chaos in a designated area, imposing stability and preventing change
    - Rank Suppression: Ruliana can suppress the abilities of beings beneath her in rank. The greater the hierarchical difference, the more effectively she can stifle their capabilities
    - The Symbol Of Rank has marked her as Divine Rank

    Shang-Houzi, Monkeigh, The Prime King, etc, etc
    - Aspects: Primates/Forests/Ingenuity
    - "Pfft, those cranky buzzkills can't tell me what to do!" *Proceeds to get into a big mess or problem*
    - He looks like a youthful human man with striking golden eyes and some features similar to other primates like his tail, for example 1. 2. 3.
    - Through The Ape's Eyes: Can share the senses of any primate. A couple examples would be like seeing through a monkeys eyes, tasting what an ape is eating, or hearing what a human is listening to
    - Instant Jungle: Can cause a bunch of plants to sprout out of the ground. Can be used to create an entire ecosystem ready to go or just a single banana tree to eat its fruit from
    - Blessing Of The Puzzle-Chimp: Can bless target(s) with great puzzle solving ability to make use of what they have at hand and figure out what their next steps should be. Also gives a small intelligence bonus
    - Is quite nosy, watching from afar as people go about their day

    Tabula Rasa
    - Aspects: Beginnings/Absence/Memory
    - "..."
    - A featureless, androgynous humanoid figure hewn of polished Rose Gold
    - Unchained Potential: Can Remove the limit on how much a Mortal can Learn and grow a single skill
    - Forgiveness: Can grant a New Beginning to those truly penitent, Erasing their History, and thus their sin, from the world's eyes
    - Memory Of What You Could've Been: If Tabula is with a person and hears about a point in their life where that person could've taken a different path, Rasa can take the absence of that path and create a simulacrum of that hypothetical version of the person, they can be summoned for a limited amount of time and dissipate once killed or time is up, more then one can be summoned at once
    - Lives in the Temple Of The Unforgiven

    Nhwereoma
    - Aspects: Vastness/Heart/Law
    - It is the work of great masters of a nonexistent age, praying for salvation from the ends of structures. It is carved in the likeness of a judge-king who stood against the the order of the world
    - A titan of gigantic proportions, hearts strewn about its structure with no rhyme or reason. Eyes and faces are hidden in the cracks and lines formed by the marble ruins that constitute it
    - Waves Left In It's Wake: Beneath its steps are oceans formed and called just below the surface. When it stands still do those oceans grew larger and when it leaves does it reveal itself to the world. It crawls around in many places due to this
    - Hearts & Ruins: Its hands are instructed in the art of reconstitution and regifting, able to take chunks of the God's body and shaping it into hearts to be gifted to anything and adding to the God with marble ruins wilfully given to it
    - A Heart Of Stone And Justice: Once in a while, its hearts will manage to defy its stony nature and echo a vast beat, laws and commandment that it thought of encoded within. It is a universal sound and all things within hearing distance, from the inanimate to animate, shall hear it. Defying it through action or inaction petrifies the criminal into marble

    The Twins
    - Aspects: Corruption/Purity/Duality
    - "Always together, always at balance"
    - Two humanoid children around twelve years of age one male and one female, one dressed in white the other dressed in black which is which tends to change rather frequently
    - Twist it: Can corrupt the very nature of things, be it the workings of mortals, their bodies, or their very souls. Often times this creates something new, aka it warps something to the point of immense change, how this occurs is not chosen by the Twins
    - Bless It: Can purify the nature of things refining its nature into something greater than it was. This does not create something new but improves what is, aka it gives stuff upgrades, how it becomes better is not chosen by the Twins
    - Dual eyes: Can see the duality of creation the light and the dark, the good and the evil, and the corrupt and the pure, aka can sense when things with conflicting concepts meet
    - See the Moon-Smitten as a friend
    Mythos
    - Floating stone city of monolithic proportions
    - Too big to ever feel lively
    - In the centre is a ball of celestial energy that spawns gods titled the Divine Womb, said ball has a heart personally crafted by Nhwereoma, and carved onto that heart by Ruliana is the Symbol Of Rank which has declared it Transcendent Rank, she also carved an access point to the Record Of Rank in there, located in a grand underground chamber of immense size, big enough to fit a smaller city, carved on the walls are a couple billion hands reaching towards the ceiling, on said ceiling is depictions of countless beautiful flowers
    - Right above Behemoth Lake
    - "Sand-O's" is just on the side
    Temple Of The Unforgiven
    - Towering structure dedicated to Penitent Saints who used to be vile criminals before being sent on deadly quests to right a ton of wrongs in the world, their sentence was death no matter what they did during their quest, but each journey was designed to help them reflect on their actions before execution via petrification
    - Statues depict Penitent Saints crying, looking satisfied, and some just laying down dead, all with a mural depicting their worst display of sin and their greatest display of virtue
    - Extremely grand looking, could house a small village on each floor, Tabula Rasa currently lives here

    The Tallest Tower
    - Exactly what it sounds like, reaches the stratosphere, the Moon-Smitten hangs out here

    Behemoth Lake
    - Surrounded by the Resting Ape Jungle, and right beneath Mythos itself
    - Large body of water

    The Resting Ape Jungle
    - Verdant ring shaped jungle surrounding Behemoth Lake
    - All the trees there have fruits, and all the branches feel nice to rest on top of for a quick nap
    Reserved

    Grey Wastes
    - Nothing but deserts with grey sands
    - Very windy

    Forest Of Knots
    - A gigantic forest where all the roots and trees have grown in such a way that they're all tangled, forever embracing
    - Very difficult to navigate through in any way aside from being near liquid in density, or just flying over the treetops
    Reserved

    Thumbs Up Mountain
    - A giant mountain shaped like a hand giving a thumbs up
    - Hollow on the inside, containing beautiful cavern forests with bubbling underwater springs
    Reserved

    The Valley Of Spires
    - Seems like a giant gorge in the middle of a field, sticking out of it is a bunch of stone spires reaching the sky, and if someone were to move the spires out of the gorge and onto the surface you'd probably be higher then some of the buildings in Mythos
    - At the bottom are the base of the spires, verdant plants, and little rivers, also flowers, lots of flowers
    Reserved

    Cliffs Of Howling Hatred
    - Weirdly designed cliffs with a lot of spikes and holes, designed in such a way that when the wind blows through them it almost sounds like they're speaking with hostility
    - Right at the edge of the Sea Of Shells
    Reserved

    Sea Of Shells
    - Gigantic body of water with sea shell shaped islands sticking out of it, the islands are coloured with flora of specific pigments for decorative effect
    - Right next to the Cliffs Of Howling Hatred
    Reserved

    Dreamland
    - Where all your dreams happen, a whirlpool of subconscious nonsense
    Reserved
    The Gavrix
    - Aspect: Blood
    - A creation of The Storyteller
    - A scrappy four-legged mammal, constantly looks emaciated, leathery skin and bat-like wings, patchy mane along their skin, a feral looking mix between a vampire bat and a european dragon
    - Wants blood, to drink
    - Obedient to Nhwereoma out of fear
    - Gigantic creature that can casts a shadow over entire villages
    - Has a disembodied ever bleeding heart forever floating above their head to act as nourishment
    - A demigod after tasting the blood of Tabula Rasa, thus is immortal
    - Blessed with no limit to how far they can hone their bestial cunning

    Sand-O
    - A creation of March Of Cogs
    - Jolly grey little living sandcastle
    - Loves to play at shores
    - Owns Mythos, does not care much about controlling it

    Machine Of Unspeakable Horror
    - A gigantic moving fortress made of iron and various other basic materials, quite advanced
    - Appears as hostile as possible, pipes protrude from it and curl right back in, spikes pop out of it and curl around each other as they point to the sky as if threatening it, steam pours out of gaps and grates across it's body
    - Inside is comprised of death traps that destroy anything that enters it with methods that most would consider quite "Immoral"
    - Also has a little arm that stabs the nearest available living creature in the crotch every 10 seconds

    Buelkof
    - A Keffrin with the fingers comprising their face wrapped around each other so tightly that the knuckles have turned red, wild eyes in the gaps between arms and hands
    - Best cook among the Keffrin, has an innate talent for cuisine
    - Always slightly grumpy
    - Member of the council of 3

    Zorm
    - A Boyui with a freakishly muscular body, horns are thicker then most of his kind, and his blue rings are brighter then most
    - Freakishly strong, can lift a building alone with his tendrils
    - Kind but ignorant of most subjects, but is willing to accept ideas from those he thinks know better
    - Member of the council of 3

    Tino
    - A Ranken with a slender body, hair in long zigzag strands, and a constant smile, considered short by her people but still close to 2 meters tall by others
    - First among her kind to be marked with the Symbol Of Rank and head-worshipper of Ruliana
    - Marked by the Symbol Of Rank as Angel Rank
    - Very curious and optimistic
    - Member of the council of 3

    Miru
    - A Ranken corrupted by the Symbol Of Blacklight Commandment and transformed into a Dark Knight, has incredible strength speed and durability thanks to the mark, also manifests black armour made of hard light, also weapons if they desire
    - Is torn between their new desire from the Symbol to prove their glory and supremacy amongst other mortals via great violent feats and their love for their spouse made of hands Bii
    - Used to like making little necklaces and accessories out of leaves and random knickknacks before the corruption
    - Is the leader of the Dark Knights

    Bii
    - Aspect: Hard-Light
    - A Keffrin demigod whose face fingers are interlocked and softly clasped together to resemble a lion's mane
    - Hates the Twins with a burning passion cause they accidentally cursed Miru
    - Skilled in singing, can be a single person choir by using multiple mouths at the same time
    - Bright Hands: Can summon a bunch of hands of various sizes made of Hard-Light

    Forseina
    - A Wukate warrior with unruly brunette fur and yellow eyes, always with a big grin
    - Outgoing and cheery, with a love for eating tons of fruit, also loves her 30 wives, don't ask the story behind that is pretty long
    - Defender of her home the Resting Ape Jungle

    The Smnorp
    - Little lizard with large front claws for digging
    - Ends of their mouth unfurls to become feelers since they can't see well
    - Can squirt a small bit of poison from their mouth
    - Can dig into Dreamland and reality with ease
    Gods
    - Powerful things spawn in Mythos
    - Vary a lot in appearance and abilities

    Cogs
    - Golem hive-mind created by the goddess their name is based off, March Of Cogs, they all are made by her and each type is based off a mortal being and a non-living material
    - Gavrix-Grey-Sands: A type of Cog based off the Gavrix and made of wasteland sand

    Performers Of The Lunar Fanatic Orchestra
    - Created by the Storyteller
    - They work for the Moon-Smitten
    - Slimy little things with varying amounts of bulging yellow eyes, bulbous heads, and across their slick dark blue skin is baby blue crescent moons and music notes
    - They have up to five long tendrils that split into an abundance of dexterous worm-like digits, good at playing instruments
    - The inside of their head is designed to mimic singing incredibly well when they flex their innards correctly
    - Their body is carried by a long slick twig-like stalk of bluish-purple flesh sliding across the ground in a manner akin to slugs

    Mundane Fruit Trees
    - Created by Shang-Houzi
    - Various mundane trees which grow fruit on them

    The Keffrin
    - Created by the Twins by accident
    - Humanoid figures made of intertwined arms, in gaps between fingers one can bare witness to many eyes
    - If they touch a living thing directly with the hands on their right side, finger shaped tumours will start sprouting from it, the strength of this effect varies for each Keff, but it can be trained like a skill
    - If they touch a living thing directly with the hands on their left side, all deformed growths will be healed, shrived, or removed in some way, doesn't help with any ailments that stray too far from tumours, the strength of this effect varies for each Keff, but it can be trained like a skill

    The Boyui
    - Bull people with sand coloured hides, large and burly
    - Arms are many tendrils intertwined to form hands
    - Blue rings appear on their bodies when they feel violent and or threatened, some rings appear even around the horns when extra mad
    - Are very poisonous, with a bite capable of injecting a ton of deadly poison into a body

    Wukates
    - Made by Shang-Houzi
    - Monkey people, athletic, lots of ingenuity, enjoy fruit, not much else to say
    - Most have golden eyes

    The Ranken
    - Created by Ruliana
    - Commonly 2 meters in height, with symmetrically perfect features, silver hair, silver eyes, and skin as pale as paper
    - Most of them enjoy the Symbol Of Rank on their bodies

    Mundane Plants
    - Basic birches

    Subterranean Trees
    - Trees with bioluminescense, can easily grow without sunlight as long as there is sufficient humidity
    Council Of 3
    - A tribe of 3 races who elect the most the respected among each species to be their leader, comprised of the Keffrin, Boyui, and Ranken
    - Currently led by Buelkof, Zorm, and Tino

    The Dark Knights
    - Bunch of folks affected by the Symbol Of Blacklight
    - Mainly go around trying to prove their glory and looking menacing, also probably trying to mark others with the same Symbol
    Mundane Ores
    - Basic bismuths and shit
    Symbol Of Rank Commandment
    - Created by Ruliana to mark folks as specific ranks in a hierarchy she made with golden tattoos, more loyal to her than the other gods
    - A living rule of the universe, affects those it finds compatible
    - If it decides to affect you and the Symbol Of Rank is written on your skin, it will transform the symbol into a different one representing the rank that fits you most
    - Connected to the Record Of Rank
    - Lowest: Angel/Archangel/Principality
    - Middle: Power/Virtue/Dominion
    - Highest: Throne/Cherub/Seraphim
    - Ascended: Divine/Celestial/Transcendent

    Song Of Abominations
    - A song by the Moon-Smitten
    - Incorporates various different techniques emulating monster noises in a satisfying way
    - Motivates almost any monster that hears it a TON

    Record Of Rank Commandment
    - Connected to the Symbol Of Rank and stores the current name, species, order in the SOR hierarchy, and rank in the hierarchy of all those marked with the Symbol
    - Can be accessed via interaction with the Divine Womb and yelling "Show the Record Of Rank!", then you'll be shown a list of all marked individuals, if you're looking for a specific individual it will then scroll to their position on the list if you know who you're asking for

    Symbol Of Blacklight Corrupted Commandment
    - The Symbol Of Rank Commandment but corrupted by the Twins
    - Acts like a canceroud metaphysical growth, turning any marked by this commandment into a Dark Knight
    - You'll know if someone is affected if they have a mark that glows black on them

    Stone Palm Commandment
    - If compatible with an individual, they can stick their hands (Or hand adjacent appendages) into inanimate material and make sculptures shaped like hands burst from nearby ground

    Hole In The World
    - Ever changing pitch black rorschach test in the sky
     
    Last edited:
  • Informational
    • God Creation
  • Threadmarks
    • Create some divine beings of incredible strength, they can warp reality if they try hard enough, and become stronger with time to simply do certain things with a flick of the wrist, but currently they're all overpowered babies that just look and act older
    Let's see what they're like
    (All are subject to veto and rewrite if I see any problems like gods of magic, gods of time, or gods of gods, just stay away from trying to seem like the most "Special" or powerful god, I'm already allowing your characters enough strength to annihilate cities, I don't need mary sues among an actual pantheon, also don't worry about being late to submit a god, you can add one later if you desire to do so)

    Banned Aspects (Can be subject to change, and new additions could be added later on)
    Events
    Omnipotence
    Success
    Failure
    Magic (Since any form of reality manipulation is basically magic to me so you would always have a bonus during those rolls)
    Everything
    Fate

    [] Deity Name: Obvious what this is
    - [] 3 Aspects: 3 things they have power over, creatures, concepts, occupations, feelings, stuff like that, they're basically pretty good with things related to their Aspects
    - [] Form: What they look like
    - [] Miracle 1: An ability they have which they can do more easily then most reality warping, can be super powerful but don't make it the most strong one
    - [] Miracle 2: You can have less then 3 if you don't feel like filling them all
    - [] Miracle 3:
    - [] Flavour Text: Optional

    Example

    [E] Deity Name: The Moon-Smitten
    - [E] 3 Aspects: The Moon/Idiocy/Music
    - [E] Form: A small figure wearing white and blue pyjamas, always smiling, almost always holding a violin, hopping around gleefully
    - [E] Miracle 1: Can manipulate the gravity around himself to be similar to that of the moon, allowing to hop all over the place with minimal effort, and control the tides to a small degree
    - [E] Miracle 2: Can loudly play a song on their violin that greatly decreases the intelligence of almost everyone nearby without a very strong will
    - [E] Miracle 3: Can summon an abundance of musical equipment of all kinds, which repairs quickly when broken, prefers the violin
    - [E] Flavour Text: Is completely absolutely utterly in love with the moon, does not comprehend the fact it is a non-sapient pile of rock, plays love songs to it every night
     
    Last edited:
  • Threadmarks
    • [X] Deity Name: March of Cogs
    - [X] 3 Aspects: Technology / War / Golems
    - [X] Form:
    - [X] Miracle 1: Can create Golems called Cogs out of any material or object, these golems can look like any mortal creature but will have they appearance modified to incorporate the material/object used in they creation along with their properties. All golems are part of a hive mind that she controls but if a golem is old enough there's a chance that they will gain free will and leave the hive mind.
    - [X] Miracle 2: Can instantly teach an individual everything they know about a piece of technology.
    - [X] Miracle 3: Knows of every war that is happening and can instinctually tell who will win.
    - [X] Flavour Text: A god of technology March of Cogs loves all things mortal and wants to see then thrive, unfortunately for the mortals her concept of thriving is a constant war that never ends and technology advancements are to be made even when at the cost of safety
     
    Last edited:
    SolAnon1 said:
    [X] Deity Name: March of Cogs
    - [X] 3 Aspects: Technology / War / Golems
    - [X] Form: To be drawn
    - [X] Miracle 1: Can create Golems called Cogs out of any material or object, these golems can look like any mortal creature but will have they appearance modified to incorporate the material/object used in they creation along with their properties. All golems are part of a hive mind that she controls. if a golem is old enough there's a chance that they will gain free will.
    - [X] Miracle 2: Has an instinctual understanding of technology and how to create and repair it.
    - [X] Miracle 3: Knows of every war that is happening and can instinctually tell who will win along with how to change the tides so that the losing side becomes the winning side.
    - [X] Flavour Text: To be written
    Click to expand...
    Click to shrink...
    Miracle 2 is redundant since that is more of a skill than a Miracle, the Aspect of technology is more than enough to represent your characters tech skills
    Miracle 3 is only semi-redundant, knowing every war and who is most likely to win is a pretty Miraculous ability, but having good war advice is still just a skill that is easily represented by the war Aspect
     
    Donald Darf said:
    Miracle 2 is redundant since that is more of a skill than a Miracle, the Aspect of technology is more than enough to represent your characters tech skills
    Miracle 3 is only semi-redundant, knowing every war and who is most likely to win is a pretty Miraculous ability, but having good war advice is still just a skill that is easily represented by the war Aspect
    Click to expand...
    Click to shrink...
    Thanks for the advice, I'm busy right now so gonna edit it later.
     
    SolAnon1 said:
    Can create any technology that she has built at least once, from nothing.
    Click to expand...
    Click to shrink...
    Hhmmm
    Don't want them to spam nukes though if they ever make that, maybe they can instantly teach an individual everything you know about a piece of technology, create a little cult of engineers
    Edit: Actually, just exponentially increasing the rate at which a person can learn about tech sounds far more fun to do then just showing them all the answers, a tech-priest is more fun when they say "I HAVE SPENT 400 HOURS STUDYING THE SECRETS OF THE MAINFRAME, THOU ART A SIMPLETON IN MY REFINED OPTICAL SCANNERS"
     
    Last edited:
    [X] Deity Name: The Storyteller.
    - [X] 3 Aspects: Monsters/Stories/Dreams
    - [X] Form: a vaguely humanoid figure with ashy grey skin, a pair of black feathery wings and eyes that seems to know every story ever told.
    - [X] Miracle 1: is able to create various types of monsters to serve as characters in future stories and legends.
    - [X] Miracle 2: is able to manipulate and change the realm of Dreams and Nightmares any way he desires.
    - [X] Miracle 3: instantly knows every story that have ever been told.

    Is this valid or do I need to change some details.
     
    deep sea god said:
    [X] Deity Name: The Storyteller.
    - [X] 3 Aspects: Monsters/Stories/Dreams
    - [X] Form: a vaguely humanoid figure with ashy grey skin, a pair of black feathery wings and eyes that seems to know every story ever told.
    - [X] Miracle 1: is able to create various types of monsters to serve as characters in future stories and legends.
    - [X] Miracle 2: is able to manipulate and change the realm of Dreams and Nightmares any way he desires.
    - [X] Miracle 3: instantly knows every story that have ever been told.

    Is this valid or do I need to change some details.
    Click to expand...
    Click to shrink...
    Seems good
     
    [X] Deity Name: Ruliana
    - [x] 3 Aspects: Order/Hierarchy/Ascension
    - [x] Form: A three-meter-tall woman with perfectly symmetrical features, long golden hair, an alabaster face, and cold, golden eyes that betray no emotion.
    - [x] Miracle 1: Path to Ascension
    Ruliana can see the roadblocks preventing someone from ascending in any given hierarchy and how to remove them.
    - [x] Miracle 2: Chaos Removal
    Ruliana can eradicate the chaos in a designated area, imposing stability and preventing change.
    - [x] Miracle 3: Rank Suppression
    Ruliana can suppress the abilities of beings beneath her in rank. The greater the hierarchical difference, the more effectively she can stifle their capabilities
    - [x] Flavour Text: "Accept your place or learn to rise above it. Either way, you will not break the order I have created."

    Hope this is good?
     
    Last edited:
    Redikai said:
    [X] Deity Name: Ruliana
    - [x] 3 Aspects: Order/Hierarchy/Ascension
    - [x] Form: A three-meter-tall woman with perfectly symmetrical features, long golden hair, an alabaster face, and cold, golden eyes that betray no emotion.
    - [x] Miracle 1: Path to Ascension
    Seraphel can see the roadblocks preventing someone from ascending in any given hierarchy and how to remove them.
    - [x] Miracle 2: Chaos Removal
    Seraphel can eradicate the chaos in a designated area, imposing stability and preventing change.
    - [x] Miracle 3: Rank Suppression
    Seraphel can suppress the abilities of beings beneath her in rank. The greater the hierarchical difference, the more effectively she can stifle their capabilities
    - [x] Flavour Text: "Accept your place or learn to rise above it. Either way, you will not break the order I have created."

    Hope this is good?
    Click to expand...
    Click to shrink...
    Seems good
     
    [X] Deity Names: Shang Houzi, Monkeigh, The Prime King, etc. etc.
    -[X] 3 Aspects: Primates / Forests / Ingenuity
    -[X] Form: He looks like a youthful human man with striking golden eyes and some features similar to other primates like his tail for example. 1. 2. 3.
    -[X] Miracle 1: Can share the senses of any primate. A couple examples would be like seeing through a monkeys eyes, tasting what an ape is eating, or hearing what a human is listening to.
    -[X] Miracle 2: Can cause a bunch of plants to sprout out of the ground. Can be used to create an entire ecosystem ready to go or just a single banana tree to eat its fruit from.
    -[X] Miracle 3: Can bless target(s) with great puzzle solving ability to make use of what they have at hand and figure out what their next steps should be. Also gives a small intelligence bonus.
    -[X] Flavor Text: "Pfft, those cranky buzzkills can't tell me what to do!" *Proceeds to get into a big mess or problem*.
     
    Last edited:
    BrainyPicker said:
    [X] Deity Name: Monkeigh
    -[X] 3 Aspects: Primates / Forests / Ingenuity
    -[X] Form: He will usually take the form of a human when interacting with mortals since most are more comfortable with them, but they can also be a ape, monkey, etc.
    -[X] Miracle 1: Can share the senses of any primate. A couple examples would be like seeing through a monkeys eyes, tasting what an ape is eating, or hearing what a human is listening to.
    -[X] Miracle 2: Can cause a bunch of plants to sprout out of the ground. Can be used to create an entire ecosystem ready to go or just a single banana tree to eat its fruit from.
    -[X] Miracle 3: Can bless target(s) with great puzzle solving ability to make use of what they have at hand and figure out what their next steps should be. Also gives a small intelligence bonus.
    -[X] Flavor Text: Will edit something in once my brain recharges
    Click to expand...
    Click to shrink...
    The ability to change from a human to a monkey, ape, and a chimp seems like an extra miracle, but I guess it's just minor enough to not be much of a big difference, the only big changes would be appearance and weight since they'll keep all the important stuff like strength, intelligence, and skill
     
    If having a single detailed description for form is preferable I would be fine changing it, but I have no idea what it would be besides a general idea of being "primate" like.
    Also thinking of changing the name later since I don't think I like it as much as I did at first.
     
    [X] Deity Name: Tabula Rasa
    - [X] 3 Aspects: Beginnings/Absence/Memory
    - [X] Form: An Featureless, androgynous humanoid figure hewn of polished Rose Gold
    - [X] Miracle 1: Can Remove the limit on how much a Mortal can Learn and grow a single skill.
    - [X] Miracle 2: Can grant a New Beginning to those truly penitent, Erasing their History, and thus their sin, from the world's eyes.
    - [X] Miracle 3: Can conjure up that which Can Not be from the Story that Never was.
    - [X] Flavour Text: "..."
     
    Last edited:
    Worm_that_Walks said:
    If some fella decides to become a baker instead of inventing necromancy I can get the necromancer one for a limited time
    Click to expand...
    Click to shrink...
    Okay, but I'll probably make it so you have to be near that individual and be aware of that choice to be able to have the alternate them as an option to summon, and it would be a consumable
    I will allow stacking though, summon multiple alternate warriors of a person at once to tear apart an enemy
     
    [X] Deity Name: Nhwereoma
    - [X] Aspects: Vastness/Heart/Law
    - [X] Form: A titan of gigantic proportions, hearts strewn about its structure with no rhyme or reason. Eyes and faces are hidden in the cracks and lines formed by the marble ruins that constitutes it.
    - [X] Miracle 1: Beneath its steps are oceans formed and called just below the surface. When it stands still do those oceans grew larger and when it leaves does it reveal itself to the world. It crawls around in many places due to this.
    - [X] Miracle 2: Its hands are instructed in the art of reconstitution and regifting, able to take chunks of the God's body and shaping it into hearts to be gifted to anything and adding to the God with marble ruins willfully given to it.
    - [X] Miracle 3: Once in a while, its hearts will manage to defy its stony nature and echo a vast beat, laws and commandment that it thought of encoded within. It is a universal sound and all things, from the inanimate to animate, shall hear it. Defying it through action or inaction petrifies the criminal into marble.
    - [X] Flavour Text: It is the work of great masters of a nonexistent age, praying for salvation from the ends of structures. It is carved in the likeness of a judge-king who stood against the the order of the world.
     
    Reader mode
    You must login or register to reply here.
    Remove ads
    Back
    Top