The Eleventh Legion...

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Older-than-Time

[Eating My Muse]
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Somewhere in the Sol System
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He/Him/ThatIdiot
This is the continuation of the winning votes from my Motherhood Snippet thread.

This story features the tales of three immortal woman, who by a turn of fate, all come to raise three specific Primarchs.

They are:

Lion El'Jonson, now known as Crown Prince Mordred

Sanguinius, now known as Gabriel of Baal Secundus

Magnus the Red, now known as Solaire of Prospero

The Lost Second Primarch is known as Ignatus Ennyn. The Second Legion are the Heirs of Fire.

The Lost Eleventh Primarch is, by reader vote, an unknown Blank [FEMALE] Primarch. The Eleventh Legion has yet to be renamed. named Illyria Remalia, blood daughter of the lost eleventh Primarch, Remus Remalia. The Eleventh Legion is now known as the Darkmoon Blades.

This will be a work-in-progress and I will often leave tidbits and out-of-story clues and information in non-indexed posts. Such info will be indexed in the Sidestory, Media and Informational Indexes.

From here on out, let's enjoy the story of these three-ish immortals. Feel free to ask questions, offer suggestions and hope that the Heresy is just a fevered dream of mad prophets.
 
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Conclusion: 'Kara' is not an expy, the author just didn't bring their A-game.
I never said you were doing this for shits and giggles, 4 teh lulz, or what have you. My point has been this, so far, is a fumbled introduction. If Kara isn't supposed to be Supergirl or an expy of her, then the update is far to heavy-handed, borderline misleading. If she is supposed to be an expie, then your subsequent comment was either an overreaction or an example of unfortunately poor planning.

That said, I am, less seriously, now disappointed we're not going to have Red Saber. She's the entertaining kind of crazy, and perfect to throw into the current pile of neurosis and ancient rivalries while watching the fireworks.
Hmm, I do have her intro written out for a fumbled FSN/40K lying about in my Google Docs...

I'll sleep on it and probably take your suggestion.

It's probably the lack of sleep that's telling me I'm right and you're wrong. The morning will tell me if I'm being an idiot.
 
OK, putting that bit aside for a bit, let's take a look at that new info:
Formerly the unwitting host of an unknown daemonic entity that devoured her mind and soul. She is slowly regaining lost memories with the daemon's destruction.
OK, so she is recovering her mind... but Anri seemingly no longer has a soul. So she's either a blank now, or even more vulnerable to daemons that before.

As for Agravaine:
Is without emotion after his torture at the hands of the Cabal.
Has no loyalty to anyone besides Merdraut Konrad
Konrad holds his reins, and has become completely robotic and logic-driven. If any chance of Konrad endearing himself to Merdraut before still existed after his involvement in torturing her husband, these two utterly destroy it.
 
Is...is Malcador the dirty old uncle? Is this why he made jokes about female primarchs?
 
OK, so she is recovering her mind... but Anri seemingly no longer has a soul. So she's either a blank now, or even more vulnerable to daemons that before.
I think that means it feeded of her soul and mind, it didn't actually eat the entire thing because she would be dead if that was the case. A blank has a soul, it's just that is an "inverted" one.

Konrad holds his reins, and has become completely robotic and logic-driven. If any chance of Konrad endearing himself to Merdraut before still existed after his involvement in torturing her husband, these two utterly destroy it
I think she is the type to "forgive" him if she understands how bad in the head he actually is. After she rips off Morgan's head that is.
 
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Sidelines 4 - Remnant and Vengeance [Pre-18]
AN: Remade using a few pieces from the Nero Augustus (Guilliman Alternate) as well as an unwritten chapter that got scrapped for Mordred (Lion El'Jonson). Original chapter relegated to Omake Status.

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Father was a man beyond comprehension.

Legend tells of his arrival from the stars, shattering the storms above Remalia in a flash of light. A mere babe found within a crystal, Father could speak from the moment he opened his eyes. He was born with the strength of twenty fully grown men and held within his mind the knowledge of iron magic. And Father grew quickly. In mere months, he was a young man in every way and after a decade, was fully grown and taller than any other.

Father was a king unparalleled.

Father took leadership of the tribe on his twelfth nameday, casting down the previous king in single combat. He brought up our people from wooden spears and clubs, using iron magic to grant us wonders called armor and blades. He taught the tribe to use things he called bows and arrows to hunt and fight. He gave us tactics and war. And with them, our people became an empire upon the backs of our neighbors. Though that did not join us were put to the sword or shackled in iron. In thirty years, Father conquered the world and unveiled the greatest of iron magics, a castle hidden within the mountains that could fly amongst the stars.

Father was a beacon of light.

Father did not settle for a single world. He wished to unite all worlds under the red and blue banner of Remalia. He brought world after world under his control, braving the storms that brought horror and death. His fleet grew as more worlds fell. Iron magic, now called technology, flourished under his reign. And one day, he withdrew to Remalia, deep within the mountains for what he called his greatest challenge.

Father was my creator.

Father, using technology and his own lifeblood crafted me, his only child. Born of a mother of iron and steel, I was to be his heir. But I was a failed creation. I was not the son he needed to continue his legacy, but a daughter. I shared all his traits: strength, growth, power and charisma, but I was not the son he needed. I swore that I would give him the heir he needed, even from my own body if need be. But Father...

Father was joyous.

I was named his heir, his only child. He gave me all and for a single year, I was loved. But then, the creeping darkness and the hungering one...

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I am Illyria, daughter of Remus.

I was saved where an empire fell. Darkness came from the void beyond the stars. A deep, hungering darkness that crept through the shadows and devoured all within its sight. Our fleets fell silent; each ship a quiet, empty tomb. Our worlds dark; barren and lifeless. Nothing could fight this darkness, for there was nothing for our armies to strike against.

Saved by a loving father as one last act of defiance against the darkness, I was sent back through the unseen storm within the same crystal pod that brought my Father to Remalia. I was to go to the origin and find the source of Father's power. I would make it my own and, one day, go back and avenge my father.

I am Illyria.

I will have my vengeance.

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The Imperial Palace shook as something broke through the protective fields and shattered dozens of walls with its arrival. Custodes, Sisters of Silence and Primarchs all rushed to face this foolish invader.

But those that arrived were struck silent.

For from a pod, all too familiar, emerged a beautiful girl, taller than an astartes and bearing the features of the Emperor. She was...yet could not possibly be...a daughter of the Emperor.
 
So I am guessing that some of the mothers are getting their wish for Grandbabies? Well, one out of 21 is not so bad.
 
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When your kids not exactly engineered for making more kids the natural way, having at least one succeed unnaturally is a win in their books.
Her dad is dead though. Well, at least she has a ton of Uncles to watch over her and a crap ton of half Brothers (Aka Space Marines). Looks like she may just be getting her revenge, especially since I highly doubt that the Primarches are going to be able to say no to her and will also he heart broken that one of their own has died.

I also suspect that Malcador is about to learn exactly why the Emperor never made Female Primarches.
 
Legend tells of his arrival from the stars, shattering the storms above Remalia in a flash of light. A mere babe found within a crystal, Father could speak from the moment he opened his eyes. He was born with the strength of twenty fully grown men and held within his mind the knowledge of iron magic. And Father grew quickly. In mere months, he was a young man in every way and after a decade, was fully grown and taller than any other.
So this primarch broke through a warp storm... or a world with constant normal storms. Also, 'iron magic'? Interesting.
Father took leadership of the tribe on his twelfth nameday, casting down the previous king in single combat. He brought up our people from wooden spears and clubs, using iron magic to grant us wonders called armor and blades. He taught the tribe to use things he called bows and arrows to hunt and fight. He gave us tactics and war. And with them, our people became an empire upon the backs of our neighbors. Though that did not join us were put to the sword or shackled in iron. In thirty years, Father conquered the world and unveiled the greatest of iron magics, a castle hidden within the mountains that could fly amongst the stars.
So the uplifting was so fast, their culture still considered technology magic? Well, comparatively at least.
Father was a beacon of light.
Which, given this girl's a blank, is very ironic.
Father did not settle for a single world. He wished to unite all worlds under the red and blue banner of Remalia. He brought world after world under his control, braving the storms that brought horror and death. His fleet grew as more worlds fell. Iron magic, now called technology, flourished under his reign. And one day, he withdrew to Remalia, deep within the mountains for what he called his greatest challenge.

Father was my creator.
1. Ok, so they were Warp Storms.
2. So this one got to the point where he could re-create his father's work. He must have embodied Adam's techno-geekiness.
3.Red and Blue, eh?
Father, using technology and his own lifeblood crafted me, his only child. Born of a mother of iron and steel, I was to be his heir. But I was a failed creation. I was not the son he needed to continue his legacy, but a daughter. I shared all his traits: strength, growth, power and charisma, but I was not the son he needed. I swore that I would give him the heir he needed, even from my own body if need be. But Father...

Father was joyous.

I was named his heir, his only child. He gave me all and for a single year, I was loved. But then, the creeping darkness and the hungering one...
1. Well, Artoria can certainly understand that insecurity.
2. That said, now I need to start making Penny jokes.
3. She was, roughly, only a year old? Rough.
4. That said, she was clearly born with the maturity to handle stuff.
5. And that's where, whether she's fertile or not, the motherhood issue comes in.
6. I just realized something: She'll be the only one to address a legion as 'brother'. Wonder how that will go.
I was saved where an empire fell. Darkness came from the void beyond the stars. A deep, hungering darkness that crept through the shadows and devoured all within its sight. Our fleets fell silent; each ship a quiet, empty tomb. Our worlds dark; barren and lifeless. Nothing could fight this darkness, for there was nothing for our armies to strike against.

Saved by a loving father as one last act of defiance against the darkness, I was sent back through the unseen storm within the same crystal pod that brought my Father to Remalia. I was to go to the origin and find the source of Father's power. I would make it my own and, one day, go back and avenge my father.

I am Illyria.

I will have my vengeance.
1. Aaaaand there's the Saber Alter roots.
2. This foe... it is not chaos. It is not the Necrons. Neither is it the C'tan, or Tyranids. It's... if it is what I think it is, then you've been reading The Shape Of The Nightmare To Come and Age of Dusk.
3. Illyria. Interesting name, given its involvement in the Roman Empire.
The Imperial Palace shook as something broke through the protective fields and shattered dozens of walls with its arrival. Custodes, Sisters of Silence and Primarchs all rushed to face this foolish invader.

But those that arrived were struck silent.

For from a pod, all too familiar, emerged a beautiful girl, taller than an astartes and bearing the features of the Emperor. She was...yet could not possibly be...a daughter of the Emperor.
1. "First one to not tell Adam he's a grandad!" "Not it!" "Not it!" "Not it!" "You are all being childish."
2. Rogal Dorn's not going to be happy about the Imperial palace being casually broken into.
3. So Illyria will grow up with a father, a mother, elder brothers, and several aunts and uncles... in theory. Time will tell if Adam puts enough time into her for Illyria to consider him a father-figure.
 
I CALLED IT!
She is the daughter of a Primarch.

Also, did our guys realize that her Primarch daddy was basically the Emperor? He started from the lowest and crawled to space conquering everything in his way until he was defeated but before falling he decided to fling a light into the future
 
I CALLED IT!
She is the daughter of a Primarch.
That was also the case in the original entry. Bit late to celebrate.
Also, did our guys realize that her Primarch daddy was basically the Emperor? He started from the lowest and crawled to space conquering everything in his way until he was defeated but before falling he decided to fling a light into the future
Eeeeeeh, the first half of that is accurate. The back half, not so much.
 
Motherhood 18 - A Brief Ember
It is said that in the deepest of darkness, one shall find a light.

It is but an ember; a timid, fluttering warmth that flits about the void, ever seeking other embers.

But sometimes, with the slightest of winds, that ember roars into an inferno, however brief.

The darkness comes.

Let this ember roar its defiance.

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"So, can anyone tell me why you're all suddenly on excellent terms?" Adam stared at his dear wife, who smiled behind her cup. Merdraut glowered at him briefly before accepting a steaming cup of tanna from Alivia. And Anri...was drinking from a mug of a bright shining liquid. A similar mug was being nursed by the Sisters of Silence in attendance. The almost-religious reverence they gave each sip was rather troubling.

"...I call it Sunny D." Anri's statement was followed by a muttered 'Praise the D, for it makes us whole'. Adam almost wanted to ask, but decided he really didn't want to know. He felt there was a hidden meaning that was both idiotic and...

...lewd.

"Very well, Anri. But my question still stands."

Eve set her cup down and patted his hand softly. He could feel the dismissal with each tap. "Just know that we've reconciled our differences for the greater good, dear. Now, run along and go see how the boys are doing. He glanced at the youngest, yet largest of the gathering, sitting quietly as she was being fawned upon by Merdraut and Anri. Eve looked pointedly at him; she obviously wanted to join them.

And Adam didn't blame her.

Illyria was, against all odds, a complete impossibility. A woman who bore the blood of a Primarch; his blood, really. His sons were never truly intended to sire children naturally. He always meant for them to follow in his footsteps: Guide humanity until their brethren could stand on their own feet and maybe adopt a few children every few centuries.

But Illyria was created in much of the same way that he created her father and brothers. None of the Primarchs had shown any true inclinations for creating children beyond the legions. He had checked!

Yet her father, the lost Primarch of the Eleventh had apparently been the one exception. He was also the most like the Emperor, outside of Horus, Mordred and perhaps Gabriel. He brought up his world in two decades from tribals to a spacefaring empire.

Even if Adam hadn't had to contend with the Unification Wars, he wasn't sure he could have done it all in two decades. Five yes, but not two.

"...and make sure Mordred and Horus aren't fighting. The last tussle they had, the Fifth and Seventh Sectors of the South Wing needed to be rebuilt. Solaire and Leman as well. Those two keep trying to outdo one another. I'm not sure Terra can handle another Grand Race, after Jaghatai upped the ante."

Adam nodded almost absentmindedly. He should check up on his sons. Even if he couldn't quite rein them all in, at least he could connect with a few of them. Perturabo and Ferrus were quite the pair. With the aid of them both (as well as some assistance by Fulgrim), his new project was coming along nicely.

Not the Perpetuance Engine; the new one. Solaire and Vulkan were helping him with the investigation into the nature of Perpetuals. With their aid, he might find what exactly he had been missing all these years.

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"Lo, did the Great Wolf stand upon the peak! Mighty and proud, it howled into the storm. And so great was its power that the storm did break, bringing forth the sun once more."

"And with the glorious Sun came a new age! An age of peace and hope! Great temples were built to its majesty, honoring the golden star above and the great wolf below! Sol and Fenrir; Hopebringer and Stormbreaker!"

Illyria looked upon her...uncles as the raucously built tale upon tale, extolling the wonders of 'Sunlight' and a prophecy of some sort. Around her, more 'uncles' feasted beside honored guests, comrades and...her grandparents.

She wasn't sure how to take all this. Coming to this world after escaping the hungering darkness, Illyria had expected to be faced with the greatest being in the galaxy. Said being would acknowledge her bloodline and teach her to fight and gain her vengeance.

But...Grandfather was indeed the greatest being...man she had ever seen. He was a beacon brighter than Father, like a great inferno to the bonfires that were most of her uncles. Uncle Red, Wolf and Hawk were close; their lights were nearly as bright combined. But Grandfather, for all his power, bowed to Grandmother's whims. She was small, barely above Illyria's knee, yet Grandmother had the ear of everyone in the grand chamber.

So strange.

"Eat more; you're like reed, sweetheart!" A great slab of meat was slammed onto her just-emptied plate, soon joined by an equally large tankard of that wondrous golden nectar.

"Yes, and drink up. You need a little warmth to ward off the cold." She took the tankard first, humming as liquid light passed her lips. Grandmama and Granny were at her sides, constantly filling her plate and tankard. Grandmama was only a little taller than Grandmother, hair a shining yellow. Granny was the tallest of her matriarchs, easily coming to her chest with auburn locks.

They were...kind and loving, just like Father was.

Though her heart ached to be in Father's arms and that dark voice within hungered for vengeance, perhaps finding a family just as warm and loving as Father had been was for the better.

Not that she wasn't getting her revenge. Grandfarther had been furious at the revelation of Father's death. A vast fleet was being prepared, warriors were being trained and her own training at the hands of her many uncles would soon begin. The Hungering One in the Dark...it would not find a lone flame to smother in its depths, but a grand gathering of Light that would defy its might.

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AN: The colors are intentional, as Illyria perceives people as both colors and individuals. She is a little strange like that.
 
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"So, can anyone tell me why you're all suddenly on excellent terms?" Adam stared at his dear wife, who smiled behind her cup. Merdraut glowered at him briefly before accepting a steaming cup of tanna from Alivia. And Anri...was drinking from a mug of a bright shining liquid. A similar mug was being nursed by the Sisters of Silence in attendance. The almost-religious reverence they gave each sip was rather troubling.

"...I call it Sunny D." Anri's statement was followed by a muttered 'Praise the D, for it makes us whole'. Adam almost wanted to ask, but decided he really didn't want to know. He felt there was a hidden meaning that was both idiotic and...

...lewd.
1. You saw it here first, The Emperor has a filthy mind!:p
2. That said, he is somewhat on to the true meaning. I think once he realizes this whole thing has been one massive Dark Souls reference he's going to be alternating between castigating Anri for choosing something so small and bemoaning that he didn't try that.:V
3. Never heard that saying about Estus before.
None of the Primarchs had shown any true inclinations for creating children beyond the legions. He had checked!

Yet her father, the lost Primarch of the Eleventh had apparently been the one exception. He was also the most like the Emperor, outside of Horus, Mordred and perhaps Gabriel. He brought up his world in two decades from tribals to a spacefaring empire.

Even if Adam hadn't had to contend with the Unification Wars, he wasn't sure he could have done it all in two decades. Five yes, but not two.
Unifying and uplifting. That's definitely Remus's aspect.
Solaire and Leman as well. Those two keep trying to outdo one another. I'm not sure Terra can handle another Grand Race, after Jaghatai upped the ante."
Bike wheels and Rhino treads do nasty things to carpeting and wood finish. That said, them competing is a step in the right direction.
Adam nodded almost absentmindedly. He should check up on his sons. Even if he couldn't quite rein them all in, at least he could connect with a few of them. Perturabo and Ferrus were quite the pair. With the aid of them both (as well as some assistance by Fulgrim), his new project was coming along nicely.

Not the Perpetuance Engine; the new one. Solaire and Vulkan were helping him with the investigation into the nature of Perpetuals. With their aid, he might find what exactly he had been missing all these years.
1. Perturabo's got a friend in Ferrus and Fulgrim. Yey. Now if only he and Rogal could bro out a bit...
2. What, did subsequent ritual mass-suicides of psykers not work?
"Lo, did the Great Wolf stand upon the peak! Mighty and proud, it howled into the storm. And so great was its power that the storm did break, bringing forth the sun once more."

"And with the glorious Sun came a new age! An age of peace and hope! Great temples were built to its majesty, honoring the golden star above and the great wolf below! Sol and Fenrir; Hopebringer and Stormbreaker!"

Illyria looked upon her...uncles as the raucously built tale upon tale, extolling the wonders of 'Sunlight' and a prophecy of some sort. Around her, more 'uncles' feasted beside honored guests, comrades and...her grandparents.
1. So Soliare and Leman really have started getting along, if they're acting this bro-ish when utterly hammered.
But...Grandfather was indeed the greatest being...man she had ever seen. He was a beacon brighter than Father, like a great inferno to the bonfires that were most of her uncles. Uncle Red, Wolf and Hawk were close; their lights were nearly as bright combined. But Grandfather, for all his power, bowed to Grandmother's whims. Sh was small, barely above Illyria's knee, yet Grandmother had the ear of everyone in the grand chamber.

So strange.
1. Nicknames. Fittingly childish, yet the mind is still rather mature.
2. Well, she's got Red Saber's 'why you listen to women', but none of the distain. For the best, really.
"Eat more; you're like reed, sweetheart!" A great slab of meat was slammed onto her just-emptied plate, soon joined by an equally large tankard of that wondrous golden nectar.

"Yes, and drink up. You need a little warmth to ward off the cold." She took the tankard first, humming as liquid light passed her lips. Grandmama and Granny were at her sides, constantly filling her plate and tankard. Grandmama was only a little taller than Grandmother, hair a shining yellow. Granny was the tallest of her matriarchs, easily coming to her chest with auburn locks.

They were...kind and loving, just like Father was.
So we have Eve, Merduat, and Anri all dotting on Illyria. So adora-

Wait. Illyria. Fate/Stay Night references in fic. Artificial creation of a daughter for a great purpose. Appearance described as beautiful, but not fully detailed.
@Older-than-Time, does she look like Illyasviel von Einzbern?
Though her heart ached to be in Father's arms and that dark voice within hungered for vengeance, perhaps finding a family just as warm and loving as Father had been was for the better.

Not that she wasn't getting her revenge. Grandfarther had been furious at the revelation of Father's death. A vast fleet was being prepared, warriors were being trained and her own training at the hands of her many uncles would soon begin. The Hungering One in the Dark...it would not find a lone flame to smother in its depths, but a grand gathering of Light that would defy its might.
"Illyria, I am not a man for whom gestures of comfort like hugging and come naturally. But, I shall do something that I believe will be just as much a soothing balm to your soul, and a fitting tribute to the beloved son and father we have lost: I WILL MAKE THEM BURN IN NUCLEAR FIRE.
Also, you're getting your father's legion. They want to meet their sister and hear of the father they shall avenge. "
 
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