Memoirs of a Human Flashlight Thread 2: Now with more Arguments! [Exalted/Worm]

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Golden Lark

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And we're back again. The first thread was a bit of a mess. New ground rules:

1. No arguing about things irrelevant to the story. Go nuts about the setting, the crossover mechanics, the plot, the characters, the costume, my grammar; that's all fine. Going nuts about McDonald's Coffee or wasting two pages on a totally unrelated game? Less so.

Other standard rules of engagement: No namecalling and no empty shitposting. Think a chaper/snippet/other poster's comment was garbage? That's fine. Want to say it? Perfectly acceptable. However, I only ask that you justify it. This is more so that people don't shift from simply calling each other idiots to calling each other's posts idiotic. It's semantics, but hopefully it helps.

[WARNING WARNING] I have been politely asked to remind readers that Taylor Hebert is 15 years old, and that one should think on the cultural and legal implications of this fact before driving discussions in certain directions. I post this per the request. [WARNING WARNING]

Okay, index and new snippet. As always, thanks for reading.

Index:

Breath 1.1
Breath 1.2
Breath 1.3
Breath 1.4
Breath 1.5
Breath 1.6
Breath 1.7

Excellence 2.1.1
Excellence 2.1.2
Excellence 2.2.1
Excellence 2.2.2
Excellence 2.2.3
Excellence 2.2.4
Excellence 2.3.1

[*******Begin thread 2*******]

Excellence 2.3.2 (Below)
Excellence 2.3.3
Excellence 2.3.4
Excellence 2.3.5
Intermission: Daniel
Essence 3.1.1
Essence 3.1.2
Essence 3.1.3
Essence 3.1.4
Essence 3.2.1


[*******]

One lightning fast spread of rumor later and the rest of the present Wards were lounging in the break room munching on mini sandwiches. Noises of appreciation washed over the room as everyone devoured their share. I sat back on one of the couches after having my fill, balancing my bewilderment with my new skill with my consternation at the powers-that-be.

After a minute or two passed and everyone was more or less done eating, I threw my cards on the table.

"So, what are the chances that me not being told anything about that engagement was a set up for a big test?"

Chatter ceased and my peers all exchanged glances at each other. Everyone looked to Dennis as the first one to respond- Carlos wasn't in the room. Dennis shrugged, not even making a joke. Missy spoke up first.

"It sounds crazy, you know? But we all have stories of nonsensical orders or inaccurate intel. I think it was a little creepy they did this to you on your first outing, but then again I'd keep in mind that no one at all accounted for the pocket dimension. I think if things had been ideal you would have encountered them on stage then been overrun by PRT agents from all sides the moment they appeared. Glory Girl and a total newbie would be a tempting enough force to attempt to attack, you know? Assuming you knew you could handle Glory Girl."

Dennis cut in next.

"Yeah, those two jokers can be pretty mean, but usually they don't go full lethal or even crippling versus heroes. They're assholes but they play the game. Leet doesn't make horrifically lethal death rays to vaporize us, we don't freeze him in time, space-warp cinder blocks around his ankles, and toss him into the bay. And that's just Wards-tier potential. Miss Militia . . . she has to go nonlethal when her power is a universal deadly weapon. She wants someone dead, they die. We're under heavy pressure to play nice, but everyone knows we're human and we can snap."

I was nodding my head with my eyes closed when Chris started mumbling, but his voice gained volume as he went on to become clearly audible.

"-about that, I really am, oh man. Ah, anyway, my orders were to film what went on during your debut fight, and to disable Leet's cameras. I was also to report on the ideal time for everyone to storm in. The cameras were autoprogrammed to film all capes, but when the pocket dimension opened I was cut off from input. That was definitely not accounted for."

After he finished, I stood up.

"Ah, Taylor," Missy said.

"Hmm?"

"I don't know if you caught it, but Piggot was kind of pissed off after the op before the briefing. Then she got a text, ducked into a conference room, and came out ten minutes later all stonefaced," said Missy.

I didn't have time to comment before Dennis interjected again.

"Yeah, Piggy's 'need to know' line was kind of out of character, even for her. You might not have been able to tell but she didn't look too happy saying it."

I, in fact, had been focused on my power at the time. When she said the words, I became aware that she was saying it to get a particular reaction. I then had mentally spun off into conspiracy theories and suspicions of incompetence. I hadn't considered her personal emotional context.

Mind whirling, I remembered to address my new team one last time before I retreated to my room.

"Thanks, guys. I'll try to not dwell on it too much."

Before anything else could be said I was gone.

[***]

And then I was in my room, dwelling on it too much. The internet was serving as a mediocre resource; even after I casually noticed the censorship filters in place, then proxied outside the country to continue browsing in peace. A few minutes later and I was seeing the Director's PRT service record.

Three minutes of reading later and I had more insight into her personality than I ever wanted. Only survivor of the famous failed raid on Nilbog, before they raised the wall around him. All but crippled from injuries, never to work in the field again.

There wasn't much commentary about her personality online because she was more of an internal face to the PRT. From what I understood of the talk of the Wards, she was a no-nonsense leader who didn't give an inch to anybody. Her way or the highway. I began to understand how such a person could have potentially squeezed constructive use out of anyone- she would just disregard their own feelings in any given matter.

Still, what did she have to gain by antagonizing me? I considered a dozen alternate ways she could have handled the debriefing. I considered my likely reactions in each.

I still couldn't shake off the feeling that this is exactly what they wanted me to do. Thinker speed chess? I'm getting paranoid.

As I mused I dug a tunnel through another couple asian VPNs, then a TOR node, then another proxy. I was only casually familiar with these things before I had my powers, but I was using them like a veteran. As a final step I found someone's home router with compromised firmware, hijacked the malware on it, and proceeded to start loading a handful of tools to its internal flash. I also referenced the existing malware's database of wherelese it had tried to spread, and grabbed hold of a few more compromised home routers around the world as well.

I then burrowed through another series of proxies, VPNs, and TOR nodes from that router. Once I was sure I would be able to notice any backtracing before they reached the first compromised router, I started some common script-kiddie class portscans and tests for various exploitable services exposed to the internet.

As I expected the vast majority of my paltry assault vanished as if falling into a black hole- as a properly firewalled network should respond. To my complete lack of surprise a few successes got through, revealing poorly configured Apache Tomcat implementations and other services ripe for the taking. About then I noticed a backtrace rapidly climbing through the first proxies and VPNs; the IP addresses came from all over the place simultaneously. I had the router wipe itself out and jumped to another I had ready.

This time I dove straight into the compromised server. No backtrace happened.

It's like there were hundreds of high-tech information warfare countermeasures arrayed around the PRT's entire network like a looming wall, and then there was just one section that was a typical American house's chain link fence.

I apparently had root access on a PRT web server. It wouldn't get me too far by itself, so I found a folder excluded from antivirus scanning and tossed in a keylogger. Confident I'd have a password in a few hours to a few days, I burned my second compromised router, carefully disassembled my chain of connections, and went to hit the sack.

I wasn't even impressed that I could pull all of this off; any normal human with the appropriate knowledge could have done the same thing. This particular feat of mine was simply artificially boosted skill, no superhuman crap involved. The horribly exploitable hole in security was neither unusual or special. The only question was if it was a honeypot. I'd find out soon enough.

As I faded to sleep I considered how I felt about this course of action. It could be called . . . no, it was definitely a betrayal, of sorts. But I couldn't feel bad about it. Piggot lied to me. She might not have wanted to. But something smelled bad, and I intended to find out what. Depending on what I discovered, I may even quietly continue to follow orders and not raise any hell.

Ha. Yeah, that sounds likely.
 
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Heh, I am looking forward to more of this, but I have about five minutes so I can't give any real constructive criticism here yet. GL, if you see me on IRC sometime tonight and I haven't posted any C&C for this story, poke me and bug about it, k?

That said, there are certainly going to be raised eyebrows at this by various characters.
 
Brellin said:
That Thinker speed chess right there. There wouldn't be need for that sort of testing unless someone was actually aware of what Taylor *actually* was, as opposed to what she appeared to be (aka a cape that glows and can use their ability in odd ways).
No, well not that she's Exalted at least, it could be a test to see if someone has Thinker abilities and how far they extend.
 
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Some Lightshow notes:

Motivation: Prove herself in the Wards.

Anima: Setting-sun-colored red-orange cape flowing from her shoulders behind her on a sunset-sky purple/pink field of light.

Caste: Twilight - Her anima power is a damage absorbing shield she can invoke at the last second, preventing hits that otherwise would have bypassed all of her DV and soak and hurt her.

Caste Abiltiies:

Craft
Investigation
Lore (This covers computers!)
Medicine
Occult (This covers the 'science' of Creation, the way that Essence works and why. Insight as to her own nature will be found here)

Favored Abilities:

Firearms (Replacing Archery)
Melee
Athletics
Bureaucracy (Covers Business as well)
Drive (Replacing Ride)

For the purposes of this story, training time is the big limiting factor. As such, all ten of the above abilities are more or less going to be at '5' the moment she attempts something. Other abilities still take time to grind up without training charms.

Charms normally take eighteen days to train without a teacher, favored or not. For our purposes we'll assume a day of training is 8 hours of work on it. So, 144 hours of effort related to a given problem or ability will allow her to unlock a charm. Note that an hour of work on one issue may in fact count as 'training time' for multiple charms. Struggling to stay up late would factor towards Resistance. Running until she cannot run anymore would train Athletics, Resistance, AND Stamina. The hours dedicated to Resistance here will count towards raising her dot rating AND learning a resistance charm. She may 'bank' hours of practice in each ability like XP; she will only spontaneously gain a new power at a dramatic moment assuming she did in fact dedicate enough time to that ability beforehand.

I won't be showing all progress on screen. Progress can be assumed to happen during timeskips. I am not using XP as a base for growth. Essence will rise as she fulfills motivations. Eventually she will understand that she can become supernaturally competent and effective at anything, she just has to sink time into growth, and she has a battery that is very capable of running out. The Essence respiration thing is a speedbump that will be addressed from multiple directions, she just needs a chance to focus on the problem. Remember, this is Worm. In canon Skitter may have done things quite differently had she had time to focus on problems.

She has a smattering of low level charms, mostly Second (X) Excellencies. While she had a Craft excellency when she was Tinker tested, she did not actually break any known physics and she was not inspired to make something crazy, so she didn't get pegged as a tinker. That couple days of testing counted for many many hours of qualification for stuff. Any training she does with guidance counts for double. The Protectorate has much in the way of training resources available.

Her talk with Glenn was some investigation rolls and a whole lot of introspection on human nature and facts she was already aware of. Sagacious Reading of Intent helped too. Glenn was just overjoyed to have such a camera-friendly cape be that intuitive; he was only called in that fast because of her scene-stealing nature; more than the average ward she was going to stand out, if the column of light from her Exaltation was any clue. The sun erosion effect was going to need some extra-good PR to counter when she is deployed.

Her nature as a Solar Exalt completely neutralizes any penalties to her motion the heels on the costume provide. She's not even going to remember they're there until the next time she dons the costume, and she'll realize she didn't notice them impeding her during the Uber/Leet fight. Getting this one out of the way ASAP. The costume was an afterthought, it was never supposed to be a big thing beyond some resistance to accepting her appearance boost. The 20 page shitstorm last thread sort of had me holding my face in my hands.

The fact that this post was necessary makes me sad. Oh well.

CRW has new mods that are actually quite familiar with Exalted. I have NO idea what that means for enforcement of various infractions in this thread; be warned. Follow SB rules, follow my rules, and mind the preferences of your friendly mod team as you post, and everything should be fine.

If you guys bump this thread right before necro like the last one, I'll be unhappy. Don't do it.

Arright, that's all I have for now, if you have questions that won't be huge fuckoff spoilers to anser try your luck, I promise nothing with regards to responses!
 
So... The divergence goes at least as far back as Nilbog raid. Note the "only survivor". Thomas Calvert isn't a PRT consultant and is, in fact, listed as dead. Hence, no, or very altered, Coil.


Interesting.
 
Yog said:
So... The divergence goes at least as far back as Nilbog raid. Note the "only survivor". Thomas Calvert isn't a PRT consultant and is, in fact, listed as dead. Hence, no, or very altered, Coil.


Interesting.
FFFFfffff I checked the Worm Wikia and noted that Piggot's entry pegged her as the only survivor. Calvert was present and it went down per canon. Will tweak tomorrow, it's sleep time.
 
Golden Lark said:
FFFFfffff I checked the Worm Wikia and noted that Piggot's entry pegged her as the only survivor. Calvert was present and it went down per canon. Will tweak tomorrow, it's sleep time.
Ah, ok. Thanks for clarification.
 
Tyrion77 said:
No resistance? But... but... essence reactor! :(
Favoring ONLY lets you skip training time for dots in a stat. It in no way stops her from getting those charms or dots. She just needs to bust her ass training to get resistance dots high enough to learn the reactor charms . . . if she ever catches on to the exploit.

Hint: there's really no non meta gaming way she's going to catch on to that. Combos will come relatively soon, but only in a limited fashion. She is not aware of the charm trees, she only tries to do stuff, then tries to 'cheat' once she reaches her limits, then various charms are discovered as she devotes time to trying to cheat. Combos are cheats-beyond-cheats.
 
Golden Lark said:
... Her nature as a Solar Exalt completely neutralizes any penalties to her motion the heels on the costume provide. She's not even going to remember they're there until the next time she dons the costume, and she'll realize she didn't notice them impeding her during the Uber/Leet fight. Getting this one out of the way ASAP. The costume was an afterthought, it was never supposed to be a big thing beyond some resistance to accepting her appearance boost. The 20 page shitstorm last thread sort of had me holding my face in my hands.

The fact that this post was necessary makes me sad. Oh well ...
:D Heh, welcome to the wide world of literature. Where the audience sometimes focuses on minute details you don't consider that important. :p
 
I get the feeling another thinker alone or someone in the employ of someone like Coil made the hole for their own use and now Taylor found it. So is the fight going t get on the net or was that your way to keep her from getting following?

It's good to see this still going far to many of the writers that had the very good Worm crossovers have left their work to die, or close enough not to matter.
 
I'll be honest when you described Taylor's little tunnel all I could think was "jesus it must take her forfuckingever to load anything".
 
Those training time rules are going to hurt. That's quite a bit longer than normal, especially for favored abilities. Not having to worry about XP and being able to train more than one thing at a time do go a fair way to making up for that, though. At least in bandwidth, if not latency. Not to mention that combos are supposed to take substantial longer than charms to learn. I suppose that she doesn't have to worry about getting killed if she ever uses anything other than a paranoia combo in combat, so that's something. A small(?) price to pay for that sweet pre-errata anima power.

Besides, Taylor should have plenty of time. She doesn't have to worry about events moving nearly as fast as they did in canon... right?
 
Anasurimbor said:
Those training time rules are going to hurt. That's quite a bit longer than normal, especially for favored abilities. Not having to worry about XP and being able to train more than one thing at a time do go a fair way to making up for that, though. At least in bandwidth, if not latency. Not to mention that combos are supposed to take substantial longer than charms to learn. I suppose that she doesn't have to worry about getting killed if she ever uses anything other than a paranoia combo in combat, so that's something. A small(?) price to pay for that sweet pre-errata anima power.

Besides, Taylor should have plenty of time. She doesn't have to worry about events moving nearly as fast as they did in canon... right?
Combos don't exist anymore after the Errata. At least, you don't have to learn them, purchase them with XP or pay willpower to use them.
 
DakkaMania said:
Combos don't exist anymore after the Errata. At least, you don't have to learn them, purchase them with XP or pay willpower to use them.
I know that, but some of the other stuff isn't using the Errata, and it sounded like Taylor had to worry about combos. I admit I could have misread that. She could simply be learning how to combine different effects. That would make sense, and it doesn't appear that she has a lot of things that can actually be combined right now.

Explicit combos always seemed needlessly complex to me. They don't really add much, except for being a time and XP tax. Not to mention that the willpower consumption would eat at one of Taylor's precious mote sources, if she has to use some of her stunts to regain willpower.
 
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I sort of kind of subscribe to the Shyft school of Exalted 2E; a good amount of the errata merely band aided one issue only to exacerbate others; upping the cost of Perfects and removing explicit Combos only serves to once again highlight the overall lethality of the system, and it does virtually nothing to stop a Chungian school min-maxer from adapting to the new scenario and creating a new ideal build. Better, IMHO, to keep as close to the original Borgstrom balance in 2E core as possible, and only use errata that fixes outright mistakes or errors- not wild attempts at rebalancing by people who came late to the party. Part of this is assuming that there is no race to the most ideal possible builds; that it is not known and common sense for people to have all the right charms at the same time in the same combo.

Before we get too incredibly far I might change my mind about Combos for the sake of the story; when the appropriate event comes up in story I'll switch gears and see how it might play out with and without the new combo rules. I will admit they are so horrifically unintuitive as to befuddle me the first few times I tried to use them a decade ago in 1E.

And re: Kyte's comment, oh yes, it was slow as hell. she might have been especially careful in picking the fastest options, but the price of that level of security w/o breaking any rules via magic was, in the end, sloooooooowness. When she amps up her game with computer Lore charms things will get interesting. In the Chinese sense. For now she is relying on the Excellencies- basic magic that makes you take the ideal actions for your purposes within the scope of a single action/roll. Those ideal actions explicitly do not break the laws of physics; Creation's laws are a taa~ad more flexible than Earth's, but she's not playing by Creation's rules yet.

Re: Anasurimbor, well, the first time she thinks about it she gets 5 dots of medicine. And eventually Medicine charms. That means that given time (and eventually even not given time), she can more or less fix any traumatic damage done to her body (or others) as long as the patient is alive and she is capable of taking medicine actions. And regarding the speed of events moving, well . . . Lung was about to make a big move before Taylor ruined his day in canon. We are still pre-canon start date. Everything depends on how many chaos butterflies get released in the meantime, but as it stands Lung is going to be going after the Undersiders hard that night, personally. Bakuda will be subordinate to him if he doesn't get arrested, etc. The ABB will be a much more dangerous if not in-your-face threat for a while. Things were coming to a head in Brockton Bay even without Taylor's help. In the end there were four parahuman forces in BB. Lung's, Kaiser's, Coil's, and Piggot's. Those four were playing chinese checkers for the soul of the city before Leviathan and the SH9 came and shot everything to hell. All four were playing a low-chaos game, then Bakuda took over Lung's side and started wildly blowing shit up. Now, even though the non-Coil sides don't understand how many teams Coil controls, in the end there were only four players at the table until Leviathan.

Solar Taylor will get up to plenty of trouble when she gets enough information about the game board.
 
Sapphite said:
This paragraph seems a little out of character here. The whole "cops and robbers" thing was pretty much made up by Tattletale and is accepted only by the Undersiders. No one else in Worm seems to think of parahuman crime in that fashion. The Protectorate and the Wards avoid using lethal force because they're superheroes who're trying to uphold the law, not a gang a vigilantes trying to clean the streets. Sure, the PR department's probably pushing the whole playing-it-nice angle, but the majority of the heroes are going to avoid killing people because they know it's wrong, not because they "play the game."
I always took it as a given that the Birdcage exists because villains know they aren't going to be executed, and barring extremely sociopathic behavior, are never gunned down with lethal force.

This kind of attitude is sort of how I see the Wards existing as a government force at all; no one likes the idea of child soldiers being sent into life or death combat. Everyone understands that if the good guys catch the badguys they will probably be Birdcaged; if the bad guys catch the good guys, then beyond ransom antics or other such things, they chance the entire unified Protectorate force coming down on them going fully lethal if they don't play their cards right. Dennis is the most likely Ward to call it as he sees it, and has a healthy level of cynicism. People are free to fill in the blanks as they will, and if you are working for the PRT you are acutely aware of how far they don't go; all in the name of 'more living capes to fight the Endbringers.'
 
I think Lark posted a big explanation at some point, but the idea is that there's a pinhole-portal-thing between Creation and Bet. Bet is essence-less, but stunts pull essence through the pinhole.
 
Odysseus2099 said:
Because the author said so?

You're wrong, most of the abilities she's using, the enhanced learning and physical fitness, do not take essence. And even when she does, precog can predict essence use. I don't know where you get the idea that it can't. It's only when she starts pumping a lot out all at once that things get weird. And even then, it's more a matter of predictions coming back slightly wrong then out-and-out "blind spot". The only Exalts who flat out can't be predicted are Infernals.

edit.Excellencies still cost motes.
Yeah, straightforward enough. Exalted don't cause Fate to go screwball just by existing, it's the degree of deviation from normal events they cause through charm use that screws things up good and cause the butterfly effect to snowball.
 
Stroth said:
Those weren't excellencies. Lore and Craft (Water in this case) are both favored skills for Twilight caste Solars. She's just got 4-5 dots in them which puts her in the top one percent of human skill.
Essentially she got some of L33t's mojo. Instant mastery in a subdomain of skills.
 
Golden Lark said:
FFFFfffff I checked the Worm Wikia and noted that Piggot's entry pegged her as the only survivor. Calvert was present and it went down per canon. Will tweak tomorrow, it's sleep time.
You don't talk about the survivor that you throw in prison?
 
She's getting a small trickle of motes from offscreen stunts, and this whole hacking thing was not using excellencies. It was simply a series of rolls with five dots of lore. Sometimes it's hard to tell what's using an excellency and what's just decent dice. By extension, doing fancy things without spending on excellencies nets her motes (and a couple extra dice).
 
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