[Mass Effect/Eternal Darkness] Problem of the Ancients Rewritten

Segment Four
Shepard's heart pounded to the beat of a thousand drums as she shot into wakefulness. She gasped for air, never quite able to take enough in. She patted down her torso, where Liara… where that thing that had been Liara… had gutted her. No holes. Not one single one. It had been a dream. A surprisingly detailed and horrific dream, but it was a dream nonetheless. She forced herself to steady her breathing.

God. Even the forest dreams on the Normandy hadn't been that bad. They had her waking in cold sweats, sure, but never in an actual panic. Whatever it was, it had taken Liara's form, used Liara. The only person worse would have been Thane. She couldn't let it get to her.

Honestly, the last time she'd had a dream get to her this bad had been in boot camp, and she'd been a lot younger then. Of course… with the physical age Chakwas had said she was… maybe that had something to do with the current reaction.

Breathing steadied, Shepard surveyed her surroundings. It certainly was some sort of infirmary, and judging from the monitors and such attached to her, she was definitely the patient. The hospital gown added to that assumption. Of course, she was very happy to find out the only sort of life support item she had was an IV line. She couldn't tell what was in the bag beyond the typical saline, but she knew it had to be something good.

A table was next to her bed, and sitting atop it was her all too familiar book. The Tome of Eternal Darkness practically dared her to open it, to read it and to understand it. Curse or not, given the recent events, could she take the chance of not having the knowledge it provided? Besides, who actually believed in curses anyway?

On the other side of the bed was a metal chair, occupied by an older woman. Her hair, tied back into a bun, was red, identical to her natural color, and she wore an officer's uniform identifying her as Lieutenant Commander in the Alliance Navy. The woman's facial structure was familiar to Andrea; she saw those cheekbones whenever she looked in the mirror. Her eye color matched Andrea's as well. This woman… This woman… Shepard took a couple tries to stop that thought in its tracks. Andrea Shepard had grown up an orphan on Earth. She'd joined the Reds to survive the streets of Vancouver, and she'd joined the Alliance after only a little prodding from a certain captain. She never had a mother. She'd never needed one.

But you wanted one, a traitorous part of her heart stated.

"I was waiting for you to wake up." God, the woman even sounded similar to her. Sure, her voice was a half-octave lower than her and her inflection was different, but there were shared tones in the woman's voice as in Andrea's. "I don't know if you know who I am…"

"Lieutenant Commander Hannah Shepard, I suppose. I'm told we're related, ma'am," Andrea Shepard said, locking eyes with the woman. Sure, according to her own history, she was higher ranked than this woman, but that history hadn't transferred over with her. At this point in the timeline, she would have been Lieutenant at best, and there was no reason to be rude.

"Yes. I've been informed of that relation. You'd think that I'd remember giving birth to a daughter, especially one as reckless as you," Hannah Shepard said with a smirk. Andrea knew that smirk. Andrea had that smirk. The woman was teasing her.

"Well, you work with what you have," Shepard said with a shrug. "I was supposed to be shopping, but I couldn't really just sit by while terrorists or whatever they were did their thing when I could stop it."

"You took a dead soldier's gun, amp, and omni-tool, and then you proceeded to break your wheelchair using a strenuous biotic technique. I hear you also shorted out the amp using it," Hannah said.

"Now that's not my fault," Shepard said. "I thought amps were supposed to modulate the power going through them so that doesn't happen."

"They are, for L3 and below implants," Hannah said. "You don't have L3 implants, Miss Andrea, my… well, let's hold off on relationship defining for now."

Shepard paused for a second. "No, I don't. Still, I handled an issue."

"You also gave commands, as a civilian, to a group of marines. You very easily could have endangered their lives as well as your own." Hannah looked her in the eye. "However, due to extenuating circumstances regarding your origins, combined with how well you assumed command in that combat situation you were unwittingly thrust into, it has been decided that, pending passing the certification tests, you will be instated as an N operative at a rank based upon your age and how well you perform on the certification tests. The highest rank that you are likely to get is a Staff Lieutenant at an N7 rating."

Shepard boggled. She figured she'd have to argue her case for rejoining the Alliance here, and she'd do her best to get the N7 rating, but this was practically a foot in the door for it. Sure, she wasn't a Spectre here, but that didn't mean she didn't know codes and such.

"Of course, given your genetics and how you seem to have been trained, I expect such an advancement will be trivial for you." Hannah smiled at her, and she could feel the warmth.

"Uh… thank you?" Shepard still couldn't believe what had happened. It didn't really make much sense that she'd have this opportunity this quickly, and certainly not on a Lieutenant Commander's say-so. "If you don't mind me asking… how did this get pushed through? I don't even have any records."

"It helps when you have an Admiral to back you up," said a male voice, answering her. An older man dressed in Alliance blues walked into her area of the infirmary from outside. The bars on his hat confirmed what he'd just said; the man was an admiral, and his gray goatee was kept nice and trim. He had a scar on his right cheek that ran from just below his eye to his lip. Both women saluted the man upon his entry into the area. Andrea certainly recognized him right away. Admiral Steven Hackett still held her respect, and he always had.

"At ease, please." Andrea let herself go to at ease by laying back on the slightly raised bed she was in. She fidgeted a little, adjusting her covers to make sure she was unexposed in front of this man.

"Shepard… Andrea Shepard that is, your performance has been highly spoken of from those whom you commanded. Lance Corporal Jones was especially complimentary of your leadership. You appear to have an innate talent for it, and I would like to help you nurture it. Captain Anderson told me of how he and his crew found you and what you wore at the time. There's more to you than most would assume, given your age."

"Sir, you have no idea," Andrea said, ready to continue, but Hackett simply held up a hand.

"Right now, you need to focus on your recovery. When you've been cleared for duty by Doctor Chakwas, I will debrief you personally. Your report will be classified and deemed need to know only, but understand that I will want a full report, Shepard. I want to know how you came to where Anderson found you and what you can tell us about your origins," Hackett ordered.

Shepard knew he was serious about this, given his offer for the personal debrief. That said. "Speaking of origins… how are we going to explain mine here? Since… I don't really seem to exist. At all…"

Hannah spoke up then. "Officially, you're my niece who was born and raised on Mindoir, at least until it was attacked seven years ago. Your parents, my brother and sister-in-law, were killed in the attack. We thought you were too. Captain Anderson officially found you in the wreckage of a slaver's ship that he destroyed."

Andrea blinked. That… could work, if they didn't check the logs about where Anderson found her.

"So… I'm legally your niece?" That… was a different thing for Andrea. She'd never really had family outside her crew, and she definitely didn't have any of them around at the moment, despite what her dreams had shown her. Shepard didn't know how to handle that fully. "That's… very generous of you, thank you…"

"What, did you think I'd let my flesh and blood be alone?" Hannah asked as she came up and hugged her, as a mother would her child… as Andrea had always imagined getting hugged by her own mother. It didn't take long before she returned the hug. Of course… they were interrupted by the clearing of Hackett's throat.

"I'm sorry to interrupt your bonding moment, ladies, but I just wanted to clarify one last thing for Andrea. Given your introduction to both Chakwas and Anderson, I wanted to say that his invocation of the time travel protocols was appropriate. Assuming you are telling the truth, do recall the provisions of those."

"Yes sir, I understand," Andrea said.

"Time travel proto—oh, those." Hannah shook her head. "1955BTF1985-MJF. I always thought that code was a mouthful."

"Why do you think we call them time travel protocols?" Hackett asked. He smiled at the pair of women. "Good that you understand. I have some duties to attend to now. We'll arrange a time for your debrief when Chakwas clears you."

Hackett saluted both Shepards and left the room.

Hannah squeezed Andrea a little tighter before releasing her pseudo-daughter from the hug. "I look forward to hearing about what you're cleared to talk about. I did always want a daughter, but after Michael's father passed…"

"I understand." Andrea nodded. "More than you might know…" Thane. God, Thane's death still weighed on her and had for the past three months. Liara had been helpful to try and deal with the mourning, but the drell would always have a place in her heart.

Andrea moved to try and get out of bed, but Hannah simply held her down.

"You're not getting out of bed until the doctor says it's okay, missy," Hannah said. "You overworked yourself during the invasion. You were still in recovery from vacuum exposure among whatever else you had wrong with you. Plus, you hadn't been consuming nearly enough calories for any sort of combat optimization, given the amount of biotics you used. You're just lucky you didn't pass out when you broke your wheelchair. Karin will be in shortly after she deals with the other patients she has. I'm not going to let you hurt yourself further."

"Yes ma'am," Andrea said, unable to help complying. This woman was her… something… aunt… mother… something… and she was ordering her. There was so much she wanted to ask her. What was Michael's father like? What did he do? What did Hannah do?

Hannah glanced down at her omni-tool and winced. "I should go. I've got a meeting."

"I understand," Shepard said. "See you soon."

"You can count on it, Andrea," Hannah said as she walked out of the room, leaving Andrea alone with her thoughts and the book on the side table. Somehow, these days, the Tome of Eternal Darkness was always within reach.

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During Andrea's recovery time, a number of marines had come in to check on her. Some had been grateful, some were acerbic, and others still just were a bit curious. All wanted to see the "little girl CO" for themselves. Some were a little disappointed that she wasn't pre-pubescent, and those were the ones she immediately sent anonymous reports about. Still, for the most part, the marines were respectful, and the ones that weren't were quickly escorted out of the infirmary entirely. Some brought her gifts, and others just wanted to talk. She couldn't really tell them much due to OpSec, but it was still heartening.

In between, Shepard had time to read the Tome of Eternal Darkness. Arcane writings and magickal secrets lurked within its pages, but something else caught her eye today.

Chapter 15 – Hiding in the Dark

When I was a child, my great-grandfather used to tell stories about his grandmother, about how she saved humanity, about how we should all stand up for what we believe in, to fight those who would destroy it. He told stories of Ancient horrors, Eldritch beings, and creatures that lurked beyond the veil of reality. My parents, of course, dismissed such notions as simply stories. Humanity was alone in the universe, they said. It was impossible for any such things to exist. Imagine how their surprise would have been had they lived to see what happened on Shanxi after we opened Relay 314. Imagine my own when I led a small team that found the artifact the turians searched for. I thought my eyes had been opened. I thought that I had found the horrors my grandfather had spoke of. I was once a fool.


After the memorial to my good friends Ben Hislop and Eva Coré, I returned to Earth to figure out how I should proceed. My ancestral home in Rhode Island always helped me think in my youth, and I knew that returning to Roivas manor would help me approach things such that I could find success in my venture. After the events of Shanxi and beyond, it was obvious to me that conflict with the aliens was inevitable, and as we were now, they would kill us all to the last man. I could use the manor to try and think of a solution to that.

I'd inherited the manor from my mother's side of the family; it was her maiden name that she changed to match my father's. She had been the only heir to the vast fortune of the Roivas family, and I knew that if I could find the appropriate documents within the manor, I could leverage them and the fortune to fund my new endeavor. Humanity needed a guard against its destruction, an army to face the threat of the extraterrestrial, and I knew just where to look.

My mother had hired a part time staff to keep the manor from falling into disrepair, as no full time managed to continue to live in the manor long. I'd kept them on, to honor my family, and entering the manor, I smiled at the original finish that they'd kept there. The foyer had two curved staircases that led to the second floor, and I could remember my parents yelling at me for playing on the rails as a child. They didn't want me to get hurt.

I tried the light switch on the wall, but the chandelier above didn't light. Damn. The staff must have turned the breakers off since the building wasn't going to be in use. If I remembered correctly, the box was in the basement. I'd just have to flip the switches. Turning my omni-tool's flashlight on, (I'd bought it off an asari on Illium), I walked down the hall to the right of the foyer toward the basement door.

Except the door wasn't there. Instead, there was a green triangle on the wall with a red rune in the middle.

"Strange, I know a door was here," I said to myself. I didn't want to just break down the wall to get through to the staircase I knew lurked behind. No, instead I walked out to the foyer and across the hall. On a whim, I glanced at the clock on the table. It was one of those old analogue ones, and its time was stuck at 3:30-something. I would have to fix it after I got back.

I walked down the other hall, and on a whim, I tried the door on the left. It led, of course, into the living room, where an ancient couch sat in front of an ancient fireplace. The fire remained unlit, and I had no desire to light it. Instead, I went through the door next to it. Honestly, I couldn't tell anyone why I went the way I did, but I made my way down a bookshelf-lined hallway. This seemed like the right direction to find a way into the basement. The books on the shelves were about varying subjects, ranging from literature to important nonfiction. At the end of the hall, there was a grandfather clock.

Oddly, the clock's hands were lying on the ground. Did the people responsible for my manor's upkeep just never come back here? I opened the clock's face and frowned. Someone had scrawled "3:33" onto the inside of the face. Placing the hands back in the clock, I turned them. I could have set them to the current time, but on a whim, I put them too at 3:33.

There was a click, and a rumbling as a bookshelf pushed itself inward and slid into the wall, revealing a doorway to another room. I entered. My great-grandfather always spoke of a secret study, but he never mentioned how to get in. Inside, I saw news clippings referencing odd happenings dating back to the 1800s. I saw a number of books on arcane subjects, pictures of ancient weaponry, and scrawled images of creatures that couldn't exist. I also saw a book lying on top of the desk at the center of the room.

The book my great-grandfather spoke of. The Tome of Eternal Darkness lay there, waiting for me to take it. So, I did, lifting it into my arms and putting it under the one not used. I knew the stories of the book, how it was used… I knew what I needed to do.

A note under the book spoke of seeing the unseen, and I smiled. "Perfect."

It didn't take me long to get back to where the basement door should have been. There were no bodies, no creatures lurking, nothing was there to impede me but me, and I had the Tome of Eternal Darkness.

Looking at the wall again, and the glowing marks, I knew exactly what to do. Assuming this worked, things would be very interesting for my new organization. I opened the book, somehow opening to the page I needed. Revealing the Sight Unseen, Reveal invisible. Chatturgha's alignment. I willed it done.

Three runes appeared around me, dimly lit. In a guttural unnatural voice, I heard the words, "Narokath, Redgormor, Chattur'gha."

There was a flare of red and it settled over my sight. I looked to the wall that I knew the basement door had been on, and there it was, revealed. I opened the door to the basement with a smile on my face. Once more illuminating my way with the omni-tool, I descended into the darkness of the basement. The breaker box wasn't far.

Just what was my family hiding here that it required me to use… magick to find the basement? I shone my light around the downstairs. A bookshelf covered the far wall, with dust gathering on all but three spots. The shelf was empty, but there were three perfect dust-free circles. I wondered what must have been there and how long it had been gone.

"Just what the hell is with this house?" I muttered as I approached the breaker box. It was still one of those old style turn of the century boxes, the twentieth century. It meant there was an analog switch on the side that needed to be thrown, and I pulled it upward.

Lights flickered on overhead, and I could hear the starting of the air conditioners outside. Then the overhead light flickered again, and a spark came from the wall behind the bookcase, somehow knocking it forward. It fell hard, cracking a spot of plaster on the floor that I hadn't noticed until now.

I brushed away some of the dust to reveal a wooden trap door. My curiosity piqued, I returned the bookcase to its upright position and started to pry more of the plaster off the trap door. It took me a good two minutes to get it completely uncovered. What the heck was a trap door doing in my basement?

The lights flickered on and off.

"Jaaack…" A gravelly voice creaked.

The house was old. Clearly, I was hearing things. I didn't survive First Contact with those damn skull-faced aliens to be scared by nothing. I pulled open the trap door and revealed a downwardly spiraling staircase.

Giving a glance to my omni-tool, I made sure the light was still on. I hadn't turned it off, and I shone it down the staircase. I couldn't tell exactly how far it descended; my light's beam disappeared before the bottom. Still, it was tempting. If I could explore this manor and find all of its secrets, maybe there would be something I could use.

I began my descent, turning on an altimeter app on my omni-tool in the process. After about two hundred feet, the walls surrounding me opened up into a vast cavern. The air here felt stale, old, like a tomb long forgotten. I smelled a little bit of mildew as I descended but nothing more as the stairs descended to a stone cliff that overlooked the deeper part of the cavern.

"Come to me… Jack… Harper…" Words carried on a lifeless wind as my feet touched down on the rock face of the cliff, and I noted that it followed along the edge of the cavern and into a carved staircase that hugged the walls and went down further.

I stepped along, and I winced as my omni-tool shone on the remains of what might have once been human. It was a full, almost mummified in how desiccated it was, body with dried muscle and skin on its bones. I put the Tome of Eternal Darkness in a satchel, and I reached for my sidearm. Whatever killed this thing likely wasn't still around, but I wasn't sure if something was going to happen.

More corpses lined the rest of the walkway as I made my way to the staircase, and I breathed a sigh of relief when nothing seemed to happen. The corpses were just that, corpses. They did nothing. At all.

I made my way down the staircase, downward and inward. I still wasn't sure what I'd find, but I knew the way back up wouldn't change. If it did, I had the power of magick on my side with the Tome, and I now knew that it worked.

"Jaaack…" the wind whispered once more as I came to a bridge that crossed over a ravine. I took a look over it and gasped. What I saw just couldn't be possible. There was a whole city down below me. I had no clue who could have molded its shape.

"Come to me…"

I crossed the bridge at the ravine and descended further. A massive gateway looked as if it would have blocked my way had it been shut, but it was wide open. I had no trouble passing through it into the ruins of this ancient city. As I felt the long-dead stares of a lost civilization watching me enter, I thought about my great-grandfather and the stories he told. Ehn'gha was the city's name. At one point, it had been a haven to some or another, but it fell to the Eldritch, or so he'd said.

The question was who built it? How old was it? Was this prothean? And even if it wasn't, did it have anything within it that I could use to help humanity secure its position in the stars?

"Jack… Harper…" My name once more held on the wind that I didn't feel on my skin. Perhaps it was the ruins creaking, but regardless, I pressed onward, following the main road. I counted nine towers around me, but the only door that I saw open was at the end of my path.

I entered the building, and I grimaced. The wall had a mural depicting some sort of ancient barbaric ritual. It showed the tossing of children to the creatures of old and it depicted some sort of giant being towering over the people. I couldn't tell if they were humanoid or not. They seemed to have more eyes than a human would, but that was just a painting. What really caught my eye was an altar surrounded by three pedestals. On each pedestal was a curved glass display case, each one coated in dust. Still, they were clearly deliberately placed, and I had no clue as to the reason why. I approached the nearest case to me, and the hairs on the back of my neck began to stand up. I reached for the case, and an arc of purple electricity struck my hand, pushing me back. I stumbled over toward the altar, and then suddenly, I found myself elsewhere.

I let out a small curse before I began to look around. Somehow, I'm not entirely sure how, I'd ended up on a floating platform that extended about fifteen meters in any direction, allowing for corner length, and the décor was very ritualistic. It looked like a fusion between Roman and some sort of ancient civilizaition's preparations.

Lying in the corner of the platform was another corpse. This one was far better preserved than any I'd seen previously. It was dressed as a Roman Centurion, and it laid propped against the railing. Next to it, a staff made out of some sort of bone laid flat on the ground.

I reached down to pick up the staff, and I cut myself. I may have let out a small curse. Still, I'd picked up the staff and used it to walk over to the edge of the platform I stared out at the city below me, pondering how I could use its resources to best help humanity.

A hand laid itself upon my shoulder, and I glanced at it. Skeletal, bony fingers gripped my shoulder lightly. I glanced back at the corpse, only to find it had gone missing in the interim. My gaze went to the body the hand was attached to.

It was the same body that had lain on the ground.

"Jack Harper…" The corpse said. "I suppose I must thank you. Were it not for you, I would still be dead."

"You're welcome?" I said, questioning. "Are you a person? Do you have a name?"

"Pious Augustus," said the talking corpse. "And I would like to help you."

I stared out at the city and gave a nod. Augustus's smile widened as we began to ponder together.

My family has been the savior of humanity from the dawn of it. Together with the resources granted by Augustus, humanity will be able to take its rightful place as ruler among the stars. The army we will build will become the Cerberus of Charon, guarding against those who would dare pass through the river Styx. I will illuminate the threats against humanity and direct this army as necessary. Fear us, oh aliens, for we are humanity. Face us, and you shall surely perish!
 
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Choices. Impossible choices. How the heck could one person be expected to make such a choice?

Ah the 'What Colour explosion do you want?' choice.

What wasn't known, however, was that it would also destroy every other synthetic lifeform in existence

Because Reasons.

Doesn't make any sense, but the writers want to force you to choose Green so they've gotta make every other option unappealing no matter how contrived.

While controlling the entire armada of Reapers was a tempting prospect, the chance she'd give up who she was in the process was too great, too strong. Andrea Shepard was willing to die for what she believed in, but she would not give up who she was.

And the 'Become squid tyrant option'

It would convert the peoples of the galaxy to a lifeform that was both synthetic and biological. She had no clue how it was even possible. It sounded like magic.

That's because it's gibberish. Robots don't have dna ya stupid Reapers.

Green option best encapsulated by quote from a 'These endings are stupid' fic.

Committing genocide is not an elegant solution. Neither is waving my man-seed and impregnating the entire galaxy

Karin… did he mean Karin Chakwas? That made things potentially even better.

Chakwas best disappointed English granny a ship could have.

Okay. So, time travel might have been out then.

Yup, we've either got an alternate universe or a timeline rewrite.

. "Miss Shepard, you're either a very good liar or you believe you're telling the truth. Given your injuries, I'm hopeful that you wouldn't be lying, but the truth is, your service number does match with a person named Shepard. A lieutenant named Michael Shepard serving aboard the SSV Dublin under Commander Smith. Smith has given glowing reviews on his performance under pressure."

And Shepard has been dropped into the non-canonical dude Shepard timeline. Truly a fate worse than death.


Even with changes there's probably a lot of stuff she can interfere with. She knows the location of so very many secret bases and easily preventable disasters. Also means that atm it's Young Inexperienced Mordin either working for STG or getting his tenth degree. Might be able to rescue Jack 0?

I hear Miss, and I get flashbacks to the orphanage I ran away from.

Earthborn origin best origin.

When she'd looked him up, she found out that he hadn't obtained the Star of Terra at the Blitz. No, he'd barely been a footnote.

So M!Shep did Elysium rather than Torfan at a guess?

As I gazed up at the Ancient I had brought into this world to stop Pious', my mistake was made clear. This Ancient could lay the world to ruin just as easily as Pious' would have. And yet, as quickly as it began, it ended. To think, that once I could not see beyond the veil of our reality. To see those who dwell behind... I was once a fool.

I do like how the standard ending of ED doesn't actually improve the situation at all. :p

"The other is Lieutenant Commander Hannah Shepard, his mother."

So either Spacer or Colonist, and I'm guessing M!Shep is Spacer with career military mother.


Back to the Future reference? Maybe?

A few asari with their human mates, both male and female, could be seen walking around. A couple had babies in arm, and a pang hit Shepard's heart. Even if Liara had… that last time, she wouldn't be around to see her.

Meeting the timeline's Liara would be...somewhat awkward.

These were still the old-style guns, she realized. No heat sinks to refill,

Fuck the heat sink system forever.

Then each rune lit up around the woman, and Shepard swore she heard a suspiciously familiar female voice speaking. "Tier, Pargon, Aretak, Xel'lotath, Pargon…"

Don't be jealous Shep! You can invoke best buddy Xel'lotath too!

I'm leaning toward some sort of cult, but only because their skills didn't seem to match the quality of their gear.

So well funded, but staffed by people that could easily get pulled into a cult rather than those who are actually good at combat.

It bled an ichor-like blood, and soon after Shepard put several bullets in two of its eyes, it fell to the ground, writhing.

Yeah the ancient abominations are much easier to deal with when you have modern guns and a full squad of trained soldiers.

"And my soul… such that it is… passed into the Wheel… ready for reincarnation…" Mordin said, and then he smiled. "Always did want to be a bird… self-powered flight… amazing."

This is a very Mordin line.

"So… I'm legally your niece?" That… was a different thing for Andrea.

Probably smart on Hannah's part, if she tried jumping straight into being a mother it'd probably panic Andrea.

"Jack Harper…" The corpse said. "I suppose I must thank you. Were it not for you, I would still be dead."

"You're welcome?" I said, questioning. "Are you a person? Do you have a name?"

"Pious Augustus," said the talking corpse. "And I would like to help you."

I stared out at the city and gave a nod. Augustus's smile widened as we began to ponder together.

In every timeline TIM is literally the worst.
 
Ah the 'What Colour explosion do you want?' choice.



Because Reasons.

Doesn't make any sense, but the writers want to force you to choose Green so they've gotta make every other option unappealing no matter how contrived.

Yeah, true enough. It did have the best epilogue too. Of course, the colors just lined up so perfectly with Eternal Darkness. It's funny because I'd been wanting to write this cross since before ME3 came out.

Chakwas best disappointed English granny a ship could have.

Yep. Chakwas is awesome.

Yup, we've either got an alternate universe or a timeline rewrite.



And Shepard has been dropped into the non-canonical dude Shepard timeline. Truly a fate worse than death.

Hah. Yeah, that's fun.

Even with changes there's probably a lot of stuff she can interfere with. She knows the location of so very many secret bases and easily preventable disasters. Also means that atm it's Young Inexperienced Mordin either working for STG or getting his tenth degree. Might be able to rescue Jack 0?

Quite possible. Hrm. Mordin's probably in his late twenties or early thirties now. I need to check his age.

Earthborn origin best origin.

Yup.

So M!Shep did Elysium rather than Torfan at a guess?
Torfan hasn't happened yet. Torfan is Ruthless background, a response for the Blitz. Canonically, no matter which Shepard you are, Shep was on Elysium when the Blitz happened. War Hero Shep (Andrea) rallied the colonists and got the Star of Terra for it. Lone Survivor Shep just did their thing and got shipped off to Akuze afterward. Ruthless Shep (Michael) got pissed and joined the assault on Torfan.

I do like how the standard ending of ED doesn't actually improve the situation at all. :p

Yeah, standard one doesn't. True Ending does.


So either Spacer or Colonist, and I'm guessing M!Shep is Spacer with career military mother.
Yeah, Spacer. Colonist's mother was killed on Mindoir.

Back to the Future reference? Maybe?
Yup.

Meeting the timeline's Liara would be...somewhat awkward.

Absolutely. Liara and Thane both would be awkward for Andrea.

Fuck the heat sink system forever.

Yeah. Though there's some fun narrative things you can do with heat sinks.

Don't be jealous Shep! You can invoke best buddy Xel'lotath too!



So well funded, but staffed by people that could easily get pulled into a cult rather than those who are actually good at combat.

Yeah, more or less accurate here.

Yeah the ancient abominations are much easier to deal with when you have modern guns and a full squad of trained soldiers.

Not a bad introduction for her, eh?


Probably smart on Hannah's part, if she tried jumping straight into being a mother it'd probably panic Andrea.



In every timeline TIM is literally the worst.

Correct on both parts. Andrea's honestly my fun Shep, and it's really fun to examine her psyche.
 
True ending 'improves' the situation but mantorok is still there and maybe freeing himself slowly.

In actual fact is this a post true ending timeline, and you are you going with the interpretation that all of the ancients are dead but with aeons even death may die? Because mantorok seems to indicate that. Will we only ever see undead husks for enemies no matter alignment? (because presumably mantorok didn't have that 'problem' before he was 'dead').

Technically mantorok may be 'special' because he was the equal of all of them and their 'jailer' in the lore, such as it is, and maybe they're for realisies dead because of mutual-timeline displaced kills by their stronger opponents, so in my imagination it can go either way in this story.

But the fact that Pius is awake and more importantly, sentient goes against that grain, because all the living corpses of Mantorok have no will besides hunger (the whole reason he used humans) and Pius was always the servant of one of the 3 and in this case it's indicated it's Chattur'gha. Maybe i missed it and the story is that Alexandra failed as Xel'lotath agent in this timeline? But how didn't the timeline went to shit with Chattur'gha in the universe? Reapers?
 
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Hey @Ellf ? That suspiciously familiar female voice from one of the Cerberus goons that Shepard killed? Was she Miranda?

Or is it just that some 'other'being says the green words, which either sounds familiar to Shepard for some reason, or sounds familiar to everyone who hears it for some reason?

Always fun when the 'mysterious Eldritch being' speaks in your voice, no matter who says the words/does the actions that cause the words to be heard...
 
Hey @Ellf ? That suspiciously familiar female voice from one of the Cerberus goons that Shepard killed? Was she Miranda?

Or is it just that some 'other'being says the green words, which either sounds familiar to Shepard for some reason, or sounds familiar to everyone who hears it for some reason?

Always fun when the 'mysterious Eldritch being' speaks in your voice, no matter who says the words/does the actions that cause the words to be heard...

Jennifer Hale voices both Femshep and Xel'lotath. The supsiciously familiar voice was her own.
 
True ending 'improves' the situation but mantorok is still there and maybe freeing himself slowly.

In actual fact is this a post true ending timeline, and you are you going with the interpretation that all of the ancients are dead but with aeons even death may die? Because mantorok seems to indicate that. Will we only ever see undead husks for enemies no matter alignment? (because presumably mantorok didn't have that 'problem' before he was 'dead').

Technically mantorok may be 'special' because he was the equal of all of them and their 'jailer' in the lore, such as it is, and maybe they're for realisies dead because of mutual-timeline displaced kills by their stronger opponents, so in my imagination it can go either way in this story.

But the fact that Pius is awake and more importantly, sentient goes against that grain, because all the living corpses of Mantorok have no will besides hunger (the whole reason he used humans) and Pius was always the servant of one of the 3 and in this case it's indicated it's Chattur'gha. Maybe i missed it and the story is that Alexandra failed as Xel'lotath agent in this timeline? But how didn't the timeline went to shit with Chattur'gha in the universe? Reapers?

No, no... it isn't indicated to be Chattur'gha.
 
I was sort of assuming since TIM was using that but re-reading it, the obvious cultists were Xel'lotath aligned and i'm pretty sure Pius won't help the others he didn't choose. Which is kind of weird since both Sheperd and him choose green then, though in ED the holder of the book can use all alignments.

Also it turned the corpses green instead of doing nothing at all or decomposing them, so sadly it appears - in my hypothesis that 'black decayed corpses == dead -or in serious trouble- ancient' that at least Xel'lotath is alive still.

Which brings the question of 'how does the earth still exist' to the front because if Alexandra failed at killing Pius and failed at summoning Chattur'gha to kill her.
 
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I was sort of assuming since TIM was using that but re-reading it, the obvious cultists were Xel'lotath aligned and i'm pretty sure Pius won't help the others he didn't choose. Which is kind of weird since both Sheperd and him choose green then, though in ED the holder of the book can use all alignments.

Also it turned the corpses green instead of doing nothing at all or decomposing them, so sadly it appears - in my hypothesis that 'black decayed corpses == dead -or in serious trouble- ancient' that at least Xel'lotath is alive still.

Which brings the question of 'how does the earth still exist' to the front because if Alexandria failed at killing Pius and failed at summoning Chattur'gha to kill her.

Oh no. Who says Alex failed? Note, Jack Harper is descended from Alexandra Roivas.
 
Segment Five

Segment Five

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Freedom. Glorious freedom. Being let out of the infirmary, even if she'd be confined for a week or two more was still better than nothing. That she was able to have a place to stay, a place with a woman whom she wanted to get to know made it even better. Her m—Hannah Shepard. Aunt Hannah. She'd have to keep that in mind as she dealt with things. Officially, legally, she was Hannah's niece, and that certainly was better than nothing. Growing up on Earth, the only sort of family she'd had really, until meeting Anderson, was the gang. The Tenth Street Reds had been a safe place for her, but what they'd turned into… hadn't been okay. She'd started seeing it before she left, and when she ran into Finch again… That wasn't a pleasant time.

But having Hannah, Aunt Hannah, bring her to her Arcturus Station apartment was something special. She was taking responsibility for the daughter she didn't actually have, and it touched Andrea a lot. The apartment was located on the upper spire of Arcturus Station, a place that Andrea knew had been reserved for people with the right connections and level of brass. Andrea suspected that Hannah had been there for a while.

It wasn't that the apartment was big. It wasn't. That really was the first thing that Andrea noticed when Hannah wheeled her in. Her apartment on the Citadel was much larger than this one. The cell she'd been stuck in while awaiting the Alliance's judgement over destroying a relay had been smaller, but the apartment that Liara'd had on Illium had been much bigger too. It hurt a little that it took Liara being attacked by the Shadow Broker's people for Andrea to even get a chance to look at her lover's place, but that hadn't happened yet here. The Liara here likely still was just an archaeologist, pureblooded daughter of two matriarchs. As far as Andrea knew, Benezia was not yet indoctrinated, and if Andrea had anything to say about it, the indoctrination wouldn't happen. Liara deserved to have her mothers live. Both of them.

Even if it wasn't her Liara.

Hannah—Aunt Hannah's apartment only had one floor, but it seemed rather cozy. The living room furniture was handpicked, a few retro late twentieth century/early twenty-first century style couches with felt cushions added to the cozy ambiance of the room. In the corner was an imitation fireplace, likely with some sort of electric heater. It wasn't like the station would allow any sort of real fireplace, as the smoke wouldn't have anywhere to go, after all. Sitting on top of the fireplace's mantel were a collection of printed photographs, honest-to-God, printed photographs. One was of a young dark-haired man in his Dress Blues, at what looked like the N7 graduation ceremony. The next picture over showed the ceremonial N7 being pinned on his uniform. His head had been neatly shaved into a crew-cut, and he had the semblance of a five o'clock shadow. This had to be Michael, Hannah's son. The so-called counterpart that Mordin had mentioned in the dream. She had to admit that he wasn't exactly an unattractive man, but even if it weren't for the blood relation, she just really had no use for human men. She'd never really thought about getting pregnant herself, and while she'd had thoughts about raising a child with Liara, she wasn't sure about how that would come to fruition, especially given how long her daughter would be so young. She pitied salarians who bonded with Asari. The lifespan difference was just so much.

Hannah must have noticed Andrea's staring at her son's picture because she decided to speak up. "Yes, that's my Michael."

"N7 graduation, right?" Andrea asked. "I hope I'm not intruding, but… what happened with his father?"

She'd never managed to find much out about her birth parents, and while it was probable that things were different here, this was the closest option she had.

"Michael's father…" Hannah let out a sigh. "Well, he fought on Shanxi during the First Contact War. Unfortunately, he was killed in action. He was killed by a turian under the orders of General Desolas Arterius."

Saren's older brother. Andrea had read stories about an incident on Illium regarding the general and a possible link to the Illusive Man. Reaper artifacts were a problem even then.

"I'm sorry," Andrea said. "It can't have been easy, raising Michael alone."

"Well, I won't say I was ever truly alone," Hannah said. "Both David and Steven helped. Michael had two very involved uncles, basically. They were proud of him too. Even helped with his first real assignment. Then… well, the Blitz happened."

The Skyllian Blitz. She knew how she'd handled it. She'd done what she needed to, after all. "How did Michael handle it?"

"About as well as anyone else there, honestly. He said to me that he'd wished he'd been able to do more, save more people, and he didn't want my reassurances when I said he'd done all he could," she said. "It's a sore point for him, so… I'd hold off on bringing it up. He's been obsessing about it a little."

Another difference beyond the obvious. She'd taken charge. He clearly hadn't. "I hope he doesn't end up doing something he regrets as a result of that."

Andrea recalled the unofficial response to the Blitz: the butchering of Torfan, two years later. While she hadn't been there herself, she'd read the reports and heard the stories. The brutality shown there was crueler than what she was comfortable with, but she could envision a state of mind she could have to go into that.

For her part, Hannah nodded. "Yeah, I hope so too. Anyway, wheel yourself this way, and I'll show you the guest room."

While the wheelchair she was in wasn't powered, it wasn't hard to wheel herself after her legal aunt. She followed her down a hallway to a bedroom at the end, where there was a bed she'd be able to get into easily, a dresser, a side table with a lamp, and a small display screen projector.

"It's not as much as I'd like, but it'll all interface with your omni-tool, and I'm sure you can figure that out from there." Hannah gestured out of the room. "Down the hall to the right is the bathroom, and further down is Michael's room. His door's locked, by the way. My room's down the other hallway. Will you be okay using the shower on your own?"

"I can stand," Andrea said. "For a bit, and I need the practice."

"Good, because I didn't get a chair. I can order one, but I'm not sure how long it will take to get in."

Andrea waved her hand. "That's fine. I really should be standing more."

"You're still recovering," Hannah said. "Doctor Chakwas may have more tests she'll want to run."

"I can handle it," Andrea said. "I'm not as inexperienced as I look."

"Time travel protocols," Hannah said, shaking her head. "Okay, soldier. I trust your judgement."

Andrea smiled genuinely at the woman who was her genetic mother. "Thank you. And… really, thank you, again. I don't know where I'd be staying if you hadn't offered your place."

"I'm sure Steven and David would have had a place for you," Hannah said. "Need any help with your things?"

Andrea shook her head, placing the bag she had with the Tome of Eternal Darkness in it on the bed before wheeling slightly away. "I'm fine. Just really feel like I want that shower."

"Sure thing," Hannah said. "Make yourself at home. I'll go fix us something to eat. I'm not exactly the greatest of chefs, but I do my best."

"That makes two of us," Andrea said. "I tried making something in the mess on my ship once, and I got chased out by my mess hall chief. It didn't matter if I was the CO of the vessel or not, the mess was his holy ground. I did manage to get him some good ingredients, along with some that were safe for our dextro crewmates."

"Dextro… you had turians on board your ship?"

"And quarians sometimes," Andrea said. "One of my best friends was turian. I could always trust him to have my back."

"I'll have to hear that story later," Hannah said. "Steven… that is, Admiral Hackett… he'll be by tomorrow at 0900 to debrief you regarding the time travel protocol information. I'm sure he's eager to hear it."

Andrea nodded. "Thank you, ma'am. I'll make sure to be prepared."

"I should go," Hannah said, nodding toward the kitchen.

"Ma'am," Andrea nodded again, reverting to some of her training. While her mo—aunt headed toward the kitchen, Andrea wheeled her way down the hall to the bathroom. The setup was fairly simple. A sink with a fluorescent light above it, a toilet with a bidet, and a single stall shower with frosted glass doors. Judging from the faucet, it was a full on proper shower, rather than one of those ion showers that some ships had. Probably a benefit to being on a station. In a way, it reminded her of the Captain's Quarters on the Normandy SR-2. That shower had been amazing, but of course, the last time she'd used it… had been the night before the final battle. She'd shared it with Liara, and then… well, it was possible she might have had a little blue daughter in the future.

She kind of hoped she would have.

She stripped down, using the wheelchair as support, and she turned the shower on, getting the temperature just right. Then, using the walls to support herself, she slipped into the shower, and she let the water just run down over her head. Even on the Tokyo, she hadn't really had much chance to look herself over. Most of her scars were just gone, as if they'd never even existed in the first place. Callouses she'd formed long ago had faded, leaving behind smooth unblemished skin. Chakwas hadn't been kidding when estimating her age. Andrea honestly looked younger than she remembered looking in this year. Based on the year, she should have been twenty-three. She looked maybe four years younger than that. Her haircut probably didn't help. She definitely didn't look the war veteran she was. She didn't look like the woman who had faced down the Reapers and told them off. She hadn't yet faced the…

Corpses… Lumbering, rotting cadavers… they are amongst us…

Andrea Shepard shook her head, focusing on the water beating down her back instead. She might have been younger, but the memories were there. She'd seen things. She'd seen…

Anderson lying there, dead on the Citadel. His body twitched, bent, contorted, and then climbed to its feet. The head lolled to the side, mouth agape, letting out an unnatural moan as his eyes flared green. She'd seen him die. She'd watched it. No impaling upon a Dragon's tooth, no nanotech to animate the body… yet he walked. He lived. Or rather, something unnatural brought him back. Something inside him walked in his place…

"No…" Andrea shook her head, closing her eyes. Tears dripped down her nose as static coursed along her body. She'd seen Anderson alive here. He'd been dead. He saved her. She couldn't save him. She'd not been able to save anyone.

Alenko was the first one. Her crewmate, dead by her decision. Body long gone, burned up in a nuclear fire. "Shepard… why didn't you save me?"

She looked over to the source. His body, his face crawled with glowing blue nanites. His gaunt skin, stretched along his skull, fatty tissue eaten by the nanites that started his animation, melanin dissipating as well. The skin paled, looking at first like he was turning into a husk, but then the skin turned blue. Deep blue. It started to rot off his bones, but a blue outline remained. For some time, his face remained his own, as his body leaned back, spine cracking audibly. Then, with an explosion of energy, his body once again was no more.


"No! This isn't… I…" Andrea clutched at the soap bin with one hand for support, and she placed the other hand on her forehead. More static ran along her body, along with a blue biotic aura extending from her. The shampoo bottle started floating.

A translucent three-fingered mechanical hand placed itself on her shoulder. "Remember me, Shepard-commander?"

"This… isn't… really…" Shepard clutched her head, hunching over, and she let out a scream of pain as her biotics exploded out of her, unrestrained. Andrea curled into a ball in the shower as the glass shower door exploded. For a brief moment, the shower's water stopped, but it started coming harder, pounding down on her head. It wasn't real. None of that had been real. She knew it hadn't been real. God… Why did it feel so real? Legion… Alenko… Anderson…

Thane. Mordin.

Too many people in her life had died for her. Too many people had lost their lives because she hadn't been fast enough, good enough. Because she'd failed. Nihlus had died, killed by Saren. She'd always had the mission pushing her forward before, but now? While she had time to prepare for their coming, she finally had time to think, to grieve…

"Andrea?" Hannah's voice came from outside the bathroom. "Are you okay? I heard the glass breaking…"

Andrea sniffled in the shower, but she didn't answer. She couldn't bring herself to stop. She finally had time to let things go, and she just… she did.

"I'm coming in," Hannah said, and the door opened. To her credit, she didn't focus on the mess that the bathroom clearly was, after what Andrea did. Instead, a few seconds later, the shower's water turned off and Andrea felt a towel wrapping around her body, along with a pair of strong warm arms. The arms were careful when touching her though. "Easy now, Andrea. It's okay."

Andrea sniffled again, and when she turned toward Hannah, she was pulled tighter into the hug. It wasn't the same as being with Liara, crying with Liara. Nor was it like when she was with Thane. Hannah made her feel safe in a way that neither of her lovers had. Like she wanted to be protected and would be. Hannah whispered comforting things to her, and she just let it out.

"It's okay, Andrea," Hannah said. "It's really okay."

"I'm… sorry," Andrea said, after a few seconds, as she looked up and around the bathroom. The glass shower door had broken into many pieces, embedding themselves somehow in the metal walls. Biotics did weird things. The toilet had shattered, and water laid around it. Her wheelchair was a twisted metal mess, but luckily, her clothes appeared to be dry and on the sink counter which similarly was untouched. The flood wasn't a lot, and the water on the ground actually was draining already. "I shouldn't have…"

"Karin warned me that this was a possibility," Hannah said. "She said your implants combined with the size of your eezo nodules meant that you might not need an Amp to release some major biotic power. The amp will help focus it, but this makes sense, especially if you were having some extreme emotions."

"I'm supposed to be in better control than this," Andrea said.

"Andrea," Hannah said. "No matter how old you were before this time travel mess, what you experienced, you're not that age anymore. You're… honestly, probably younger than my son. You look like you might even still be a minor."

"I'm—"

"Legally, on paper, you're twenty-one, but biologically?" Hannah shook her head. "Lapse in control is understandable. Don't worry about the bathroom, Andrea. I've been meaning to have it redone, it just pushes up the timetable. Come on, let's get you dressed and some pizza."

"But…"

"I've got a guy, don't worry," Hannah said. "Dinner should be ready shortly, and maybe, if you're feeling up for it, you can talk about it. Tell me more about my… niece… daughter. I want to know more about you."

Andrea nodded, and she let herself be helped up. With Hannah's help, she got dressed, and she was walked out to the dining room. She sat down at the table as her mother—Hannah went to make a few calls. She needed to figure out just what she was going to tell her. How much she could give to Hannah about what had happened in her future prior to the debrief with Hackett was… interesting. Some of it could just be her past on Earth, which probably wouldn't actually matter here. Some of it would be her time on the Normandy.

She was personally okay with having Hannah there when she spoke with Hackett. However, Andrea wasn't so sure how much the Admiral would be okay with it. There may have been some Alliance secrets her mother—aunt wasn't allowed to know. Sometimes OpSec sucked that way.

Still… She could feel the familial connection. Legally, Hannah was her aunt. Genetically, Hannah Shepard was her mother. Andrea kind of wished that her own mother had been there for her. She couldn't just steal Michael's.

But maybe he'd be willing to share.

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At 0600 the following morning, Andrea started with some recovery exercises. One-armed pushups were something she'd been capable of before, and as she started working on them, she found them easier and easier to do. Seventy-five for each arm was easily possible, given that by the end of the previous night, she was walking without much support.

Andrea had never been as fitness obsessed as James, but she had kept herself well above PT standards for N7 requirements. She just had been too busy to spend every waking moment on PT on the Normandy. Of course with how much combat she'd been in and how often she was escorting a ground team, she easily kept her fitness at the level she was needing.

Now? Well, in some ways she was in far better physical shape than she'd been in the past couple years. As the exercises went on, she certainly was feeling much more like herself than she had since she'd woken up in that Cerberus facility. She'd always be grateful to Miranda for what she'd done to help her but having the technology in her that they'd put did always rub her the wrong way. It made Andrea worried that Cerberus could do to her what they'd done to so many of their people, controlling them with Reaper tech. The arrogance that The Illusive Man had displayed, thinking that the Reapers could be controlled like that by someone like him… she could only barely understand it. She'd made the choice she had in order to save the most lives. She couldn't just destroy all artificial intelligence life in the galaxy just to eliminate the Reapers.

She switched arms, starting her second set of seventy-five. She needed to focus on what primary things she needed to give to Hackett. First would be the verification of her status, giving N7 protocol numbers, of course. Odds were she'd have to test for it again, but once she was in fighting shape, that wouldn't be a real issue. Then she'd need to establish what she knew, focusing primarily on the Reaper threat. Humanity needed to prepare, and so did the rest of the galaxy. However, Humanity wasn't on the Council yet, nor were they a primary Council species. That would be something that needed to be pushed for, and evidence would be necessary prior to Sovereign's attack.

She knew that the Crucible had been built, but it wasn't the weapon that everyone thought it had been. Instead, it had been a way to reboot the Reapers, use the Citadel to realign them to a new purpose or to destroy all of them. She'd chosen to sacrifice herself, saving the galaxy from their threat while also allowing life to go on in theoretical harmony. Now, however, she was in the past, albeit not her past. There seemed to be more of a threat here than the Reapers alone, as she hadn't remembered hearing about a cultist attack on Arcturus station in her original timeline. The Catalyst had indicated that the Reapers had been created for something more than just what they'd been doing. That there was a reason for the Cycle, more than just preservation. She'd need to figure out what that was.

Still. Sovereign would come in six years, attack the Citadel. If she wasn't the one who stopped him here, she suspected Michael would. In eight years, the Collectors would attack human colonies in the Terminus systems, and in nine years, if they weren't stopped, the Reapers would begin their Harvest. That was what she needed to convey to Hackett, and she knew exactly where to start looking for the proof.

But then there was the other threat. The threat revealed by the Tome of Eternal Darkness, Ancient evils hidden behind the veil of reality. They lurked where people didn't expect. Horrors, zombies, things that should not have been real. Yet they were. The Darkness came, and she'd been chosen to face it. Once more, she was given an impossible job.

The doorframe to the room she'd been staying in was rapped upon lightly as Andrea finished up her second set of pushups. She looked to the door, and standing there, holding two mugs of coffee, was Hannah Shepard, dressed in Alliance blues. "Good morning, Andrea. Feeling any better?"

Andrea pushed herself up to her feet and stretched. She was dressed in some light fatigues that Hannah had set out for her. "Maybe a little. Last night…"

She'd broken down a little more the previous night, speaking about her crew. The ones she'd lost, the ones she'd miss most. She wasn't even sure how many of them survived that last battle, but she had hope

"Last night seemed necessary, young lady," Hannah said, and she offered her a cup. "It's 0730, just enough time to be ready for Admiral Hackett. If you want to have makeup on, I have some you can use. It should go fine with your complexion."

"Thank you, ma'am," Andrea said, slipping into her soldier mode. "I'll make good use of it."

"Good," Hannah said. "I'm also glad to see you're up for doing some PT. I'm not sure how much you should push yourself without doctor's permission…"

"I won't push too hard," Andrea said. She glanced down toward the bathroom she'd wrecked the night before. "Where can…?

"My bathroom. I'm getting someone in today to handle the other bathroom, so feel free to just go in my room. I'll get breakfast ready. It should be enough for you."

Andrea smiled, nodding. "I should go."

"Don't take too long," Hannah said, stepping aside so that Andrea could make it through.

She walked into Hannah's room, not really sure what to expect. The room itself was pretty standard, a queen-sized bed, perfectly made, a couple side tables, a dresser, lamp. There were more pictures of Michael on the dresser, mostly him as a child. Cute kid. One of the pictures had a younger Anderson holding what looked like a six-year-old Michael on his shoulders. An earlier picture showed a younger Hannah holding a baby, standing next to a dark-haired man. Michael's father, she assumed. Looking close at him, she could see some resemblance to herself as well. Did that mean that Michael was a full-blooded sibling?

Without getting a direct DNA test and meeting him, that would be difficult to process. She also didn't want to completely displace his own accomplishments here with her own. However, Ashley did prove that there was room for more than one human Spectre. Perhaps he could be the first here, and she could be the second.

Andrea shook her head and went into Hannah's bathroom. She took care of the business she needed to, swiftly showering and drying her admittedly short hair, and she took the Lieutenant Commander up on her offer. Makeup. If she was going to be meeting with an admiral, she wanted to look her best, even if she didn't have her dress blues. Officially, she wasn't an Alliance Marine yet, but she suspected that would change quickly. Hopefully.

She combed her hair back, and she came out into the living room at exactly 0755. Hannah had prepared a proper biotic-friendly spread of food for her, and she quickly ate the eggs, bacon, protein shake, and pancakes, along with taking the vitamin pills that Chakwas had provided. She helped clean the dishes, and both she and Hannah were ready and waiting when the doorbell rang at exactly 0855.

"I'll go ahead and get it, stay there, Andrea," Hannah said. She stood, leaving Andrea on the couch. She answered the door, and Andrea heard the joy in her voice as she greeted people on the other side. "Admiral Hackett, Doctor Chakwas, please come in."

"Shepard," Hackett said as he came in, nodding to Hannah, and then he met Andrea's gaze and repeated himself with a nod. "Shepard."

"Sir," Andrea said, standing. She gave him a crisp salute.

"It's good that you're able to be on your feet," Hackett said. "But, feel free to be at ease."

Andrea nodded and relaxed, but she waited to take a seat until Hackett did.

"Before we begin, I want Doctor Chakwas to take a good look at you," Hackett said. "Karin, if you would."

"Of course, sir," Chakwas said, and she brought up her omni-tool, running a quick medical scan over Andrea's body. Andrea cooperated with her, given how much she trusted the doctor. The examination didn't take too long, and when she was finished, Chakwas looked her over again with some respect. "Well, miss Shepard, I'll admit that I'm a little perplexed, however I am happy with your improvement. When Captain Anderson brought you to my infirmary on the Tokyo, you were severely wounded, barely clinging to life, suffering from exposure to the vacuum. By all rights, given the injuries you had, despite my efforts, you probably should have died. Not that I wanted that, of course. That you're walking around now is practically miraculous. All the tests and the bloodwork from before you left the hospital indicate that you are a healthy young woman with a highly developed biotic system. The nodules you have place you on par with many asari, to be perfectly honest, and the way your implants interface with them are in a healthy manner. They appear to be in perfect functioning order. I believe that I am able to clear you for heavier activity, provided you ease yourself into it. I trust that Lieutenant Commander Shepard will ensure that happens."

"Of course," Hannah said.

"Additionally, as a biotic, I'm sure you already know that your diet should consist of three to four thousand calories, prioritizing your proteins. If you heavily use your biotics, that should increase by as much as two thousand more calories." Chakwas said.

"That many?" Hannah asked.

"Is Michael not a biotic?" Andrea asked, looking at Hannah.

She shook her head. "His potential is very low. His training is more as an Infiltrator."

"Ah," Andrea said. "The calorie count is a little higher than what I remember, but it makes sense."

"Your body is still developing, Andrea," Chakwas said. "While on record, you might be twenty-one, closer estimates biologically have you younger than that. Perhaps still in adolescence."

"I'm thirty-two years old," Andrea said.

"That, I believe, is what we need to talk about, now that Chakwas has cleared you," Hackett said. "Karin, Hannah, I'm allowing you to stay, given that you will be instrumental to Andrea Shepard's health. However, these proceedings are highly classified, under the time travel protocols. Officially, you two and Anderson will be the only authorized people below the rank of Admiral that will be allowed to know this information, and even Admirals will only be told on a NTK basis."

"Don't want to mess up the timeline too much, sir?" Andrea asked.

"Precisely, Shepard," Hackett said. "Given that you have claimed to be thirty-two and you look like, frankly, a teenager, you understand that there are parts we have to take with a grain of salt. However, the advanced technology involved in your biotic implants are beyond the L3 and L4 implants that are currently available."

"My implants are L5n implants, which were upgraded from L3s," Shepard said.

"No, Andrea, they aren't," Chakwas said. "I've seen the plans for the L5ns, but these are beyond even them. Something upgraded them more. The technology in them seems to be a merger between human and some sort of alien technology beyond what even the asari are capable of."

Andrea blinked. She hadn't been expecting that.

"Regardless, your implants lend credence to the time travel protocols, so, I suppose that we should start with the first real question. Did you travel back in time on purpose, Shepard?" Hackett asked.

Andrea shook her head. "No. I definitely did not."

"You were coming from a war zone, weren't you?" Chakwas said. "Something that had you floating out in space. Did you get ejected?"

Andrea shook her head. "I had been on the Citadel at the end of the war, but… it had been around where you found me."

"What could have brought the Citadel there?" Hackett asked. "What war are you talking about?"

Andrea swallowed, and she prepared once more to talk about the ships that haunted her for four years. The vanguards of destruction. "I suppose the biggest thing that I need to tell you about are the Reapers."

And tell them, she did. For six hours, she described the major highlights of the Reapers, who they were, what they were, what their purpose was. What she did. Who she worked with. Why she worked with them. She even gave identification codes that Hackett was able to respond to, when prompted.

She was Andrea Jane Shepard, Hero of the Skyllian Blitz, the first human Spectre, and she was not going to let either the Reapers nor the Ancients have their way with this galaxy. No matter what.
 
Oh wow, this is a blast from the past and a half. Gonna have to read everything all over again, this'll be fun!
 
Ah Eternal Darkness, the one game that likes to screw with you like no other...

Also Xel'lotath being the trickster again...


Edit: Also obligatory Meme... Needs more Pargon
 
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Ah Eternal Darkness, the one game that likes to screw with you like no other...

Also Xel'lotath being the trickster again...


Edit: Also obligatory Meme... Needs more Pargon

"What is that, a One hundred thirteen point spell?"

"Yes."

"What are the runes for it?"

"Narokath. Pargon, Pargon, Pargon.... Pargon.... Pargon Pargon.... Pargon Pargon...."
 
Eternal Darkness terrible idea to repeat the whole game 3 times really pissed me off, but i actually played the game 3 times... twice.

Though i never did care for high madness runs so i probably missed some of the insanity effects.
 
Eternal Darkness terrible idea to repeat the whole game 3 times really pissed me off, but i actually played the game 3 times... twice.

Though i never did care for high madness runs so i probably missed some of the insanity effects.

Honestly, I liked the game so much that I probably played through the entire thing maybe twenty times. It became a Halloween tradition for me when I still had my Gamecube. I had a blast with it, and the ending of ME3 kinda... well, there were three colors. Red. Green. Blue. It reminded me of things... then add to the fact that Jennifer Hale voiced Shepard, Alex Roivas, and Xel'lotath...
 
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