Madoka Magica: Unlock the Spiral (An AU Incubator Quest)

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[X] Plan Team Mami
-[X] You and Mami both make the first move
--[X] "Prepare for Trouble"
--[X] "Make it Double"
--[X] "To Protect little girls within our Nation"
--[X] "To Unite Badasses and bring Devastation"
--[X] "To Denounce the Evils of Grief and Despair"
--[X] "To Provoke all Haters to Seethe and Glare"
--[X] "Mami"
--[X] "Bro"
--[X] "Team Mami firing off with unstoppable might!
--[X] "Surrender now or your in for a fight!
--[X] "Sayaka! Thats right!
---[X] "...what? I just wanted to get in on the fun... Madoka! Everyones judging me!"

It has begun.
 
[X] Plan Team Mami
-[X] You and Mami both make the first move
--[X] "Prepare for Trouble"
--[X] "Make it Double"
--[X] "To Protect little girls within our Nation"
--[X] "To Unite Badasses and bring Devastation"
--[X] "To Denounce the Evils of Grief and Despair"
--[X] "To Provoke all Haters to Seethe and Glare"
--[X] "Mami"
--[X] "Bro"
--[X] "Team Mami firing off with unstoppable might!
--[X] "Surrender now or your in for a fight!
--[X] "Sayaka! Thats right!
---[X] "...what? I just wanted to get in on the fun... Madoka! Everyones judging me!"

It has begun.

...I would be fine if this won too.
 
[X] Homura makes the first move
- [X] "You. With the glasses. Explain yourself."
[X] We proceed to answer:
- [X] "Clean out your ears! I'm Kaminabey! Leader and Mascot of Team Magi! This is Mami Tomoe, first honorary member! Our goal is to Do The Impossible and Break The Logic Of This World over our collective knees! Now who the hell are you, and would you be open to eating some cake later?"
[X] Followed by a look into Homura's headspace after that.

I read the description and I just knew this'd be great. I'm caught up now and I haven't been disappointed, I was 100% correct this is great. This will be A LOT of fun :)
 
[X] Homura makes the first move
- [X] "You. With the glasses. Explain yourself."
[X] We proceed to answer:
- [X] "Clean out your ears! I'm Kaminabey! Leader and Mascot of Team Magi! This is Mami Tomoe, first honorary member! Our goal is to Do The Impossible and Break The Logic Of This World over our collective knees! Now who the hell are you, and would you be open to eating some cake later?"
[X] Followed by a look into Homura's headspace after that.
 
[X] Plan Team Mami
-[X] You and Mami both make the first move
--[X] "Prepare for Trouble"
--[X] "Make it Double"
--[X] "To Protect little girls within our Nation"
--[X] "To Unite Badasses and bring Devastation"
--[X] "To Denounce the Evils of Grief and Despair"
--[X] "To Provoke all Haters to Seethe and Glare"
--[X] "Mami"
--[X] "Bro"
--[X] "Team Mami firing off with unstoppable might!
--[X] "Surrender now or your in for a fight!
--[X] "Sayaka! Thats right!
---[X] "...what? I just wanted to get in on the fun... Madoka! Everyones judging me!"

Team Rocket for the win.
 
[X] Homura makes the first move
- [X] "You. With the glasses. Explain yourself."
[X] We proceed to answer:
- [X] "Clean out your ears! I'm Kaminabey! Leader and Mascot of Team Magi! This is Mami Tomoe, first honorary member! Our goal is to Do The Impossible and Break The Logic Of This World over our collective knees! Now who the hell are you, and would you be open to eating some cake later?
 
[X] Plan Team Mami
-[X] You and Mami both make the first move
--[X] "Prepare for Trouble"
--[X] "Make it Double"
--[X] "To Protect little girls within our Nation"
--[X] "To Unite Badasses and bring Devastation"
--[X] "To Denounce the Evils of Grief and Despair"
--[X] "To Provoke all Haters to Seethe and Glare"
--[X] "Mami"
--[X] "Bro"
--[X] "Team Mami firing off with unstoppable might!
--[X] "Surrender now or your in for a fight!
--[X] "Sayaka! Thats right!
---[X] "...what? I just wanted to get in on the fun... Madoka! Everyones judging me!"

It has begun.
Hey, even if it doesn't win, it'll be included in an omake, because this is hysterical!
 
[X] Homura makes the first move
- [X] "You. With the glasses. Explain yourself."
[X] We proceed to answer:
- [X] "Clean out your ears! I'm Kaminabey! Leader and Mascot of Team Magi! This is Mami Tomoe, first honorary member! Our goal is to Do The Impossible and Break The Logic Of This World over our collective knees! Now who the hell are you, and would you be open to eating some cake later?"
[X] Followed by a look into Homura's headspace after that.
 
[X] Homura makes the first move
- [X] "You. With the glasses. Explain yourself."
[X] We proceed to answer:
- [X] "Clean out your ears! I'm Kaminabey! Leader and Mascot of Team Magi! This is Mami Tomoe, first honorary member! Our goal is to Do The Impossible and Break The Logic Of This World over our collective knees! Now who the hell are you, and would you be open to eating some cake later?"
[X] Followed by a look into Homura's headspace after that.
 
[X] Homura makes the first move
- [X] "You. With the glasses. Explain yourself."
[X] We proceed to answer:
- [X] "Clean out your ears! I'm Kaminabey! Leader and Mascot of Team Magi! This is Mami Tomoe, first honorary member! Our goal is to Do The Impossible and Break The Logic Of This World over our collective knees! Now who the hell are you, and would you be open to eating some cake later?"
[X] Followed by a look into Homura's headspace after that.
 
Why isn't Kaminabey humanoid? The selective pressures for Spiral Power converges towards a humanoid shape, and as Boota has shown, can be achieved directly via a transformation. Or does he/it not directly have Spiral Power?
 
Why isn't Kaminabey humanoid? The selective pressures for Spiral Power converges towards a humanoid shape, and as Boota has shown, can be achieved directly via a transformation. Or does he/it not directly have Spiral Power?

We only just learned about Gurren Lagann and made Spiral Power a thing at the start of this AU.

We likely haven't had much time to practice using it. Especially since we've been trying to stay one step ahead of Norbey.
 
Did Kaminabey come up with this persona by googling "how to get unlimited energy", click "I'm feeling lucky", and a Gurren Lagann fansite was the first thing that came up?

"That doesn't seem very rational, but perhaps that's why our science has never thought of it before! To the labs gentlemen!"
 
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Did Kaminabey come up with this persona by googling "how to get unlimited energy", click "I'm feeling lucky", and a Gurren Lagann fansite was the first thing that came up?

"That doesn't seem very rational, but perhaps that's why our science has never thought of it before! To the labs gentlemen!"
Kaminabey changed his behavior after 2001. After seeing Gurren Lagann on TV, though, he changed his personality to emulate Kamina. Getting the Spiral Power ended up being a package deal.

Why isn't Kaminabey humanoid? The selective pressures for Spiral Power converges towards a humanoid shape, and as Boota has shown, can be achieved directly via a transformation. Or does he/it not directly have Spiral Power?
Don't worry, Kaminabey will be getting his humanoid form... just not right away. It'd take someone with a huge amount of karmic potential getting their wish granted with Spiral Power for the feedback to happen...
 
Kaminabey changed his behavior after 2001. After seeing Gurren Lagann on TV, though, he changed his personality to emulate Kamina. Getting the Spiral Power ended up being a package deal.


Don't worry, Kaminabey will be getting his humanoid form... just not right away. It'd take someone with a huge amount of karmic potential getting their wish granted with Spiral Power for the feedback to happen...

So, in other words, we need to convince Homura that letting us contract Madoka is a good thing?

From what little I know of her, that's gonna be next to impossible to do.

Let's do it!
 
[X] Plan Team Mami
-[X] You and Mami both make the first move
--[X] "Prepare for Trouble"
--[X] "Make it Double"
--[X] "To Protect little girls within our Nation"
--[X] "To Unite Badasses and bring Devastation"
--[X] "To Denounce the Evils of Grief and Despair"
--[X] "To Provoke all Haters to Seethe and Glare"
--[X] "Mami"
--[X] "Bro"
--[X] "Team Mami firing off with unstoppable might!
--[X] "Surrender now or your in for a fight!
--[X] "Sayaka! Thats right!
---[X] "...what? I just wanted to get in on the fun... Madoka! Everyones judging me!"
 
Unless it does not wise, I pick the fun options i want kamina kyubbey to use a mech sometime.
Look forward to more and observe this in anticipation:)
Let's somehow contract Hitomi and her going out with sayaka xd

[X] Plan Team Mami
-[X] You and Mami both make the first move
--[X] "Prepare for Trouble"
--[X] "Make it Double"
--[X] "To Protect little girls within our Nation"
--[X] "To Unite Badasses and bring Devastation"
--[X] "To Denounce the Evils of Grief and Despair"
--[X] "To Provoke all Haters to Seethe and Glare"
--[X] "Mami"
--[X] "Bro"
--[X] "Team Mami firing off with unstoppable might!
--[X] "Surrender now or your in for a fight!
--[X] "Sayaka! Thats right!
---[X] "...what? I just wanted to get in on the fun... Madoka! Everyones judging me!"

Also want Mami to name attack with drill in it like drill shot.
 
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While "Team Mami" didn't win, rest assured it will be used as an omake! With that said...

Adhoc vote count started by Tornadopelt on Jan 13, 2023 at 10:34 PM, finished with 27 posts and 12 votes.

  • [X] Homura makes the first move
    - [X] "You. With the glasses. Explain yourself."
    [X] We proceed to answer:
    - [X] "Clean out your ears! I'm Kaminabey! Leader and Mascot of Team Magi! This is Mami Tomoe, first honorary member! Our goal is to Do The Impossible and Break The Logic Of This World over our collective knees! Now who the hell are you, and would you be open to eating some cake later?"
    [X] Followed by a look into Homura's headspace after that.
    [X] Plan Team Mami
    -[X] You and Mami both make the first move
    --[X] "Prepare for Trouble"
    --[X] "Make it Double"
    --[X] "To Protect little girls within our Nation"
    --[X] "To Unite Badasses and bring Devastation"
    --[X] "To Denounce the Evils of Grief and Despair"
    --[X] "To Provoke all Haters to Seethe and Glare"
    --[X] "Mami"
    --[X] "Bro"
    --[X] "Team Mami firing off with unstoppable might!
    --[X] "Surrender now or your in for a fight!
    --[X] "Sayaka! Thats right!
    ---[X] "...what? I just wanted to get in on the fun... Madoka! Everyones judging me!"
 
Ch 1: The Winding Spiral Path, Pt 9
The black-haired woman in front of the group affixes her gaze to yours, looking you up and down in a near-instant. No words pass between you for the tensest few seconds you've ever felt. Then, putting her right hand behind her shield, she says, "You. With the glasses. Explain yourself."

With a nod, you leap off of Mami's shoulders and grin, the black-haired woman stepping back just a bit as you land on your paws. "You'd better clean out your ears, because I've got something important to tell you! I'm Kaminabey, Leader and Mascot of Team Magi! This is Mami Tomoe, first honorary member! Our goal is to do the impossible and break the logic of this world over our collective knees!"

Though her mind is flooded by a thousand questions vying for dominance, the first one that wins is a simple, "...w-what?" Completely thrown, all the mysterious Magi can do is let her hand drop away from her shield and just stare.

It is then that you ask the 64,000-yen question. "Now who the hell are you, and would you be open to eating some cake later?"

That only seems to knock the woman for a loop even further; her left eyebrow twitches and her mouth hangs slightly agape. All in all, she looks totally poleaxed. Once again, the only intelligent utterance she can find for the situation is a mere, "What?" Sure enough, the thoughts running through her mind are equally fraught with confusion and uncertainty. 'In all the timelines I've been in, I've never seen an Incubator like this. That creature looks like Kyubey, he sounds like Kyubey... no, that's not quite right. His voice sounds like Kyubey, but its tone is a world apart. And the glasses...' Her gaze regards Norbey next, glaring at him. 'That thing looks like how I'd expect Kyubey to look... and act. Yet...'

Then, her eyes wander to Mami, looking her up and down and spotting the glinting yellow, cone-shaped jewel hanging by a string around her neck. 'A Soul Gem? No, this is different. It's... it's pulsing. Soul Gems don't pulse like that...' Finally, her vision falls upon you, and she speaks once more. "Know this, Incubator. I don't trust you. Not in the slightest. Once I'm finished tracking this Witch down... we will have a talk." She gazes at Mami as she says this, then turns away and leaps off the tarped crates.

As for the rest of you, you yourself climb onto the tarped crate, trying to spot the black-haired woman with no luck. Madoka and Sayaka sit down on a tarp to gather their wits, while Mami works on healing Norbey with her Soul Drill. "...Thanks, Mami!" Norbey 'paths out to everyone. "You're a lifesaver!"

"I'm not the one you should be thanking," Mami replies. "They saved you. I was just passing by."

"Thank you very much! My name is--"

You growl, speaking up so everyone can hear you. "Bakabey. That's what his name is."

"It's Norbey, actually." Norbey corrects you, showing no reaction to the dig you throw his way.

Madoka asks, "Are you the one who was calling out for help?"

"That's right, Madoka Kaname. And Sayaka Miki."

"Whoa, hang on a sec!" Sayaka says in shock. "How do you know our names?"

You leap off the tarped crate, landing back on your side of the area. "Yeah, how do you know their names, I wonder."

"I came here because I have a favor to ask of you both," Norbey replies. "I want you to make Contracts with me, and become Magical G-OW!" The next thing Norbey knows, he's careening through the air. "I don't understand," he complains, sailing past Mami's head, bouncing off the nearby stack of plywood sheets and landing in a heap on a collection of iron pipes with a clanging, clattering BANG.

Sayaka, Madoka, and Mami are now looking at you, the first two in shock and the last shaking her head and sighing, mainly because you're taking up Norbey's spot on the tarp, looking like a four-legged offensive lineman. "Not a snowball's chance in hell, you fuzzy bastard!"

"Whoa!" Sayaka yelped. "He just wanted to--"

You look at Mami with a serious expression...

[] "I think it's best if we get out of here. Get some distance from Bakabey."
[] "Mami, I think we need to tell them."
- [] At the Apartment, with the black-haired woman
--- [] Cakes all around!
- [] At the Apartment; just you, Mami, Sayaka, and Madoka
--- [] And cake, of course
- [] Right here, right now

[] Regarding the Magi-Witch System...
- [] Explain Soul Gems
- [] Explain the "responsibilities"
- [] Spill the beans on the whole system
--- [] "So why does yours look so different, Mami?"
 
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