Too bad she's so incompetent she doesn't simply use the mindstone to bulldoze over the fake soldier. She is inside a place where thought is made manifest, with an item that makes her god, and she losses due to lack of imagination.

She's just so arrogant and stupid that it's funny.
 
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I have mixed feelings about Wakanda, but T'Challa is a pretty good guy. I think Erik has dedicated way too much of his life to revenge at this point, but having him show up to try and make amends is such a wild idea, who knows. It feels a bit like he's planning to invite a Loki back home, though.

Since he's wondering how she had the intel, maybe he'll track Wanda down just to find out after the stuff with Killmonger plays out. I doubt they can have a good working relationship anymore but just being able to pass the info about the Infinity War on to them would be nice.

As it is, it seems like she's going to accidentally get everyone to network with each other as they all hunt for her. I am more than half expecting Tony to piece together enough of the scepter to make Ultron only for it to decide it wants revenge on Wanda.
 
Wanda: 'How difficult could it be?'
Programming: 'well, about that… hey, wanna find out what dying in a mindscape is like?'
Wanda: 'wha-'
Wanda: "The risk I took was calculated, but boy am I bad at math!"
At least let the scene finish playing out before we judge!

Wanda's never done the equivalent of psychic surgery on someone before. She's being relatively careful and going slow, because she doesn't want to make things worse. This is a setback, but it's far from a failure just yet.

When it comes down to it, Wanda is an insanely powerful magic user hopped up on the Heart-Shaped Herb with an Infinity Stone. The Winter Soldier is a super soldier with a metal arm. She's got this.

Too bad she's so incompetent she doesn't simply use the mindstone to bulldoze over the fake soldier. She is inside a place where thought is made manifest, with an item that makes her god, and she losses due to lack of imagination.

She's just so arrogant and stupid that it's funny.
I have to say, it's utterly fascinating to me the dichotomy that is presented to me by the comments on this story.

Wouldn't it be much more arrogant and incompetent to assume you can just bulldoze someone's fragile, damaged psyche with raw power using a tool you don't actually know how to use without risking potentially making things worse or doing permanent damage?

The Infinity Stones are powerful but can be extremely dangerous to use. Wanda isn't even close to mastering the Mind Stone -- she's only had it a couple of weeks and, as noted when she has been using it, it's much trickier to use without an interface of some kind to channel the power (e.g. the sceptre, Eye of Agamotto, etc).

As noted, this is her first time doing this sort of thing -- she's flying blind, learning as she goes. She already dealt with the Winter Soldier persona pretty easily when it attacked her. She just hasn't quite worked out the 'rules' of the mental landscape just yet.
 
My impression is that Hydra might have given Bucky dissociative identity disorder. Like Winter Soldier is a complete personality that's partially separate from Bucky. That comes out with some code words.

But Wanda Psyker powahs stronk. So whilst it might be an actual challenge, she won't lose.
 
I have to say, it's utterly fascinating to me the dichotomy that is presented to me by the comments on this story.
I think it's the episodic nature of fanfic released in real time. Wanda has had several blunders. The readership has pointed out (rightly in some cases, wrong in others, imo) that she just keeps failing from a lack of planning/assuming things are just going to work out because [hand waves at movies].

You ended the chapter on another perceived loss, which leaves some people to assume that Wanda stepped in it again.
 
I think it's the episodic nature of fanfic released in real time. Wanda has had several blunders. The readership has pointed out (rightly in some cases, wrong in others, imo) that she just keeps failing from a lack of planning/assuming things are just going to work out because [hand waves at movies].

You ended the chapter on another perceived loss, which leaves some people to assume that Wanda stepped in it again.

This. Wanda keeps making the same exact mistake over and over, and its annoying to see her never learn anything. I enjoy this story but not sure how much more of this same pattern I will stick around for. If something is gonna change, then great!
 
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As I mentioned in some earlier comments, we've hit a bit of a shift/tipping point in the story here. I obviously can't get into it without spoilers, but there'll be some interesting developments and plot progression soon.

I'm very interested to see what people think of the next few chapters.
 
Her constantly failing is getting a little old at this point. And in this situation doesn't even make any sense. You're telling me that a natural telepath armed with the mind Stone can't break Bucky's programming? It was already starting to come undone before she even started. And how does her killing the winter soldier representation somehow trigger an instant contingency like that. Hydra was using hypnotism and electric shock. Basically programming bucky with the mental equivalent of a cave man smashing rocks together. Hardly the sort of finesse needed to craft layered mental defenses and traps.

Edit - caught up on the comments. Guess I'll let you cook lol. My point stands though.
 
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I think it's the episodic nature of fanfic released in real time. Wanda has had several blunders. The readership has pointed out (rightly in some cases, wrong in others, imo) that she just keeps failing from a lack of planning/assuming things are just going to work out because [hand waves at movies].

You ended the chapter on another perceived loss, which leaves some people to assume that Wanda stepped in it again.
I actually meant more along the lines of there being both a vocal contingent who complain about Wanda being idiotic because she's not being careful or thinking things through enough, and a separate group that complain about Wanda being idiotic because she's not trying to immediately bulldoze every obstacle with brute force. Just complete opposite reactions meeting in the middle.

Her constantly failing is getting a little old at this point. And in this situation doesn't even make any sense. You're telling me that a natural telepath armed with the mind Stone can't break Bucky's programming? It was already starting to come undone before she even started. And how does her killing the winter soldier representation somehow trigger an instant contingency like that. Hydra was using hypnotism and electric shock. Basically programming bucky with the mental equivalent of a cave man smashing rocks together. Hardly the sort of finesse needed to craft layered mental defenses and traps.

Edit - caught up on the comments. Guess I'll let you cook lol. My point stands though.
I won't reiterate anything I've already said in my previous comments, but as a commenter on SB noted, Hydra's lack of superpowers almost makes it more difficult to deal with -- she's not dealing with something that was carefully crafted by an expert. They made a mess of him, over an extended period of time. She's dealing with decades of botched psychic surgery.

What happened isn't a Hydra contingency or trap -- she's poking around and found an "activate the Winter Soldier" trigger by accident because she's never done anything quite like this before and is still coming to grips with it.
 
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The problem or at least my problem with this is even if she somehow succeeds it wasn't due to previous experience, preparation or planning. It's basically doing the same thing over and over again and somehow through luck succeeding.


If this works for her then why change her approach? There's be no reason for development nor a reason to care because she didn't due it through her own efforts. It was her powers carrying her. It makes Agatha right. She's a person that doesn't deserve her powers if it's only because of said powers she wins.

Edit: This should go insanely wrong. She's a first timer dealing with this problem. Something as vulnerable as a mind. She could crush it by accident making Cap her enemy. Just like every other previous relationship she's had in the story so far.

If she has learned her lesson maybe she would have tested it previously or read books on how science thinks the mind works etc but this plan was spur of the moment.
 
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Just complete opposite reactions meeting in the middle.
Oh, that. You can't please everybody.

You're also cross posting on sites that have a strong grounding in hyper competent MCs, and you're writing someone inserted into someone who is arguably the strongest character in the MCU.

You're seeing a clash between those that expect every SI to act like David Xanatos, and the ones that expect the MCs with the biggest power-dick to slap everyone with their massive OPness.

I think you've managed to thread the needle of annoying both of them by having Wanda make plans, having said plans fail, and then having her scramble to recover without it being a decisive victory in her favor.

It's kind of impressive. Keep it up!
 
Wanda repeating the same mistakes make sense tbh. Like, for her it's been what, a week max since the start of the story? In this time, she had literally no time to sit down and relax, or even really think. She's hunted by two conspiracies, SHIELD and HYDRA, her first solution added a third conspiracy, then the next a fourth. Even her brother, her main ally who should be a source of comfort for her, is a source of stress and danger, with the secret that she bodysnatched Wanda.

Each mistake adds more pressure and danger to her situation, pushing her to faster and riskier attempts, which feed into her situation.

So yeah, bad decisions, but it makes sense. Just sucks for her. Honestly, the Bucky gambit is probably her safest try yet (and she's about to get beat up by the Winter Soldier for it (then again, now she's Black Panther+Scarlet Witch so what will he do? Break his arm on her face?).
 
Oh, that. You can't please everybody.

You're also cross posting on sites that have a strong grounding in hyper competent MCs, and you're writing someone inserted into someone who is arguably the strongest character in the MCU.

You're seeing a clash between those that expect every SI to act like David Xanatos, and the ones that expect the MCs with the biggest power-dick to slap everyone with their massive OPness.

I think you've managed to thread the needle of annoying both of them by having Wanda make plans, having said plans fail, and then having her scramble to recover without it being a decisive victory in her favor.

It's kind of impressive. Keep it up!
Yeah. It's a little funny -- I was actually expecting SB posters to be harsher than SV, but it's actually been the opposite.

Wanda repeating the same mistakes make sense tbh. Like, for her it's been what, a week max since the start of the story? In this time, she had literally no time to sit down and relax, or even really think. She's hunted by two conspiracies, SHIELD and HYDRA, her first solution added a third conspiracy, then the next a fourth. Even her brother, her main ally who should be a source of comfort for her, is a source of stress and danger, with the secret that she bodysnatched Wanda.

Each mistake adds more pressure and danger to her situation, pushing her to faster and riskier attempts, which feed into her situation.

So yeah, bad decisions, but it makes sense. Just sucks for her. Honestly, the Bucky gambit is probably her safest try yet (and she's about to get beat up by the Winter Soldier for it (then again, now she's Black Panther+Scarlet Witch so what will he do? Break his arm on her face?).
Yes to all of this, basically.
 
It's also kinda funny when people say that the mind stone should make this an instant win. Because that's clearly not how infinity stones work in this story.

There's been like half a dozen mentions that infinity stones are incredibly hard to wield without an interface. Whether that's an Uru gauntlet, an evil Uru sceptre, or the amulet of Agamotto(possibly also made from Uru? Idk how he got it, maybe Agamotto be scammin).

Having a nuclear reactor of magical mind energy is not going to make your first psychic surgery that much easier. And the fact that she can use it barehanded with any degree of precision is a massive feat.
 
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Chapter 15
Chapter 15

Jones waved her hand, indicating the banks of hardware that dominated one side of the room. "You detected them before, right? You can't just use all this to track her down again?" She snorted, looking decidedly unimpressed.

Tony started to bristle, but Bruce interjected before he could say anything. "The tracking algorithm isn't reliable anymore. The net's getting more and more holes in it every day—there's a limit on what we can ask people to do for us. Labs have got their own things they need to use their equipment for." He walked over to one of the monitors showing data from the algorithm and pointed at a barely discernible spike in one of the feeds. "There was a blip here in New York. Our equipment's sensitive enough to be able to narrow it down to Steve's apartment building. It was faint, below the threshold we'd set, so we didn't see it right away and didn't think to go looking until it was too late."

"You're sure it was a match? Why was the signal so faint?"

"We don't know," Tony said sullenly. "Any ideas that the experts in radiology here might not have thought of?"

Bruce was more conciliatory. "It could just be a blip in the background, but if it is it's pretty coincidental."

"Coincidences happen all the time." Jones folded her arms and frowned. "Wanda can… what're her powers again? She can teleport?"

"She creates portals in the air that connect two locations, among other things. We're not sure on the details yet, but they basically seem to be miniature wormholes of some kind."

"Right… and she knows you can track that thing she's carrying?"

"Yeah, she seemed to realise it when we caught up with her in New Delhi."

"If it was her, maybe she didn't actually come through? Opened a portal then closed it again?"

Clint leaned back against the wall next to Nat and exchanged a thoughtful glance with her. "That might explain it."

"You said her brother's fast—how fast? Could he have run through, grabbed Rogers and gone back super quick?"

"Easily." Nat found she was nodding along, but caught herself when she saw that Jones' frown had deepened.

"It's a neat answer, but I don't like it. Are the portals flashy? How quickly do they open? Would he not have had any chance to react? Is her brother really so fast that he'd be able to take down Mr America without a struggle and leave without any sort of sign left behind?" Jones looked around at them as she talked it through, obviously expecting Tony or someone else to interject or challenge one of her questions, but no one did. "There was nothing out of place in his apartment. It was like he got dressed then evaporated into thin air. If they'd hit him hard and fast, there'd have been something, right? And why take him in the first place?"

No one else seemed to be interested in answering, so Nat took the opportunity to voice her own concerns. "Wanda can control minds. They might be trying to subvert him."

Nat saw Jones go still at the mention of mind control, but a moment later she shook her head. "But then they'd have been extra cautious about being caught, right? Getting a mole into the enemy base is pointless if they detect you right away."

"This wasn't cautious enough?"

"Nah. You're not tracking her, you're tracking the thing she stole, right? And she knows that. If they were worried about being caught, wouldn't it make more sense to put it down somewhere safe for a moment, then kidnap Mr America?"

"She could be paranoid and not want to let go of it?" Tony said hesitantly, but it was pretty clear he was just arguing for argument's sake rather than because he thought Jones was wrong.

"We're missing something. Someone else could be trying to make it look like the Maximoffs took him, but that doesn't feel right either," Jones mused. After a few seconds, she looked over at Nat. "Is there any reason he might have gone willingly?"

Nat froze. Wanda had affected Steve's mind in New Delhi, but that had worn off pretty quickly. Hadn't it? A heavy weight seemed to settle in her stomach. From the meaningful glances being exchanged, she could tell that the rest of the team had had the same thought. She found herself running back through every conversation she'd had with Steve over the last few days. He'd been sympathetic to the Maximoffs, sure, but she was pretty sure Steve could empathise with anyone, so nothing had seemed out of character, but now…

Jones read the sudden silence correctly and nodded to herself. "So there is something?"

"Fucking hell," Clint swore. "I should have picked up on it. The sceptre…"

"His eyes were fine. No blue," Bruce protested half-heartedly. "I mean, none beyond the normal amount."

"His eyes were fine when we fought, I think," Tony said quietly. "I can pull the footage from my helmet to confirm."

Jones looked between them questioningly. "You want to fill me in, or…?"

Tony moved abruptly, stalking over to a chair and collapsing down into it. He looked tired. "No point dancing around it. We told you about her mind control. Loki's sceptre could do it, too, and it's pretty insidious. Long lasting. The sceptre is what gave the Maximoffs their powers and its power source is the thing hanging around Wanda's neck."

"Loki as in Thor's brother? Invaded New York a little while back with a space army?" Jones asked slowly. "That Loki?"

Thor, who'd been content to loom quietly in the background for most of the discussion, nodded morosely. "Even in death, my brother's foolhardy actions still plague us."

"Okay…" she gave Nat a hard look. "I'd thought they were just Enhanced. No one said anything about alien space god magic. Portals, mind control—anything else I should know?"

"Telekinesis, energy projection," Bruce answered. "That's all. We think." He shot her a sheepish, apologetic look.

"Great. She sounds like she's going to be a pain in the ass to deal with."

"But why take him, if he remained under her control?" Thor asked, circling back around to the questions Jones had been asking earlier. "Why now?"

"Who knows?" Nat shrugged. "They were after something specific, maybe. She got what she wanted, extracted the asset. We don't know that he was under her control, but until we can establish otherwise it'd be safer to assume anything he knows, she does as well."

"We should make some changes while we work this through. I'll get JARVIS to update security protocols. Change the locks, just in case." The door nearest to Stark slid open and he paused.

"Sorry to interrupt, we've had something come up," Maria Hill said as she stepped into the room, tablet held cradled in one hand. She paused and her eyes flicked over to Jones briefly, her expression turning questioning. Nat nodded briefly and she continued. "Police in South Africa rolled up a black-market arms operation based out of a coastal salvage yard after it got hit. The initial reports made it seem like it was a rival dealer, but one of the guys they arrested was rambling about 'something moving faster than the eye could see' and a 'red woman'."

"That sounds like the Maximoffs," Bruce said, perking up.

Stark snapped his fingers, forehead creased in thought. "Wait a minute. South African coast, arms dealer? Do we have a name?"

Looking back down at her tablet, Maria pursed her lips. "Ulysses Klaue."

"Klaue? I know that guy. From back in the day." Jones shot him an unimpressed look and he shrugged. "There are conventions, alright? You meet people. I didn't sell him anything."

"From what the witness said, it looks like they abducted Klaue so he could take them somewhere," Maria said. "Took their 'special stock', too, though it doesn't look like they were able to determine what that was."

Nat held out a hand expectantly and Maria brought her tablet over, tapping away at it to bring up a series of photos. Thor and Jones hung over each of Nat's shoulders as she looked over the pictures—several shots from what looked like some sort of weapons deal, focused on a rough, greasy-looking man with tribal-style tattoos peeking from the top of his shirt.

Stark was still talking in the background, partially to himself, his expression thoughtful. "He was talking about finding something new, a game-changer. It was all very Ahab."

Thor pointed to the bottommost picture. "This?"

Jones stepped away, clearly feeling a little crowded, as Stark joined the huddle around the tablet. "It's a tattoo, I don't think he had it back then."

"Those are tattoos," Thor clarified. "This is a brand."

"What is that? The symbol?"

"JARVIS?" Tony spoke to the air. "Can you look this up for us?"

"Running a search now, sir," the smooth, synthesised voice came from seemingly everywhere and nowhere at once and Nat caught Jones looking around, trying to determine its source. "Pulling up a translation on screen."

Bruce turned back to his monitor, which had switched over from the gamma algorithm to a replica of the symbol, explanatory notes scrolling alongside it. "Oh, yeah. It's a word in an African dialect meaning 'thief'… in a much less friendly way."

"What dialect?" Jones asked.

Bruce squinted at the screen. "Wakanada? Uh… Wak-Wakanda."

It was almost imperceptible—if Nat hadn't already been looking in his direction, she might not have noticed it—but Tony went still as soon as Bruce managed to get through the name of the country. "Tony?" she prompted him.

He shot her a pensive look. "If this guy got out of Wakanda with some of their trade goods…"

"I don't follow," Bruce said, confused. "What comes out of Wakanda?"

"The strongest metal on Earth."

"Vibranium?" Nat tilted her head to the side. "Like Steve's shield?"

"Oh, now that can't be a coincidence, can it?" asked Clint.

"Took Klaue, took his stock. Took Steve, took his shield. The witness said Klaue was going to take them somewhere?"

Maria nodded. "That's what it says."

"They're scooping up vibranium left and right. Think they've decided to go right for the source?" Tony said, stroking his chin thoughtfully.

"Can we reach out to Wakanda? They're pretty isolationist if I recall correctly, but they might work with us if we warn them about what the Maximoffs can do," Nat said as she handed the tablet back to Maria. Turning to Jones, she cocked her head to the side and shot her a questioning look. "Want to hang around for a bit? We might need your eye."

"…I suppose I can help out." The PI shrugged, pulling a face. "I really don't like mind controllers."

"Preaching to the choir here, sister," said Tony as he stepped past them. "I'll get onto those security protocol changes. Welcome to the team."



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I grabbed at the metal fingers wrapped around my throat in a panic, desperately trying to pry them off. My efforts met with mild success, easing the crushing pressure just enough that I was able to suck in a small amount of much-needed air. Even though Steve was seemingly as caught off-guard by Bucky's sudden attack as I was, not being stuck inside a mental construct meant that he'd reacted much quicker than I had and already had his friend in a sleeper hold, one bicep locked around Bucky's neck to cut off the flow of blood to his brain.

Between my mild success at stopping him from crushing my windpipe and Steve on his back, Bucky was forced to give up on me to focus on keeping himself in the fight. He shoved me back with a savage thrust and I landed painfully on the chair that I'd been sitting on when we started. The flimsy wood splintered as I went down, dazed and gasping for air like a beached fish. Ignoring the blossom of pain from what was probably a new set of chair-shaped bruises, I shakily probed at my neck with my fingers, confirming to myself that it was still intact and he hadn't just torn my throat out.

While I hesitated, Bucky grabbed Steve's arm with his metal one, prying it away from his neck, then bodily threw himself backwards. Steve held on grimly as he was slammed into the wall—once, twice, three times—his grip loosening with each impact until Bucky was able to dislodge him and flip him forward over his shoulder. Steve crashed down onto the remaining chair, smashing it to kindling.

I flailed a hand at Bucky, pulling at him with wisps of red telekinetic energy to try to run him head-first into the opposite wall, but instead of being caught off-balance he leaned into it, stepping forward to run up the wall before killing the momentum with a backflip and landing lightly back on his feet. As I processed what had just happened, he turned and lunged toward me, metal arm outstretched.

My body reacted without any conscious input from my brain, one foot tucking itself under me to launch myself forward, ducking smoothly under his arm. Bucky was just as fast, turning the lunge into a reverse elbow strike to try to catch me as I moved past him, but I twisted as I straightened up and blocked his arm with the palms of both my hands. There was a barely-noticeably pause as both of us were surprised at how quickly I'd managed to respond to his attacks, then Steve joined the fray, coming in with a sweeping kick to Bucky's legs.

I bounced back and watched for a second as the two of them exchanged a rapid series of blows and counter-blows. My own enhanced reflexes had let me keep up with the Winter Soldier briefly, but I severely doubted my ability to do so for more than a few seconds. Steve and Bucky's physical enhancements at the very least matched what I'd gained from the Heart-Shaped Herb, and even though I'd had some hand-to-hand training during my time with HYDRA, it was pretty clear I was an amateur compared to the two of them.

"Alright, enough," I said, raising my hand again and taking firm hold of the power that was bubbling up within me, my magic responding easily to the surge of adrenaline the fight had caused. Red strands of chaos magic speared out, bright and strong, and slammed directly into Bucky, lifting him in the air before flattening him against the far wall. He tried to struggle, but gave up quickly when he realised there was no give in my telekinetic grip, electing to glower impotently at me instead.

Steve had followed Bucky's movements with his guard up but, once he realised that his friend was no longer a threat, he turned back to me, concern in his eyes. "You okay?"

"No harm done," I said, my voice hoarse and a bit shaky. I touched my throat again absently. Breathing hurt a bit and I imagined that I'd probably have some ugly red marks on my neck if not outright bruising. My shoulders shuddered involuntarily. If I'd been a little slower to react, or if I hadn't been enhanced by the Heart-Shaped Herb, the Winter Soldier would have probably just crushed my larynx.

Steve didn't look convinced. He spared a quick glance at Bucky to confirm he was immobilised before he turned his full attention to me, stepping in close. "May I?"

I nodded, then inhaled sharply as he reached out and gently took hold of my chin, lifting it slightly as he inspected my neck. I was suddenly hyper-conscious of his fingertips on my skin and how close he was standing to me, to the point where it was a struggle to maintain my focus on keeping Bucky pinned against the far wall. Well, that was pathetic. I hadn't realised how utterly touch-starved I was. "Uh, I said we could do that before we went after Bucky. I don't think now's a good time," I tittered nervously.

He shot me an exasperated look, though I thought I saw the corner of his mouth twitching as he stopped himself from smiling. His piercing blue eyes stayed locked with mine for a moment as he very carefully tilted my head slightly to the left and right, probably just checking to see if the movement would make me wince or whatever. With any luck, he wouldn't be able to see the genuine blush rising in my cheeks through the flush of exertion from the fight.

After what felt like both an incredibly short few seconds and an actual eternity, he let go of me, seemingly satisfied that no serious damage had been done. I cleared my throat and looked away, straightening my dress to give my hands something to do as I stepped awkwardly past him and looked at Bucky. This was good. This was progress. Steve was treating me like a teammate, not a barely trusted enemy. I allowed myself a small measure of hope. "Okay. Let's just take a minute or two then I'll go back in."

Steve made a small noise of surprise. "You want to try again? He could have killed you."

"Well, yeah, he caught me off-guard, but he isn't going to get a second chance to do that. I should be able to maintain my hold on him for as long as we need. I'll keep him bound and you just… be ready to jump in if something goes wrong. Again."

I felt his eyes on the back of my head for a long moment before he spoke again. "Are you sure?"

"I'm sure," I said, nodding. "Bucky's a good man who's had terrible things done to him. I can help. Who would I be if I refused just because it might be a little dangerous?"

"…do you know what went wrong?"

"I'm not sure. This is more art than science—I just need to take it slow, be careful, and work out the best way to deal with what's in his head."

"Okay. If that happens again, though…" he trailed off warningly.

"We'll reassess. Promise."

As we spoke, I stared at Bucky, walking myself back through what had happened in his mental landscape. My magic had overwhelmed the Winter Soldier persona easily enough when I'd encountered it, but 'killing' it wasn't the answer. Then again, if I could bind it, might that not be at least a temporary solution in itself? If I could restrain the Winter Soldier persona, all I needed to do was use an ongoing enchantment instead of an ad-hoc expression of magic. I hadn't actually tried to make an ongoing effect before, but it was clearly something I was capable of from Wanda's showings in the original timeline. The only issue was that it would probably make Bucky dependent on me to keep it going until we were able to deprogram him more thoroughly.

I examined the threads of chaos magic woven around Bucky's body, then touched my chest and closed my eyes, sending my awareness inside myself to carefully trace the shape of the wards that Mordo had placed on me. The sorcerous magic was far more rigid and structured than my own, but maybe I could use the wards as a little bit of a model. After a few moments of examination, I opened my eyes and tweaked the way my magic was flowing through the telekinetic bindings holding Bucky, tying them off in a similar way before releasing my concentration.

The bindings held and I smiled to myself. They wouldn't last for that long, maybe a few minutes at most. I had power to spare, so I'd never really focused on trying to make my magical effects particularly energy-efficient, but now that I understood how to do it, I could practice and improve.

I made a small noise of frustration in the back of my throat. This would work a lot better if I could get a better understanding of the 'battery' style enchantment that Mordo had placed on Pietro. I'd been feeding small amounts of magic into it on a regular basis, but hadn't taken the time to really examine it in any detail. It'd be easier to do something similar to it if I had it in front of me.

"Uh, Wanda? You're glowing."

I blinked, the non-sequitur dragging me out of my thoughts. "Huh? Thank you?"

"Your jacket."

I looked down. There was a noticeable orange glow coming from inside my jacket pocket and it took me a second to understand what was happening before I yanked it off in a panic and threw it across the room. "Shield!" I yelled, flicking a hand to the side of the room and yanking Captain America's shield from where it sat propped against the wall with a small jolt of telekinetic energy. I ducked behind Steve as he caught the shield and we both fell into a crouch, the Avenger protecting himself with the shield and me with his body.

Several long seconds passed as nothing happened. "What…?" Steve asked hesitantly.

"Uh, maybe a bomb?" The orb Kaecilius had given me had started glowing and I had no idea why.

"'Maybe'?"

I was quiet for a few more seconds, then cautiously straightened up to look at where my jacket lay in a crumpled heap on the far side of the room. The glow remained steady with no indication it was getting stronger or about to do anything else. I cleared my throat again, slightly embarrassed, absently fixing up my dress as I realised that a strap had fallen off one of my shoulders. "I might just be getting a call?"

Almost as if in answer to my words, the familiar sight of a sorcerous portal sparked into existence above my jacket, quickly expanding to reveal Kaecilius standing on the other side. As he stepped through, I caught a glimpse of a heavily forested area behind him before the gateway closed.

"Ms Maximoff." The sorcerer placed a hand on his chest and inclined his head respectfully. "It is a pleasure to see you again. I hope this isn't a bad time?"
 
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Oh man, I don't know how I'll feel if Wanda#2 ends up getting Wakanda to work with the Avengers on the basis of their mutual failures in diplomacy?

As far as mutual enemies go Wanda is much less complicated than Zemo. Both groups enjoyed the same Wanda Experience

Diplomacy-

Jedi Mind Trick-

Fleeing through a hole with her brother and a precious artifact-
 
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Oh man, I don't know how I'll feel if Wanda#2 ends up getting Wakanda to work with the Avengers on the basis of their mutual failures in diplomacy?
Nope their filthy colonizers remember. Even in the OG black panther he only worked with them to find his father's murderer due to needing their help. Right now the Avengers are also in the dark and don't have much more then them.

Also their secret would have to come out of they hope to contribute anything to the search.
 
Just want to say, you're doing great Author, this being updated lights up my day :D Please ignore the negative nancies with not a kind word coming out of their ungrateful mouths! Imagine getting so worked up about a story being provided to you completely for free? Just choosing to sling shit at the story and author as though you can't just click off of it at any time to go read hundreds of pages of other stories on this site alone? Or, y'know, go write your own? Because it's a funny little detail I've noticed, checking their pages, and finding them all completely barren of content. Very brave this side of the fence isn't it? The sheer ingratitude is so sad, it's funny. I expect better from SV tbh.

So. This is actually perhaps auspicious? Kaecillius might know a thing or 2 about mind magics, he'd seem like the sort to delve into that kind of thing. He might be able to guide Wanda here? Either way, I love his entrance, just unfailingly polite. He was one of my favourite MCU villains for his demeanour alone and you're capturing it very well. "Mr Doctor?" "It's Strange." "Maybe." Cracks me up every time. Thanks again Author, keep it up! ;)
 
Just want to say, you're doing great Author, this being updated lights up my day :D Please ignore the negative nancies with not a kind word coming out of their ungrateful mouths! Imagine getting so worked up about a story being provided to you completely for free? Just choosing to sling shit at the story and author as though you can't just click off of it at any time to go read hundreds of pages of other stories on this site alone? Or, y'know, go write your own? Because it's a funny little detail I've noticed, checking their pages, and finding them all completely barren of content. Very brave this side of the fence isn't it? The sheer ingratitude is so sad, it's funny. I expect better from SV tbh.

So. This is actually perhaps auspicious? Kaecillius might know a thing or 2 about mind magics, he'd seem like the sort to delve into that kind of thing. He might be able to guide Wanda here? Either way, I love his entrance, just unfailingly polite. He was one of my favourite MCU villains for his demeanour alone and you're capturing it very well. "Mr Doctor?" "It's Strange." "Maybe." Cracks me up every time. Thanks again Author, keep it up! ;)
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I know it's easy to get annoyed with some comments, but let's not get caught up in the negativity.

I'm afraid you might be a bit disappointed if you're expecting too much from Kaecilius ... Mads Mikkelsen is a phenomenal actor and did great work with what little he was given, but the character was not served well by the script and we just don't get much that makes him too interesting to me.
 
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