Let's Read: The General (By David Drake)

Also, if I actually manage to finish up to the Chosen, I'll be going to skip the Reformer and Tyrant and jump straight to the Duisberg duology.

Because seriously, the Hafardine duology is BAD.

I also want to rant about the map, but it's so small and unreadable that I am not sure if I can.

I believe there are a couple mentions of more charitable aspects of the Civil Government's religion, especially ones that can be inferred to not solely be a military thing (like the various nun/doctors that show up a lot). There's a whole part about confessing sins, which seems to be basically the same as Christian doctrine. But the books are really laser focused on part of Raj's point of view, only really showing the military stuff so a lot of things that aren't related to that aren't developed.

I'd agree that the religion definitely is a pretty imperialistic one from what we see, but slotting it in as just that seems to miss a bunch.
Well, certainly. They ARE the Christianity-expy. Ironically the actual Christians are expy of Jews in the Early Middle Ages.
 
I believe there are a couple mentions of more charitable aspects of the Civil Government's religion, especially ones that can be inferred to not solely be a military thing (like the various nun/doctors that show up a lot). There's a whole part about confessing sins, which seems to be basically the same as Christian doctrine. But the books are really laser focused on part of Raj's point of view, only really showing the military stuff so a lot of things that aren't related to that aren't developed.

I'd agree that the religion definitely is a pretty imperialistic one from what we see, but slotting it in as just that seems to miss a bunch.

Plus, in the books, a lot of the Church officials that Raj has to deal with are higher-ranking ones; he remarks in I think the fourth book that it actually bothers him that he's known plenty of decent Star Church priests and so on - specifically mentioning the nuns and priest-doctors accompanying the army as medical services, various Army chaplains, and the local priest at his home and demesne of Hillchapel when he was a child, who Raj remembers quite fondly - but a very high proportion of the upper ranks he's got to deal with are just total bell-ends.
 
Well, certainly. They ARE the Christianity-expy. Ironically the actual Christians are expy of Jews in the Early Middle Ages.
The statement was that it doesn't have any of that. That it's just about conquering the world, which misses the point that conquering the world is Raj's goal specifically because of Center, and that there are other aspects of the religion that get sidelined due to narrative focus. Hell, Raj is noted as a bit of a zealot due to how certain he is about reconquering the world several times. And that the reason it's really desired, outside of Center's programing, is that society is extremely unstable on Beleuve due to a number of reasons, even ignoring the ideological preferences of the writers.

Also, if I actually manage to finish up to the Chosen, I'll be going to skip the Reformer and Tyrant and jump straight to the Duisberg duology.

Because seriously, the Hafardine duology is BAD.

I also want to rant about the map, but it's so small and unreadable that I am not sure if I can.
Honestly, I didn't feel Chosen was any better than the Hafardine stuff. Hell, in some ways I think it's worse.
 
Honestly, I didn't feel Chosen was any better than the Hafardine stuff. Hell, in some ways I think it's worse.
True, it's not really better in worldbuilding. But at least you can have the satisfaction of not-Draka getting what they deserve.
 
In this chapter, we see... the Canadians!


We start this chapter with POV from a common trooper. Of course, being a Descotter cavalryman, Trooper Saynchez would be a yeoman farmer and probably takes an offense at being called a common trooper.

In any case, he gets quickly taken out by M'lewis and his trusty garotte, tasked by Raj to test the unit's alertness.


We can see that Raj has learned well from his near-fatal mistake in Chapter 10. Funnily enough, Brass Ass/brazaz is a name for the Brigade aristocracy as well, although I am not sure if Stirling had that in mind when he wrote the upper paragraph.

It seems like Descott is the only province in the Civil Government that doesn't have a brutally subjugated underclass. It is also, not by coincidence, the source of most of the Civil Government's best soldiers. Some join for wealthy or glory or duty or some combination of those motivations; I believe M'lewis joined because the judge thought his skill as a thief meant that he had potential as a scout.

He's probably having a grand time terrorizing high-and-mighty yeoman farmers with the blessing of the bossman.

The Descotters are irritated by having to do "peon work". Managing the army is an interesting balance, as Raj has to humble and teach the proud cavalry troopers while convincing the infantry that they're worth something.

Jorg Menyez, our honest infantry commander is back and is still suffering from a dog allergy, which barred his career in cavalry service and sent him into a less prestigious infantry branch.

We see that Bellevue has another exotic mount in addition to the giant dogs. Perhaps in part of that world, someone had managed to domesticate local sauroids and ride on them.


We also see just how badly the infantry battalions are mistreated and neglected. It is noted, both in story chapters and appendix, that the infantry units are regarded as only useful for garrison and police duties, and considering that everyone steals from them, including their officers, I cannot see they would be particularly good at those duties, either.

As noted in the last paragraph, it is partially due to social differences. The cavalry, as seen with the Descotters or Stenson's 2nd Gendermarie, is either free farmers or aristocrats, and they are mostly volunteers or enlisted as part of the tradition of service in exchange for a tax deduction, while the infantry is made up of destitute conscripts.

Note that this is far from how later Roman infantry force was treated. Even as cavalry became more important in the Roman military tactics, infantry remained as the core of the Roman army and remained just as solid as during the earlier antiquity.

This is, however, a popular pop-culture narrative of 'degeneration/barbarization' of the Roman army, about how the reliable infantry Legionaries are degraded and mistreated while the formerly auxiliary cavalry became important and pampered, and how that destroyed the Roman military might and Glorious Tradition of Roman Legion. Needless to say, that's complete bullshit. It also draws from the worst description of the Limitanei, who, okay, were often neglected compared to the Comitatenses mobile army, but 1) Limitanei units contained cavalry, and 2) the Comitatenses were mostly infantry themselves.

I'm going to defend this decision. Yes, the Civil Government is supposed to be the late Romans, but they're the late Romans in a state of terminal decline. If Raj wasn't here with an angel to turn things around, the Gubernio Civil would be a province of the Colony in a couple of decades.

Maybe they did have a proper infantry army a century ago, but the civil service kept embezzling the money. Maybe the recruits for that army became worse and worse as the Civil Government completed a transition to serfdom. I think there are several credible ways for an army to fall apart, even if the pop-culture narrative of the Roman army is simply wrong.

Most importantly, the decision works from a narrative perspective, because it puts Raj at a disadvantage. If his infantry were already well-trained professionals, his job would be much, much easier.

And we finally get to see the Skinners, aka the Quebecois (or more likely, the Metis people), and Bellevue's equivalent to the Huns. They have been hired by the Civil Government to fight for them.


What charming descriptions. The 'two-meter sauroid-killer rifles' (15mm, btw) are certainly a reference to the famous Hunnic asymmetric bow. And they somehow, somehow, can shoot them on dogback with terrifying accuracy.

I guess the massive flop-eared hounds are Newfoundland dogs?


But they are certainly very good at what they are paid for.


As I said, they are Rude French Canadian, crossed with the Dothraki and fighting T-Rex on the steppe.


I am pretty sure that combination will kill man, or at least blind them...

Raj informs their chief, with some difficulties in communication, that there's going to be a great feast, and he replies:

Another reference to the culture before the Fall. I don't know what exactly he is talking with those French-sounding words, though.

Skinners are...well, the narrative always describes them as very bad enemies. They're even worse as enemies than they are as allies, even if it's close sometimes.

Next scene, Raj is back in the city with Gerrin and Fatima. Fatima had been manumitted and had a baby with Gerrin or Foley, who is adopted by childless Gerrin. Considering her circumstance, I'd say she's living pretty well.


Also, Tzetzas is raising his usual stink about how much money the infantry is drawing from. He's also worming his ways back into Barholm's favor, despite Anne's machinations against him.


Fatima explains her reasoning for why she defected to the Civil Government. Honestly, I understand her choice.

After that, Kaltin and Gerrin have a conversation about Suzette. Kaltin thinks Suzette is an unfaithful bitch of a wife. Gerrin, however, sees exactly what she is doing, and how important she is to Raj, who is definitely NOT a political operator and will be eaten alive in the East Residence's snakepit of court without her.

Which is kind of strange. You'd think Kaltin, someone with a reputation as a womanizer, would be able to see what she's doing.

Next, Raj is receiving intelligence from Muzzaf, who is now pretty much a permanent fixture to Raj's staff, while the city of Sandoral is watching the fireworks. And he reports this:

A spy would not be surprising, considering that Sandoral is at the path of the Colonial invasion route.


This chapter ends with Raj deciding to personally lead the reconnaissance against the Colonials. This is something he'll do several times throughout the books, to the dismay of his men.

Fatima won the lottery.

This would be a very, very different story if we saw the world through the eyes of one of the kids like her who wasn't taken in by two nice officers. No blame to Fatima here- she's alive and with people who don't treat her like dirt- but it does drive him just how genuinely awful life on Bellevue is, and just how ugly things are for the civilians.

Muzzaf gets his redemption story, and Raj gets someone else with a skillset he lacks. A great deal of leadership is knowing how to delegate properly. The rest of it is being able to trust the people you delegate to. I feel that the Civil Government is actually pretty good at, well, civil government. They know how to do things. It's just that anything they want to do is disrupted by a host of corrupt officials or officers who insist on taking their cut.

Tzetzas is one of the villains of the story, but why is he really doing anything wrong? He's looking out for himself and his family, like everyone else. If some poor infantry soldiers don't get paid, why is that his problem?

Well, it will eventually be his problem when the Colony takes New Residence and impales the ruling class, but the Civil Government's ruling class is excessively focused on their own internal issues.

"Raj personally leads reconnaissance" is a somewhat dubious decision, but a great deal of his success depends upon leading from the front and inspiring his troops with his presence. He has to build personal loyalties among his officers and troops, because the Gubernio Civil is terrible at maintaining institutional loyalty. Unfortunately, this means that any general who is good at his job will have an army that is loyal to him, not the Governor.
 
I'll note the Skinner cheiftan was planning to sacrifice to Jesus Christ and the Wendigos.
I doubt the Christos will see their faith and that of Skinners as the same thing, especially considering the Wendigo thing.

But come to think of it, that superficial similarities might be a reason why the Christians are not particularly liked in the Civil Government.
 
I'll note the Skinner cheiftan was planning to sacrifice to Jesus Christ and the Wendigos.

I suspect that the Skinner faith may have undergone some minor deviations from Christianity.

I doubt the Christos will see their faith and that of Skinners as the same thing, especially considering the Wendigo thing.

But come to think of it, that superficial similarities might be a reason why the Christians are not particularly liked in the Civil Government.

Maybe, but I doubt the Civil Government will draw that many comparisons between Jesus Christ and "Juscristo". It's entirely possible to look down on Christians as unbelievers, but they are at least provisionally humans; the Civil Government seems to view Skinners as an entirely different form of life.
 
Fatima won the lottery.

This would be a very, very different story if we saw the world through the eyes of one of the kids like her who wasn't taken in by two nice officers. No blame to Fatima here- she's alive and with people who don't treat her like dirt- but it does drive him just how genuinely awful life on Bellevue is, and just how ugly things are for the civilians.

Muzzaf gets his redemption story, and Raj gets someone else with a skillset he lacks. A great deal of leadership is knowing how to delegate properly. The rest of it is being able to trust the people you delegate to. I feel that the Civil Government is actually pretty good at, well, civil government. They know how to do things. It's just that anything they want to do is disrupted by a host of corrupt officials or officers who insist on taking their cut.

Fatima's a really interesting character and in the right author's hands her story could be a great novel of its own. She was in a bad situation in a terrible world but she had the guts and wits to repeatedly grab at any chance she had to survive and prosper. To me it's one of the many small things that set Drake apart from the more grimdark type of authors. Fatima is a former slave and rape victim (even if she probably doesn't of herself like that, because Bellevue sucks and a non-violent rape doesn't count) but she isn't defined by that and has a lot of agency throughout the series, and uses that to make her life and the lives of people around her better. Likewise Gerrin and Barton could just treat her as a slave concubine like would be normal for their society but instead, despite their initial introduction as dubiously-useful fops, show her kindness and get rewarded for it. The same goes for what you say about Raj showing leadership and building trust. In Drake's stories, those may not be sufficient to guarantee success, but they're absolutely necessary for it, and he doesn't gratuitously punish characters for loyalty or decency.

Also, Fatima and Suzette do a great job of showing how writing milSF in a male-dominated setting is no excuse for not passing the Bechdel test, back in the 90s.
 
"Raj personally leads reconnaissance" is a somewhat dubious decision, but a great deal of his success depends upon leading from the front and inspiring his troops with his presence.
Also, another parallel with the Belisarius series. He occasionally did that as well, nearly getting himself killed in the process in one of the books when his opponent predicted he'd do exactly that and nearly got him with some cavalry forces.
 
Huh.
I think I read all the Raj Whitehall books like a decade ago, except the ones with McDaniel. I especially remember the Chosen book. Drake is still one of my favorite milSF and Baen authors.

Watched.
 
I think I read all the Raj Whitehall books like a decade ago, except the ones with McDaniel. I especially remember the Chosen book. Drake is still one of my favorite milSF and Baen authors.
You mean Tony Daniel? I actually liked The Heretic and The Savior, due to the idea of Center having an almost-equal opponent instead of just humans, and also because the preceding books were pretty bad.
 
The Forge - Chapter 13
"Yer shouldn't be doin' this, ser. 'Tis not yer place." Da Cruz's scar-stiffened face was rigid with disapproval. "Er at leastways, yer should be takin' me wit' yer."
Chapter 13 starts with Raj on the field with the scouting force, despite the protests from his men.

They're right: I'm supposed to be commanding thirty battalions, not leading forty men on a forlorn hope scouting mission. He put the inner voice aside; arguably it was worse for the men to see the commander vacillate than to make a possibly-stupid decision, Spirit knew everyone fucked up now and then . . . and things were going well in Sandoral . . . and the Spirit knew it was the one place on Earth . . . Bellevue he didn't want to be, right now.
Honestly, I do agree with Da Cruz. More than one commander died because they needlessly exposed themselves to the danger.

And Raj is slowly starting to come around to the idea that Bellevue is not Earth, or 'This Earth'.

High overhead Maxiluna was a thin sliver of orange-tinted silver, and the smaller, brighter Miniluna had set an hour ago.
The sky with multiple moons, one of the most common tropes for an alien world.

Salutes, embraces, fists slapped together. A voice inside his skull, this risk is strictly unnecessary.

Shut up. observe.

I said, shut up: you're the voice of god, but I'm a man, Spirit take it, and this is something I'm going to do! There was a pause that took no time in the observable world. Then:

stochastic effects may randomize even the most rigorous Calculation, the voice of Center said; it was the first time he had heard Center lapse into religious jargon. Consciousness returned to the world of men.
Raj may think Center is an angel, but he's also not afraid to tell it to fuck off. This is something that doesn't appear often in the series, especially in the later books, a clash between the human protagonist and the Center.

Still, though, Raj should remember what happened the last time he ignored the Center. Also, the fact that he thinks Center is speaking in scripture-speech is... hilarious.

They cross the river, into the hostile territory to find the enemy army.

"Avocati," Raj whispered back. The common dog-fodder along the river, a noxious, flabby sucker-mouthed bottom-feeding scavenger fish with no backbone; the main drawback was that it made the dogs' breath even worse than usual.
Avocati, also written as Advocati in later books. Taken from the Spanish word abogado, which means lawyer.

On the second day, they discover the Colonial army, and it is big. We also get more information about how the Colony organizes its troops.
The skin around his lips was off-white . . . well, it was stunning. The date groves and norias of the riverside were lost in a sea of tents, orderly clumps and rows, dog-lines running for kilometers, artillery parks with everything from the common pompoms to heavy muzzle loading howitzers. Supplies were being unloaded from riverboats, pyramids of sacks and crates and bundles; men marched through the streets of the tent city, the spikes of their helmets glinting; parties of cavalry dashed across the plain round about. In the center of the camp was a huge white and scarlet tent like a miniature mountain range. Banners hung in the still morning air above it, or fluttered briefly; the sound of the camp was like surf, spiced and peaked with the sharp music of drums and the shrill of fifes.

(...)

"I make it . . . twenty thousand, or a little more," he said, writing and sketching on a pad by his head.

"Much better," Raj said. He took the drawing and laid it before M'lewis. "See, each of the standard tent holds a Colonist squad; six men, smaller than ours. So many men to a gun; banners are graded, like in our regular army. Sample a section, figure out how many equivalents, and you've got a reliable estimate, the same way you'd number a sheep herd quickly." A pause. "You're counting too many camp followers, I think, Barton: they're building that bridge with peasants they've rounded up, mostly."

Down by the water's edge the Colonial forces had dug and pushed a huge ramp of earth and timbers down into the current of the Drangosh. Two enormous cables of flax lay coiled and ready at the head of it, rope as thick as the chest-height of the men who handled it; behind the coils further lengths were anchored in timber and stone. Working parties upstream anchoring other cables that were small only by comparison. Across the river a similar ramp was being built; Foley turned his glasses on one, then the other.

"Little men in loincloths, and bigger men in pantaloons working stripped to the waist," he said.

"Combat engineers, troops and labor-levies," Raj said. "I've read of this in some of the older chronicles. You warp the cables across on both sides, then slide . . . barges, purpose-made pontoons, even rafts . . . underneath and secure them. Brushwood and planking, then a layer of earth, and you've got a good solid bridge. It won't last forever, or even through a spring flood, but you can march an army over it like it was a firm made road for a couple of months. Much better than boats, faster, more secure . . . Get the banners, Barton: full sketches, so we'll know who's here."
Something like this, their impressive engineering capability, is why the Colony is more than a match for the Civil Government.

A group of turtle shapes, down near where the supply boats were landing, armored cars.
Now, this is interesting. Armored cars are not exactly something that can be easily made and be practical with the technology of 1860-80, but here we are.

Unfortunately, just as Raj and his men were about to send information back to Sandoral and return, they encounter a Colonial patrol. The scene then changes to Sandoral's heliograph tower.

Abdullah ibn 'Azziz (written as Abdullah al'Azziz here. As I said, this series has some glaring inconsistency) arrives with his master's missive to Suzette, conveniently in time to listen to Raj's heliographic message. This is the man, the newcomer from the Colony, that Muzzaf found suspicious in the last chapter. Interestingly, Suzette lets him stay around.

Then Suzette marches straight to Captain Grammek Dinnalsyn, Raj's artillery commander. Her personality and force of authority is enough to get the captain to follow her order. Suzette is clearly up to something, as Dinnalsyn notes:

There was something going on, you could tell that even from the palisaded camp outside the wall. A half-dozen carriages had left on the north road, light racing-shells crammed with city men in drab clothes that looked utterly out of place. And a suspicious number of peasants from the farms west and north were coming in, with food and what looked like household goods on their oxcarts and pushcarts and backs.

We then return to the Colonial land, where Raj is about to ambush the patrol.
There were twenty men in the Colonist patrol, men subtly different from those Raj had seen before. Their jellabas were in a mottled pattern, a few of the beards red or brown-blond, and the faces beneath were fairer-skinned compared to the general run of Colonist, or Descotters for that matter. Berbers, Raj decided. Kabyle berbers from the Gederosian highlands, the Jebal al-B'heed.
As you can see, the Colony is composed of various Islamic people. But curiously, Turko-Iranian people are completely absent in the Colony, as well as the South and Southeast Asian descents (the Sub-Saharan Africans are represented by the Zanj, although they and the Colony don't like each other). I can see why the latter is missing (a lot of people don't know that Islam is a popular religion in SEA) but the absence of the former is harder to explain.

They manage to take down the patrol, but the rest of the Colonials have surely heard the commotion. And there is a casualty - one of the troopers is critically wounded. They can't move him, but they also don't want to leave him still alive to the scavengers, or worse, the enemy. Since suicide is a sin in the Star Church just as it is in Christianity, Folely does the necessary deed and mercy-kills him.

Next, Suzette is trying to convince the ferryman to carry her and the artillerymen across the river.

"I can't take the ferry across now, Messa," the man said, wringing his hands. "That's Colony territory over there, and with war coming, the owners would crucify me. Anyone could walk up and seize it."

Presumably he was speaking metaphorically, since only the stokers in the hold of the steam ferry were slaves and liable for private punishment of that extent.

(...)

"I," she said, stepping closer to the sweating man in a mechanic's leather tunic and cotton-duck trousers, "am Messa Suzette Emmenalle Forstin Hogor Wenqui Whitehall, Lady of Hillchapel. My husband is Honorable the Brigadier Messer Raj Ammenda Halgern da Luis Whitehall, Whitehall of Hillchapel, Hereditary Supervisor of Smythe parish, and commander of this territory under martial law."

Her voice was very calm, almost friendly. "Goodman, your employers can have you dismissed and beaten. My husband can actually have you crucified, and will if this boat is not ready to move very shortly." She reached out with an index finger, tapping the air in front of his nose in time to her words. "Do-you-understand-me?"

He bobbed wordlessly and turned, screaming at his subordinates to make steam, quickly.
That was easy, and she didn't even have to break his finger-bone or two.

"Turn in here," Raj said.

A map glowed between him and reality, an overview of the route back north up the east bank. The quickest way was picked out in green, and every time they came to a fork in the tangled, knotted chain of erosion furrows the light strobed about it. Their position was a bead, a cool blue bead that slipped northward, ahead of the green clump of their pursuers.

(...)

"Ser, how in t'dark are ye keepin' track of these wadis? We came south on the ridgelines over there—" he jerked his helmet to the right, eastward "—an' Spirit, it was slower but if we take a wrong turning . . ."

"I watched them from the ridge coming south," Raj said. Actually, I'm the Avatar of the Spirit of Man and an angel in East Residence is painting a magical map in front of my eyes, he thought, and suppressed a giggle. There were times when he began to doubt his own memories, when it seemed so much more probable that he had gone mad there in the cellars last year—

"In t'dark, ser? From half a klick?" M'lewis protested.

"Haven't hit a dead end yet, have we, Companion?" Raj said, with a hard grin. The Warrant Officer's eyes were wide with awe and a little uneasy as he backed his dog and loped off after the others.
The demonstration of Center's ability, and one of many legends that will be added to the memory of Raj Whitehall among his men.

Raj pressed a knee to Horace's flank to follow. Wait a minute, he thought, a knot of unease in his own stomach. If Center can predict the future—

probabilities—and show me things from long ago and far away, why couldn't it show me this route coming south in the first place? Why couldn't I get a scenario of the Colonists building that bridge without sending a patrol and risking lives? The echo of a pistol shot bounced through his memory, and the expression in Foley's eyes as he reholstered it on the third try.

observe.

* * *​
—a glowing blue shield hung against a backdrop of a black more absolute than any Raj had ever seen, strewn with hard motes of colored light. White streaks moved across the blue, and the edges of the shield were blurred, as if there was a fringe of vapor around it. The sight was so alien that it was not until a flicker of hard light outlined the continents that he understood what he was seeing: Earth—

bellevue.

from orbit.

Paradise, he thought, conscious of his hand moving toward his amulet, with the dreamlike slowness that physical things took on when he communed with Center.

my data-sources, the angel continued, my eyes and ears. Specks of light moved across the shield . . . the planet . . . and his viewpoint sped towards one. An unfamiliar shape of panels and mysterious equipment, luminous with holiness. Then he was seeing inside it, and then through it, sight keener than any cruising dactosauroid's or birds, arrowing down to the line of the Hemmar River and East Residence. It was the lacy, spread-out city of the first visions Center had given him, the city before the Fall. Once more fusion fire bloomed across it, but this time his disembodied self snapped back, into the Celestial sphere. The drifting "eye" of Center exploded soundlessly, pieces tumbling away in eerie unnatural motion, as if unslowed by wind or weight. Fingers of light reached out from the planet, and other satellites exploded as well.

You were blinded by the Fall? Raj thought, and shivered. That was close to heresy; sublunary humanity had been reduced, but perfection reined beyond the orbits of the moons.

to a certain extent, i have my database, and may extrapolate therefrom, and i have everything you observe or have observed, and the contents of the minds of all who touch my . . . place of being, beneath east residence.

Then I was actually telling M'lewis the truth, Raj thought, amused for a moment despite himself. Wait, though, he mused, frowning. I couldn't have seen all these interconnections, it'd take a team weeks to map the gullies.

with your waking mind you perceive only a fraction of your sensory input, and forget much of this, observe.

* * *​
—night, and the patrol was jogging south. Raj could recognize the time from the position of the stars and moons; a little before dawn, thirty or so hours ago. Again it was as if he were standing a little behind his own eyes, this time as he glanced west over Horace's neck, into the tangled country nearer the river. A casual look, but it froze in place as if it were a painting or an ordnance expert's perspective drawing. Networks of lines snaked over it to mark contours, and the painting turned three-dimensional and rotated to form a map.
Right. The Center claims it is not all-seeing... but considering just accurate it is even after losing the satellites and over a thousand years of change and also considering that the Center continues to be scarily accurate even on other planets, I am skeptical. This incredible capability is one of several things in the series that makes it hard for me to suspend my disbelief.

Anyway, Raj and his men manage to reach the ferry, where Suzette is waiting. As they get closer to the ferry, and the Colonial pursuit gets closer to them, Foley tells Raj that he and Gerrin want to have Raj as the Starparent (Godparent) to Fatima's baby. And just in time, canister shots from hidden cannons in the ferry shreds the Colonials behind Raj, allowing the scouting force to board and head back to the safety of the other side.

"Three cheers fer Messer Whitehall an' the Messa!"

The men began to whoop, helmets going up on the muzzles of rifles, gunners pounding their handspikes on the deckplanks; even the civilian crew of the ferry shouted and threw up their knit caps.

"Shut up! Silence in ranks!" Raj kept his wife's hand in his; the slender fingers drew caressingly across the heavy calluses of rein and saber hilt. "We got away from Tewfik again; and that's no cause for celebration. I'm sick of getting away from him; I want him to have to get away from me!" He grinned. "Cheer my wife as much as you like!"
Suzette is building up the reputation with soldiers, just as much as Raj is doing.
 
As you can see, the Colony is composed of various Islamic people. But curiously, Turko-Iranian people are completely absent in the Colony, as well as the South and Southeast Asian descents (the Sub-Saharan Africans are represented by the Zanj, although they and the Colony don't like each other). I can see why the latter is missing (a lot of people don't know that Islam is a popular religion in SEA) but the absence of the former is harder to explain.

I don't think it's implied anywhere that all the Muslim refugees from the Final Jihad went to Bellevue. Maybe the Turkic-speakers and Indo-Iranian speakers and South Asians and SE Asians settled their own worlds. We've already been told that the Colonists carried a fragment of the Kaaba with them, and later on we learn that the Tanaki Net they used was 'the first model', which might suggest that Bellevue was one of the first planets colonized, perhaps as an effort by Arabs and Arab-influenced peoples like Berbers to create a new home after the destruction caused by the Jihad.

Regarding the Hafardine books, I liked the first one, but I wasn't as fond of the sequel. For one thing, the continent where the action takes place appears to switch hemispheres between books. In the first book, the north coast is described as subtropical, and the barbarians from the southern lobe of the continent wear furs, but in the second book, when the protagonist goes to the south, it's described as hot and humid. Presumably when Drake switched co-authors from SM Stirling to Eric Flint, Flint didn't read the first book as carefully as he might have.
 
Right. The Center claims it is not all-seeing... but considering just accurate it is even after losing the satellites and over a thousand years of change and also considering that the Center continues to be scarily accurate even on other planets, I am skeptical. This incredible capability is one of several things in the series that makes it hard for me to suspend my disbelief.

I think it's implied in a later book that Center does have a few other surviving sources on the planet itself, which could be Center eliding unnecessary details or an inconsistency between volumes. Depending on exactly who it's had a chance to 'touch the minds of' and how far that can work, it could have a lot of information that the Federation has gather but not had the ability to put together. Even just weather records could do a lot.

With later books after the main series, I'd be surprised if the Center uplift package didn't include any kind of orbiter to go along with the ground unit. If you're flinging stuff through hyperspace anyways there's no reason to save an extra few tons of mass.
 
The Forge - Chapter 14
In the last chapter, Raj returned from his scouting mission with some bad news.

"Gentlemen," Raj said. "That's the situation. Your Reverence."
The story begins with Raj finishing his recon report to the gathered military personnel of Sandoral. The only civilian present here is Sysup-Suffragen of Sandoral, whose presence is apparently mandatory for the spiritual reason I suppose (it wouldn't hurt morale either), and Wenner Reed who is the captain of city militia (so not completely a civilian). Suzette is also technically a civilian, but by this point, she is pretty much another of Raj's staff, and as the novel notes, no one is going to object after she saved Raj and other's asses in the previous chapter and mulched several Colonials in the process.

Pretty much everyone has come, even the two of Skinner chiefs, who doesn't seem to be that interested in the meeting or even understanding much of spoken words, but at least they are here, which means they are willing to listen to Raj's orders.

"Messer Reed?" A soft-looking man, if you only noticed the body and face and not the eyes.

"Sandoral was founded as a fortress-city," Reed said. "So long as Sandoral holds, the frontier holds, and we deny the Upper Drangosh to the enemy as a route of attack. Our defenses are the strongest in the Civil Government, outside the capital itself; let Jamal and Tewfik sit in front of them, until they starve and their army rots away from disease."

There were murmurs of approval; the local authorities here had been spending continuously since the last sack, three long generations ago. Sandoral had more than walls; concrete pillboxes studded the approaches, miles of ditch filled with razor-edged angle iron, massive covered redoubts filled with obsolescent but very functional muzzle-loading guns.
Sounds impressive. I wonder how good they are, in comparison to RL 1860s-70s fortification?

Naturally, the Center disagrees and shows a rather grim simulation. As Raj explains:

"No, gentlemen," he said, uncovering the map on the easel at the head of the room. "Observe." He tapped Sandoral city. "There are nearly a million people in this County—" probably an underestimate, nobody liked the census takers from the Ministry of Finance "—of which no more than seventy thousand live in Sandoral City itself. It isn't the trade or manufactures that constitute the value of this city, it's the fact that it keeps the Upper Drangosh in Civil Government hands."

His pointer swept downstream. "When Tewfik comes up with the Army of the South, the Colonists will have more than enough manpower to invest Sandoral closely, then burn and kill their way north around us—while the only Civil Government field army in the east sits and eats its boots; a few months, and the dogs will have gone into the stew pots." Not so much to feed the inhabitants, as because each ate more than a dozen humans. "And there goes our strategic mobility.

"The plain truth of the matter is that the Colonists are closer to the centers of their power—" he tapped the stick down on Al-Kebir "—than we are." Moving it two thousand kilometers to the east, to the Hemmar Valley and the coastlands of the Peninsula.

"This land north of Sandoral is the only densely populated and productive area available to support a defense line. If we let them into it, the Colonists can wait for Sandoral City to wither on the vine, no matter how long it takes. And I doubt we'll be able to hold them south of the Oxheads or west of Komar. It would take centuries to rebuild what they destroyed, even if we could." He took a deep breath, closing his eyes for a moment, and then opened them with a brilliant smile that almost fooled himself.
He didn't mention the starvation and inevitable cannibalism that the simulation had shown him. I am certain that there will be a plague outbreak, too, with that many people bottled up in the city. Maybe he thought that was too much, or that he thought the above was enough to get his points across.

We also see that not everyone is impressed with Raj:
sneers or doubtful mutual glances from some of the other battalion commanders, who had heard of his fits of introspection.
To be honest, it will look rather strange in RL as well, since it will appear Raj randomly zoning out before or during the conversation, sometimes even during the mid-speech. And as Chapter 3 noted, his eyes glow strangely during the simulation, enough for people to notice.

In any case, Raj made up his mind:
"I am instructed to defend this frontier. The only way to do that is to remove the threat posed by the Colonist field army operating on the Upper Drangosh; which means, to meet it outside the walls and crush it utterly."
Decisive battle it is, then. The meeting erupts into chaos before da Cruz restores order.

Reed is the most vocal opponent to Raj's idea, and there is this part:
The militia commander's eyes narrowed: not fear, Raj decided, but the look a man gives an enemy. "How?" he said.
Still, he has a point: how do the Civil Government make the enemy come for them, and if that works, how do they defeat them? Raj has an idea, and you'll see why Reed is so hostile to it:
"Messers, I don't intend to fight an open-field battle of maneuver . . . not against an enemy one-third again my strength and more mobile to boot. Instead—" he flipped back the map, showing another of the city and its immediate environs. "I intend to entrench to the west of the city. Even if they have thirty thousand men, Tewfik and Jamal cannot invest a perimeter that includes the field army and the city both. Nor can they leave an intact mobile force of fifteen thousand in their rear, and the city with its steamboats blocks the passage of supplies by river. If I move to the west of the city, they must destroy the Army of the Upper Drangosh or force it back within the walls before they can proceed."

A hand raised by one of the battalion commanders: Beltin, the 12th Rogor Slashers. "Commander, if we stretch our line so that they can't outflank it, they can punch through. And if we thicken our firing line, they can outflank us; even if we dig in, we don't have the men."

Raj nodded. "Time, space, and force, gentlemen. You know what the terrain right along the river is like; impossible, and worse as you get north. Furthermore, north of the frontier forts—" which mounted huge cast-steel rifles, capable of smashing anything that floated "—we control the river; that is why they're building a bridge sixty kilometers downstream.

"They'll have to march every meter of the way, tending away from the riverbank. Twenty, thirty thousand men, possibly forty thousand, but let's not scare anyone, as many animals, every one of which has to eat, and still more importantly, drink, my friends. More than once a day. How many thousand liters carried up from the bridgehead? This—" the stick was unsatisfactory; he snapped the tough oak across and stabbed with his finger on a dry riverbed running east just southwest of the city "—is where we'll entrench. Impassable terrain to our left; bad-to-rough to our right, and supplies only five kilometers behind us in the city—and a line of retreat, worst comes to worst. If they move to the west, they make their supply situation impossible and expose their flank to us. If they wait, fine—we're on the defensive.

"Of course," he added, "we'll have to thicken the defenses any way we can. We'll strip the city of all movable artillery—" Reed shot to his feet, genuine horror on his face. Raj looked at him for a moment, lips pulled back from teeth. Please. Give me an excuse. I won't have even you taken out and shot out of hand for personal reasons, please give me an excuse. The Companions' heads turned toward Reed like gun turrets tracking. The civilian swallowed and slumped back into his chair.

"—for the field fortifications. The militia gunners will accompany me; the remainder of the militia will hold the walls. All refugees in the city—" they had been trickling in for weeks "—all able-bodied persons not members of the militia or the medical teams, and all transport animals and equipment are hereby conscripted as labor battalions." He took out his watch. "I expect to begin in about two hours. Any further questions?"

"Sir." Menyez again, frowning down at his notes. "Sir, we'll need overhead protection for the entrenchments." An airburst could turn an open trench into an abattoir, and guns and dogs were even more vulnerable. "Timber, sir."

"There's plenty on the slopes of the Oxheads," Raj said, and laughed aloud at the expressions. "And they've been shipping it down the Drangosh and putting it into buildings for a long time, gentlemen; we'll just take it out." Reed looked ill; he was about to lose a considerable proportion of his income, even in victory.
To Reed, Raj is trampling over what he sees as his privilege and also harming his business. This battle, I believe, is based on Belisarius' Battle of Dara, where he had Hunnic mercenaries and used field fortification as part of strategram.

The battle is also referenced in the Belisarius series, obviously, since the first book starts around that time. I think it was either skipped or butterflied away, due to the changed circumstance making Belisarius and his men travel to India.

Raj finishes the meeting with this speech:
"Messers," he said, deliberately pitching his voice low, watching them strain forward to listen. "You're all fighting men; worse, many of you are cavalry—" a brief flicker of humor "—so you've been raised on stories of victories. Elegant victories, somebody takes somebody in the flank, a commander's nerve breaks, a dashing charge disrupts the enemy's line."

His head turned, singling out one man after another. "Those battles are like two-headed dogs; they happen, but you can't count on them. They usually turn on one side being grossly inferior, in numbers or weapons or morale, training or leadership."

One fist rapped the wood lightly. "We're not fighting barbarians. We're fighting a big, tough army, well-equipped and trained. Men not afraid to die, under commanders who've learned in a hard school. I'll use every trick, every surprise I can—but tricks and surprises will not win this battle.

"There is," he paused, and frowned as he sought for words, "a certain brutal simplicity to most engagements between well-matched forces. We're going to fight that sort of battle, and our only real advantages are interior lines and position. The enemy will march right up to us, and we're going to plant our feet in the dirt and systematically beat him to death. Kill, and keep killing until their hearts break and they run. And then, we will have fulfilled our mission and made this province safe."
He is right, though. The Colonists are NOT a barbarian warband. The difference will become starkly clear as we go to the next books, where Raj does face off against the MilGov barbarians, and boy, they do have a serious problem where the Colonists don't.

Meanwhile, Fatima and other household women of the 5th Descott had been conscripted into auxiliary labors. Fatima has a mixed feeling about the current situation because while she is happy about her turn of fortune, she is also sad at the fact that Staenbridge and Foley and Raj, and other soldiers are now about to go to what may be their last battle:
"I happy there," Fatima said softly. "Nobody beat me, scorn me, tell me I stupid useless imp of Shaitan; house my own." Her head came up. "Pray Alia—Spirit of Stars our men return safe and victorious."
As you can see, she is still acclimating.

Meanwhile, Menyaz is working on the engineering, and has an introspective moment:

Menyez straightened, putting his hands to his back; it was cool as the desert nights always were, and the stars had a hard brilliance. Only a winter night had that sort of clarity up in Kelden County; summer nights were softly luminous, smelling of clover and dew-damped ground. That was a rich land, rolling hills and orchards and thick oakwoods, not like this country south of the Oxheads; here the bones of the earth showed through, and the only fertility was what men had made. The desert waited, with sand to fill their canals and scorching winds, waiting for their labor and vigilance to stop.

"And we put half our efforts into killing each other," he murmured.
This is also the point the Center has made: that the environment of Bellevue is not exactly friendly to humans, that the current civilization is built on a rather fragile ecological foundation, and that if it falls, the next one will have a harder road ahead.

"Jorg?" Raj said, looking up from his mapboard. Officers clustered around it, making quick notes on their own pads, occasionally jogging off to fix a view in their minds.

"I was thinking we should have a permanent engineering corps, the way the Colonists do," he answered, a little ashamed of the unsoldierly thoughts.

"Hmmm, there are arguments both ways," the commander answered. "More flexible, our way, giving everyone the basics. Although I'm lucky you made such a study of it; too many of my cavalry commanders might as well be Squadron or Brigade nobles, not interested in anything unless they can drink it, hunt it, ride it, or fuck it. Right, here's the schematic and perspective."
In RL, most armed forces are rather more like the Colonists, to the point where I am surprised that the Civil Government apparently has no permanent engineering corps. This is certainly one of the greatest advantages the Colonists have. Military Engineering is a complex, highly sophisticated matter, even in the 19th century - a lot of infrastructures in the US during that era were built by army engineers, and it was regarded as the most prestigious branch in the US Army, too.

Raj's schematic is like this:
"From above, like this." Raj's finger traced a broad V with its point toward the enemy; the arms were of slightly unequal length. "Two-point-eight clicks on the left, two-point-two on the right; that's the easier approach and I want it defiladed from the center. Right here—" his finger tapped the point of the V "—is where the command post will be, the redoubt, and where the 5th will stand. Also half the artillery, the heavy pieces from the city. Space the rest of the stuff from the walls, and all the 75's and field-howitzers, in 4-gun batteries down the wings at equal intervals, except—" he tapped the extreme right, the western anchor of the line "—I want this to have six of the howitzers, sighted in on the ravines off our flank, just in case they get cute. Also, I'm putting the bordermen in there." Two hundred had shown up a week ago.

(...)

"Now, apart from the 5th, I want the cavalry battalions in a second line about fifty, sixty meters back from the first—just far enough to have a clear field of fire over the front line. Cover for the dogs just behind them. And behind all that, pile the spoil and then dig in a road, nothing elaborate, right across the arms of the V. Communications trenches between all positions."

(...)

"Furthermore," Raj continued, "I want a staggered line of holes, about two hundred meters up the opposite slope—" he pointed "—thirty of them. Slanting upslope in the direction of our gallant wog adversaries, just enough to hold a hundred-liter urn, you know, the type they use for oil and wine around here?"
With the last paragraph, you can easily guess the surprise Raj is planning. An old trick, but a potentially devastating one if pulled off successfully.

Also, Messer Falhasker has come to see Raj and the prepared trench line. He has donated many of his merchandise into the defense preparation, and while that is partially due to Suzette's charm, I get a feeling that he is a decent enough man who loves his city. He is certainly more helpful than Reed, at least.

We gets the description of the finished defense, as well as something interesting:
Forty thousand pairs of hands had been at work for thirty hours; the five-kilometer stretch of dry valley looked like a garden plot infested with geometric-minded gophers. The basic outlines of the trenches had been dug, the main line for the infantry to hold and the fortlets behind them where the cavalry would support their fire and be ready to block a penetration or launch pursuit. Evenly spaced semicircles marked the gun platforms, and zigzag communications trenches linked them all. The redoubt at the center was a huge pit right now, nearly two stories deep; the fighting deck would have a cellar beneath it. Even as the long timbers went in to support the floor hands were stacking powder and shot on the bottom level.

Temporary ramps had been left, and two hundred soldiers and civilians were backing a cannon down it, heaving against a spiderweb of ropes. The gun was one of the city's defensive weapons, a three-meter tube of black cast iron on wheels taller than a man, throwing thirty-kilo shot. It trundled the last few yards and set-tied onto the overlapping timbers of the redoubt's floor with a rumbling thunder; there was a ratcheting pig-snarl behind it, as one of the armored cars backed and turned, ready to follow the gun. Raj looked at the turtle shape without affection: there were a dozen of the armored vehicles in Sandoral, shells of wrought-iron boilerplate driven by the only internal-combustion engines in the Civil Government. There was room for a dozen riflemen within, and the armor would turn small-arms fire and shell fragments. It would not turn any sort of artillery projectile, and the things were monsters to maintain, broke down at the slightest excuse, suspensions so fragile they had to be hauled to the scene of battle on ox-drawn timber skids . . . and potentially decisive, at the crucial moment.

Unfortunately the Colony had them, too.
Emphasis mine. An armored car in 1870s technology, driven by the early ICEs? Sounds cool, but probably rather impractical as the paragraph notes. I can see Stirling's handprint over this, as he really likes the schizo-tech and steampunk. However, I think, admittedly without any basis, that Drake might have given his own input into this idea - if this was entirely Stirling's thing, I bet armored cars would have had steam engines instead, since steam vehicles and airships are Stirling's 'thing'*, as seen with Draka and ISOT, plus the Chosen book of this series.

*Meanwhile, it appears 'Rocket Chariot/Primitive Katyusha' is Drake's 'thing', judging from the Belisarius series and The Heretic.

It is also a nice demonstration of the fact that the Colony is the Civil Government's equal, although we already knew they had them since the last chapter.

Meanwhile, according to Suzette, Reed is up to accusing Falhasker of spying for the Colony. Raj is not sure whether to believe it or not, and he doesn't like either of them very much, since both of them are a bit too much interested in Suzette. He decides to throw a bait:
"Suzette," Raj said after a moment. "You know, it might be . . . advisable to let Falhasker know that we were only able to scare up five generators for the fougasses. So only five on the far right flank are hooked up, the others are quaker cannon."

Actually, each generator powered a board that would fire six of the flame weapons.

In the next chapter, we will see the climactic battle of The Forge.
 
I was thinking about this chapter, and I came to a conclusion.

The story has a worthy adversary, a clever hero who has advantages but can't rely entirely on Center to defeat Tewfik, and generally good writing.

Raj doesn't really care about all of the people who will die horribly if his plans fail. So we, the reader, also don't really care about those people. The issue with Center is that Center reduces all human deaths to abstract data points, and our irrational fleshy minds don't care about statistics.

The sequel series did a much better job, where Raj and Center are trying to convince the protagonist to turn against Evil Center and the religion of technological stasis. He isn't buying it until they inform him that his mother didn't have to die of a tooth infection, at which point he's ready to burn his society down.

If you want the reader to care about the stakes, you need a protagonist who cares about the stakes.
 
If you want the reader to care about the stakes, you need a protagonist who cares about the stakes.
Yeah, John Horsten and Abel Dashian (the one you mentioned) are good because they were personally wronged in one way or another by the enemy-of-this-planet and thus has a personal stake in the fight (the former was sterilized when he was a baby and was bullied and discriminated all because of a clubfoot).
 
Yeah, John Horsten and Abel Dashian (the one you mentioned) are good because they were personally wronged in one way or another by the enemy-of-this-planet and thus has a personal stake in the fight (the former was sterilized when he was a baby and was bullied and discriminated all because of a clubfoot).

One of my favorite parts is the revelation that John Horsten would have been an amazing Chosen general if they weren't so obsessed about his physical imperfection.

But if the Chosen were willing to bend, they would just be another empire of people who want stuff and not the Chosen.
 
Next, the representative from the Old Residence, aka Rome, speaks. Again, it is explicitly noted that the Pope-equivalent is actually subordinate to the Governor in the formal hierarchy of the Church.
This is, I believe, relatively accurate to how the orthodox church worked during the time of the ERE (Byzantium). The Pope didn't gain a lot of the power the office now has until well into the middle ages.
 
The Forge - Chapter 15 (Part 1)
This chapter starts with Raj and his men preparing for the big battle. They are setting up fortification and ambush, and Raj makes a big, inspiring speech.

"Barton," Raj said. "A question. Where did you get those phrasings you passed me? You've got a future in literature, if they're your own."

"Oh, mostly from the Fragmentary Codex, sir; very old, written just after the Fall from bits people remembered." Information stored in optical arrays was very little use to people deprived even of electricity. "Mostly in Old Namerique. The references are pretty obscure; who St. Cryssin is and where the Sons of the Griks fought, nobody knows. Pretty words, though."
Foley showing his literary skills. And another piece of the Pre-Fall civilization is shown.

Next scene, we are introduced to the opening skirmish of the battle. It goes well for the Civil Government, mostly because of the capable Jorg Menyez of the infantry involving himself personally in the execution.

However, even the successful battle still has casualties.

"MAMMM! MAAAMMM!" the boy screamed, arching his back on the canvas-covered table. "Mam, help me, mamaaa."
Poor soul. He isn't the only one, and won't be the last.

"Hold him, crash your cores," the Renunciate barked.
Another expression of Bellevue's technolatric religion.

"Iodine and clamp," she snapped; her acolyte moved up.

"More opium, reverence?" Fatima asked desperately.

(...)

"Needles ready," the priestess said between clenched teeth; they were hooked things like instruments of torture, threaded with catgut. Fatima looked aside and swallowed as the doctor took up the saw; the boy began screaming once more, pulsing in time to the hideous grinding noise. She closed her eyes. That is what the tub is for, she realized. And it was a large one.
Example of the Civil Government medical technology. Not too different from the battlefield medicine of the mid-19th century, except a slightly better use of antiseptics.

Interestingly, the medical field of the Civil Government seems to be dominated by the clergy, in contrast to the secular medicine of the Colony.

In the next scene, Raj and Jorg converses on the size of the hostile force. It's mostly reiteration of what we already know.

For an instant Raj had to struggle to remember which one, there had been so many, and then a hologram showed him a rifleman's hand scrabbling frantically in an empty bandolier. Normal procedure was for troops to be issued a hundred rounds before action, and for further requisitions to be delivered after signed authorization by an officer or noncom; it was the only way to prevent troops in garrison from selling ammunition for booze money.
Another example of how the corruption is deeply endemic in the Civil Government, even among the lower ranks. This might be the reference to the Battle of Isandlwana as well, where one of attributed causes of the British defeat was that much of their ammunition was held in boxes - although I also heard that it is a myth.

The thunder of the drums shook the earth. Raj looked up at the sky; not quite noon yet. The drummers must be just behind the crest of the rise, so tempting to order his heavy guns into action on it . . . but knowledge of his artillery's capacities and locations would be a gift like a visitation by Mohammed for Jamal and Tewfik. They were taking full psychological advantage of it, too; not just the drums, but as each unit came up the noise increased, and it marched over the rise and along it in column, down the entire five-kilometer length of open ground. Cavalry and foot and guns, all looking like they had done a hard day's march, but all looking as if they knew their business, too. Gerrin was taking a steady stream of notes as Foley dictated, leaning into the tripod-mounted telescope.

"I make that . . . one-hundred-six guns, so far," he said. "About half pompoms, a quarter 70's—" much like the Civil Government's 75mm rifles "—and the rest a mixture, fair number of howitzers. Anything heavier, they're not showing."

"I wish they'd stop that damned drumming," Gerrin cursed. "Bad for morale . . . that's a lot of artillery, Raj."
The Colonials are doing the classic psychological warfare. Their numbers are certainly great, but I bet they are also rotating troops to make them seemingly even bigger.

Needless to say, it's not good for the morale of Civil Government. However, the Skinners ride to the rescue:

"Ser," one of the lookouts on the roof of the redoubt bunker called. "It's the Skinners!"

"What're they doing?"

"Dancin' and singin', ser! In time to them drums." Raj blinked, leaning half-out of the slit to see. The Skinner groups were on both sides of the redoubt; he wouldn't have been surprised to see them out sunning themselves on the sandbagged roofs of their trenches . . . but they were dancing, stamping and leaping in lines that wove in and out of each other, linking arms, whooping out a chorus to the simple thudding of the enemy drums:

"En roul'en, reyoulouran, En roul'en, reeeeboula—"
I am not even going to attempt deciphering this. Probably some kind of French-Canadian-First Nation creole, mangled.

The song was punctuated by shots fired in the air, or to kick up dirt on the slope near the marching Colonials; every now and then a Skinner would turn his back on the enemy and bend over, flapping up the rear of his breechclout, wiggling and slapping their buttocks at the Muslim host.
Reminds me of, forgive me for mentioning it, the scene in Braveheart. In any case, the mood among Civil Government forces have been lifted.

One Skinner, however, decides to take things further:

A lone Skinner was trotting his red-and-white hound out towards the Colonists. "Message to both Skinner groups, no attack!" he barked; the runner hesitated, gripped his amulet and dashed away. Raj raised his binoculars. Yes, no mistaking that zigzag scar on the man's bare chest; he had his feet out of the stirrups, and his monstrous two-meter rifle casually over one shoulder.

Halfway to the enemy, the Skinner broke into a gallop that made the big ears of his mount flop like wings. He rose, stood on one foot, dropped on one side of his dog and bounced to the other, stood on his hands . . . it was a dazzling display of dogsmanship, and it had certainly caught the attention of the marching Colonists, making their neat ranks falter for a second; Raj could imagine their officers' nine-thonged whips flashing. Juluk finished up by standing in the saddle and dropping backwards, then spinning on his back with his legs splayed wide. The long barrel reached out between them and vomited smoke and flame; on the hillcrest, a banner toppled as its bearer's head splashed away from the 15mm sauroid-killing bullet.

That produced a reaction; a pompom swung around and began to spit, shells cracking into the ground around the barbarian chief. He reined in with insolent calm, lighting a pipe and puffing on it, before turning to trot back to the Civil Government lines. Halfway there, he turned in the saddle and extended a clenched fist at the Colonists, shot out the middle finger and pumped the forearm back and forth before clapping heels to his hound.
Barbarous as the Skinners, and Juluk Peypan in particular, are, none can doubt their riding and shooting skill.

Now that the preliminaries are over, both forces decide to engage in customary pre-battle parley, even if they are most likely fruitless.

"You are young for such a command," Tewfik was saying; his hand was hard and callused in the same manner as his opponent's. There were four men behind him, mostly younger than the Colonist's thirty-five; two who looked like well-born Arabs; one who towered and showed a spiked blond beard beneath cold grey eyes; and a black almost as tall and broader. Tewfik's closest retainers, trusted men with high commands, from the richness of their use-worn weapons and the hard set of their faces. They in turn appraised the men behind him; Jorg Menyez, da Cruz, Gerrin Staenbridge, Foley.
Tewfik IS Raj's equivalent in the Colony, no question about that. An older, more experienced, and better supported Raj, perhaps; unlike the Governor Barholm, the Settler and his sons don't have to worry about him turning on them.

"Is that what you call that battle? Appropriate enough. Well, if the truth be told, I was bringing my riders up for a raid on you, using El Djem as a base," he said, with an engaging grin that lit the serious square face for a moment.
Center didn't mention this possibility, probably because it never predicted this. An example of its limit.

Tewfik was running an experienced eye over the positions downslope as he spoke. "Not bad," he continued. "But not good enough, of course. It is unfortunate for you that your Governor can never trust an able man with an army large enough to do much good."
This is the running theme of the Bellevue series: the paranoia of the Governor hindering the Civil Government in their critical fights. Admittedly, it's justified - Stirling noted that the Governorship used to be an electoral one before becoming hereditary, in the similar vein to the Roman Emperor, and that the Civil Government hasn't yet come to terms with that. The Clarets have an additional worry in the fact that they are newcomers to the power.

"There is no God but God; all things are disposed according to the will of God." From Tewfik it did not seem the automatic formula that it might from another man.

"And the Spirit of Man of the Stars shapes our destinies," Raj replied with equal sincerity. "It seems we have something in common."
Both men are sincere in their faith.

"You shouldn't have come," Raj whispered into Suzette's ear.
Suzette, naturally, is with Raj.

"Raj, I told Falhasker the five fougasses on the left were hooked up—"

"What! The right, I said tell him the right—"

"And I told Wenner Reed that it was the five on the right." A pause. "Trust me."

(...)

"Well, now we know who sold out, don't we?" Suzette said, in a voice as flat as the blued metal of her carbine-barrel; she was speaking loudly, to carry over the continuous roar of gunfire.

"You know, I'm glad it wasn't Falhasker," Raj said. I hate his guts, but he's something of a man, at least.

"Frankly, I don't give much of a damn," Suzette replied.
Raj is suspecting Falhasker of spying for the Colony, but Suzette has a better grasp on espionage and security than him. How she manages this will be revealed in the future, and it will be emphasized and become of greater importance as the series progresses.
 
Nice to see this again. The interaction with Tewfik is interesting, I think it's a shame he doesn't play a bigger role in most of the series, he's a good adversary for Raj.
 
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