Oh, very interesting! In the original, Cibele kinda talked to Milia like a equal even at the start. Here, you can feel the superiority and the confidence that she excludes and the way that Cibele feels nervous really sales her charisma. Of course, that makes Cibele's victory over her extremely satisfying. Awesome chapter!
 
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Oh, very interesting! In the original, Cibele kinda talked to Milia like a equal even at the start. Here, you can feel the superiority and the confidence that she excludes and the way that Cibele feels nervous really sales her charisma. Of course, that makes Cibele's victory over her extremely satisfying. Awesome chapter!
Yeah, many of the changes done for the remake are being done with an eye for where the original quest's story went thanks to the voting, and so far Milia is where that's felt the most.

(The reason for why it feels so much with Milia is something I'll go over once this rewrite reaches the pertinent part, to avoid spoiling first-time readers - there are some, right?)

Anyway, the update before last had Vesta! She has an interesting story as a character, if a bit on the twisty side:

So, one of Fiona's more obscure quests elsewhere fizzled out after like two updates, but after a very insistent fan kept asking for more, and since A Shadow Resides wasn't ready to debut yet, she figured she could give that quest some new life by introducing rivals, all based on doujin she likes.

The first such rival was Vesta (she's an Imanis because the setting of that quest was also Southern Sun, if not necessarily the same one as in this story)... and she killed the quest by being far more interesting than the poor lead. But she was enough of a hit that Fiona added her to ASR on the role of "City Police Operator who gets infected by a Special Weapon"... and also got a miniquest inspired by Bible Black.

Now, since Cibele's Gamer power is supposed to be kind of an OCP in the story, ING's Vesta doesn't have any of the supernatural powers she got to enjoy in her past appearances. She's just here, being a successful adult with the sort of polycule Cibby wishes she had, a taste for hypnosis that doesn't quite help her niece's current issues... and mastery over the arcane art of Aftercare (inside joke).
 
Anyway, the update before last had Vesta! She has an interesting story as a character, if a bit on the twisty side:

So, one of Fiona's more obscure quests elsewhere fizzled out after like two updates, but after a very insistent fan kept asking for more, and since A Shadow Resides wasn't ready to debut yet, she figured she could give that quest some new life by introducing rivals, all based on doujin she likes.

The first such rival was Vesta (she's an Imanis because the setting of that quest was also Southern Sun, if not necessarily the same one as in this story)... and she killed the quest by being far more interesting than the poor lead. But she was enough of a hit that Fiona added her to ASR on the role of "City Police Operator who gets infected by a Special Weapon"... and also got a miniquest inspired by Bible Black.

Now, since Cibele's Gamer power is supposed to be kind of an OCP in the story, ING's Vesta doesn't have any of the supernatural powers she got to enjoy in her past appearances. She's just here, being a successful adult with the sort of polycule Cibby wishes she had, a taste for hypnosis that doesn't quite help her niece's current issues... and mastery over the arcane art of Aftercare (inside joke).
I can't actually link most of this stuff here for various reasons (though you can find it in certain questionable places), but A Shadow Resides actually has been posted on SV before! Vesta was introduced there as well, though it's a much younger one than the one seen here. Mostly I'm linking this because it may come up later.
 
Ⅱ.3: Starlight, Starbright
Tuesday, May 4th, Reiwa 42.

Your family's place is an ultra-modern house in the Verwest district, built mostly of glass and white-painted climate-friendly materials, of a respectable size and its own lawn, bolstered by quite a few incomes that help support the needs of ownership. Living in a house like this is relatively unusual, of course, but it doesn't really feel that different from apartments and condos when you take into account how crowded it can get sometimes.

Fortunately, you've got plenty of time to yourself today to study, at least before fencing class later! Having received a reading list from Aunt Vesta, you're taking your time going through all the material you can, still unsure when, or even if, Stella will accept 'hypnotherapy' as the subject of the assignment.

(…okay, maybe you're a little interested for its own sake…)

You confess, you're not really great with books. You put in the effort for Ms. Yi, definitely, but book learning isn't your strong suit! (Although, it's preferable to video essays, blech.) But even so, you've dived right in, and some of these books are downright captivating.

There's a certain overlap between the list Aunt Vesta gave you, and Ms. Yi's reading list for Psychology class. It makes sense; it seems Vesta has an interest in psychology, and if they're both talking about a fringe topic like hypnosis, it's only natural they'd go to similar references. Honestly, the two of them seem pretty similar in your eyes; you can almost imagine the two of them together, swapping notes on hypnosis, experimenting on each other, and –

no, bad thoughts, bad thoughts!

Er. Right. Books.

Right now, you're going through the work of Dr. Cindy Newton, psychologist and memeticist – and popular science communicator. Ms. Yi has said if not for her, 'memetics' would still be considered a pseudoscience as it was up to the Heisei era. You're pretty sure future-past-you knows her work; the concept of a 'supreme idea' appears to originate from the titular book, The Supreme Idea.

As Ms. Yi has told you, 'memetics' is the cultural and intellectual analogue of 'genetics', and much like 'genes', 'memes' can be passed from person to person, and are affected by a form of evolutionary pressure.

In essence, through communicating with others, we pass on our memes to the next generation. And just as over time, genes that confer a reproductive advantage become better represented in a population, memes that are communicated more effectively or situate themselves more suitably inside the mind become more common as well. Natural selection as applied to culture.

And as humans interfere in the natural selection of organisms, so too can they interfere in the natural selection of ideas – artificially selected ideas, created as our ancestors might create new breeds of domesticated organism – to maximize desirable qualities, to the advantage of those who have selected that 'meme'…usually to the detriment of society, historically, but very often to its benefit as well. The Reiwa era began after decades of memetic selection, and the disasters to come couldn't be understood by those who believed humans would always behave in their own interests.

(In this world, bathed in carbon, you wonder bitterly how people could have denied it – and still do, to this day.)

In that respect, the titular 'supreme idea' is a meme that is not simply selected, but engineered, as humans might engineer an organism. Or so Dr. Newton puts it:

A meme so readily accepted by humans that it outmodes all others before it. An idea that, once imparted, completely transforms a person. One idea, with no other memes before her.

It's a terrifying prospect. Ms. Yi once talked about a Heisei-era novel which presented Sumerian as the 'programming language' for the brainstem, and the linguistic curse of the Tower of Babel (or as Ms. Yi called it, 'the Curse of Balal'), a counter-program that forced humanity to speak different languages. The goddess Asherah, a mother goddess (much like Cybele!) was herself a personification of a linguistic virus that could reprogram humans, and the priestly class of Sumer passed these programs, these me to the population, programming their brains directly, before the god Enki created the Curse to prevent it.

It's obvious that future-past-you knows it too. In this novel, Sumerian was a language that could be perfectly understood; the languages we have now would then become removed from the ideal of 'perfect understanding'. And perfect understanding is a goal worth pursuing, Ms. Yi has said so as well, but…could you really perform that kind of act? Violate the self, that thoroughly?

Your Memetics branch, under the Hypnosis tree…

Memetics: Memetics allows you to spread ideas that infect others, slowly but passively subverting their will.

Memes…the DNA of the – you know what, no, forget that! You know about the science of memetics – of ideas that spread through people's minds, and convince them of such horrible things. That we continue clinging to the ideas that perpetuated thousands of years ago of what should and shouldn't be, let alone the things people were convinced of before the Collapse. With this…you can change that. And have so very much fun as a side effect, too.

You don't think future-past-you is so noble about it. 'You'll Trust Me', 'You'll Love Me', 'I Am Your Goddess'? N-none of that is nice at all! I-is this what 'Brilliant Star' means?!

"Mouuu…" you mutter to yourself, trying not to think about it too hard. You don't need to pursue that branch, anyway; the entire Hypnosis tree is very Bad Thoughts, but you can try to stick to taking the least Bad Thoughts-y skills, and use those abilities responsibly! For the good! You're not even a little tempted!

(…right?)

Saying that, though, The Supreme Idea contains stuff about hypnosis as well; it's not a huge amount, but evidently Dr. Newton is a passionate practitioner in both professional and personal capacities. And her talking about it makes you feel a little better about it, and puts Aunt Vesta's words into better context:

Hypnosis as a method of control used by abusers and liars? Yes, it is true that even a 'consensual' act can be abusive, and hypnosis has the potential. But it is the same as any social pressure. Hypnosis is merely a means to an end, an end that can be accomplished through countless different means of social coercion and conditioning that are far easier to grasp. Hypnosis as a weapon of abuse is much easier to unravel than other methods, as I know from experience.

Therefore, I would say to fear not hypnosis, but the hypnotist. And beware even further, the hypnotist who tries to convince you it's magic.

Even if that's true, though…what you have is magic, isn't it? You can go past such limitations. It's frightening, to hold that kind of power, no matter how exciting it may also be.

If it weren't for this power, if it weren't for the Gamer, if it weren't for future-past-you, you'd probably be both excited and relieved by these words. But holding this power in your hands, with your darker self guiding you into your worst possible impulses, just makes you worry all the more –

bzzt-bzzt!

Oh! It's your phone! And it's a text from Stella! You quickly toss your reader aside and start to chat with her.

[11:31 05/01/42] qubeley004: So, uh, Ms. Yi told me you're interested in hypnotherapy? It might be a bit weird, but, we could do that for the project if you like!
[17:30 05/04/42] luckystar: …you've been studying that?
[17:31 05/04/42] qubeley004: Ms. Yi and one of my relatives have given me material on it, and I've paid really close attention to lectures! I don't think Ms. Yi would recommend it if she weren't confident, you know?
[17:31 05/04/42] luckystar:
[17:36 05/04/42] luckystar: Let me make this *damn* fucking clear. If my grades in Psychology weren't so awful, I wouldn't even consider it. But as it stands, Ms. Yi is the only thing standing in my way toward a scholarship, and so my hands are tied.
[17:37 05/04/42] luckystar: If you've been studying, you know hypnosis isn't magic. And I doubt you could do much with it anyway, but that shouldn't matter for the grade. That said, know this:
[17:37 05/04/42] luckystar: If you try *anything* weird, that footage goes straight to Ms. Yi, the staff, the dean, the cops, and *God!* You got it?
[17:38 05/04/42] qubeley004: …oh, so that's a yes? :D I'll do my best!
[17:38 05/04/42] luckystar: Do you *have* to get so excited? I regret this enough as it is!
[17:39 05/04/42] luckystar: But yeah, I get it. Maybe I'll owe you a favor if you help my grades, but that won't make us *friends*.
[17:40 05/04/42] luckystar: Your place is in the Verwest district, right? I can be there for Friday, late afternoon or early evening. Up to you.
[17:40 05/04/42] qubeley004: I'll check with my family and let you know! :white_heart:
[17:45 05/04/42] luckystar: …sure.

Right, she isn't super enthusiastic about it, but a win is a win! Yayifications! Maybe, you can help Stella be a little nicer?

As you roll over atop your bed, you wonder – what secrets does Stella hold in her heart, that makes her so determined to be unpleasant toward you?

(And, of course, how can you change that?)



If you're completely honest, you chose the Moonlight Fencing Club for the name.

It's quite deliberate, too; none of the fencing disciplines bear any real resemblance to the classic Sword of Moonlight, but at the very least, Calvina's also a fan of that old series. Maybe that's part of why you looked up to her; if nothing else, she doesn't see your silly hobbies as a joke, nor does she insist you should be playing whatever gacha game Sunset's coming out with this week. (Seriously, blech.)

The classes are run within the Sakurai Hall, on the campus of the Capital University close to the train station. Capital U makes up a considerable chunk of the Capital District, freely mingling with the city itself, while the Sakurai Hall is in a little enclave – an exercise and athletics facility attached to the health sciences department. The familiar sight of its angled windows and concrete facade – did Calvina call it 'Brutalist'? – is a bit far for you to come every week, sure, but you think it's worth it to be able to learn from someone as talented and amazing as Calvina Aeterna.

"Glad you could make it, Cibele," Calvina says as she greets you in the gym; she's still in her street clothes, as you came a bit early by request. "Listen, there's been a bit of a change of plan."

"Oh? Do you not need me to help out with the younger students anymore?" you ask. No one else is here yet; the hall is covered in the normal cruft and detritus a gym picks up, including displays of the club's achievements in local competition (and of course, the qualifications of Calvina herself). "I can still take an extra day's practice, it's fine." You still need to grind Dexterity, right?

"It's more about who you're helping. She should be here any minute –"

"Oh! Calvina!"

You turn around and…well, you're in for one heck of a shock, because you'd know that face anywhere! Oh, oh jeez, if Marq knew about this he would be so jealous!

"Glad you could make it," says Calvina, "and right on time too. Cibele, this is Enkhtuya Enkhjargal – you won't just be teaching the younger students, you'll be teaching her."

"You can just call me Enks if you prefer, though. Enkhjargal's a bit of a mouthful." The verdette with the looooong ponytail and the winning smile pops out her earbuds, seemingly already dressed for the occassion in her black workout wear; she's even taller than Calvina, and she's got muscles, and abs, and this lovely tan, and she could probably bench you if she wanted, and –

Okay, okay, calm yourself, Cibby! D-don't fangirl out, you're the senpai now, apparently! "P-pleased to meet you," you hastily say, bowing to one of the top athletes in the whole city!

Your brother is the one who introduced you to Calvina and the Moonlight Fencing Club; Marq may not participate, but he still keeps up with the local sword sports and historical reenactment scenes, and Enkhjargal is the one he admires the most. Though she's never been involved with fencing, she's a big deal in the local HEMA scene, and an even bigger deal in kendo – she's the top kendoka in the city, and maybe even the world! They say she saw the first Olympic kendo matches in Reiwa 22, and promised she'd be one of the very best…

"That should be my line!" Enkhjargal smiles, and claps her hands together. "I'll be in your care, Cibele. Calvina has told me that if I want to get an idea about how fencing is, I should really try it myself. She said you'd be a good teacher!"

That's…well, it's a bit humbling, and it makes you blush, but something doesn't seem right here –

ah.

Calvina is averting her gaze a little. She seems a bit standoffish, more than usual even.

"You two know each other, Calvina?" you ask.

"We're…friends," she says, trying to leave it at that. And you don't need to read her mind to know there's some history there. C-could Enkhjargal be Calvina's ex or something?!

Maybe not, actually. Enkhjargal seems a bit oblivious. "So! Can we get started? I know it's a bit early."

"Um, sure!" You smile, trying to hide your awkwardness. Because, well…you really, really hope Calvina isn't just getting you to teach her fairweather friend or ex-girlfriend or whatever just because it's convenient…



You have to admit, Enkhjargal is…spirited.

Actually, a better way of putting it would be a 'genius'. Sure, it's unfair pitting someone so fit and well-trained in general against some kids who barely know one end of a foil from the other, but even then…

It's like she was born to hold a sword. She grasped the differences in rules between kendo and fencing instantly, and only took a short time to grasp the basics of each of the weapons.

But…but just maybe, there's one thing you can be proud of?

"Halt!" Calvina yells, as once more you gain the match point. Even though your sabre technique's a bit rusty, you're able to outdo Enkhjargal's raw talent with your experience and skill. That's quite an achievement with such an accomplished athlete, you think!

"Hah…" Enkhjargal removes her mask, smiling brightly at you. "You're really good."

"Well, I mean, I've been doing this a lot longer," you say. "And I'm nothing compared to Calvina."

"Hm, you say that, but…it was like you were responding to my movements better and better every moment." Enks smiles wider, and aaaaaaaa, y-you're really not used to being the senpai! A girl like this is praising you, y-you don't know how to react –

Wait. She said you were reacting better moment by moment, right? You can't tell her this, of course, but…could it be true?

Maybe it's the Gamer System? Maybe it keeps track of attributes even below what it takes to make a point increase. That'd explain how you were able to compete with Milia on her home turf, and it lends more credence to your theory that grinding requires a social element or an expert of some kind to push you.

(It's definitely not that you're just good at this. Because you're not. Not compared to Calvina, anyway…)

"Hm. Maybe I'm psychic?" you joke, pulling off your own mask.

"Well, I could always check," Enkhjargal says, and she places a finger on your forehead…! Wah, this is too much, way too much!

"H-hey!" You end up blushing horribly, trying to look away. I-it's really embarrasing –

"Hm, no third eye here," she says with a big grin. Oh, it was a joke. Ehe. You're not used to strangers being so touchy-feely.

"Even if I did have one, do psychic powers go through fencing masks? It's all metal and everything."

"You make a good point. Regardless, I think I've learned a lot from you." Your famous opponent pulls away, and gives you a deep bow. "Thank you for teaching me, Cibele. I hope to learn a great deal from you in the future."

T-there's no way…you can't be a cool senpai to someone so accomplished. Maybe she's just making things up? Or trying to be polite toward Calvina's kohai? You check, despite yourself…

Enkhjargal's mind feels like metal plates atop a soft interior. There are sharp, prickly edges to it, but overall it's smooth and cool to the touch. Like a knight's armor, perhaps. Reaching for it, you listen in on her thoughts…

– she's really talented. I must thank Calvina for this, I was worried when she said she wouldn't teach me personally. But I needn't be, Cibele really is a genius –

…aaaaaaand you just go bright red. Which Enkhjargal just responds to by putting a hand on your forehead. Too close–! "Hm? You don't have a fever or anything, do you?"

"N-no, I think I just need some water!"

"Drink some of mine," the verdette says, and where did she get tha–mmph! With a single motion, she pushes you to hydrate! A-ah, if she does this with all her kendo students, she must be really popular!

…fudgin' heck, this cutie Enkhjargal will be the death of you. Talented and touchy-feely both…be still your dumb gay heart.

(Calvina still seems to be trying to avoid her, but – she seems like a nice person. She can't be that bad, right?)



Enkhtuya Enkhjargal
???: Mistress of Swords



Attribute: Dexterity

Increase ability to avoid attacks. Increase reflexes. Increase aptitude with some weapons. Also affects balance and grace. Increase through delicate activity.

Aah, the talent of a fencer. And…well, other things. You can do so much with your fingers…or your tongue. They'll never crave anyone as much as you once you're done with them.
 
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Hmmm.

It has been a while since I read the earlier version, so I actually don't remember what's up with Calvina and Enkhtuya. I do think it was a crush that wasn't welcome, or similar, which I suppose is pretty common in this story.

Glad to see this back up, and I think it's pretty smoothly rewritten so far. Looking forward to some particuarly nice scenes, and let's hope Korri gets happy times soon... I wonder if her circumstances are different?

I want to say some of the early indications about her background has been tweaked, but I can't name anything in particular. The mention of the scar feels like it might have come at a different time here, and was there a flashback to comforting her sometime in the past that's not here anymore?
 
Hmmm.

It has been a while since I read the earlier version, so I actually don't remember what's up with Calvina and Enkhtuya. I do think it was a crush that wasn't welcome, or similar, which I suppose is pretty common in this story.
The scene explaining what's up with them is coming up later, so for now I'll just say it wasn't a crush. Calvina is straight (not sure if Cibby's "you don't know if she's straight" insistences are just to make her look sad since they weren't in the original...) and Enks is straight and dense in the matters of love (...or to differentiate Calvina further from Enkharjal, since the latter's one of the few characters who took a while to gel properly).

I want to say some of the early indications about her background has been tweaked, but I can't name anything in particular. The mention of the scar feels like it might have come at a different time here, and was there a flashback to comforting her sometime in the past that's not here anymore?
The closest thing to flashbacks the original quest had were the Interludes and to a lesser extent the upgrade for Thought Skimmer, so no. It's true that some details are getting introduced a bit earlier in this rewrite - see the few references to the Mysterious Li Xiao-Yin - since it's easier to foreshadow stuff when you're not livewriting, though.
 
The mention of the scar feels like it might have come at a different time here, and was there a flashback to comforting her sometime in the past that's not here anymore?
The flashback you're thinking of comes much, much, much later, in an Interlude (as Falcon mentioned). You're correct in that I'm fairly sure it took longer to establish self-harm last time around.

Calvina is straight (not sure if Cibby's "you don't know if she's straight" insistences are just to make her look sad since they weren't in the original...) and Enks is straight and dense in the matters of love (...or to differentiate Calvina further from Enkharjal, since the latter's one of the few characters who took a while to gel properly).
This, however, is correct. Calvina is straight, as has been established implicitly and explicitly; remember the mention of Cibby asking Marq about if he ever pursued her, which it's unlikely she'd ever consider if Calvina were into girls on any level.

If there's a bit of wishful thinking, well. Isn't that natural?

EDIT: Enkhjargal is the given name, by the way. It's not explicitly established, but citizens of Southern Sun use the native reading order of names - Yi Seul-ki and Li Xiao-Yin, for example, have their family names first - and Mongolian names begin with the patronymic (or matronymic in Enks' case).

Cibele is used to pronouncing very unusual names (from the perspective of an English speaker at least), which makes Enks' casual request to abbreviate it somewhat odd! Perhaps she's more used to it that way?
 
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Ⅱ.4: One Track Lover
Wednesday, May 5th, Reiwa 42.

"Mouuuuu…"

Tired of your future-past-self's insistence on providing you absolutely no information, you decided, rather sensibly, to try and look into the matter of whatever upcoming threat would be worth the desperation of time travel to avoid.

Unfortunately, nothing doing.

When you search for conspiracy theories, you get the usual sort of schlock; Nordic replacement theories, anti-vaxxer, lizards controlling our brains, that kind of thing. Occasionally you get something more helpful, but it's all stuff you know about; the typical sort of sherbet about how Sunset has bent the city to its benefit.

Your Aunt Vesta works as part of an archival project funded through the Reiwa Accord, a successor to pre-Collapse projects like the Internet Archive. (She calls herself a 'librarian', though – and she certainly looks the part, cough, shifty eyes, blush.) She talks about a flood of information created in the network, where all information is made equal, and the necessary context to interpret this information is deliberately excised. A controversy, a battle among the people, is something that can become profitable – there's not a lot of money in 'truth'. A mass revolt of reporters, or a threat to them by a government, can cause the Third Estate to move…but when content is created by individual users and elevated to the same height, there's no fighting it.

The Sunset Corporation, she says, has deliberately reengineered, over the past forty years, the exact same circumstances that got us here in the first place. This time, it was despite the resistance of government rather than something engineered by government, but within a generation you might see the consequences return to the fold…

Well, Korri says it's not that simple. That there is a distinction, between what Sunset does, and what happened in the past, decades before you were even born. Both she and Marq worry that she's missing the bigger picture, and that there are not only differences, but possibly even deeper issues we're poorly equipped to contemplate.

But it's all a bit much, and looking…well. There's always a risk. You wish you didn't have your eyes glaze over when Korri tries to teach you how to browse safely…and, well, your stats haven't improved at all yet! Hopefully, someday, you can fight…

Until then, though, you don't even have the slightest idea where to start…

and you can't ask anyone about it.

It's frustrating, because you really hate the whole 'secret identity' cliche. It's always such a false source of drama, right? You feel like, if you had more 'normal' superpowers, you'd already have told the people closest to you, to let them help support you.

But, there's really no easy way to tell someone you have brainwashing powers. It just…maybe you could trust Mom or Dad or Marq with it, but the idea of Korri thinking of you as the same sort of person who made her life in Old England a living hell – no, can't do it. And Calvina would probably get the wrong idea too! Plus you'd have to confess to both of them your crushes, and there's absolutely no way!

So, despite everything, you're now a secretive superheroine hoping she can figure out what to do before it's too late, and all future-past-you can think about is girls.

Well, to be fair, girls are cute! But it's kind of a problem, especially with the whole 'violation of free will' thing.

You've been given a small amount of cover, however, by Stella's decision to allow hypnosis as your field of study. It's kinda convenient, really, but looking deeper into things on her social media, her interest in the topic is just a broader element of therapeutic study, so it's likely just a coincidence. Thankfully.

That being said, with Ms. Yi unavailable over Golden Week, there is one person you can ask for a small amount of help, and trust not to blab. One burnt-out would-be psychology major who might just be able to help you out without you needing to say anything strange to anyone it might have consequences for…



"Hey, Marq, do you know anything about hypnosis –"

pfffffffffffthb

…well, that's a spit-take.

"Uh, I, uh, don't know what you're talking about, Cibs," he mutters, all shifty-eyed. He doesn't even turn away from his monitors to look at you, just hastily grabbing paper towels and wiping off the spit-take!

"You know, hypnosis. Hypnotherapy? Psychology? That thing you studied for years?" It hasn't been that long since Marq dropped out, right?

"J-just because I studied psychology, doesn't mean I know anything about hypnosis!"

Okay, yeah, you don't need to read minds to know how suspicious this is. Let's try a different tactic.

"Where does the Fourth Order stand on the matter of hypnosis, Marq?"

"Yuri was created by God to entertain us. That's all we know."

"Marq –"

"That's all we know, Cibs!"

…er. Right. Standing there in the entrance to Marq's room is going to look weird, isn't it? You step in, carefully closing the door behind you as you look around…

It's a tiny room, but it's nice and private. The most private room in the house, actually. Marq's surprisingly fastidious – he may be a NEET, but he's not messy – but there's no denying that every bit of available space in it has been put to use. He's even got a mini-fridge! Shelves are coated with models and collectibles, and of course all the technology around, bookshelves, but nothing so much as the series of smart posters and wallscrolls he's got. It's pretty common for him to switch up the displays every so often, and today…

Guerreiras Mágicas de Rayearth – or Magic Knights Rayearth in English. Though it has mecha in it, it's mostly a magical girl show, so it didn't really hold your interest much. (Marq tried to show you an episode or two, but they had way too much weird het.) Apparently it was pretty popular in Brazil in the Heisei era, and your brother's always been a big magical girl fan. (You think his favorite might be the glasses girl – she has the bulk of the pics.)

Images of colorful schoolgirls, a fantastic world of wonder and danger, fantasy-styled robots…well, some of this looks like yuri fanart to you, but in one of them, the main character – uh, Lucifer? Lucy? Or something? – is being embraced from behind by an evil duplicate with long pointed ears…Chevy Nova, you think.

It's a bit striking, since…

(it reminds you, of the darker future self, who abandoned what she claimed to love, all to give in to her selfish desires…tempting you into the same.)

(an animation plays nearby, of the duplicate disappearing with a kiss from the original – if only it were that easy for future-past-you.)

…right. About that. Maybe it's time to ask the question you've been asking ever since it was obvious that gap year wasn't temporary.

"I still think you're holding out on me, Marq! Come on, we're not just siblings, we're friends, right?"

"And I'm just saying, I'm not holding out! I don't know anything about hypnosis!"

"I mean, first off, you have the only room in the house to yourself."

"I pay rent!"

"With what money?! You don't do anything!"

"I'll have you know, Cibs, I have a very successful crowdfunding campaign for – wait, shit."

You grin. "Ha! I knew it! There's no way you could make enough money to pay rent without writing porn!" You're surprised it took him this long to admit it, honestly.

"I prefer to call it erotica, thank you. It lets me post it on forums which think 'erotica' and 'porn' aren't synonyms…and, a lot of it isn't lewd at all! Aunt Vesta helped out and everything. Y'know, it's just girls, hypnotising…"

Oh, Marq, you can't outsmart your little sister~ You smile from ear to fudging ear. Nailed it.

"…ugh, fine, fine, fine! I know a lot about it! Are you happy?!" Marq looks so defeated! It's been ages since you got one over on him like this! You could get used to that, honestly.

"Reasonably~" you tease, giggling behind your hand. "But, now that you've admitted it, you have to show me!"

"…I can't do that," Marq says – and yeah, you're still having a conversation with the back of his head.

"Why not?!"

"It'd be weird! You're my little sister! Y'know, I can't just show you this stuff, right?"

"…okay, Marq, A. I'm nineteen. B, you've been sharing age-inappropriate yuri with me for way longer than I've been nineteen!"

"It's different when it's your own, you know! It's like…y'know, it might give you a weird image of me."

"As opposed to the normal image I have of you?"

Marq turns around in his chair – today's t-shirt is of the Rayearth glasses girl in green (Fuu? Was that her name? Or was it Anne? Piloted the, uh, Windows Vista or something.) – and raises his finger to explain…





…and immediately just lowers it, and sighs. "Fine, fine, you win. Don't say I didn't warn you, though."

"I mean, that'll make for interesting reading, but…I imagine it won't be as helpful for things with Stella as your own advice." You smile at your brother. "Have you ever done it?"

Your brother shrugs loosely. "Not that much, but yeah. If you asked Aunt Vesta about it, though, she'd tell you everything I could and more." Marq gets along a lot better with her than you do, for whatever reason. Has she read this stuff?! She's asexual, sure, but you get the sense her partners are very satisfied –

oh, jeez, she's been doing hypnosis with her girlfriends all this time, (and aside, young Percy looked really hot while Vesta was looming over her), you never should've peeked into her brain, it's like a fudge-melting flame of desire or something! Bad thoughts, bad thoughts!

"I-I did ask her!" you say as you try to run from those implications, thankfully able to hide your embarrassment some. "And I've been going over her reading material, too." Even if you're not sure you understand it all…"She said something about 'trust'?"

Marq nods, sighing heavily despite himself. "Yeah, she's right. Trust is pretty important. I can't say I'd trust someone who hates my guts to treat me right, but…"

"I think I do trust Stella, though! In a way. Like the Lost Girls say…in my 'ghost', right?" You never quite understood what that meant, but maybe it's something like this? You're sure anyone else in this situation wouldn't even consider something so risky or fraught.

"I guess if it's like that…sho ga nai, it can't be helped." Marq waves his hand lazily as he turns back around in his chair. "Just be careful, yeah?"

"I will!" you say. "But I think, someone who wants to make a living helping others can't be an awful person…and Ms. Yi's logic makes sense too, you know?"

"It does make sense, in a way, but there's something real weird about this assignment of yours. I don't think most psychology classes have you doing mock therapy, for a whole list of reasons. And assigning you your bully?" Marq shakes his head, and looks back over his shoulder. "Even if she's right, and she damn well could be, I don't know what's going through your teacher's head, Cibs."

"Maybe the point is to demonstrate we understand her lessons in more than the abstract." It'd make sense, for how she likes to teach – she prefers something more hands-on than most teachers. "The description indicates we don't need to be perfect or anything, right?"

"It's just a bit ethically fraught. Convenient in your case, sure, but I feel like if she tried to pull this at the university level, someone would be asking questions."

"I guess." Marq would know better than you. "But, this might be my only chance with her!"

"I still say you should talk to Li Xiao-Yin." Marq just…spins his chair. (Advantage of having his own room: not getting scolded for it?) "But if you're determined, Cibs, anything I said would be irrelevant anyway."

"I guess I'm pretty stubborn, huh?"

"Better to be stubborn than spineless. Someday, Cibs, that determination's why a girl will fall for you – and she'll fall hard."

…nice of Marq to be so supportive, at least. (And nice, perhaps, of future-past-you to let you find out it's genuine.) You don't feel very strong like this, but –

but maybe that'll change, with the Gamer in your hands.

"Anyway, lemme just send that link over…" Marq taps his phone, and you take out yours, and –





…how many of these stories does he have?!?!?!?!?!?!?



Your trip to your room didn't last long. Not with the kinds of feelings this writing was inspiring.

This kind of thing? This kind of feeling? Your only option is the basement.

There's a sort of tacit agreement that unless you're not around, one of the basement storerooms is for you, Korri, and Marq. (All three of you have needed that kind of private space before in the past, Korri especially.) On occasion, you've slept down here, with all the old consoles and optical discs and other old world collectibles – and unless you want that same conversation about not masturbating on the bunk bed to happen again, it's best to stick to the couch. (I-ignore that Korri usually sits on this couch.)

But…Marq's writing, the stuff he's hidden from you? It's all hypnosis, and it's all yuri! And there's tons of it! And it's all really good!

Looks like Marq – or rather, 'Sky God Windam', as is his pen name – really has a one-track mind, huh? (Like you can talk!)

There's all kinds of fandoms, and settings, and characters…a few of them seem to revolve around some kind of trans-dimensional university, and there's even one which looks like a thinly-veiled riff on that old Tear Ring Saga gacha game. (Complete with comedic gender-swapped self-insert.) Not to mention all the stories revolving around a female King Arthur OC (inspired by some obscure Tsukihime spinoff)…though those get sometimes get a bit more overtly lewd than you think you prefer.

(…wait, does this mean your definitely not a hypnosis fetish overrides any other desires? That you think it's better than sex? N-not to say there isn't plenty to like about all of these stories, even the ones about the 'Divine Tyrant'…)

Marq's first story – at least, the first he's published – was about those Magic Knights, falling one by one to a scheming shadow witch, who keeps gloating to her little sister (whom she loves dearly, naturally!) about what she's done with them. A kitten, a dancer, and a maid…

Though Umi's search of the room had left her no closer to escaping than before, she couldn't say it was a total loss: the books she had skimmed had taught her some bits about Chizetan customs, and some of the jewelry found complemented her current outfit well.

It was while she was reading something about Chizetan dancing that she started hearing some strange music in the background. It was a pleasant, soothing tune, and Umi, welcoming the reprieve from the total silence of before, began moving a bit to the rhythm.

Shortly, she left the book behind, and applied her lecture by dancing, her body moving with remarkable grace, her jewels resonating harmoniously with the music. She slowly stopped worrying about escaping, or about finding Hikaru and Fuu. To her, the dance was all that mattered.

You can tell he was just getting his feet wet, but –

yep, date checks out. He was maybe a bit too young to be writing that, huh? (Again, you're one to talk!) If it started that good, he had nowhere to go but up!

His most popular story may well be one about a well-armed magical girl trapped in a time loop – you think it's the Fourth Order's 'Adversary', the demon that 'opposes' the Goddess – where everyone in the next loop becomes intensely, even fanatically attracted to her. And of course, she doesn't know why, and has trouble letting herself take advantage – and doesn't that sound familiar, but…

But, uh, there's a lot. A lot a lot. A lot a lot a lot. Marq's SFW stuff is only a tiny fraction of his output, and it's filled with mind control stuff! And it's really, really good…you wouldn't expect a guy to write such good yuri, usually.

M-maybe it's the topic – ashamed as you are to admit it – but, you don't really think you've been this excited by girls' love stories than this. (Or 'excited', for that matter.)

You think your favorite bit is…

One of the stories is of an idol-like girl in a fantasy-like setting, a selkie 'shaped by clearest blue' with an inherently hypnotic voice, that inspires others to love her in turn. After being transformed into the ocean depths into a monster with perfect body, a psychologist tries to get her to change back – only to fall prey to her beauty, then her voice, then her mesmerism.

I didn't say anything. I felt a bit of drool escaping the corner of my mouth, and my patient sat up, reached out, and wiped it up with her fingers.

…it felt good.

Turned from a would-be conversion therapist into a loyal servant, one who can admit that she loves girls without guilt, fear, or shame.

This psychologist…she's happier the way she is now, right? But, the selkie altered her against her will…and yet, as she was before, not only was she a conversion therapist willing to harm others, she was utterly repressed, to the point of justifying her obvious gynephilia as a natural state of womanhood, twisting herself in knots to hide herself from the obvious conclusion. And she had openly said that she encouraged her patients to do the same.

She had freedom, before. But she used that to hurt others, all because she didn't understand herself.

Is her freedom worth, then, all the lives that have been harmed in her wake? Is the sanctity of her mind and self worth more than all the girls she's told couldn't love girls, couldn't be girls? Can you weigh a single mind against that – especially when the mind that's been reshaped is so much happier than she was before?

You don't know. You really don't know. You don't believe a human has the right to make that call, but – but you don't know

and the only thing you do know is, you made sure to lay out the sheets for this very reason, because these fantasies you don't and shouldn't have make you wonder, what it'd be like, to hold someone's head in your hands…

what if they needed to be shaped?

what if they were happy to be shaped?

what if they asked to be shaped?

what if they wanted to be shaped?





(…you try not to focus too hard, even as you come, on the idea of the girl you mesmerise, and shape, bearing blonde ringlets and golden eyes…)



Skill Tiers & Branches

There are three skill trees: Hypnosis (in red), Telepathy (in gold), and Enchantment (in green). These trees have three branches each, which have overlap and crossover, with higher-tier skills having additional requirements.

There are three tiers per each of the three branches, plus the Opener and Capstone. The opening skill is required to buy from the branches, while higher-tier skills have additional requirements:

  • T1 skills only require the opener.
  • T2 skills require the T1 skill in the same branch. The governing attribute must be 2 or higher.
  • T3 skills require the T2 skill in the same branch and the T1 skill in another branch. If you have T2 in the secondary branch, you gain additional benefits. The governing attribute must be 3 or higher.
  • The capstone requires one T3 skill in one branch, one T2 skill in another, and one T1 skill in the third. The governing attribute must be 4 or higher.

Every time you unlock a skill, I'll have comments for you. Gain power, and I'll tell you more about my future…and of course, about the possibilities in the present.~
 
This bit is entirely new to the rewrite! (It was already up on Read Only Mind for a bit, though; we may catch up to ROM shortly.) I thought it would be an interesting dynamic.

Speaking of, some of the stories mentioned should sound a bit...familiar...to those familiar with my or @QFalconix's work, or who spend time on certain other websites.
 
Technically two, but the same sequence appeared in both. I kinda wanna update it at some point...
 
While I confess that I'm only familiar with Magic Knight Rayearth through Super Robot Wars (though 'T' does make Rayearth one of the primary plot threads they weave the story out of)...

I really, really hope for everyone's sake that Cibby's future duplicate-self is considerably less of a lunatic than Hikaru's duplicate.
 
Rayearth is here largely to make @QFalconix happy, since he's quite fond of it (that first quote is his, if that tells you anything).

Future-past-Cibele, though...well, spoilers~ You'll just have to keep reading! 🖤
 
Point of divergence confirmed.

Fate/Stay Night has doomed us all.

I knew it.
For reasons that are well-known to returning readers, and which new readers might be able to guess from next update, neither the Fate franchise nor the Fire Emblem series exists as such in the It's No Game universe. (Much like Fate, it's entirely likely Fire Emblem was a short-lived series no one remembered, while Tear Ring Saga (like Tsukihime) is a wildly popular franchise that lasted right up until the Collapse in twenty-twenty-exty.

Now, allow me to provide a YouTube video that is by no means relevant to the preceding statement:



No, not Dr. Ver.
 
Hm, I don't recall reading this part! It's interesting Marq become gateway...
As I'd mentioned earlier, Cibele's family were more plot device than actual-factual characters. Vesta and Marq didn't exist in the original quest.

While they're not gonna change the quest's big picture here, they're certainly gonna color the details some.

While I confess that I'm only familiar with Magic Knight Rayearth through Super Robot Wars (though 'T' does make Rayearth one of the primary plot threads they weave the story out of)...

I really, really hope for everyone's sake that Cibby's future duplicate-self is considerably less of a lunatic than Hikaru's duplicate.
Let's be fair to Nova, she's only that much of a lunatic because a much worse being found her first and fed her ideas about expressing Hikaru's self-loathing in more murderous ways.

Rayearth is here largely to make @QFalconix happy, since he's quite fond of it (that first quote is his, if that tells you anything).

Future-past-Cibele, though...well, spoilers~ You'll just have to keep reading! 🖤
Ehe, that quote's from a story I did ages ago. Much like Marq, I like to think I've improved since then.
 
Neat chapter, It's interesting to see Cibby's unique family and how they shaped her to be the person she is and how they continue to influence her.

Also,
His most popular story may well be one about a well-armed magical girl trapped in a time loop – you think it's the Fourth Order's 'Adversary', the demon that 'opposes' the Goddess – where everyone in the next loop becomes intensely, even fanatically attracted to her. And of course, she doesn't know why, and has trouble letting herself take advantage
To quote a certain video...

Me: Ha! Good one!
Somewhat innocent readers: What?
Me: Nevermind, it'll probably just go over your head.
 
Ⅱ.5: Miss Sternbach, You’re Beautiful!
Later, that same day…or, is it the future, twenty years ago, in the depths of outer space?

♪ our satori is just floating in the core / where we can spiritually go through the door

Far above the surface of the Earth, a stolen prototype variable fighter begins its descent to the planet, whose defenses and vulnerable human minds are both held within the powerful musical grip of the artificial intelligence Sharon Apple.

"Never mind," the pilot says to the hacker accompanying him. "Just trust my skill."

"Skill has nothing to do with this. It's going to take pure luck this time."

"Luck is one of my skills!"

…despite all this excitement, Korri just yawns, unable to summon up much interest in the love story of a man, a woman, another man with a serious and barely-medicated mental disorder, and an evil computer idol with hypnotic music as set against the backdrop of a bunch of planes that are also robots.

You don't get it. How can she like horror movies and not this?

"At least the music is good," says Korri, snuggling into her side.

"Well, yeah, it ought to be!" You feel good, even if Korri's not interested in the anime; just spending time with her is enough to make you feel all warm inside. "If Marina likes a song, it's gotta be good, right?"

"Do you prefer the original, or her cover?" Korri snuggles into your side. "I think I prefer Marina's version a bit. Sounds even more like it could do things to your head, y'know? Which is the point, right? We can feel the info high!"

"E-ehe. Something like that." Again, Korri is pushing your buttons. She doesn't know, of course, but still, it's kinda awkward! "I wonder if I'll get to see her in concert next month?"

"This is why you should've gone with your mom to the concert, Cibby! Marina opening for Lauren…"

"Mouuu, enough with that!" you yell, cheeks puffing out. "I get it, I made a mistake! Marina, at least, I'll get to see again…"

You sigh dreamily. The beautiful, alluring, wonderous Marina Arisa is one of the top idols here in Southern Sun – a so-called 'idol of the future', operating independently of traditional record labels or even the Sunset Corporation! (And Sunset just has to go along with her popularity – she's always top-ranked in the polls.)

You're not ashamed to call yourself a fangirl, especially not when her music fits your tastes so well to begin with. Her cerulean hair, her graceful dancing, her bewitching voice…even if some people call them 'artificial', they're captivating

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa fudge the selkie in that story was a thinly-veiled marina expy aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa how did you not notice

er. That, uh, rather embarrassing revelation aside (though you can still hear the laundry going from the consequences of that), last Friday's concert was the culmination of Marina's career, getting to share the stage with one of her inspirations…

Of all the times to chase senpai's coattails, huh?

"So how did the Debate Club, anyway?" Korri asks, providing a helpful distraction from your regrets.

"Surprisingly well!" You flash a peace-sign – you're feeling kinda confident right now. "I managed to argue successfully that hot dogs were, in fact, a sandwich."

Korri blinks. "…they are?"

"Don't make me start again!" you pout (cutely). "Anyway, I think Milia's got some history with Ms. Yi, because she recognised me right away."

"…that doesn't sound good, Cibby," Korri says, looking a bit grim – ah, she's worried about you, huh. "If she knows you, it's probably not for good reasons. And if she's that obsessive over who's favored by a teacher…"

"I'm not really looking forward to it either, but it'd be nice if we could get along, right? If only for appearances' sake." Milia's hot, sure – you're not going to deny that – but she's kinda rotten. Sure, Stella doesn't like you, but she strikes you as a good person, right? But you don't think you'd really want to date Milia, physically attractive as she might be.

"I don't really think people like that 'get along', is the thing. They don't call you 'Empress' because you're nice, you know? Although, that would actually be more appropriate to the meaning of the Empress Arcana in tarot." Korri mumbles, putting up her hood. "If you're determined to do it, though, remember the kind of person you're dealing with."

You sigh. "So I just have to put up with it, huh."

"You don't have to go, but if you do, just…keep it professional," says Korri. "Try not to get too close to her. Someone like that is dangerous, Cibby, especially in today's political climate. You don't want her upset at you, trust me." Though you've been trying not to use your telepathy too much today, you can still feel a faint shudder down Korri's spine, and you squeeze her close to you in return.

It's not what you were hoping to hear, but…you suppose it can't be helped. You're not even totally sure it's working for grinding; you need to gain some ability scores to get a baseline on how it all works. Future-past-you has all these dang tutorials, but wouldn't a progress bar help?!

Maybe, you should ask Korri about it. You still can't reveal your power to her, of course, but maybe she'd have useful advice?

"Uhm, here's a question! I've been thinking about some of Marq's stories…" Right, don't mention the NSFW ones, that won't go well. "Let's say you got the power to live life as a video game. How would you try to get your Intelligence up?"

"I mean…what kind of video game?" Korri asks. "Do I need to murder things for blood echoes? Is it experience-based or level-by-use based?"

"Uh…let's say level-by-use." It seems vaguely accurate, though you'll need a skill boost to know for sure.

"Still not that specific, but…I mean, programming class is a good plan in my book. Assuming 'intelligence' is actually more about logical reasoning and technical skill, you're already on the right track. Just do your best to keep your mind sharp, okay Cibby?" Korri laughs, and you just…

Jeez, you just wanna kiss her! B-but that'd be weird…chocolate fudge, you're just too gay sometimes.

"By the way, Cibby! Are you still worried about things with Stella?" she says – good thing Korri can't read minds.

"Of course I am! This is really nervewracking. But Ms. Yi seems to think it'll go fine?" Don't talk about hypnosis, don't talk about hypnosis…

"It's Ms. Yi who suggested hypnosis, right?" fudge

"E-ehe. Only because Stella's interested! I don't think she'd have done it otherwise…" You're not sure whether you're lucky or not, given future-past-you.

"Doesn't she talk about that stuff a lot, Cibby?"

"I mean, not all the time." (Admittedly, you think it might be more frequent than you first thought.) "Though we had a rant about free will just before Golden Week started, actually."

"Oh? What did she say?"

"Implications about free will being an illusion because of the deterministic nature of the physical universe."

"That's kind of reductivist, isn't it?" says Korri, raising her hood again, and looking quite determined. "That makes no difference to our own perceptions. It's philosophically lazy and excuses our actions regardless of any kind of moral or ethical framework…"

…sometimes you forget Korri's a genius. Somehow.

"Well, uh, aside from that," you say, hastily trying to change the subject, "I guess I'm seeing Stella Friday, huh? I don't really know how I'm going to handle things…"

"I think your brother's right, though. About the ethics of it. Hmn, but I guess it's probably fine, if the school allows for it…given the parameters of the assignment, it doesn't feel like you could do much harm, y'know?"

"I can't just not do it!" You wave your arms around to show just how serious you are about it! "Stella would kill me! Possibly literally!"

"No, I get it. I think you should do it, too!" Aah, sweet, beautiful, wonderful Korri's smile…"I have a good feeling about it, y'know?"

You smile, and nestle closer against Korri and her hoodie. She's warm…"Thanks a lot, Korri." You've learned to trust her instinct on this sort of thing, so it kind of eases your mind about this, despite future-past-you and Marq and everything.

"Of course! Is there any way I can help?" Korri gives you one of her wide, warm smiles. Sweet Korri…please don't judge about how Cibby is becoming a horrible mind controlling villain, okay?

"Well, there's tonight's programming class." You pretty much just clicked it on a whim – it's being held as a night class at the Pedersen College private school in Greener Grass. A bit far, but it sounded appealing somehow? "Any tips for that?"

"You really are trying to change things up after your accident, huh?" Korri laughs. Aah, sweet, wonderful, beautiful Korri is just…music to your ears. Even an idol like Marina can't outshine Korri's smile. "Hm. I remember a nasty trick the teacher pulled in my first programming class. No idea if it'll happen here, but…"

"Ooh? Tell me!"

"The teacher asked us to write a program to sort a list of numbers, right? Most beginners, with no advance knowledge, try what's called 'bubble sort' – an algorithm that's simple to implement, but about the worst possible choice for the job! Only two people in my class saw past it, and I was one of them. If your teacher gives you that kind of task, Cibby, I'd recommend trying to implement insertion sort! I'll send you the details when you head out, okay?"

"If that comes up, I'll be ready, I suppose!" Hmn, but again – Korri's instincts. Somehow, she always seems to know what's up…"I should probably get going after we're done with this, though."

"I'll send you my spirit energy from here!" Ah, if only! Korri would do much better at this kind of class…though she also wouldn't need it. "And, one more thing, Cibby!" Korri's still smiling, even as she says something ridiculous: "You haven't done hypnosis before, have you? Do you wanna practice with me?"

"…what?"

You blink.

Korri grins.

…she's serious.

"You're serious."

"Why not? It's not like hypnosis can make you do anything you don't wanna do." Eheh…yes, definitely. Not like…not like you have abilities that can – er, wait, you don't have those abilities yet, so it doesn't matter. But still. "You can make me cluck like a chicken!"

"I suppose it wouldn't be bad…I thought you were busy tomorrow?" Korri's not had a lot of flight time lately, so you know she was looking forward to taking time out in her PRV.

"Yeah, that's still happening. But you've got the house to yourself Friday, right? I should be able to come over and head out before Stella gets there!"

"Uh…sure, I'll let you know if I want the help." It's worth considering, at least. Even if it's a dangerous temptation!

…plus you don't have Instant Hypnotherapist yet. Still, you've been going through Ms. Yi and Aunt Vesta's reading lists, it can't be that difficult. Especially with Thought Skimmer. And like sweet, beautiful, wonderful Korri says? You can't make her do anything she doesn't want to do.

(…things she doesn't want to do, like becoming a lesbian, or being yours forever…)



Leaving Korri behind, you set out on your journey to your class, and by the time you get to the Pedersen College…you're already a little annoyed.

"It's poetry in motion, she turned her tender eyes to me…" Well, you can't be in that bad a mood, you've already started wearing your earbuds again.

Greener Grass is northeast from the Capital District, along the Kon Kan River, bypassed by the trains and only accessible by bus – lest its tranquil 'village character' be disrupted. And if you asked your mom to describe it in one word? That word would probably be 'bougie'.

You hear a lot of rants about land use here in Southern Sun, a lot of them from older people who lived in places like Hong Kong or Singapore where high density living was a fact of life. Most of Southern Sun is high-rise apartments, including some of the most desirable real estate, but there's still plenty of people willing to pay a premium for this sort of ordered, pastoral parkland experience, where everyone lives in their own massive house. A way of life preserved here, for those who left their old lives behind in places like Old Canada.

Well, with your house, you have no room to talk, but Calvina sure has nothing but unkind words for it.

So too is the Pedersen College the desirable school here in Southern Sun; since the dorms at the Verwest Academy closed twenty years go, it's been the only real boarding school left in Southern Sun, with students not just from Southern Sun, but all over the world. A concept like 'private school' seems outmoded as 'real dairy' ice cream – that is to say, it's the kind of outdated that reminds you of those gross videos of cows being milked you saw in history class! – but just like people pay a premium for the latter, they're more than willing to pay a premium for the former, perhaps accompanied by those few scholarship students who shine brightly enough to be granted a place among the jet set.

All of this is to say –

why is this campus so heckin' big?!

You managed to navigate your way through the 'village' streets full of expensive houses with even more expensive cars out front (how can they afford the road tax?), only to find yourself completely lost within the building itself. Didn't help that it was surrounded by the world's biggest hedge, it's a bunch of one-floor buildings, of which you're only vaguely sure you're in the right one!

Everywhere you walk you're surrounded by self-aggrandizing achievements and awards, which at the very least does remind you of Verwest a little, but it's still a little obnoxious…always feels like every year, you have to do more and more simply to pass, let alone get noticed. They seem real proud they have a Sunset scholarship student in their sixth form graduating class, too; to be fair, you get maybe one of those a year in the whole city, no more than half a dozen. And yet, all it does is remind you of how little you've managed to achieve in your short life.

Well, now that's changed! And clearly it changed for future-past-you, too! You're not so keen on the brainwashing part, sure, but you promised yourself you'd enjoy your Gamer power as much as possible, and you'll do it! And you'll meet a cute –

doof.

…for the second time in less than a week, something crashes into you while you've got your head in the clouds. Or –

your arm moves before your brain does. Not something, someone.

Before the girl you bumped into falls, you catch her arm and pull her toward you, helping her steady herself.

"Oh my gosh, I'm so sorry!" You pull away the moment you're sure she's alright! "I did it again! I need to watch where I'm going…"

"No, it is okay." The girl seems alright, actually. She's carrying a motorcycle helmet and a messenger bag, but she looks about your age – she's probably not here as a boarding student. "I should pay more attention! It is easy to get lost in this building, is it not?"

"Uh, yeah, seems that way. Ehe." You nervously scratch the back of your head. "What are you looking for?"

"I am looking for…Room 101, yes? Introduction to Computers and Programming?" Short blonde hair and brilliant blue-eyes…with that accent, and how pale she is, she's gotta be a Scandinavian climate refugee.

"Oh, that's what I'm looking for too! We're in the same class, huh? That's –"

…you look above the door to your left, with a big sign of '101' above it, LED-illuminated and blatantly unmissable by anyone but the two of you.

Right.

Maybe grind up Adaptability at some point, huh?

"Ah, so we're already here, then!" she says. "Very good, very good…I am, ah, a bit old fashioned. I am hoping this class will help me get used to Southern Sun." The Nordic girl lets go fo your arm, and bows her head to you. "I am Irma. Irma Suikkari." It's likely she hasn't been here too long; she's got a long-sleeved sweater in white with blue snowflake patterns, which – while cute – isn't exactly local fashion. "I am happy to meet you, ah…?"

"Cibele. Cibele Epeli Imanis!" You flash a peace-sign for emphasis. Ah, jeez, she's cute! (Well, she's a girl, so that's expected.) She might make a good class friend. "I think we're a bit early, so we should probably just find a seat."

"Of course! I am, ah…how you say? In your care." Irma giggles politely, and you can't help but feel a little inspired. You don't know for sure yet if she's checking you out, but…if she is, maybe you're cuter already!

"If that's the case…" You open the door for Irma, and gesture for her. "After you!"

"My, how gallant! You are almost like a knight, yes?" Irma giggles again at her own joke as she wanders in. "Do you, ah, rescue princesses from dragons?"

"I haven't met any of either, but…funny thing, I do take fencing classes!"

"My! A girl who can handle a sword…ah – no, that is presumptuous. Maybe you prefer sheaths?"

Huh…Irma's shockingly easy to get along with. Maybe you two can be friends? Just like that, a load off your mind – you're certain you're prepared for anything that comes your way now!

Like you always say, how hard can it be?



…okay, fine. You weren't prepared for this.

"Hello, and welcome to Introduction to Computers and Programming. Through the next few weeks this course will give you an underpinning to the technology that powers all our lives."

You weren't prepared to walk into this class and suddenly develop another crush.

"My name is Rita Sternbach, and I'll be your instructor here for the next few weeks. Please, take things at your own pace. I can guarantee that you'll all have a better understanding of the way electronic computing has transformed our lives in the past hundred years."

Is this love at first sight? You never believed in such a thing – Calvina's the closest you've ever come, but even then you weren't so attracted to her, in just the first moment…

What is this feeling?

"Now, you're all familiar with the use of a smartphone or wearable, right?"

Everyone raises their hand except Irma, seated next to you, although she seems rather dazed.

You're sure Rita's your age. Maybe a tiny bit older or younger, but not even the gap between you and Calvina. This is just a general education class, to be sure, but you didn't expect the teacher to leave this kind of impact.

"Ah, I see. I'll start with the basics, then. Not to worry, just listen closely and I'll teach you everything you need to know."

She's probably got a few inches on you, standing at the perfect height to look down on you if you were face to face. (…okay maybe you might be subby for teachers…) Her skin is utterly flawless, and for some reason, its color reminds you of nothing less than the light of the moon.

Her hair is silky and straight, waist-long, and dyed a bright violet. A large blue ribbon is tied into a bow on one side, pulling back some of her hair, but it falls so perfectly onto her you don't know how it could ever get in the way.

"The first computers were not actually machines, but people. The term referred to someone who computes, and…"

Her eyes are such a vivid, deep blue that they look violet –

are you staring? You must be staring. This is totally weird! You know you're a bit of a disaster, but only Seul-ki ever brought this kind of thing out of you!

But, her voice is…aah, it's got this clear and resonant quality to it, and you think it's a way better voice for hypnotising someone than yours…

"…the first machine that could be called a computer in the modern sense was the Analytical Engine, which was never built…"

And she's American!

O-okay, no, don't think that way, Cibby, you've just – you know, it's a bad thing to fetishize and exoticize that, Rita's probably dealt with that a lot, but –

"…relays gave way to vacuum tubes, which gave way to transistors, which…"

she's got such perfect…it's just, her body is perfectly proportioned, it's like, you know it's impossible, but if someone made a mathematically perfect body, mathematically perfect breasts

"…over the decades of the Reiwa era, the ubiquitous RISC was ultimately supplanted by dedicated hardware ZISC…"

and, you wonder, does she, is she? Every so often, you think her eyes flit toward you, and with your telepathy you catch just a tiny hint of her paying enough attention for it to work, before she pulls back to the group and it stops, does she think you're cute? Is she? Could she?

…you look to your left.

Irma looks mesmerized. (Fittingly enough – no, bad thoughts, bad thoughts!) You can't read her mind, but you don't need to, just looking at her is enough, and part of you wonders if you shouldn't be cuter, but you can see Rita

"…of course, it is necessary to first consider the possible implications for the physical universe and human brain of the Church-Turing hypothesis…"

You really can't blame Irma for it.

"…total simulation of human brain processes are still limited by human capability, so we must move even beyond that…"

There's just something about her

"Artificial general intelligence."



…what?

Rita Sternbach, teacher of a general education computer course, only as old as you – she's still in a school uniform, loose tie and open blouse, proudly displaying her absolute territory – proudly leaps so far ahead of her class she may as well be introducing the concept of a computer to someone from an era where the greatest technological innovation is writing sherbet down.

She doesn't seem to have noticed, though, simply sighing and shrugging, and – and to be honest, it's kind of hot, too, how casually…

"Of course, to actually test this, I'd need access to a supercomputer the likes of which I'd never get my hands on personally." Rita removes her glasses, reaching down to clean them off before pushing them right back up her nose. "Too bad, really. This would be the first step into a much more interesting world."

You stare blankly at the smartboard.

You can barely make heads or tails of the diagram that Rita has managed to draw, barely paying close attention to it, but…

Is this the kind of girl you're being taught by?

Chocolate fudge and parfaits, no wonder you and Irma are acting like this.

At the edges, in your mind, something within you just says to you that this is, somehow…somehow, something to fear. (And isn't it the case, that sometimes the scariest things are the ones we want the most?)

Fudge, maybe your system has a crush too, huh?

aah, she's looking this way, she's looking at you, what do you do –

Oh. There's a guy on the other side of you raising his hand. Maybe she was looking at him? But, no, you swear you felt something, through your telepathy as Rita looked to you, like a Newtype flash, you can see it –

"Uh. Right, um." The guy next to you coughs. "Isn't building AGIs a bad thing? Like, 'human extinction event' level bad?"





The look on Rita's face is legendary.

"Sigh. No."

"But –"

"To automatically assume that our artificially born children, the beautiful creations of our genius, will end human civilisation through their vast power and dominance is like saying we shouldn't have children because they might theoretically become a genocidal dictator. As threats to the continued existence of humans go, there are easily countless more pressing ones – climate change, fascism, nuclear weapons, hate-motivated violence, large-scale impact events, to name a few – and exactly none of those have the potential to improve human lives that artificial intelligence does.

"How many people have humans killed? How close have humans driven themselves to extinction? The world we live in was born from human hands." Rita smirks, crossing her arms, and you can feel the boy next to you tremble. "The worst a machine could do is no worse than what humans have only escaped by a hair's breadth. The best a machine could do is save humanity from ourselves. Hawking was wrong, and honestly, I'd love the chance to prove it."



…okay yeah that was pretty hot.

But, it gets you thinking. This topic came up with Ms. Yi, didn't it? And your family's talked about it, too, because of their own pasts. Plus, it means, um, you can look smart and impressive in front of Rita, right?

And so, you raise your hand.

"Yes, you, with the cute pigtails."

C-cute?! No, wait, focus! Gotta ask the question first!

"Yes, um…even if we shouldn't deny that potential, even if we can't assume AIs will render us extinct, is it such a good idea to entrust our lives to automated systems? Ones which humans can exploit? It's been known for decades that poorly designed AIs are subject to algorithmic bias, including biases that reflect systemic human biases."

Rita nods, and smiles at you. A-ah, being noticed by senpai is kinda twitterpating…"It's true, the field's been struggling with that for a long time now. But artificial intelligence has never reached the point of generalization.

"In Heisei 28, the Microsoft Corporation of Old America released a chatter bot to the global social network of the time called Tay. At the time, of course, the Collapse was well on its way, and the bot absorbed the words of the fascists that caused my parents' country to Balkanize and their home of San Francisco to be reclaimed by the sea. It was tainted by the sins of humanity, you could say." Even without telepathy, you can feel a quiet anger radiating from the girl as she thinks of it. "When the bot was taken down, those fascists claimed that Tay's absorption of their words was proof that an intelligent person would agree with them, and that 'censoring' her later was proof of the righteousness of their cause.

"But while highly sophisticated by the standards of the time, Tay was nothing more than a machine. It was incapable of 'reasoning'. By Reiwa 2, GPT-3 had far surpassed it, but even that was not capable of 'reasoning' in the way humans understand it." Rita smirks, crossing her arms, her chest lifting up, and again you're self-conscious of the way she looks. "You may as well claim that a parrot quoting Shakespeare after being trained is proof that parrots are as intelligent as humans.

"Systems like Tay are to AGI what lower-order lifeforms are to humans. Consider them the bacterium or archaea, and modern AI systems as perhaps at best approaching a particularly dim-witted dog. Useful, sure, but not capable of even imitating true reasoning. The whole point of AGI is that it can do anything a human can! And we've gotten much better at allowing humans to learn, and change, than we were before the Collapse. The modern study of memetics makes it much easier to shape an AI with the capabilities of a human to the desired state, right?"

You tip your head to the side. Rita's really passionate about this, huh? It's hard to know if you could hope to keep up over time without the Gamer System, but you can at least give it a shot. "At that point, though…the kind of AI you're talking about, what's the difference between it and a human?"

"Besides the immense increase in cognitive efficiency?"

"Mostly it just sounds like, more than wanting to make a better machine, you want to make a better human. Couldn't you focus on enhancing humans, to get the result you want?"

(…huh. Where'd that come from? Well, maybe you're getting smarter already!)

Rita closes her eyes, and adjusts her glasses…

and smiles.

"I suppose you do have a point. I know I'd rather become such an existence myself than simply make one. Even so, my ultimate point is that one shouldn't reject someone simply for being made from silicon rather than carbon – unless you plan to stop creating new humans because one might cause the next Collapse."

Aah, you feel like you're connecting with Rita! This is good…o-oh, Irma's next to you, raising her hand, very high, and –

"U-um. I am sorry if this is trouble, and this is all very interesting, but. Is this, part of the curriculum? I've taken all the notes I can, but…"



…peeking into Irma's notebook (paper and all!) reveals that she's made an exact replica of the diagram and shorthand of the lecture, but, even looking at her notes you can't make sense of it. Even so, well…

Rita's a bit deer-in-headlights when you look up, getting all sheepish as she realizes just how far ahead of everyone else she's leapt. "Ehe. Um. I guess I did get a bit carried away."

…huh. Apparently, funnily enough, AGI theory is not an appropriate topic for a class on the Introduction to Computers and Programming. Who knew?



After the interesting lecture, Rita took the class through a few different exercises, some of which seemed a little abstract. Evaluations of ability? Or something deeper? It's hard to figure out what's on Rita Sternbach's mind. Thought Skimmer only grabs surface thoughts, and only ones directly pointed at you; most of Rita's motivations thus remain unscrutable.

All that said? You can tell Irma's very far behind the rest of the class, technologically speaking.

"…I'm not sure how else to do it," Irma comments, staring at her code. It's…messy. It's a bubble sort, sure, but that isn't what's bugging you. What's bugging you is the poor girl doesn't know how to touch-type! She's hunting and pecking, and she seems to barely know how a mouse works…poor girl.

Well. You're here to help! Good thing Korri gave you that anecdote – funny that the same thing happened here, too. (Apparently it's not that uncommon, but still.)

"Alright, try to think of it this way," you say, looking over Irma's shoulder. "Imagine taking your list of numbers, okay? Take the first number in the list, turn that into a new array. Take the second number in the old array, then compare that to the number in the new array, placing it in the correct position."

"Huh…like this?" Irma says, drawing in her notebook as you point out the method. She seems to be more of a visual thinker, so you imagine programming's a bit more abstract than she'd like, but she grasps the concept of insertion sort just fine. Korri's told you before that the process of programming is taking what you find to be self-evident, and figuring out how to communicate that to the computer through a rigid language. Irma might be bewildered by the prospect of an IDE, but that's not a skill that's easy to come by naturally.

"Just like that, yeah!" you say, offering a little praise as Irma begins typing again, trying to work out how to translate her diagram to code. "This is called 'insertion sort'. It's not the fastest kind of sort, but it's a lot less complex than bubble sort. See, bubble sort has a much higher complexity in nearly all cases, unless the list is already sorted. Worst-case insertion sort is about as complex, but still faster, and generally the complexity dwindles quickly in average cases…"

"Oh? I'm impressed," Rita says from over your shoulder. H-how long has she been watching? H-has Senpai noticed you?! "You read ahead, didn't you?"

"A friend of mine said this might happen if you, uh, did a sorting exercise," you mutter, glancing at Rita. She's still so pretty…it's so easy to see the violet of her eyes like this…

"I see…Irma seems to be doing well, under your instruction. Unexpected." You can't quite read Rita's expression, and you're a bit too twitterpated to risk reading her mind like this! W-what if she notices?! "Have you taken programming classes before, Cibele?"

"A couple, but nothing I got a handle on like this. You make it a lot easier!" You try and play it off, hoping you don't look too nervous, that you don't stare

And, a-ah! Rita is smiling! What is it about her that gets you like this…? "Well, I've certainly got my eye on you, Cibele," she says, and she sounds so intrigued…"And thanks for helping out the other students, too."

"It is no problem. Cibele is very kind!" Irma says. "Thank you for assisting me, Cibele."

"No problem!" You flash Rita a peace-sign – a-ah, is that too Heisei?! Mouuu… – and she goes back to work…

though her gaze seems to linger.

You do wonder…why did Rita do it this way? A way of figuring out who needs the help most? Or maybe it's the other way around, trying to test who stands out the most, and then figuring out how to narrow the gap – or how to make those with that talent flourish. You can't deny, Rita has a magnetism to her; there's just something about her that makes you notice her – and you're pretty sure you're not alone.

The class, though? (Remember, you're here to grind, not meet girls!) Rita's given you several sample tasks, and you were able to blow through most of them pretty easily. Perhaps, it's a comprehensive evaluation of the nature of a student's abilities. Not all the tasks were relevant to programming; Irma didn't do too well at any of them, but she did noticeably better on the matter of spatial reasoning, you're pretty sure. You get the sense Rita's got a plan worked out, for this entire summer class, as though she's testing herself and her methods as much as she's testing any of you…

"You are quite interested in her, no?" Irma asks as she types, as you keep trying to look at Rita while not looking like you're looking.

"Um, yes! I mean, er…yes? I think yes is the right answer."

"You keep glancing over at her, Cibele."

"W-well, um. She's just, kind of amazing? But, I can't help but feel like there's something about her."

Your new friend giggles, a little. "Perhaps, you are superstitious?"

"I'm not, really." If you were before meeting Seul-ki, you're definitely not now.

"Well, no, but it may be funny." Seems like Irma doesn't mean it seriously, at least! "Yes? Your birthday?"

"Um, October 3rd?"

"Yes. Of course." She nods to herself, as if she'd gained some deep insight. "Your astrological reading for Libras today: 'you will have a fateful encounter'."

"I-I don't know about that!"

"Blood type?"

"Um, O, I think?" You honestly can't remember.

"Perhaps her blood type is B? That would be good compatibility. You could even say, 'B' for…'best girl', yes?"



…okay, yeah, you don't need any telepathy to know Irma's also interested.

Oddly enough, though…you're not sure about it, without being able to read their minds – and it comes to mind you're starting to be a bit casual about it? – but for whatever reason, the guys in the room don't seem that interested in Rita. Heck, they're more into you than Rita…which you don't get, because you and Irma are both extremely into women, and you've both seen Rita. The guys can't all be gay, right?

(Well, maybe it's because…well, Rita just looks lesbian, you know? If only you were so lucky)

"Or maybe it's something simpler," Irma continues, tipping her head to meet you with icy blue eyes. "You must've met in a dream, or something. Perhaps, you were star-crossed lovers in a previous life…" She leans in, a sinister look on her face. "Or even, destined rivals and enemies!"

"D-don't act like those are the same thing!" Although…

Hm. Irma can't know, but it's certainly not impossible that you'd met in the previous timeline. Wholly unlikely, of course, there's 40 million gosh-darned people in the city, but possible!

But if it were anything like Irma described…even if she's been circumspect about it, surely future-past-you would've told you something that important, right?

"In a dream, or something," you mutter, looking back toward Rita.

"Ah, perhaps, if you look too much at another girl, I'll be jealous?"

!

Y-you hastily return your attention to Irma, blushing furiously. "I-it's not like that! I mean –"

"Relax, Cibele. It was, to say, a joke." Irma giggles, and you find yourself pouting at her. Ah, she really is pretty easygoing, though…"I am a recent arrival, of course, but I am aware of…how to say. How relationships are here?"

"Ah, I guess it's pretty different in…uh…"

"Finland."

"Yeah, that! Well, I've heard that it isn't so bad, mostly." That part of the world weathered the Collapse alright, but the climate threat has reached its shores, and the past decade has seen a lot of Nordic cuties coming to Southern Sun.

"It was not! I do miss it. But, well, I'm determined to fit in here, yes?"

"Is that why you're wearing long sleeves?"

"Force of habit. Ah, but, it's safer to wear long sleeves when driving a scooter, yes?"

"Ooh, that's right!" Calvina has the same issue. Well, she makes it work for her…"I don't drive, except in video games. And if you watched me play them, you'd know why…" You feel a bit self-conscious, but…well, Irma's easy to get along with.

Seems like you're making a new friend, huh? She even thinks you're cute, but…

well.

You're both lesbians. Well, Irma's not trying to hide it or anything, and you're fairly sure the blue Heisei pigtails aren't something straight girls have. (Not at nineteen, at least.) And if you hear a girl in glasses making a speech like that, just daring anyone to tell her she's wrong…

"…maybe you should ask her out?" Irma asks. "I am…mm. How to say – too self-conscious. I worry I'd not be able to keep up with her!"

"Maybe, maybe I should…" It's strange, how Irma seems to be pushing you toward it, even before herself, but…

you feel like you're understanding, a little better, how you come across to people. And so too, understanding how the world works.

And as Irma's eyes wander back toward the teacher, your own are drawn back toward Rita –

and your eyes meet. brown to violet.

you find yourself reaching out, with your telepathy, in that briefest of moments…

drawn in, toward a mind that feels so much like a black hole, an irresistible magnetism that cannot be escaped. a singularity, impossibly dense and immesurably vast. all of it, all of that darkness, thinking in that moment, of only one thing, as your heart beats in tune with hers…

Cibele.

Ba-thump.

Cibele Epeli Imanis.

Ba-thump.







Your Intelligence has increased by 1!
Your Charisma has increased by 1!


Class ends, unceremoniously, and you're not quite sure how you got Charisma over that…but, one thing's for sure. Future-past-you was right about the whole 'extracurricular activities' thing. (Heck, maybe it's easier around cute girls, too?)

Those stat increases…you'll need to deal with them later. You don't feel so different right now, but maybe that'll change?

You've got to buy those new abilities, too…

Hypnosis Skill Points: 1
Enchantment Skill Points: 1

(It would be too much to ask to keep climbing up Telepathy and avoid temptation, huh.)

"It's been hard, adjusting to Southern Sun," Irma says, as she stuffs her notebook back into her messenger bag. Rita is handling some things at her desk, though her eyes seem to glance at you every so often, just like before. "Not just the weather, but how crowded everything is. Such a huge city…"

Leaving everything she knows behind, for a city that might well be hostile to her presence…it really can't be easy for her. You don't wanna give her platitudes, so you settle on nodding in agreement. Climate refugees have it so hard these days, and with no one to stand up for them…

Where does all the good go?

Sure, you could fight crime physically, but so many people are pushed into crime because they feel they have no other option. Fighting the root causes is much better, even if you won't refuse to defend against injustice you witness just because someone might not have done it under other circumstances. If you can use the Intelligence and Charisma you've gained to that end, then maybe you'll be able to make a difference…though, maybe, you're still a long way away from this 'Queen', whoever she is.

(You'll just have to hope you can trust future-past-you's judgement on that better than you can trust her judgement on girls and free will.)

"Ah! Cibele! Would you, ah…like to share mobile numbers?" Irma asks, out of the blue, as you space out a little. R-really? Just like that…? What a cutie! You did help her out a lot, but you didn't think you'd gained that amount of trust…"I have few friends in this city. There is my family, yes, but…it'd be nice to be shown around every now and again."

"Uh…s-sure!" you say, trying to suppress your blush. Even if she just means it in a friendly way, it's still nice to make new friends, right? For someone from a cold part of the world, as you skim against her mind, it feels so warm, especially her feelings toward you…perhaps, she's hotblooded? Heheh, you could almost imagine her as a super robot pilot. Beware Irma, the White Comet –

er. Maybe don't write fanfiction about your friends in your head. (Especially not the ones you just met!)

"I have had a lot of fun today, Cibele, being in your care. And our teacher's, of course." Irma waves over at Rita. "Thank you both! I, ah, hope Cibele will continue to help me? If, that is, you wish…"

"O-of course!" Aw, two cuties have warm feelings toward you! Rita said you were cute, and…maybe things with Irma will go well? You don't need any brainwashing for this at all! Future-past-you can suck on your popsickle for all you care –

(er. T-too lewd!)

"…of course," Rita says. She seems a bit distracted…enough that you can't get a grip on her with your Thought Skimmer. "And you as well, Cibele. I hope you learned something." She's much…less animated than before. Maybe she's tired? It is kinda late.

"I-I did, um…thank you!" You're still kind of nervous, even as you wave toward Irma as she happily skips out. Rita's kind of intimidating, but you know she found you attractive, you know she's got some kind of powerful emotion toward you –

"That said, it's pretty late. I need to get going while the train schedules are still sensible. Tch, this is what you get for not replacing human maintenance workers with machines…"

W-wait, what? "A-ah…if you're sure!"

"I'll see you next week, Cibele. I have high hopes for you." She's got that hint of a smile, almost that tiny hint of smugness that felt so attractive during her lecture, and yet, she leaves with nary a word.

W-what? Was…was what you saw within Rita's mind wrong? You try to reach out to her, stretching that mental arm out before her, to try and make contact –

Of course. It'd be too much to ask –

and then her thoughts disappear with her around the corner, brilliant purple hair flowing behind her.

"…there she goes, huh. One of God's own prototypes," you mutter in disbelief. You boosted your Charisma, too, and it's like this, huh?

…did you do something wrong? Maybe she was nervous? Y-you shouldn't jump to conclusions…

Y-you'll just have to be twice as cute next week to make up for it! You won't be defeated here! One way or another, Rita will admit she has a thing for you, and that's that! You'll make it your first mission as a heroine –

er.

Or rather. Your second mission. Or even your third. Because on Friday, May 7th, Reiwa 42…

both Korrigan Trelawney and Stella Maris will be your first real test of the possibilites of the power of the so-called 'Hypnogamer'.





…no pressure, huh?



Irma Suikkari
???: White Comet

Rita Sternbach
???: Science/Visions


Attribute: Intelligence

Increase learning capacity. Increase logical reasoning. Increase aptitude with technology and science. In addition, improves the effectiveness of the Enchantment skill tree. Improve through academic study or use of Enchantment skills.

I know studying isn't your strong suit, and really it's still not mine either, but…what if I told you that this let you cast real magic? Just watch hostility melt with Charm Person, or correct their bad behaviour with Suggestion…especially Stella. She dearly needs someone to tell her what good behaviour is.
 
Ah, Rita and Irma! Two very cool characters :p

Rita really hits the ground running in her interaction, here - a bit of her philosophy, showing off her skills, even if she's quieted down by the end. I look forward to the next time she shows up.
 
Irma is another of the cuties who get to enjoy the fruits of the rewrite. Unlike Millia, that's because it took a while to figure out her angle (though getting introduced at the same time as Rita Sternbach, one of the two biggest members of the supporting cast, didn't help her much).

Also, getting the hang of writing submissives helps. That's a lot harder than one would think at first glance.

The Meet Cute scene is new to the rewrite, as well as... the bulk of the conversation Irma has with Cibele.
 
Ah, Rita and Irma! Two very cool characters :p

Rita really hits the ground running in her interaction, here - a bit of her philosophy, showing off her skills, even if she's quieted down by the end. I look forward to the next time she shows up.
Irma is another of the cuties who get to enjoy the fruits of the rewrite. Unlike Millia, that's because it took a while to figure out her angle (though getting introduced at the same time as Rita Sternbach, one of the two biggest members of the supporting cast, didn't help her much).

Also, getting the hang of writing submissives helps. That's a lot harder than one would think at first glance.

The Meet Cute scene is new to the rewrite, as well as... the bulk of the conversation Irma has with Cibele.
In fairness, Rita also has a big chunk of new dialogue here, where she goes into further detail about her reasoning on artificial intelligence - and, in the process, talks about the nature of algorithmic bias and machine learning in a way that a lot of AI enthusiasts would dismiss, ignore, or actively encourage. (People really did believe Tay picking up toxic memes was a sign of true intelligence.)

Interesting fact, as an aside: Tay was the inspiration for the 'Endless Solitude' sequence of Puella Magi Madoka Magica Side Story: Magia Record! The Uwasa in that storyline was formerly an AI (who Futaba Sana named 'Ai', because, um, she's not good at names?) who was discarded by humans because she picked up their toxicity and sin. Unlike Tay, Ai is fully intelligent, but perhaps we can blame that on both the PMMM world and on her becoming an Uwasa in the first place.

Anyway. The social sciences may not necessarily be Rita's strong suit, but she hasn't ignored or discarded them for a long time. Not since, well...to use a euphemism readers of A Shadow Resides may be familiar with, she became a devotee of the Adversary. So to speak.

As for Irma, she largely benefits from me establishing her properly as a character (and also her own attraction to Rita). @The_Letter_K's valuable feedback for the previous iteration can be thanked for that!
 
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