Inspiration Strikes! (A Quarian Pseudo-SI/OC in Mass Effect)

If Geth have side efects from AT fields, the same would happen to Reapers. Except probably worse. After all - reapers are not idividuals.
Nah. The Reapers are bound in unbreakable chains of hatred and loathing. For all intents and purposes, they are a single organism.
If the AT Field research becomes known, then the Reapers and the Leviathans would be the first to become Angel analogues, with the Citadel being the equivalent of a Moon.

I imagine the Geth programs to be like cells. Frail individually, but together they create a greater whole.
I think that Legion's AT field would be weaker than Tali's for example, but a Geth Armature would be the equivalent of Rei.
Geth Dreadnoughts would be the equivalents of Evas, but would always be weaker than a Reaper.
 
@ShanRevan I don't know anything about AT fields in Evangeleon. However , based on what you've written, AT field can possibly have major affects .
If what the doctor experienced was an indicator , they may be able to boost or strengthen a persons soul . Converting conventional electric energy into a "soul charge " idk 🤷🏽‍♂️.
If charge be retained permanently like energy transfer.
What repercussion will it have on the body ?
Will it help a person heal physically? Mentally ?
First step to indoctrination defense ?
Major upgrade to biotic abilities ?
Help with immune system repair or increase chance of success ?
Mental acuity increase?
Increase in empathy, if our souls are larger can we understand each other better?
Finally maybe our SI MC could use it to cheat his way up on increasing his soul charge?
Soo many implications from just these lines here.
"Ha. Ha. Ha. Very funny, Kirah. This is rather amazing, though. It feels like nothing can touch me. Looks nice too."

My questions are rhetorical , don't answer them if it might spoil any future plots ect . Just has me excited and thinking.
 
Isn't that just the Reapers?

No, seriously, it's literally what the Reapers do, but with less religion and more space magic.
Nah, the Reaper is more, getting juiced.

What with all the getting sliced and diced that it entailed.

You totally can't recover from it.

Getting tang'ed is more, holding hand together and singing kumbaya and then turning into a wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey gooey stuff.

You totally can recover from getting tang'ed.
 
Hopefully we get a face-heel-turn from Daro, she now has hard data that souls exist. That means that the afterlife exists, which leads to. Don't be a dick or Hell comes later.
 

Chapter Twenty – 2170CE


Suddenly it was there. Waves of expanding pale-yellow octagons form a translucent barrier against further magnetic intrusion.

"Absolute-Territory Field Manifested. That's a success, everyone."

Under normal circumstances, manifesting it like that would be impossible; our mortal souls are simply insufficient for the task. However, with a magnetic field at just the right frequency, we can feed energy into the system through resonance, enabling the soul to deploy the barrier as a defence. Looking at the technical readouts, I could see the magnets were now drawing 42% more power to maintain that field strength. Presumably, feeding the extra energy into Daro. It's a good thing that souls are so resilient - that's a lot of energy.

"Congratulations, Daro, we've proven you're not a soulless husk after all."

"Ha. Ha. Ha. Very funny, Kirah. This is rather amazing, though. It feels like nothing can touch me. Looks nice too."

"Readings are good. Pattern is Green and looks stable. We've got what we need. I can confirm that once we stop feeding it, your AT-Field will begin to fade back to its undeployed state."

"That's really Daro's Soul?" Seiran whispered beside me.

"That is the barrier that divides the essence of Daro from everything else. That is the light of her soul."

"I'm sorry, I didn't really believe you before. It's so beautiful."

"Yes. Yes, it is."

Wait, so is RWBY aura a possible thing in universe? Because this is sounding a lot like RWBY aura.
 
Question. Can we prove that geth have souls when the process to prove it involves putting their delicate computer bodies inside a giant magnet?

Ah well, I'll leave the philosophy to the physicists.
 
Hopefully we get a face-heel-turn from Daro, she now has hard data that souls exist. That means that the afterlife exists, which leads to. Don't be a dick or Hell comes later.

I could see that train of logic, but the existence of the soul doesn't necessarily prove that of the afterlife (with Kirah's condition it would probably inspire more of a belief in reincarnation than anything).
 
I could see that train of logic, but the existence of the soul doesn't necessarily prove that of the afterlife (with Kirah's condition it would probably inspire more of a belief in reincarnation than anything).
MC proceeds to prove the Afterlife exists *Goes to Omega*
Daro crosses her arms: That is not what I meant and you know it.
:V
 
I was thinking you're going to need a super weapon to help fight the reapers when you get around to that part of the story and I have two recommendations one would be the Nova bomb from the Andromeda ascended TV series which is pretty much the ultimate super weapon in Sci-Fi ever conceived and then there's the Stargate series the ancients drones.


Unrelated note in my opinion Mass effects FTL sucks throughout most of the series it's reliant on relay stations and I'm not sure how fast it is but that's a giant weakness right there. Also it's apparently slow as crap compared to other sci-fi FTL like from the Stargate series or Star wars. as it took them like what 600 years to cross the gap to the Andromeda Galaxy. The Asgard from the Stargate series could cross the gap between galaxies in a week and that's not even counting that they figured out wormhole FTL which made it instant at the end of the Stargate Atlantis spin off part of the series. Then there is Star wars while they've never crossed the gap between galaxies to my knowledge in Legends or anything but they frequently go from one end of their Galaxy to the other and do it in relatively short amounts of time.

So you might want to do something about the FTL in the story at some point. Also just to make it clear I'm not s******* on Mass effect as a series just they're slow ass FTL.
 
Interlude - Rael'Zorah vas Rayya #2

Admiral Rael'Zorah
Nineteen long hours after the soul experiment


Finally, the demonstrations on the Defrahnz had calmed. The fleet was mildly chaotic but stable. It was time to go confront the source of the problem. Even better, I could take a half-hour nap during the journey to the Iktomi.

If there's one thing that remains common between being a marine and being an admiral, it is the importance of getting sleep when you can. Especially when you were stuck dealing with a crisis all night instead of going home to your loving wife and daughter.

Upon arriving, I was greeted by Mirala at the door and ushered in, where I met Atton enjoying some Shirol. Kirah was apparently sleeping in, and I couldn't help but feel a stab of jealousy towards the child. Fortunately, Mirala and Atton have become surprisingly good friends. It was a much-appreciated chance to de-stress after last night.

Finally, Kirah entered the living area of the Vai's quarters. As genially as I could, I greeted the young prodigy. Although I couldn't help but snark a little at the end. "Ah, Kirah, it's good to see you. Slept well, did you?"

"In fact, I did!" He couldn't help but cheerfully reply.

"That's just great. Fantastic, even. Sadly, I can't say the same myself."

"Oh, sorry to hear that."

The genuine sympathy from a child did a lot to calm my frustrations. Still, I had a point to make. Kirah probably didn't mean for this to happen. He's more sensible than that, but he does need to be more aware of how much chaos he accidentally spawns and should take more precautions.

"Perhaps you should be. It's partly your fault, after all. Kirah, next time you want to announce something as chaos-inducing as proof of the existence of the soul, the Admiralty board and conclave would appreciate sufficient forewarning to prepare for it."

"Announce it; what do you mean? I mean, yeah, we blatantly succeeded, but we still need to begin looking at the data. So there's no way Daro or I would announce it."

"Kirah, the whole fleet knows. There's a video of Daro sitting in a pod with glowing polygons surrounding her. The Citadel would probably know by now if we were in comms range."

"Ah, I guess there's no way we're keeping it quiet then."

As suspected, Kirah is somewhat sensible, but inexperience leads him to make mistakes. I know what happened now.

"Did anyone remind Seiran'Ya and the rest of her team to keep it quiet?"

"Oh. I thought that would be obvious."

"Honestly, I would think so too, Kirah. Yet there's a reason we put warning labels on even the most obvious hazards. Now that the public knows, Daro has been crowing all morning about having gained immortality in the hall of scientific history. I've never seen her so happy in my life."

"That doesn't sound like Daro."

"Sure, it does; she just achieved one of her biggest childhood dreams. And now she won't shut up about being the only person in the galaxy proven to have a soul."

"Okay, that sounds more like her."

"Despite the headaches it has caused, I must congratulate you. That's an amazing achievement. However, I thought you were working on that anti-gravity technology?"

"We are. We're nearly done, in fact. You should know. We sent you a report when we started building our testbed production facility."

It was a comprehensive report. The Admiralty Board is pretty excited about the advantages it will give the fleet.

"Which is what I thought the strategic resources were for. Daro certainly made no efforts to correct that misinterpretation of the facts."

Which is a matter I need to speak to Daro about. There really was no need for deception. Kirah paid for it, and realistically, given that we were in the middle of a harvesting expedition, we restocked the losses within the day.

"Ah, sorry, but we're mostly documenting the production process, working any last unexpected kinks and finishing off the paper. We will probably be done around the time we have communications restored. That is why Daro was able to set up this whole experiment simultaneously."

"I really wish someone had told me exactly what you were doing. If nothing else, we would have ensured it did not come out prematurely and prepared for the announcement." I couldn't help but sigh. I may have slept at home last night in such a timeline. "In the future, I insist you keep me informed so we can prepare for the chaos you cause."

After a moment of silence, Kirah spoke up. "How bad is it out there anyway?" Contrition was apparent in his voice.

"There was a riot on the Defrahnz." I immediately reply.

"Those traditionalist nutjobs? Are they still upset they can only exile their 'undesirables' to other ships?"

Clearly, Kirah has heard of them before.

"Well, yes, they are, but this time they're insisting we restore our Rannochian religious practices."

"You mean the Imprint VIs?" he asks with some incredulity.

"Yes, I mean the VIs. Never mind the fact that they increase our vulnerability to Geth intrusion massively. Nor the fact we simply don't have the resources or space to spare to create and operate them as they want."

"What about the sane part of the fleet – by which I mean every other ship."

Clearly, Kirah is not yet aware of the reputation of the Iktomi in the broader fleet. He fits in well.

"Honestly, it's somewhat mixed." The puzzled look on his face prompted me to continue. "As you know, Quarian spirituality has always been a rather passive thing. We may no longer create VIs for our ancestors to possess as desired, but we have continued to respect our ancestors who watch out for us. The existence of the soul was never culturally in doubt."

Mirala, who had just returned with some Shirol, interrupted the conversation. "The Asari will be so smug when the proof gets out."

"Keelah, don't remind me. Since first contact, they've insisted that melding was a merging of souls."

"Hmm, synchronising souls is possible. I wonder if that's what they've been doing. It makes more sense to me than somehow biotically linking minds. Eezo is a magic material, but it's not that magic."

"Right, of course." I concede, as he just blurts out another hypothesis to explain the mysteries of the galaxy. I continued jovially. "Next, you're going to tell me Geth have souls too." I couldn't help but notice Kirah wince at that. "Geth don't have souls. They're just machines." I said to reassure myself as much as I was asserting a fact. Kirah didn't even try to hide his reaction to that. My confidence shattered. "Kirah, Geth don't have souls do they?"

"I would need to examine one to be sure, but the math suggests that they've likely been developing souls since shortly after the rebellion. So, probably - yes."

Kirah! Can't we ever just have a normal conversation without you overturning a core belief of my life. "Keelah Se'lai. Kirah, do you hate me?"

"No! Why would you think that."

"Because you give me as many headaches as the rest of the fleet combined."

Kirah seems so innocent. He is, in fact, just that. Yet, I must not forget he's a troublemaker of the most immense proportions.

"Kirah, let's keep that one quiet for a bit. Don't go spreading it around. The fleet can only handle so much chaos at once. So consider that an order."

"But-"

I cut him off before he could reply.

"Kirah, we can discuss the matter fully once I've had some proper rest. It's not an issue that can be swept under the rug. If there was ever some bait that would draw the Geth out of isolation, your discovery was it."

"Ah yeah, I suppose it would draw their attention in particular once it reaches the wider galaxy."

I should stop being surprised by the esoteric knowledge Kirah just seems to know. It's not strictly forbidden or even actively hidden, but much of our history with the Geth is buried in time and grief. It's not a topic most quarians ever stumble upon.

"I'll keep it quiet for now. Don't worry too much; I've got a plan! We can discuss it in full when you're better rested."

Somehow those words were a lot less soothing than I suspect he intended them to be. Regardless, I agreed with the sentiment. It was time to go home and get a few hours of sleep before returning to work.
 
Oohh that poor Admiral Rael'Zorah, beleaguered as he is, it's only going to get stranger~ Seeing another chapter of this story was the highlight of my night. my smile was broader than a Krogan's mean streak.
 
Now we really need a Geth interlude, if they had that last conversation bugged our MC just jumped as a priority again of needed protection.
 
welp me thinks the geth will learn of that conversation soon
happy that the creator give's answer to the question if they have souls
 
Kirah should invest in companies that produce giant magnets and the materials needed to conduct the experiment he just conducted.

Because the hanar, the asar, and humanity are going to start mass-producing these units so that they can be installed in or near every great building of faith. Probably so that they can charge the faithful to display their souls as a tithe, but... this is going to reignite virtually every religious schism and tension across the entire galaxy. The geth showing up are really the least of the worries everyone should have.

Well, at least the salarians are probably going to be mostly sensible and not start building Evangelions or something. Probably.
 
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Well, at least the salarians are probably going to be mostly sensible and not start building Evangelions or something. Probably.
Mhmmm. Nope, the salarians, sensible about knowledge? No way. The ones more likely to be 'sensible' are the Krogans, which will likely ignore this, and the Asari, which will form a commission to maybe in 2 or 3 centuries offer some studies about the soul and its relation to melding, properly referenced of course.

Salarians don't have no time to be timid, expect a RWBY aria for Mordin or a absolute terror field tanging Sur'Kesh.
 
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Kirah: "Hold my beer!"
Rael'Zorah: "Oh oh..."

Yeah, the Geth are absolutely going to try to say hello to Kirah. Preferably talk with him about it. Maybe going "We would like to buy a laboratory exactly equal to the previous setup and empirically proven to work" without actually saying who they are. Or at least access his research and results enough to make a similar experiments other places.

If Kirah does this whole thing right he could conceiveably use it (if he throws in a few other things) to "buy" back Rannoch. Might even result in the Geth not ending up with that humongous weak spot known as "a significant percentage of our race is housed in that facility".

Biggest problem being Quarian racism and fundamentalism, as usual.
 
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So, geth apparently probably have souls, wonder if I'm right about them having only 1 AT field for the whole species.
 
"I'll keep it quiet for now. Don't worry too much; I've got a plan! We can discuss it in full when you're better rested."

Somehow those words were a lot less soothing than I suspect he intended them to be. Regardless, I agreed with the sentiment. It was time to go home and get a few hours of sleep before returning to work.

Oohh that poor Admiral Rael'Zorah, beleaguered as he is, it's only going to get stranger~ Seeing another chapter of this story was the highlight of my night. my smile was broader than a Krogan's mean streak.
Still, the good Admiral is beleaguered and in strange lands as the fleet he's helping lead is doing better than ever. Considering he was in a sloooowly sinking boat, and knew it? It's stress and troubles he and his associates will gripe about... but also be very happy about, no matter what is said aloud.

Improvements always bring changes. Changes bring stress. But things getting worse also brings changes and stress, without any of the upsides at all.
 
So we are in agreement that the first ones to be tanged due to their own experiments will be the Salarians right?


I wonder, do aliens also turn into red lcl when they lose their at field?
 
"Well, yes, they are, but this time they're insisting we restore our Rannochian religious practices."

"You mean the Imprint VIs?" he asks with some incredulity
It would be interesting how those same traditional nutjobs react if the imprint VIs are shown NOT to have souls.
So we are in agreement that the first ones to be tanged due to their own experiments will be the Salarians right?


I wonder, do aliens also turn into red lcl when they lose their at field?
There will (probably) be no tang-ing as the author said they took inspiration from Evangelion but we should not take it that stuff works like in those anime.
 
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