Breakaway25, I still think you're a bit too fast on the information (intelligence department) there. Its been like, what? Two days in story and they instantly treated them without any kind of suspicion and accepted them as the legitimate deal without wondering if they are being decieved, it's as if every single sailor is naive. Sure that the Japanese may have a hand in it but at the same time that doesn't explain the sudden appearance of American Kanmusu in open water nor does it explain how did they turn from ships to girls with ship parts. At the least, fourteen questions might be asked.
Part of that is because I've been using only a few like minded perspectives to tell this story. Dover and Shimada were quick to believe that the girls were what they claimed to be, but they aren't indicative of the entire Navy. In both cases, it's a combination of a willingness to latch onto anything with the possibility of ending the war, and the fact that they have seen the girls operate first hand. But they are by no means the entire US Navy. Not everyone believes the girls are who they claim to be, or that they can be the wonder weapon that everyone wants. The only reason it seems that way, is that I haven't show the opposing viewpoint just yet.
In fact, the CNO's order is nothing more than an outline of the reported facts, and a plea for information. There is no concrete direction right now, everything is in flux.
I am going to show the opposing views, the conflict happening in the upper echelons of the military, but I decided to highlight the aftermath of the second battle. Show the effects on everyone of this new type of war. But due to the very nature of how I'm writing this, it's going to take time to set up in a meaningful way.
As to the ship/girl/ship thing, that is going to be a plotpoint in the future, but I was playing it off only for rule of cool at the time. Now I'm stuck with it.
I hate retcons, and I'm not going back to fix something I did even if I don't like it.