Improper Safety Precautions

[9-tsiak]

I like this! But you may have been having a mini-stroke during the writing of one particular sentence:

I packed myslef a dozen HE grenades, a doyen incendiarz ones and a honest-to-goodness missile launcher with eight shtos in my inventory.

Click to shrink...

 

[Gmkchi]

I like this! But you may have been having a mini-stroke during the writing of one particular sentence:

Click to shrink...

I think I managed to post the early draft of that chapter, because I distinctly remember fixing those.

I'll fix that (and post a new chapter) when I finally get around to fixing my computer.

 

[TortugaGreen]

Very nice as these go, I find your standard procedure on combat amusing but very clever - it's hard to kill someone who won't show up to the fight.
Edit: I also saw the one word sentence there, but 9-tsiak beat me to it.