I, Scion [Worm Silly AU]

Doctor Mother is totally going to chill with the rest of Cauldron isn't she?
 
Eden, without most of her core shards.

You know, I'm betting that's just an avatar. Most of Eden's main substance, including her ptv shard - and maybe Abaddon's PTV shard - has been cut out and experimented on. Granted, she probably has a lot of secondary shards that are still usable, but Eidolon's been nomming those for years.
 
I don't think Saint should have been sent to the Birdcage. Fear of an unleashed seed AI is valid, Richter wasn't wrong to have fail safes. Saint monitored the shit out of Dragon but I think it says something that he didn't kill her, because he recognized that she was doing good work. other then watching Dragon, what has he done that is, not just criminal but, birdcage worthy?

He's also addicted to that thinker juice he was given, that can't be good for his thinking process. I dunno, couldn't he be detoxed and shown that Dragon really isn't a threat after all?

No one ever gives Saint a redemption arc. :(
 
No one ever gives Saint a redemption arc.

Redemption is for people who didn't murder off Humanity's best hope (at the time) for survival, and stand proudly, proclaiming what a wonderful thing he had done. Even at the end, he was willing to let everyone in every world die, just to assuage his own, misguided insecurities.

Saint, as written in Canon, will NEVER deserve any form of 'redemption'. At all. Ever.
 
Redemption is for people who didn't murder off Humanity's best hope (at the time) for survival, and stand proudly, proclaiming what a wonderful thing he had done. Even at the end, he was willing to let everyone in every world die, just to assuage his own, misguided insecurities.

Saint, as written in Canon, will NEVER deserve any form of 'redemption'. At all. Ever.

Wasn't he influenced by Teacher? Also he's being punished for something he might have done at some point in the future. A bit strange.

And I never got why Canary gets to walk free and clear. Birdcage was overkill granted, but straight up "You did nothing wrong, that guy you mutilated by accident? Screw that guy he was probably a dick anyway". Really?

Very nice story though (personal dislike of Canary whitewashing aside).
 
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Wasn't he influenced by Teacher? Also he's being punished for something he might have done at some point in the future. A bit strange.

Yes, he was affected by Teacher. That is, about a decade before Canon. A decade which he spent with his finger on the trigger of Dragon's killswitch, waiting for the moment where he could pull it and scream out, "See! See! I told you Dragon was EBIL!"

Frankly, Teacher recruited Saint because of his outspoken views on AI. It's just that Teacher got 'Caged before they found Ascalon.
 
I don't think Saint should have been sent to the Birdcage. Fear of an unleashed seed AI is valid, Richter wasn't wrong to have fail safes.

Saint was a goddamn hypocrite. Either he should have killed Dragon the instant he had the opportunity, or he should have let her be.

Instead, he used her for his own gains, becoming exactly what he feared she would become.

All humans have the potential for great evil. Perhaps not to the same extent as Dragon, but any competent person could, conceivably, carry out several murders and other atrocities. And yet, somehow, we all manage to get along.
 
Yes, he was affected by Teacher. That is, about a decade before Canon. A decade which he spent with his finger on the trigger of Dragon's killswitch, waiting for the moment where he could pull it and scream out, "See! See! I told you Dragon was EBIL!"

Frankly, Teacher recruited Saint because of his outspoken views on AI. It's just that Teacher got 'Caged before they found Ascalon.

Doing nothing 10 years under the effect of Teacher's power (well theft), but he MIGHT have killed one person at some point is not exactly a good justification for life imprisonment without parole regardless of how unlikable he is or how wrong you think his views are. I did laughed at the Bubba thing though :)

Honestly if I got godlike powers I like to think I'll be benevolent, but know deep down I'd probably also indulge in petty malice at some point, so who am I to judge.
 
Wasn't he influenced by Teacher? Also he's being punished for something he might have done at some point in the future. A bit strange.

And I never got why Canary gets to walk free and clear. Birdcage was overkill granted, but straight up "You did nothing wrong, that guy you mutilated by accident? Screw that guy he was probably a dick anyway". Really?

Very nice story though (personal dislike of Canary whitewashing aside).
Saint was screwing over Dragon right then and there. Literally taking advantage of her safeguards, which prevented her from hurting innocents or allowing them to be hurt, to steal her tech and retro-engineer it into his suits.

As for Canary; she had a boyfriend. He cheated on her, then left her, telling her that she would never amount to anything. This is after she bought powers from Cauldron. Then, after she started to make it in the big time, he shows up just after she's done a huge concert, and tells her that she never would have made it without him, and demands half her earnings.

Is it any wonder she told him to go fuck himself?

And yes, he was a dick.
 
"Where am I?"

A very large hand picked him up and turned him around. "You're in the Birdcage, boy. An' I gotta say … you got a real purty mouth."

Saint hadn't even known there was someone in the Birdcage called Bubba.
*frowns*
I don't think this should have been included.

Alexandria landed on the beach, and strode over to where David was reclining on a deck-chair.

"Eidolon!" she snapped. "What do you think you're doing?"
*Snip*
She looked helplessly at Eidolon, lying utterly relaxed on the deck-chair. He raised his beer to her again, and took a drink.

"Fuck it," she muttered, unclipping her cape. "Tammy, where's that swimsuit of yours?"
There's something awesome about seeing most of Cauldron saying "Hell with it" and going on a beach vacation.

Paige Macabee slowly awoke. She gradually became aware that she was lying not on her narrow, hard bunk bed, but in a queen-sized bed, on silk sheets; her pyjamas were made of the same material. It whispered against her skin as she rolled over and sat up, blinking as she pushed her hair out of the way.
*snip*
"Goodbye," she called back, amid splashing sounds. "And thank you!"

He grinned. "You're welcome. Have fun."
Ah, I love seeing Paige get freedom. Never gets old.

When it faded, Eden was gone.

no, she wasn't.

Not far from me hovered another humanoid form, silver of skin, with long hair. She looked at me curiously.

ALIVE?

I gulped. "Whoops."
Uhhhhh, shit. Wrong power usage. Let's hope SI!Scion is a smooth talker and Eden is open to trying something other than the Cycle.

Funny chapter overall, @Ack .
 
As for Canary; she had a boyfriend. He cheated on her, then left her, telling her that she would never amount to anything. This is after she bought powers from Cauldron. Then, after she started to make it in the big time, he shows up just after she's done a huge concert, and tells her that she never would have made it without him, and demands half her earnings.

Is it any wonder she told him to go fuck himself?

And yes, he was a dick.

Yes he was. Was being the correct phrase here :)

She still should be in jail. Not Birdcage, just your regular run of the mill jail and probably pay a hefty fine (. You don't get to go "he was a dick so it's ok", law doesn't work that way. Then again you have absolute power, not like someone can contradict you, what you say goes period.



I only have a vague idea of the USA justice system (or law in general) but a 1 minute google search got me this: The maximum penalty for the charge of reckless grievous bodily harm is 10 years imprisonment. Circumstances can reduce this but not make it disappear. He was human garbage is not one of those though.
 
Doing nothing 10 years under the effect of Teacher's power (well theft), but he MIGHT have killed one person at some point is not exactly a good justification for life imprisonment without parole regardless of how unlikable he is or how wrong you think his views are. I did laughed at the Bubba thing though :)

Honestly if I got godlike powers I like to think I'll be benevolent, but know deep down I'd probably also indulge in petty malice at some point, so who am I to judge.

Really? Many characters in Worm fandom benefit from whitewashing. Bonesaw, Skitter and Faultline just as the obvious examples. Canary doesn't fit with those.
 
Yes he was. Was being the correct phrase here :)

She still should be in jail. Not Birdcage, just your regular run of the mill jail and probably pay a hefty fine (. You don't get to go "he was a dick so it's ok", law doesn't work that way. Then again you have absolute power, not like someone can contradict you, what you say goes period.
The only reason she was charged at all was that she (accidentally) used a Master power in an emotional moment. Three words.

Public opinion did the rest. Because she had some slight resemblance to the Simurgh.

A good lawyer (which she DID NOT HAVE) could have brought down the charge to "accidental bodily harm", or whatever that is. She never used her power on him when he cheated on her, or when he left her. There was no premeditation involved; she used a phrase which countless people have used before her, and was not aware that he was under her power. Plus, there's an argument for his attempting to extort money from her.

A fine would have been plenty. A nominal jail term, reduced or even suspended, due to this being a first offence, and the fact that she was provoked, might have been called for. But the Birdcage? She was sent there. To die. The fact that she didn't was only due to Dragon (who also considered that she had been badly done by) assigning her to Lustrum's cell block.
 
*frowns*
I don't think this should have been included.
What would you suggest to replace it, that would still suggest a Saint-worthy punishment?

There's something awesome about seeing most of Cauldron saying "Hell with it" and going on a beach vacation.
Yes, yes there is.

Ah, I love seeing Paige get freedom. Never gets old.
Paige rather enjoys it too. Currently swimming laps in her bathtub.

Uhhhhh, shit. Wrong power usage. Let's hope SI!Scion is a smooth talker and Eden is open to trying something other than the Cycle.
We can hope.

Funny chapter overall, @Ack .
Thanks.
 
I don't think Saint should have been sent to the Birdcage. Fear of an unleashed seed AI is valid, Richter wasn't wrong to have fail safes. Saint monitored the shit out of Dragon but I think it says something that he didn't kill her, because he recognized that she was doing good work. other then watching Dragon, what has he done that is, not just criminal but, birdcage worthy?

He's also addicted to that thinker juice he was given, that can't be good for his thinking process. I dunno, couldn't he be detoxed and shown that Dragon really isn't a threat after all?

No one ever gives Saint a redemption arc. :(

Try Cracked Mirror over on Spacebattles. Best. Saint. Ever.
Not quite redemption, but close enough.
 
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