So, the vote will close in about an hour.

I will leave it open for the next 50~ish minutes to see if anyone else will vote or decides to change their vote before the hour passes by.
 
[x][Gender] Boy
[x][Profession] Biochemist (+?, Unlocks ?)
[x][Date of Birth] 1208 B.C.

I don't even know why i pick this combination.
 
[X][Profession] Gun Salesman (+?, Unlocks ?)
[X][Gender] Girl
[X][Date of Birth] 2498 B.C.
 
Vote Closed:

Since I said I would reveal which gives which, I'll do so right now.
[][Profession] History Teacher (+?, Unlocks ? and ?) Unlocks Advanced Tactics Personal Skill along with knowledge of most historical Events
[][Profession] Biochemist (+?, Unlocks ?) Not revealing since it won :V. Joking aside, I will reveal it in the upcoming chapter.
[][Profession] Gun Salesman (+?, Unlocks ?) Unlocks Marksmanship Personal Skill and Item Construction(Guns) Class Skill
[][Profession] Self-Defense Teacher (+?, +?, and Unlocks ?) Unlocks Mana Burst Personal Skill and a boost to Strength and Endurance Parameters by one
[][Profession] CEO (+?, Unlocks ? and ?) Unlocks Charisma and Righteous Ruler Personal Skills

[][Date of Birth] 2498 B.C. Same as the Biochemist, it will be revealed in the upcoming chapter
[][Date of Birth] 1208 B.C. Trojan War Era
[][Date of Birth] 24 A.D. Roman Empire/Nero Era
[][Date of Birth] 884 Medieval Britain/King Arthur Era
[][Date of Birth] 1408 Hundred Years War/Jeanne d'arc era
[][Date of Birth] 1534 Medieval Japan/Oda Nobunaga Era
Adhoc vote count started by ItzNarcotic on Sep 17, 2019 at 2:48 PM, finished with 78 posts and 36 votes.
 
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Sadly, I lost my muse mid-writing and I'm exhausted as all hell. So, the update will be moved as I sleep for the next 8-9 hours.

The update will be posted tomorrow, as it's around 60~70% done. However, I still need to proofread it along with a plethora of other things. (Also, I swear that I update frequently! Hey, I'm not lying! What do you mean :V?)
 
Stop: AS A HISTORIAN, THIS MAKES ME TWITCH
as a historian, this makes me twitch
not really I find this very good for the lols. I have 0 respect for the christian religion or any Organized religion for that matter given what little good they bring into the world is FAR outweighed by the evils they have done. The only thing the Christians did that was massively significant was save the knowledge from Romes fall, and even then they hoarded the knowledge for a LONG time.
Questing for fun, this is appallingly bad grasp of history and a breach of Rule 2. Dislike of organized religion is fine, but this is an insultingly broad brush. 25 points and 3 days out.
So you're just butthurt ignorant. At least it's nice of you to finally admit that.
Sir_Jazz, him spouting edgy teen levels of history is not a license to get insulting. 25 points and 3 days to you as well.

Everyone else play nice.
 
[STOP=AS A HISTORIAN, THIS MAKES ME TWITCH]
Questing for fun, this is appallingly bad grasp of history and a breach of Rule 2. Dislike of organized religion is fine, but this is an insultingly broad brush. 25 points and 3 days out.

Sir_Jazz, him spouting edgy teen levels of history is not a license to get insulting. 25 points and 3 days to you as well.

Everyone else play nice.
[/STOP]
Thank you, I appreciate it.
 
I know some people are expecting the chapter to be released today, but I don't think I can do so. Not because I'm putting it off, no. I've been working on it, researching various things, and even learning new stuff as I go along and write out this chapter.

The problem comes from my motivation to do so and my current lack of it. My emotions go into bundles of odd sequences and it makes it very hard for me to focus on writing or anything related to that. With that (unimportant mumbo jumbo for you guys) all said and done, the chapter will be posted after Breaking Destiny's update, which will be tomorrow.
 
[X][Profession] History Teacher (+?, Unlocks ? and ?)
[X][Gender] Girl
[X][Date of Birth] 2498 B.C.
 
[X][Profession] History Teacher (+?, Unlocks ? and ?)
[X][Gender] Boy
[X][Date of Birth] 2498 B.C.


Sh*t the voting closed and the muse nearly suffocated and died, we are all waiting to die!!! So please show us the light, in where the darkness lies...
 
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[X][Profession] History Teacher (+?, Unlocks ? and ?)
[X][Gender] Boy
[X][Date of Birth] 2498 B.C.


Sh*t the voting closed and the muse nearly suffocated and died, we are all waiting to die!!! So please show us the light, in where the darkness lies...
Don't worry, an update is actually close to being finished. Going to post it tomorrow, since I'm posting an update for my other quest today.
 
2. Setting Up The Missing Pieces
[][Gender] Boy
[][Profession] Biochemist (+?, Unlocks ?) Item Construction(Fake) E- Class Skill and ???????? Personal Skill
[][Date of Birth] 2498 B.C.

After doing some recon by crawling around, you found out that you were born way back. Much farther than you thought. When you saw the buildings and architecture, it looked nothing like the regular medieval castles you saw before. They looked like something out of an extremely ancient historical sight, places only seen as fantasy.

Thankfully, you got acclimated to your new life and your father didn't notice your non-baby like behavior. Your mother was a different story, however. She was oddly perceptive, easily noticing how you pretended to be asleep or how you acted. It was scary, how your mother could do such a thing and be so nonchalant about it.

So, emboldened by your mother's frankly frightening analytical skills, you decide to not do anything out of place. After all, who knows what information she could get just from interrogating you. You loved your parents, but you were still suspicious about something. This place looked too familiar to you and you would find out why.

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One day, your mother decided to actually bring you outside and bring you with her instead of leaving you at home. You were happy, since your mother was rarely home and always busy doing something. It also gave you the chance to try and find out where you really were.

Oh right, your parents. Your father was a farmer, doing farmwork and planting crops as a living. He would mutter something about 'beasts', but you kept quiet about it since you didn't have any information to make clear cut assumptions. You didn't know what your mother did, only that she wanted to keep it a secret from you. Whatever it was that she did, anyways.

Oddly enough, you had a sense of deja vu whenever you looked at your mother's face. She had very similar looks to someone you had seen before, but you just couldn't find the correct words to describe her. One thing for certain, was the fact that she was older than she looked. She knew things that other people didn't seem to know, even though she had the appearance of a young woman.

"Where are you,

Approval voting is enabled for this vote, but only one option will win.
[][Your Name] Cyrus
[][Your Name] Ban
[][Your Name] Kamu
[][Your Name] Urudo
[][Your Name] Write-in

I want to bring you with me. I have something special to show you for your fourth birthday."

"Where are we going Mom?" Your question causes her to flash a smirk in your direction.

"Well, I'm bringing you to…

Approval voting is enabled for this vote, but only one location will win.
[][Renewal of Life] A shrine of sorts atop a huge mountain.
[][Renewal of Life] A hill surrounded by many different colored flowers.
[][Renewal of Life] A towering structure in the middle of a bustling city.
[][Renewal of Life] Her family's green garden.

"Why are we going there?" Your innocent question causes her to giggle uncontrollably, before she pulls you into her warm embrace. She puts her mouth up to your ear, a smug grin the last thing you see before your eyes close. The last thing you hear is a mixture of giggling and excitement from your mother.

"We're meeting my family. I know you'll love them!"

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You wake up. Rather, you wake up in your dreams. As odd as that sounds, you don't feel truly awake. It's like you were in that odd space, talking to that deity again.

It's like a vivid memory, one that gives you mild confusion. What were you truly like before? After making yourself move forward into the yellow light, you fully understand now. You feel it all piecing together, your mind coming back to you. You find it, something you thought that you lost when you met that deity.

You found a memory, one that spoke to you. One that made you feel whole once more. One that encapsulates who you truly are as a person. After pushing your mind further, you see that...

Approval voting is enabled for this vote, but only one option will win.
[][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were a good person, one who helped people even when they didn't ask for it. You were the perfect example of what a hero should act like.
[][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were a bad person, one who did things because you felt like doing it. You were a very impulsive and greedy person who was universally hated by many others in your previous life.
[][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were not loved or hated by people who knew you. However, you always helped others, if only to further yourself and your goals.
[][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were a nice person, but if you couldn't do things your way, you would create your own path to do so. You would do whatever it takes to help someone, even if it meant sacrificing yourself. Shirou Expy!
[][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were a terrible person, but only to those who you didn't help. Of course, you followed the law. Well, only the rules you made for yourself.
[][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were someone who didn't care about the world, living your life like an average person would. A mindless drone who did whatever they wanted and never did anything good or bad.

You broke out of that reverie, shaking your mind free of renewal you just experienced. The yellow light fades away, revealing an odd assortment of items upon golden pedestals.

The first and most eye-catching one is a pair of wings. Moving your hand closer, you feel your hand moving faster. Like it's travelling through the air at fast speeds. Stepping back in fear of your hand getting launched off your arm, you look at the second most eye-catching item.

It looks like a plant, but it looks much more vibrant than any plant you've ever seen. The leaves are glistening with the stem being a verdant emerald shade. The most colorful part is the bud itself. It's shining with a bright color, almost ethereal.

The third item is honestly the most frightening thing you've seen so far. It's a gothic cage. You attempt to put your hand closer, only to reel back in fear as it attempts to bite you. To be honest, you don't want to deal with the metal cage trying to sink it's metal teeth into your ethereal body.

Walking back, you look at the last and final option. It's honestly the least interesting thing you see here. It's a chess piece. To be more precise, a Knight piece. Bringing your hand closer, you feel yourself flinch as it releases something towards you. You glance at it for a few moments before quickly backing away, not wanting to know what that did to you.

After looking at all of the items, you decide to pick up the…

No approval voting here, choose only one option.
[][Dreaming of Origin] The pair of Wings. Being fast is certainly useful. Almost like you travel faster. (?)
[][Dreaming of Origin] The plant. It feels full of life and seems very cheerful to your reincarnated soul. (?)
[][Dreaming of Origin] The gothic cage. It feels familiar, almost like death itself. (?)
[][Dreaming of Origin] The chess piece. It feels like someone is trying to kill you, you arms getting goosebumps.


Votes for the next chapter:
  • Your Name
  • Renewal of Life
  • Thx Fr Th Mmrs
  • Dreaming of Origin
My Current Update Schedule(liable to change at any point in time):
  • Tomorrow: Doctors Appointment and RL Things (Day off).
  • Day After Tomorrow: Research and Story Planning for HETDO
  • October 2nd: Breaking Destiny.
  • October 3rd: Historical Events That Definitely Occurred and Research.
  • October 4th: Research and Story Planning for HETDO
  • October 5th: Decompressing and Planned Online Lessons (Day off).

Note from the QM:
This meme below says it all.


Memes aside, this is the last setup chapter before we truly begin the quest. Once we get some things set up for our character, I'll post the Mechanics and Character Sheet up. Since everyone knows this is in Fate, feel free to do some guessing as to where you are. I'll reveal it next update, so don't worry if you get it wrong.

To be honest, the hardest part about this update was searching up viable name choices for the character. :V
 
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[X][Your Name] Kamu

[X][Renewal of Life] A hill surrounded by many different colored flowers.
[X][Renewal of Life] A towering structure in the middle of a bustling city.

[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were someone who didn't care about the world, living your life like an average person would. A mindless drone who did whatever they wanted and never did anything good or bad.
[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were a good person, one who helped people even when they didn't ask for it. You were the perfect example of what a hero should act like.

[X][Dreaming of Origin] The plant. It feels full of life and seems very cheerful to your reincarnated soul. (?)
 
[X][Your Name] Ban

[X][Renewal of Life] A towering structure in the middle of a bustling city.

[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were a bad person, one who did things because you felt like doing it. You were a very impulsive and greedy person who was universally hated by many others in your previous life.

[X][Dreaming of Origin] The gothic cage. It feels familiar, almost like death itself. (?)
 
Oddly enough, you had a sense of deja vu whenever you looked at your mother's face. She had very similar looks to someone you had seen before, but you just couldn't find the correct words to describe her.
If we are in Babylon, most likely, our mother is the priestess (Prostitute) of Ishtar that attracted Enkidu to Uruk. Although I am not completely sure, after all, why would a Priestess be married to a farmer?

[X][Your Name] Urudo

[X][Renewal of Life] A shrine of sorts atop a huge mountain.

[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were someone who didn't care about the world, living your life like an average person would. A mindless drone who did whatever they wanted and never did anything good or bad.
[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were a good person, one who helped people even when they didn't ask for it. You were the perfect example of what a hero should act like.

[X][Dreaming of Origin] The gothic cage. It feels familiar, almost like death itself. (?)
 
[X][Your Name] Cyrus
[X][Renewal of Life] A towering structure in the middle of a bustling city.
[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were not loved or hated by people who knew you. However, you always helped others, if only to further yourself and your goals.
[X][Dreaming of Origin] The gothic cage. It feels familiar, almost like death itself. (?)
 
[X][Your Name] Cyrus
[X][Renewal of Life] A towering structure in the middle of a bustling city.
[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were a good person, one who helped people even when they didn't ask for it. You were the perfect example of what a hero should act like.
[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were not loved or hated by people who knew you. However, you always helped others, if only to further yourself and your goals.
[X][Dreaming of Origin] The pair of Wings. Being fast is certainly useful. Almost like you travel faster. (?)
 
[X][Your Name] Urudo

[X][Renewal of Life] A shrine of sorts atop a huge mountain.

[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were someone who didn't care about the world, living your life like an average person would. A mindless drone who did whatever they wanted and never did anything good or bad.

[X][Dreaming of Origin] The gothic cage. It feels familiar, almost like death itself. (?)
 
[X][Your Name] Ban
[X][Renewal of Life] A shrine of sorts atop a huge mountain.
[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were not loved or hated by people who knew you. However, you always helped others, if only to further yourself and your goals.
[X][Dreaming of Origin] The plant. It feels full of life and seems very cheerful to your reincarnated soul. (?)
 
[X][Your Name] Cyrus
[X][Renewal of Life] A towering structure in the middle of a bustling city.
[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were a good person, one who helped people even when they didn't ask for it. You were the perfect example of what a hero should act like.
[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were not loved or hated by people who knew you. However, you always helped others, if only to further yourself and your goals.
[X][Dreaming of Origin] The plant. It feels full of life and seems very cheerful to your reincarnated soul. (?)
 
[X][Your Name] Cyrus
[X][Renewal of Life] A towering structure in the middle of a bustling city.
[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were a good person, one who helped people even when they didn't ask for it. You were the perfect example of what a hero should act like.
[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were not loved or hated by people who knew you. However, you always helped others, if only to further yourself and your goals.
[X][Dreaming of Origin] The plant. It feels full of life and seems very cheerful to your reincarnated soul. (?)
 
[X][Your Name] Kamu

[X][Renewal of Life] A hill surrounded by many different colored flowers.

[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were a good person, one who helped people even when they didn't ask for it. You were the perfect example of what a hero should act like.
[X][Thx Fr Th Mmrs] You were a terrible person, but only to those who you didn't help. Of course, you followed the law. Well, only the rules you made for yourself.

[X][Dreaming of Origin] The gothic cage. It feels familiar, almost like death itself. (?)
 
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