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{Hiatus, till 1/1 being rewritten} A Snake Am I ?

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    My Muse stole my Necronomicon & pen
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    Huh, I'm right here trapped in these words of mine
    The Tale of an SI who has been transported by a seemingly prophetic letter into a science-fantasy crossover verse

    Closed Pending Rewrites
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    SpaceBattles Thread

    Story Only Thread >>Unavailable at moment<<

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    Disclaimers
    Several fics inspired me, but only one had the impact to start me writing.
    And that was: The Wicked Rise Of The Weird God by JakeCrown on fanfiction.net (Note: The first 3 chapters were heavily paraphrased from his first chapter, chapters 4 and on are all my own creations)

    Inspirations by Story
    • FanFiction.Net
    • Sufficient Velocity
      • Limit Theory by Itmauve (she had a fascinating take on the SG-verse, even if she was a little too pro-tau'ri for my typical fair) (me and shade argost with some help designed a public-access water world, called New Pacifica for Itmauve's Atlantis to reside on, its located on page 20 for perusal)
    • Space Battles
    • QQ

    Inspirations by Other
     
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    Omakes are given numbers to indicate their relative placement within the thread

    And the Omakes are then divided up by how much they are Canon

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    Non-Canon Omakes

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    Story FAQ

    I will do my best to keep this section up to date

    Info Dump
    >>Not Enough to Warrant
    Semi-Important bit for easy Access

    1} - I'm using Star Wars Galaxy gen rules for the Milky Way and other galaxy designs

    Star Wars Milky Way

    X number of Star Systems
    400,000,000,000 Star Systems in the Milky Way

    1/2 have planets
    200,000,000,000 systems have planets

    10% have life
    20,000,000,000 life bearing planets

    1 in 1,000 count for sentience
    20,000,000 sentient species possible via nature
    Note: the Milky way Stargate system has a max of
    1,987,690,320 addresses or roughly 0.5% of the Milky Way has a viable 7-digit address
    That's 1 out of every 200 Star Systems

    7-digit address = 38*37*36*35*34*33 * the point of origin


    2} - Goa'uld Class System
    1. System Lord Supreme = Ra
    2. The System Lord Council
    3. System Lords (Must command several systems)
    4. System Lord: Under Lords
    5. the Planetary Lords (most if not all have at least a planet and a first prime)
    6. Regular Lords / Governors: rule nations on a planet
    7. Scholar Class Goa'uld & the Priesthood's upper echelons for most lords
    8. Scribe-class Goa'uld & the Priesthood
    9. Jaffa (Jaffa are ranked by experience, their lord's power and other things
    10. Humans (Bottom)

    note: Lo'taur and First Primes are of a nebulous mid to higher ranking, such as Ra's First Prime may command all but those directly under a system lord.
    note2: The system is mobile, but highly regimented. Those who fail the Ascension tribute are made scribes and as such must start from there, those who pass though are awarded the title of Lord
    note3: Queens are special and ignore the scale instead matching their mate's ranking. They at the minimum call for at least one planet

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    • Factions and Characters otherwise known as the Cast
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    Major Factions and Characters so far

    Canon cast
    Author's creations
    Thread's suggestions
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    spoiler=The Story's Cast

    • Goa'uld
      • Ra, god of the sun, Supreme System Lord
      • Hathor, One of Ra's Queens
      • Amaterasu, Japanese sun goddess
      • Lord Yu, the Jade Emperor of China
      • Wenet, Egyptian Goddess of Rabbits
      • The Risen Host
        • 1 - Yatagarasu - the Sun Crow, God of Rebirth, Messenger/Guide for/to the Heavens, Bridge-unto-Heaven, (The SI)
          • lo'taur - Elysia (name means Struck by Lightning)
        • 2 - Heimdall - God of Sight and the gatekeeper.
        • 3 - .
        • 4 - .
        • 5 - .
        • 6 - (Deceased, killed at Naming for going berserk)
        • 7 - .
        • 8 - .
        • 9 - .
        • 10 - .
        • 11 - (Deceased, bitten in half by host)
        • 12 - .
        • 13 - .
        • 14 - .
        • 15 - .
        • 16 - .
        • 17 - .
        • 18 - Anat - Warrior Goddess (source: stargate worlds / some rpgs)
        • 19 - Ceres - Agriculture Goddess
      • .
    • Slayer Line
      • Slayers
        • Vala, (Late 20s as of 3353 BC when first Intro'd active for over a decade)
      • Watcher Council
        • Vala's Watcher
    • Practioners
      • Iqaqa / Polecat, shamaness introduced in c5
    • .
    /spoiler
     
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    • All right the rewrite is now commencing, expect stuff back up on January first.

    I will not be replying on this thread after today, until my rewrite has been completed.

    After the rewrite has passed muster in this thread @TotalAbsolutism. I will see if it will continue in this thread or be posted into a new one.
     
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    • Hello, @Electric_Zhengyi. As @TotalAbsolutism has shown, you appear to have liberally copy-pasted from someone else's story without previously asking permission, which would constitute a clear case of plagiarism. To add to the issue, you've done so from a user who was banned from SV for posting terribly-written stories which violated site rules (JakeCrown). While I'm grateful that the parts you've effectively copied are 'just' terribly-written, this is still problematic behavior for several reasons.


    On the one hand, plagiarism is both obviously not OK and would warrant an infraction. Even if I assume that JakeCrown's retroactive permission put you in the clear, though, you're still effectively rehosting stuff that was originally written by a banned user. This is also not OK, since it defeats the purpose of banning people in the first place. I think this was an honest mistake rather than you trying to do either, so I'm not going to punish you quite as harshly, but this situation is just ridiculous and could've been avoided with a little bit more foresight on your part. Please exercise it in the future.

    I'm going to give you 50 infraction points, which'll put you at a day-long tempban, and leave this story locked. If you want to rehost it on this site, please rewrite it without copy-pasting from what other people have written.
     
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