This story is amazing. Massively awesome world building and epic uses of canon material of OCs to create an adventure beyond my expectations! I like what you've done with ALL the characters, and the Pixies are interesting. Can't help but wonder how Yui's going to get out of this mess... and looking forward to the aftermath! You may have buckets of attention and a swarm of piranhas, but it's because you keep feeding them well. You deserve the attention! (So long as you want it anyway. lol)
Also, something that occurred to me regarding the language and story of Alfheim Online... is that Sugou got REALLY into the whole "King of Faeries" roleplay thing, which was probably the creepiest thing about him. I wouldn't be surprised if Alfheim was his brainchild, and he wrote that language as part of his college linguistics elective. It has been established that as much of a two-bit hack he is, he is still a genius... albeit not on the same level as Kayaba Akihiko (who created an un-hackable quasi-sentient game engine apparently). I wouldn't be surprised if he wrote it in a flight of childhood fancy and dug it up to throw into an MMO when it became relevant.
Also, something that occurred to me regarding the language and story of Alfheim Online... is that Sugou got REALLY into the whole "King of Faeries" roleplay thing, which was probably the creepiest thing about him. I wouldn't be surprised if Alfheim was his brainchild, and he wrote that language as part of his college linguistics elective. It has been established that as much of a two-bit hack he is, he is still a genius... albeit not on the same level as Kayaba Akihiko (who created an un-hackable quasi-sentient game engine apparently). I wouldn't be surprised if he wrote it in a flight of childhood fancy and dug it up to throw into an MMO when it became relevant.