Chapter 11
I.F. Ister
Fortifying The Thread
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- He/They
Qi senses are a curious thing. Just as mortal vision can see only so far, the third eye likewise has its limits. Normally, these limits are in specificity, depth, and range. For specificity, one can only sense so many individual motes of qi at once before it fades into the clamor of background qi. Likewise, one can only 'peel back' the 'pages' of qi up to a certain depth; to see past the layers and into the jing that resides at the heart of all things is a considerable achievement indeed.
For specificity and depth, once you reach your current limit you can go no further. If you can only sense three layers deep, then you can only sense three layers deep. If you can only make out a handful of qi motes, then you can only make out a handful of qi motes. In the case of one's range, the maximum distance one can sense qi at, there are exceptions.
Things that have accumulated certain amounts of qi are able to act as beacons of sorts. They shine bright in the distance and draw the gaze of the third eye even well beyond the range of one's mundane sight. Often, these take the form of things like giant gingko or other natural treasures.
However, as Ren approaches the cinnabar mine and a sudden, shining, golden presence drives spikes through his mind, he is reminded that cultivators of sufficient might also have this 'beacon effect.'
Ren's knees buckle as he collapses, eyes shrinking to pinpricks as stiff arms keep him off the ground. His throat burns as his cheeks swell, liquid sick wetting the dirt with chunks of morning stew. Ears filling with the hammers of the heart, Ren rolls onto his side, avoiding the vomit, and stares at the sky as his chest rises and falls in a frantic, frenzied tempo.
Gritting his teeth, Ren screws his eyes shut as he reaches deep inside and grasps hold of his bloodshot third eye. Willpower alone keeping him conscious, Ren forcibly shuts his qi senses down. Instantly, his body goes limp and his breathing slowly evens out.
That presence, golden and glorious, hit Ren from miles away. He was an hour or more away from the mine and even he, with his meagre range, sensed it! What kind of strength could manifest a beacon of that magnitude? How powerful must its owner be?
"Have you recovered?" Yuanding asks, cautious confusion furrowing his brows.
Ren manages a shaky nod as he climbs to his feet, "I, I think so, yes."
Yuanding hums, offering a waterskin which Ren gladly accepts, "What was that?"
Ren takes a deep drought of cool water, a river of sweat leaving his brow slick, "I think I just met their 'Big Chief'."
"And she attacked you?"
"No," Ren frowns as he returns the waterskin, eyes shifting towards the distant destination, "I'm not even sure she knows I'm here."
The rest of the journey is done in silence, neither overly eager to consider the implications.
The burning stench of overly strong alcohol assaults Ren as he steps into the mine's clearing. In the middle of the compound, planted out in the open, is a trio of figures—two standing, one lazily reclining in a portable throne. Ren recognizes one as Fa Fo Lung, his monstrous frame casting a broad shadow across the open space, while the other bandit standing nearby is a meek twig of a man who flinches with every flickering shadow.
With a lazy leg slung over an armrest and an elbow propping up her chin, a tall woman drapes herself across a throne. Each meaty bicep rivals Ren's head in size as patchwork scars turn her weather-beaten skin into a tapestry telling the tale of a life immersed in violence. A wicked burn scars her left cheek from ear to chin as a bandoleer of throwing knives crosses her lamellar-clad chest. A fine sword leans against an armrest while a half-empty box of glass bottles sits in her lap. She casually plucks a bottle from the box and bites through the neck, guzzling down glass and alcohol in the same gulp.
As Ren stops across the clearing from the bandits, a broad smile cracks Lung's face as he nudges the presumed Big Chief with an elbow.
"Looks like you owe me dinner," Lung chuckles as the Big Chief slumps low with a heavy groan.
"Should never have taken that bet," she sighs, shaking her head as she sits up with a slight wheeze. Working her neck, she yawns as she turns her hazel eyes on Ren, "Shang Rou Ren, yeah? Lil' brother of the guy who says he stores all the money, right?"
"That is me, correct," Ren bristles at being reduced to 'Shang Rou Fang's little brother', but keeps his cool.
"Right, right," she nods before taking a swig, "Well, I'm Zhurong," she leaves her given name to dangle alone in the wind, "and I hear you've got something of a business proposal for me, is that right? Something to do with wantin' a talisman commissioned...?" She trails off as she looks to Ren expectantly.
Ren takes a quick breath as he calms his nerves. This is it, there can be no backtracking once he crosses this line. Is he ready?
No, no he is not, but that choice was made a long time ago, wasn't it?
"You are correct, yes," Ren's nod is a stiff thing as he gets, as they say, 'down to business.' "I have a talisman I want copied, and you have a talisman expert who can make that copy." The meek man twitches at the mention of a 'talisman expert.'
"Can I see this talisman of yours?" Zhurong asks with a lazy flick of the wrist.
"I do not have it with me," Ren replies with controlled tone, his words carefully selected to imply he wouldn't deny her anything.
Zhurong laughs, "Smart!" She smacks her free hand to her forearm in an impromptu round of applause, "I'd have absolutely robbed the crap outta you if you'd've been stupid enough to bring the talisman."
Ren stays silent throughout the applause, carefully not thinking about how he hadn't considered that as a potential at all. With how downright casual Lung and Zhurong seem to be, he had almost forgotten that they are, at their core, bandits. Could that have been the intent all along? To make him lower his guard?
Zhurong closes off her clapping with a pleased sigh, "Alright, alright, let's talk silver, eh? What're you working with here?" She chuckles, "I'm assuming you don't have the payment with you right now, cause you don't seem the stupid type."
"You are correct," Ren nods only for Zhurong to grin.
"About the stupid type or you not having the payment with you?" She asks as Ren freezes. Did he just walk into a verbal trap? Quickly playing back her words, he frantically searches through every possible meaning as Zhurong's lips wriggle and humor lights in her eyes. She breaks out into laughter, slapping the bottle's base against an armrest, as she wipes a tear from her eye, "I'm just messing with you, kid! You gotta learn to relax a bit, you know? You'll lose all your hair if you keep stressin' about all the little things in life, you hear?"
Ren grimaces as his eye twitches, hand threatening to twist into a fist that would surely see him dead faster than the eye can blink. Taking a deep breath, he lets all the anger flow from his mind as years of meditation pay off in spades, "I do not have the payment with me."
Zhurong waves a hand, "Alright, alright, lets hear what you've got." Her brows lift as she shifts forward ever so slightly, "And it better be a good offer, I don't do haggling."
Ren's answer takes the form of a single gingko fruit, which he places on the ground before him.
Silence reigns as Zhurong, Lung, and the unnamed talisman expert stare at Ren. Ren stares back, fighting to keep his face still and unmoving. With this move, the balance of power just shifted in his direction. It forces Zhurong to react, to cede initiative to Ren if only for an instant.
Zhurong leans forward, slipping her leg off the armrest to sit straight in her chair. Her eyes sharpen, the haze of alcohol vanishing in an instant, as all humor fades with a blink.
"A gingko fruit," words normally ending in a question instead ride the tone of a flat observation.
"No," Ren replies, thankful of Father's lessons for once in his life, "the tree it came from."
"Go on."
Ren allows himself a small smile, drawing upon his memories of Fang for support, "A giant gingko, the location of which you would never be able to find on your own, is what I offer you."
Zhurong leans back as she hums, new appreciation dawning in her gaze, "You've got balls, kid, but don't bullshit me. A treasure like that would absolutely belong to the Heavenly Star... Sect," she frowns, her brows furrowing, and her eyes flick off to the side as thoughts race behind her pupils.
"Monsters, down the mountain," she mutters as she runs through thoughts faster than her mouth can fully process, "no disciples, half a week," her eyes widen and her jaw drops as realization sparks, "Fuck me running, the Heavenly Star is dead."
Lung swallows, a flicker of concern passing across his gaze as the talisman expert visibly trembles. A bead of sweat trickles down Zhurong's brow as she sucks down a deep breath. A moment passes before she nods and quickly hops to her feet, the box of alcohol falling with a clatter.
"Alright, Shang Rou Ren," Zhurong addresses Ren with a degree of actual respect in her tone, "you have a deal."
Zhurong extends her hand and Ren takes it, all while the Heavens watch from on high.
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AN: Tomorrow, you'll be all caught up with Royal Road.
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For specificity and depth, once you reach your current limit you can go no further. If you can only sense three layers deep, then you can only sense three layers deep. If you can only make out a handful of qi motes, then you can only make out a handful of qi motes. In the case of one's range, the maximum distance one can sense qi at, there are exceptions.
Things that have accumulated certain amounts of qi are able to act as beacons of sorts. They shine bright in the distance and draw the gaze of the third eye even well beyond the range of one's mundane sight. Often, these take the form of things like giant gingko or other natural treasures.
However, as Ren approaches the cinnabar mine and a sudden, shining, golden presence drives spikes through his mind, he is reminded that cultivators of sufficient might also have this 'beacon effect.'
Ren's knees buckle as he collapses, eyes shrinking to pinpricks as stiff arms keep him off the ground. His throat burns as his cheeks swell, liquid sick wetting the dirt with chunks of morning stew. Ears filling with the hammers of the heart, Ren rolls onto his side, avoiding the vomit, and stares at the sky as his chest rises and falls in a frantic, frenzied tempo.
Gritting his teeth, Ren screws his eyes shut as he reaches deep inside and grasps hold of his bloodshot third eye. Willpower alone keeping him conscious, Ren forcibly shuts his qi senses down. Instantly, his body goes limp and his breathing slowly evens out.
That presence, golden and glorious, hit Ren from miles away. He was an hour or more away from the mine and even he, with his meagre range, sensed it! What kind of strength could manifest a beacon of that magnitude? How powerful must its owner be?
"Have you recovered?" Yuanding asks, cautious confusion furrowing his brows.
Ren manages a shaky nod as he climbs to his feet, "I, I think so, yes."
Yuanding hums, offering a waterskin which Ren gladly accepts, "What was that?"
Ren takes a deep drought of cool water, a river of sweat leaving his brow slick, "I think I just met their 'Big Chief'."
"And she attacked you?"
"No," Ren frowns as he returns the waterskin, eyes shifting towards the distant destination, "I'm not even sure she knows I'm here."
The rest of the journey is done in silence, neither overly eager to consider the implications.
The burning stench of overly strong alcohol assaults Ren as he steps into the mine's clearing. In the middle of the compound, planted out in the open, is a trio of figures—two standing, one lazily reclining in a portable throne. Ren recognizes one as Fa Fo Lung, his monstrous frame casting a broad shadow across the open space, while the other bandit standing nearby is a meek twig of a man who flinches with every flickering shadow.
With a lazy leg slung over an armrest and an elbow propping up her chin, a tall woman drapes herself across a throne. Each meaty bicep rivals Ren's head in size as patchwork scars turn her weather-beaten skin into a tapestry telling the tale of a life immersed in violence. A wicked burn scars her left cheek from ear to chin as a bandoleer of throwing knives crosses her lamellar-clad chest. A fine sword leans against an armrest while a half-empty box of glass bottles sits in her lap. She casually plucks a bottle from the box and bites through the neck, guzzling down glass and alcohol in the same gulp.
As Ren stops across the clearing from the bandits, a broad smile cracks Lung's face as he nudges the presumed Big Chief with an elbow.
"Looks like you owe me dinner," Lung chuckles as the Big Chief slumps low with a heavy groan.
"Should never have taken that bet," she sighs, shaking her head as she sits up with a slight wheeze. Working her neck, she yawns as she turns her hazel eyes on Ren, "Shang Rou Ren, yeah? Lil' brother of the guy who says he stores all the money, right?"
"That is me, correct," Ren bristles at being reduced to 'Shang Rou Fang's little brother', but keeps his cool.
"Right, right," she nods before taking a swig, "Well, I'm Zhurong," she leaves her given name to dangle alone in the wind, "and I hear you've got something of a business proposal for me, is that right? Something to do with wantin' a talisman commissioned...?" She trails off as she looks to Ren expectantly.
Ren takes a quick breath as he calms his nerves. This is it, there can be no backtracking once he crosses this line. Is he ready?
No, no he is not, but that choice was made a long time ago, wasn't it?
"You are correct, yes," Ren's nod is a stiff thing as he gets, as they say, 'down to business.' "I have a talisman I want copied, and you have a talisman expert who can make that copy." The meek man twitches at the mention of a 'talisman expert.'
"Can I see this talisman of yours?" Zhurong asks with a lazy flick of the wrist.
"I do not have it with me," Ren replies with controlled tone, his words carefully selected to imply he wouldn't deny her anything.
Zhurong laughs, "Smart!" She smacks her free hand to her forearm in an impromptu round of applause, "I'd have absolutely robbed the crap outta you if you'd've been stupid enough to bring the talisman."
Ren stays silent throughout the applause, carefully not thinking about how he hadn't considered that as a potential at all. With how downright casual Lung and Zhurong seem to be, he had almost forgotten that they are, at their core, bandits. Could that have been the intent all along? To make him lower his guard?
Zhurong closes off her clapping with a pleased sigh, "Alright, alright, let's talk silver, eh? What're you working with here?" She chuckles, "I'm assuming you don't have the payment with you right now, cause you don't seem the stupid type."
"You are correct," Ren nods only for Zhurong to grin.
"About the stupid type or you not having the payment with you?" She asks as Ren freezes. Did he just walk into a verbal trap? Quickly playing back her words, he frantically searches through every possible meaning as Zhurong's lips wriggle and humor lights in her eyes. She breaks out into laughter, slapping the bottle's base against an armrest, as she wipes a tear from her eye, "I'm just messing with you, kid! You gotta learn to relax a bit, you know? You'll lose all your hair if you keep stressin' about all the little things in life, you hear?"
Ren grimaces as his eye twitches, hand threatening to twist into a fist that would surely see him dead faster than the eye can blink. Taking a deep breath, he lets all the anger flow from his mind as years of meditation pay off in spades, "I do not have the payment with me."
Zhurong waves a hand, "Alright, alright, lets hear what you've got." Her brows lift as she shifts forward ever so slightly, "And it better be a good offer, I don't do haggling."
Ren's answer takes the form of a single gingko fruit, which he places on the ground before him.
Silence reigns as Zhurong, Lung, and the unnamed talisman expert stare at Ren. Ren stares back, fighting to keep his face still and unmoving. With this move, the balance of power just shifted in his direction. It forces Zhurong to react, to cede initiative to Ren if only for an instant.
Zhurong leans forward, slipping her leg off the armrest to sit straight in her chair. Her eyes sharpen, the haze of alcohol vanishing in an instant, as all humor fades with a blink.
"A gingko fruit," words normally ending in a question instead ride the tone of a flat observation.
"No," Ren replies, thankful of Father's lessons for once in his life, "the tree it came from."
"Go on."
Ren allows himself a small smile, drawing upon his memories of Fang for support, "A giant gingko, the location of which you would never be able to find on your own, is what I offer you."
Zhurong leans back as she hums, new appreciation dawning in her gaze, "You've got balls, kid, but don't bullshit me. A treasure like that would absolutely belong to the Heavenly Star... Sect," she frowns, her brows furrowing, and her eyes flick off to the side as thoughts race behind her pupils.
"Monsters, down the mountain," she mutters as she runs through thoughts faster than her mouth can fully process, "no disciples, half a week," her eyes widen and her jaw drops as realization sparks, "Fuck me running, the Heavenly Star is dead."
Lung swallows, a flicker of concern passing across his gaze as the talisman expert visibly trembles. A bead of sweat trickles down Zhurong's brow as she sucks down a deep breath. A moment passes before she nods and quickly hops to her feet, the box of alcohol falling with a clatter.
"Alright, Shang Rou Ren," Zhurong addresses Ren with a degree of actual respect in her tone, "you have a deal."
Zhurong extends her hand and Ren takes it, all while the Heavens watch from on high.
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AN: Tomorrow, you'll be all caught up with Royal Road.
If you liked this chapter, consider showing the story some love on Royal Road!