I'd punt on that particular one because it'd be regurgitating canon, and not even particularly decent canon. Kiyama Harumi is an interesting character, but that's in spite of her stripping tendencies, not because of them. I mean, I make excuses for the guy, but Kamachi Kazuma relies far too heavily on dumb shit like that to pad his writing, and it's majorly to his detriment. The reason why this became an AU in the first place was because I had to excise his worst offenses (it kind of snowballed from there).Also something right up Saten's alley "The legend of the Stripping Lady"
She has a "May You Live In Interesting Times" curse, doesn't she?Well, Saten's thing was to go chase down the dumb shit rumors to find the seed of real trouble in them. Interesting every single rumor she picked up turned out to be real in canon, only from the wrong angle or missing context.
There's a bit of fanon speculation that her mother's amulet was the real thing. She always gets in trouble, but always comes out of it unharmed.She has a "May You Live In Interesting Times" curse, doesn't she?
KUROKO →
Ran my mouth off at you earlier, and I shouldn't have. You deserve better than to be weighed down by things you have no control over, but I let my frustration take over. My conduct was poor, both as a member of Judgment and as your friend.
RUIKO →
You're wrong, and even if you're not wrong, I don't care.
RUIKO →
I don't care if you messed up. You're my friend, so little things like that shouldn't matter. You don't need to shoulder burdens alone, so if you ever need someone to rant at, I'll be there for you.
KUROKO →
I appreciate it, Ruiko, but I'll try not to take advantage of that offer.
KUROKO →
Perhaps I can make an offer of my own: do you want to meet for dinner? I still have time before curfew.
It occurs to you that you're asking for advise on alcohol from a 12-year-old. What is this, France? You should at least find someone who's 14.RUIKO →
Sorry, I already promised someone else that I'd meet them. Maybe Sunday? Actually, I do have a question. Drink, or no drink? If so, what should I get?
KUROKO →
I have many questions. First, who? Second, where? Third, why? Fourth, how? Fifth, when? Give me time and I'll come up with more.
You have no intention of telling her that you were in fact accosted in an alley.RUIKO →
Chill, it's not like I was accosted in an alley. Just someone I met playing basketball, and we're watching the game tonight at a small bar.
By now, the train is pulling into the station. It's easy enough to change platforms and prepare for the next northbound arrival.KUROKO →
I've found another question: why are you asking ME for drinking advice?
RUIKO →
A little birdy told me that you're friends with a girl who abuses her position as treasurer to smuggle drinks into Tokiwadai and sell them on the side
KUROKO →
People apparently drink something called "Coalmine" so maybe? I'm not a good person to ask, really. As for whether you should, that's up to you. I deal with a lot of problems, but surprisingly few are connected to alcohol and I trust you to be responsible.
RUIKO →
You're talking to the girl who used Level Upper you know that right
KUROKO →
Alcohol tokens are a lot harder to cheat with than the power curriculum is, or so I've heard.
You almost leave it at that, but something that you said earlier is nagging at you. Friends don't need to bear burdens alone, huh?RUIKO →
Fair enough. I'll get back to you tomorrow morning about meeting up this weekend.
RUIKO →
One more thing, actually: do you have any reason to think that Mikoto has a sister?
RUIKO →
What if I told you that I met someone who looks almost exactly like her?
RUIKO →
No, I'll see about taking one next time. I think I might be able to draw one.
KUROKO →
No need. I believe you. Not sure what to make of it though. You're planning on seeing her again?
You sigh. At least she's self-aware about it. You shoot back a quick agreement and relax to music for the rest of the trip. About eight minutes later, the train arrives at H.C. Brown East, the closest station to your destination.KUROKO →
Keep me informed so that I can at least get a look. You should know to rely on me when it comes to Mikoto's body. ;)
her what? Should it be 'position'?A little birdy told me that you're friends with a girl who abuses her as treasurer to smuggle drinks into Tokiwadai and sell them on the side
I cannot overstate just how much the answer is "yes."I'm going to class in a couple but I'll try to remember to drop a review, if you really want one, later when I have some time. Just casually reading though I can't spot anything bad about it though, so its pretty good at the very least.
Thanks for the catch!
No idea what this means, but context, and kind of knowing its root word, gives me enough clues to get what its saying.
This one I don't know at all, but its part one of a two part description so it still works.
Manipulative, but human. Good characterization.Not likely that she will, but that's by design; it's just the sort of expression that's sincere enough to pass without question while not really provoking any consequences.
Uhh... Who's Kazari? Also, wow we're lonely.After a short exchange of goodbyes with Akemi and a couple other girls you're only loosely acquainted with, you escape into the elevator, alone with your thoughts. I shouldn't be so worried about this Kazari will come back to me eventually... she always does, she's not strong enough to be alone. And when she does, I'll forgive her on the spot, no questions asked.
Oh yeah, this is an AU isn't it... and Mikoto's missing... shit.Nibbling at your lip, you reflect on how Kuroko has it even worse than you. How much of that is real Judgment work and how much is a desperate attempt to track down Mikoto, wherever she might have gone to?
Sorry, honey. Not that easy. You'll find a goal to go for eventually though... well, hopefully.What is it that Kuroko has that you don't? How did she get that spark in her spirit that lets her keep moving forward even when her heart has been ripped out of her chest so suddenly? Is it her ability?
You don't know, but... you have an entire day to yourself, so you decide that you're gonna find out.
World-building via her thoughts on the matter. This is good, lets the player learn about both the character and the world without going into exposition.It's still early and you haven't eaten, but you need to get some exercise in and you'd rather not do it on a full stomach. Fortunately, you don't have far to go. Red Cross PDC is only about a half-kilometer distant.
Their gym is unusual in that it's open to members and non-members alike. It's easy to guess why: they want to capitalize on the recent success in the Citywide Invitational to recruit fans into paying customers. You're a little skeptical on their prospects, given how few people support any of the marginal teams outside of The Eight.
It's quite a vicious cycle that they're trapped in. They can't recruit top talent because they don't have the money... because they lack good sponsorships... because they don't have many supporters... since they can't recruit top talent. The best they can hope for is to try to build momentum when they strike gold in the bargain bin, and then pray that they aren't pillaged for everything they're worth during the off-season.
Given how all but one of Red Cross' starting five from last year's team are playing elsewhere on massive contracts, they must have been praying to the wrong god.
Busy, busy city. And the cyclist thing is casual showing it isn't even uncommon, which is a good touch.Sidestepping a cyclist, you glance up at one of the airships overhead and read that it's 23.5°C/74.3°F with a marginal chance of precipitation, so there's no need to rush.
Good Characterization. I have that saved in my copy/paste thing right now Also good description instead of just saying she continued on her way or something, you actually put a good amount of thought into what and how she would do things and it shows very well.You plug in your headphones and page through songs on your phone until you find something enjoyable and upbeat, 'Glimmer of Hope' by The Medicine Man.
No idea what a "synth" is.ou've frequently been accused by your friends of liking synths more than is strictly healthy,
Also, amusing. Giving us info on what she does with her friends usually. Agian that's Good Characterization. (Seriously have that on copy/paste now).Recently, you've been focusing on showing Kuroko how good music should sound. It's tough going, but you read three entire pages on Pavlov and that qualifies you for this shit. (You were kind of psyched to discover that she knows the members of Double Blind since they all work in Judgment.)
Humans get distracted, so does the MC. Good Characterization.You're so engrossed in what you're doing that you almost forget to turn off onto another road when you're supposed to and you almost run into some guy when you do, so you stow your phone in your waistband and resolve to just enjoy the trip.
Good Characterization. You're doing something kind of odd there, of course people are going to stare. I can see the insecurity from the other side of the screen with this one.The powerful chords of Esther Brown's "Someone's Serenade" are soaring in your ears, and you can feel each step stretch a little bit longer because you just can't walk like a normal human being to this song. At least nobody's staring. Well, no more than usual, anyway, but you've gotten used to tuning that sort of thing out of your awareness. If they aren't going to give you the respect you deserve as a person, why should you care about them?
Wow, brutal. Good Characterization and world building.You do, however, take note of your surroundings before you take a final turn down a side street. It's not a dark alleyway or anything, but it's not heavily trafficked either; you can never be too careful. This is Academy City, after all. If you can't look after your own safety, what good are you?
Ah, that's a shame. Skill outstrips her build. Good Characterization.one pickup game is already in progress between some high school-looking guys.It's actually pretty competitive, and all ten of them are playing both sides of the ball with a respectable degree of skill. You'd love to join in with them just to play against people who know what they're doing, but you're so undersized that you'd be a liability no matter how well you shot, and neither team looks like they're in need of a handicap.
... Okay then. (Dat nickname)You file this girl away as Sports Bra, because 'Missed shot girl' flows poorly and is ever so slightly cruel.
*Snorts* And apparently that's normal for her. Huh.You take stock of the others. The two guys you dub Linden (for his black-and-green Brad Kohut jersey) and Headband (for his headband). The other three girls you call Whisper, Shiny, and Dangerous.
... Okay, then.Dangerous pretty much names herself in the moment you make eye contact. The last time you met someone with that air of cold, calculating superiority, Kuroko had to bring a building down on top of him.
Good Characterization. of others as well it looks like.The Shinshiro girl inside of you took a dim view of the guy the moment you saw his Linden ABC jersery, but that annoying voice of his is presenting a far more compelling argument against him.
This entire scene, you know what you're writing about. Or at least make it sound like you do, and there really isn't any difference between the two when you're writing like this, and it shows. Well done.You catch Dangerous as she steps back to take the outlet pass and surreptitiously flick your thumb down the court, hoping that she'll take your cue. Without prelude, you blow past Yuuna and go full-steam for the basket while Dangerous heaves the rock over six incredulous heads and on a pretty good trajectory, but you two aren't in sync enough to pull it off perfectly as you have to shift course and slow down a little to reel the pass in. That leaves you vulnerable for just long enough and Yuuna takes a swipe at it, but you back off and lob a pass to Headband just as he gets a great angle on Linden. Nobody's in position to contest as he makes an easy floater.
Heh. Also these people feel like actual living people rather than just cardboard cutouts for the MC to interact with. Good Characterization."Eh," he grunts, "I stand by it. Still, I'm impressed. What's your name?"
"Ruiko," you say as you grab a paper cup and start filling it with water.
"Ruiko, huh? I'm Tom, Tom Wilkes. This guy's Shirahata Goro."
"I can introduce myself, you twit," Goro chimes in.
Tom rolls his eyes. "Yeah, whatever. Anyway, if more girls played with the heart you do, they might actually make it into the big leagues."
You look over at Whisper and Dangerous. "Compliments are nice, but I'm not even the best girl here," you say with a nervous chuckle.
He waves you concerns off. "I wouldn't say that."
Goro speaks up again. "What he really means to say is that he's already schmoozed up with the other girls and he wants to go for the complete set."
Tom gives him a look that's somewhere between Shut UP man and Worst. Wingman. Ever. "No, I'm not actually kidding. They look so great because they're up against scrubs who can't guard them at all. I might give Yuuna a hard time about her defense, but she's actually really good at it. Better than me, and I'll never admit that I said those words. See, their real problem is that they're too busy waiting for the perfect opening to take risks. If either of them went at it like you have without someone to guard them? Well, this'd be a two-girl game pretty quick."
"Hey," Yuuna calls out, "we have two more. Are you guys ready to jump back in?"
So that's what PDC means. Was that on purpose or did it just not come up?Everyone else agrees in short order, and within a minute you're inside the lobby of the Power Development Center proper for the first time.
Heh. Dat nickname.Your very own Outer Layer has definitely taken advantage of his generosity,
Again, you make these characters feel alive. Good Characterization.Glasses smirks. "You don't know who I am?"
She leans forward and shakes her head. "Not a clue."
"Still nothing?" he asks as he takes of his glasses.
"Nope."
He sighs and points to a picture on the wall. It's the '88 Red Cross PDC basketball club.
"Oh," Yuuna says simply. "Well, I'm not actually a Red Cross supporter."
He looks at you with pleading eyes, but you can't help him. "Shinshiro."
Whisper steps up to the plate. "This guy is totally Masura Shunichi."
"I knew someone at this table would support my team!" he says, positively giddy.
"Not really," Whisper admits. "I just remember you because you missed a game-winner against Yoshiki last week, which is the main reason we're in the playoffs as a sixth-seed instead of an eighth-seed."
The dagger strikes deep and true. He buries his head in his hands. "Don't remind me."
"You don't need to feel that bad, it's not like you had a shot at making the playoffs this year anyway."
You let out an involuntary whistle. Whisper is without mercy.
"Stone. Fucking. Cold," Yuuna mutters breathlessly.
Shunichi pulls a face. "Harsh, but true. We lost so many key players that I'm happy we qualified for the CIS in the first place."
"The good news is that you haven't done well enough to be whisked away to Linden yet, so there's always next year." Then you remember that you're talking to a player, here. "Or maybe that's the bad news."
He smiles wryly. "Why, are you gunning for my spot? I haven't forgotten how you were the only one to score on me."
You blink. "Wait, I was?"
"You don't remember that?" Yuuna asks incredulously.
"No, I do, I just thought that I couldn't have been the only one."
Shunichi shrugs. "Take it from me, you were."
"I don't feel like it should count; you didn't even move to stop me," you insist sheepishly.
But he feels strongly otherwise. "No, you caught me so flat-footed that I didn't even have time to react. There's a big difference there, and I totally underestimated you. I didn't think some random amateur chick could be that fast, and I paid for it. It's the kind of mistake that would have the coach on my ass for the rest of the game and the next three film sessions."
You catch yourself blushing a little. He's... actually something to look at, you have to admit. His black hair is just long enough to be messy, but the look works really well on him since it highlights his clear-shaven jawline. You can tell that he's been hitting the weight room so high that it must be sobbing in the corner somewhere, and it's little wonder that he was able to totally reshape the game without trying. And that's one thing you're positive of: he wasn't.
Of course, there's another thing about him that puts him on your radar. As a professional athlete in Academy City, you're absolutely positive that he's a Level Zero. Just like you.
*Raises eyebrow* Yeah, I spotted that later on.
Ouch.Frighteningly, his mind is on a very similar track. "So, are any of you espers?"
Whisper raises her hand, followed shortly by Shiny and Goro. "Just a Level One," she says to clarify. Shiny's the same, but Goro admits to being a Level Two.
Shunichi winces. "You guys have it the worst, I think. Weak stipend, higher expectations, no leverage to get into the best schools any easier... I'm actually glad I'm a Level Zero, but I can see why people would get attached to having an ability. Any ability, even."
That one hits pretty close to home, and takes you back to that vanishingly brief time you had one to call your own. You open and close your hand wistfully.
Hmm... Not sure about this one. Might have been a good idea to let the players decide whether or not they wanted to go unless the MC's mindset at the time was overwhelmingly in favor of wanting to go.Shunichi actually lingers a little and saddles up next to you. "Do you know what's really bad about the way I underestimated you? Watching you play was what made me want to join that game in the first place." You don't really know how to respond to that. "I'm absolutely serious here, and everything else I saw was just as impressive. I didn't miss the way you took charge of that offense and found the one play that we couldn't reliably defend. Every basket we had to concede to that gambit was agonizing, because I couldn't rotate to stop you without opening the door to something even worse. It's not just your body that's well-conditioned; your mind is, too. Anyway, the first playoff game is tonight, between Santiago and Yoshiki. I was going to meet up with a few friends to watch... is that something you'd be interested in?"
"Of course," you reply instantly. It's not Shinshiro, but you're pretty sure that he'll be feeling the absence of his favorite team even stronger.
He lifts up his phone. "Would it be alright to exchange numbers? I haven't heard where we're meeting yet, so I'll need to be able to message you about it."
You raise yours up to meet his, and the sharing is done wirelessly. Technology never ceases to amaze you. "Just let me know where, and I'll be there."
Wow, that's some stamina. 40 to 50 minutes playing like that. Then again I'm largely sedentary so what do I know?You walk out of Red Cross feeling much better than you did earlier. 9:56, amazing what good an hour and a half can do. You missed a message from Kuroko, though:
And other characters have lives not revolving around the MC, dear god what is this insanity.It's a shame, but probably just a temporary inconvenience.
What do you do now?
What was Akemi saying earlier actually? I forgot.Then again, if you had more of a budget... your mind is drawn back to what Akemi was saying earlier. It's undeniably appealing; as a Level Zero, the stipend you receive is barely enough to get by on.
... Wut? (Which is I imagine how she's feeling as well trying to follow that train of thought.)Sakugawa's own stipend helps, but it's not even remotely similar to the veritable king's ransom that a top school like Tokiwadai provides. Worse, you only ever see half of it, with the remainder deducted to pay for your dorm room.
It's something to think about, you decide, but it'd be such a monumental change that you're not willing to commit. You get by, and you've been telling yourself that's enough, even if you're not sure you believe it.
Bottom line: you're not sure that you're not sure, and -- thinking about it -- you're not even sure of that. It's not the kind of thing you're prone to dwelling on, either.
Well considering how we entered I'm not surprised she thought we were there for someone in trouble.So you don't.
I should probably try and hunt down Kuroko. Considering that there's no guarantee that she'll be off-duty before you're otherwise occupied, it's up to you to stop any scheduling conflicts before they happen. The good news is that you have a trick up your sleeve, one that Kuroko herself accidentally taught you when she was trying to find Kazari last month.
You charge down the street and batter down the door of the nearest Judgment Zone Office, an inviting little storefront-looking place. Inside is a smallish well-lit room with chairs on either wall and a round reception desk in the center, manned by a single girl clad in a school uniform and a green armband.
Amusing.She's not exactly Judgment's Best and Brightest, and in fact she pretty much lives down to every insulting thing Kuroko's ever said about Zone Offices and the "judgebunnies" inside of them
Good flavor text for the city. Makes it feel more real.Again, the distance is close enough to where you're willing to just walk it. Your short jaunt takes you into a forest of tall buildings (even by Academy City standards, where 10 stories counts as "short"), surrounded by advertisements for shops, corporations, and even schools. The building the 177th Branch Office is in stands out amount the walls of glass and steel, an old brick highrise that predates the modern construction and was probably erected just after the Pacific War.
Heh.From what you remember, half of the place is residential while offices of various stripes occupy the rest. That's a pretty typical breakdown in Academy City, where pretty much everything is in a tower. Taking the elevator up to the eighth floor, it's only a short walk down a hallway to the correct suite. A small placard is the only clue as to what's behind the door; the 177th doesn't even pretend that they want walk-ins.
You walk in.
And so we get some ugly truths. Poor Saten having her world view torn apart piece by piece.Kuroko sits alone among a desolate expanse of paperwork and charts, chained to a laptop and armed with a can of tea. "Ruiko," she gives you a halfhearted wave.
"You look like you really were looking forward to a day off," you observe, because it's nicer than saying 'You look like shit.'
"Nothing much I can do about it," she sighs. "We're understaffed, and someone has to be here on station. Regulations are regulations."
You frown. "But what happened? Someone else was supposed to be here; where did they go?"
Nervously pulls at a twintail. "It's... ahh, there's no harm in telling you. Konori's had to attend an emergency meeting. She worked out a truce between the local gangs. As long as they don't fight with each other or hurt innocents, we turn a blind eye. Things still come up, though, so she has to straighten them out every now and again."
"Wait, 'turn a blind eye'? Isn't that the opposite of what Judgment is supposed to do?!" You can't quite keep the accusation out of your voice.
Kuroko takes it in stride. "The alternative is letting them fall under the influence of Skill Out. If that happens, we lose. Judgment does not have the personnel or the resources to fight against that damned alliance of theirs. We learned that lesson painfully, and they've gone to great lengths to ensure that we never forget it."
You're having trouble buying it. "Yotsuba could handle Skill Out on her own, and she wouldn't have to because you have Captain Crash."
"There are various reasons why that can never happen," Kuroko says, seemingly unsure of how to explain.
"Like what?"
Kuroko nibbles at her lip. "Judgment was never meant to succeed. When we do, there's retribution. Have you even wondered why the 177th is so understaffed?"
"Because Judgment doesn't have enough people to go around, right?"
She shakes her head. "Branch offices like ours get first pick of the best prospects. However, every transfer to the 177th gets vetoed by certain parties in Anti-Skill. That truce of Konori's didn't earn us many friends."
That only makes you more confused. "Why would Anti-Skill side with Skill Out over Judgment?"
"I'm sure they're not enamored with the group itself, but the function it serves is essential. Skill Out promotes conflict, and conflict fosters ability growth. Academy City doesn't want peace, and they don't particularly care for justice."
Sobering. "I didn't know..."
"Hmph, I suppose you didn't. This isn't a just a job for me, Ruiko. It's not an excuse to practice my ability. When I put on this armband, it's a declaration of what I fight for. If people like you can live in peaceful, blissful ignorance because of sacrifices that I've made, that means that it was worth it. I know that Konori feels the same way; she puts herself at tremendous risk every time she deals with those gangs, but she's made of steel."
*Blink* Huh, someone's actually trying to get that out. Or at least make people sub-consciously aware of it."The Five," Kuroko continues, "established that Level Fives are inherently crazy. They're running with this in The Seven, where the seven Level Fives decide to combine forces to take over Academy City. They're the villains," she says, stating the obvious.
Valid fears at that.You chuckle at that. "I know they're under a lot of pressure to live up to expectations, but they've got the whole 'preying on the city's subconscious fears' thing down pretty well. Guess that's a good sign."
Is there a story there or... Ah, that might be it. We seem to be good at hiding and crowds can make that both easy and hard, no? :3
Ah, magicians.You let your mind wander for a moment, and it happens to settle on something Kazari mentioned a few weeks back about a rumor concerning foreign espers and how they're supposedly able to manifest or strengthen their abilities through some sort of totem or talisman, maybe like how Academy City's own Level Five psychic supposedly relies on a remote control to pull off her tricks.
This actually brings to mind a different bit of hearsay involving an esper who appeared to have a different power depending on the object he held, and even claimed to be able to teach others how to do the same. News about him popped up on the intranet and exploded, but you don't recall ever hearing anything more about the guy.
Could they be related?
An investigation seems to be in order. You mash together a few relevant terms like 'magic', 'how to do magic', 'unusual', 'multi-skill', and the guy's name... Luthor... something... ah, Luthor Viktorin -- that was it! -- and see what pops up on some of your usual resources for this sort of thing.
Oh, instinct perhaps?On a lark, you decide to shuffle the terms around a little and take his name out of the equation. The result you get isn't precisely what you were aiming for (what were you aiming for?)
Interesting. Very interesting., but it's the sort of thing you might describe as 'some serious shit.' Specifically, claims that actual magicians -- the flash-zoom-'I will smite thee' sort, not performers -- infiltrated the city and got in a fight with a Gemstone.
You missed this one because it's a source you don't follow based on what you see as a fundamental lack of credibility, but every now and then, they've been known to break something legitimately true and exciting... and you can't help but recall that Sogiita Gunha's rating went through the roof recently. Not many people seem to know about Gemstones, but one of the universally-agreed-upon things among the cognoscenti is that Captain Crash is one of them.
Not sure what this means either.
... Ow, that feels punch hurt.The person making the claim admits that he only heard about the fight second-hand and isn't even sure if there were two or three magicians. A few others pop in to say that they've been hearing the same things, but another offers a few clarifying details. You take in everything he says with a truckload of salt, but he mentions that one of the magicians was also an esper.
By all that may-or-may-not be holy, you want to believe.
Forgot about the clothes myself, good catch.This is definitely something to return to later. Now, though, you're at your dorm and you have things to do. Well, thing: you drop off your dirty laundry before your bag reeks any more of sweat than it already does. You're momentarily tempted to knock on Kazari's door as you walk past, but you stop yourself. The moment Kazari matures enough to face up to the fact that she screwed up, you'll talk. Not before. You're not gonna rob her of her chance to grow as a person and deal with her own faults.
And the friends a bit of an asshole.*Sigh* And poor Saten dealing with the rascism. I want to give her a hug for some reason, but then I'd probably get punched.For lunch, you have a pretty good idea of what you want. You've heard about a great ramen place around here, but you haven't tried it yet. There are two reasons. First, it's to the southwest and in a more shady neighborhood. They don't talk about it, but you have it on good authority that some girls from your school have had a very bad time with some of the locals when they let their guard down. But that's kind of an excuse because your real reason for avoiding it is because ramen is the most Japanese thing pretty much ever.
You don't mind Japanese things at all; in fact, you tend to like them a lot. Aaaaand that's where the problem is, because you have a very stereotypical Japanese look that literally nothing you've tried has succeeded at dispelling. If a single word gets out about you indulging in anything similarly viewed as Japanese, you're suddenly the target of every single Japan joke Academy City can muster, and there is a multitude. Many of them are quite mean-spirited in that oddly personal way that jokes can capture so well. You're able to hide or disguise many of your Japanese proclivities, but when you eat it's typically with Kazari, and she never seemed to grasp that it's something you'd prefer she kept to herself.
Stomach sinking, you're suddenly much less tempted to knock on her door.
Something funny is going on.You do a double-take. Sure enough, the girl walking on a cross-street looks frighteningly similar to Mikoto, maybe even a dead ringer. Much closer to not-Mikoto from that movie, you're sure. Only a couple factors keep you from being sure that this is her. Her hair, for one, is just too long. Unless there's an obscure-as-hell esper power or scalp treatment that hypercharges hair growth... Actually, I wonder if healers can do that?
Her clothes also throw you off. Denim shorts and a mildly abbreviated halterneck (white with a pink palm tree design on the front) aren't exactly out of the ordinary for Academy City summers, and for that matter you can't say that you've seen Mikoto outside of her uniform often, but it really doesn't strike you as something that'd be in her wardrobe. Kuroko's, maybe, but you'll go out on a limb and say that Mikoto isn't the kind of roommate who steals your stuff and wears it while you're not around.
Another thing that catches your attention is that she's carrying a guitar case, and you've seen enough television to know that the one thing that's never in a guitar case is an actual guitar. It's almost enough for you to call Kuroko here and now, but... that can't be Mikoto, can it? You were just thinking about how biological siblings were almost unheard of in Academy City (not many parents want to send multiple kids here), but maybe Mikoto has a sister that she never mentioned? The more you look, the more you're convinced that the resemblance is just downright uncanny.
Oh, some more funny things going on.
Yes, it most certainly is, isn't it? *Stares at GM*
Good flavor text for the area, also worrying/sad.By now, you're well across the border and into the Churchill neighborhood of District 2. It's one of the older parts of the city, mostly a thicket of smaller buildings that date back to Academy City's inception. While many of them were originally residential, most are now used for storage or industry. You suspect that the only reason it hasn't become a haven for gangs is that there are so many other corners of the south that are even more appealing to them.
Yeah, stake outs don't work like that, even moving ones.A few blocks in and you're starting to feel a little frustrated. You were expecting something weird or unusual to happen by now, but she hasn't done a single thing that strikes you as out of the ordinary.
*Sigh* Patience girl, patience. Stop cursing others... hmm... I wonder...
Good eye girl.Up ahead, every single alarm bell in your head goes off at once when you spot a pair of guys hanging out on a corner, right where what looks to be a well-trafficked alleyway branches off. It's the oldest one in the book: the two of them who are 'hanging out' in the street act as spotters, and their job is to signal their buddies (in a building down the alley, no doubt) when worthwhile prey stumbles into their trap. Then, they catch their victim in a pincer.
Holy shit indeed.Common sentiment in Academy City holds that it's such an obvious ploy that anyone who falls for it deserves whatever they get. (This always struck you as a rather callous opinion.) Your jaw drops when Mikoto walks into the trap alley without sparing the lookouts so much as a single glance. By the looks of it, they can barely believe it either.
Holy shit.
And she somehow sneaks upon them till she announces herself with the scream. *Flat stare at GM* Very well hidden.You don't even pause to think before you sprint after her. She might be able to handle herself, but the way you're built, doing nothing isn't an option. They're in no hurry to draw in on her, but they're close enough to where she'd spot them easily if she only looked back... but she's in no hurry to do it. I know how the change that.
Yep, fights are like that.You brace yourself against a wall, panting heavily and heart pounding in your ear. It takes a long moment for your thoughts to clear up and for you to properly comprehend what just happened.
Yes, you sound like you are *Stares at GM harder* Improve under the stress of combat, was it?You're can't decide whether you're horrified or invigorated, so you go with an awkward mix of both. I'm such an adrenaline junkie, and I'm pretty lucky that I'm not bleeding out on the ground right now.
Well, that was scary to the readers as well. And gets the point across of how dangerous espers can be.You're about to ask as much, but when you try to talk nothing happens. In fact, your body isn't following any orders you send at all. You're not paralyzed so much as locked out of your own flesh. It's the second most terrifying feeling you've experienced in your life.
Saten has a hero complex, or is at least somewhat idealistic about what's right, and sticks her foot in her mouth. Not a good combo. Luckily Misaka clone is understanding... an emotional. Huh."What a fool, trusting in such an easily thwarted power without verifying its effect."
Your jaw hangs open. "I think-- I think you killed him."
Mikoto -- is this really Mikoto it can't be Mikoto can it -- regards him distantly. "Perhaps. He made his bed, now he gets to sleep in it."
No way, is she really saying that? You shake your head. "That's not right." As you walk over to check his pulse, she stops you.
"What makes his health your responsibility?"
"What, did he suddenly stop being a person while I wasn't looking? Let me help him!"
"Don't be a fool. Are you trained in medicine?"
"W-what does it matter!" you shout, trying not to falter.
Not-Mikoto fixes you with a cold stare. "Any severe injuries sustained by him will have been internal. If you move him, you're likely to make them worse. Furthermore, if you're so insistent on helping him, what about the others here who are similarly unconscious? They might very well be suffering from life-threatening injuries also, but did you even consider helping them? What makes them different from him?" You try to find the words to explain, but you can't. "They didn't even attack us. You struck them first. Sure, their intent was apparent... but," she points at the bastard, "wasn't his?"
Unable to press that point, you attack from a different angle. "You didn't have to hit him with such a powerful attack! It's different because we weren't just defending ourselves there, it was... it was... over the top!"
"He's a psychic, and we don't know how strong he is. Are you aware of what they're capable of? I couldn't take the risk that he'd have even a moment of consciousness in which he could use his powers to wreak havoc in your brain. I would have had more leeway if you weren't hear, but the attack I used was what I judged necessary to incapacitate him immediately."
"Bullshit." You're smarting a little from her insinuation, and it gets the better of you. "I know for a fact that electrokinesis can instantly stun without physically harming someone!"
"Not all of us are Misaka Mikoto," she snaps back. "Do you understand what makes her unique and respected among advanced elecrokinetics, or the so-called Electromasters? She has enough control to use her power to its fullest potential without ever killing a single person! I might look like her -- I know you're thinking that -- and I certainly respect her, but let me be perfectly clear: I am not Misaka Mikoto."
You shrink back involuntarily. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to--"
"Of course you didn't. I don't hold anything you've said here against you. But let's be clear: if you really cared about his survival, you'd be calling for emergency services instead of arguing with me about things that don't matter." She raises up a hand to stop you when you move to do just that. "I've already sent a message to that effect outlining what they'll find, and it would be in our best interests that they don't find us."
Odd girl, but nice. I like her already. And we're taking her to ramen as a thank you/apology. I like it."Wait, what -- why? They'll get away without any punishment unless we explain what happened!"
She 'hmph's at you. "It's our word against theirs, and they can honestly argue that we provoked them. Besides, they've already received a degree of 'punishment' that exceeds anything that Anti-Skill would foist them with."
"But--" you're interrupted when she grabs your wrist and starts physically dragging you out of the alley back the way you came. "What are you doing!"
"What's best for you." She grabs your bag as you pass by it, which you'd forgotten about. When you're out she lets go of you, only to use her free hand to find your student ID with remarkable precision. "Saten Ruiko," she reads. "I see."
You snatch it out of her hand and then return to grab your bag. "I'm right here, you know. If you want to learn my name, just ask me!"
She looks you straight in the eye, expression 100% even. "What is your name?"
You open your mouth, close it, open it again, and close it again. "Ru... Ruiko. Saten Ruiko."
"It's a pleasure to meet you, Saten Ruiko. You can call me Kanako."
The sound of a siren meets your ears. You've already made it maybe 40 meters from the alleyway entrance, but... Ah, what the hell. This time, you grab her wrist. "C'mon, you wanted to be somewhere else? Let's go somewhere else. Where were you heading, anyway?"
"Irrelevant, now. I've missed an appointment."
Well, whatever. I can't get a read on her at all, but I'm stupidly hungry and probably a little shell-shocked. I can sort this out later. "Do you like ramen?"
Well, fuck indeed... was it the blood or did she think we were on a date... or both? Heh.You don't have to worry about anything like that, because there are only three other patrons. (One of them is from your school, and she gives you an odd look. Well, fuck.)
Uhh... It very well might Saten. But, new friend get... hopefully.The proprietor takes your order immediately, and offhandedly asks if "you girls have been having fun." You don't realize until you're seated that your shirt has blood on it and that's probably what he's talking about.
All the while you're talking the opportunity to talk with Kanako, but you aren't actually getting a ton out of her. You're not sure if she's playing coy or if she's just that bad at picking up on what it is you're digging for.
Y'know what, I'm gonna get this girl to loosen up and spill her secrets if it kills me.
And Saten continues to have good instincts. Good job.The entire reason you followed her in the first place was because you felt like there was something suspicious about her, and that feeling has only grown more deep and abiding. You haven't forgotten that she introduced herself with a 'call me' instead of 'my name is', and considering how common it is for those involved in Academy City's shadier affairs to adopt an alias...
It could just be grasping at straws. It could be nothing at all. But maybe -- maybe -- it's something huge. You remember the weekend where Kuroko constantly messaged you with her thoughts on and reactions to Don Quixote when she had to read it for a school assignment, and one of her messages jumps into your head: "Academy City sure has a lot of windmills."
She's getting out of touch with her heritage, not surprising I suppose.You remember to drink the remaining dregs from the bowl (At least, you think that's what you're supposed to do? You don't actually watch so many Japanese imports, so your knowledge here is kinda hazy) and see that Kanako is finishing hers as well.
Secrets. If it kills me. You set your jaw, and declare that your next stop as a pair will be an arcade. She shrugs.
Homo Richgirlensis... *Snorts* That one's pretty good."It's right next to the Garden of Education, so you'd better believe it is," you agree. "There's nothing in that stuffy place to actually do, so the ones who don't survive on distilled essence of tea party like to come out here. When your clientele is largely Homo Richgirlensis, nothing but the best will do."
...Yeah. Something funny there.Kanako looks askance at the contraption in front of her.
"It's for dancing on," you explain. "Instructions scroll down the screen, and you try to match them with your own feet."
"I don't get it."
You stare in disbelief. "How can you not get dancing?"
"Dancing is a social ritual used to express yourself to other people. Hopping around on a metal box to the instructions of a machine is not dancing."
Well, something funny and don't worry Kanako, we'll help you out. *Smile* *Kanako plots all escape routes she can find*"Well..." you lean back on the metal rail as you figure out how to best explain. "It might be a game first, but that doesn't mean that there's not expression involved. Think of it like--" you almost say basketball, but decide on something more accessible. "Er, think of it like playing music. Just because you're following instructions doesn't mean that you're not putting yourself into it, right?"
Kanako nods in comprehension. "I see." She raises her arms and starts stretching them. "This will require me to apply myself."
"Do you want me to do a song on my own so you can watch?"
She shakes her head. "No need."
"Oh-kaaay, we'll go ahead with the first one, then." You climb up and start scrolling down through the options with your feet, looking for something you like but aren't bored of. "Do you like any of these bands, Kanako?"
"I'm not familiar with any of these titles."
That's... actually pretty odd. There are a ton of classics here. "Really, not a single one?"
She tilts her head. "Is it really that unusual?"
"What bizarre alternate-reality Academy City have you been living in where people don't listen to music?"
"It... was never a part of my upbringing. However, I'm looking to expand my horizons," she says.
Yay! We're making progress with her.She nods, and you're off. Arrows cascade down at an alarming rate, but you don't even have to concentrate to blaze through like it's nothing. To you, it really isn't. Footwork is a forte of yours, and it'll take a hell of a lot more than this to throw you.
You're not sure what exactly you were expecting from Kanako, but whatever it is, you got it. She's downright adroit, although you get the feeling that she's moving with the instructions and not really with the music. It's sort of like someone read poetry with a static monotone. A few songs in, though, and you'd almost swear that she's introducing more of a personal touch.
Ah, so that is what Saten was up to. I had thought it might have been, good going Saten.You learn something new and vaguely useful with each game you take her to. On racers, Kanako takes a very consistent and efficient line and doesn't attempt risky overtakes. She's an absolute beast with shooters, eliminating targets with ruthless accuracy the moment they appear, often before you can react at all. Fighting games baffle her; she just can't grasp the unintuitive combos, while the small 2D stages give her fits. Eventually, she's so frustrated that she's mashing down on the buttons and casting a death-glare when it doesn't do what she wants. You actually have to drag her away from the machine, because you're afraid that she's gonna blow up and zap it Mikoto-style.
Heh.In retrospect, though, you probably could have chose something better than the claw game to distract her with. Kanako actually does electrocute it after the tenth false-start in pursuit of a Killbear plush. Mikoto actually saves the day here: because she shocked the claw machine so often in the past, they replaced it with a specially-built one incorporating a Faraday cage, among other countermeasures.
Because she is still figuring out who she is, maybe?All the while, you've taken the opportunity to pepper her with questions. Does she play sports? (No.) Not even at school? (Don't attend one.) Why not? (There's no need.) What level are you? (High three or low four, depending on the test.) What's your favorite place in the city? (The beach.) It goes on, but for some reason you're having trouble really getting a grasp on her. It's not that she's evasive, either... just hard to pin down, even inconsistent.
Hmm...Finally: "Do you have any questions of your own?"
"Just one," she says. "Do you believe in God?"
You give her a skeptical look. "You aren't trying to recruit me into the Cult, are you?"
"I'm unaffiliated with any religious organization," she asserts.
What the hell, roll with it Ruiko. "The God? I don't think so. A God? ...Maybe."
"What about the idea of a divine creator?"
You consider the complexity of the world and the mysteries of life. "I'm not sure I buy that we're all here randomly, but I won't claim any more than that."
And that was a good snark.Kanako nods appreciatively. "Understandable. If you're willing, I'd like you to join me in a hypothetical. Imagine that you have a creator, one that is intimately and undeniably responsible for giving you life and shaping who you are."
"I do," you deadpan. "They're called 'parents.'"
An she laughs. I consider this entire outing a win no matter how it ends.She laughs. "Sort of like that, but consider it to be of a far greater magnitude. Academy City is testament to how human parents aren't always a major influence on their offspring."
Interesting question.You think back to vague memories of yours. Yeah, that one struck close to home. "So, like a painter or an author? Someone who is invested in every part of his work?"
"Yes, exactly like that. Would you feel indebted to this being?"
"Hmmmm," you vocalize as you lean backward, thinking deeply. You almost knee-jerk into an immediate 'no,' but the question proves more complex than it first strikes you as. "I think I would, actually. When someone gives me a gift, I treat them special because of it, even if they don't want me to. If everything I am is one big gift, that's... a lot of special treatment we're talking."
Well... That escalated quickly.Kanako twirls her hair absentmindedly. "What if this being -- your creator -- asks you to kill someone?"
You stare at her slack-jawed. What kind of hypothetical is that!
Good answer actually. Kanako does have a choice to some degree... I think. So she has some responsibility for whatever she chooses. Of course it needs to count for extenuating circumstances, but its a good answer.Perhaps sensing your reticence, she continues: "If there's a line to be drawn, where do you draw it? If something or someone created you, where does their influence over you end?"
"Whatever philosophy club you're in, they're pretty hardcore," you comment, a little nervous. "That's... a tough question to answer." Kanako looks like she's about to say something, but you cut her off with an upraised hand. "But if I had to answer it, this is what I'd say: the scenario you're posing is wrong. Even if this creator is behind everything, he's not the only one responsible. As long as you have an independent will to make decisions about your life, you have just as much of a claim to your own life as this creator does. You might still owe him, but you also owe yourself. Any choice you make should honor both of those obligations. At least, that's what I think."
Oh, you horrible tease of a young woman."I see," she says. "I'm glad I chose to talk with you... it's given me many things to consider. I look forward to our next meeting."
You frown. "You're leaving?"
She nods. "It's come to my attention that someone is searching for me, and I shouldn't leave her waiting. I've scanned the RFID of your phone with my ability, so you can expect a call at some point." Kanako gets up to leave. "Thanks for the company, Ruiko. It was pleasant."
"Well, you'd better call me sooner rather than later," you half-demand, a little miffed you haven't gotten your answers.
Kanako looks back and smiles cryptically. "We'll see."
Interesting. Also didn't remember this guy at all. Now let's just hope he isn't some sociopath or zero ethics scientist. ... He's a mage isn't he?"Daigo-sensei? What are you doing here?" If you were pressed to make a list of people you were least likely to randomly encounter in an arcade, this man would be headlining it. He was nice, he was dedicated, but he never made a point of having fun.
He scratches his head nervously. "Research. I know it sounds silly, but I'm doing my best to try and understand the things that kids here do so that I can relate to them better. I knew that it'd be an uphill struggle, coming in as an outsider, but I underestimated how different it would be to my own experience with school and adolescence. I'm eternally thankful that you wonderful students of mine are so patient and haven't laughed me out of the classroom yet."
You can't help but smile at his good-natured earnestness. Academy City needs more men like him. "That's not silly at all, and there's no way the class would turn on you. You're the best teacher I've had, no question about it. I think that it's good that you're an outsider; it lets you see things in ways that the rest of us might not."
"I can't help but think about all the things I don't see, though. You children are expected to look after your own affairs even at this young age, and to a shocking degree. I never expected to see schoolchildren wearing wedding bands, for instance."
"It's not like they mean anything," you say with a shrug. "It's just something that the Cult pushes, nothing official to it. It's a lot like how some of us will call each other siblings without any real relation. Play-acting, mostly."
He grins, but there's something distant to it. "I wouldn't look down on those of you who play-act as adults, Ruiko. You'll find that adults are only play-acting as adults, too. Not all of us are very good at it."
*Coughs* Right, marinara sauce. His face or tone when he said that though, heh."Uh-huh. I just want my best student to take care of herself, and I'm sure you want that as well. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'm willing to listen. Even if it's just about marinara sauce. Okay?"
We need to remember to watch this.After a moment's thought, you decide that you probably shouldn't watch a video like that on a crowded train. Or before dinner. They talk about being the voice of Level Zeroes and then go around doing shit like that. Disgusting.
... Lucky. And good life lesson to know.The walk from Red Cross back to your dorm is pleasant; the sun is out again, but the cool evening breeze balances it out nicely. Better yet, nobody is around in the hallways to comment on the blood. Naturally, the first thing you do back in your room is to pull it off. Really, changing clothes would be a good thing to do, blood or no blood. Shuninchi's friends might be People Who Matter, and the best way to open doors in Academy City is to know the right people. First impressions matter.
*Stares at Gm harder*There's a mirror inside, and you meet your own eyes. You shift you head, squint a little. There's a disconnect, and you just can't place it. Something that's off, something that's unsettling. It's not like looking into the eyes of a stranger, but...
Until you end up looking like a blueberry, right inner quiping voice?More of your favorite color is never a bad thing.
Says the girl who painted her room blue...
Poor Saten, feeling she has little control over her life has got to suck... well it does suck. Been there before.Hopping in the bathroom, you tiny up for a couple minutes to maximize presentability. This is where Akemi or Mako would be over your shoulder complaining about how beauty was a dumb double standard and how men don't need to put in the same amount of work, and... they'd be right, pretty much. It's just not something you personally mind, because you've never seen the investment as wasted time. For you, it's a comforting way to assert some control.
Can't remember the comment I was thinking of.It didn't take long to realize that people would stare at you no matter what you did, so the discovery that you could basically steer how they happened and what they targeted had come as a godsend.
Ah, dammit. What'd we forget?You have a nagging feeling that you've forgotten something important, but you're not gonna waste time trying to figure out what it is. It's not that you're low on time, but you still have a chance of arriving before sunset. Less so if you dawdle here. You are many things, but 'creature of the night' is not one of them.
Yay! She's learning. Its nice to see a character grow like this.You almost leave it at that, but something that you said earlier is nagging at you. Friends don't need to bear burdens alone, huh?
More good flavor text from the street level view.District 5 isn't a very pretty place. Much like south 7, buildings are functional but rarely elegant or even very tall, by Academy City standards. Despite being on street-level, you can make out the tops of some of north District 7's tallest buildings a couple kilometers to the northeast, and you're pretty sure that you can make out the shorter Windowless Building almost directly east.
The people, however, are quite a colorful bunch. Students from District 7 tend to have a dim view of District 5, but even they readily admit that it's a great place to go for the nightlife, and they turn out in droves. Friday night only magnifies that effect.
*Stares at GM*Nobody hits on you while you walk by, which is pretty nice of them.
Good description, short and sweet. Enough for the player/reader to make up the rest without it going into scenery porn.It doesn't actually take long to find the "Goodnight Loving" and discover that it is actually a real bar with that name and not an amazingly elaborate ruse of some sort, and you're not sure how to feel about that. Like most things worth caring about, it's in the ground floor of a modest tower. Inside, it's decorated in a strongly rustic style, with brown used anywhere brown can go and leather given distinct preference.
Heh.The guys can't take anymore, and they're both doubled over in laughter. "I think... I think... the author might have a rebuttal she wants to deliver," Shunishi manages.
"Iiiiiis she standing right behind me?"
He nods. "Through a small miracle of timing, yes. I made a gamble and I regret nothing."
Forgot what I had for this section as well... Good Characterization! (Because it is.)She rolls her eyes. "You're not in any trouble. Hell, I pretty much agree with you. I wrote that book under a new pen name because I wanted to try and branch out into a different genre. What ended up happening is that it got rushed because another title fell through, and my published pushed it out early to fill the void. I'm as amazed as you are that people actually liked it; The Unlucky Man is a travesty to the written word and I dread the possibility of being pressured into writing a sequel.
"Still, part of me adores the idea of starting a new successful series of my own, even if the first volume is trash. I've been writing the Fixture in the Firmament series for three years now, but it wasn't my brainchild. No, I was just lucky enough to be tapped for the open spot by the publishing house after I impressed them with my first manuscript."
You slowly nod your head in realization. "Shono Nanami and Horigome Nanami are the same person... it seems so weird, but it does make a frightening amount of sense. I hated The Unlucky Man, but it that's because the plot was bad, not the writing."
Yup, more Good Characterization!Gideon sighs and looks at Shiloh. "Congrats, love, you're the runaway winner. One day, I'll pick 'over' and I won't regret it, but not today. Noooot today."
"I know, right?" Shiloh nods furiously. "She's seriously cute. It's pretty crazy."
You look at Shunichi, wordlessly demanding an explanation, which he delivers. "It's a game they play at my expense, not yours. Whenever they get wind that I'm spending time with a girl, they pester me for details and then bet on whether I'm overselling or underselling her. It's a little tiresome, but they're getting back at me for something a said to Gideon back when they were first dating. If you're wondering, I just said that you were pretty enough to leave an impression. I do have a regard for dignity, unlike soooome people I might name. Gideon. Shiloh."
Like every other scientist in the city, amiright?They banter for a little more before your drinks arrive and Shiloh realizes that she never answered your question from earlier. "Sorry, Ruiko, I should have remembered. I do have a book coming out soon, but I think of writing as a side job more than anything. Gideon and I help manage a research firm, and our major project has just been cleared to advance to the next, pivotal stage. I'd explain more, but we're covered in NDAs up to our eyeballs."
*Winces*Wow, uhh... still want to give her a hug, still worried about getting punched.However, you're a little preoccupied with flashing back to your follow-up appointment where a doctor that you've never met before or since reassured you that the effects of Level Upper were purely transient and would fade without a trace after a couple weeks.
It had been a lot to swallow, that something so profound and so violating would just poof out of existence as though tapped by a magic wand, but Academy City is the city of miracles, right? Surely, you'd seen stranger things before!
It was a lie. Of course it was a lie. Why would they care what happens to a Level Zero, anyway? Maybe if they left it untreated, there would even be something interesting to learn!
And she just had the 2nd most today. She's turning into a moeblob in my head right now... granted one that can punch your lights out, but still. Poor Saten... well, poor everyone really. Kuruko's not having it easy either and who knows what's happening to Misaka.Shunichi frowns. "Well, after a fiasco like this, I imagine they're gonna be forced to deliver proper care to... wait, you were effected by Level Upper?" Unlike most people who ask, he does it without the faint tone of judgment that never fails to sting.
Well, no point in denying it. "I was. When the coma took me, it was the most terrifying moment of my life."
Nice reaction Saten, mirrored mine perfectly. Well, the surprise at least.Shiloh shares a meaningful look with Gideon before turning to address you. "How would you like a job?"
You almost spit out your drink. "I'm sorry?!"
And more of the darkside is drudged up and dumped on our girl.Gideon fields this one. "Yotsuba is absolutely correct: Academy City is suffering from a disease, but it's a far more fundamental one. They need espers to use their abilities regularly to be able to improve them, and they've discovered that the best way to develop your powers -- by a wide margin -- is to use them in combat, or a similar high-stakes atmosphere. Because of this, the Directorate faces a perverse incentive to create just enough unrest in Academy City so that there will never be a shortage of conflict involving espers. In all likelihood, Skill-Out is allowed to exist and thrive so that they'll always present a convenient punching bag.
That... Could flip everything over. With all that implies, both good and bad."We want to make this paradigm obsolete, and to that end we've prototyped a virtual-reality interface that allows you to use your abilities to their fullest extent in a safe environment that can be tailored to your needs, moment-by-moment."
I thought Zeroes were those with no power or one that couldn't be measured? As in how would a level zero increase their power if they don't even have one."That's cool and all," you chuckle, "but it sounds like you should really as a Level Three or Level Four. I'm just a Zero, so I don't think I can be of much help. Besides, I used Level Upper. Shouldn't you test it on someone who isn't at risk of brain damage?"
Shiloh shakes her head rapidly. "You're wrong, wrong, wrong. A Level Zero is perfect, because if this can't prompt growth from Zeroes, it will never gain enough traction to drive any kind of real change in the city."
Oh, now you mention this. Jeez."As for Level Upper," Gideon provides, "Dr. Martinez is mistaken. We actually do have a good handle on the long-term consequences of its usage, and it's nothing so dire as you're fearing. I'll spare you the technical explanation, but the imprint left by Level Upper has much the same effect for a AIM scan as a radiocontrast agent does for a CT scan. Finding a subject with this condition is actually a best-case scenario for us, odd as it may seem."
That... doesn't make sense. You always have a test pool. We're telling someone where we're going even if NDA's get involved. Period."A subject? How many will there be?"
"Only one," Shiloh admits, "aside from early calibration tests that the researchers have done themselves. We wouldn't ask you to entrust your head to anything we hadn't dogfood-tested ourselves, so to speak."
She doesn't know what dogs eat? Wut?Dogfood tested? Huh? You push aside mental images of virtual researchers eating dogfood, mostly because you don't have a clear image of what dogs actually eat. Bones, maybe? "A job, you say?"
Hmm... At least they're nice about it. And understanding.You look away. "It sounds like a lot to commit to."
"It is," Gideon agrees. "We don't need a yes or no from you tonight, but if you're interested," he hands you a card, "stop by our lab tomorrow and we can show you around, so you'll have a clear idea of what it is we're offering you. We get off lunch at 1:30, so that'd probably be the best time."
Heh.Shiloh concurs. "He's mostly harmless. You should see him try to draw a foul; a small child could stop him dead."
Heh. And some guys are idiots, sorry Saten.Shunichi's paying, so you take another drink and an appetizer to go and fill the last few minutes with small talk, before saying your farewells to your two new acquaintances. True to his word, Shunichi goes into full gentleman mode, holding doors and even dusting off a metro seat for you. It would be patronizing if he wasn't obviously putting on a tongue-in-cheek comedy show, so you take it in the spirit it's clearly meant.
Still, you'd be lying if you didn't feel a little rosy when he glares at a handful of guys who are just obviously ogling you. It's great that he cares, but you do wish that men like that would back off when you glared at them, instead of just getting bolder.
*Whistles* Damn. And Saten is cute and amusing.When you arrive at Red Cross station, he does something really spectacular: he calls a taxi. There are fewer than 7000 student drivers in Academy City -- and literally no adult drivers willing and/or permitted to drive taxis. Short supply and high demand left it as the most expensive means of transportation short of buying a car of your own, and well outside of your own means.
A lavishly-appointed Studebaker Chancellor whisks the pair of you away within minutes, and you're positively giddy. "I don't think you know this, but I really love cars." You don't explicitly point out how much of an understatement this is, but he can probably guess from the way you're nearly drooling over the upholstery.
Heh. And damn that's expensive... or you get paid next to nothing. Probably both."If you want, we can go for a joy ride," he offer.
You go saucer-eyed as your miserly brain-circuits fry themselves. The nested Cs that represent Academy City's currency occupy your vision before crumbling into a nuclear fireball, erased from existence. They died so young! "That'd be like wasting a year of my stipend." It's only a slight exaggeration.
Guilty as charged!First note, and I don't know if anything happened IRL for you, but this took way to long to update. I forgot a lot of the stuff we had done since I last read this.
I'll do a piece by piece now and an overall at the bottom, hopefully.
"Rote" means essentially "from memory and without feeling." You'll often encounter it in the phrase "rote repetition," which is just the dreary-eyed regurgitation of something you say all the time.This one I don't know at all, but its part one of a two part description so it still works.
Uiharu. It's a consequence of using personal names instead of surnames, and my own inability to find a good reason for Ruiko to buck the cultural standard here.
Bit of trivia: bicycles are common, but motorbikes and motor scooters aren't sold in the city, despite the occasional petition to permit their import. Between this ban and Academy City's lack of automobiles (for a city that size, anyway), the streets are remarkably quiet and clear.Busy, busy city. And the cyclist thing is casual showing it isn't even uncommon, which is a good touch.
An electronic instrument that's virtually emblematic of 80's music in our own timeline. Things are surely a bit different in this universe, but I can't imagine it one that neglects it entirely.
Watsonian: yes. Doylist: I didn't want to inundate everyone with eight new names at once if I could help it.
Academy City is even bigger about association football, but I went with basketball because it flows much better as a play-to-play narrative. Football really is "the beautiful game," and it's tons of fun to play, but there are only so many ways you can write "Character X runs around a lot,and occasionally kicks the ball." I'm exaggerating a little, but the flow is much slower and more deliberate and it doesn't have the same multidementionalism as basketball.This entire scene, you know what you're writing about. Or at least make it sound like you do, and there really isn't any difference between the two when you're writing like this, and it shows. Well done.
I probably let "PDC" sit too long as an acronym without defining it, but I don't feel terribly remorseful; it's not that vital.So that's what PDC means. Was that on purpose or did it just not come up?
Yeah, call a railroad a railroad, 'cause it pretty much is. I'm playing this a bit tighter in the early game for a couple of reasons. First, this is an AU; I want to give everyone a sense of what's different about Academy City and what's different about Ruiko before I put too much in the hands of the players. Second, I want to get the narrative on a certain path so that I can have a good plot for all of you to work with, rather than playing everything off-the-cuff.Hmm... Not sure about this one. Might have been a good idea to let the players decide whether or not they wanted to go unless the MC's mindset at the time was overwhelmingly in favor of wanting to go.
But like I said, I'm not sure about it rather than calling you out as having goofed up. Latching onto some companionship like this wouldn't be out of the realm of possibility as it is, so... *Shrug* You should get another opinion here. Maybe veekie can give a review as well or something.
Something like this
Level Fives have been portrayed as fundamentally inhuman psychopaths ever since they were coined as a concept in speculative fiction, and they've had a hard time shaking that longstanding cultural stigma in the year that they've actually existed.*Blink* Huh, someone's actually trying to get that out. Or at least make people sub-consciously aware of it.
Veracity means truthfulness.
It sounds like racism, but it's actually a bit more complicated. Remember: even though this Academy City is distinctly multinational, the majority of the students are still ethnically Japanese. This is actually the consequence of a bygone era of Academy City history where the students were almost all members of various cliquish, self-absorbed, and frequently xenophobic National Societies.And the friends a bit of an asshole.*Sigh* And poor Saten dealing with the rascism. I want to give her a hug for some reason, but then I'd probably get punched.
Relax, this isn't a "Saten gets powers in the first update" fix fic. I mean, I'm not opposed to her improving as an esper and I don't view her status as a Level Zero as something essential from a Doylist stance, but I also have a very clear idea of why Ruiko is a Level Zero, and she'll have to move past that before anything can change.Yes, you sound like you are *Stares at GM harder* Improve under the stress of combat, was it?
Makes you wonder if Skill-Out doesn't have a point, mm?Well, that was scary to the readers as well. And gets the point across of how dangerous espers can be.
Gotta make sure we aren't too wise, though. I'm inevitably going to end up writing characters as smarter than they probably should be, but Ruiko is in middle school, not college.
Daigo is their homeroom teacher. He gets some focus for an episode of the first series.Interesting. Also didn't remember this guy at all. Now let's just hope he isn't some sociopath or zero ethics scientist. ... He's a mage isn't he?
Yes, right, we definitely do! Not that I forgot or anything...
To record a TV show, but you ended up catching part of it anyway.
Zeroes still have their own AIM fields, but they aren't capable of manifesting them. Most espers start out as a 0 on the Lazare scale, and only improve through training and perseverance. Touma is an exception in that he isn't actually an esper at all, and his placement on the scale is utterly inaccurate.I thought Zeroes were those with no power or one that couldn't be measured? As in how would a level zero increase their power if they don't even have one.
In a city like this one, extra effort is often necessary to guard your secrets from prying eyes, and prying minds.That... doesn't make sense. You always have a test pool. We're telling someone where we're going even if NDA's get involved. Period.
Ruiko has probably never seen a dog in person. Academy City has very strict restrictions on pets, to the degree where they basically aren't there at all. While she might have seen them on TV, she hasn't actually been exposed to dogfood, nor has she had reason to think of it.
I've been led to believe that I wasn't clear enough about this in the update itself, but Gideon and Shiloh are about a year older than Shunichi. That is to say, 16 or 17. I'll look for a place in the text to make this explicit, but I figure this is as good a place as any to announce it.
Most definitely both.Heh. And damn that's expensive... or you get paid next to nothing. Probably both.
No hurry. You might just have an interlude to look at too when you come back.Edit: I just finished wringing out my brain writing an omake for another quest. Sorry, but I'm pushing this off till tomorrow. I don't trust myself with reviewing right now. Again, sorry.
Uiharu. It's a consequence of using personal names instead of surnames, and my own inability to find a good reason for Ruiko to buck the cultural standard here.
Uiharu is her family name. Her personal name is Kazari.Saten calling her Uiharu is a sign that they're very close friends though.
It's pretty easy to overlook, since everyone who you'd expect to call her "Kazari" calls her "Uiharu" instead. It certainly feels odd to write.And now I'm a derp. Translators flipping name orders! I am betrayed!