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Topic: Tale of a Mean Girl
In: Boards ► Creative Writing
God Empress Rose (Original Poster) (Member) (Awesomest Write-tan)
Posted on Feb 24, 2011:
So, I've recently found out that you could do creative writing here, so I thought I might try my hand at a little something to wet my toes.
Please feel free to provide C&C. I don't mind things like "you suck" as long as you give reasons why or how I could suck less.
Yours,
God Empress Rose
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Once upon a time, there was a mean girl.
You could tell she was mean because she had red hair and liked to use her beauty to make people agree with her. More than that, she liked to bully a harmless girl with words, and things like trapping her in small enclosed spaces.
You could tell this is one of those stories because one day, that harmless girl made new friends. Very special friends who helped her escape from a disgusting place.
You see, that mean girl, with her friends had built a trap for the harmless girl. A cage filled with disgusting things that they pushed the harmless girl into.
It was in there that the harmless girl became something that wasn't harmless.
In fact, that harmless girl became anything BUT harmless as she attained that fabled state that some might call an RPG Final Boss. She had new friends, and she had nigh infinite potential.
That was when she started her revenge.
Oh, she didn't want to kill the mean girl. That was pointless, they were friends once upon a time, long ago. No, she would do something worse to that mean girl.
She broke herself to hone her powers, to achieve her potential.
She smiled and bowed her head as the mean girl continued to speak to her with mean words, and did things to push her down ever further.
She forged wonders beyond human conception.
More, she never forgot her revenge.
She would eclipse that mean girl. She would reduce that mean girl into just another faceless girl in society.
There was a plan, of course, there always was. Become famous, wealthy, and powerful. The details were, as always, vague and would change, but the end goal stayed the same.
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To Be Continued
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Black-Eldjötunn
Replied on May 9, 2011:
This story oddly reminds me of something or rather... God Empress Rose, I must ask this, are you from Brockton Bay?
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Mechanical Messiah
Replied on May 9, 2011:
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Damnit! Black-Eldjötunn, don't necro long dead threads. Look at the post dates before you reply.
Also, asking someone a question like that is very much against the rules.
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XxVoid CowboyxX
Replied on May 9, 2011:
Oh goddammit, a necro! Even if, yes, that story is kind of familiar.
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GstringGirl
Replied on May 9, 2011:
Come on guys, she's a newbie. There's no need to chew her head off.
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Black-Eldjötunn
Replied on May 9, 2011:
Oh come on, the last post wasn't THAT long ago. I didn't see you guys chewing off the head of All Seeing Eyes.
But even, so I'll be careful in the future.
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God Empress Rose
Replied on May 9, 2011:
Black-Eldjötunn, I am from Brockton Bay. It's listed in my profile.
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Xiao-Long [Moderator]
Replied on May 9, 2011:
I'm locking down this thread until God Empress Rose wants it unlocked.
Also, Black-Eldjötunn, given that you only registered yesterday, I will be lenient and not give you an infraction or warning. In the future, please make sure to check the last post date in threads before replying.
The rest of you, there are report buttons. There is no need to reply in a thread that was necro'ed.
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Topic: The Adventures of Emily Barnabes
In: Boards ► Creative Writing
God Empress Rose (Original Poster) (Member) (Awesomest Write-tan)
Posted on May 08, 2011:
Due to some recent events, I was inspired to try out something different... tell me what you think? Completely new continuity. It's not a Rose Knight story.
In any event, I call this story
The Adventures of Emily Barnabes, Part 1, Emily vs the Sky Bandit.
Emily sighed as she closed her hand and the locket it held. Her wavy red hair waved in the wind as she got up from where she had been sitting in front of a pair of graves.
There was a look of resolution in her eyes as she looked out across the barren land that had once been her home. The dreaded bandit Rose had flown over it in her mobile citadel and destroyed it and the nearby town of Port-town, a small town that was one a large river and which served as a trade center.
She had cried. She had refused to accept the truth, but in the end all she could do was accept reality. And that reality was, she needed to stop Rose before it was too late. To prevent more deaths like her wife and daughter.
She got on her horse, shadow feet. It had once belonged to her wife when she was younger and rowdy troublemaker.
No more tears, she vowed.
With that she rode into the plains after the maurders.
Many days and cold nights later, she came upon a city... it was here that dismay fall upon her, she could see how large it was and how well defended it had been. Well... before it had been gutted like a fish.
And she continued on, always hunting down the crimson fortress that terrorized the world.
Eventually, she reached the harbor town of Brock. It was here that she discovered thay the bandit Rose had ventured across the seas and was even now ravaging foreign nations.
It was at Brocktonne that Emily made friends. Good ones who agreed that bandit Rose was a menace that had to be stopped.
One of who was Hotrod, a tinker whose specialty was vehicles. She held a grude for her creation being destroyed by Rose in an attack. It was she who suggested building a new ship to take on the bandit Rose's flying fortress when it returned. And it would return.
With that, hard work and guts happened. Jet turbines were constructed and added to the ship. It was at Old Man Defiant's suggestions, that the ship was streamlined and only had a pair of canons up top, the rest of it was sealed. The munitions were provided courtesy of the shady foreign chemist Fire Blossom.
It was Professor Top who suggested an alternative form for the ship, noting how dangerous it would be to assault the Sky Bandit's flying fortress from below where her Under Bandits laired and rappelled down from to loot the cities and towns attacked.
And yet, even as they worked away on the ship that would bring peace to the world, they kept an eye and ear out on the wireless, and the news that was announced there. Of the unyielding rampage of the bandit Rose. And more importantly, of the route she was taking.
It was relief that filled the hearts of those who had slaved away when the SS Dragon was ready to set sail for the bandit Rose was but a few hours away from the harbor town of Brock.
With a clear sky, and a strong wing blowing inland, the SS Dragon took to the seas with Captain Super and Old Man Defiant manning the ship from inside while Emily and Hotrod enjoyed the sunshine and wind on top.
With a band of clouds and fog surrounding it, the crimson flying fortress was easy to spot. With its curved ring hull and towers rising from the rear.
With a roar of thunder, the SS Dragon fired upon the flying citadel. To little effect as not even the brilliant explosives of the shady chemist was enough to do more than dent the hull.
That was when the flying fortress returned fire!
With the sea exploding around them, it was all that Emily and Hotrod could do to avoid being thrown off the sides of the ship.
With a desperate curse, Captain Super and Old Man Defiant looked at each other with manly determination before pushing forward the shift clutch all the way.
Wings unfurled from the side as the SS Dragon was pushed down by the slashes of the waves before ascending into the heavens above as the jet engines pushed it forwards and up.
And straight into a wall of shots from the citadel.
Eventually, even with the horrible shooting, chance dictated that even the SS Dragon would be hit. And so it was.
With fire exploding everywhere, SS Dragon plunged down towards the sea.
"Go! We'll live, but you're the world's only hope, Ems," Hotrod's smile was bittersweet as she clutched her side where a growing redness on her blouse indicated that she might not survive this.
With a grimace, Emily leapt from the SS Dragon, her powers transforming her body from flesh to stone even as she landed. With a little bit more concentration, she pulled a stone broadsword out of chest and watched as it ignited in flames.
"Oooh! Someone dares to challenge me, this is rare," The words that rang out. The wavy brown hair that flapped in the wind. That tall skinny frame in a white blouse and dark trousers.
Emily could see the face of her friend from long ago in the Sky Bandit, but all grown up and twisted. "Rose... Taylor?!? It can't be."
"I haven't heard that name in a long time, Emily. Yes... Emily. Little Emily. Hows the little girlfriend of yours?" The confident smirk on the bandit's face was filled with mockery. This wasn't her friend of long ago, not any more. Whatever had twisted her had made her into something... different and wrong.
"Sophita is my wife, and you killed her!" With that, Emily charged the bandit who snapped her finger to the side as she stood up.
A mousy and shy woman who seemed familiar to Emily inched up on her knees submissively to present a stone daikatana to the bandit. "Hahahaha... so hot blooded, Emily. You'll do fine as one of my Under Bandits like Naddie here."
With that, Rose leaped forward... and stone blades met and sparks jumped.
To be cont.
What do you think? Cool, huh?
- God Empress Rose
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Black-Eldjötunn
Replied on May 9, 2011:
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Emily Barnabes married to Sophita.
Yeah, I can see it.
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Shadow Stalker (Verified Cape)
Replied on May 9, 2011:
I still say that writing stories with real places obviously substituted in and possibly real people shouldn't be kosher.
- Shadow Stalker
Who knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men
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All Seeing Eyes
Replied on May 9, 2011:
I hate you, GER. I hate you so much. I swear I will develop psychic powers to hurt you for your quality of writing.
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Topic: What is Weaver Clothier?
In: Boards ► Places ► America ► Brockton Bay
Vista (Orignal Poster) (Verified Cape)
Posted on April 29, 2011:
Anyone know who or what Weaver Clothiers is?
I received a hand written letter addressed to me with a tagline of "Costumes for capes by capes. Discretion assured", with a website link and e-mail on it.
Looks kind of suspicious.
It kind of showed up at my room in the PRT building, last night. None of the security systems were tripped, and the cameras didn't catch anyone breaking or entering. I've confirmed with the other Wards that they've also received identical letters.
I know that Brandish got a business card from that Rose Knight for Weaver Clothier. But this is still kind of well... disconcerting.
The PRT building is, unfortunately, in lock down mode as Armsmaster and the security team here are working on determining how the letters got in. Master Stranger Protocols and all that.
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Weaver (Verified Cape)
Replied on May 6, 2011:
Thank you for the orders. The costumes and garments will be worked on posthaste. Please be sure to tell your friends and peers about Weaver Clothier.
- Weaver
Costumes for capes, by capes
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Vista (Orignal Poster) (Verified Cape)
Replied on May 6, 2011:
Well... after some thinking and talking with the others, I've decided to forgive Weaver for causing the Master Stranger Protocols with the way she delivered the letters. Also, I've placed an order for a spare costume. And if it passes Armsmaster's inspection, I think that the Wards uniforms might get upgraded.
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Shadow Stalker (Verified Cape)
Replied on May 6, 2011:
One of my non-cape friends has also placed an order for a dress. We'll see how it goes.
- Shadow Stalker
Who knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men
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Vista (Orignal Poster) (Verified Cape)
Replied on May 8, 2011:
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Well, I got my costume along with some extra samples for Armsmaster to test. But so far, it's as advertised. The costume is definitely bullet and knife proof at a minimum. Armsmaster is going for destructive testing of the samples, we'll see how durable they are.
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Weaver (Verified Cape)
Replied on May 9, 2011:
Thank you and you're welcome. I hope you'll spread word about Weaver Clothier. If the online venture is successful enough, we will look into an actual store.
- Weaver
Costumes for capes, by capes
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♦ Private Messages from Black-Eldjötunn:
Black-Eldjötunn: Taylor? Is that you? It's Marianna.
God_Empress_Rose: ... I'll talk to you later?
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♦ Private Messages from Miss-Fortune (Verified Cape):
Miss-Fortune: Taylor, you really should stop teasing your girlfriend.
God_Empress_Rose: Yes, mom.
Miss-Fortune: Also, good luck with your first online orders.
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♦ Private Messages from Nemo:
Nemo: Well played, just try not to get killed by "Sarah", Goblin Queen. Wouldn't want you to end up like Jareth.
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Goblin Queen | Extinction Trumps Necromancy
Worm / Exalted
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It has been two days since that fight, and to my surprise, Emma seemed to have given up her antagonism towards me. Perhaps, the fact that she had fought me without holding back had been something she had needed. There was no sense of her plotting anything towards me.
That or she was busy with other things.
A distinct possibility since she was a cape and she might have been researching the not quite spoken of society that we lived in. In a way, cape society was very much like that of the martial arts societies in those movies that Brian loved. He liked to claim that it was the one good thing that came from an Endbringer attack; the diaspora of japanese and chinese citizens in the wake of Kyushuu had introduced a wave of new entertainment in America. That Hollywood was no longer bound to the big budget movies with little plot. Not with the competition from the asian movie makers who had moved in.
I had the vague suspicion that Brian might just have been an otaku who was good at hiding his nature by being an attractive all american black beef-cake who liked to sound just a tad pretentious when talking about his tastes.
If the glasses he wore when watching his movies on movie night at the Undersiders lair was any indicator, he might even be the dreaded hipster. I'm sure he wouldn't need them to read the subtitles for his movies.
Still, it left me feeling odd.
Things had changed for me, I found myself missing the attention that Emma, Sophia and Madison had focused on me after a fashion. It wasn't pleasant by any means, but in a way they had been something that I had gotten used to.
The insults that parodied social interactions after a fashion. The way that Emma, Sophia and Madison would crowd around me with their sycophants.
True, I had stopped the bullying, but I think it spoke volumes of how I had... gotten used to the bullying. The things that they had done. It was as if I was the frog in the pot of slow boiling water that had been taken out of it.
I had friends now. I had Lisa, Madison, Alec, Brian, Bitch, on top of [____]. More than that, Marianna seemed to be trying to rekindle the friendship we had before winter break.
And yet, I still found myself missing the bullying.
I needed help.