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In a world not completely unlike our own, the great nations are at war. In a span of months, the prewar armies and their assumptions have died.

You are Sylvia Vance. You are a riflewoman in the Albian Army, and you have to find some new assumptions.
1: Intro
You are Captainess Sylvia Vance, reigning Albian army riflery champion, and you have an appointment with the male C-in-C of the Albian Expeditionary Force. At the start of the year you wouldn't have anticipated that, but nothing this year was expected. It's been three months since the armies started moving and you mobilized, two months since you saw battle and your rifle regiment was reformed as a training company. In these past two months, you've been training fresh, young women to fill venerable, experienced regiments.

You pause at the door to adjust your uniform jacket, pulling against the stays and minimizing the padding. Propriety satisfied, you continue through the door and salute. General Gallen is seated behind his desk. In the middle, surrounded by piles of papers is a simple envelope.

"Captainess," he begins, "Conditions on the front have changed. We can't waste your skills training militia."

You're shocked. You know the accepted standards for being able to break up a charging formation with rifle fire, you know that only the top ten percent of your trainees can meet that standard, and you've seen a charge pressed home through your regiment's fire despite meeting that standard to a woman.

He continues speaking, "We're losing officers by the score and we won't have enough for the new army at this rate. The d----d Dyske have got a ton of crack shots picking off everyone with brass on their cap. The only thing that's worked against them so far is creeping into nobody's land and shooting them first, and we're running out of women who can make shots like that."

"There're only thirty of you Bolingbroke ladies left in fighting shape, and the replacements who can do it are few and far between. The same goes for rifles. I hear what you need are precision instruments, and the mobilization rifle falls under my purview and is anything but. Talk to all the companies that can make a proper rifle and do what it takes to get them working full speed, that's a job for a woman so I'm not going to muddle it up by pretending I understand what's needed. I've got written orders from General Heinz"—the female C-in-C of the AEF—"for you to that effect, and then I understand that you'll be heading up a new division's precision riflery company. Congratulations, Major."

"Thanks," you nod numbly, taking the envelope the general passes you. If your meeting with Gallen was unexpected, everything he'd just told you was simply unprecedented: Dyske is deploying assassins en masse like in the Mzansi border fighting? We're raising a new army but the already appalling and unworkable state of riflery isn't a priority? You'd assumed Heinz was running things at the front to make something useful of the replacements' riflery, but if that's not the priority, what is?
"Any questions?"
"Why me, sir?"
"Because you're the best. And because you're the only Bolingbroke lady left in Albia."

The competition at Bolingbroke had 120 women each year. Of all the faces you remember, who else is left? Is there anyone left who remembers the faces you don't? (+1 stress)

You're going to be in charge of figuring out how to prepare people for this war, this thing you hardly recognize. But how?
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You sit down in the waiting room, unable to wait any longer to read the orders. General Heinz's writing is distinctive, using as many words as needed for precision and no more. Your mission has three main parts. You need to coördinate with the quality gunsmiths who can make a gun up to the task of hitting an enemy in deep concealment up to 300 meters away, and give a good chance of successfully engaging enemies of opportunity out to as far as 700 meters. You need to set up a donation drive to get civilians and rifle clubs to donate any suitable small arms. Lastly, you are to select instructors and set up the school that will prepare soldiers to infiltrate, spot, and eliminate enemy sharpshooters. Once the school has been established and trained a company of specialists, you will command them on the front.

From the top then. You need to contract with rifle makers for what the army needs, but making decisions like that without a second opinion isn't done. You ought to find someone as a sounding board, and luckily you thought of just the person!

Who do you visit?
[ ] Susan Bradley, the favorite gunsmith of the Bolingbroke crowd. If you want a service rifle to be absolutely right, you talk to her because she knows all the details.
[ ] Janice Howe, a column writer in a civilian women's shooting magazine. She's the best source if you want to stay informed on all the fascinating modern tools and techniques to make a technological marvel of a rifle.
[ ] Lily Parker, a decorated veteran returning wounded. If you need somebody who's actually shot one of these enemy assassins, she's done it five times, and even led a team to take one of their rifles. If anyone knows the job's requirements, it's her.
 
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Albian Gun Culture
Hopper, G. (1908, September). Europan riflewomen: Albia. Alleghenian Riflewoman, 37, 27-28,42-45.

Of all the countries in Europa, Albia holds riflewomen in special regard. As in many things, they draw the sharp attention to the ways in which both sexes distinguish themselves in shooting.

Albian prize hunters, unburdened by the need to carry their trophies back themselves, take great pride in felling their targets with a precise first shot, even those most impressive beasts of the Big Five. Where male hunters frequently carry double shot rifles in massive Cordite Acela rounds around half an inch in caliber, Albian ladies have proven the .375 Brabant & Brabant capable of taking any game with a steady hand and practiced eye.

A riflewoman looking for the best large game rifle available would be well served to look to Albian companies, for no other nation has distinguished itself in making a precise and reliable rifle suited for the strengths of a female shooter. If I were told that a hunter with a rifle from Brabant and Brabant, Roberts and Daughters, ER Chappell, or other fine Albian gunsmiths came back feet first from a hunt, I'd confidently state it was because of her error.

One thing which I would not recommend Albian manufacture for is optical sighting. Since Albian sport hunting tends towards large targets, large cartridges and long sight lines with life-or-death consequences, they prize iron sights. This is considerably different from the Dyske love of short scopes for peering into the bushes of their deep forests or our own fondness for long telescopes for certainty about our mid-sized game.

The Albian military is similarly stratified. They place great import on the distinctions they draw, with Rifle and Light infantry formations comprised of women who train heavily in being able to saturate a small area with fire at long range. The culmination of their practice is the yearly competition at Bolingbroke, where the top 120 shots in the Army compete for recognition as the best shot in the Army. This competition is a perfect summary of Albian priorities. The main events run the gamut from prone rapid fire at a small silhouette at 300 yards all the way to cadenced fire on a 8 foot tall by 16 foot wide bullseye at 1200 yards. Events feature distinctive low time limits or even the peculiarly Albian unlimited scoring within a minute.

Lastly, a note. As in many other things with regards to Albia, we are two nations divided by a common language. Riflery is exclusively the domain of women, male shooting is exclusively called musketry. It's accepted that we won't get every detail right, but know that the divide is firm and many terms only apply on one side or the other. For a mixed or uncertain group, such as shooters heard but not seen, it is common to default to the speaker's gender.
 
2: Shopping with Lily Parker
The Artemis Gazette mentioned a Lieutenette Lily Parker, who near Pisseloup on 9th September reconnoitered at close range, shooting an enemy sharpshooter and recovering their rifle. Before she was severely wounded on 14th September, she had neutralized four more. With some checking, you're able to find that she's being treated at Endell Street Military Hospital.

Walking in, Lily is lying in bed in a convalescence gown. She notices you, and the empty sleeve on her right twitches. She misses a beat, frowns and asks you "Ma'am, I can't remember if it's rude to salute with the left hand or not, and I think I ought to know."

"It's not rude if the right's busy holding something, and if holding ground in Gallia doesn't count, what does? If some martinet decides to make something of it, I want to see their face." You respond, and keep talking so she doesn't start to dwell on things. That wouldn't do. "Incidentally, I've got some army business to take care of in Albia, and I could use your help. Care to liven up your convalescence? I've got a fantastic shopping trip lined up to Roberts and Daughters, Brabant & Brabant and anyone else who makes the sort of heirloom rifle you need a Major's retirement to buy and a General's one to properly enjoy."

Lily stops for a second to think. "Well, I can't necessarily tell you everything you need, I wasn't my regiment's sharpest shot, but I can tell you what it's like to hunt for a good hunter. And to be extra careful when you don't have the sun at your back."

"Well, first off don't sell yourself short. They asked me because I'm the best at lying around on a nice flat field in a rifle uniform and putting holes in little silhouettes a long way away. I'm here because, well, how much of that is actually what you did? I don't know. The last battle I fought we were shooting at a brigade in clumps, not… hunting a single person." You repress a shudder at the thought.

"Which battle?"

"Chateau Descoteaux"

Her eyes widen momentarily. "The Queen's Rifles? I didn't see a day near as bad as that must've been. By the time we got to the line, we were just digging trenches and trading shots. The worst day we had, eighteen women got shot by their hunters and we lost another six. They were worried we wouldn't make it three months before needing replacements. You gals were spent in a day, weren't you?"

"We got pummeled by the artillery they brought up in support, yeah." Most of your friends are dead (+1 stress). "By the time I called for rapid fire we were down to maybe two companies hanging on in whatever cover we could find. They got through to the Fusiliers but not enough of them to get through. I'm half surprised you can dig deep enough to survive shellfire, honestly. Your commendation said you had to go up to enemy positions, how do you even manage that?"

"Well, some of them sneak up into nobody's land, hide in craters, bushes, trees, buildings, whatever's left over, and shoot at us from angles we don't expect. If you can figure out where they're shooting from that's the hard part over and done with. Some people act like it's hard shooting at a person, but I just get close enough that they're a big target. The Herman whose rifle I nabbed had crept up into a farm's rock pile almost on top of our lines and was shooting straight down a dogleg. Awfully bold of him, honestly. The other thing they do is set up a bunch of steel plates in their lines, with a tiny little hole for them to shoot out of. If we figure out one's in use, we shoot at it and they stop for a while. Who knows what's going on on the other side. I bet you can make the shot, I never knew if I just missed the steel entirely." She pauses and concludes, "Sorry ma'am, I was rambling there. You were talking about getting guns made, so I'm guessing you want to hear about the Dyske rifle?"

"Right. Yes." That was overwhelming. You're going to need to get into that but it'll have to wait. "What's the action like? Their guns are scoped, right? Are there any real downsides?"

"Honestly, ma'am? They're good. Solid pieces. The scopes are up top, right over the bore."

"Wait, blocking the charging bridge? You can only load it with single shots?"

"If you find a target dumb enough to keep their head up for five shots, they're probably already dead, so who cares? Plus those little holes they use aren't wide enough to fit a gun and a side mount scope. As far as the rest," she gestures off to her left… no, she shrugs, "it shot where I pointed it. No complaints in that regard."

"Thank you Miss Parker. Do you think the doctors could be convinced to let me take you out and about tomorrow?"

"I'd like that very much, ma'am. Give me something to do other than wonder how I'm going to cut a steak."

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You lie in bed.

Yearly exercises had prepared you for a lot. You knew how to shoot, how to direct a unit's fire, and the vital skill of calling the range to keep the women focused on their target. What they hadn't, couldn't prepare you for was losing friends.

You shift.

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You toss.

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You turn.

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You roll.

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You clutch the covers tight.

...

You do not notice it when sleep comes.

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Lily and you walk into Brabant & Brabant's storefront. An impeccably attired clerk walks up to you. She looks at you, smiles, checks your rank insignia, and addresses you. "Ms. Vance, it's a pleasure. Your reputation precedes you, congratulations on the promotion. And who is the… Lieutenette?" She falters for half a second as she looks at Lily's shoulder and you hope Lily doesn't notice.

"Lily Parker. Just got back from the front, Ms.?" She definitely noticed.

"Ms. Perrins. A pleasure to meet you." She extends her left arm to shake, with a movement as stiff as her immaculately starched blouse collar. "Would you mind overmuch if I ask a few questions about what it's like out there? A lot of our clients are buying rifles for military use and we've got to do right by them."

Lily's frown softens. "Well, imagine that your rifle is as good at getting dirty as your retriever. If they're lucky your buyer will sit in a muddy trench, trading shots through loopholes. If they aren't, they'll go crawling around through the dirt as the shells tear it up and sprinkle it on their head. So all the lovely engraving, the trigger that a gnat can pull, all that's going to get dirt in it, and if a mite of dust can jam it, it won't work. It's really hard crawling around with your arm covering the action of a rifle, so if you're building rifles for women who can't muscle the bolt shut like the men, if you can protect the action when they aren't working it, it'd be a lifesaver. Other than that, make it accurate. Anyone who makes themselves an easy target is already shot, most opportunities are people peeking over the parapet or shooters that give their loophole away."

"And how large are these loopholes?"

"Just wide enough to shoot a rifle through, and just tall enough to look through it with a scope on top."

"And what other, ahem, targets do you frequently shoot at?"

"If someone's peeking over cover you see the top of their head."

Howell blanches, her rouge the only color left on her face, and changes the topic. "Right then, you said these loopholes are just big enough for a rifle and scope, how far away are you shooting at them from?"

"Well I just got close enough I couldn't miss. That meant that when I made a mistake, they didn't miss. The more range the better. If you need something to shoot for, I don't think I've heard of anyone spotting a target that small outside 300 yards. Anything farther out has to be bigger to see."

"Right. So I just need to tell the smiths to make something with the precision of a varmint piece, a scope that can stand up to a military cartridge, and make it work after you drag it through somewhere a lady would only subject herself to for queen and country. Are there any other opportunities you'd like to give us to demonstrate our craftsmanship?"

"No, we just need as many as possible as fast as possible."

"Beg pardon, you want what?" She blinks. "Oh. This is on behalf of the army isn't it. Evelyn!" She calls back into the shop, and a younger woman pokes her head out of the door. "Get Lea and a kettle to the main meeting room."

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Ten minutes later, you're discussing General Heinz's orders for rifles over tea and sandwiches. Ms. Wheeler, the Lea that Ms. Perrins had called for, is a lead gunsmith. In the direct manner you've come to expect from craftswomen she sums up your dilemma. "You require precision past a certain point, and as many rifles as practicable. How you define that point will make a huge difference in how many rifles we can produce to that standard. There's a lot of Woman's Edmontons made, and a lot more being made. If we can get the top percent or so, the ones that shoot well enough that we know their barrels, bore and lockwork are good, we can improve the fit and finish, make a mount for optics, and have something that's as good as the shooter can be with an Edmonton."

"How so?" You ask.

"The barrel's thin and it flexes under tension, the rear lugs mean if the receiver flexes it's also going to shift things, and so on down the line. It's like trying to write while holding a quill from the tail end. You can make a rifle stiff enough that sling tension can be worth it, for instance, but that isn't an Edmonton."

"Right, so this would be adequate at best, but you'd basically be getting the rifles without using any of your labour, so you could make many of them? General Gallen's working on mass manufacturing rifles, what would happen to this idea if he standardized on a RMME length?"

"Well, it'd probably be a touch more accurate, the men's pattern is the length the cartridge was designed around. There's got to be a downside though." She purses her lips in thought for a second. "It'd be less wieldy of course, and the flexing might be a worse problem for precision, but hardly disqualifying."

Lily interjects, "Hopefully it won't come to that, extra length is a pain to carry around. Only thing I didn't like about that Dyske rifle. It got hung up on things."

You shift things back towards the main question. "So there's modifying a production rifle, what other options were you thinking of?"

This time it's Ms. Perrins who breaks the silence. "Well, if production's expanding, we could find a new contractor who can provide actions of sufficient quality and a better suited design. The downsides of that course are that it would take longer, we'd have to spend a lot of time and effort supervising them up to an adequate standard, so it would take longer to get production underway, and any rifles that don't make the cut for this contract don't have a place in the military as a whole. As a whole the resulting rifles will be more expensive and accordingly less numerous. I'd expect we can make an excellent rifle for every scope given to us from what you said, but I'd strongly doubt that we can make a rifle for any other optical sights."

You look at Lily for her opinion. "I'd never pick one of those Galilean rigs over a real scope, but we didn't even have enough of those. Now if you made me choose between a more accurate gun or an optical sight, that's real hard. It's easier to see your target through glass than irons, but a lot of the things you can't see without magnification are very difficult shots, even with a dead on rifle."

"Other than that I don't think we can offer anything else. If there's something that you can think of to arrange, we'd be happy to do what we can."

Which do you decide on?
[ ] Work on the best Edmonton rifles (Rifles that are harder to use accurately, available early and in large numbers)
[ ] Contract for purpose built Katzen rifles to be finished (Good rifles for accurate shooting, they will take a while to arrive and there will likely never be enough)
[ ] Well, I was thinking about something I heard about and if I scramble we can make it happen... (+1-??? stress, write-in)
 
3: A Dinner Invitation
You get an idea. It's a good idea, too. If the Edmonton in particular isn't a great basis for a conversion, what about other nations' service rifles? The Gallians are sure to be building a huge number of guns, Allegheny builds a lot of rifles and isn't building up for war, and you swear you remember something about an Akitsukuni rifle that was interesting and almost gave Helen Parr a run for her money. You could fire a message off to HQ asking for clearance for overseas purchases, and then negotiate with foreign companies, and now that you think about it, that'd be a long delay even before you get into how long shipments would take to arrive by ship. Worse, that'd mean entirely separate ammunition, coming from overseas, and needing to be spread out across the front. You look to Lily, and decide that rifles need to be arriving sooner rather than later. Exceptional women crawling through mud capturing rifles is no basis for a marksmanship programme. You decide the army cannot wait for you to arrange all the details, let alone for a foreign company to manufacture and ship guns halfway across the world to unfamiliar gunsmiths.

Your next thought is a scheme to have some manufacturers work on a better Katzen style action rifle while some mount scopes to Edmontons. You think that it might be workable, but it will be a long time until the Katzens start showing up, and before that point you'll have nothing to show for it. "It can't wait, can it?" you ask Lily.

"The rifles? The more the better in my book. If the gunsmiths run out of scopes to mount, get them going on open lenses so we can catch up sooner. We're in a dreadful state now and the sooner we're fighting back the better."

"Right." That settles that. "I'll secure the top percentile of Edmontons off the line for scoping, tell me how many you can handle."

You shake hands. You know how Albian industry will be mobilized to meet this challenge. The afternoon is spent making arrangements, but all the hard decisions have been made, and you're able to write that a solution has been found for this problem with Lily's assistance and that you're now able to move on to trying to start a recruitment drive.

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The evening post interrupted you as you were attempting to tell from the newspapers what the h-ll was going on in Gallia. You'd been lost in the desperate impossibility of your work training riflewomen up to standards for so long that you hadn't noticed the months slipping by. There was a common feeling that the war would be done by Christmas and the nasty unspoken certainty that Albia's army didn't have the replacements to last even that long if the continental armies stayed in the field.

And yet. Lily had said that when her arm was shattered, her friends had been there to see her off and she was sorry to leave them there. That was foreign to you. You'd been sorry to leave your friends behind after the battle at Descoteaux, having seen them off.

Wary of any other things that now meant something different from your first guess, you open the letter. It is an invitation to speak after dinner at the Sevenoaks Rifle Club, a very prestigious riflery club. Apparently, from the accompanying letter, the leading ladies of Isledon are resolved to do what they can to contribute to the nation's war effort, and you're invited there to talk about the future of riflery and discuss things from the perspective of the infantry. You are more than welcome to bring other distinguished officers whose perspective would be relevant, of course, that goes without saying.

That's convenient. It means you can bring Lily and ask her any questions you want since they're rhetorical questions for the benefit of the dinner party. Well, any questions about combat. You start to mentally run down the list of questions you'd ask her if it weren't for embarrassment and there's rather a lot. It'll be nice having more of a feel for what she did beyond earning Albia's highest honor and getting her name in the papers. You dash off an invitation to her to accompany you. The remainder of the evening is spent with the newspapers trying to picture her in the battles you read about.

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You lie in bed.

Yearly exercises had prepared you for a lot. You knew how to shoot, how to direct a unit's fire, and the vital skill of calling the range to keep the women focused on their target. What they hadn't, couldn't prepare you for was losing friends.

You shift.

You still had to consciously remind yourself that your 2i/c, Ellen Howell, was dead and gone. You'd see something, and you'd want to share it with her just to get her reaction or advice. She was a great listener.

You toss.

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You turn.

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You roll.

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You clutch the covers tight.

...

You do not notice it when sleep comes.
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You'd forgotten what a hassle it was getting your full dress uniform to sit just right. You missed looking smart for the night, but you sure didn't miss working with your batwoman to get the girdle cinched down and then battling it to get everything else on before finally checking whether you'd gotten your body to match the jacket's shape. The result, though, made it all worth it. It'd been too long since you'd been able to remind yourself you could look like that. So long in fact that it felt almost like someone else.

After powdering your face to a natural, neutral complexion, you thrill at the sight of the woman grinning at you. It's been way too long, and even better you could spend the whole night talking with ladies of refinement, rather than having to endure a mixer with the men of another regiment. It was rare to get a chance to really talk to people with a properly different perspective on riflery, and the men were just hopeless. The best you'd ever gotten from one of them was flattery about how impressive you and your technique were, and groups were worse, they'd just try to show off to each other with how much ignorance they could affect. This night would be different. Among the finest and best traveled riflewomen in the world and all their experiences, you'd have to work to keep up with your knowledge of the Edmonton.

When you get to Lily's quarters, you aren't quite sure what to expect but you certainly don't expect sniffling. Taking care to click your heels against the floor, you rap on the door and announce yourself. After a bit of hesitation, you hear a response, "Come in". You hadn't seen Lily in such a state before. Her full dress uniform is laid out on her bed along with a decent amount of undergarments. The red blotchiness from her crying is fighting with an embarrassed blush, and the left strap of her bust supporter hangs at her elbow, unreachable by her good arm. You wonder how much of this difficulty she's been hiding under her comparatively shapeless field overcoat.

"I'm going to need a lot of help," she sniffles.

"That's fine," you mumble, gingerly lifting the strap up onto her shoulder. "Do you not have a batwoman? Why isn't one assigned?"

"It's part of the job. I'm basically out once I convalesce, remember? Not much need to have someone keep you fed in meetings and dress you for formal engagements while you heal."

"Right, yes. I'll have to see if there's anything I can do about that." You cast your eyes over the clothes on the bed, and find a light girdle. You lace it snugly to the curve of her waist, and wish it were as easy for you.

"Sure, let me know if you find a job for a Lieutenette who can't climb a ladder to go over the top," she scoffs. She's struggling to attach her stockings to their suspenders, and you go to help, but she insists she can manage it. It's an awkward maneuver. With the fingers of just one hand, she has to pin the attachment against the firm muscle of her thigh through a bit of soft flesh, hold the stocking in place on it, and then with her other fingers pull the clasp onto the point and with a strength belied by their fineness push the attachment stud firmly into the clasp through the stocking's resistance. Keeping track of the whole operation is just about past you, and more than once the awkwardness makes you want to help hold everything firmly in place against her leg. She manages, though.

"What's next?" you ask, looking at the rest of the uniform scattered on her bed.

"Whatever you choose, I'm reliant on you." She sighs and you run your gaze over her. Stockings cling to the contours of her legs, with only an imperceptible gather that could be smoothed over by quickly running your hands over it, and the suspenders run over surprisingly light pantalettes.

"Do you even need petticoats to structure your skirt?"

"Right, clothes, umm, there should be one under the skirt. The blouse and jacket should be out. I'll grab the hat on the way out the door."

As she takes a deep breath you realize something's weighing on her, something that she's not saying. You just have no idea how to handle it.

After a moment's consideration, you decide to...
[ ] Ask flatly what's bothering her (+2 stress, may cause offense)
[ ] Offer general reassurance
[ ] Try flattery to allay or draw out what's bothered her (+1 stress, lowest risk)
[ ] Confide your feelings of irrelevance (+2 stress, may reduce esteem)
 
4: Scoping Out the Field
Ask flatly what's bothering her (+2 stress, may cause offense) (4 total stress)

You help Lily into her petticoat and her skirt, then take care to smooth them out so they sit right on the curve of her hips. She tries to help, but having a third hand involved is more clumsy than anything, with her alternating between accidentally knocking your hand out of the way and grabbing your hand and using it as a crude smoothing implement. You steal a glance to try and read her expression, and see she's got her eyes closed and is drawing a breath through a clenched jaw.

You rack your brain, trying to understand why Lily is so distraught. She's still definitely trying to keep a handle on herself even though she'll be ready in plenty of time, so just getting her ready doesn't seem to be helping.

You can't bear to see a military woman in such a state, and you give in and ask. "What's bothering you, Lily?"

"I'm fine, ma'am," she responds automatically.

"That's not what I asked. But now that I don't believe you're fine, how exactly are you doing?"

"Surviving, if you can call it that." She bites her lip, almost delicately at first but she uses that grasp to bite down hard.

"Just surviving? Nothing else?"

"What else is there for me to do? I'm not a woman of leisure, I've got to do something, but who'll have me? It's not quite last century, but a job's a big thing to hold on to with one hand, and I've no real skills. And it's not like a trashy romance novel ending is going to come out of this, all the guys left after the war are going to have their pick and the heroines of those things are usually a lot more… intact." She trails off, almost a sigh.

You grab her jacket, check that the stays aren't unlaced, and go to check the padding is sitting right before realizing there's hardly any. Of course there isn't. She doesn't need to smooth out bones and add curves to a boxy, bony, boyish body. You offer her the jacket, and she slides her arm into its sleeve, then uses her hand to draw the collar up and around her neck. Without an arm in the way, this move draws the jacket around her body. By the time you've grabbed her Victoria Cross from its case, she's pulled and buttoned it over her chest. You pin the medal on, and it looks right at home.

"Lily. Those books are written to appeal to as many teenage girls as possible. The only things most of them have going for them is a lack of major injury and the blessed innocence to think that they could come up with lines as good as the author gives the heroine. A book about you would be a farce about keeping your suitors at bay."

"Really? I sure don't see it."

"A mirror might help." Before she can respond you continue, "Look at what's there, not what's gone. You know how men are, they'd give an arm and a leg for the woman inside that jacket of yours, and you're gracious enough to have covered half of it already"

She chuckles, a strained one but a chuckle nonetheless. "Fine, I'll pretend I believe you for now. I'll at least be the hero of the hour tonight."

It's not ideal but you'll take it.



Halstead Rifle Club is located in the nearest proper countryside to Isledon, but despite the short ride you've been given a first class ticket. The plush upholstery on the seat is downright luxuriant. When the train leaves the station, you're totally insulated from the clatter of the tracks. It's a huge contrast from your last ride on a train, in a pile of stale hay in a boxcar for eight horses or forty troops going back north for another load of soldiers to ship across the channel. Thankfully, before you can start to muse on the irony of comfort itself being uncomfortable, your stop arrives. You step out onto the platform, and realize it is only long enough to serve the first class car. Before you can ask for it, your rifle bag is already in the hands of a porter, who's beckoning you to an automobile waiting just across the tracks of the spur line. That's one way to avoid the awkwardness of asking a soldier for her bag, you guess.



As the autocar circles around the club house, you start to hear the cadenced crack of riflery. It doesn't have the thunderous chorus of a company settling into a rhythm of volleys, but the strings are steady. Compared to the fumbling fits and spurts of recent recruits, it's a rare burst of nostalgia. The range itself is sweeping, manicured and verdant. Where your range's berms were distinguished by fresh dirt, here they are covered in grass and framed with seasonal flowers. You idly wonder if they even have trenches for attendants to move targets and to allow inspecting targets on a live range, because they are so cunningly concealed.

The firing line itself is a delightfully quaint gazebo writ large, with a few clumps of ladies clustering around shooters. The man carrying your bags announces you, and a number of the ladies turn to you. One of them lights up and walks briskly towards you, skirts swaying gracefully as she passes through the bustling crowd with practiced ease, and she announces herself to you, "Sylvia Vance? Oh, I'm so glad you could make it! Janice Howe, a pleasure to meet you."

"Delighted. The name sounds familiar, you've more than a few articles in shooting journals to your name, don't you?"

"I do!" She positively beams. "It's delightful, I just started writing them because I had some interesting curiosities I wanted to share, but," she says with a grin, "would you believe that manufacturers just send columnists their wares to take a look at? I hear about so many delightful contrivances these days, it's practically a full time job! It's a pity more people can't be independently wealthy so they can get their hobbies funded."

"No wonder you're so well versed with everything there is to buy, if they're just sending it to you. I wish I could say I'd had time to keep up to date with even a fraction of what you've covered."

The wrinkles around her mouth turn into deep trenches as she smiles broadly, "Outstanding! I was hoping whoever the military sent would be interested, I can't wait to see what you think of some of these things. Follow me!" As she says that she passes through the crowd yet again, somehow fitting her billowing skirts through gaps you're hard pressed to jam through despite your sensible soldier's uniform. When you reach her at one of the shooting stalls, you realize that it and the next two over are absolutely full of guns and contrivances, each one different from the last. When you look back at her, Janice's grin has a satisfied quality to it. A few heavy footsteps behind you indicate Lily has finally gotten through the crowd, and Janice grows pensive.

"I didn't think to bring all of them, but I've got some of the likelier seeming pistols that you could try your hand at." You wince, hard (+1 Stress). "Forgive me, I am certain I know your name, but the gazette doesn't include pictures. Who is the heroine of the day?"

"Lily Parker, ma'am." She's a curious shade of red. "Thank you for your consideration," she trails off, almost as if it were a question.

"Lily Parker, and Sylvia Vance? Oh heavens, they've sent the two best people for the job in all of Albia. I can't say I was expecting them to be taking this so seriously, what with this being a dinner party. Right, give me an idea what both of you are looking for and I'll see what I can come up with. Hopefully we can get through what the military needs relatively quickly and I can also show you some things you might not have thought to ask for and take care of any personal requests."

"Well, we were primarily looking to organize a donation drive of hunting rifles, since apparently the vast majority of scoped rifles in the empire are in civilian hands." You look towards Lily, "You were mentioning how you were short of magnified sights on the front, were you not?"

"Terribly so. We'd take anything that gives us a bit more magnification. Galilean lenses even though they're a huge pain in the dirt, officers begging to get heirloom guns sent, I swear I even saw one gal on picket duty trying to lob shots in with an old black powder gun because her mother had stuck an old telescope on top"

"Well then. I have a whole bunch of rifles that I thought might be interesting. I'll get you the most practical ones that I brought and let you shoot them while I send a wire to have some other guns brought over." She looks to Lily "I don't have all my pistols, but I'll get all of them brought over so we can get you the best option for getting back in the fight."

"I hadn't thought about it, but I guess I should."

"Absolutely, an officer's sidearm is vital, and I'm sure there's something right for you. Give me a few moments." Janice waves to a servant, and jots down a telegram before whisking you over to a shooting stall filled with bags. "Here's everything I brought. The ammunition is in the bag with each rifle, the left side is all the various service rifles, the right side is the hunting rifles. I didn't think to separate out the ones with the scopes but you'll find them soon enough. Anyway, I'll leave you to it while I get Lily sorted out with pistols to try, you hardly need me to tell you what you're looking for."

You go through the bags, noting some that you recognize instantly. The most common are Katzen rifles with a variety of fine looking scopes that have very precise clicks on their turrets, you also see some Ritterin designs and a Foss-Nystrøm with one of the loveliest stocks on a service rifle you've ever seen and a clearly hand-finished aperture sight. Those are the most promising rifles from what you know, and you set them up for evaluation before looking over the rest.

Then you start going through other rifles. One you pick up is a straight pull with a stock in a handsome wood you don't recognize, and stamps in a decidedly foreign alphabet. It doesn't have a scope, and while the sights are nice, precise things, they aren't a scope. The action is smooth, but what really catches your eye is the cartridge, it's a very long, thin bullet that makes you think of an awl, and you resolve to see how this odd rifle performs.

The next rifle you pull from a bag is obviously an Alleghenian piece with its revolver cylinder and firing hand lever, but it's an odd looking contraption you can't quite figure out, and when you pull out the ammunition you're perplexed. These aren't cartridges, they don't have a rim or even the recessed rim that's become popular on the continent. They are wooden cylinders with a bullet in one end and a brass base with a primer in it on the other.

You set it down on the bench, and walk over to the next stall over where Lily is shooting some sort of automatic pistol. It's an odd thing with an odd knuckle bow past her middle fingers, and she's firing aimed shots slowly. A lock of hair tumbles down over her face, and she stops for a second before Janice pulls it back over her ear with a finger. After two more shots, the shooting stops. "I'll hold that," Janice says, and takes the pistol. She holds it to Lily's hip as if it were held in a holster, and Lily slowly pulls the magazine from the pistol and puts it on the bench. Despite the awkward fumbling of having two hands on the pistol, she replaces the magazine in the handle and takes a firm grip. Janice lets go of the gun, Lily raises it, pulls the knuckle bow back and then fires a few more shots. A frown that you've never seen her without disappears. You catch Janice's eye, and she holds up a finger to ask for a second, so you turn back to your stall.

You start to organize the rifles. Rifles with scopes go in one group, rifles with precise sights with fine adjustments go in a second, and the rest are set in a third group. You look through the scopes, and you realize that the long, thin scopes on a pair of Alleghenian rifles have a very large image of not much at all of the landscape. The thicker scopes don't let you see as large a picture but they let you see much more of the landscape magnified. You aren't sure which you prefer. The rifles with long scopes go to the far side of the scopes pile, since they have the most magnification. Within each group, you go to feel the handling of the action, and how smooth they are to work. You can't help but feel a spark of pride at how few of the rifles offer the same easy handling of the RWME. Sure, you know intellectually that the bolt is fast to run, but you really feel it by the third rifle where you're trying to memorize how far you need to move your hand to get a grip on the bolt and then where to put it to get back on the trigger. If you need to make a second shot before a target gets their wits about them, there's very few guns you'd trust yourself with in this whole spread. You're pretty sure it's not just that it's what you're used to, because the turn down bolt is very close to the grip on the RWME. The katzen rifles are nice and solid, but especially the ones with straight bolt handles leave the hand above and either in front or behind where it needs to be to find the trigger, and the grip gives your fingertips no clues. What you aren't sure about, however, is what is important and what's not.

"Excuse me, Sylvia?" Janice's voice stirs you from your ponderings. You move to the curious gun you're confused by and she continues. "Oh, I'll help you out with that thing, but I've got to send a wire. Lily needs a sidearm she can handle, so I'm going to get my pistols and holsters brought over here so she can find what works best. I'll be back as soon as I can."

A few moments later, Lily walks over to you. "How are the rifles, Major?"

"They're all perfectly lovely. If I can figure out what I need from a rifle, I'm sure to learn a lot about which rifles have those qualities. They're all splendid examples, so I won't have to worry about maintenance issues."

"That's good. If you want to figure out some tests to work things out, Janice has left me alone for a bit."
"Left you alone?"

"She's taken it on herself to figure out the perfect sidearm for me so she's going to be playing toy soldier dress up with me when she gets back."

"Dress up?

"Oh, I don't know what to make of it. Is this just a whim where I'm an odd curiosity, a little puzzle to be solved, or does she seriously think it's going to matter?" She moves as if to cross her arms, but her lone arm drops to her belt and holds on to it. "I don't know, should I indulge her or tell her to stop wasting her time on me?"

You respond…
[ ] "You are a war heroine, and she's clearly impressed. Take this opportunity to get the right sidearm so you can be confident about whatever comes next."
[ ] "From what you've said, things can get awfully close in the trenches. If I'm going to rely on you, you're going to need to be able to defend yourself."
[ ] "I need your help figuring out the rifles, but you do need a good sidearm. Once we know what to check for, go over your gear with her."
[ ] "I really need your expertise if we're going to get anything from these rifles. I hate to stop you from getting a better sidearm, but I can't do this job alone."
 
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5: A Range of Opportunities
[X] "From what you've said, things can get awfully close in the trenches. If I'm going to rely on you, you're going to need to be able to defend yourself," you say.

Lily blinks. "Direct as ever, I see. Very well, what to tell you before Janice gets back. If you're going to be evaluating those rifles, shoot for the black circle, it's about head sized, and don't look at the range numbers for the berms you shoot at. If you know the exact range to the trench a target's in, you owe your surveyor big time."

Your thoughts turn momentarily to the maths. Eight inches circle, unknown range, that's not an easy shot.

She must have seen the blank, pondering expression on your face because she continues, "Heads are what you can see. If anyone is daft enough to show their whole body, riflery will get them anyway and you don't have to waste your time. And at least it's clean. Lights off, no wondering what's going to become of them."

That opens up a pit in your stomach. "What's that like on the downrange side? No chance for goodbyes or anything?"

"It's always in the cards. Maybe a sniper, maybe a shell splinter. So if you've got something to say, say it."

"That makes sense. Shall we?" You gesture to the shooting stall.

The first rifle you grab is a Ritterin. Its ammunition is in the distinctive Ritterin wrap around clips, and it has the distinctive top opening and bottom gap for the clip to drop out of, and an unusual scope mount where the scope is off to the side to make room for the clip. You remember Lily mentioning that that would be a drawback, and you're interested to see how much of an impact that makes.

You choose a target to point at and raise the rifle into firing position. Unfortunately, despite the unpleasantly bulbous cheek pad, the scope isn't in front of your eye. You adjust until the scope is in front of your right eye. The position feels wrong, your cheekbone is only tenuously grasping onto the rail, and you are suddenly made aware of just how reassuring the usual feeling of pinning the butt between your shoulder and cheekbone is. Without that, the position of your eye feels tenuous, and you need to consciously hold your head in the right position lest a black shadow eclipse your view of the target.

You don't like this arrangement, but you resolve yourself to determine whether a moderate amount of familiarity would solve the problems. You lower the rifle to waist level as if you were carrying it, and then shoulder it. The position would be right, were you a cyclops. You try again and fail again. A few more tries and you see a partial picture of the target with a slice blacked out of it like a gibbous moon. Satisfied that you're getting closer, you persist in trying until you can reliably get a good view. Then you shift your aim to another target. Your optimism that you can get used to this position without a lot of effort wanes as you shift your head into the position needed to see clearly through the scope. It could be made to work, but it would never be as stable as if your cheekbone was resting over the stock.

You pull the cord for the 300 yard range, and after a few seconds, the target for your bay rises above the flowers gaily decorating the berm. You raise the gun, pull the bolt handle back, insert a clip, and then push the bolt forward. The action is reasonably smooth, and the handle sits comfortably near the trigger when forward. You take careful aim, making sure to get your head in the right place, and shoot. The rifle tries to slide upwards on your shoulder and the gun rises even though the recoil isn't much more forceful than you're used to. You didn't expect much, and this gun has delivered. The semaphore under the target signals a nine, you missed the inner ring. If that had been the face of an enemy looking through a loophole, you would have missed. You suppress a shudder at the gruesome thought of that, and try again. Nine. Again. Nine. You look at the scope, to the left of the rifle's bore, and you decide to experiment. You aim at the left edge of the target. The semaphore flashes to say your shot was registered, but it reads eight. You think for a second, and then you aim to the right edge of the target. Finally a ten. The clip falls out, and you lay down the rifle. If you need to aim to the right, that would mean the rifle is set to intersect the scope's aim point at some distance less than 300 yards, and at this range the scope's point of aim has crossed over the rifle's aim. If it's a game of inches, you'd have to account for that as well.

Next you grab the rifle with the long, skinny cartridge. In an odd counterpoint to the viscerally sharp bullet, the gun has a cheerful little flower stamped on its barrel. You find a clip of those cartridges and feed them into the magazine. The large gap between the bullets feels strange in your hand, but the cartridges slide smoothly. You look at the iron sights, and note how close the settings are for the first few hundred yards. You idly wonder just how wide a range you could cover with one setting for elevation. A head is a much smaller target than the old belt buckle chestnut was meant for, but if it really drops that little, that might be good enough at the shorter ranges Lily talked about shooting at. You set it to 250, and fire at the 200 yard bull. Your shots are consistently high, if you aim lower you can get bullseyes, but almost all the shots fall inside the 8 inch circle. You try the same at the 300 yard target, and again, the rounds are still in the 8 inch circle you're using to represent a head. Your target.

You feel that that rifle would be good for shooting, and if you could have a scope mounted to it you feel it could be a very capable hunting tool. Next, you pick up a Katzen, with a scope mounted over the bore. It's a very stout rifle, and you see why the action is renowned for ruggedness. The toughness of the rifle is matched in the scope mount, a very solid affair that looks to be latched into the top of the gun in two places by two thick arms. The front arm forms an arch and the rear arm curves in from the left side, making plenty of room for both manipulating the bolt and even using the iron sights if needed. Despite handsome engraving on the lockwork and stock, the checkering of the grip and fore end and raised cheek piece give the gun a purposeful look. The boar on the receiver glares at you, and you feel a sort of kinship. After all, your job is much the same as the boar's, to make the Dyske hunters come back feet first and try to survive the process. You charge and fire the rifle, and you are surprised to find that it does nothing to change your opinion of it. The recoil is stout, like any other rifle's. The action requires a bit of force, but it works well. The scope's reticle is a simple pointed post, and it works for pointing out where to aim at the range you select with the simple top dial. After five shots, you want to load up another clip and keep shooting. You're frustrated for a second that you have to load cartridges individually, but you remind yourself that this is the price you pay for the top mounted scope, and after trying it it is a price worth paying. Every part of this rifle works, and nothing gets in your way even if very little of it excites you. The Dyske have a reputation as a staid, meticulous nation, and this rifle epitomizes this. There is nothing obviously wrong with this rifle, and your mission is to beat the people who made it at their own game, to make them your game.

Next, you decide to see how some other nations did things. You pick a rifle you're pretty sure is an Alleghenian rifle, since it has a lever action. It's a very interesting piece to your eye. The scope is long and thin, with a delicate tapering out at the ends, and fits inside a pair of rings. The front one looks relatively narrow, but the rear ring is wider than the scope body and holds it in between a group of claw mounted plungers. In addition, there is a brass band around the scope body, with a spring between that ring and the front ring, the purpose of which you are not quite sure of. Why would a scope need a spring tensioner to push it forwards when the rings would hold it in place? You tug back on the scope and frown. The rings should hold it in place, and yet it slides backwards in them. The stock is dropped into a convenient grip, and to account for this drop, it has a hefty comb to raise your eyes to the stock. You raise the rifle to your shoulder and look through the scope. The picture through it is small, but the objects in it are very large. You rest the cross on a target 300 yards away, and it appears as large as if it were well inside 100 yards. When you adjust the elevation turret on top to 300 yards, it clicks and you're pretty sure it pushes the scope downwards in the rear ring. The whole arrangement doesn't feel robust. You ring up a target, though, and after you load a few rounds one at a time into the gate on the side, you try a few shots. The experience isn't bad at all, apart from the wallop of the large caliber round into your shoulder. The crosshair is fine, and makes it easy to put on the target, and the knuckle bow fits a comfortable hand position for you to lever forward from and back into position. It shoots relatively well, and the lever action doesn't disturb your position much, with the downward pull being mitigated by a textured butt. You do feel that as you try shooting at longer ranges, the bullet takes a long time to arrive. It's to be expected without the benefit of a spitzer round, but it is a downside nonetheless. You shoot a few more rounds and experimentally top the tube magazine up. It works smoothly and allows you to deliver fire relatively rapidly. Watching the gun's mechanism spill out as you work the action further solidifies your impression that this is probably a very effective hunting implement on the empty plain, but a gun that exposes its entire mechanism like this would undoubtedly have a ravenous hunger for the rich clay muds of Gallia, and its fine mechanisms would inevitably jam up. It fires an interesting round, long for high velocity but still rounded in the manner of older heavy bullets, and while you like the visual detail of the target afforded by the scope's high magnification, this does not seem to match a precision in the rifle. It is an odd rifle to your perspective, sacrificing precision in places for brute force but still remaining an instrument for long range. The side is engraved with a herd of giant, furry beasts, and as best as you can figure this rifle is designed to deliver a good number of bullets into them from range before they can flee. This is a foreign practice to you, the hunting stories you know feature single shots placed with care, while this practice smacks of musketry. Thankfully, you feel that apart from the precision of the scope, the indelicacy of the tool leaves little for you to recommend it for your job over existing tools.

You then take up the other rifle you see that has a novel scope configuration. It is another Alleghenian styled piece, and you wonder whether it deserves the dignity of the term "rifle". The wood is handsome, but the metal is a collection of industrial looking rectangles at an angle to each other, and hanging above and to the left is a bulky box with a collection of brass plaques riveted to it joined by an armature studded with adjustment dials. The combined effect is peculiar. The rifle looks industrial and brutish, but fires a modern spitzer cartridge, and the so-called "Telescopic Musket Sight" is an oddly fine-grained implement. It can be set to any distance, calibrated in yards evenly out to three thousand yards, a distance at which it forms an angle with the firearm like that of a volley sight. The brass tables on this scope show you how much to correct for a one mile per hour left/right wind, how many inches a 10 yard range estimation error would cause you to miss high or low of the target by, and a table of drift values whose purpose you cannot divine. This box makes you reëvaluate you see scopes, because where every other scope you've seen is a tool, with a clear purpose, this is an instrument. It's very curious and you try to figure out what the cause for these differences is. Another look at the large plaque gives you a thought. The figures listed would be of assistance in correcting fire but not the first shot, and that aligns with the thought you had about this being specifically labeled as a musket sight. You think that this scope's original purpose must be to direct the massed fire of a line formation against area targets. If combined with tracer rounds, that could allow a rifle so equipped to be used as a very crass sort of ballistic rangefinder. It is a very strange idea, but you can see it being effective for mass fire. It is fascinating to see in a proper woman's collection. You suspect that it is being used despite, rather than because of, its intended purpose. For a calculating shot, the fine detail of the adjustments might make it a useful implement for sport precision shooting. The drift table you're unclear on the purpose of is likely for adjustments that are built into your service rifle's iron sights. For a markswoman without the benefit of a known and calibrated combination of rifle and ammunition as standardized by a military, this would allow greater precision. You look at the mounting apparatus, and there is the curious addition of brass thumbscrews in a few places on top of what seem to be existing adjustments. It is strange to you that such a precision device seems to have required modification after the fact to mount more securely. You shoot the rifle, and the experience is largely similar to other rifles. The scope offers a very powerful magnification, much like the other Alleghenian scope you used, though the short length and large box mean that the balance of the rifle is relatively far rear, somewhat odd for a rifle meant to be dialed in finely. The stock extends straight back, so the lever is awkwardly flat to the gun, and the action isn't as smooth, but the gun is eminently adequate to the task. The high magnification of the scope does mean that with adequate time to make the proper adjustments you make accurate shots at relatively long range, but for shots against whatever opportunity rears its head, its main recommendation would be its existence rather than any excellence. Their head, you remember. In this new war, anyone who raises their head to witness it has presented a target, and this time the thought makes you feel very vulnerable indeed.

You've seen a lot of the most important guns, and you feel confident that you now have a handle on the practical aspects of what distinguishes optical sights among this peculiar sporting breed. You decide to see how Lily is faring and ask Janice for her input on some of the more esoteric guns she's brought.

You walk to the next bay over, and watch Lily shoot off a string of bullets from a modern-looking pistol you do not recognize. You ask, "how have you done finding your next service weapon, lieutenette?"

She turns to you and responds, "Well, all told. We've been trying to see if any of the modern self-loaders are any easier to load when holstered than the Blanc-Streep, and it looks like Janice's intuition was right. There's this pistol from Akatsukuni that sounded really appealing, load it once and have seventeen rounds available or something incredible, but I absolutely cannot do anything with that kind of gun other than pull the trigger. The slide is streamlined so I can't pull it and hold the frame with one hand. I want a gun I can use, rather than to be forced to try and defend myself with a miniscule crew served weapon. But that gun, I can use on my own. Here, I'll show you."

Janice takes up the pistol you saw earlier, and puts it in a holster. She folds the leather flap all the way back, doubling even the belt loops up against the part that holds the gun, and holds it to Lily's hip. Lily then takes the pistol in her hand, pulls the odd lever on its trigger guard back to charge the gun, and fires off five rounds. "And this," she says, "is why I'm settling on this gun", as she charges the gun with the lever again and fires off four more rounds. The gun locks open, and she gingerly pokes the muzzle into the holster that Janice has held to her hip delicately, so as not to flatten the holster's opening. A gentle pinch of the base of the grip allows her to tug the magazine free, and she replaces it with another, giving the butt a gentle slap to ensure the new magazine is seated, and then she draws, pulls the lever again, and fires off a string of ten bullets. She grins to you, "Wherever you end up going, I'll be ready if you want me."

"I'll get that holster made for you right away, then. Go ahead and keep the gun and magazines if you'd like, the holster pattern is unique but I have a template right here to give to the leatherworker. So! Sylvia, while there's still light in the sky and we don't have to be present for dinner quite yet, do tell me what you think of my collection, and let me show you some of the more interesting elements."

She walks over to the stall you'd previously been in, and rummages through the rifles. She remarks, "Ah, looking at the Alleghenian pieces?" and pulls out the matching gun for that strange cartridge. You watch in bafflement as she shows you the gun, which has a form that is as strange in general as in the peculiarities you already noted. It has a cylinder like that of a revolver, but scalloped even more deeply in between spaces for the cartridges, suggesting that it only has four chambers. The metal of the frame on the left hand side extends farther back behind the chambers than you would expect for something that on most revolvers is just to provide structure and cover the rear of the rounds, but not on the right. More strangely, the stock extends straight backwards from the lower chamber to the shoulder, with a wide flange downwards for a grip and then another large segment behind a thumbhole. She presses an indentation in the stock, and slips a catch so she can pull a tube free. She then feeds eight of those peculiar cylindrical rounds into the space it formerly occupied, and then while pointing it downwards runs the action twice. She then loads two more rounds into the stock, and carefully seats the cylinder over the pile of rounds and latches it back into place. She puts the rifle down for a second, and shows you one of the cartridges. "What we have here is one of the most truly innovative rifles I've seen. These wooden plugs hold a very thin copper casing inside them in a cylindrical shape, and the cylinder presses forward so the bullet itself is pressed into the bore of the rifle. It's a strange idea, but the designer thought that if she could solve the issues and make it self-loading it could have a remarkable rate of fire. I would absolutely love to see someone try the idea again now that we have the benefit of smokeless powder to prevent fouling. She pulls the cord for a target, and fires, with a puff of smoke characteristic of black powder. She works the lever forward and a spent case ejects from the left chamber. She then falls into a rhythm that is only interrupted by two stoppages that force her to dig cases out of that left chamber. You look at the spent cases, and despite the hardwood of their construction, they are visibly compressed. When she has placed the rifle down, she looks at the rounds with a frown. "That is the other weakness of this system. The rounds are notionally inexpensive, because wood is not an expensive material, but the only wood that works right is coppiced and carefully formed to give a single band with no grain. Guns that try this idea would need an entirely new material to work properly. It's just so elegant though, I want it to work so badly. I hope you appreciated seeing something so novel."

You nod, "I certainly never expected to see something like that, any one of those ideas would be peculiar on their own. The other Alleghenian guns I looked at are very interesting devices too, very unusual."

"Aren't they the queerest things? If you mean those two, I actually got them from the same source. A correspondent of mine was interested in how we Albians approach riflery, and sent me two guns that she thought might be different from my usual fare. The one with the long scope is, if I remember right, a hunting gun to take some of their huge plains beasts, some sort of buffalo I think. If what I heard about their herds is right, I'd understand wanting more rounds at hand. The other one is fascinating. She was trying to build something I'd be interested in, and she certainly succeeded, but I don't think I'll tell her that lest I encourage her. I told her I dislike the bad ballistics of the rounded cartridges, and I wanted to see just how far accurate shots could be taken. She came back to me with this peculiar assemblage. The scope is apparently for a military contract, its adjustments feel like those of a surveying tool and I have no idea how they expect men to be able to make use of this precision. It feels like one of those harebrained schemes to replace a woman's touch with a man's strong back and an impractical amount of cartridges. However, for my purposes it is a surprisingly enjoyable gun, since I get all the adjustment I could possibly want and can work out the maths to put a bullet right where those fine crosshairs point. I've had more than a few lovely afternoons whittling away the innermost ring with that gun. It's a shame that very few people will ever get to make the most of that gun, it apparently took her a great deal of work to contrive to make the mounting properly secure, and without that, what is even the point? I hope she appreciated the rifle I sent her in return, it was the first magazine fed rifle I ever ran across to truly equal the refinement of our traditional styles. Oh! Speaking of traditional styles! I saw you tried the Type 37. What did you think?"

"Impressive," you say, "it has a remarkably flat trajectory," before she continues her fascinating soliloquy.

"Isn't it just? People were surprised that the Akitsukuni delivered such a delightful shooting gun as that and just how smooth the action is. It's amazing to think that when I was growing up they were importing everything and now they're making pieces like this." She runs a finger over the engraving of a citrus tree with a prominent fruit in the wood, "I made sure to get one of the ones with a citrus engraved on the stock, that's a sign that the original designer signed off on it personally, and just look at how well made the stock is. I think we have time to look at one more gun before dinnertime. Which other guns did you look at, did any catch your interest? Did you perchance get a chance to look at one of the larger game rifles?"

You respond…
[ ] "I saw a Foss-Nystrøm that looked like an incredibly well crafted competition piece, I'm curious how well the rifle performs"
[ ] "You're right, I hardly looked at the larger rifles. I'd love to see how well the pinnacle of Albian craft works"
[ ] "I noticed a Ritterin with one of the new rotary magazines, do you think it might be possible to fit a scope over the top of that? I tried the one with a side mounted scope and it wasn't to my taste."
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