...Fucking Tinkers (Worm/SAO)

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That is the second arm that Heathcliff has lost so far, both of them at pain 100%. I am afraid he might be spending too much time with Khepri.
 
I approve of the advance. If every floor was as bad as the first 5, all the players would be dead or too traumatized to fight by 15.
 
Kind of a style thing, but please stop referring to people by their hair colour. It's such a weird thing to do, I realise it crops up in a lot of fanfic, but just use their name. It's seriously awkward.
 
Kind of a style thing, but please stop referring to people by their hair colour. It's such a weird thing to do, I realise it crops up in a lot of fanfic, but just use their name. It's seriously awkward.
It's not really a fanfic thing, it's an anime thing. You often refer to people by some distinguishing feature, and there are too many anime characters who have no real distinguishing features other than their hair color.
 
It's not really a fanfic thing, it's an anime thing. You often refer to people by some distinguishing feature, and there are too many anime characters who have no real distinguishing features other than their hair color.

In my case, it's actually a writing thing. I use hair color as an epithet because it's usually distinctive and helps reduce needless repetition. Same reason why I often refer to characters by their job and/or weapon type.
 
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Kind of a style thing, but please stop referring to people by their hair colour. It's such a weird thing to do, I realise it crops up in a lot of fanfic, but just use their name. It's seriously awkward.
It's not always a style thing. For example, I'm just plain bad with names. Saying 'that one' or 'the guy who sits there' or other similar things when pointing to someone, or just a non-specific 'hey' when greeting someone... If people had rainbow hair colors, I'd likely use that as well.
 
In my case, it's actually a writing thing. I use hair color as an epithet because it's usually distinctive and helps reduce needless repetition. Same reason why I often refer to characters by their job and/or weapon type.
When you vary what the distinguishing characteristic is that makes it come off as a real character talking/thinking because that's how people think. The anime thing is that hair gets used too often (because there aren't enough other characteristics) which gets annoying, and some people become overly sensitive to it.
 
The anime thing is that hair gets used too often (because there aren't enough other characteristics) which gets annoying, and some people become overly sensitive to it.
Anime does it far worse than most, but hair in general has nearly as many distinctions as the face, which is why people recognize others by it even without a rainbow of colors present.
 
@violetshadows - A thought. In SAO cannon there was a point where most everyone caught in the game was moved to the hospital, and during that time many avatars got DCed temporarly while their RL body was moved. Is that going to or has happened in this story? Was Krephi affected? Did anyone but Taylor herself notice that she didn't get DCed?
 
@violetshadows - A thought. In SAO cannon there was a point where most everyone caught in the game was moved to the hospital, and during that time many avatars got DCed temporarly while their RL body was moved. Is that going to or has happened in this story? Was Krephi affected? Did anyone but Taylor herself notice that she didn't get DCed?
Considering that she spent most of her time solo, I highly doubt that she would have even known about it.
 
Considering that she spent most of her time solo, I highly doubt that she would have even known about it.
When someone brings it up, she goes "wait what?"
And then everyone just assumes Yakuza boss as usual.

That reminds me, is Taylor speaking English and it magically getting translated to Japanese?
 
I think she's speaking Japanese. She's just not using her own brain to do it.

The brain surgery/growing QA node gave her global(?) aphasia, I figure the QA is letting her pick up language and/or reconstructing her brain/mind based on the brains tied into SAO.
So she's going to come back at the end and be speaking Japanese and everyone is going to be so confused.
Lisa's going to be like Taylor what.
 
Good story, consider it watch. Quick question can Taylor control Insects in game as I can't remember her trying and failing?
 
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