From Mortal to Divinity (SI/CYOA Jumpchain)

True. I won't be writing those types of scenes though. I don't even know how to write one, much less a good one
That's kinda the point. That's taking, like, 75% of what alot of people like about DxD out of it. The plot isn't strong enough to carry itself without it. And it gets even more painful in the later volumes of the LN.

The setting itself is great. But the author failed to truly express the politics that would exist in such a setting. Especially what happens between the three factions. The author tries, but it just comes off as painful. I could rant about it, but I don't really feel it's worth it.
 
That's kinda the point. That's taking, like, 75% of what alot of people like about DxD out of it. The plot isn't strong enough to carry itself without it. And it gets even more painful in the later volumes of the LN.

The setting itself is great. But the author failed to truly express the politics that would exist in such a setting. Especially what happens between the three factions. The author tries, but it just comes off as painful. I could rant about it, but I don't really feel it's worth it.
True, but its still a good setting for a trial run of the New Edenians. Since most conflicts seem to be resolved through battle as opposed to genius political maneuvering. Also, I feel like most readers should know me well enough to know that I'll be mostly focusing on the battle aspect of the setting as opposed to the erotic one.
 
I see you embrace madness...
Alright...
Let me grab a beer and a chair.
I wanna see how this goes...
Especially when the Dream and the Infinite meet you.
 
True, but its still a good setting for a trial run of the New Edenians. Since most conflicts seem to be resolved through battle as opposed to genius political maneuvering. Also, I feel like most readers should know me well enough to know that I'll be mostly focusing on the battle aspect of the setting as opposed to the erotic one.
I'm aware, yes. DxD just has alot of baggage for me from the past.
 
Arrival on the Isle of Man
Unknown Location
Unknown Time


The first thing that my attention is brought to, upon our materialization, is the stench. The alleyway that we currently find ourselves in is dark, however with my enhanced senses I can easily see as if it were daytime, and easily smell this alley's stench. Similar to our arrival in Bludhaven, this alley also smells heavily of sewage, feces, vomit, alcohol, and even semen.

"Disgusting." comments Azula as she conjures a wind bubble around us that gets rid of the smell.

"Indeed." agrees Azula as she wrinkles her nose in disgust. "This is the second time that we find ourselves in this situation. I hope that this does not become a habit"

"Please." says Morgan with a roll of her eyes. "I would not put it past ROB to do this simply to get on our nerves, and considering the fact that we are during the time of the Great War, or during the Devil Civil War, then we must be sometime during the middle ages. Or even worse, the Dark Ages, meaning that this entire city might smell like this"

Having said her piece, Morgan proceeds to magically clean the alley with a wave of her hand.

"Interesting use of the cleaning spells from the Fairy Tail world." I comment with an appreciative nod. Truly it is an interesting use of those spells considering the fact that the most they should be able to clean are household messes. Meaning that she either overpowered the spell with a massive amount of magical energy, which is not her style at all, or she modified it on the spot. Considering who she is, I'm willing to bet on the latter, even if she currently does not have access to the usual knowledge or powers that she receives as a goddess of magic.

"Now that we are no longer suffering from the smell,-" comments Scathach. "-I believe that it is best to plan our next steps."

"Our first priority should be to obtain information. Where are we? What year is it? Who is in charge of this land? etc..." I answer.

"I propose that we split up and meet up outside of the city in fifteen minutes." suggests Azula, earning nods of agreements from the rest of us before we collectively walk out of the alley and go our separate ways.

The streets are almost devoid of life except for the few people who seem to be rushing in order to go home. Oil lamps can be found on the sides of the street in order to light the cobblestone path. All in all it looks like your typical medieval fantasy street. Having gotten a feel for our location, I begin to make my walk away from the street before stopping next to the building that makes up one of the walls of the alleyways that we just came from. Looking at its sign, I cannot help but smile at my luck. The building is a tavern, one of the best places to receive information.

Changing my rune suit to that of a weary traveler and putting a small illusion on myself, I slowly open the worn out door and make my way in with the door's creak announcing my arrival.

Hearing the door, many of the building's occupants turn to look at me and only see a young man with dirty black hair and dull brown eyes, causing them to relax their postures before returning to their affairs. As I approach the bar, the bartender observes me carefully while wiping down the table. Interesting, not only are the people on edge but the bartender, a man who clearly has combat experience going by how his eyes rake over my body in order to find a weapon, seems to be even more on edge than normal. Sitting on a barstool, I observe him. A strong frame that can only be earned through battle, a weary gase of one who has seen too much, tense muscles ready to explode into action on command, and even a few weapons hidden on his person and around the bar, making it easy for him to be armed regardless of where in the bar he stands. Evidently these times are far more turbulent than normal. I can easily use this to my advantage.

"What a young man you be doing out this late at night, much less travelin on your own?" he asks me as he pours a drink into a mug before handing it to me.

"Village was attacked. Ah barely survived to get away." I reply with a perfect match to his accent before taking a gulp from my drink. With a face clear of any emotion other than grief, I force the horrible drink down my throat even as I interestingly watch the room fall into silence due to my words.

"Devils?" questions one man from behind as he stands up.

"Aye." I reply as I put my mug down and tighten my grip on the handle with grief and rage clear on my face. "They came from nowhere. Before I knew the village was burnin and people was dyin." I tell them, causing many of them to curse while the man who stood up earlier throws his cup in a fit of rage before sitting back down in his seat.

"How far away is yer village?" he asks me, his posture tenser than before.

" I don't know. Been traveling for days before reaching here." I tell him, making him relax a little, or at least return to his state of alertness before my arrival. Evidently we've arrived sometime during the Great War between Heaven, the Grigory, and Hell. Finishing my drink, I get up from my seat, return the discarded cup to the man before making them all forget about me while also getting knowledge of our location from them as I leave.

With the relevant information in my mind now I make my way to the town's exit where I find the others waiting for me already.

"Now that our slowpoke of our husband is here, we can begin to plan." jokes Azula and making me roll my eyes at her comment. Despite whatever she says, I am easily the fastest amongst us in terms of combat and travel speed. It is the aspect that I focus on the most when it comes to physical training.

"Let us walk. We can talk on the way." I reply as I walk out of the town with them following next to me, our pace being easily faster than any man or horse despite us simply walking.

"It seems that you already have a destination in mind." observes Scáthach.

"The Isle of Man. An island that lays in between England and Ireland. Considering the date, it should not have been influenced by any of the civilisations surrounding it, nor should it be a place of interest." I explain as we make our way to the nearest shore.

"Perfect. Once we land there we can set up a magical barrier around the island to not only make it hard to find, but also discourage anyone from approaching it." says Morgan.

"Then we present ourselves to the inhabitants in our forms as gods and turn it into a nation worthy of being called Edenia." suggests Azula.

"Is that wise?" questions Scáthach. "Would that not cause the inhabitants to clash with the New Edenians once you make them?" she elaborates.

"This is why one of the perks I chose gave me the Evil Pieces. I will study them and reverse engineer them to turn the inhabitants into New Edenians. And with the Brave Saint pieces from the angels we look at both creations to make an even better one." I explain.

"Perhaps we can even see about giving them the same advantages of the devils and the angels with none of the weaknesses." mutters Morgan as she thinks of the impressive piece of magic that could accomplish such a feat.

"Look at her, she's practically drooling." says Azula with a laugh. "The two of you are such magic geeks." she says, causing us all to look at her with raised eyebrows. She has no place to talk, while not as obsessed with her field of magic as the rest of us, Azula can easily be called a geek when it comes to charms and illusionary types of magic.

"Why are you looking at me like that?" she asks, causing us to simultaneously shake our head in perfect sync.

"Nothing." we tell her just as we reach our destination, a cliff connected to the sea.

"Do you all know where the Isle of Man is?" I ask them as my rune suit transforms into my Atlantean armor just as they all nod. "Perfect. The last one there has to do dishes with no powers for the next century!" I exclaim with a smirk on my face as I dive into the turbulent water while ignoring their cries of protest. The cliff is easily far too high for any regular mortal to survive, much less swim. And with the turbulent waves their corpse would easily be washed out into the sea. Despite this however I easily make it into the water with no trouble due to my Edenian heritage. While not exactly human, Edenians are close enough to humans for ROB to allow me to jump into DxD without turning me into a human. Once in the water, I activate the array in my vambraces that allows one to control water before forcing the water to push me towards my destination. The array is nothing special and can in fact be considered primitive since all it allows the user to do is push or pull water, nothing. Regardless, it serves its purpose well and is immensely useful for when my divinity is sealed. Just like now for example.

The trip to the Isle of Man takes me about a minute at the most and I cannot help but chuckle at the thought of the loser's facial expression.

"Is there something funny dear?" ask Azula as I come out of the water.

"Yes, the loser's facial expression." I reply with a smile.

"Is that so?" she asks me with a raised eyebrow, making me suspicious. Before I can answer, Morgan and Scáthach appear in front of me as if they were there the entire time with a smirk on their faces.

"What?" I stupidly ask with wide eyes and an open mouth before a camera appears in Scáthach's hands and she takes a picture.

"Such a wonderful picture. Don't you think so, beloved?" she asks with a smile as she shows me the picture of my dumb, yet still somehow handsome, face staring at them.

"I believe that you will now be doing the dishes with no powers." comments Morgan, making the others giggle, they actually giggled, at my predicament. One thing about the four of us that can be considered odd is that for all of our magical powers, we prefer to do mundane tasks like cooking and cleaning like regular mortals. We will sweep and even dust with no problem. However, one thing that we all despise is dishes. There's no meaningful reason as to why, other than we just do. As such, whenever there are dishes that need to be done they are always completed magically. We would use disposable ones, but Morgan uses them as part of the kitchen decorations.

"I want to know how you all did it. I can understand Azula since she has wings now and can even use her devil magic to teleport." I say as I dry myself.

"Azula was kind enough to teleport us to the island with her." answers Scáthach as she puts the camera away.

"Oh, well. You can't win them all." I answer with a sigh before straightening myself. "Now, let's get to work." I say as I release the first seal on my divinity while the others follow suit.

Without saying another word, we get to work. I begin by reaching out to the sea and create a mist that quickly surrounds the island before pushing it back twenty miles away from the island where Morgan and Azula take over by weaving a set of illusions and enchantments in the mist that makes the island almost impossible to find and even harder to reach.

As they do that, I will a thin layer of the ocean to rise and form a dome over the island and inscribe a set of protective arrays on the new dome that will make it so that nothing short of the top five will be able to damage it, much less penetrate it. Strong enough to stop almost anything, but weak enough so that New Edenia will not become complacent in its defenses.

While Morgan, Azula, and I were working on these two small projects, Scáthach had inscribed an array on the island's perimeter that will make the island draw magic from the nearest major layline and the air. This in turn will enrich the island and turn it into a magical hotspot, and with the dome also acting as a barrier to keep all that magical energy inside while also hiding it from the outside world, this will be a perfect place to train anyone in magic or to perform any sort of magic extensive ritual.

With everything done and connected to one another, the dome disappears from sight along with the mist, allowing anyone on the island to see outside while anyone on the outside will completely miss the island and in fact avoid.

"This should be good enough to serve as a foundation." says Morgan as she observes our work with a look of satisfaction on her face.

"Personally I think that it is too much." argues Scáthach. "These defenses are powerful to hold back anyone but the top five beings of this world. It will make them complacent." she explains.

"Please, if it were up to you there would be no defenses." says Azula.

"We will leave it like this for now. Should Scáthach be proven to be right, then we will lower them to a more reasonable level." I interrupt before Scáthach can answer. "For now let us meet the locals." I say as I switch to my divine armor and take to the sky with Azula, Scáthach, and Morgan switching to their own divine clothing and following a step behind me.

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AN: Here's the chapter and the end of the MK arc. As usual tell me what you guys think. The first chapter of my Campione fic is currently in my patreon page one day before the chapter is published. The link is, (patreon . com / servantambrosius), minus the spaces.
 
Experiments
Isle of Man
~ 460 AD


They came during one cold winter night from the sky, their capes fluttering behind them in the wind while their divine armor shone with the light from the moon. Their features, while human, were too beautiful to be considered as such, and it was then that the first tribe of people who encountered them understood that these four beings were not mortals but were instead gods. Faced with the majestic presence of these four deities, the tribe kneeled down while awaiting for them to be addressed while hoping that they did not come for nefarious reasons. As it turned out, they came for one purpose, to make the island home to their chosen people while also giving the island's natives the choice to join them. Afraid of what denying them could mean and having no valid reason why they should refuse, the tribe accepted.

Having expected nothing from the gods, the people were surprised when knowledge on how to better their lives flowed into their minds. Knowledge of how to build better structures to survive against the elements, knowledge of how to create better clothes, how to cook the best food with their resources, and knowledge on many more things that they could never have even imagined on their own. With this gift, the first tribe vowed absolute loyalty to these deities and chose to accompany them when they visited other tribes despite the gods' insistence that it was not necessary since they could quickly and easily make their way around the island. Seeing the conviction in their eyes, the gods relented and chose to travel as mortals in order to accommodate their new companions, an action that caused the people's respect of them to grow even more.

Throughout their travels, the tribe learned that the gods were not originally of this world, but rather each originated from a different world and simply came to this world in search of a place to plant the foundations of their chosen people. They learned that while the sole man of the four was the king and leader of the group, he had an insurmountable amount of respect for the other three who are also his wives. They learned that despite being king he prefers the personal touch that a father would possess as opposed to the more professional touch of a king. They learned that while he is the only war god amongst the four that the others were all powerful in their own right.

Eventually however they came upon a second tribe, a tribe that the first tribe do not exactly see eye to eye with. Many had expected an altercation to occur, however with a few simple words from the Goddess Azula, both tribes chose to leave their differences in the past and collectively follow these deities.

With the addition of the second tribe, the size of the group grew and speed of their travel slowed, or at least it should have. However at this time, the gods chose to take care of every responsibility that would slow down their group. They created shelter from the earth, water from the air, hunted and cooked all of the food with flame that was made from nothing other than Goddess Azula's hands. A flame that, despite its small size, burned hot enough for it to feel like summer.

It was like this that the group traveled throughout the island, going from tribe to tribe and convincing them all to follow these new deities. Throughout their travels they learned many things from the god and goddesses. Any question that they asked were answered easily and expertly enough that the entire group understood. They learned of the many other gods in this world, of the many factions that they make up, and of the current civil war happening within the Abrahamic Faction that is ravaging the lands outside of their island. They learned of the gods' plan to eventually join the war should it go on much longer, causing the warriors of the tribes to vow to follow them into battle. That had earned a laugh from the Goddess Azula and a smile from the Goddess Morgan. They had thought that their offer was being mocked before the Goddess Scáthach had explained that it would be suicide and that if they wished to follow them into war they would have to wait for a few years for the gods and goddesses to complete some form of research. In response to the explanation the warriors had vowed to wait until that time had come, or to prepare their children should they themselves be unable to follow.

Like this, months passed and every single person on the island had vowed themselves to the god. With that done, the group moved to the center of the island where a magnificent castle was easily erected by Morgan before the four deities built a city with the castle in the center. The city is easily large enough to fit everyone on the island while leaving room for when the population will grow. The architecture style for the city is mostly Greco-Roman with a few touches of medieval gothic.

Living in this new city was troublesome at first. The majority of them were farmers, some were blacksmiths, others were carpenters, and some were hunters or warriors as some called them. Due to some spells erected by Morgan, they quickly found that all of the lands within a certain area of the city easily grew food that the farmers would have to farm themselves. The land was self-sufficient and all that would need to be done would be to plant the seeds and harvest the crops once it was time. Everything else, like plowing and tilling, was done magically and just naturally happened. As such the farmers found themselves with plenty of free time while the blacksmiths found that the bulk of their work, which were farming tools, was no longer needed.

While the blacksmiths simply repurposed the allotted time to experimenting with the craft using the knowledge given to them by the gods, the farmers had to choose something new to spend their time on. Some chose to become smiths, others hunters, some became craftsmen, and some even began to experiment with painting and making music. Eventually however, things settled down comfortably and all found that this new life was much more enjoyable than their previous one. Not only was life much easier, but it was also more enjoyable and they had more time to pursue whatever interests they may have.

That all changed however one night when a massive pillar of multicolor lights had come from the sky to strike down the ground in front of the castle. From the lights emerged a group of men in splendid armor and swords at their hips with two women leading them. The people had thought themselves under attack until Morgan and Ambrosius had emerged from their castle with smiles on their faces to greet the group. As it turns out, Morgan has a little sister named Arturia. She herself is a Queen and the men accompanying them were none other than her most trusted warriors, the Knight of the Round Table. With them however, had been Ambrosius and Morgan's daughter, Mordred.

The arrival of the group had turned into a joyful occasion for the people, they had met the goddess's sister and her daughter. As a result they threw a party as a welcome, something that had the pair secretly blushing when outside of the public eye.

With the arrival of the Knights, those hunters who vowed to follow the gods into battle began their training under the Knights. They quickly found out however that while they may be considered warriors amongst their people, to true warriors they are nothing but average men skillesly waving around pointy sticks. As such, the training was brutal, painful, and at times almost mind breaking. They were not being trained to kill normal men, nor were they being trained to kill men with magical capabilities, they were instead being trained to kill the supernatural. Beings that could easily break steel with their bare hands, move faster than the eye could see, and easily wreak havoc to a normal human army by themselves. As such they too had to be able to defeat armies by themselves.

Normally no amount of training would help them reach such a level. At this point in time humanity is not only at a disadvantage due to their frail bodies, but they also had no magic system to help them even out the odds. However, they are not expected to be able to defeat supernatural beings such as High Class devils with their current training, no the training will put them on a high Mid Class devil's level before they are further trained to the ground until they unlock Touki, which will put them on around low to mid High Class devil. Naturally not all of them are expected to reach such a high level, only the most talented will. However, it will put even the weakest one of them at a high Mid Class devil level without any form of enhancement.

Hearing this caused the competitive spirits within the trainees to soar and they began to compete in order to see which ones of them will reach that level. Like this, a few years passed until the day arrived, the day when their lives were changed even more.

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Isle of Man

~ 470 AD


The Evil Piece System and the Brave Saints are genius pieces of magic and Ajuka being hailed as a genius for their creation is warranted. While the main function of it is to turn anything that is not a God/Buddha or Dragon God into a hybrid of devil and whatever their original species is, it also holds a few secondary functions such as giving those reincarnated as rooks more strength than the other pieces. As far as I can tell, that function was a choice in order to help the reincarnated devils specialise in their strengths. It is somewhat similar to the summoning of the Holy Grail in the sense that it places the reincarnated devil into a class like the grail places heroes into a class. Lancers would be Knights, Sabers would be Queens, Casters would be Bishops, Rooks would be lucid Berserkers. It does not mean that a class form the grail easily translates into a class from the Evil Piece System however, an Archer could just as well be a Bishop or a Knight. The speed of a Knight would be supremely useful for evasion while the magical reserves of a Bishop would allow an Archer like EMYIA to spam Caladbolg.

While it is an interesting piece of magic, Morgan and I figured out all of its functions within the first five years. The time would have been shorter, but we did it as humans without the help of our domains and while helping the people settle down comfortably in the city.

After that we set our sights to the Brave Saints cards. While the premise is similar, the execution is somewhat different. The Evil Pieces were designed to turn anyone into a devil as long as they are not a God/Buddha or Dragon God, like Ophis, regardless of morality. The Brave Saints however had to take things like morality into account since an angel not 'Pure Hearted' will simply turn into a Fallen Angel which would be counteractive to the Brave Saint's purpose. As such it is possible to be rejected by the system.

With our knowledge of the systems we were able to create our own version of it. The first function is the same as both the Evil Pieces and the Brave Saint cards, it turns the chosen into an Edenian. However I was not satisfied with that. While the average Edenian is not weaker than the average devil in terms of magic, physically they lose out easily. My second problem came about when I realised that a devil's potential for growth is much larger than an Edenian's. Give a devil and an Edenian the same amount of time to become more powerful and the devil will easily outstrip the Edenian. I do not want some no name devil to go train for some three years and kill one of my Edenian who has trained for a decade. My third issue came in the form of loyalty. How do I keep them loyal to me without brain washing them. The devils use the fear of becoming a Stray and being hunted down in order to dissuade reincarnated devils from going rogue, but I have no interest of doing that to my people and I don't plan on dedicating part of my forces to simply hunting down rogues. With these problems coming to light, Morgan and I returned to the lab to get back to work.

The first problem to be fixed was easily the one about their loyalty. The answer came to me in the form of the Faith system we use in Asgard. Rather than worry about their loyalty to me, I will let the pieces do the work for me. It won't force them to be loyal or even strengthen their loyalty, heck it will barely interact with their mind. No, the pieces will simply keep track of their loyalty to me and when it reaches a point where they are disloyal it will remove itself from them while also turning them back into whatever species they were and taking away whatever strength or power they gained through the piece. Not only will it do that, but it will also keep a log of how close they are to becoming disloyal and why, allowing me to see it.

The second problem to be fixed was surprisingly the first and we did not even need to do anything to fix it. Rather than alter the Edenian genome to make them more physically powerful, we decided to use their ridiculous potential for magic to fix the issue, and the nasuverse magic system is perfect for that. While an Edenian will most likely be weaker to a devil physically at a base level, with reinforcement they will be easily be able to keep up. Now while reinforcement used by a human will not allow them to dominate a servant or anyone higher in physical combat, Edenians are not humans. Yes Edenians share many similarities with humans, and one may even argue that Edenians are the much more evolved version of humans, that difference plays a major role here. An Edenian's body is easily as tough as an average High Class devil's body and that's all without training. Morgan and I theorise that due to the brutal and savage nature of the MK world, most species focused more on toughness and stamina when evolving as opposed to strength and speed. As such the body of an Edenian can easily withstand reinforcement. However, being the maniac that we are, Morgan and I decided to make the pieces give the wielder an instinctual level of how to perform reinforcement along with perfect control of their magical energy. With a little bit of training even the least talented Edenian will be able to use reinforcement to move as fast as Setanta's Lancer Servant form. All of this is without factoring in their training at the hands of Arturia's knights or without factoring in Touki.

The final problem was a bit harder to solve, but eventually we did. Using a drop of my ichor, divine blood, to alter the Edenian genome, we were able to give them the same insane potential that a genius demigod would have. As long as their body can handle it and they put in a certain amount of work, then they will easily grow in power. That does not however make them demigods since the amount I used was not enough, but it does give them the potential to use any of the powers related to my domain or create sub branches of those powers. It also gives them the ability to become more powerful and breath under water, along with the ability to talk to any sea life and horses.

With that final problem solved, the prototype was created. With their creation however, came a thought. The Isle of Man currently has a population of 53,314 with 10,000 of those being warriors that trained under the Knights of the Round Table. As such I no longer need to create Edenian bodies to put the souls of heroes from the Throne into. However, I already have scanning of most of their souls and not making use of them would be a waste. With that thought I started another round of experiments, implementing imprints on those souls and seeing how they affected the pieces. I wanted to see if I could give the Edenians the same prodigious talent that some of the heroes had.

At first it did not work since there were too many imprints and they heavily clashed against one another. Therefore I narrowed it down to six imprints per piece, one for each class of the Holy Grail, minus Berserker, based on their skills and personality. For Saber I chose Lancelot for his skills, for Archer I chose Arjuna for both his skill with the bow and his personality, Lancer was Guan Yu for his military genius and skill with polearms, Caster was Medea, Assassin was Cursed Armed Hassan, and for Rider I chose Achilles.

With that done I travelled to the mainland and captured the worst humans I could find before infusing them with the pieces. The results were immediate, they were faster, stronger, tougher and one even blasted me with the Power of Destruction. Once I subdued them, I looked further to find any changes caused by the soul imprints. My findings were great to say the least. While they did not receive personal skills that the imprints did not possess in their life, even if legends say they did, they did receive all of the class skills and the life skills of whichever soul imprint they resonated with. If they did not resonate with any of the imprints then they only received the class skills. With my experiments done, I disposed of them before returning home.

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AN: Here's the chapter. As usual, tell me what you guys think, especially since I tried to do a montage of what happened in a few years. Since we don't know when the Great War began or when it ended, I'm putting the end of it around 500 AD which will also be the time where Camelot falls and Arthur dies.

Also the first chapter of my Campione fic is published. The name of it is The Godslaying King. The second chapter is already available on my p a t r e o n The link is, (p a t r e o n . com / servantambrosius), minus the spaces. That story will be updated once a week and patrons will be able to read chapters a week in advance along with other patreon exclusive content such as the Authorities that I have come up with and are considering for the main character.
 
As usual good chapter. Only issue is the population of the island seems to large for the current time period.
In 1960 the population was about 50000. Today it's around 85000.
 
As usual good chapter. Only issue is the population of the island seems to large for the current time period.
In 1960 the population was about 50000. Today it's around 85000.
I didn't that it was at 50,000 in 1960, but I did know that it is at around 85,000 today which is why I felt that 53,000 was a good number
 
Medea, Hassan and arjuna subpar choice personality-wise. Karna, Leonardo and fuma kotero or Hassan of serenity or king Hassan better choice.
Not really, Medea's personality is that of someone who lost their innocence and as such has nothing but her personal beliefs stopping her from crossing certain lines (remember she freed the children that Atram had planned to sacrifice, before completely destroying his workshop.) While it is hard to gain her trust, once you do it is unwavering until you do something that she sees as a betrayal.

Arjuna is extremely diligent, just and upright. He almost has a flawless personality except for the fact that he has a tendency to bury any emotion that he feels are evil which in turn feeds his second 'personality' Black. A personality that schemes, scorns and makes evil plots against anyone that Arjuna hates. To allies it doesn't cause a problem.

As for Cursed Arm Hassan, he's extremely loyal to anyone that he perceives as a master. It only seemed to be a bad thing to us because Zouken was his master. As for him not having any problems with Zouken's actions, well the man is an assassin from the time of the legend of the Old Man on the mountain. I bet you that he's seen worse and has problem done worse for the Organization. It's honestly a good personality for an assassin.
 
Not really, Medea's personality is that of someone who lost their innocence and as such has nothing but her personal beliefs stopping her from crossing certain lines (remember she freed the children that Atram had planned to sacrifice, before completely destroying his workshop.) While it is hard to gain her trust, once you do it is unwavering until you do something that she sees as a betrayal.

Arjuna is extremely diligent, just and upright. He almost has a flawless personality except for the fact that he has a tendency to bury any emotion that he feels are evil which in turn feeds his second 'personality' Black. A personality that schemes, scorns and makes evil plots against anyone that Arjuna hates. To allies it doesn't cause a problem.

As for Cursed Arm Hassan, he's extremely loyal to anyone that he perceives as a master. It only seemed to be a bad thing to us because Zouken was his master. As for him not having any problems with Zouken's actions, well the man is an assassin from the time of the legend of the Old Man on the mountain. I bet you that he's seen worse and has problem done worse for the Organization. It's honestly a good personality for an assassin.
Leonardo's brilliance is a better alternative, also why introduce a bitter person in the template where you can use a better more talented servant?

Karna is more loyal without any hidden persona and a genuinely good guy. Arjuna tries to become perfect and artificially became one that created that personality. Why use defected template when a better version is present?
 
Leonardo's brilliance is a better alternative, also why introduce a bitter person in the template where you can use a better more talented servant?
Leonardo is more brilliant but Medea has far more potential in terms of magic.
Karna is more loyal without any hidden persona and a genuinely good guy. Arjuna tries to become perfect and artificially became one that created that personality. Why use defected template when a better version is present?
Because Arjuna's second personality isn't a problem. The templates do not merge them together, nor does it make it so that the person becomes like the template. All it does is give them the prodigious talents of the hero, all the class skills of the six classes, and if the soul resonates with one of the templates then they gain the same life skills. Also you have to remember that this is a prototype
 
Are you going to create Demi servants by impacting heroic spirits in newborns?
The newborn's soul would definitely get overwhelmed by the servant even though it isn't the actual soul. A child would definitely be better since their sense of self is probably strong enough to survive but weak enough that if the souls aren't completely compatible the backlash won't be too severe.

However he won't because that would mean experimenting on children and because there would be no point. Any demi servant would be much weaker than the New Edenians and their potential and growth wouldn't be as good
 
The newborn's soul would get overwhelmed by the servant even though it isn't the actual soul. A child would be better since their sense of self is probably strong enough to survive but weak enough that if the souls aren't completely compatible the backlash won't be too severe.

However, he won't because that would mean experimenting on children and because there would be no point. Any demi servant would be much weaker than the New Edenians and their potential and growth wouldn't be as good
Maybe provide them with the body of a newborn which allows them to have the potential while they can use their skills and experience to get further boost their potential.
 
So you've set the story to the past. Interesting. Though, I wonder how the factions will feel seeing the evil piece and brave saint systems millennia before it's inception.
 
Angelic Knights
Isle of Man
~ 472 AD


Two years, that's how long it has been since my final experiment with Edenian Metamorph System, or EMS for short. Morgan and Azula have not only commented on my horrible naming skills, but have outright teased me for it. Until they come up with a better name for it however it shall remain as such. The past two years have been filled with my finetuning of the system and finalising the training of the warriors by having them partake in full on live combat against the Knights of the Round or against us. The battles are usually one on one or team versus team and are also dangerous enough that the trainees can actually die from them, or at least that's what they think. In reality they cannot die from those spars simply because the arena in which they take place is based on the Rating Game arenas that the Devils use in the future but with more liberal conditions.

Rather than teleport them out when they come close to dying, it teleports them out once they are physically and mentally incapable of doing anything to save themselves. Naturally this leaves a loophole in the form of them getting one shot killed, but the fact that it has not happened yet is a testament to their skills and power. Yes, we are still holding back, but at this point the only thing that we are not doing is speed blitzing them to death and spamming our destructive abilities. The layout is usually whoever is facing a trainee starts out fighting with the same level as them before slowly increasing it until they are overwhelmed, and to be honest the trainees have exceeded all of our expectations. Not only have they all unlocked Touki, but they've experimented with to the point that even the weakest one of them can use it to negate any magical attack that reaches up to low Ultimate Class and only be knocked out while the strongest of them can outright tank those and would only become unconscious from mid Ultimate Class. While that might not seem impressive at first, one must remember that they are all normal humans and that the gap between High Class and Ultimate Class is quite vast. A comparison would be me as a demigod in PJO compared to Percy. While Percy is a powerful demigod, I was accomplishing the same feats as him, and even greater feats, with less than half of the effort.

Ironically enough this has made it so that the Knights of the Round have to rely more on their skills as opposed to the huge magical beams, an action that has made the trainees begin to lose more and more of the battles because no matter how powerful they get they are still less skilled and less physically powerful than the Knights who easily rest in the realm of Ultimate Class. Which makes me wonder, how powerful will they be once they are infused with the EMS. While the pieces are complete, I want to wait until the trainees have full control over their power and are comfortable before turning them, something that won't happen for at least one more year since some of them are seeing signs of more growth through the battles.

Before I can give any more thought to the question a knock on the door brings me out of my musings.

"Enter." I say as I look up from the workbench where six EMS pieces lie. Unlike the EMS pieces that I will use on the trainees, which are crystal clear and shaped in the form of a serpentine dragon that resembles the MK symbol, these are white and gold and shaped into the form of Knights standing guard with their swords planted on the ground in front of them.

"Father." greets Mordred as she steps in with Arturia and the Knights of the Round following her. While there are fifteen Knights in the Round table, Arturia included, only five have been brought to life, Percival, Palamedes, Tristan, Lancelot, and Bedivere. The others were not brought back for various reasons ranging from they deserved to rest in peace, to the fact that they would not be able to accept the new status quo of Mordred leading them. "You wanted to see us?" she asks as they step in and close the door behind them.

"Yes. Your pieces are ready." I tell her as I push the case containing them towards them. Hearing my words, the Knights seem to perk up in excitement as Mordred makes her way to the workbench.

"Are these it?" she asks as she picks up the case.

"They are. All you need to do is put a drop of your ichor on them to attune them to you." I instruct her.

"How are these different from the normal ones?" she asks while following my instructions.

"These are made specifically for you and your Knights while taking your domains into account. Once a Knight is infused with it they will turn into an Angel/God hybrid." I begin to explain.

"An angel? As in the same ones from this world?" she asks as we watch the pieces absorb her blood before beginning to emit a slight golden glow.

"Not really. The only reason I call them such is because they will gain angelic wings. The true 'race' that they will be, for a lack of better term, is god. They will become minor gods of your domains with their main domain being whatever their personalities are more compatible with. They will not fall unless they completely betray you, and should they do so then the penalty is the same as the regular EMS pieces. As such, I call these pieces Angelic Knights. Also, these pieces are infused with their own personal imprints." I explain.

"Their imprints? Why?" she asks as she observes the biggest piece, the master piece and the one that will fuse with her. It serves as nothing more than a link to bind the other pieces to her and to give her angel wings, something that she's made clear that she doesn't want. Just imagining her face when wings sprout from her back makes me want to laugh since according to her they look ridiculous. Other than that it also serves to empower the wielders of the other pieces, the more powerful she is the more powerful they become.

"Because their servant counterparts possess skills that they themselves do not. For example, as a servant Lancelot would gain the skill Knight of the Owner. A skill that allows to turn anything he touches into an A-rank noble phantasm. Since we did not turn him into a servant before bringing him back to life, then he does not possess it." I explain to them.

"Makes sense. Is there anything else I need to know?" she wonders.

"Once the transformation is complete they'll be able to access a more human form without the wings but with the same powers." I tell her.

"So what's the purpose of the wings?" she asks me.

"Purely cosmetic. They can fly without them and access their full power without them. I just gave them wings because I thought that the concept was interesting. Although, the more powerful they are, the more wings they get until they reach twelve and merge into one massive pair of wings." I explain, making her nod before she infuses the master piece into herself. As soon the piece fuses with her, a massive angelic wing explodes from her back and sends the Knights of the Round flying through the wall behind them while also destroying everything else in the room.

Mordred, barely understanding what just happened, can only stare at her new appendages with a mortified expression on her face.

"Oi, dad…" she whispers as she slowly turns her face to look at me. "...what is this?" she asks, her eyes wide with horror while her mouth hangs open. Rather than answer I merely give her a smile just as Morgan appears next to me with a camera in her hands and snaps a couple of pictures while giggling.

"Perfect." she says with a smile as we high five each other.

"Mom? You knew about this?!" demands Mordred.

"Of course. I helped him make the pieces after all." she proudly answers while taking a few more pictures.

"I told you that I didn't want wings!" she exclaims.

"Why not? Can you imagine how awesome you'll look when you come from the sky to save lives with you massive wings flapping behind you?" I ask her as the pair of wings twitch just as the Knights come near her and once again sends them flying back.

"Can you stop doing that!" she orders her wings before turning back to her mother and I. "And I don't look awesome, I look just as ridiculous as those pigeons in Heaven." she argues.

"I beg to differ, those wings are majestic and look like the wings of an apex predator, not a pigeon's." replies Morgan.

"Argh!" screams Morgan while accidentally flexing her wings and causing more destruction in my workshop. "Fix this!" she orders, reminding me of when she was just a child and making me chuckle in fondness.

"Sorry dear, but we don't know how to." answers Morgan even though we easily can fix it.

"Of course you can, you did this." she rebutes with a hopeful expression on her face that slowly turns to despair once she sees us shaking our heads regretfully. "Fine, I hope that you have better luck fixing yourselves first." she says as power gathers in the palm of her hands and she blasts us through a wall with it. Since my workshop is connected to one of the outer walls of the castle, we are blasted right through the wall, out of the castle and into the city below.

"That actually hurt a bit." I observe as I catch myself mid flight and stop at a hover.

"Was that your divine Power of Destruction?" questions Morgan as she hovers next to me while rubbing her stomach.

"Yes, but how did she get it. Last I checked she did not get anything from the blood adoption ritual." I comment while waving away the concerned citizens with a smile.

"Did you use your ichor to empower those pieces?" asks Morgan as we fly back into my empty workshop, with Mordred no doubt leaving to blow off some steam while taking her pieces with her.

"I use my ichor to empower all of the pieces. The only difference with these and the normal EMS ones is that those also have Sindel's and my Edenian blood in them to serve as the base for the Edenian genome." I explain.

"Between your demigod blood and your ichor I theorise that it's enough for any dormant power within her to activate. She should observe her to see if she awakens any other ones." says Morgan as we begin to fix the workshop.

"How long do you think it'll take her to figure out that she can retract her wings?" I ask with a smile.

"Once she starts thinking, which will probably take a few days, I say a few minutes." replies Morgan with a laugh before she begins to contemplate something. "I wonder… is it possible to create a perfect hybrid of Devil and Angel?" she wonders out loud.

"Angel or Fallen Angel?" I ask her.

"Angel. A hybrid of Devil and Angel with all of their powers by none of the drawbacks." she answers.

"Possible, but we would need to use a third race to act as a buffer. Human would probably be best."

"But what if we did one without a buffer. Is it possible? What would it look like? Would they have a specialty? Would it require a new magic system? All of these questions that need to be answered." she rants off with glee before quietly thinking about how to go about it.

"Wanna find out?" I ask her after a few moments of silence.

"Yes!" she exclaims as she magically fixes the workshop before summoning a notebook to her hands. And just like that we have another project.

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AN: Here's the chapter. As usual, tell me what you guys think. As you can see this arc won't have the same serious tone as the others, at least not until we get to the war.

Also the first chapter of my Campione fic is published. The name of it is The Godslaying Pharaoh, not King. I changed it since it fits more in line with the theme I will be using for the mc. The second chapter is already available on my p a t r e o n The link is, (p a t r e o n . com / servantambrosius), minus the spaces. That story will be updated once a week and patrons will be able to read chapters a week in advance along with other patreon exclusive content such as the Authorities that I have come up with and are considering for the main character.
 
Morningstar
Isle of Man


~ 482 AD


The Evil Pieces and Brave Saint cards are useless, at least in this endeavor. While their function is to turn humans and other species, in the case of the Evil Pieces, into their respective races of Devil and Angel, they don't turn them into Purebloods but rather into a hybrid of Devil and their original race. While I have no problem with reincarnated Devils nor believe them to be inferior to purebloods, there is a fundamental difference between the two that makes purebloods more prone to act based on their desires and more susceptible to fall to anything holy or related to Yahweh. While one could argue that those differences makes them inferior to reincarnated devils, the truth of the matter is that it also gives them a head start over their reincarnated counterparts in terms of power.


In terms of the Brave Saint system we haven't been able to find any difference between reincarnated angels compared to pureblood angels since we have no pureblood angels to compare them to, whereas with the Evil pieces we could compare them to Azula who is a pureblood devil. As such when we created lifeless homunculi to turn into angels we couldn't tell whether they would pass off as pureblood angels. However none of those reasons are why the Evil Pieces and Brave Saints are useless, no those reasons simply make it more complicated when trying to create an angel/devil hybrid. The true reason why they are useless is because they don't mix well at all.


Our first experiment began with trying to turn a lifeless pureblood devil homunculi into an angel. That resulted in the destruction of the homunculi body as the opposing forces tore it apart in an attempt to destroy one another. The second attempt was with an angel that we tried to turn into a devil with the resulting being the same. Our third attempt was to start from scratch by creating a body with the genetics of both species. Like the previous attempts, this one was also a failure.


It was then that we decided to take a step back and ponder about what we know about both species and why their genetics are so conflicting. The answer came easily enough in the form of God. When Lucifer, Beelzebub, Leviathan, and Asmodeus fell, they went to the Underworld where Lucifer created the first devils, the 72 Pillars. They were meant to be the generals of his forces to take over Earth and to defeat the angels. As such it makes no sense for them to be weak against anything holy, light, or God related. Morgan and I refused to believe that Lucifer would be stupid enough to make his forces naturally weak against the very enemies he created them to defeat. This only left us with one plausible answer, after their creation someone imposed that weakness upon them and who better to do so than his father and creator the big G himself.


For all of Lucifer's genius and cunning he overlooked one fact, God created him. While that might not mean anything for other beings and deities, when it comes to the big G it matters for one simple reason, everything created by him is part of a system and has set rules that they must follow. So while Lucifer did successfully rebel he was still in the system as a fallen angel until he created the ritual that creates devils. Unfortunately for Luci, while it did somewhat remove him from the system it was not enough to stop God for imposing those weaknesses onto him and his new race of soldiers. From henceforth Devils became weak to light and anything holy and blessed.


With that revelation came a roadblock and a question. How do we reverse that? We didn't even need to experiment to know that doing so would require us to put in more effort than we are willing to. While this is an interesting project, we certainly don't care enough about it to mess up God's entire system for it. So we went with another round, creating a tribrid.


We once again began with a lifeless Edenian homunculi before turning it into a Devil/Edenian hybrid. Afterwards we began the process of integrating the angelic genes into it. The process was slow, methodical, and required us to pay close attention to the merge in case something went awry. The first time was a failure with the process happening too fast to be regulated properly. The second however was a success. When the merge was first completed the homunculus showed signs of extreme light poisoning and was quite sickly, but as time went on the Edenian part of its genome adapted to it until it gave the Devil part of it immunity to anything holy, light, or blessed.


With this success we replicated the process countless times until we were able to find the optimal process to get it done.Which brings us to now. Morgan and I are currently in our shared workshop looking at our most recent creations, a pair of tribrid Edenian/Angel/Devil homunculi.


The first one is a male who floats naked within an empty, clear vat. He stands at five feet nine inches, possesses a tan skin of a slightly lighter shade than mine, midnight black hair, and a face so beautiful that anyone can be charmed by it. In addition to his already beautiful face and despite not being alive, he possesses an aura that would make anyone around him fall over themselves trying to please him, even if it only means receiving a simple thank you as a reward. And despite not having trained a single time he possesses a powerful build perfect for any style of combat. None of those however are what draw my attention, rather it is the twelve massive wings that emerge from his back. Unlike the Angel's wings which are slim, and do in fact look like a pigeon's wings, his are of a similar size to Mordred's massive pair. However the similarities end there. His wings are shaped like what one would imagine a demon's wings to be like, but made with feathers as opposed to being leathery. Last but not least, the wings are pure white and possess a golden glow to them that simply makes him more majestic and beautiful.


The second homunculus is a female who somehow manages to be far more beautiful than her male counterpart despite possessing the same features as him. Naturally unlike him however she possesses a pair of firm breasts, and a much more seductive body while still being fit for combat.


"This… this is unexpected." comments Morgan as we observe the two homunculi floating in their vats under their own power despite not possessing any life. "Their bodies are so powerful that even without a way for it to be outputted they still leak enough power to float on their own. This goes beyond us perfecting the process, we've perfected the creation itself. Or at least as close to perfection as we can currently get." she says.


"What now?" I ask her as she approaches the duo.


"We bring them to life." she answers as divine power explodes from her before plunging into the two of them. Unlike what I expected to happen, the two beings remain floating in the air as if nothing had happened. Before I can ask her if something went wrong the door to our workshop is blown open and Scáthach strides in with a frown on her face.


"Are you two ever planning on coming out?" she questions as she stops a few feet away from me with her hands on her hips.


"What do you mean? We came out of the lab a few months ago." I answer with a frown.


"Ambrosius, it's been three years." says Scáthach, making my eyes widen in shock. Before I can answer however two auras of power explode from behind me and blast Morgan, Scáthach, and I out of the lab.


"What did you two do now?" questions Scáthach as we catch ourselves and come to a stop in midair.


"I did not do anything." I answer while turning to face the blinding light behind me where the auras are coming from. While not powerful enough to worry us, they are powerful enough to easily be the most powerful beings on the island after Mordred.


As they power down and the light dims, I can easily make out the bodies of our creations floating towards us.


"Morgan, what did you do?" questions Scáthach, this time directing her question to Morgan.


"Other than breathe life into them along with giving them some basic information, nothing." she replies as the two approach us with their massive wings flapping behind them. The sheer power coming from them is so massive that I can feel every curious warrior on the island making their way to us in order to investigate with a specific one actually rushing. Stopping a few feet away from us the two beings regard us with blank looks before a smile grows on their faces.


"Father! Mother!" excitedly calls out the duo before enveloping Morgan and I into a group hug.


"What did you do?" I ask Morgan mentally.


"Ahhh…I may or may not have informed the two of them about how they were created along with knowledge of the family." she sheepishly answers.


"Well, another pair of children is certainly better than a pair of homicidal creations." I reply while prying myself from them. "Do you have a name that you would like to be called by?" I ask them, causing them to tilt their heads in wonder.


"You may call me Venus, father." replies the female with a slight smile on her face and a nod.


"And you may call me Lucifer." answers the male.


Their choice of names causes me to smile while Morgan simply laughs at the absurdity of it. Before I can answer them however a painfully familiar voice makes itself known behind.


"Oi old man, still adopting strays I see." calls out the voice of Setanta from behind me. As I contemplate how to answer him Lucifer disappears from his position and appears right next to Setanta, grabbing his head and slamming it to the ground.


"You will be respectful to father." says the tribrid with a stoic glare. Rather than answer, Setanta simply grabs Lucifer's wrist and burns it. Unfazed, whether due to a high pain tolerance or high durability, Lucifer lifts him in the air, giving him the opportunity to summon Gae Bolg and stab Lucifer in the heart. Surprised, Lucifer lets him go and looks down at the gaping hole in his chest that disappears in under a second. Were it not for the golden blood on Setanta's spear one would think that Lucifer getting stabbed was an illusion or a trick of the light.


"Enough!" orders Scáthach before the duo can go at it again. While Cu obeys, Lucifer merely looks at me for instructions before following suit once he sees me nod my head.


"Old man, you didn't tell me that your new kid was a battle maniac. Although he does need to work on his skills" says Setanta with a smirk, almost as if Lucifer did not just use his face to crack the ground. "Still, I wouldn't mind going a round or two with him in the arena." he adds, causing Lucifer to glare at him.


"Setanta, why are you here? And when did you arrive?" I ask him with an exasperated sigh as Lucifer floats back to my side before continuing to glare at his adoptive older brother.


"Three years ago. You two have been in that lab for three years, and some things have changed since then." answers Scáthach.


"I didn't think that it was that long. Especially since I have my divinity sealed tight. Which makes me wonder, can all Edenians spend that long without food?" I question, making Scáthach glare at me.


"You will not experiment. As of now you two are banned from entering the workshop unless absolutely necessary." she orders, earning a glare from both Venus and Lucifer. Unbothered, she leads us away from the workshop and towards a lounge where we stumble upon two people I did not expect to see here, Connla and Aoife. Setanta's son and granddaughter.


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AN: Here's the chapter. As usual, tell me what you guys think. As you can see this arc won't have the same serious tone as the others, at least not until we get to the war.


Also the first chapter of my Campione fic is published. The name of it is The Godslaying Pharaoh, not King. I changed it since it fits more in line with the theme I will be using for the mc. The second chapter is already available on my p a t r e o n The link is, (p a t r e o n . com / servantambrosius), minus the spaces. That story will be updated once a week and patrons will be able to read chapters a week in advance along with other patreon exclusive content such as the Authorities that I have come up with and are considering for the main character.
 
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