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We know Momonga wasn't the only one left on the servers when it closed, the Six Great Gods, Eight Greed Kings, and others are testament to that. So what happens when instead of Nazarick appearing alone, another Player arrives in the New World at the same time as him? Will it be enough for our favorite Bone Lord to remain sane, or is he damned regardless?
Especially now that the denizens of the actual Yggdrasil are taking an interest in these powerful beings that claim to be from the World Tree.

Inspired by Ten Tailed God's A Vulpine Spanner in the Works
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Chapter 1
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Analia


Server shutdown in T-00:27:23…22…21…

It was YGGDRASIL's last day online, and I sat in my [Hidden Workshop], hunched over my jeweler's station, tinkering away at a monocle, brow lightly furrowed in concentration as I ground my way through YGGDRASIL's crafting mechanic, my Hammer tinking away as my nine vibrantly orange fox tails with white tips slowly waved behind me.

When I'd joined YGGDRASIL, I'd somehow, I blame my bad eyesight, misread first-person as third-person and designed my character accordingly. Because if I'm going to be staring at an ass for God knows how many hours it might as well be a good looking one. Taller than most men, pretty, with long fox-orange hair and fur, shockingly amber slitted eyes, a large but still realistically sized bust, and slender like a swimmer, even after I'd realized my mistake I hadn't cared enough about playing as a female to go through the hassle of having my player profile completely reset. Seeing eye candy whenever I looked in a reflective surface didn't hurt either.

I'd chosen to be a [Kitsune] for one very important reason… Fluffy Tails~. Gotta touch them all, right? But where the other kitsune had gone down the mage, wizard, or sorcerer paths – for good reason, the potential synergies with our racial bonuses were unreal – I'd gone down the crafter path, as that was what had drawn me to the game in the first place.

Kitsune crafters had a unique mechanic: we could take multiple crafting disciplines at the cost of multiplying our xp requirements, and that after level 20 I needed to make a masterwork quality item with an item level equal to or higher than my level to advance. Which was quite tricky because item levels were not something that was visible to Players under normal circumstances, especially once you got into the Divine tier which seemed to start at level 85.

Given that non-crafting kitsune needed to go on a multi-boss win streak every ten levels to keep progressing, I felt I had got the better deal as I got really good at making masterworks… even if finding the materials needed to make high level items once I hit level 70 was an absolute slog. It wasn't until I was able to get ahold of Prismatic Ores that I could reliably make items that would allow me to advance.

Crafting in YGGDRASIL was a bit odd, mainly because any player could shove data crystals into an item skin, negating the traditional need for people with production classes. But those of us with a crafting class? We are far more efficient, able to get the same result with less, or better with an equal amount, and that's not getting in to how high-level crafters could tweak item abilities during the crafting process.

Once you got into the end game, with Legendary and Divine tier items, whose mat drops were rare on top of only dropping from rare monsters, that crafting efficiency became irreplaceable. To the point where if the local heteromorph, like me, was the only one who could forge your infinity +1 sword without you having to spend another month, or five, grinding, you plugged your nose and paid them.

And to keep people from stiffing me, I only accepted payment up front, and forwarded notice of the contract to the relevant crafter's guild to keep someone from trying anything funny after the fact.

But I wasn't working on a commission right now. I hadn't had any in almost a month, business having dried up with the announcement of YGGDRASIL's impending shutdown. This project was something I had wondered if I could do for… years now, but hadn't dared before. If it worked, it would call down attention onto me that I would not survive. But that didn't matter now.

Last day. Last chance.

The lens of the monocle was made from a shard of the Bifrost, an ultra-rare divine-tier drop. The frame and chain was made from Divinite, an iridescent metal with no fixed color. A Player-made alloy crafted from the seven Prismatic Ores, and THE rarest material in the game. On their own, that would have guaranteed the end result to be a powerful divine-tier artifact, but I could push it further. My secret? The World Item Forge Hammer of Yggdrasil, which was currently in the shape of a jeweler's chisel, with a Divinite head and a shaft from off-white Yggdrasil heartwood. I'd received it by being the first person to discover Divinite, beating my competition by less than half an hour. To say they were salty was an understatement, I'd wound up having to flee from my workshop in Nidavellir over the fallout from that.

Thing is, crafters have limits. The Hammer allows me to break them. Anything that a Player can edit, any Player, under any circumstances, no matter how rare, the Hammer can edit. No specific data crystals needed.

Equipment, consumables, buildings, NPCs, possibly even Guild Bases (though I'd never dared to check that, and the Hammer's description was vague), all could have their data edited by the Hammer. There were restrictions of course. Players were off limits, as were monsters, bosses, and quest/unique NPCs. And while editing items only cost mana, editing NPCs cost xp as well. Also, the base materials an item is made from have a data limit. As an example, you couldn't cram a divine-tier enchantment into an iron sword, iron didn't have enough data space.

I'd taken great care to ensure no one knew I had a World Item.

I'm not useless in a fight, but I'm a crafter, not a PvP specialist. And while I am a member of the Asgard Crafters Guild – guess where I'm set up now – I'm not one of the core members. Both because I'm a Demi-human that was "upgraded" to a Heteromorph when I took [Nine Tailed Kitsune], and because I just wasn't interested in socializing with them. The feeling was definitely mutual too, what with me being a gaijin as well. But, thanks in no small part to the Hammer, I was one of the best crafters in the game in addition to being one of the very few able to forge and work Divinite, which was why they plugged their collective noses and let me in.

At least Guild Master HammerAndThunder was a good person who didn't subscribe to the bigotry. He even let me buy an NPC to run my shop. It was kind of an open secret that he had an in with the devs, or was one himself, because the guild had a lot of NPCs, even if they were very low level. Mine didn't stay that way for long, of course.

Then again, maybe he had a World Item like I did, and actively encouraged that rumor to keep it from being stolen.

On my end, while I used the Hammer constantly, I made sure the end result was only a little bit better than what the next best crafter in the guild could do, giving the impression that it was a combination of talent and the racial class [Kitsune Grandmaster Craftswoman] that let me do it.

But for the monocle, I was going all out. Compared to Divine items which usually had at most three abilities, I'd already added [Translate], [Night Vision], [Heat Vision], [Farsight], [Magnification], and was currently adding [Mana Si-

A wet cough exploded out of me and I quickly put my tools aside so I wouldn't accidentally ruin my project as I descended into another coughing fit.

This one wasn't as bad as the others, bile didn't come up this time at least, but it still left me half curled on the floor blinking tears out of my eyes.

Neural-Interface technology was an amazing thing, but there were some inputs from your flesh and blood body it couldn't, by design, block out.

Respiratory issues was one of those.

Fucking rich pricks dumping toxic waste into drinking water just to save a couple of fucking

I forced the thought from my mind. There'd be plenty of time for me to rant later, I wanted to enjoy what was left of YGGDRASIL now.

Why couldn't YGGDRASIL have shut down three months from now? I would have been dead by then. Only had two months of savings left anyways, so after month three I'll OD on sleeping pills rather than be tossed out onto the streets to die. Assuming I last that long.

With a moan I pulled myself back onto the stool in front of my jewelry workstation and rested my head on the table, listening to myself wheeze.

A knock on the doorframe drew my attention to the currently open doors separating the pocket dimension of my [Hidden Workshop] with my store front. Which admittedly kind of negated the "hidden" part of the skill, but that was what the inner adamantine door, and pseudo airlock it was set in, was for, to keep people out while allowing me to listen in on what was going in my shop through the barred window set in it and pass items through its' mail slot to my NPC shopkeeper. With the rapidly declining player base, and complete dearth of customers, as YGGDRASIL reached its conclusion, I hadn't bothered closing it in the past few days, not wanting do deal with the security enchantments that kept out thieves.

Standing in the doorway was a tall, thin, handsome male kitsune with nine white-tipped tails, the orange of his fur several shades darker than mine.

"VulpineCenturion, we have several potions of [Divine Disease Cure] in stock," he intoned.

"No thank you, Taro," I rasped tiredly, "please go back to the counter."

I turned back to the monocle as I heard my NPC walk back to the store counter, where he was stationed when he wasn't restocking the store's consumables. Every time I had a coughing fit within his hearing it triggered his "Player is afflicted with a [Disease]" AI sub-routine and he's remind me that I had various [Disease Cure] potions in stock. The AI was just trying to be helpful… but it wasn't my character that was dying. Unfortunately.

…I didn't want to die… but the hand I was dealt wasn't giving me a choice in the matter.

And despite my best efforts with the Hammer, I couldn't get Taro to refer to my character by the roleplay name I'd given her, Analia Vulpes. He had a very extensive backstory now though, he and my character were even mates according to the lore I'd given him.

I'd been very depressed when I'd wrote that. I'd just figured out that I wasn't going to survive whatever I've got, and wanted someone, anyone, even if it was a few lines of non-sentient code, to wonder where I was when I didn't come home one day.

Like a lot of people, my parents were dead before I was out of my teens. Both my siblings hadn't survived infancy. No friends. Not even a pet like the rich and some of the less-destitute have.

Just YGGDRASIL, and Taro.

Soon not even that.

I picked up my Hammer, and went back to completing the [Mana Sight] enchantment.



~~~FOX OF THE FORGE~~~





Taro


T+00:00:00…01…02…




The sudden shift of the view through the shop windows from the eternally lit white and gold of Asgard to the darkness of night caused me to startle, nearly slamming my hand down on the big red button under the counter that would sound alarms and send the shop into lockdown.

After a long, tense minute of me resting my fingers on the button, ready for some thief or assassin to come bursting through the shop door… nothing happened. And nothing continued to happen.

Finally coming to the conclusion that we were not, currently, under attack, I rounded the counter with hurried stride, coming to a stop next to one of the display mannequins as I peered out the display window at our new surroundings.

We were obviously not on Asgard anymore. We weren't even in a city. By the light coming from illumination crystals in the store streaming through the windows I could see where the white marble paving stones just ended in a sheer line several meters in front of the store and a light forest began.

Still cautious, I flipped the sign from open to closed, sealed the adamantine shutters, and stepped outside to take a quick look around, locking the door behind me with my key.

It occurred to me that I couldn't remember the last time I had stepped outside the shop, which was a depressing thought. I'd been on Asgard for how many years and never saw the sights? That's just shameful.

Casting a wary look around the dark forest, my eyes slowly adjusting to the low light, the 7th​ tier spell [Greater Foxfire Lance] primed in my hand, I sniffed the air to smell what was around us.

The scent of squirrels, birds, a pair of mortal foxes, rodents, deer, and a bear came to my nose, most of them faint enough to be some distance away. Were we on Midgard?

Once my eyes adjusted I turned to inspect the shop front, which was ten meters wide and two stories tall, with a peaked roof that housed an attic. Like all shops in the Golden City it was faced in Asgardian White Marble, which seemed to glow ethereally in the moonlight, with gilded roof tiles and gold trim.

From this base VulpineCent – Analia, when did I get in the habit of not calling my mate by her name – had upgraded the windows with Helheim Veilglass, a transparent crystal with a blueish hue with material properties similar to mithril that would likely be used in mid-tier armor were it not for its rarity and expense, added adamantine shutters over the large display windows that framed the door, the dark blue of the metal contrasting with the white and gold façade, and emplaced a pair of three meter tall fox statues forged from adamantine with claws and fangs taken from an Elder Dragon and eyes of Nifilheim Radiant Emeralds on either side of the doorway. A simple sign hung above the door, made from golden wood with her maker's mark seared into the wood, a fox head encircled by nine tails, below the words Analia's Wares.

The fox statues were golems of course, their Celestial Uranium cores allowing them to be upgraded to divine-tier, and would activate when the store's alarms sounded, on command from Analia, or if they were messed with.

Turning I began to walk around the building, inspecting it for damage. The dark grey Primordial Granite that formed the store's outer walls stretched back thirty meters, intended to allow sufficient space for a crafter to set up their workshop though Analia just used it for storage.

Primordial Granite was incredibly tough stone, to the point the Aesir had gone to great effort to quarry it for use in both the great wall around Asgard and their most important buildings, but to my knowledge it had never been tested against whatever dimensional sheer used on the shop.

Thankfully, whatever had punted the shop into a different world had been bizarrely careful not to damage it. Bits and pieces of the inner walls of neighboring buildings were stuck to the outer walls, but the store itself was, as far as I could tell, completely undamaged. Even the Primordial Granite slab that had replaced the back door that normally opened onto a service alleyway was undisturbed.

Returning to the front I briefly considered exploring the forest to get a better idea of how dangerous the area was but… no. Not with Analia in such poor health. Her cough has been steadily getting worse for the past few months, what if she has a bad fit and needs me? Given how she believes that my [Disease Cure] potions won't work on it, I'm at a loss how to help her.

I ducked back in to the shop, locking the door behind me, ears flicking to the hallway behind the counter that led to the back rooms and had where the large ornate marble door that led to Analia's [Hidden Workshop] was merged with the hallway wall. Thanks to the open doors and my keen hearing I could hear her breathing from here which was… strong, deep, and regular.

I blinked, then hurried across the Asgardian Golden Applewood floor, dodging around display stands and racks filled with merchandise with long practice, stopping at the inner door of the workshop.

Analia was still bent over her jewelry workbench tinkering away… and her breathing had no trace of the fell plague that had been ravaging her lungs.

I must have spent several minutes just standing there listening to her breathe, just reveling in that my mate was healthy again. A few tears might have escaped my eyes at the realization that I would never again have to hear her coughing so violently that she couldn't even sit in a chair. Listening to her health decline and being able to do nothing to help had been horrible….

Eventually a pang of hunger reminded me that I had no idea when either of us last ate, so with some reluctance I left the workshop and made my way upstairs to the living quarters. Despite the two of us having lived in the same shop for years now, the upstairs was still quite spartan. Sure, the floor had a thick, soft greyish carpet covering it that was enchanted to be self-cleaning, the walls were clad in a rich vermillion wood, and there was furniture scattered around, but the book and display cases were empty, the walls were unadorned, and there were no decorations to be found.

Entering the kitchen I opened the mithril-clad stasis box. Given how difficult and expensive it is to make stat boosting enchanted food, the meals and drinks in the stasis box should probably be saved for a time when they were truly needed, but there was no other food in the shop, and I had no idea how old a lot of this was, which meant it needed to be eaten before it goes bad.

Grabbing a baking tray I selected a [Grilled Manticore Liver of Stamina] – that sounded really good – and a bottle of [Blossom Bee Mead of Regeneration] for Analia and a [Muspelheimer Bull Liver Pate of Fire Resistance] for me, along with another bottle of the mead. Adding some tableware and a pair of mugs to the loaded tray I took a moment to open the bottles and fill the mugs, and make sure I wasn't drooling over the liver dishes – they smelled so good – I carried the tray back downstairs to the workshop.

Seeing an empty spot I placed the tray next to Analia's right arm, getting a distracted "thank you" from her, and went to grab one of the chairs she had scattered around the workshop so we could eat together. Returning to the table I noticed her lowering her mug back onto the tray, a look of bemusement on her face as she stared at it.



~~~FOX OF THE FORGE~~~





Analia


T+00:37:11…12…13…




Nural-Interface technology is amazing, but there are somethings it just cannot do.

Simulating taste is one. Feeling liquid slide down your esophagus is another.

While Nural-Interface did have access to one's sense of taste, programmed foods were still in the uncanny valley phase, and thus YGGDRASIL foods had no taste. Second, Nural-Interface did not have access to the esophagus' nerves as it was part of the involuntary nervous system, and thus could not send your brain false signals from them.

So when I took a drink of mead from the mug, because it was there and I was getting thirsty, and not only tasted it, but felt it go down my throat, I knew something strange was going on.

In hindsight, my HUD winking out really should have tipped me off.

I stared at the mug as I slowly lowered it back onto the backing tray that had been placed on the workshop table, mind going a mile a minute.

Now that I was looking for discrepancies, I noticed I had full tactile control and proprioception feedback from my tails and ears, which was something else Neural-Interfaces couldn't do. While humans did have the neural hookups for a, note the singular, tail, they didn't have the hookups for nine of them, nor for highly mobile ears on top of my head. Neural-Interfaces could only work with what you had.

A breath brought the smells of the workshop to my nose. Ozone from the Celestial Star Forge, some repulsively pungent odors from the tanning agents, heady fumes from metal and wood working oils, the tantalizing aromas from the food on the tray, and Taro's unique scent. Though being able to recognize Taro's scent was a surprise. Why? We've been living together for years.

Like taste, smell was something YGGDRASIL didn't simulate. If you used an ability to follow a scent trail the game would give you a visible trail to follow.

On top of that, my sense of smell had been fried years ago by exposure to Earth's toxic atmosphere, and it had barely worked before then, so being able to smell at all was a shock.

This was also ignoring that I could breathe now. There was no crushing tightness in my chest, no rattle in my lungs, no sense of having to keep my breaths shallow to avoid triggering a coughing fit. I took another deep breath just to feel the novelty of air reaching all of my lungs.

A clatter caused me to look to the side where Taro set one of the tail-friendly chairs I had scattered around the place next to me and sat in it, smiling at me as he entangled our tails together. A sign of affection between kitsune.

Another anomaly. Outside of scripted cut scenes and combat, NPCs never initiated physical contact with Players. They also couldn't display this level of initiative either.

"I know you were probably saving these," he said, misinterpreting my surprised look, and gesturing at what I now realized was some of the stat-boosting food I had stashed away, "but there's nothing else to eat."

All these pieces of evidence were adding up to a single, inescapable conclusion.

I discreetly made the gesture to summon my control panel, and by now wasn't particularly surprised when it failed to appear. But there was one final test for me to do before I could be confident in my conclusion.

"Emergency Override," I murmured, "Alpha-Theta-Kappa-1-3-8 Eject eject eject."

The emergency shutdown code for my Nural-Interface, something no one used unless it was an absolute emergency because it left you with a screaming headache for hours afterword, did nothing. Not that I expected it to do anything by this point.

In conclusion,

"Huh. The shock of the servers shutting down must have killed me."



AN:

So yeah, new project. Hopefully I'll be able to finish it.

As for why I've been silent for the last… nine months… for those of you who don't know, my grandmother died last December, and my will to write kind of went with her. I do want to get back to The Last Daughter and Northern Renaissance, but my muse has currently grabbed hold of this story and is running away cackling.

As mentioned above, I was heavily inspired by Ten Tailed God's A Vulpine Spanner in the Works, but while I've borrowed several concepts, I strongly suspect I'm going to be going in a very different direction from him. For starters, Analia has a Tinker build, her fully functional workshop, and her NPC got brought along with her to the New World.

In short, all abord the Technological Revolution Train! Though even at level 100 and with a fully stocked workshop it's going to take a while for her to snowball.

Speaking of, Analia is a hyper-specialized crafting build. In a straight fight she'd struggle against Ainz Ooal Gown's Pleiades battle maids despite being level 100.

She's VERY aware of this, and intends to cheat extensively if given time to prepare.
 
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Thanks for writing! Sorry to hear about your grandmother…<3

I really like the mate and Kitsune details, plus the crafting and golems are interesting so far!
 
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I'm actually looking forward the the relationship between the Player and former NPC, I hope the whole "Accidentally creating a being that loves you but who's whole life is a lie" thing isn't ignored.
 
I'm actually looking forward the the relationship between the Player and former NPC, I hope the whole "Accidentally creating a being that loves you but who's whole life is a lie" thing isn't ignored.
Don't worry, that's going to be a source of angst, with elements of "what does it mean to be a real boy now?"
But yeah, once she gets a moment to think about it, Analia's going quite aware of the moral and ethical problems.
 
Where is the MC starting anyway.
The baharuth empire and re-estize kingdom seem the normal starting place but that puts her in early conflict with Nazarick.

somewhere else like the dwarf kingdom or the dragon kingdom that are both under siege by different beastmen factions and need every advantage they can get.
 
Where is the MC starting anyway.
The baharuth empire and re-estize kingdom seem the normal starting place but that puts her in early conflict with Nazarick.

somewhere else like the dwarf kingdom or the dragon kingdom that are both under siege by different beastmen factions and need every advantage they can get.
Two miles north of E-Rantel. I have PLANS for Nazarick, and she needs to be close enough to set them off.
 
I mean, given the range of time the other players were dropped into the world from, it could be centuries before Nazarick pops up
 
You know, thinking about it, that hammer is some OP nonsense if it still works on people, cause that will let her build up an army of classed natives….
And if it isn't she could still do things like make runic tattoos for herself and her mate, and they might grow with her if she uses the blood of something powerful as a base liquid… like herself maybe?
 
You know, thinking about it, that hammer is some OP nonsense if it still works on people, cause that will let her build up an army of classed natives….
And if it isn't she could still do things like make runic tattoos for herself and her mate, and they might grow with her if she uses the blood of something powerful as a base liquid… like herself maybe?
Runic tattoos are not a thing in YGGDRASIL. In addition, she has no reason to do that.
 
I mean… I guess golems are more useful, but empowering natives she likes could be interesting?
I'm surprised about the tattoos though, as they were a thing in Dnd that Overlord was based off of… oh well. Thanks for writing this!
I was under the impression the natives count as Players in regards to specific item effects. Though I should rephrase: general purpose (as in universally usable) runic tattoos aren't a thing, but there are specific races and classes that can utilize them as a special snowflake mechanic, like how Analia's kitsune race allows her to hyper specialize.

Basically, runic tattoos require specialized training to use, and even more specialized training to design and implant without screwing you up really badly.
 
I was under the impression the natives count as Players in regards to specific item effects. Though I should rephrase: general purpose (as in universally usable) runic tattoos aren't a thing, but there are specific races and classes that can utilize them as a special snowflake mechanic, like how Analia's kitsune race allows her to hyper specialize.

Basically, runic tattoos require specialized training to use, and even more specialized training to design and implant without screwing you up really badly.
Ah okay, fair enough.
I'm… not sure? It's been too long since I read those light novels
 
Chapter 2
Analia

Roughly forty minutes post YGGDRASIL shutdown


Hearing just how feminine my voice was now was a minor shock, as was the sensation of mana flowing over me from a spell. That was a sense I straight up never had as a human.

"You don't have the [Recently Resurrected] status," Taro said, concerned.

How? No, wait, he was explicitly my character's confidant, of course he'd know about me being a [Daughter of Inari]. As a [Demigoddess] I could resurrect with the temporary debuff [Recently Resurrected] rather than losing levels, though I didn't know how severe the debuff would be nor how long it would last as I hadn't died since it became an option, only that it would decrease in severity over time. I did know it didn't stack, so if I died while I still had it, I was shit out of luck.

At least [Demigoddess] was a hidden trait, and not visible to other Players, otherwise I, and Inari's other children, would have been hunted down until we stayed dead. The reason was that all deities, and demi-deities, in YGGDRASIL had the [Divine Ichor] trait, which regenerated mana at .5% per second when mana is not being used, and that includes me and my siblings.

Well, proverbial siblings anyway, we're not actually related outside of the game.

Given that it normally took Players eight hours for their mana to go from empty to full, it should be pretty obvious why we would have been priority targets for the entire YGGDRASIL player base if it ever got out.

Thankfully no one had had any reason to think [Daughter of Inari] was anything other than an ultra-rare racial capstone class with a unique description…

…And Taro had gotten sufficiently worried by my silence to start casting diagnosis spells on me.

"Taro, I'm alright now," I tried to reassure him.

"You just said you think you died!" he retorted, which, fair.

I sighed, and the delicious aromas wafting from the food prompted my stomach to start sending me pretty severe hunger pains.

"Could we table this until after dinner," I begged, "Please?"

Taro hesitated before acquiescing, "As you wish."

I'd never had anything other than nutrient paste before, so when that first piece of liver reached my tongue and flavor exploded across my mouth, it was without a doubt the most delicious thing I had ever eaten. Letting out a faint purr I relaxed back in my seat and closed my eyes, savoring the morsel in my mouth.

I took my time eating dinner, wanting to get the maximum amount of flavor out of my food, to Taro's fond amusement. But it also gave me time to get my thoughts in order.

Obviously we were no longer in YGGDRASIL. This was no game. But that didn't give me any leads on what it was.

I was reasonably confident that this wasn't some kind of death hallucination. There was just too much different for me to still be running on human wetware. Occam's razor suggested that whatever had happened, I was now a female kitsune.

Trading my dick for my life… was perfectly acceptable for me. I would have preferred a head's up, of course, but my masculinity wasn't so fragile as to have my self-image threatened by being turned into a girl woman.

You sure there wasn't another reason you enjoyed playing female characters?

…Honestly I would have preferred to be a hermaphrodite. Why bother choosing between giving and receiving when you can do both?

As to being a kitsune, I admit I'm a bit of a furry, so that's one change I'm quite happy with. Wonder if I can manage some kind of anthropomorphic form? I do have [Superior Shapeshifter]

…Something for another time. Another thing, my traits, and presumably abilities, from the game seem to have been ported over and made real, but how did they work now, especially the ones geared towards game mechanics? I had a whole host of immunities from my racial classes, did that mean I was actually, completely, immune, or were my resistances just so high as to be effectively immune? Especially against more exotic things such as radiation, which wasn't simulated in YGGDRASIL?

Not enough intel, and potentially extremely dangerous to test.

Which brought me back to what do I tell Taro?

Saying 'your entire existence up till now was as an incredibly advanced golem in a game and everything you supposedly remember and feel was completely made up' is accurate, but holy shit would that be cruel to him, given that he likely views me as his mate that he's been together with for years.

Shit, I created life for the express purpose of being my idealized life partner. Worse, depending on how he was ported from YGGDRASIL, he might not be able to say no to anything I ask of him. There's no way that isn't a whole host of moral and ethical violations, and the only defense I can offer is that I didn't think he would become real.

NPCs in YGGDRASIL were absolutely and completely loyal to whoever owned them, and would do anything their Player asked of them to the extent of their limited AI, with the exception being the game's R-18 content ban though creative Players regularly managed to get around it in places the Mods weren't looking. Unless tagged with a mind control spell, they could not do anything against the wishes of their Player.

This had been tested, and documented, extensively. And sadistically.

Taro was almost certainly emotionally dependent on me to the point he couldn't live on his own. That might change if he's given time to develop as his own person, but it might not.

Either way, as the one who created him Taro is my responsibility, my mate, and thus his wellbeing, emotional and otherwise, is also my responsibility.

Then again, these concerns could all be moot. According to the backstory I gave him, Taro was several hundred years old. Depending on how that merged with his time in YGGDRASIL it might cover up the holes that were likely in his memory due to me adding, and editing, his backstory piecemeal over time.

There was an easy way for me to test this even. According to his lore Taro had gotten his start as an alchemist as a fertility specialist, which means he should know how to make a contraception potion. For obvious reasons that was not something that could be done in YGGDRASIL, but was something that would have been common for him had his backstory been made real.

Depending on how [Daughter of Inari] was made real, I might actually be the daughter of a fertility goddess, so me getting on the magical equivalent of the pill as soon as possible was rather important because now was a bad time to have a litter of kits, and I know myself, and my libido, well enough that if Taro wants to go for a roll in the hay I'm probably not going to say no.

We might be the only kitsune in this world. The species must continue.

….Now was still a bad time to get pregnant. And given that we almost certainly weren't on Earth, with my new nose I would have smelled its toxic atmosphere by now if we were as, while well built, the shop was neither air tight nor had a positive pressure system, where any children of mine would be damned to a short, miserable life filled with suffering on a dying planet, I found that I did, in fact, want kits.

Looking up from my mostly eaten food I saw that Taro had finished and was watching me patiently.

"Can you brew up a contraception potion for me?" I asked.

"Of course I can," he replied, affronted, "who do you take me for, a two-bit hack? I just need…" A queer look crossed his face. "…what? I… what? I… don't understand. I'm a fertility specialist! How can I not know how to brew even the most basic contraception potion!?"

Empathetic pain lanced through me at Taro's clear distress as he got up and began to wander in circles, running his hands through his hair in agitation, but it answered my question. While his backstory determined who he was, it did not overwrite his past as a YGGDRASIL NPC.

Unfortunately, I was still no closer to figuring out what to tell him.

"…we've been together for years! How could I have never…" he trailed off as another queer look crossed his face as he turned to me, "did you buy me from a slaver who wiped my memory? I can't remember anything from farther back than five years ago, and my memories from back then are… strange."

That's… not incorrect I suppose. I did buy him after all. And he came as a blank slate.

While I was sure I could spin some story to justify everything within the context of YGGDRASIL, the thought of lying to my mate about his whole life felt viscerally wrong to me. Combined with everything else, the only moral option was to explain the truth.

I sighed.

"It's… complicated." I gestured at his vacated chair. "This will take a while to explain."

Now, how can I break this gently?



~~~FOX OF THE FORGE~~~



Analia

Day 1



It took hours for me to explain the absolute basics about Earth, YGGDRASIL, and the technology that made it possible. Even then, I skipped over a lot, such has just how bad things on Earth were, the history of the game itself, or that I was once male. They were details that were, quite frankly, irrelevant. And if they ever became relevant, I could explain them then.

But most importantly, I explained NPCs.

"Out of everything you could have made, from the most menial to the most decadent and perverted, you chose to make a companion because you were lonely, someone to love and be loved," Taro scooted his chair next to mine and wrapped an arm over my shoulders in a half-hug, causing me to stiffen in surprise at the unexpected physical contact as he rested his forehead against mine, a gentle smile on his face, "I think I can forgive you for that."

Rather than reassure me, his words made feel guilty and ashamed, as it ascribed more noble intentions than I had. Because while that did accurately describe the end result, I'd originally gotten, and seen, Taro as just something to man and mind the store while I was out and about. It would be months after I got him that I would even begin to craft the basics of his backstory and start turning him from yet another forgettable NPC shopkeeper into Taro.

"…So when you said you died," he said, pulling away slightly so he could look me in the face, "You were referring to your human body, right?"

I nodded.

"The coughing was bleed-through from my human body," I confirmed, "by my reckoning I only had two to three months left when… this happened."

A dark look passed over Taro's face.

"And the ones who poisoned you?"

"Let off with a fine and some proverbial finger wagging," I said, disgusted.

Taro growled.

"Forget it, Taro," I said tiredly, having a good idea where his thoughts were going, mainly because I'd fantasized about it myself many times, "the oligarchs of Earth may be a bunch of sociopathic narcissists, at best, who hate and backstab each other at every turn, but they hate anyone who threatens their power, or worse, their bottom line, more. Even if you found a way to Earth, you wouldn't be able to do anything other than get killed. Yes," I forestalled him, "even with me as I am now and all the potential of the workshop, all that would change is how much damage we did before we're inevitably hunted down and killed."

I firmly believed that if a big enough threat to them ever revealed itself, the oligarchy would start dropping nukes that "fell out the back of a truck". After all, it's not like they'd suffer any consequences from using them, and the world had both feet in the grave anyway.

Gods damn them.

Glancing at Taro I saw he was glaring a hole in the workshop table and decided a subject change was in order.

"So are we still on Asgard or did we get punted somewhere?" I asked.

Honestly, given everything else I'd be surprised if we hadn't been sent somewhere. The Asgard of YGGDRASIL was nothing but data in a server after all.

"I think we're on Midgard," Taro confirmed.

Midgard? As in Earth before it was ruined?

I could feel my ears perk up.

"I need to see it," I exclaimed, clambering to my feet, momentarily pulled off balance by the unexpected weight of my tails.

"What, now?"

"Taro," I said over my shoulder as I made for the door, "Midgard is Old Norse for Earth."

Understanding crossed his face and he scrambled to follow me.

Stepping outside my shop I looked up through the clearing that had been formed by our arrival and saw

"Stars…" I whispered, "…I can see stars…"

Sure, I had seen images of the night sky, both online and in games, but never in person. Old Earth's endless clouds of pollution saw to that.

As my eyes adjusted to the darkness the night sky unfolded before me. So many countless stars, twinkling away above me. And there, just above the canopy, was the edge of the galaxy itself.

Closing my eyes as Taro stepped up next to me, I inhaled deeply, savoring the scents and sounds of the forest.

Trees, ferns, birds, insects berries flowers miceanimalsreptiles-

Life. In all its forms.

The contrast with Old Earth, with its acid rains that could dissolve flesh, toxic smog that could kill you in days, a land of perpetual gloom amongst towers of steel and stone and glass, forever shrouded in a miasma of death and despair, was so great that I couldn't help but let out a heady laugh.

Overwhelmed by the desire to see more of a world that was actually, truly, alive, I shot Taro a grin and said

"Let's go for a run."

Leaping forward I shifted to my [Divine Bestial Form] and a giant nine-tailed fox, ten feet tall at the shoulder, landed on the forest floor and darted into the trees, Taro's surprised yelp turning into a yip as shifted into his [Superior Bestial Form] and sprinted after me.

Running through the forest, we explored this new world of ours. We chased fireflies, discovered hidden groves, climbed, and inadvertently rolled, boulders, played tag beneath the trees and stars. As we were playfully wrestling, Taro decisively losing due being significantly smaller and lighter than me at only seven feet at the shoulder, we broke through a hidden line in the forest and discovered our first signs of civilization.

Great and ancient trees had been cut down, their stumps mute testament to their presence, harvested for their lumber, though the foresters were at least wise enough to understand sustainable harvesting practices as they had left behind many saplings and young trees to repopulate this part of the forest.

By silent agreement Taro and I ceased our playing and followed the trails that had been pounded into the ground where logs had been dragged off to be processed. It took several minutes at a trot before we broke through the woodline onto rolling plains, stepping across a packed earth road to climb a nearby hill to survey the land.

A few miles to the south a heavily fortified city was built atop a large hill, ringed in enormous and heavily built high-medieval style walls, farmlands sprawling outwards from its walls.

To the east, the sky was beginning to turn pink with the first hints of the coming day.

I sat and watched as the first rays of dawn illuminated the peaks of the distant mountains, then crept down their slopes towards the valleys. I watched as the sky changed from black to pink to orange to blue, night retreating from the inevitable day. I watched as the sun itself slowly crested the horizon.

It was the first actual sunrise I had seen with my own eyes.

It was beautiful.

I swore here and now, by all the gods and goddesses, that so long as I draw breath, this world will not suffer the fate of Earth.

As the bottom of the sun rose into the sky, I couldn't help but yawn.

Taro brushed against my shoulder.

"We should head home. We've been up all night."

I tiredly nodded, and followed him back to the forest.



~~~FOX OF THE FORGE~~~



Swords of Darkness

Day 1, Just before midday



A warrior, a druid, an archer, and a mage stood on a dirt road just outside E-Rantel, staring at the tracks that had not been there when they had passed though yesterday morning on a mission to deal with some goblins causing problems.

"Dyne," Peter Mauk, the warrior and leader of the adventuring group said to the druid, "what am I looking at here."

"Judging from the prints," Dyne Woodwonder replied, "some kind of giant lupine or vulpine monster. Two of them. The larger I'd estimate to be between nine and eleven feet tall, the other six to eight."

They absorbed that for a moment before Lukrut Volve, the archer, asked

"Breeding pair?"

"That was my first thought as well," Dyne agreed.

Peter cursed.

"How dangerous do you think they are?" Ninya Veyron, the mage, asked.

"That big?" Dyne considered the question, "Mithril-rank, easy. I've never heard of any monster getting that big and not being a magical and/or physical powerhouse. If they've got offspring, it could go up to orichalcum if they can't fight them separately."

"Well that's just great," Peter grumbled, before sighing, "We need to warn the Guild."



AN:

So yeah, Analia and Taro were not as discrete as they probably should have been. I'm sure that will have no consequences whatsoever.
 
*grumbles about stupid xenophobic humans*

Those two are so cute I fucking love them to bits~!
I hope they have more time to relax and enjoy themselves, tho hopefully Taro can figure out a contraceptive potion faster than not before having kits in this disaster of a location becomes a problem they need to worry about
 
*grumbles about stupid xenophobic humans*

Those two are so cute I fucking love them to bits~!
I hope they have more time to relax and enjoy themselves, tho hopefully Taro can figure out a contraceptive potion faster than not before having kits in this disaster of a location becomes a problem they need to worry about
To be fair to the humans, all they have to go off of are two sets of giant pawprints. They don't know of any sapient races that can makes tracks like that, so, logically, it has to be a monster of some kind. And something that big could easily consider humans as something on its menu. And considering they're only a few miles outside E-Rantel, all the farms that feed the city could be in danger.

They basically have to investigate.
 
To be fair to the humans, all they have to go off of are two sets of giant pawprints. They don't know of any sapient races that can makes tracks like that, so, logically, it has to be a monster of some kind. And something that big could easily consider humans as something on its menu. And considering they're only a few miles outside E-Rantel, all the farms that feed the city could be in danger.

They basically have to investigate.
I mean, logically, yes, but also like… human xenophobia is the worst
*coughs*
I mean… yeah I've got nothing, I'm hoping those four survive and don't get raised as zombies this time around, but if you want to do different characters that could be fun to!
 
I will note that, as the swords of darkness have done the goblin slaying mission they were originally going to do, it would appear that Nazarick and a certain squirrel (no, seriously, search up Japanese dwarf flying squirrel) has not arrived?
 
Chapter 3
Analia

Day 1: late afternoon



Waking up was a slow experience. I was covered in a soft, warm, fluffy blanket, there was a warm body nestled against my bare back, and the comforting smells of home filled my nostrils.

Eventually, complaints from my bladder forced my brain to cumbersomely lurch into motion and several things filtered into my consciousness.

I wasn't laying on my cot, or my VR chair. I didn't own any blankets this soft. There was something making a strange irregular chirping noise nearby. Someone was breathing deeply, likely asleep. There was no sound of machinery, which meant the apartment block's PPHVARC had crapped out again and I needed to get a respirator ready in case of an atmo leak.

Who was I in bed with, and why did my ears feel like they were on the top of my head?

Blearily I opened my eyes and looked down towards the arm I could feel draped over my waist, only to be confronted by a pair of large breasts attached to my chest beneath a layer of orange and white fur from of numerous tails covering me.

Oh.

Right.

Yesterday.

…Though considering the angle of sunlight coming in through the bedroom window it would be more accurate to say This Morning.

Still. I was isekaied, because what else am I supposed to call my transmigration, as my YGGDRASIL character.

Good Gods.

With a sigh I glanced back at Taro who was cuddled up against my back, facing me. One of his ears twitched as my breath tickled the inner fuzz. He looks so cute like that. Considering I sculpted his body and face I have to say, I do good work.

Another pang from my bladder made me reluctantly scoot towards the edge of the bed, causing Taro to tighten his grip on me with a small whine.

"Taro," I said fondly, "I need to pee."

With another whine he relaxed and allowed me to get up.

Like the rest of the living quarters, the sole bedroom was extremely spartan. I'd always intended to liven the place up… eventually… but I'd never gotten around to it. At least I'd remembered to add in a bathroom when I built the interior after buying the place, unlike far too many other Players. I couldn't remember if I'd intended the bedroom for me or Taro, though it didn't matter now.

Finishing my business I glanced at my reflection in the flawless silver mirror above the sink – my work of course – and began running my clawed fingertips through my bedhead, straightening out my mid-back length hair. I half expected to experience some kind of dysphoria, or some remnant of Male Gaze, but no.

This is me. The human I was died with YGGDRASIL.

While I know I'm sexy, I didn't experience any arousal looking at my mostly naked body, having discarded my clothes before climbing in bed, followed by my bra sometime later when I turned wrong and it started digging into my shoulders.

I paused. I didn't notice it this morning due to my tiredness, but I'm weirdly comfortable being platonically intimate, for now, with Taro. I hadn't batted an eye when he'd stripped and climbed in bed with me, which is extremely anomalous considering I'd never even gotten a third date as a human and had died a virgin. I'd never even gotten handsy with someone. My mind is changing at a pace and breath far greater than just being in the body of a female kitsune should cause. What is going on with me and Taro? Does it matter? He's my mate.

…When did I start thinking of Taro as my mate? He is…

…He is the mate of Analia Vulpes. His story is explicitly clear on that.

Henry West, the human I was, is dead.

I am Analia Vulpes.

Taro is my mate.

Not prospective mate.

Not pinning love interest.

Not suitor.

Mate.

The magic that made him real, made that real too.

What else has it made true?

…Daughter of Inari…

I put the sharp tip of one of my claws against the pad of my forefinger and, after a moment of hesitation, pushed down.

A bead of gold welled up.

I swallowed deeply.

Depending on what the local religious scene looks like, I could be in grave danger if this ever gets out.

I'm not a fighter. Neither is Taro. We're crafters. As close to non-combatants as it is possible to be at our level.

If our defenses fail, we'll have to run.

I took a deep breath and slowly let it out.

Problem for another day.

Exiting the bathroom I saw Taro sitting up on the edge of the bed in just his underwear, rubbing sleep out of his eyes.

"Good afternoon," he mumbled.

"Good afternoon," I replied, before eyeing the pile of clothes we'd carelessly dropped on the floor this morning, "Do you see where my bra went?"



~~~FOX OF THE FORGE~~~



Analia

Day 1: Evening.



By the time we'd dressed and eaten, night was beginning to fall. I was wearing my usual ensemble of a fitted t-shirt that hugged my curves and pants with lots of large pockets, both made from Alfheim Exalted Veridian Silk, an incredibly soft and surprisingly durable material even before I enchanted it to survive the rigors of the forge, sitting atop the shop's roof watching the sunset with Taro.

Was my outfit anachronistic for YGGDRASIL and likely this new world? Yes and probably. Did I care? Not in the slightest. Let them be jealous of my body.

"Definitely too late to take a look around that city," I remarked offhandedly, "We're going to have to stay up till tomorrow evening if we want to get our sleep schedules to synchronize with this world."

Taro groaned at that but nodded.

Glancing at the clouds rolling in from the east I asked

"Think it's going to rain?"

"Smells like it," Taro answered after sniffing the air, "Probably an overnight shower." He glanced at me. "So what's the plan for tonight?"

"We need to pack up the shop front. I don't know what the local economy is like, but I'll be very surprised if they can afford Legendary or Divine tier. No point in having those items on display if the best the locals can buy is, say, Top-tier. After that, we need to do inventory, figure out what all we've got. Come morning, we check out the city, see what we can sell for local currency without drawing too much attention."

"So like back on Asgard, products just a bit better than everyone else?"

I nodded.

"Which reminds me, I need to finish my monocle, and get something with [Translate] on it for you too. Assuming that we speak and write the same language as the locals is foolish. With [Translate] items we'll at least be able to read what they write. Assuming the enchantment works like it does in YGGDRASIL."

"If we have no common language trading is going to be a pain in the ass."

"Oh, absolutely."

"…What do you want to do with the joke section?"

I considered it. Back when I was in the fifties, I had been semi-hired, semi-conscripted into a prank war. While I was never on the "front lines" so to speak, I had supplied a lot of the pranking equipment and items to my side. Twisting YGGDRASIL's crafting system to produce items with bizarre, hilarious, and absurd effects had been such a fun and delightful challenge that even after the war died down I'd continued making them.

Which was why I had things like:

Wand of Endless Chickens! Perfect for filling your friend's base! *(Not real chickens)

Portable Raincloud! For when someone is just feeling under the weather! (Surprisingly popular among aquatics, amphibians, and others with water-based skills and abilities)

Potion of Musical Flatulence! Forget to bring music to a party? Add this to the punch and you'll have plenty of trombone players! (That one required me to get Taro to a sufficient level in Alchemist to make, as it was a potion that forced a music track to play around the target. I had to wonder how, or if, that would work outside the game)

Among a lot of others.

"Leave them out for now," I decided, "We can always take it down later."

As the sun dipped below the horizon I sighed.

"Might as well get too it."



~~~FOX OF THE FORGE~~~



Analia

Day 2: Very early morning



"And that's…. two-hundred sixty-six ingots of adamantine," Taro said as he closed the vault door to the adamantine storage.

"That's lower than I'd like," I said as I wrote the number down on a sheet of paper and stuck it to the outside of the door. It could take hundreds of ingots to make a large golem after all, "Hopefully there's a deposit relatively nearby that we can mine or buy from."

Being able to collect my own resources was why I'd taken the [Harvester] class after all.

"And now," I turned to the largest vault, even bigger than the one containing hundreds of millions of YGGDRASIL gold, "Artifact storage."

We were in the vaults underneath the main floor of my [Hidden Workshop], accessed by a hidden stairwell by the forge. [Hidden Workshop] was a skill every crafter class got access to as an achievement reward for making their first Legendary-tier item, but most just used it as a storage area or semi-portable vault as the initial area wasn't that large. If a crafter needed more space they generally just bought a larger plot of land as that was far cheaper than the enormous amounts of gold, or real world cash, needed to upgrade the skill's volume any significant amount.

But after having been chased away from my workshop in the aftermath of the Divinite Debacle, I'd been paranoid of potentially having to go on the run again, and had upgraded the skill massively so that, whatever happens, I'd never be without my workshop. Now I had three levels of vaults below, and another three levels of greenhouses above, filled with all manner of plants that were useful in my crafting or Taro's alchemy, with the topmost level being nearly twenty meters tall so that I could grow trees and other very large plants there.

There were flaws in the skill, of course. While the door was indestructible, blocked all forms of teleportation and scrying when closed, and could be bolted from the inside, it didn't come with any inherent defenses that would keep anyone from waltzing right in if the door was unlocked, and it couldn't be bolted from the outside. You also couldn't change the overworld location of the door from inside the pocket dimension, so if someone sieged you in it, all you could do was wait a month or two and hope they got bored enough to go away.

Hence the adamantine pseudo-airlock I had installed. Now that I think of it, I should see if I can find some space to grow some food crops as well, just in case. YGGDRASIL characters, like in most games, hadn't needed to eat, so I didn't have any.

Opening the door, Taro and I entered the largest of the vaults.

Honestly, calling it Artifact Storage was a bit of a misnomer. I didn't have any capital-A Artifacts as YGGDRASIL would recognize them, rather the vault was filled with past projects, interesting items, and design templates that I'd collected over the years and, for various reasons, hadn't wanted to sell. But calling it my Artifact Storage sounded a lot better than my Oversized Junk Drawer.

"How do you want to do this?" Taro asked as we gazed upon shelves upon racks upon chests of stuff.

"Ignore the templates and obvious mementoes," I replied, "focus on grabbing things that might be useful."

We split up, each wandering though the stacks.

Turns out, there was a lot less useful stuff than I thought there would be.

Adding several early marks of my Divining Compass to my inventory, which remained mostly unchanged from YGGDRASIL save for that it now took a miniscule, though noticeable, amount of mana to access, I stepped up to a pile of rings. Most of them were design templates, though there were a few that could be useful. Including…

"Oh, hello," I murmured as picked up my Shooting Star ring, "I'd forgotten about you." I'd traded a blade made of Apoithakarath for it and it still had two charges left, one having been used in helping get Taro to level 100. "You'll be useful."

Adding it to my inventory I heard Taro call

"I think I've got something over here."

Rounding the piles of junk I found Taro in front of a two meter tall freestanding ovoidal Divinite mirror, supported and framed by intricate images of kitsune frolicking in adamantine and orichalcum.

"What is this?" He asked.

"I called it the Mirror of Inari," I answered, stepping up next to him to stare at the failed project, "It was supposed to let me contact her."

"Didn't work I take it?"

"First time I activated it it crashed the servers."

"That sounds like an 'oops' moment."

I let out a small huff, briefly smiling.

"The Devs took it in good humor at least. I played it off as just a daughter trying to call her mother. Afterwards I could only use it to contact the other [Children of Inari]."

"Were you close to any of them?"

"No. Given the time differential it was rare for me to be online at the same time as any of them. There were only a handful of us in the first place."

Come to think of it, I don't think I ever told any of them that I was also one if Inari's children rather than "just" a nine-tails.

"…Wonder if I can fix it now," I mused, looking at my reflection in the mirror.

We stared at it for a long moment. The thought of potentially contacting an actual goddess, mother, assuming she's real here was… intoxicating. The possibility of getting literal divine assistance…

…But would she recognize me as her daughter? I was born a human on a world without magic or faith, and earned the title in a game. If she believes that I am laying claim to something that I don't have a right to it could get… ugly. Mother wouldn't do that.

I hope so. I really hope so.

Another problem for a different time.

"Did you find anything useful?" I asked.

"A few odds and ends we can sell or scrap for materials, but nothing of importance other than this." He sighed. "I was hoping for some kind of textbook for either of our crafts. If we have to rediscover everything from first principles it's going to take us centuries to get to where we should be."

I frowned at that. Now that he mentioned it, I noticed that I had all of my YGGDRASIL crafting recipes in my head, but that's all they were. Recipes. There was no information on why this technique worked when a very similar one wouldn't, or how this or that enchantment worked, just what I needed to do to make them. The knowledge had been, effectively, black boxed.

I am the [Armorer of the Gods]! How could I not know my own craft!?

I frowned, wondering if there was a way to un-black box the knowledge… and my mind went to my Shooting Star ring. In YGGDRASIL it could grant three wishes, but you had to choose your wish from a selection of pre-generated prompts. That felt like a cross between an inherent limitation of YGGDRASIL being a game, and thus the Devs having to limit things because no one could imagine every possible wish, and a GACHA mechanic. Considering it could only be acquired from a randomized lootbox that had to be bought with IRL cash, this wasn't exactly a surprise. Corporate greed ever hungers.

But that was in the game. I was willing to be its wishes would be a lot more fair and free-form now.

And considering it could potentially let us bypass centuries, possibly even millennia, of dedicated study and research, if that didn't warrant its use, then what did?

"I think I might have a solution," I said, and explained the ring.

"You think that'll work?" Taro asked hopefully.

"Maybe. If it functions like I think it does now. We'll need to be very exact in regards to the wording though, otherwise it could backfire."

"Let's get started then."



~~~FOX OF THE FORGE~~~



Analia

Day 2: Early morning



We sat at the shop counter, the merchandise having already been packed away, staring at the piece of parchment that had the final version of the wish we were going to cast, the rain coming down outside and rustling the leaves of the trees providing a soothing background noise.

It was a lot longer than I had expected, as it had occurred to us midway through that our immigration from YGGDRASIL might have caused other complications that we hadn't discovered yet and we wanted to head that off at the proverbial pass, as well as that we might want to pass on that knowledge at some point.

Still, we were ready.

With some trepidation I slid Shooting Star onto my finger and activated it. Immediately I felt the magic of the ring prodding at my mind, patiently waiting for input. No pre-made lists in sight.

Exactly as I had theorized.

Shooting Taro a grin I carefully recited our wish.

"I wish that Taro and I know everything about our crafts and skills and their equivalents in both YGGDRASIL and this new world, along with the best ways to teach them, as well as removing any chains, metaphysical or otherwise, our immigration from YGGDRASIL emplaced upon us that block our growth in both power and as people."

The ring shattered and disintegrated. Huh, apparently that counts as two –

A tidal wave of knowledge rammed itself into my mind, causing me to double over in agony as my body began to burn. Moments later I slid from my chair onto the floor, knowledge painfully searing itself into my mind faster than I could comprehend it to the point the burning from the rest of my body was barely noticeable.

I might have started screaming at some point, but I couldn't process anything other than PAIN.

It might have lasted minutes.

It might have lasted hours.

But eventually the wave of knowledge slowed, and the agony lessened enough for me to escape into the oblivion of unconsciousness.



AN:

We're almost at the end of the introductory/set up chapters. Next, Anaila starts to explore the New World and learns just how screwed, or not, she is.

PPHVARC: Positive Pressure High Volume Air ReConditioning. It's what keeps the air in buildings breathable on Old Earth.
 
Kinda disappointed that you skipped the explanation section of 'your an npc' since how she chooses to explain it and their reactions during the explanation seemed like they would interesting.
 
Kinda disappointed that you skipped the explanation section of 'your an npc' since how she chooses to explain it and their reactions during the explanation seemed like they would interesting.
It wouldn't have added anything to the story beyond padding the word count, as anything relevant had already been explained to the reader and the important part was his reaction at the end, which was included. And I had much more interesting parts I wanted to get to.
 
Thanks for writing! I'm glad you burned through the wish ring instead of sitting on a half used one as happens on a lot of these fics
 
It's mainly that, coming into the fic, seeing that the npc had the background as 'mate' rather anything else, knowing what would happen because this is overlord, it built anticipation because they had to address that somehow or awkwardly do their level best to dance around it.

Seeing that they decided to tell the truth immediately was interesting, because how would the npc react seeing someone they love tell them that they were false? Would they at first deny it? Believing them crazy or driven crazy by whatever mysterious force displaced them and/or cured her sickness? Believe them and be forced to harshly re-evealuate their entire life? Maybe they fall into denial, ignoring what they heard and act like everything is fine, their mate is healthy and they have a new world to explore and people to trick and everything to not focus on their existential woes and whether what they feel is love or just the desire not to be alone, and if it's one or the other making them tolerate the situation.

But instead of any of that, it seems like they accepted it in the most convienent way "Sure, I accept that I was made to purpose and was false and don't hold it against you and am fine just continuing as we were despite the distress those revelations momentarily caused me". Like, I'd Love to see that from his perspective, see just how "OK" he actually is with this and how much he actually understands.

It felt like you skipped over a foreshadowed emotionally charged moment, in the moment of reading I was really thinking "Wow, they're going to explain that stuff immediately? That's going to be awkward, how would you even approach that- oh they don't, they just timeskip it."

It's understandable if trying to write that would have slowed you down and you wanted write stuff down while you had ideas in your head and motivation for it, but could be an interesting scene, in and of itself that could have helped charaterize Taro and his attitude going forward as currently he's just 'The Self-aware NPC Mate'.
 
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