Oh dont worry about taking so long to respond, because im only 5 and a half acts in at 1500 words although im gonna and try and make it 5000 at a min
Flames of Creation (Riot Gods Quest)
- Thread starter ALessonInHarmony
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Don't force yourself to reach a certain amount of words, just write what you believe is right.
Unless you are a Xianxia author who gets paid by the amount of words, then bloat it with filler enough to live.
Finally came up with a beautiful entourage for Sareh)
Imagine a lake 10 by 10 steps at the bottom of which you can see what is happening in the universe, at a height of about 4 meters, 8 eyes are hovering looking beyond the lake. Each eye sees in its own spectrum. From each departs the thread of the Concept through which the perception of the world takes place. (Eyes with Flame - watch all fires, volcanoes, forges, bonfires, Eyes with Justice see all the injustice of the world). Threads sometimes change, some less often, some more often. Only the Eye with Anomaly does not change - the birth of an albino, snow in the early summer in the desert, a magical flash. When you change the Concept, the pupil changes. (That is why the cultists use only the Anomaly pattern, the rest must be guessed).
Poles of various diameters are randomly scattered around the Pond. Some can't reach even 5 people, others are the size of a little finger. On each pillar are signs of an unknown nature, forever pulsing each with its own color, forever moving. Signs from the Pillars reach for the Lake, but stop before reaching 4 steps, forming a circle. Further, only the Concepts Chosen by Sareh become three-dimensional threads and connect to the eyes, or become chains, I rise to the Throne Above the Lake, make a turn around the limb (if you need a lot of chains at once, then the order of arms-legs-torso-head) and enter the Lake. Water serves as a layer and protects the bottom-world from accidental impact. Through the Chains there is an impact on the world.
(P.s. Chain - starts with 3 concepts. But you can also use 1 Concept, it is also called a chain, it only looks different outwardly. To eliminate confusion, Chain - 3, chain - 1, Concept - 1)
Well, im not trying to force myself to write a certain amount of words im just trying to get a level of quality that is consistent so you don't go from a high-quality piece and then to a boring description.
Man im too tired to understand this right now, ill get back to you tommorow
If he isn't, then I doubt that his ghost will reply.
Usually ghosts are tied to the Earth by unfinished business. The best riot quest on the site is not written here.If he isn't, then I doubt that his ghost will reply.
The chance of a ghost answering is extremely high.
Yeah im alive, I just got kinda busy/unmotivated, so im not promising anything but im going to try and finish the chapter by this Saturday, and that chapter is going to come along with some rule changes and special mechanics that hopefully you guys will enjoy
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- 𐌂 ̢͎̩̤̲̙͓̑̀͂͒̀͆̏𐋏 ̛͏̫̚𐌀 ̛͉̥̩̤̰͈̂̅͒͊͟𐍈 ̣͛𐍃 ̡̅̈́
Just to be sure... Are you not a ghost? Afterlife is still life from some point of view.
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Idk man i feel real but i guess I could be a ghoooooooooooooooosssssssssstttttttt
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sorry to have missed the voting period. Seems like the start of a cool quest.
I have done some minor flavor changes to the first chapter and the rules. I recommend that you read the small bit ended at the end of the rules as that is the only new part however you may skip the first chapter if you wish as it's mainly changing the lore of the creation of the universe. Nothing big tho.
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- 𐌂 ̢͎̩̤̲̙͓̑̀͂͒̀͆̏𐋏 ̛͏̫̚𐌀 ̛͉̥̩̤̰͈̂̅͒͊͟𐍈 ̣͛𐍃 ̡̅̈́
Also, I want to know about universe topology and laws of existence. Is world round like a planet? Or maybe it plane breaking off into nothingness or limited by some kind of crumpled space barrier, or world endless? Or maybe it self-contained dimension without visible curvature (go right and at some point visit left)? Are there parallel plates-worlds stacked on each other like paper, with slight difference in every one of them? Is it static, or growing and creating new matter over time, or just expands but does not create anything but new empty space? How is time working here? Many-worlds interpretation, time is illusion - future and the past do not exist as places, dynamic timeline with universe-breaking paradoxes, fixed timeline...
Asking, because it may be useful and I don't want create ALL existence laws of the world. For example - it simplier to plan landmasses, if I know world is round or infinite, or something else... Or it all undefined and we can do as we wish?
P.S. I cannot sleep and bored a little, sorry (
Asking, because it may be useful and I don't want create ALL existence laws of the world. For example - it simplier to plan landmasses, if I know world is round or infinite, or something else... Or it all undefined and we can do as we wish?
P.S. I cannot sleep and bored a little, sorry (
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Well the Universe works as normal unless specified otherwise, so there are no planes of magic or dimensions that you have not created, just a normal universe with you able to change it at will
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- 𐌂 ̢͎̩̤̲̙͓̑̀͂͒̀͆̏𐋏 ̛͏̫̚𐌀 ̛͉̥̩̤̰͈̂̅͒͊͟𐍈 ̣͛𐍃 ̡̅̈́
Hmm, maybe it will be cool to convert world shape into something interesting in the future... Maybe looping south and north, make world limited this way. Make the east and west edges of the map open ends gradually disappearing into unreality, where Concepts slowly leak and stabilize into real world - make it grow into east and west directions. Or something else. World shape is pretty interesting theme, which worth discussing about. Maybe someone else has some ideas about it.