Familiar (Magical Girl Genre, Serial Short Stories)

Looking forward to more of this. I was initially wondering what would people thing about the crazy fight that happened in the middle of town during the night. After a bit more thought the likely answer is obvious that they will not notice it as it will all have been tidied up by the bad guys which is an interesting divergence from the normal scenario.
I'm really liking the setting you've put together here and how it explains the masquerade / not telling the adults about what is going on. I hope you will be posting more about the earlier attempts at Camelot or the like. Seeing the point where Mr Raven finds out how much control the High Court has over things will be fun.
 
Still working on the next installment. In the meanwhile, I did a little drawing of Miss Watts in costume for funsies.

 
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Berkshire
February 1824

Ascot Racecourse saw little use in the winter months, being too cold to draw crowds or put horses through their paces. The empty stands were simply swept clear of snow to prevent damage until the thaw saw to the reopening. In any case, it was unusual for more than two or three people to be present on the course during the winter months.

So tonight's presence was of particular note. A half-a-dozen workmen moved through the stands, hammer and chisel in hand, at work upon the wooden benches. On the course itself, a covered wagon and a pair of guard from the local militia stood, overseeing the work. Despite the brisk cold, the men moved nimbly through their tasks, pulling up wood boards and driving a single silver nail into each before replacing them.

A lone raven observed the scene from atop a weather vane.

Then, suddenly, the night sky was rent by a dazzling flash of lightning and the rolling peal of thunder. The workmen and guards staggered away from the light, throwing hands in front of their faces, and the horses on the carriage bolted, dragging the hapless cart in a half circle as they pulled in opposite directions.

A figure stood atop a flagpole, bow in hand, with a raven perched on her shoulder. She carried a bow already drawn, a golden arrow straining against the string. Sparks jumped playfully around her, and despite the bitter cold, her breath didn't even mist the air.

"Horse racing is a proud tradition! To prey on it's enthusiasts is an act of pure malice and unbefitting of English manners!" She proclaimed, her voice carrying easily over the circuit. "You've drawn the ire of the Maiden of Lightning! Pray that God will forgive you, because I won't!"

And with that, she loosed the arrow with a crack that split the air, leaving a long golden arc behind it. It struck one of the workmen square in the chest, sending him crashing through the bench and floorboards, trailing smoke.

The others dropped their tools and began convulsing as they discarded their human disguises, featured twisting and molting into their true forms.

"I told you it was a trap!" The raven hissed, as Emily leapt out of the way of a bolt of dark flame from the demons below. Emily smiled, gathering another arrow.

"Of course it was! And rather clever, too." The arrow streaked across the course and took one of the demons in the leg, lodging it it's thigh. "It's the sort of thing I simply can't resist. Social event of the season."

She pulled her hand back in a dramatic gesture and a bolt of lightning coursed through the arrow, which caused the demon to burst like an overripe tomato. One of it's fellows, standing close by, was treated to a spray of it's acidic innards, and started flailing, crashing to the floor as it's skin boiled and burst into fires.

Another demon clamoured over the carriage, it's limbs distorted into hinged sawblades, and leapt for her. She discarded her bow into it's claws, and as it grasped for her she buried an arrow into it's collar and used it as a handhold, springing onto it's shoulders and kicking down. As the demon crashed to earth below, she retrieved another bow and used her vantage point to rain further destruction below.

By the time her feet finally made a gentle landing on the track below, the last of the demons was rapidly dissolving into motes of ice. The saw-demon was the only one left, embedded in the ground and thrashing to free itself. There was a minor fire in the stands, but Emily was fairly certain the snow piled atop the roof would put it out before any serious damage could be done.

Hopefully. She had been wrong about that before.

She stalked over to the saw-demon, twirling a loose arrow between her fingers like a conductors baton before driving it through it's throat. It took a bit of twisting, but eventually the demon crumbled into sawdust and leather scraps, leaving Emily humming and spinning the arrow idly.

"See? Nothing to be concerned about." She said, flicking the arrow away. It dissolved into a little wisp of fog, sparks playing inside it.

"H-h-halt! Put the bow down, miss!" A voice stuttered from behind her. She turned to find one of the guards from the carriage, shivering in his overcoat, musket leveled and pointed at her chest. A gleaming bayonet caught the moonlight, seventeen inches of polished steel.

Emily laughed. The sight was plainly absurd. "Do you seriously want to do this?" She managed to gasp.

The man shot her dead in the chest.

Lying flat on her back in the snow, she had a brief opportunity for self-reflection. She felt like she'd just been kicked by a mule; she knew intellectually she had taken rougher hits from demons in the past, including ones that had driven her through rocks and buildings, but this shot had hurt in a way even those hadn't. She didn't seem to have any visible injuries, so it was likely something else was at play. In either case, she suspected she would have a nasty bruise in the morning.

She could feel the crunch of the guard's boots as he approached, so she put the pain aside and kicked herself to her feet. She closed the distance to the guard in an instant, wrenching the smoking musket from his hands and cracking it in half over her knee. The wood splintered and the metal sheared at the point of impact, and she dropped the broken halves at the guard's feet.

The guard backed away, shock etched on his face, and then turned and ran. The other guard, watching from behind the carriage, joined him without a word, leaving his own weapon behind in the snow.

Emily stuck out her tongue at their retreating shapes.

Emily made her way to the carriage. The horses had already pulled loose and long fled during the fighting, leaving the sad little wagon half pitched over at the edge of the track. She could hear somebody moving around inside, and she cracked her knuckles in anticipation.

They had suspected the 2nd Marquess Cornwallis of working directly with the High Court for a while now; his name had come up in one too many foiled schemes. Mister Raven had spent several weeks spying on the man, even reading his mail through a glass lense Emily had ordered for him. They had a chance now to finally confront him, and they had seized on it.

Emily rapped gently on the door of the carriage, a mischievous smile on her face. "Lord Cornwallis, I have a pressing matter to discuss with you, if you could spare the time?" She said, grinning ear to ear.

"Uh, the Marquess is otherwise engaged! Come back later!" A hoarse voice cried from inside. Emily shrugged, grabbed the door by the handle, and pulled it from it's hinges.

She was met with a heavy boot to the face that sent her skidding across the snowdrifts.

She staggered to her feet, bow out and ready. She could see the Marquess, shuddering in the back of the carriage with a pistol in hand, but in front of him was another figure, a short women of dark complexion in a simple white outfit, with a sash and short cape. The only thing on her costume not white as the snow around them was a single black rose, affixed to her collar. She carried in her hand a small golden hammer topped with a orange gem that danced in it's mounting.

"Who are you?" Emily shouted, mounting an arrow and drawing back. The woman ignored her, striding deliberately forward and twirling the hammer by it's handle. Her eyes were fixed, not on Emily, but on her raven companion, perched on post nearby.

"Karas, my old friend. It's been too long." She said, a sardonic tone injected into each syllable. "Here we'd all thought you'd finally given up."

"Esrena." The raven spat back. "You haven't changed a bit."

"Nor have you, I see. Still trying to gather your grand army together?" She gestured nonchalantly at Emily with her hammer. "I see you've lowered your standards."

Emily released the arrow with a crack of thunder.

The woman blurred into motion, knocking the magically-imbued arrow aside with her hammer. It spiraled lazily into the carriage and burst into an electrical storm, blasting the vehicle to splinters.

Emily had just enough time to wince before she was forced to leap back, kicking off the ground to put as much distance as she could between herself and the newcomer. The interloper followed her airborne, overtaking her in an instant, and the hammer came down hard through her bow and into her shoulder, sending her crashing through the roof of the racetrack's lobby.

Emily hit the ground rolling and was back on her feet immediately, though she left a notable dent in the floor from the impact. She could feel a screaming pain in her shoulder, a persistent burning unlike anything she had ever felt as her magic set her broken collarbone with a horrifying crack. The pain tapered off quickly, and she noticed the blow had left a blackened scorch mark against her skin. That was a first; she'd never been marked by an impact before while she was transformed.

The newcomer dropped through the hole in the roof, hammer smoking as she twirled it in an idle pattern. Emily darted, crashing through one of the walls shoulder-first and summoning a new bow. Her assailant followed, sweeping the hammer across in an arc that blew out the rest of the wall before continuing into the ground. The shockwave once again sent Emily sprawling.

A mocking laughter rang through the air as the attacker strode through the remains of the racetrack, her hammer spinning loosely in her hand. "Is this seriously the best you have, Karas?" She mocked, brushing a few splinters from her jacket. "This is pathetic even by your standards."

Emily scrambled back, firing as she went. In her panic, a few of her arrows went wide, and those that found their mark were deflected with almost casual ease by the hammer as her target advanced. Emily could hear the raven calling for her to run, but she planted her feet and drew another arrow, wreathing it in lightning and loosing it.

Her opponent was faster than her; she'd never make it away. Not without a head start.

At the instant the hammer battered it aside, the arrow burst into an electrical lightshow, arcing through the golden handle of the hammer and into it's user, sending her reeling. Emily dashed in, clearing the ground in a matter of seconds and smashing elbow-first into her stomach. She drew back a fist to follow up when she felt a hand grabbing at her ankle, her leg pulled out from under her. She kicked with her other leg, breaking her opponent's grip and sending her into a flip, but she hadn't made it halfway over when the back of the hammer caught her by the neck and sent her spinning. She grabbed her opponent by the wrist like Mister Raven had taught and when her feet hit the ground she transferred the momentum directly into her opponent, throwing her off her feet and following it with the point of an arrow gripped in her hand.

For her troubles, she caught the hammer to the side of her hip, and it rang out like a church bell with the impact. She pitched to the ground hard, tumbling into the smoking remains of the carriage. She came to a rest not far from what she realized was the Marquess's charred corpse, and it took every ounce of her will and magic to not retch from the smell.

Her enemy was already on her feet, hammer twirling again as she advanced. She wasn't even looking at her, instead scanning the sky for her raven companion. Emily's hand, fishing desperately, found another bow, but she found she couldn't gather the strength to draw it.

"I think I liked your knights better, Karas. They actually knew how to fight." She spat, grabbing Emily roughly by the collar and pulling her to her feet. Emily stabbed out with an arrow, and the woman jumped away with ease, raising her hammer back. The little golden weapon hummed in her hand, the orange gemstone flaring with magical energy.

Emily, still dazed and half delirious from pain, cast her mind about for anything that could help her. Time seemed to slow to a crawl as she watched the hammer come about, the weapon straining against it's wielders grip like it had a mind of its own.

As she brought the golden hammer around in a lethal arc, Emily spun her bowstring in the way, catching the weapon and snagging against it, and she pulled as hard as she could manage in the opposite direction before releasing the bow. The pent-up energies of the hammer swing were redoubled by the magical bow, and it snapped hard against her attackers face with a report like a gunshot, shattering instantly into shards of glass.

Her opponent staggered, a white-gloved hand shooting to her face in shock and coming away smeared red. She finally acknowledged Emily by yelling something obscene, but Emily was already running, feet grazing the top of the snowdrifts as she put as much distance between herself and her opponent as she could. She knew she was being followed, that she'd be caught at any moment.

Her raven fluttered next to her, panic in his voice. "We need to get out of here!" He screeched. Emily could hear the footsteps chasing. She probably had just seconds left.

She stuck out an arm and hissed for the raven to grab hold. He obliged without hesitation, and Emily leaped, sailing thirty feet in the air effortlessly. She could hear the enemy doing the same, just inches behind her.

She knew, instinctively, what she was about to do ought to work. She had never done it, but it felt entirely right. She didn't know how she was supposed to start the process, but Mister Raven had said that with magic like this, calling it out would help.

There, in the distant, a lonely weather-vane atop the stables, easily a quarter-mile away.

"Lightning Arc!" She cried out, and something grabbed her and pulled.

A bewildering instant later, she was standing atop the weather-vane, in defiance of both balance and it's load-bearing capacity. Arcs of lightning were still jumping off her in every direction. She spun in place, watching her shocked opponent descend back to the ground and start after her.

She gave a sarcastic little wave before jumping again, this time out of sight.

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It took her less than an hour to get home this time, arcing from treetop to treetop and stopping only to get her bearings. The raven stayed quiet for the journey, pausing only to direct her next jump. When she dismissed her transformation at the balcony, the pain came back with a vengeance, and she staggered over and collapsed on her bed, wheezing heavily as several bruises manifested spontaneously across her body. The raven grabbed a trinket from her desk drawer, a little silver holder for an uncut ruby, and deposited it in her hand. She squeezed hard, and instantly the pain began to recede.

"Who was that?" She finally managed, weakly.

The raven gave one of his signature frowns. "A Marshal of the High Court. You just met one of the true rulers of the world."

"What an honour." Emily spat.

They sat in silence for a few minutes, until the gem in Emily's hand started smouldering with a high-pitched whine. The raven extracted it with his beak and dropped another gem one in it's place.

"Next time we run into a Marshal, I need to be able to kill them." Emily finally said, staring out the window. "I don't want this to happen again."

The raven fretted about, arranging a row of magical gems for his patient. "Nothing of the sort, my dear. You did admirably, but next time you run into a Marshal, you're going to arc away immediately. Speaking of which, that was extremely impressive, but do warn an old bird before you do something like that in the future."

More silence. "This is going to happen again, and I can't keep running every time." Emily said, each word coming through strained. "Not if I'm going to accomplish anything."

"The Marshals are the best warriors in human history, and that was before they had ten thousand years to hone their skills." The raven said. "You can't hope to fight them alone."

"Maybe I shouldn't be fighting alone."
 
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You mentioned earlier that the Marshals are supposed to be symbolic of something.

Unfortunately, I'm really terrible at analysing symbology; I tend to take everything I read at face value, even if that means inventing hierarchies of gods and dark lords to paper over the cracks in their laws of physics. That's not to say it isn't interesting, though. In this case, would they be related to Moloch?
 
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You mentioned earlier that the Marshals are supposed to be symbolic of something.
I distinctly remember Open_Sketchbook stating that the Marshals and the High Court are a metaphor (and not a very subtle one) for the systems of oppression.
Ah, here we go:
One of the conceits of the setting is that magic is still better than our coolest stuff. AI research? Making sentient creatures is an entire branch of magic. Space travel? The High Queen teleported to the moon once, and found it boring. Medicine? We used to be immortal. Military technology? Magical person with a bow vs an Apache Helicopter will end poorly for the gunship. Super Nintendo... well, you got me there.

More than that, though, all that stuff is irrelevant. Our level of technology and the cleverness of our engineering is of no consequence because our cage is political and social, manifesting as systems that influence and control the way we think, not technological systems that can be overpowered with a bigger stick. If there were ever technology or infrastructure powerful enough to bring down the High Court, the people building it would be by necessity invested the High Court itself.

As for leveraging the scientific method on Magic itself... how do you think the High Queen got to be the High Queen?

Part 3 of Miss Watts and Mister Raven is being written, btw.
 
More specifically, the ways that the High Court control people (their infrastructure and the toxic effect it has on humans) is supposed to be a supernatural version of what socio-political systems of oppression do to people, and how it becomes a part of the fabric and structure of society, denying people agency and the ability to reach their potential while also being present in the foundation of the progress we make. The way it weaves into government and society and turns them into enforcers of it as well as victims, too, as well as how the act of maintaining this system has twisted and limited the High Court as well, that kind of thing. Sort of the moment the game's setting went from fuck yeah punk rock magical grrrls to actually taking itself kinda seriously was when I sat down with this essay and tried to puzzle out what the stereotypical Dark Queen represents within the themes of magical girl shows, and hit on the idea of the Queen as internalized misogyny in action, maintaining and expanding a broken system to gain a fleeting advantage within these limitations that ultimately she's helping to uphold. To rule the world, the High Queen has given up most of what she had and most of the progress she had made. There's been a bit of thematic drift since then, but that's how it started.

I'm realizing with amusement that 5 Across the Heart is a game where you play an actual honest-to-god Social Justice Warrior. :D

But yeah, the High Court's specific look and their internal hierarchy is p much just straight up the Dark Kingdom from Sailor Moon, with Marshals as Generals and the High Queen as a kind of merging of Queen Serenity and Queen Beryl. Marshals don't really represent anything specific in that sense; they just give a face to the baddies that aren't mindless demons or the biggest bad. You could make some kind of argument that the Familiars as defectors has some kind of Leninist bent to it where the privileged classes must take the reins of the revolution when the proletariat falter or some shit, I'm not going to stop you. I do like to think of them as being analogous to allies who create a space for activists to operate using their social currency, but it's a bit of a stretch.

All the villains in 5 Across the Heart kind of have a bit of that merger going between Sailor Moon Classic villains and manifestations of oppressive hierarchy; Public Security 2218 is the Death Busters meets authoritarianism and the Exiles are the Black Moon Clan meets neo-reactionaries. The Once-Kings are kind of like running into somebody's racist grandpa meets the Pillar Men. I kind of want to do something with the Dead Moon Circus in a similar vein (because they are so cool) but I'm not sure where to take it yet.
 
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Once, thousands would have shuffled through these halls, in awe of the vaulted ceilings that stretched impossibly high, the wide columns and the beautiful mosaics, each representing a decade of work from the most skilled artists in history. Light would pour in through grand windows, the movement of the sun and moon casting through complex arrangements of stained class to create grand scenes that would shift and move, playing out history against a stone canvas. When the wind picked up, it would howl through nooks and crannies, whistling against crystalline edges and producing beautiful symphonies.

But now, the grand halls were still and silent, not so much preserved as frozen in a moment. There were the echoes of distant footsteps and the swirl of unearthly light outside, but the air was still and dry.

In one secluded corner, a young man in white sat, plucking at a harp. He wore a simple, loose robe which hung open, exposing a jagged, luminescent scar on his chest, which pulsated in time with the pull of the strings. He would play a few bars, pause as if considering, and then change to a new melody. In a small bowl beside his harp, water swirled around glass marbles with each note, shifting in colour and temperature with the music.

As he shifted to another measure, running his hand down the strings and causing the pool to bubble happily, there was an earsplitting crash. The water jumped as if in fright, splashing down the sides, and the man shot up with a start.

A door materialized from the solid marble in an instant and a figure stormed through, the wall crashing shut behind her. She too was dressed in white, but a dark red smear ran down the front of her jacket and across her sleeve.

"Esrena!" The man cried, moving to her side in an instant. "What happened?"

Esrena pushed him away with a stained glove. "Some upstart bitch broke my nose." She spat. "Where is Noroi, he needs to hear about this."

"He's got business in human world. I can get a healer-"

"I don't need a healer, Idim, it's already fixing itself. Just get him." She said. Indeed, her nose had already set, and the slash across her face from the jagged edge of the bow was fading rapidly. The young man, Idim, nodded and drew a grey marble from his robes. He whispered something to it and threw it down the hall, where it disappeared from sight in a puff of smoke.

There was an awkward silence as Idim and Esrena stood, Esrena peeling off her bloodstained gloves and wiping her hands against her jacket. Idim coughed nervously.

"So, uh… those musket balls for the Marquis' guards?" Idim inquired.

"Knocked her on her ass, but didn't do much more than that."

"I was worried about that. I'll keep working on it."

Then, there was the sound of stone grating on stone down the hall and, with the patter of footsteps, Marshal Noroi came around the corner, a look of deep concern on his face. Two other white-clad figures came close behind, followed by a grotesquely tall creature which seemed to be comprised of solidified smoke in human shape.

"Esrena!" Noroi cried, echoed by his companions. He stepped close and placed a hand on her chin, inspecting the damage with a critical eye. "Who did this to you?"

"Your boytoy Karas is back to his old tricks." She said, a sardonic tone creeping into her voice. "Has some new follower wearing one of his damned amulets."

"A strong one, evidently." One of Noroi's companions said, gesturing to her nose. Esrena sighed.

"Hardly. She was unskilled and flailing. I got overconfident and she got the better of me." She reported, shame creeping into her voice. "I didn't take her seriously. She and Karas escaped and left me bleeding. A Marshal hasn't bled by human hand in a millenium."

Noroi put an arm around her and took her over to one of the benches along the wall. "That streak wasn't going to last forever, 'Rena. I presume that's what has been hitting your sector?"

Esrena nodded. "Must have been her the whole time. I've lost a dozen collectors and at least as many demons in the past six months. I figured it was probably the Frankish cabal…

The group took a seat around her, lounging with practiced ease.

"They're idiots bastards, but they aren't that stupid." Said another of the Marshals, a short, bald women bedecked in golden jewelry. "I've had words with them and they've sworn they've not crossed the channel in a century. Considering how busy they've been and what we did to them last time, I'm inclined to believe them.."


"So it's definitely Karas." Said the other, a wide, heavyset man in heavy robes. "I'm surprised he's back at it. I wouldn't have figured him to try the same trick twice."

Noroi shook his head. "He wouldn't. There's something more going on here. This girl, did she strike you as a warrior or leader type? Trained?"

Esrena shook her head. "She was just some brat."

Noroi didn't bother to ask about her identity. If it was anything like last time, Karas would have taken precautions against that.

"In any case, we're not going to let it be like last time. Our predecessors didn't take the last uprising seriously, and we know what happened to them. Not to mention they have spilled the blood of one of our own, and we won't tolerate that."

There was a chorus of agreement.

"First thing's first, whatever extra schemes you all are pulling, bring them to a close or shut them down. We're ahead of quota and I don't want to expose ourselves any more than we need to. We switch to passive collection everywhere we can spare it."

"Ayra, Heos, the two of you are damage control. Anything goes off the grid, both of you take our best constructs and go investigate. Overwhelming force. Don't worry about the other cabals; I'm going to call in some of our favours."

The two nodded in unison.

"Esrena, you're retiring your demons off whatever duties they are on. They're good enough for regular work but they can't stand up for themselves. If they aren't otherwise useful, destroy them. Idim, I want your demons taking over her collection duties. Put them under her command."

"I was just finishing a new batch. They'll be more than sufficient." Idim said. He strode over to the water bowl and plucked a handful of marbles out, whispering something to them before scattering them across the floor. Two dozen figures sprang into life, monsterous things with distorted anatomy and constructed of glass and iron.

Esrena beamed. "Idim, these are wonderful." Noroi nodded approvingly.

"Friends, this island has been good to us these past centuries. I'll not see what we've built taken from us. We'll defend it with everything we have."

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One Month Later
London, England


Emily walked lightly atop the rooftops, her feet not even leaving impressions in the snowdrifts piled atop them. Her raven companion rested on her shoulder, resting. Emily had her bow out, and she was thumbing the string nervously, the tone warbling out into the night sky. The pair spoke just above a whisper.

"...I have nothing against being social. I mean, we're out here, right? But it would be nice if mother would give me a little bit more warning, so I could avoid going out and getting the stuffing beaten from me mere days before I need to entertain guests."

"It couldn't have been that bad." The raven insisted, though there was a note of defeat in his voice, as if he had the entire conversation mapped out already and was merely taking the rote steps through it.

"That bad? It was dreadful!" Emily declared. "Of course mother, I'll just pour the tea. Oh, look at that, my arm won't move, sorry about the tablecloth. Yes mother, I'll put on that nice lilac dress and show off the four-inch bruise on my collarbone. I'm sure Mister Whathisface would find it quite charming to know he is in the presence of a champion brawler."

"He might have. You never know." The raven said. "He might have seen it as endearing. It would have been a conversation piece. Made you interesting."

"Mhmm. Is that what passes for respectable conversation in mixed company among ravens? Truly, you must drive the ladybirds wild with your eloquence."

With that, Emily took a quick leap across the street, barely breaking her comfortable stride. She landed softly as always, though the raven barely held on.

"Well, I can't report on it's success with the ladies..." He said, shuffling back onto her shoulder.

"Whatever do you mean by that?" Emily said, giving a sidelong glance.

"I'll tell you later." The raven reported, pointing a wing forward. "I think this is it."

The pair stood above a small area at the edge of the road, a menagerie and some storehouses for public records. The area had been in the news, which is why they decided on as a meeting place; there was talk of clearing it out and turning it into a public square of some variety, if only they could find the money for it.

Emily sat on the edge of the roof, plucking at her bowstring idly. The raven took off and circled overhead.

It had been less than a week after their tussle with the Marshal Esrena that they had heard the news of new incidents of fighting in the night and broken buildings. Stories that were becoming familiar, except that Emily had nothing to do with them, having decided to lay low for a while to recover and gather information. At first, they figured it for simple petty crime feeding into the rumours swirling around of republican insurrection and the threat of revolution, as had been the case earlier. (Emily was quite proud she had managed to spread such unrest with her actions, if a little embarrassed.)

Of course, a powder magazine going up in the night was somewhat harder to ignore, as was the stories that it was perpetrated by a young woman. Unsurprisingly, this was also not helping the rumours of revolt.

Mr. Raven, being a cleve r sort of bird, had figured out the pattern of attacks within a few nights. He figured that the newcomer, whoever they were, was based in London and was leaving the city to commit her daring acts via some of the major roads, and thus he quickly worked out a list of potential targets. He had also come to the conclusion that the new girl would have a companion who was likely scouting these sites for her, so he left in the night and, a few weeks later, came back with a meeting arranged.

Tonight was that meeting.

Fingers idly drumming a slow tempo across the string, Emily looked across the moonlit rooftops, between the haze of coal smoke. She'd asked Mr. Raven once, about the place and time he remembered. He described a glittering city of silver and white, a storybook kingdom whose towers reached to the top of the sky, halls filled with honest laughter. Banner flew from every tower and music filled the streets. He could have been describing paradise.

At Mr. Raven's insistence, she had avoided looking down into the streets of this city, but her enhanced senses had given her a good idea of the sorts of things that happened within them. On the wind, she could hear voices, children whimpering as they held each other for warmth, disputes spilling over into violence and tears. She could smell the decay and vice in the air, between the cloying smoke that stung to breathe. On the occasion that she did glance down into an alley, she had seen a body frozen, hand still wrapped around an empty bottle.

Whoever this new girl was, she called this place home.

"I hope she's nice."

New Update - Part 1 of 3
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It lives!

Two corrections:
"They're idiots and bastards
He's got business in the human world.

Also, I broke out laughing at this bit:
"That bad? It was dreadful!" Emily declared. "Of course mother, I'll just pour the tea. Oh, look at that, my arm won't move, sorry about the tablecloth. Yes mother, I'll put on that nice lilac dress and show off the four-inch bruise on my collarbone. I'm sure Mister Whathisface would find it quite charming to know he is in the presence of a champion brawler."

I'm very interested to hear about this new magical girl. Mr. Raven didn't give any details on her, but he apparently met another familiar and he thinks they're on the level. Still, since the Marshals are hunting them, I'm betting the meeting is going to get crashed by a pack of demons.
 
IT LIIIIVES.

Also, interesting. Gives the Marshals some personality, and an insight into how they operate.
 
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