Was my characterization of Zelretch believable and accurate?

  • Yes

    Votes: 37 54.4%
  • No

    Votes: 4 5.9%
  • Mostly Yes

    Votes: 26 38.2%
  • Mostly No

    Votes: 1 1.5%

  • Total voters
    68
  • Poll closed .
Fair point, though many writers seem intent on writing idiots for some reason. Possibly because it's a good mechanism for explaining that lovely detailed world they built up but would never ever need to use within the constraints of their story's genre.
While writing an idiot might be amusing for crack purposes (or as a supporting character, like Okuyasu Nijimura), I'll not be doing that to Johan. To be fair, Johan is not perfect, and will mess up from time to time, but it won't be because he's dumb or because lolconflict.
 
Prologue 5: Degenerative Spiral
Prologue 5: Degenerative Spiral

Koneko demolished two thirds of her oversized candy bar in the time it took my thoughts to turn inwards, showing no signs of stopping as I took a metaphorical step back to just think. The last day or so had been more stressful than they had any right to be, without any opportunities to really stop and consider, so I felt I was owed a few quiet moments.

My top priority, as of the present moment, was discovering my Servant's identity. I hadn't pursued that information much earlier, but that was before I realised that I was hosting a Servant.

I hadn't even properly formed the question when Avenger spoke up, though.

Ask not for my identity, boy. The name I bore before taking up the mantle of Vengeance is known to you; all that you need to discover the identity that this Avatar cast off has already been given to you. If you cannot accomplish something so simple as to determine the source of my legend, you may as well lay down and perish at this moment so as to spare us both the ignominy.

I blinked, then shrugged. If this was Avenger's idea of an intellectual test then that was fine by me; I'd written more than enough last-second papers in college to perfect the art of pulling relevant fact out of basically nowhere.

My reverie was interrupted by the synchronised noises of Koneko devouring the last of her Toblerone and the club-room door opening.

Glancing at the doorway, I found Kiba looking at me in mild surprise. "Oh, Lewis-san. I didn't know you'd be here...I hope I'm not interrupting anything?"

I waved dismissively. "Please. Even if you were, this is your place, not mine. Anyhow, I was just thinking; do whatever."

As Kiba nodded and moved into the room, I felt myself tense slightly when he moved past. There was something, a buried whisper at the back of my mind, telling me that being so casual was a mistake. That in spite of the way they acted, the Devils could turn on me at any moment.

I squashed it under a mental boot.

It might have been naïve, but I'd always believed in giving people the benefit of the doubt before making any judgements. I hadn't always succeeded in doing so, and at times my attitude had almost gotten me burned (very literally, in one case), but I couldn't find it in myself to regret my view.

Oh? What's this? I had thought your heart drenched white with innocence, but perhaps I underestimated you. To some small extent, you know the darkness of man - it has its home in you and you see it well in others. But despite this, you still seek the light - even knowing that it may be in vain. Yours is a fool's quest, my host…

But a fool such as you is, perhaps, tolerable.

Huh. He almost sounded respectful.

Even with that tone, I still rolled my eyes. Avenger had an interesting way of showing approval - that was for sure.

Blinking, I was a bit surprised to find that Kiba was on the other side of the room, regarding me with an amused turn to his lips. Koneko was still in the same place, but she'd moved on to consuming a more traditional Japanese sweet of some kind. Mochi, if memory served. "Incredible…" I murmured, shaking my head. "Where does she put it all?"

Kiba, Devil that he was, of course heard me and chuckled. "Not even the Satan Beelzebub, the Underworld's greatest genius, has managed to solve that mystery."

Koneko, whose hearing was better than Kiba and I's combined if I had to guess, looked up from her snack. Her expression was as neutral as ever - yet I felt the force of her irritation just the same.

My weak chuckle did nothing to disarm the laser focus, but I was spared the petite rook's potential wrath when the door opened once more. There was a lot more force behind it this time, however, as Rias stalked through the entrance with her fingers to her temples and a grimace on her face.

Kiba rose from the seat he had taken, concern writ large on his face. "President, is everything alright?"

Rias sank into her chair with a sigh. "Sona had an...interesting experience hunting that Stray last night; the Father who holds service at the old church in the East District had already killed it by the time her Peerage arrived." She slumped a bit. "'Former Exorcist' my foot."

She sighed. "Things could be worse, I suppose. He's not particularly hostile to us, and from what Sona said he was mostly upset that the 'guest' he had been hosting tried to kill a pair of innocents." A concerned look was aimed my way from the corner of Rias' eye - probably to gauge my reaction.

It probably wasn't very interesting, since it mostly just made me think. 'A former Exorcist in Kuoh? Can't be Freed; he's bugfuck crazy and wouldn't give a tenth of a damn about innocents being hurt or killed.'

Much more emotive than me was Kiba, whose face twisted into a brief rictus of burning hate before he locked himself back into neutrality. Considering his past, reacting that way to any member of the Church - an Exorcist in particular - was probably to be expected. Unfortunate, but not unexpected.

Gathering herself, Rias sat straight in her chair. "Anyway! That's a subject for our meeting later. For now…" Steepling her fingers, Rias leaned over her desk. "Lewis-san. Was there anything you wanted to discuss, or would you prefer some books to occupy yourself?"

As tempted as I was to accept her offer and withdraw into my temporary abode with an armful of literary sustenance, my curiosity got the better of me. "Actually, Miss Gremory-"

"Please," she interrupted, "just call me Rias." She smiled. In fairness to her, it was only slightly too tight around the edges.

'Riiight. Her whole hang-up over wanting to be seen for who she is rather than her family name.' I nodded in acknowledgement, continuing. "Alright then, Rias. I'll be blunt; I'd like to learn magic, if that's possible." I glanced to my own arm, which was a noticeably different shape than it had been a little more than twenty-four hours before. "The powers that Avenger has granted me are great, but I don't know when I'll be able to actually use them. Especially as well as he can."

I clasped my hands, able to feel how the strength of my grip had improved. "I know I'm human, possession aside, but is there anything you can teach me?"

Rias' brows furrowed in thought. "I'm afraid I couldn't teach you. I know a few things, but as Devil magic is fundamentally different from human magic, I never actually learned anything about that system beyond some jargon." She paused. "However…" She trailed off for a moment, tapping her fingers against the desk. "I believe Tsubaki and Reya come from mystically inclined families; I'm sure Sona would be willing to work something out with you."

The redheaded heiress stood, pacing over to a bookshelf. "In the meantime, I'd be happy to lend you some of the tomes we have here, as long as you promise just to study them for now." She gave me a wry look. "I don't need the headache of having to repair my headquarters because you thought you could handle a mono-layer transfixing mandala and accidentally made an unstable quadruplex spatial-fold array."

I blinked. "I'll...pretend that I have more than a vague idea of what those are for now. More importantly, I won't try anything without help."

Rias nodded, tugging a few thick, weathered volumes with odd inscriptions on their covers from the shelf. The table in the middle of the room groaned slightly as she tossed them onto it, hefty thump noises echoing out. Then, once she was done moving the brick-like books, she rummaged around in the space beyond where they had been before and retrieved a couple of thin, unassuming books with no markings to speak of and plain, boring covers.

A layered deception. How very fitting of a Devil.

Ignoring the slightly jump in my heartbeat that came with Avenger speaking out of nowhere again, I eagerly accepted the books when Rias handed them to me. Before I retired to my room to get started studying them, though, I paused to ask Rias one more thing. "Say, Rias - does the phrase 'King of the Cavern' mean anything to you?"

Rias hummed thoughtfully for a moment, then perked up. "Oh! 'Gankutsuō: The Count of Monte Cristo'! The effects in that anime were beautiful! Why?"

What.

I snorted, choking down a great deal more laughter by force of will. Of course, leave it to anime to provide my answer. "It's just that Avenger called himself that."

Rias' eyebrows both rose. "So, you're being possessed by the Count of Monte Cristo?" She turned back to the bookshelf, searched for a few moments, then withdrew another volume. "I've got a copy of it here, if you like."

"Of course." I agreed. "It'd be foolish not to learn more about the man inside me." I paused, rewinding my last sentence in my head, then turned a groan into an awkward laugh as I felt my cheeks and ears heat up. Rias had apparently caught it too, though she was polite enough to hide her giggle behind a raised hand, while Kiba had turned away completely and seemed to have sealed a hand over his mouth.

Koneko, who had moved on to some gumdrops, was as blank as ever even as she looked in my direction. I couldn't tell if she was judging me, or if my slip of the tongue had amused her.

My heart and body are pledged only to vengeance, boy. Even were that not the case, you are no Mercedès, to easily ensnare me.

Well at least the Count was amused.

Choosing to just move on, I thanked Rias profusely for the books and got a simple wave in return. "Think nothing of it, Lewis-san."

"Please, Rias." I shook my head. "Call me Johan; we aren't strangers, after all."

Rias gave a small, genuine smile. "I'll do just that, Johan-kun. I'll be speaking to Sona again later, so I'll see what I can do about getting you some magic lessons. I'm sure she'll be pleased to hear of your wish to improve yourself; she wants to be a teacher, after all."

Though I'd known that already, I made sure to seem interested. "Oh? I can respect that. The world needs good teachers as much as we need good doctors."

New literature in hand, I then bade the three Devils farewell before returning to my room to study.

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In a seedy bar's seedier back-room, concealed behind a ratty curtain, there was an unremarkable switch. The only thing remarkable about it in any shape or form was that, in order to see it, one would need the aptitude to pierce a Light-woven veil, spun with all the subtlety and experience that two millennia of lying, cheating and stealing for survival could impart.

Though, what happened when you flipped the switch could be quite remarkable as well.

If the person who used the switch wasn't keyed in to the wards with which it was linked, then a portal to the not-space where all Light originated would appear beneath them. Of course, for beings above a certain threshold of strength, such a defense could be little more than an annoyance.

'But for the Devil scum inhabiting this town, this is more than enough.' Mittelt thought with grim satisfaction as she sauntered past the defences that she and Raynare had worked together to lay. Raynare was fairly adept at the less subtle end of Fallen sorcery, while her own specialties lay in...well. Lying.

As a Fallen bearing the Mortal Sin of Invidia, a talent for the subtler arts of mind and mirror was woven into her very being. If anything, Mittelt's honest belief that it was her Father-given right to mold the minds of humans as she pleased served only to strengthen that talent with conviction.

Raynare, on the other hand, was a Fallen of Ira, and as such specialised in sorceries of pure power. Which wasn't to say that Raynare couldn't do mind magic or that Mittelt couldn't fight; they merely had different specialties, decided for them by the Sin which had consumed their Virtue once they Fell.

"Oi, Rayray!" Mittelt yelled as she entered the bolt-hole. "Bossman ain't too happy with us!" She quickly perched daintily on a cushion, the motion at complete odds with her annoyed, irreverent tone.

Raynare emerged from a corridor, her expression twisted in bitter anger. "Lord Kokabiel must understand that we couldn't have accounted for...that." She couldn't quite kill the shudder that ran through her at the thought. The show of weakness just made her more livid.

Mittelt shrugged. "He doesn't care how we do it, he just wants the brat dead. He's sending reinforcements, if that helps."

Raynare blanched. "By Father's tomb I hope it's not him. That man...he can be as bad as that thing was."

Mittelt flipped her hair, unconcerned by her leader's distress, then made a lazy motion with one hand. A book on a corner table shot from where it lay into her waiting hand, and the petite Fallen engrossed herself in her reading.

Raynare, on the other hand, returned to her room. With every step her foul mood darkened further, and by the time she shut her door behind her it had grown unstable enough that it gave shape to a foolish plan through which to vent her wrath. 'You won't escape me this time, dear Iss-ei~'

Kalawarner looked up in concern as Raynare's demented cackling echoed through the partitioned basement, but Mittelt dismissed her worries without even looking up from her book.

Even as the cackling continued, Kalawarner sighed. She really wished she hadn't left with Mittelt and Raynare…

The most junior of the Fallen slipped out of the bolthole, claiming she 'didn't want to stay near a maniac'. Mittelt grunted a half-aware acknowledgement, but that was all.

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The Underworld was not a world suited to bearing life.

Over ninety-percent of its surface was completely barren, which was a major improvement from its natural state of ninety-nine percent and represented the work of millennia invested in magical terraforming. The Devils and the Fallen Angels alike shared the ball of dust and rock, staking their claims on the dark mirror of Earth and doing their best to battle the harsh landscape into submission.

Quite a few of its many blasted plains played host to some vast structure or another, Devils and Fallen Angels all being quite fond of shows of power and wealth. It was a rare member of either race with any influence at all that didn't have themselves built some form of grand residence, though the Seventy-Two Pillars of the Devils were the most obvious guilty party.

On one plain in particular, however, there rested a bizarre fusion of a medieval castle-city and a massive business complex, all sharp angles and all-black. Like someone shattered an obsidian slab and then tried to melt it back into one piece again.

If the architects were attempting to create a finished product so stereotypically sinister-looking as to border on comical, they had succeeded beyond their wildest dreams.

Deep within this bizarre, ominous fort, a stern-faced man with a full beard sat behind a desk doing paperwork. Paperwork which, by all rights, should have been his boss' responsibility. Unfortunately, Azazel had been called away to break up a spar that'd gone too far, so the dull task had been passed to Baraqiel instead.

Though he'd never admit it, Baraqiel almost cheered when his mind-numbing task was interrupted by the appearance of a priority communications circle appearing in the office.

The progenitor of Holy Lightning gestured to the circle, accepting the 'call'. "Oh! Lord Baraqiel! I was hoping to contact Lord Azazel…"

Baraqiel vaguely recognised the Fallen on the other end of the communication. One of the younger members of the Grigori, sent on a mission to Devil territory recently if his memory served. "Unfortunately, Azazel is indisposed. It seems the Vanishing Dragon decided to spar with Slash Dog. Again." Baraqiel massaged the bridge of his nose. "Naturally, the Governor-General had to go break that up before they could destroy more than about a quarter of Dudael Keep."

Noticing how pale the girl's face became at the thought, Baraquiel moved on. "Such matters aside, what seems to be the problem?"

The blunette, whose name still escaped him, swallowed audibly. "W-well, Raynare's been acting...strange. Ever since she failed the first time to kill the Gear holder and had her soul burned, she's been acting unstable and paranoid. I really think-"

Baraquiel interrupted the girl, a thunderous expression on his face. "Raynare did what?! Her orders were to observe the boy, not kill him! And what's this about her soul being burnt?!"

The blunette visibly flinched back in the face of the being who had, once upon a time, been known as the Wrath of God by every being between Hell and Heaven. "W-when Raynare tried to kill the boy, some...thing attacked her to protect him. It used flames black as Azazel's wings, flames that Raynare said hurt her like nothing since her Fall. When Mittelt checked her over, there was damage to her body and her soul." She shuddered. "That malice...I can't remember ever feeling anything like it…"

By the time she finished speaking, Baraqiel had mastered himself once again and spoke with a steady voice. "That is troubling...Nothing should be able to hurt one of us like our Fall." He pursed his lips. "Tabling that for the moment, why in Helel's name did she go so blatantly against her orders? Raynare is almost slavishly devoted to Azazel."

The girl - ah, now he remembered her name - spoke up again as he looked at her expectantly. "Ah…A couple weeks ago, Raynare came back with new orders for us, saying to eliminate the boy instead of observing him." Kalamazoo said.

'...Wait, that can't be right.'

Baraqiel frowned. "New orders? From whom?"

The blunette had just opened her mouth to reply when the communications array shattered. Baraqiel leapt from his seat immediately, rapidly casting the magical equivalent of a redial function - but to no avail. Six times he repeated his efforts, each time equally in vain.

Finally, he spun and slammed his fist into the desk, leaving a sizeable dent in the heavily enchanted metal. Thankfully, he hadn't wreathed his fist in Holy Lightning, or he'd owe Azazel a new desk.

And a new office.

And a new tower.

Instead, he just exhaled wearily, sank into his chair and grumbled. "I'm too old for this shit…"

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In a room not so far away from Azazel's office, a slender but powerfully built man sat in a chair so impeccably comfortable that it was said a Fallen could be aligned to Acedia in an instant just by placing their weight on it. Raven locks framed an angular face, and long, tapering fingers tapped idly on the side of an empty glass. Violet robes hung loosely, their size obscuring lean, chiseled muscles.

There could be no doubt among anyone who saw him: Kokabiel radiated a sense of barely restrained danger, like a cursed Muramasa blade left sheathed for far too long.

Before him stood a fairly nondescript man. He was neither excessively tall nor significantly short, his build was neither especially bulky nor lean; even his clothes were unadorned - a simple black tunic, pants and boots made up the entirety of his plain outfit.

Indeed, the only thing noteworthy about the man's appearance was the shock of silver-grey hair on his head, with bangs that nearly obscured his violet eyes.

The formidable seated Cadre regarded the Fallen who he considered his right hand. An elegant hand rose to gesture at a magic circle which had, until moments before, been piggybacking off Kalawarner's own communication circle. "As you can see, my plans seem to be beset on all sides with incompetence and cowardice alike. I want you to go to Baraqiel in half an hour. Inform him my scientists detected an anomaly preventing us from communicating with Kuoh, and tell him I'm willing to part with my valued assistant to 'ensure the safe return of our subordinates.'"

The sardonic tone of voice and sneering expression Kokabiel bore for his final words left no doubt as to their authenticity. "Naturally, I want you to assist Raynare and Mittelt with their mission for as long as they remain useful. After that, I leave things to your discretion."

The silveret smiled. It was a disturbed, toothy thing that made his eyes glint unsettlingly, and after seeing it you could only ever wonder how you thought of its bearer as normal.

Kokabiel continued, unconcerned by his subordinate's psychotic grin. "As for Kalawarner and Dohnaseek…" The Cadre's expression sharpened into a glare that could have sliced through dragon scales. "Teach them what it means to betray Kokabiel."

The cold rage faded over the next few seconds, Kokabiel's face smoothing and returning to its earlier appearance of aloof aristocracy. "Do you have any questions?"

The silver haired Fallen, slasher grin long gone, shook his head. "No sir. I, Mastema, the Flatterer of God, will complete your orders with great vigor." Came the genial reply. And with it and a sharp salute, Mastema spun on his heel and marched from Kokabiel's chambers with a purpose.

Left alone, the Watcher of the Stars reached out and poured himself another glass of bourbon. "I swear," he sighed, "sometimes I think my followers will kill me with their shenanigans before I can die in battle." He raised the glass to his lips, leaving it to reflect his fond smile in the dark room.

"Not long to go, now…"
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AN: Another week, another chapter. This almost didn't get finished on time, but I managed to get it done. As alway, I offer my thanks to Teninshigen and Magery for offering their insight. Also, those of you who've read Magery's quest Of Gods and Monsters: A Raynare Quest over on Sufficient Velocity might recognize my nod to "The Chair". If you haven't read the Quest, do so. Magery's a talented guy.
 
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Rias hummed thoughtfully for a moment, then perked up. "Oh! 'Gankutsuō: The Count of Monte Cristo'! The effects in that anime were beautiful! Why?"
Oh, god dammit.

I guess he's mad about the secret being spoiled like that.

I snorted, choking down a great deal more laughter by force of will. Of course, leave it to anime to provide my answer. "It's just that Avenger called himself that."

Rias' eyebrows both rose. "So, you're being possessed by the Count of Monte Cristo?" She turned back to the bookshelf, searched for a few moments, then withdrew another volume. "I've got a copy of it here, if you like."
Gee, go ahead and kill the fun, why don't 'ya...

"Of course." I agreed. "It'd be foolish not to learn more about the man inside me."
Phrasing

Oh MY...

Mittelt shrugged. "He doesn't care how we do it, he just wants the brat dead. He's sending reinforcements, if that helps."
Ooooh, new toys?

The girl - ah, now he remembered her name - spoke up again as he looked at her expectantly. "Ah…A couple weeks ago, Raynare came back with new orders for us, saying to eliminate the boy instead of observing him." Kalamazoo said.
Almost man, ya almost got it right.

The silver haired Fallen, slasher grin long gone, shook his head. "No sir. I, Mastema, the Flatterer of God, will complete your orders with great vigor." Came the genial reply. And with it and a sharp salute, Mastema spun on his heel and marched from Kokabiel's chambers with a purpose.
Oh God dammit Mastema.
 
I guess he's mad about the secret being spoiled like that.
Nah, he's more bewildered that there's an anime of him.
...
Wait until he finds out that he's a blue space elf in that portrayal.

Gee, go ahead and kill the fun, why don't 'ya...

That was deliberate~

Please don't bully the minions. They don't even have dental.

Almost man, ya almost got it right.
So close, and yet so far.

Oh God dammit Mastema.
I mean, he is the Flatterer of God. He's already been Goddamned.
*Badum-tish*
 
Helel and Mastema? You gonna use them in the SMT sense?
Using Helel was just an oath. As for Mastema, he's...well, you'll see soon enough. I don't currently have any plans to reference SMT, aside from the inevitable fact that using mythological figures will cause readers to think of other variations of the character in both media and myth.
 
Prologue 6: Oblivion Absolution
Prologue 6: Oblivion Absolution

Humans are, when you get right down to it, separated into two distinct camps.

There are those who, upon hearing certain sounds - gunshots, shattering glass, footsteps from an unknown source or the quiet screeching of metal rubbing metal - would put their heads down, their hands in their pockets and the pedal to the metal as they tried to put as much distance as possible between them and whatever situation might try and pull them into it.

Then there are the people who would perk up, grab a flashlight and enthusiastically wander down the dark alley with a cheerful shout of 'Hello? Who's there?'.

For future reference, the easy way to figure out who's who along this divide is to mark a big red button with 'UNIVERSAL SELF-DESTRUCT, PLEASE DO NOT TOUCH', hide it somewhere vaguely out of the way, then leave for five minutes and come back. By the time you check on it there'll be a flock of curious onlookers daring one another to press the button.

The point is, the sounds of clashing metal and the sight of rising dust from just inside Kuoh Academy's border-wall should have had the walkers on the fairly busy street directly beside the same wall either scurrying for cover or clambering over one another to peer inside. Which made me all the more thankful that Devils had millennia of experience in hiding themselves and their activities from humanity, as well as the magic to turn that experience into wards.

Mostly thankful, anyway. After all, they were the only thing letting Kiba and I spar in the open like this. So, the degree to which I was thankful tended to fluctuate depending on how badly I was getting my ass kicked.

Which, surprisingly enough, left me fairly grateful lately.

I was by no means having an easy time - I was being pressed to my utmost limit, just like I always was when Kiba made time to train with me, and the frustration of never really feeling like I had a grip on things was always simmering at the back of my mind. It was tempered somewhat by the knowledge that, through Kiba, I was doing battle with the teachings of the legendary swordsman Okita Souji himself, but being completely unable to land so much as a glancing blow still got to me anyway.

One of the blunted knives that I'd been using in our matches shook in my grip as I barely parried a strike of Kiba's shinai, but the seconds it bought were enough for me to raise my other hand palm-first towards my opponent. Light shone in my sleeve as glowing tracery shot across my arm to my hand, the Magic Crest bestowed upon me by Avenger's Monte Cristo Mythologie running the calculations necessary for the spell far faster than I could ever have done so.

Humanity in this world had the ability to use magic - but they were not, themselves, magical beings. Where other races could use magic as easily as they could breathe, humans were forced to instead treat spellcasting as a kind of science. Like a program, each spell required the mage to calculate the proper 'input', interface with the 'server' and then execute the 'program'.

Luckily for me, Avenger's first Noble Phantasm had implanted a Magic Crest in me. Outside Avenger's parallel of Earth it couldn't quite fulfil its original purpose, since it relied on universal principles that didn't exist here - but what it could do was handle the heavy-lifting of magic. Like a computer it could run all the necessary numbers with barely any input from me, placing my magical ability several notches higher on the ladder than my actual knowledge should allow for.

That said, I still needed to learn spells before I could cast them - and the two weeks of practice I had under my belt weren't enough for me to reach any great heights. I had a couple of tricks now, but my most-practiced skill was still one of the most oft-underlooked entries in any mage's arsenal.

Underlooked or not, though, it had potential - not in power, per-say, but versatility. Kiba had learned that lesson well, and remarkably quickly; he'd only fallen for it once, and that had gotten me closer to a hit than anything else had. Now, he knew better, and the moment he saw the mandala flare to life over my palm he disappeared from my sight with only a burst of displaced dust to show he'd run rather than teleporting.

Unfortunately for him, I could learn too.

My telekinesis grabbed hold of a sizable chunk of earth, ripping it from the ground and hurling it over my shoulder closely enough to leave dust on my shirt. I almost breathed some of it in as I spun, hurling one of my knives as hard as I could with hard-practiced technique.

The earthen projectile was nowhere near fast enough to catch Kiba, which he proved with an expert dodge, but that wasn't what it was for. Its actual role it played perfectly, forcing the Knight into the path of my knife and leaving him to bat it away with his sword rather than dodging it as he normally would.

Light gathered in the Knight's off-hand even as his main blade was forced out of guard to deflect the projectile, his Sacred Gear forming a new blade to intercept my anticipated follow up-

Which made the look of bewilderment on his face when I vanished in a blue flash and re-appeared directly behind him, 'blades' at his throat and kidney, all the more satisfying.

Knife skills and spell-casting had eaten up a lot of the past two weeks - but there had been time left over for me to practice other things. While my ability to wield the Count's abilities was still in its infancy, and my proficiency was from from even a tenth of his, I could at least use Avenger's second Noble Phantasm, Enfer Château d'If. Even if it was limited to a sort of quick-step.

Avenger had explained it to me as 'Escaping the Concept of a Distance between two points', but I wasn't sure I'd quite managed to wrap my head around everything he was trying to convey. Still, I at least understood that it was exhausting. I could only pull it off a few times before I'd keel over for a while.

In front of me, Kiba loosened his grip on his blades and let them fall, where they vanished into motes of light. Still, I didn't let my guard down; the last time I'd thought he was at my mercy he'd used something called Utsutsemi, leaving me with nothing more than fingerprints on his jacket and a fetching new set of bruises for my cranium.

Realising that I wasn't going to leave myself open for a counterattack after a few seconds of waiting, a subtle tension left Kiba's body as he spoke. "That's your win, Johan. I have to admit, I'm impressed; even when I'm holding back so much, defeating me after only two weeks is incredible progress for a Devil, let alone a human."

Relaxing my own muscles, I lowered my blunted knives into the most basic facsimile of a guard and stepped back, leaving Kiba to turn and face me with a small smile. I could feel a vague warmth fading from my face, and I knew that the golden glow of the Count's power had faded from my left eye. "It's your teaching, Kiba-san. Whoever taught you must have been...peerless."

Kiba nodded seriously. "Okita-sensei was a harsh teacher, but a truly incredible swordsman. Fitting, for a former Captain of the Shinsengumi."

I painted a look of tired shock over my features as I replied. "I suppose that I shouldn't be surprised that Okita Souji was reincarnated as a Devil, should I?"

"All I can say is that the Lord Lucifer has good taste in subordinates, if Okita-sensei is any indication." Kiba replied easily.

I nodded in agreement, wondering if there was anything else to say for a moment before a new voice entered the conversation. "Good job."

Kiba and I both turned to look as Koneko stepped unhurriedly forward from where she had been idly watching us, raising a fist as I approached. I raised my own, feeling the thud when we knocked knuckles. I didn't even wince anymore, and Koneko gave a small nod of acknowledgement. "You're getting stronger."

The petite rook had graduated from pointed looks to full sentences when she dealt with me over the course of the past two weeks. Going by Rias' reactions, I had effectively reached the level of 'friendly acquaintance' in Koneko's books. I had quite possibly set some kind of record.

We'll forge an Avatar of Vengeance of you yet, oh host of mine. Your performance today showed...acceptable progress. As a reward for your diligence, I shall begin to teach you how to use Les Flammes de Rancune. My cold and merciless Flames of Rancor will be the perfect quench for the blackened steel that your heart and existence shall soon become.

I had become so used to the Count chiming in with his commentary as I went about my life that I barely did more than twitch an eye if he caught me off guard. As things were, I acknowledged him with a nod that barely counted as a motion, then got on with things.

A twist of my wrist and a snap of my fingers conjured a mandala - a different shape, this time, and quite a bit smaller. By the time I finished turning to Kiba it had done its job, depositing a box in my hand after pulling it from its extra-dimensional home.

It was kind of mind-boggling that this world considered the creation, maintenance and access of a dimensional pocket to be a cantrip. I wasn't complaining though.

I waved the Knight over as I raised the box, plunking it down in his hands once he was close enough. "I know you said that you were happy to do this as a favor, but I thought I should get you something nice." I raised a finger, waving it back and forth. "It's a gift, not payment, so you can't refuse it."

Kiba sighed ruefully as he lifted the box, one corner of his lips turning up in a much more genuine smile than the expressions he usually wore, and beside me Koneko offered a hand which I promptly low-fived.

Kiba gave her a look with more than a little pout in it, but the Rook was unrepentant. "Outplayed." She said simply, leaving Kiba to chuckle to himself and shake his head.

"Well, when you put it like that, what can I say but yes?" He asked wryly, opening the box quickly to reveal a basic kit for sword care and maintenance.

"I know you usually use your Sacred Gear for swords, but I figured you would have at least one sword that you didn't make yourself." I paused, scratching my head sheepishly. "Soooo...yeah." I never was any good at gifts. Giving or receiving.

Kiba closed the box with a quiet little smile, clapping me on the shoulder. "It's a wonderful gift, Johan. Thank you." He regarded the box. "I'll make sure to make good use of it."

I smiled back at him. "I'm glad." Stretching my arms out above me and bending my back a bit, I groaned to myself as I felt the familiar low-level fatigue make itself known. "Now, I think it's time for my magic tutoring. I'd better hit the showers."

A quick gesture slid both of my training knives through a mandala and into my pocket dimension, and with them stowed away I offered Koneko and Kiba a sharp nod each before trekking back to the clubhouse.

I'd barely taken a few steps before my stride paused, held in place for a moment by a sense of unease that was all too familiar. It was a bizarre sensation; like clawed fingers lightly tracing the trenches and furrows of my brain, while twin tendrils of an unknowable texture probed the workings of my spirit. What was worse, it seemed like whenever I left the clubhouse for more than maybe half an hour the stress would always return.

I shivered, the involuntary motion breaking my frozen stature, then lengthened my pace as I stepped forward once more. As had become the norm, Avenger offered no comment on the random bouts of anxious tension. Whether because they were products of my own subconscious or because he wanted me to figure it out myself, I didn't know.

Thankfully, the ominous feeling abated almost immediately upon my crossing the old school building's threshold. Feeling its oppressive influence peel away left me breathing a sigh of relief.

"Oh? Is everything alright, Jo-han-kun?"

The familiar lilting voice that spoke up from my right helped me shake off the last dregs of my nerves, an anticipatory grin rising behind my mask of neutrality. Talking with Akeno was always entertaining; I had very few opportunities to truly let my degeneracy off its leash these days, and our innuendo-filled back-and-forth was never dull.

The way it let me sharpen my wit for face-to-face conversation, in comparison to the usual delay of online communication, was merely icing on the cake.

"Ah, Akeno-san," I replied, turning with a smile. "It's nothing; I've just been feeling things I don't quite understand."

Akeno's own smile was demure in a way only hours of practice could achieve, the glinting of her eyes belying the expression's innocence. "Is that right? Well, I hear that's normal for a growing boy…"

The shudder that ran through me wasn't entirely fake. "Spare me that curse; I barely survived puberty the first time around." A few seconds passed for our mutual smiles to sombre a tad. "But seriously, I've been feeling a strange...attention, I guess, whenever I got outside." I described the sensation as best as I could in hopes that Rias' Queen could offer some insight.

Once I'd finished, Akeno tapped her chin with a finger a few times while humming in thought. "That doesn't sound familiar to me...I'll ask Rias if she knows anything, okay?"

I inclined my head. "I appreciate it. Now, if you'll excuse me, I need to hit the showers."

Amethyst eyes twinkled with mischief, but Akeno didn't say a word as I walked away. She knew as well as I did that, sometimes, the most suggestive thing to say was nothing at all.

Following a thorough, though rapid, scrubbing, I made my way to the ORC club-room. Rias was sitting behind her desk, attention focussed with utmost precision on a manga in her hands. From the well-worn cover, I could extrapolate that she'd read the slim volume from cover to cover numerous times before.

Understandable. It was JoJo, after all.

She looked up from her book as I entered, slipping a bookmark into it before she snapped it shut. "Oh, Johan-san. It is about time for your lesson, isn't it?" She paused, then snapped her fingers and picked up an envelope from the surface of her desk to hold out to me. "That reminds me; Sona-chan was pleased with your work. You'll be hired part-time as a janitor and she sent some advance pay from your first paycheque. She already deducted Tsubaki-chan and Reya-chan's fees from it, so you don't have to worry about that."

I nodded my thanks as I accepted the proffered envelope. I had my mother to thank for my access to disposable income; she'd taught me all too well the skills of a homebody, and I managed to put them to good use cleaning the old schoolhouse. Apparently I'd pulled it off well enough to impress even Sona.

Rias got up from behind her desk with a smile, walking around as I pocketed the envelope. "If you don't mind, Johan-san, I think I'll stay and watch your progress. I have to admit I'm curious as to what methods you favour."

I considered her for a moment, but I didn't find any real reasons to say no. So, I just nodded my agreement.

A necessary choice. Better to show one card and let them assume it is all you hold, than let them notice the ace up your sleeve. My teachings are for you, and it would be prudent for them to remain that way.

I was half sure that the main reason Dantes wanted to keep some of my abilities in reserve was so that I'd be able to do a dramatic reveal later, rather than him mistrusting the Devils. However, his tale was one of abrupt, senseless betrayal on the part of those he called friends, so...there was really no way to be sure.

A knock on my door snapped me from my reverie. It appeared my teachers had arrived.

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Kuoh wasn't the largest of towns by any nation's standards, but it was big enough to warrant an airport - though that may have been for the convenience of the heiresses Gremory and Sitri, considering it had been built in a staggeringly short amount of time and completed only days before they began attending Kuoh Academy.

Coincidence? Not in a million years.

The fact remained, however, that regardless of how it had come about Kuoh had an airport - and an international airport at that. The significance of that distinction was that one Asia Argento, former Holy Maiden and current excommunicate of the Roman Catholic Church, had just disembarked from her flight in precisely that airport.

She had heard word that his journey had taken him here, so when she had been discarded by the only family she had ever known, there was only one place that she'd considered. She knew that he likely believed himself a monster, unworthy to even be in her presence, but she believed in him.

She knew, beyond a shadow of a doubt, that there was that of God within Freed Selzen, whatever he may think of himself.

The blonde had found a map of the town off to one side of the terminal and buried her nose in it, looking for a likely place to start looking, but was surprised from her attentions by a large hand coming to rest on her shoulder.

She jumped, spinning around to see a tall man wearing odd clothing standing beside her. Without looking her way, the man spoke, Italian flowing smoothly from her lips. "Argento, right? It's not safe here. I'll take you to the church of this town; the people after you won't be able to get in without a great deal of trouble."

Asia blinked at the man, bewildered by the sudden turn of events. "I'm sorry, but...who are you?"

The man let his hand drop off her shoulder. "Dohnaseek. I'm a Fallen Angel who's thrown his lot in with the only priest in this Devil-infested shithole of a town."

Asia blanched. A Fallen, here for her? Well, she'd known that the Grigori had a habit of taking in the excommunicated, but this didn't sound like a recruitment speech.

Before she could even reply, Dohnaseek swore under his breath. A moment later, all throughout the terminal, people crumpled to the ground like marionettes with their strings cut.

Dohnaseek, reacting to something she couldn't perceive, slashed his hand through the air, a thin, wide blade of blazing azure light arcing across the room. As it passed the terminal's central point, it seemed to catch on something - and a clump of straw blonde hair drifted to the floor.

Their cover broken, the assailant dismissed their illusion to reveal the irate face of a young-looking girl. The reason for her rage was clear; namely, the pigtail missing from her head, which had been sliced off by the spell's passing.

"You want to play it that way?" the girl spat, raising a hand and forming a rose-colored trident of Light. "Fine. Let's dance, Donny-boy."

Dohnaseek looked his fellow Fallen dead in the eyes even as he pushed Asia behind him. "You don't want to do this, Mittelt. In a fight, you've never once matched that brute Raynare, and you and I both know that my days in Heaven's Archives gave me access to literal mountains of forbidden sorceries. You can't best me in a fight."

Mittelt smirked. "Good thing I don't have to." The small Fallen then clenched her fist, crushing the part of the Light she'd made deliberately fragile. With a sound like shattering of a thousand windows in tandem, pink Light erupted. Donahseek swore viciously, even as Asia stumbled backwards, clutching her eyes.

The former Sister stiffened when she felt a pair of thin arms encircle her in a vice-like grip, one hand gripping the front of her habit while the other clamped down over her mouth. Even as she struggled futilely, a voice whispered in her ear. "Don't worry, little nun. Your sacrifice will elevate us to status beyond your imagination. Rejoice, for your life shall now hold meaning."

Tears welled up in Asia's eyes as she tried her best to writhe away from Mittelt's grasp, and the last thing she heard was Mittelt sighing before Light took everything away.

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The world blurred as the smaller Fallen rapidly zig-zagged out of the way of Dohnaseek's arcing orbs of sapphire Light.

Dohnaseek faced Mittelt resolutely, showing no indication that he'd been affected by the burst of light."If you want to get the drop on me, you'll need to do more than just rely on tricks that were stale when you were born, dear."

Mittelt's only reply to the Fallen who had long ago been a lover, more recently a friend, and most recently of all just an ally was a scoff.

A twisting gesture from Dohnaseek conjured blue sigils all around Mittelt's feet and, bare seconds later, stakes of Light lashed out from the circles. Each thrust targeted a part of Mittelt's legs such that even a single hit would render Mittelt unable to walk.

Yet even as she was impaled through the legs in multiple places, Mittelt only smirked.

The illusion, woven of Light and Sin, shattered like spun glass and the real Mittelt drove her spear of Light into Dohnaseek's back...only to have it slam to a halt against a plate of azure Light.

Mittelt dropped her spear in an instant, the construct fading back into the primordial plane of Light, but her backstep was a hair too slow. A massive, ice-blue hand erupted from the barrier, wrapping around her and pinning arms, legs and wings even as it lifted her from the ground.

Dohanseek's construct brought Mittelt around to face him, the grasp too firm to let her do more than vibrate slightly with her efforts to escape it. For all his faults, Mittelt had to admit that her ex could weave Light with the best of them, no matter the limitations his two wings placed on the breadth of sorceries at his disposal.

More than a millennium of practice would do that for a guy.

"Mittelt, Mittelt, Mittelt." Donahseek's voice was filled with a mixture of fondness and sorrow. "Wherever did we go wrong, that our paths would diverge such?"

Mittelt shot him a look of disdain. "You know damn well why we split up. You actually like these hairless, dull-brained apes."

Dohnaseek sighed sadly. "You didn't always hate them. I remember when it started, when you encountered that sickening excuse for a being."

Mittelt's eyes filled with Wrath at the memory, the small Fallen redoubling her struggles.

Dohnaseek clenched his fist. "I understand your hate, but the actions of the few are no reason to condemn the many! Among the humans even heartless murderers look down upon that scum - they are less than dirt in the eyes of their fellow man."

Mittelt opened her mouth to reply, but anything she said was lost in the explosion of sound that erupted out of nowhere. If Mittelt's earlier technique had sounded like the simultaneous destruction of a thousand panels of glass, then this noise was reminiscent of a rocket taking flight.

Rather fitting, considering the wave of destruction that consumed the terminal.

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As Dohnaseek slowly felt his consciousness trickle back into his body, he let out a groan best known to teenagers everywhere at roughly seven AM on a school-day. His eyes cracked open, dislodging dust only to reveal yet more of the stuff, drenched in shadow. As he slowly, painfully regained his feet, a flick of his hand conjured an incandescent blue orb to illuminate the devastated terminal.

Dohnaseek had seen more than his fair share of wanton death and destruction in his time. But even despite that, he shuddered as he looked out on the abattoir the airport had become.

Hundreds of bodies, rent asunder more violently than even the most brutal of attackers could accomplish. Blood and viscera would be running across the floor were it not for the dust that settled and soaked it in, creating a congealed mess of disgusting dark red. And the smell…

Dohnaseek grimaced as his attempted breath came right back up again, and barely managed to stop his lunch going with it. He kept his breaths coming in through the mouth from that point on.

Battered and wounded, his ward snatched from him at the moment of his triumph, Dohnaseek hobbled from the tomb the airport had become. He'd need Freed's help for this one; that attack hadn't been one a two-wing was capable of.

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Wheels within wheels within wheels, the mask of peaceful days unpeeled to show the blood and bone beneath. With many eyes watch fleeting shadows, the battle-lines begin to narrow and all the petty words of men are cursed to die away. Plots steeped long in sound and fury rise to greet the day, and though the candlelight still flickers the rain is on its way.

Who shall take the stage today, and prove themselves the victor? Shall wicked madness have its way, end all things with a whisper? Or will the righteous rise above and mend the mystics' fissures?

This tale has only just begun, the wind blows dark and fell - but what new Hell tomorrow knows? Only time can tell…

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AN: Well, here we are. Things are beginning to escalate, and will continue to do so. As always, thanks to Teninshigen for making it all purest and Magery for telling me when I'm making bad decisions. Finally, I'm going to shamelessly shill my new fic, a collaboration between the aforementioned Teninshigen and I. It is a DxD fic, entitled "Of Gods and...Men?", and it can be found on posted by me on Sufficient Velocity, and by Teninshigen on both Spacebattles and Fanfiction.net.
Anyways, enjoy, and I'll see ya'll next week.
 
I'm looking forward to the SI realizing that this isn't canon DxD. Still, even though it's still in the prologue, I think it's safe to say it's the best and most faithful Fate/DxD cross I've yet seen - and an excellent fic in general.
 
I'm looking forward to the SI realizing that this isn't canon DxD. Still, even though it's still in the prologue, I think it's safe to say it's the best and most faithful Fate/DxD cross I've yet seen - and an excellent fic in general.
Glad to hear it! I hope that I continue to impress!
 
I don't know, I like the alternate setting, I like this Freed, but the SI is kind boring. He seems to be a neutral good, which is like every SI ever. I get the point why, no one wants to be the bad guy, but you have an Avenger bonded to you, a Servant class that embodied hatred and vengence yet the host demonstrated no degree of compatibility, not even a hint of dark past or possible connection. Worse yet is Avenger himself, reduced to a chuunni sprouting pet. This not helped by the fact that DxD is quite possibly the one of the worst series to SI into because of its nature as a shounen series. Foreknowledge don't mean squat, planning get shaft if you don't have enough power to content with the top guns.
 
Alright, I'll go over your criticism point by point.

I don't know, I like the alternate setting, I like this Freed, but the SI is kind boring. He seems to be a neutral good, which is like every SI ever.
I...guess? I mean, I'm just basing him off of who I am. I'm a reasonably functional member of society, so I guess it makes sense that I'm not terribly interesting. Indeed, that is part of the point: greatness coming from humble beginnings and all that.

I get the point why, no one wants to be the bad guy, but you have an Avenger bonded to you, a Servant class that embodied hatred and vengence yet the host demonstrated no degree of compatibility, not even a hint of dark past or possible connection.
On the first point, I've not written a fic where the protagonist is evil, but that's beside the point. As I mentioned above, the SI's base is me, though he will inevitably diverge due to differing circumstances. Further, I'm reasonably certain I'm not evil, and I have no reason to be.

As to the second, Dantès is special even among Avengers. The impression I get from all of his materials is that he tries to present himself as more "evil" than he actually is; he's vengeful, there's no doubt about that, but I dispute him being objectively evil.

As for compatibility, one doesn't have to be the same as another person to be compatible to them. The saying "opposites attract" come to mind in this situation.

Worse yet is Avenger himself, reduced to a chuunni sprouting pet.
Now, this, I dispute, though I can certainly see where you are coming from. Dantès is no pet, but a teacher and foil both. The fact that he has no body to call his own beyond Johan's does limit his capabilities as a character, but I have plans to rectify that.

This not helped by the fact that DxD is quite possibly the one of the worst series to SI into because of its nature as a shounen series. Foreknowledge don't mean squat, planning get shaft if you don't have enough power to content with the top guns.
I'm inclined to disagree with your first point, but that's a matter of opinion and I respect that.
As to your second point, I wholeheartedly agree: Foreknowledge will be useless (though Johan doesn't know this yet) and he will have to take his lumps soon if he wants to get to the point that he can survive what is to come.

All of that said, I do appreciate you taking the time to raise your concerns, and I hope these assuaged them to some degree.
-Xan, Lazy Eldritch Writer
 
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Announcement: Due to finals rapidly approaching, your regularly scheduled Sunday update for this week will be delayed, as Teninshigen's grades are more important than my hobbies. This means there will be an update sometime after Wednesday, next week, and another on Sunday the 6th.
I thank you for your understanding.
 
Announcement: Due to finals rapidly approaching, your regularly scheduled Sunday update for this week will be delayed, as Teninshigen's grades are more important than my hobbies. This means there will be an update sometime after Wednesday, next week, and another on Sunday the 6th.
I thank you for your understanding.
Thanks for telling us ahead of time.
 
If everything goes as planned, I'll have a chapter for you all sometime Wednesday evening or Thursday morning.
 
Announcement: Everything has not gone as planned, and I regret to inform you all that there will be another delay. I don't know how long of one, but hopefully it won't be that long.
 
Prologue 7: A Study In Mystery Part 2
Prologue 7: A Study in Mystery, Part 2

My first indication that my day was about to take an unexpected turn was when the ground began to shake, jarring both my hands and my focus to the point that the spellform I had been weaving between my hands destabilised and collapsed into nothingness.

The book whose levitation had been the point of the spell fell from the air with a thump that was barely audible over the noise of groaning earth, shaking decorations and falling objects. My incredibly calm response to the surprise was to damn near fall out of my chair and ask, "What the fuck was that?!"

Rias shot to her feet, producing a phone even as she left the room at a quick gait. Tsubaki shared a look with Reya for a moment, then turned back to me and rose from her seat with a bow. "I think we'll have to take this up at another time, Lewis-san," she told me as she turned to stride to the door.

Reya followed her, leaving me with a friendly smile and a request to, "Be sure to practice your telekinesis before our next meeting; we'll be testing you!"

Ordinarily I'd have snapped off an overly dramatic salute, but since I was understandably distracted I settled for just an absent nod as the brunette vanished through the doorway.

I spent the following half-hour wearing a divot in the floor as I paced, turning possibilities over and over in my mind and shooting looks at the door as I debated heading out. Part of what kept me from doing so was Koneko, still lying on a couch and keeping a lazy eye on my back-and-forth motions.

In the end, however, it was the buzzing of her phone that broke me from the cycle of steps. As she checked the device, looking up at me afterward with eyes that were more expressive than was usual for her, my eyes came to rest on a nearby TV remote. A bit of fiddling activated a monitor on one of the walls, and a bit of guess-work found a news station.

An androgynous reporter was standing in front of what looked like a ruined airport. "...here at Kuoh International Airport, where police say what appears to be an act of terrorism has claimed more than two hundred innocent lives. We now go to the lead investigator, Detective Kenta Shirogane, with more."

Koneko eyed the screen with a slight curl of distaste to her lip, muttering a single derisive word. "...Crows."

If I hadn't been so keyed up, the softness of her voice might have had it go unnoticed. As it was though, my brain took the single word and ran with it. 'Fallen did this?' I wondered incredulously, staring at the massive building that had collapsed completely in on itself. 'None of those four should be capable of that level of destruction...unless!'

A voice from the television snapped me from my thoughts, and I saw a slender, stern-faced man with bluish-black hair was regarding the camera with palpable intensity. "...in the process of gathering all the facts, but this was definitely no accident. Someone did this deliberately." Even across the airwaves, the look in his eyes was somewhat discomfiting in how it seemed to pierce through me. "Whoever was responsible for this slaughter, know this: I will not rest until you face justice for this heinous act of mass murder."

With that, the man—Kenta—turned away from the camera to collect himself, and I muted the the television.

Usually, I would dismiss a statement like that as useless platitudes from an overworked member of the force, but that Detective's rage was palpable. I certainly didn't envy whoever the hammer would fall on – Fallen Angel or not.

...Not that I was particularly calm myself.

I could hear the plastic of the remote creaking under my grip as I glared holes in the screen, keeping myself sitting still since I didn't trust myself to stand up yet. In the back of my mind Dantes' wrath had risen to match and exceed my own – somewhat tempered by his joy in my own anger, I felt, but no less real for it.

I should have known that Vengeance would never take root in someone incapable of this rage. I understand now, boy; this white heart of yours is not a natural state. I can feel it – the true black heart within, caged and buried by civility and sloth.

I tell you now, boy – the heart of white you wear out of fear and the wish for companionship; it shall not avail you here! You must reach down and grasp that burning ice of rage with both hands! Let not the cage be buried, but lift it up high and turn its entrance to the world; when the time comes, release it – that we might show all those who oppose us what it means to bear the wrath of the King of the Cavern and his protégée!

My muscles were starting to hurt. The tension all over my body, and especially in my face as the rictus of anger pulled my features into something I was unsure I wanted to see...it strained me to the point of pain.

If anything, it only made me angrier. 'I know. I don't care if I'm not ready; we're going. Whoever did this is going to pay.'

Good...good! This rage, this hate, this resentment; all of these will grant you the strength to stand against the World itself should you need to! Such is the power of an Avenger!

Despite the control I tried to exert when I stood, the chair I had fallen into still skidded back several inches. My footsteps came down on the wooden floor like falling bricks as I stalked to the door.

Koneko grabbed for my arm as I passed her, but only her fingertips brushed against my sleeve as I turned and fixed her with a steady gaze. "Toujou-chan. I cannot...I will not stand by and do nothing at a time like this. Surely, you can understand that?"

Traces of frustration flashed across her face, even as the tiniest of nods moved her head. "...Prez told me to keep you safe. I want you safe. You're not leaving."

...That was probably more than I'd ever heard her say in a day, much less the span of a few seconds. Under other circumstances, I might have paid more attention to that – maybe even rejoiced in it. But right now?

She was trying to keep me confined.
She was impugning on our freedom.
Even if it was for Our sake, We couldn't allow that.

Dantes slid forward.

I slid backward.

And somewhere in the middle, everything became the black flames which devour light.

My/His/Our minds were one.

Fingers and will flexed as one as We stood, resplendent in Our power once more, before the child who presumed to confine Us for Our own protection. Mayhaps it would have proven endearing, were it not so infuriating.

Yet We would act on neither perception, for We were the master of Our emotions, and would be ruled by Our will alone.

We regarded the artificial Demon with a cold gaze to match her snowy hair. She shook under the weight of Our malice, unfocused as it was, but still stood firm.

A strong will. Worthy of Our respect.

We spread Our arms to Our sides as We spoke, "Your worry for Our safety is noted, child, without basis though it is. We are more capable than you know." Our eyes narrowed. "But do you truly believe you can confine Us?

"What chains could you forge that We could not break?! Within what cell could you place Us that we could not escape?! We are the King of the Cavern, and We will not. Be. Confined."

The feline child frowned at Us and spoke with a quavering voice, "...If you give Lewis-s…" She paused, seeming to firm herself. "...If you give
Johan-niisama back, I'll take him to Buchou…"

We could feel the ripples of emotion that He felt within Us at the address. No matter - He would call on Our power again soon enough; the Other known as Dantes would make sure of it.

"Very well, child of the mountains. We will reduce Ourselves to Our lesser forms...for now." We fixed the child with Our sternest expression. "Should you renege on our agreement, however, know that We shall return, and if our leaving must be by force then We shall not hesitate a second time."

Our minds fragmented, the resonance of the black flames dissolving as Our connection to It faded from Us/Him/
me…

And I was standing in the ORC room once again, Dantes lurking in the shadows outside my thoughts.

...There was really only one thing I could say. "What the fuck was that?!"


That…
I did not like that.
I did not like that one bit.

Well, that made two of us.

...I really just wanted to get my mind off what had just happened, now.

Koneko was staring at me, her expression inscrutable once more, as I looked at her. "So...I believe you made a promise?" I managed to ask, my voice hoarse and shaking more than I would like.

Koneko didn't say a word. She just sighed, opening the door and beckoning me forward.

As we left the room, she gave me a sideways look. "...You have issues."

I couldn't argue with that, now could I?
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Raynare smirked, a cold, not entirely sane expression twisting her features as her eyes fixed on her prey.

She had spent two weeks meticulously, obsessively, learning Issei Hyoudou's schedule and habits. Now her target was heading home, just having left an adult video store, and she was ready to strike. 'He'll never see me coming.'

Raynare's savage grin went unseen under the illusion she wore as she walked past the teenager. Issei didn't even notice – and he still didn't notice as a palmed knife of pink Light flashed from beneath Raynare's concealment, its point seeking the pervert's brain stem as the Fallen Angel who wielded it spun.

Unfortunately for Raynare, she had failed to consider a single important factor: Rias Gremory actually cared about the humans under her purview – and as such, she'd made sure that Issei was never left unprotected.

Something Raynare learned rather abruptly when with a burst of displaced air and a flash of steel, Yuuto Kiba intercepted her strike millimetres from his underclassman's neck.

Issei spun around at the noise, gaping at the sight before him and freezing once he saw the malicious rictus of Raynare's now-unconcealed face.

"Run, Hyoudou-kun!" Kiba shouted, breaking the frozen moment, "Get to your home, bar your door and don't let your parents out of your sight!"

Issei barely hesitated before tearing off down the street, shouting gratitude over his shoulder as he went flat-out for home.

Raynare's scream of rage was completely wordless as she hurled a spike of Light at Issei's rapidly-retreating back, but it barely made it a few inches before Kiba struck it from the air with another sword. The same arc of the blade made its way for Raynare's neck, only a rapid beat of her wings to retreat saving the Fallen from injury.

"Damn you…DAMN YOU!" Raynare howled, spinning a massive hammer from the threads of Light within. "I'm going to crush you into paste!"

Kiba flashed her a grim smile as he brandished his swords. "You're welcome to try."

With another angered roar, Raynare charged the Knight, bringing her hammer down where Kiba was standing with a meteoric crash that launched shards of concrete and Light in equal measure.

In such a situation, one could be forgiven for thinking that Raynare had let her Wrath overcome her – given that she had attempted to use a weapon suited for destroying tanks on someone capable of moving faster than sight. Kiba certainly made that assumption—

—And got a nasty cut to the cheek from one of the Fallen's heels, the spike forged from rose-colored Light, for his troubles as Raynare turned her overhead swing into a sinuous forward flip to bring the weaponised footwear up through the Knight's approach vector.

Her wings spread wide as she hovered before Kiba, a spear of Light appearing in one hand even as more of the same celestial substance dripped from between the clenched fingers of her other hand and coagulated into a net.

Raynare looked down on Kiba with a disdainful expression, the rage in her eyes kept on a careful leash. "Quick little Devil, aren't you? That should have taken your head clean off."

Kiba stared at her, his face twisted in a pained grimace due to the long, smoking cut marring his once-flawless face. The twin blades he had been holding vanished even as a new pair took their place, thrumming with energies most Dark. "I suppose I should thank you. This scar will serve as a reminder to never underestimate my opponents."

Raynare scoffed, pointing her spear at Kiba as she ascended. "Stupid child. No matter how prodigal you may, I'm still two thousand years your senior! Where others have honed their power, I have been forced to hone my wits! I won't be brought low by the likes of—"

And that was as far as she got before she was forced to evade twin arcs of Darkness launched from the swung edges of her opponent's blades, finding herself in the path of a third that devoured her spear when she was forced to intercept it.

"All that experience," Kiba remarked, "and you still stop to monologue."

The Knight darted forward with a barrage of lightning-fast thrusts. Raynare's net morphed and split into two daggers, lashing out to meet each strike in turn almost before they were launched.

Two thousand years of life had left her plenty of time to hone her ability to read people, on and off the battlefield, and it showed in the almost preternatural way her blades moved to intercept Kiba's strikes in spite of their blistering speed.

Unfortunately for her, while she could go a ways to balancing the speed difference with her experience, she couldn't keep up completely.

A nick on her left cheek, a gash to her right thigh, a thin cut to her abdomen; as the exchange continued, Raynare was pushed back with nary an opportunity to counter-attack, even as she collected numerous minor cuts.

Finally, a miniscule lull in Kiba's furious flurry gave Raynare the opportunity to fling herself back and ascend, slamming her daggers together and stretching them into a long, stafflike spear. With a flourish, the spear began burning with a Light such a deep pink it was almost crimson, and Raynare prepared to dive towards her foe—

—Emptiness—

—Only to flinch and hurl herself to one side, barely avoiding the orb of hungry crimson that would have reduced her wing to absolute nothingness if she'd continued. Her eyes widened again a moment later, and she launched her spear skyward to intercept the bolt of lightning that had flashed down at her despite the completely clear sky above.

"You hurt my cute little servant, vile thing," a female voice commented. "I'll make sure you regret that."

Raynare swallowed.

She was starting to feel like she might be in just the tiniest bit over her head.
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As we approached the vicinity of the ruin that Kuoh International Airport had become, Koneko abruptly halted and pushed me behind her before taking up a defensive stance.

During our trip, I'd noticed that my usual feeling of being under the observation of something or someone had intensified, so I figured that Koneko had sensed them too, and that they were about to confront me.
...
I was wrong, of course.

The actual reason Koneko had put her guard up became apparent almost immediately: a dust-covered, wounded Dohnaseek stumbling around a corner ahead of us. He looked both ways up the street, his eyes half-lidded, then noticed us from beneath the brim of his bedraggled hat.

He blanched, then slowly raised his arms. "...Parley?"

Koneko narrowed her eyes. "...What happened?"

The Fallen coughed, then spat to one side. There was pink in the phlegm. "It's a long story, and I need to get back to the Father, but the short of it is that one of my former compatriots made off with a nun. The girl has a Sacred Gear and I suspect they intend to tear it from her soul."

"And why do you care about that?" I questioned, more than a little heat in my voice.

The damaged dandy look at me with a complicated expression on his face, weariness warring with discomfort. "Well, it's your choice to believe me or not, but I don't hate humans. The only reason I fought you to get Raynare away was because I was ordered to. After we returned to the Father, when he forced Raynare to leave for what she did I chose to stay. Not just because I dislike needless killing, but also to save my own skin."

I snorted. "Self preservation, huh? I don't know what to think of you, but I'll have my eye on you."

At least the naïvety of your white heart has its limits. If you had placed trust in this one, despite facing him in combat but a fortnight past, I…

I know not what I would do, in truth. But it
would be drastic.

I projected my urge to roll my eyes back towards the Count. 'I might hate myself sometimes but I'm neither suicidal nor stupid, o'Count.'

The only response my psychic squatter gave was a disbelieving snort. 'Well fuck you too, then.'

Feeling amusement and irritation radiate towards me with equal measure, I returned my attention to the situation at hand.

Dohnaseek was apparently trying to convince Koneko to let him pass, but the Rook was as implacable as the castle that represented her role. The situation was set to escalate further – at least, until an indistinct black blur shot past us, displacing the air with a thoom.

From further down the street, a familiar voice loosed an enraged shout, "Get back here! I haven't finished destroying the fabric of your very being yet!"

I shuddered. Whatever Rias was chasing had managed to get her angrier than I'd ever heard her before.

"...Prez, chill. She got away," Koneko commented dully as the Crimson-Haired Ruin Princess flew up beside us, glaring in the direction of her target. The Rook's voice seemed to penetrate Rias' rage, prompting her to spin and take in the sight of Koneko, Dohnaseek and I in a single glance.

She almost immediately lifted a palm to point at the downtrodden Fallen, only an instinctive snap of "Wait!" from me saving Dohnaseek from instant obliteration.

I promptly found myself on what was very definitely the wrong end of Rias Gremory in a flat-out rage, and the only reason I didn't completely lose my ability to speak was because my reptilian hindbrain was too petrified for fight-or-flight to kick in. "This guy asked for parley, it'd be bad form to kill him when he's actually cooperating!"

Rias' glare lasted another couple of seconds before she turned away, her arm lowering and a faint sigh accompanying the slouch of her shoulders.

While Rias was gathering herself, Akeno and Kiba approached, the former shooting Dohnaseek a look so caustic it would have melted glass. The Knight, on the other hand, looked more unwell than anything – which probably had something to do with the festering, singed cut on the side of his face. His veins were picked out around the wound in gold over a spreading area, reminding me a lot of the images I'd seen of blood poisoning.

Except, you know. Gold.

When Rias turned around again she seemed to have regained her composure, though the look she fixed me with was still distinctly unsatisfied. "I suppose I can assume you're not going to just stay out of the way where it's safe, Lewis-san?"

I met her eyes with a level expression and clenched teeth. "I can't just sit by and do nothing."

At my side, my first clenched just so, and the light vanished around it. A corona of inverted flames, outlined vaguely by an azure tinge where they met the rest of the world, engulfed my hand as cold rage fed the Flames of Grudge, the flames that had made Raynare turn and run during out first encounter.

They only burned for a moment before I flicked my wrist off to the side, dispelling the Flames. My point was made.

"You don't need to worry about me," I asserted, turning towards the airport. "The anger that I'm feeling right now…" Backward and forward, two minds digging in their heels at the very edge of abyssal black. "...will be more than enough to reap Vengeance for this massacre."

Dantes and I each retreated from the borderline merger, each feeling the strain from keeping ourselves apart, and I ignored the slight alarm that flashed in Rias' eyes as I turned to Dohnaseek. "Fallen-san. Do you know where the person who did this might be?"

Dohnaseek shook his head wearily. "I don't, but the Father should be able to find them. He's good with the Scriptures, especially for a human." The injured man promptly fumbled a phone from his pocket, turning away as he made a call, and I was left to chafe at the waiting once more.

Until Rias interrupted, at least. "Now hold on, Kiba's got Light poisoning; I need to get him back to the Academy for healing!"

Kiba's protests to the contrary fell on deaf ears.

Nobody was surprised.

"...Prez," Koneko interjected, "I'll go with Johan-nii. Go heal Kiba-sempai."

Akeno chuckled ominously. "Don't forget about me; Johan-kun isn't the only one that could do with a little...stress relief."

Rias aired her frustration with a sound somewhere between growl and sigh, but gave a sharp nod. "Fine. I'll see if Sona can send anyone to reinforce you all, but I can't guarantee anything." She stared each of us in the eye – first Rook, then Queen, then myself. "All three of you had better survive this, you hear?!"

If her voice was slightly desperate, none of us commented on it. We just did the only thing we could, and promised to return alive.

...Which was, as it turned out, easier said than done at the end of the day.
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"Wow, Rayray. You look like shit."

Considering how bedraggled Mittelt herself looked, her greeting was the height of hypocrisy – not that this seemed to bother the blonde at all, much like the irritated glare Raynare shot her from where she was stitching her cuts with Light.

"Cease your prattle, wench," a disdainful male voice called from a far corner of their hideout, "you have no place to speak. It was I who had to pull you out of that fight, I who had to rescue you from your former paramour's spellcraft. At least Raynare was forced to retreat in the face of three foes, and her injuries were sustained during a mission undertaken on her own initiative. You, however?" He scoffed. "Absolutely pitiful."

The sound of rattling chains followed the words as the man in the corner went about his work, securing the nun who was presently a bearer of the Sacred Gear called Twilight Healing.

Those who knew Mittelt would anticipate a scathing retort in a long-dead language at the very least. Maybe even an attack on the offender's mind. The fact that she instead frowned and looked away from the speaker was a far more poignant demonstration of the man's power than any physical demonstration.

As it happened though, such a physical demonstration had already been given. Something Raynare was keen to comment on. "Speaking of you cleaning up after Mittelt's failures," she began, "is there any particular reason you decided to level that airport?"

A gaze turned from its task to pin Raynare with the intensity of a falcon, and she hurriedly continued, "N-now, I'm not complaining about you getting rid of a bunch of those useless apes; that couldn't be further from the truth! I was just wondering if drawing so much attention was really a good idea…"

Raynare's frantic babbling came to an abrupt end as the target of her questioning emerged from the corner where he had been securing their prisoner, pulling on a pair of black gloves as he strode further into the light.

Mastema's mad grin, a white crescent splitting his face in a fashion most macabre, sent chills down Raynare's spine. "My dear girl, that was the point!" he declared. "How am I to engage in glorious, bloodsoaked combat if this mission remains a game of shadows?" With a snatching motion of his hand, the silver-haired man in black tore the wards and defenses of their hideouts to shreds. "Now, I do believe it is time that I carry out the duty that our Lord Kokabiel charged me with!"

Mittelt and Raynare shared a look of dread as he turned away.

Mastema formed a clawed grip with one hand, then thrust that hand into a fold in space. From the rift he withdrew a battered Kalawarner, who was promptly dumped unceremoniously on the ground. Her wings splayed to either side of her body, the only sign that she was still alive a low, agonised groan.

Raynare leapt to her feet, wincing at the pulls on her injuries. "What are you doing?!" she demanded, only to immediately blanch as her brain caught up with her mouth.

Mastema didn't seem to mind however, the look he gave her mixing pity and approval in equal measure. "Your loyalty to your comrades does you credit girl, but with this one it is misplaced. This traitorous dog," Mastema spat, planting a boot in Kalawarner's ribs with sufficient force to create a small shockwave, "almost cost Lord Kokabiel everything! If our wise Lord had not been monitoring communications at the time he was, we would've been cast out! Our race's chance of ascension would have been annihilated, by some stupid sow who couldn't stomach the death of a single human!"

By the time he finished speaking Mastema's whole face had been twisted into a nightmarish mockery of human features, rage and madness in equal measure distorting him to the point of monstrousness. Yet, in only a moment, that expression vanished to be replaced with his usual passivity. "For the crime of Treason against the Ascension and against Fallenkind, I sentence Kalawarner, daughter of the ex-Principality Zachiel, to the highest punishment that can be inflicted upon an Angel."

As Raynare and Mittelt looked on in horror, Mastema planted his boot in the small of Kalawarner's back, then almost gently took ahold of her wings, one in each hand.

If they listened—and they had no choice, in the otherwise silent building—the other two Fallen could hear Kalawarner's near-silent crying and the terror that resonated in it. "Goodbye, child. May the Stygian Quietus cleanse your sins."

Then with one, violent motion, Mastema tore Kalawarner's wings from her body and hurled them aside. Almost instantly, the feathered masses caught fire, and in moments they burned down to ashes as a sickly light shone from the flames.

An aborted scream lodged in the fledgling Fallen's throat as the Light within her turned upon her body and soul. Cracks formed on her flesh as it was transformed into an indestructible cage for her tortured mind and shredded soul. Within seconds, the transformation was complete. Kalawarner had been spiritually lobotomized and would now be forced to endure to the end of Creation, unable to do anything but watch.

Raynare and Mittelt were absolutely silent in the wake of the horror they'd just borne witness to – which was probably why the sound of the front door of their hideout impacting the back wall was so loud.

Five distinct figures entered the room. Two female. Three male.

All very pissed off.

The females were a study in contrasts. One was petite and short, the other tall and curvy. One had short, white hair, the other sported raven locks that hung to just above the floor. One's face was nearly emotionless, while the other wore the smile of a woman about to inflict horrific violence and thoroughly enjoy herself doing it.

The only thing the duo had in common? The aura of Devil magic emitting from their persons.

As for the males…

An Exorcist with silver hair, a Light sword in one hand and a Light pistol in the other, scowled at Mastema without blinking even once.

Dohnaseek, battered and wounded, nonetheless stood tall and looked to Mittelt with sorrowful resignation.

The third of them was the least remarkable of the group. A brunet with curly hair, bearing no particularly interesting features at all...except, perhaps, for the piercing blue eyes that darted between Raynare and Mastema at a pace so frantic it edged over into manic.

It was perhaps surprising that the brunet spoke first. "You piece of shit…" he breathed, and the normal-looking features became anything but as anger and disgust rose to prominence like a volcano erupting. "I'M GOING TO KILL YOU FOR THIS!"

None of the Fallen would have been particularly affected by hearing that particular line again. The pillar of night-black flames that engulfed the man's body, blowing a sizable hole in the roof and sending everyone but the Devils flinching back, did make it a bit more attention-grabbing though.

The side of the pillar erupted a moment later, diffuse black flames like a comet's tail streaming behind the blurring figure of the man alongside a substantial green scarf. Raynare had just enough time to see the burning black talons that engulfed the man's fingers and the eldritch lights like starry eyes that dotted the scarf before she got a much closer look at the talons than she would ever have wanted.

Only for a moment, though. After that, they had vanished through her torso and out her back, which was a bit out of her field-of-view.

Her choking gurgle hadn't made the full transition to a scream before the black fire leapt eagerly from the man's hand and devoured her from the inside out, roaring their satisfaction as the Flames of Grudge burnt even the Fallen's ashes out of existence.

Mastema just blinked, a grin slowly creeping across his face. "Well well well!" he declared. "Quite the nasty power you're in possession of, boy." His grin widened sharply. "I can't wait to tear it to pieces and rip your head off."

Before the battle-hungry Fallen could do more than take a step in the burning, snarling brunet's direction though, a bullet of Light scraped his cheek. Blood hadn't quite had time to well up at the cut before a small fist slammed home with a bit more accuracy, snapping his head back with a grunt.

He kept grinning. "This is fine as well; please, dance with me to your hearts' content! It shall make it all the more satisfying when I rip them from your chests!"
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Dohnaseek absently spun a sword of Light in one hand as he approached Mittelt, the fingers of his other hand twitching as a swarm of needles swirled around it. They were both tired, both injured and they both recalled their previous fight very well indeed. How could they not? It had only been a few hours since they had matched spell to illusion.

There was one key difference between then and the present moment, however: Here, there was much less space for Mittelt to reposition when her opponent was distracted with illusions.

They both knew it. But Mittelt didn't have anywhere to run.

Dohnaseek sighed as they closed to a few paces. "I'd tell you to surrender, but I know you well enough to know you'll fight to the death so you aren't subjected to...that."

Dohnaseek looked at the husk that had been Kalawarner only minutes before and swallowed the gorge that threatened to rise. No matter how many times he'd seen it, the Stygian Quietus made him feel ill on a fundamental level.

Mittelt's response came, not in words, but in a bardiche of Light that arced for his throat and was handily parried aside by his wing, edged in scales of glacial Light.

Mittelt danced back out of range of his riposte, but a hurled spike of Light that followed landed a glancing blow on her arm. The next several moments were a blur of bright Light and black feathers, Mittelt acknowledging the futility of judicious illusions in such a cramped space. She'd have to save her illusory diversions for a key moment where they could turn the fight in her favour.

Unfortunately, for all her scheming, fate had other plans.

An eruption of black flames, brilliant lightning and incandescent light came in quick succession, and despite herself Mittelt whirled around to stare.

It was her last mistake.

A vortex of Enochian sigils, traced in dark blue, swirled around her by the time her attention returned. Dohnaseek had been given a moment of opportunity, and that was all he needed to weave a simple but powerful sleep compulsion on her. With her concentration as compromised as it was, she never had a chance to resist.

The petite blonde slumped to the ground unconscious.

Dohnaseek took a step forward to retrieve her and promptly did likewise as his legs finally gave up the ghost and let exhaustion get to them.

"Fuuuuuck…."
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Mastema was not a man who believed in doing things by halves.

If his opponents hadn't known that before, they figured it out quickly when he unleashed all eight of his coal-black wings at once and rained knives of Light from his fingers while howling in unrestrained glee.

All in the first seconds of the fight.

The Devils took a special care in avoiding the knives that was usually warranted by near-critical nuclear materials, while the Exorcist and the burning man batted them aside without care.

That didn't put Mastema off at all, and it showed as he sheathed his hands in clawed gauntlets of Light and dove at Baraqiel's spawn, slamming a fist into her midsection and hurling her backwards.

He clicked his tongue at her in mock reproach. "If you want to have a chance at beating me, child, you'll need to do better than some piddling lightning bolts!" He spread his arms wide, parrying the strikes of the Exorcist and the Anomaly with his wings almost absently. "Show me the proof of your bloodline, Nephilim! Show me Baraqiel's rage! Use your Holy Lightning! Or are you too much of a coward, hmmm?!"

The girl's only response was to cough wetly and spit out a wad of bloody phlegm, then fall to the ground.

Mastema blinked, then sighed in frustration. "Truly, I apologize. I should regulate my strength more; finishing this as quickly as that is no fun at all!"

That said, the eight-winged Fallen spun and rammed his fist into the Anomaly's face, launching him through a wall and out of sight. Next, he turned to the Exorcist, who was halfway through his Scripture when the Fallen punted him into a support pillar.

He was advancing after that other silveret when a white-topped ballistic missile exploded into his abdomen.

The small Devil hadn't really registered as a threat before that – thanks in part to her small stature and emotionless demeanour, undoubtedly. As he stumbled back and registered the feral rictus of rage her features had become though, Mastema found himself reconsidering his position.

"Fiery little Devil, aren't you?!" He crowed even as she pummeled him with blow after blow. The strikes would've been more than sufficient to reduce concrete to rubble, but to him? They might as well have been a deep-tissue massage, and from the frustration on the tiny Devil's face, she knew it. "As amusing as this is, I'm going to ha—gurk!"

Apparently the Devil didn't like the sound of his voice. Or at least, she had put a lot of force behind that uppercut to his chin.

ba-bump

Lightning quick, his hand wrapped around her throat and began to squeeze. "You know, this was funny, at first. But now? I'm mad."

ba-bump

The Anomaly was coming back through the hole in the wall, faster than any human athlete, but he wasn't close enough to make it. The Exorcist and the Nephilim were still down. The traitor Fallen had collapsed in the corner like the trash he was.

ba-bump

The enraged eight-wing further tightened his grip on his prey, intent on snapping her neck, and a scream of helpless rage tore the air asunder…

ba—
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I cried out helplessly.

Space twisted.

A severed hand fell to the floor with a wet thump.
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—bump

There was a woman. A woman with black hair, cradling Koneko to her ample chest as the bells on her low-cut black kimono rang clearly in a room as silent as the gap between 'tick' and 'tock'. A large pair of black cat's ears were folded flat against her head, and two tails of the same abyssal shade swung menacingly in the air behind her.

I watched without a word to speak as the SS-Class Stray Devil Kuroka turned golden eyes bisected vertically by feline pupils on the eight-winged Fallen. "Crows who'd pick on defenseless kittens…" she began, and the space behind her suddenly exploded into the unsettling purple light of an octagonal magical seal that sent every instinct from my body to my soul into utter overdrive, "should be ready to suffer the consequences."
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AN: Well, here it is. I apologize for the lateness of the chapter, but my beta, Teninshigen, had some IRL stuff to sort out, and I wouldn't feel right posting it without his expertise unleashed upon it. That said, he's back, I'm back, and if everything goes right, the last prologue chapter will be uploaded next Sunday. Enjoy!
 
Well I'm a fan of the more edgy dark Powers so the black Flames that consumed everything is a real good one but I also like it that you made the human character stay human and fight the evil one thing I dislike about all these stories and animes where all the conflict stays hidden from the humans it's just that I mean if humans are going to stand up for themselves they have to at least know there's a war for them to fight.
 
Well I'm a fan of the more edgy dark Powers so the black Flames that consumed everything is a real good one but I also like it that you made the human character stay human and fight the evil one thing I dislike about all these stories and animes where all the conflict stays hidden from the humans it's just that I mean if humans are going to stand up for themselves they have to at least know there's a war for them to fight.
Oh, if you don't like it when the shadow war and whatnot are hidden from mankind, boy oh boy are you gonna love what I have planned for the future.
*cackles in glee*
 
Kalawarner might have done some shit in her life but, man, she didn't deserve that. Then again, I don't think anyone does.

Can Twilight Healing heal Souls or whatever construct angels use for bodies?
 
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