Meridian_Prime
Died an ugly death by back-catalogue.
- Location
- United Kingdom
- Pronouns
- She/Her
Which reminds me, I forgot to re-edit with my latest changes.
I wouldn't call it bloodthirsty per se... but I can kinda see what you mean, I guess? Naruto wants the money, and they tried to kill his friend. That's... kind of it. He hasn't actually killed anyone, thought. If he had, he'd be much harder on the decision.
I'm not necessarily saying it's bad. Given his different upbringing, this may well make sense for him--as I said, I might just need to reread from the top. It's just that Naruto as a character has always been defined by is almost ridiculous capacity for kindness and forgiveness, especially given the world he lives in. It's kind of his shtick. So to see him go the typical ninja route of "kill them to deal with the problem" is a bit jarring. He spends half of canon going on about his 'ninja way' and changing how ninjas operate after all.
Just thought it might be useful feedback. As a reader, that line really stuck out to me.