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Digital Helix [Digimon/Worm] [Fusion]

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Dragon getting involved is such an amazing consequence of fusing the two settings. I'm annoyed I didn't consider it as a possibility, but I'm stoked that you did. I'm looking forward to more.
 
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Axel Fones said:
Dragon getting involved is such an amazing consequence of fusing the two settings. I'm annoyed I didn't consider it as a possibility, but I'm stoked that you did. I'm looking forward to more.
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That's one of the reasons this is called "Digital Helix." It's going to alternate between the two views.

Taylor's next chapter is going to pick up from her POV of the fight. And its aftermath.
 
Hahahhah. Well at least Taylor's there to protect Dragon from those mean wards!

Also, good reasoning on why the partners weren't there to greet the wards.
 
Awesome chapter, really can't wait till next one. The battle felt good and Dragon was bad ass. Wonder if the wards will recognize Dragon and will she be open about her situation.
 
Okay I love chibi-properly aged Dragon Body for poor more mature Dragon mind. She's either going to get along fantastically with Missy or Missy will murder her in her sleep for being able to skip past the 'being treated as a little kid' phase of heroing.

I also like the fact that Dragon is already hacking the setting. That is amusing and fun and I'm looking forward to more. I'm especially looking forward to her introduction to the others and when they realize that the little girl form is Dragon's 'base' form.
 
Dragon's about 5-7 at this point in time, but mentally, she's about the equivalent of someone in their mid-twenties. Is it any small wonder that she'd adjust her body to match her avatar?
 
And... added Dragon's first Digi-pedia entry.

Note. Dragon and Taylor will both have entries after each of their chapters. Taylor's will be about the Digimon encountered, and Dragon's will be about the technology, aspects of the Digital World, and parahumans.
 
Ellf said:
Dragon's about 5-7 at this point in time, but mentally, she's about the equivalent of someone in their mid-twenties. Is it any small wonder that she'd adjust her body to match her avatar?
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Of course it's not a surprise. It just makes me smile to see her have to keep going back through it from time to time. I hope she also reverts when sleeping. That would be cute.
 
Stratagemini said:
Hahahhah. Well at least Taylor's there to protect Dragon from those mean wards!

Also, good reasoning on why the partners weren't there to greet the wards.
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It just made sense, honestly. With them in costume, the partners wouldn't recognize them right off the bat. And since Taylor (and Dragon) were the last to arrive, Dorimon had led the others off to look around.
 
Ellf said:
And... added Dragon's first Digi-pedia entry.

Note. Dragon and Taylor will both have entries after each of their chapters. Taylor's will be about the Digimon encountered, and Dragon's will be about the technology, aspects of the Digital World, and parahumans.
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And digital parahumans? I wanna see her scrap book of Adorable Missy Moments. Presumably with pictures.
 
Ellf said:
"Oh?" Dokugumon asked, less than a meter away. "No matter…" It bent forward to bite down on me, and I turned my head, lodging my helmet in its maw.
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I suggest he actually say something like, "Oh? What's that?" rather than just "Oh?"

"You got one thing right" doesn't quite flow to a simple "Oh?" as the "Oh?" has an implication of disagreement.
 
I'll include that in the revisions I do tonight.

Primary focus for revision will be the fight scene. But there's also some bits in chapter 1 that I'll clean up.
 
Ellf said:
I'll include that in the revisions I do tonight.

Primary focus for revision will be the fight scene. But there's also some bits in chapter 1 that I'll clean up.
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Cool. Liking the story so far. I look forward to the kids' take on the only adult in their party pulsing into tiny-kid form (I mean, half Vista's age, if that!) before turning into a digimon.

Are the others going to be fusing with their partners?

Does Dragon HAVE a partner, or is she partnerless because she can transform? (It'd be kind-of funny if she were Kid Win's partner, with the partnering system having thought of her as a digimon rather than a digidestined, but I'm pretty sure she's a digidestined.)
 
Segev said:
Cool. Liking the story so far. I look forward to the kids' take on the only adult in their party pulsing into tiny-kid form (I mean, half Vista's age, if that!) before turning into a digimon.

Are the others going to be fusing with their partners?

Does Dragon HAVE a partner, or is she partnerless because she can transform? (It'd be kind-of funny if she were Kid Win's partner, with the partnering system having thought of her as a digimon rather than a digidestined, but I'm pretty sure she's a digidestined.)
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Dragon is basically her own partner. She's one of the Chosen Children, but due to her nature as a digital being, the Will of the Digital World didn't create a partner for her, instead opting for her to be Ryudamon. Technically, she's almost a second partner for Taylor, at least in how Ryudamon and Dorumon work together.

MetalKoromon is Kid Win's partner. Pagumon is Tecton's partner. Kyaromon is Flechette's partner, and Chichimon is Vista's.

By the end of the next episode, everyone will be in Rookie form.
 
Segev said:
Only when they change into digital champions to save the digital world.
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Just want you to know that the second I read this, I heard it. And then had the theme tune in my head for a good hour.

ShadowAngelBeta said:
Considering they are literally undead hungering for the flesh and souls of the living, probably still a univresally bad thing.
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Man, all this bias against Virus Attributes :p

Ellf said:
Dragon's about 5-7 at this point in time, but mentally, she's about the equivalent of someone in their mid-twenties. Is it any small wonder that she'd adjust her body to match her avatar?
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Question, the totality of Dragon has been ported over to the digital world, but have her restrictions persisted through that change, or is she free? Or is that spoiler territory and you can't answer?

(The thought that occurred was her requirement to obey 'legitimate authority' depending on how that's precisely defined whatever digimon rule the digital world could force her to turn against the other Chosen :p)
 
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actually, a vague thought, I wonder how comparable in processing power Yggdrasil is vs entities
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Seraphimon's suicide attack is literally "And then we had a second big bang." Alphamon is "I punch you in every timeline until I win."

Yggdrasil is on a different level entirely from them. However, it can also be punched in the face by best boy:


Something that sadly no one ever seems to want to write happening to Scion.

Yggdrasil can also become a waifumon:

Some would argue by this metric Yggdrasil is clearly superior.
 
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You know finding out there is a world of super powered Digital Lifeforms will probably make the PRT have kittens which will go great with the ones they'll have when they find out Dragon's vanished. Finding out that some factions from the digital world can effortlessly open gates to Earth Bet will keep many a director up at night.

Saint will just be rocking back and forth.
 
Here's the thing. One major premise to this fic is that power levels are relative. Not every feat shown in the series for Digimon is applicable to this "season."

And the Entities... are more powerful than you might think, given their abilities.

But yes. You've inspired me to have Taylor (or someone) go up and flat-out punch Zion.
 
Ellf said:
Here's the thing. One major premise to this fic is that power levels are relative. Not every feat shown in the series for Digimon is applicable to this "season."

And the Entities... are more powerful than you might think, given their abilities.

But yes. You've inspired me to have Taylor (or someone) go up and flat-out punch Zion.
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not sre even zion would be able to handle ZeedMilleniumon
 
Ellf said:
Good thing ZeedMilleniumon isn't the big bad of the fic. But believe me, Zion... well, the Gold Morning showed some of what an Entity is capable of.
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cool. now im wondering what dragon things of Jogress/DNA digievolution. (am i dating myself knowing what Jogress is?)
 
Reworking two things about Chapter 2.

1. Dragon's introduction to the Digital World and her new human body
2. The fight scene.
 
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