StatelessGem
Bane of the Iron Lords
A single answer for many questions and problems
scorpio723 said:
- Multiple, but I kept coming back to the Return of Zeruel. I think it's because I believe it's the first twist that was set up beforehand coming to fruition. Also the visual. I have hundreds of ways to play with the perspective in order to make viewers realize just how HUGE he is.
- To be honest, I feel like there weren't any glaring flaws, but I do feel like some parts of Asuka's story were set up and kind of dropped. Granted it was filled in and inferred throughout, but I do get the sense there are some parts missing.
- Fave Destiny character? Cayde. Hands down. You absolutely nailed Nate's tone and he provided some much needed levity to everything. Fave Eva character? Toss up between Shinji and Rei if only due to how you changed and didn't change them. With Shinji you basically reconstructed the "Shinji mans up," plot, and Rei, well, if anyone's going to do evil Rei, they're going to have difficulty topping yours if only due to the scale.
- Praedyth, if only due to the shit he had to go through, and earning himself a place amongst the Last Centurion for sheer perserverance. Fave villain? Dominus Ghaul. Why? I AM GHAUL. Seriously you gave him depth and ambitions and power way beyond canon and it was awesome.
- Striketeam Kingslayer, Zeruel, Shinji and Rei vs. Oryx. The entire story started with the Hive. It was only fitting that the end comes facing the Taken King. (Okay sort of, but Rei and the Hex weren't exactly a battle)
- Second Cataclysm. Everything just crashes together in a big maelstrom and you managed to juggle it all.
- Best Ghost
- And yeah, the understated but very present affection the two have for each other. I'd compare them to Norm and Marge Gunderson from Fargo in a heartbeat.
Now some questions for you @Ultra Sonic 007...
In all seriousness, you did an excellent job juggling such a large cast and infusing them with feeling (Shaxx after Wei Ning's death comes to mind) amidst an epic scope. Good luck in your endeavours!
- Was there anything left on the cutting room floor? Why?
- Why Shinji and Eris?
- Absolute favorite part of the story to write? Least favorite?
- How would the choices for "Which mission will Chief go on," affect the overall story, if there was any.
- What happened to make Cayde reset?
- Can Mara perform the most important act of all...dancing?
Fight forever Guardian.
Ultra Sonic 007 said:/Twenty Years after the Battle of Saturn/
/Vanguard Headquarters, the Saladin Forge District, the Reborn City/
Cayde-7 slowly sipped his shot of whiskey, sighing with relief as the alcohol went down his synthetic throat. Even fifteen years later, it was a sensation that he still found...novel, if that even made sense.
(Dr. Ritsuko Akagi - inhaling on the end of a cigarette, wasn't that something! - quietly strapped him down. "It's going to feel rather jarring; you'll go offline and be subjected to a metaphysically-induced coma; but above all else, don't panic." Hey, if it meant actually getting some artificial taste buds and olfactory nodes, then hey now things were going dark and now he was waking up and holy SHIT he could actually taste the air and smell it! That include the rank stench of the Exo scientist's cigarette smoke, and he bluntly told her so.)
Sure, the sheer shock of the experience had jolted him into another reset, but it had been totally worth it.
Dont forget that your audience was very much in favor of the crackiest of crack ships.2) Because it was funny.
But seriously, their character arcs felt oddly compatible, as far as their canon selves go. Shinji wanted to connect with others to battle his loneliness, but feared getting hurt, and so tried not to connect as well...eventually culminating in such isolation and self-hatred that he wanted to end everything. There were moments where he seemed to make progress, seemed to connect with others...and yet, as surrounding events took their toll, those feeble connections (and the issues that others around him had) couldn't last.
Eris, once a Guardian with comrades and teams, lost her entire fireteam, her Ghost, and her eyes, traversing the Dark Below the Moon for decades following her fireteam's grim fate; the person who emerged from that pit was a bitter woman who sought nothing but vengeance upon the Hive. We see from her interactions with the Player Character and certain Grimoire that she does have some connections, of sorts...but not enough to override her obsession with the Hive, for she departed the City before the Red War, seeking knowledge of Nokris, and the Hive's other gods.
Given some of the changes to the backstory here (Shinji had a longer and more brutal tenure as an Evangelion pilot due to the greater numbers of Ahakmara, which forced him to mature in ways that canon!Shinji did not; the Ghosts are not merely drones, but are also souls of those who usually bear a connection with their Guardian; Rose being the shippiest shipper who ever shipped), they just...fit.
It's weird.
">:O "
Okay, not that weird.
Dont forget that your audience was very much in favor of the crackiest of crack ships.
Nano Soldier 2016 said:I know. I ship Shinji and Mari together because of how crazy it is
Tyrant's Bane said:You know, I'm not even gonna lie, that would be entertaining and hilarious as all hell. Not something we would see from the main story, but for a omake it would be brilliant.
Circle of Nyx said:The deranged Queen of Escalation with the withdrawn Invincible Ikari?
Seems legit.
Nano Soldier 2016 said:I ship it in general not just in fanfics. Though it would be hilarious to see Ghost!Mari flirt with Shinji
SpaceBattles was much the same:
...you know, I was going back through this story over the past week (it's weird how many typos there are that slip one's notice that in retrospect seem glaringly obvious, it's crazy). And of all the things that get the creative juices going, this is the thing that does it?
Dadgummit.
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When it comes to the Art of Conversation, words are often thrown out in the heat of the moment. Trust me, I know.
Shinji Ikari...well, that kid wasn't one for speaking thoughtlessly or needlessly, in the Time Before or in his new life as a Guardian; you'd have to talk to the Iron Lady for more details about his former life. Whether it was because he didn't want to cause offense, or because he felt that his own words couldn't compare to those of others, or any number of other reasons that a child soldier would have given...well, those reasons were his own.
Mari Makinami? She's on the opposite end, as far as speaking goes. Boisterous and outspoken, 'a verdammt troll' as her Guardian would say. One could even say that she's very illustrious with her words...and yes, I know her middle name is 'Illustrious'. If that's not a sign of someone whose parents weren't right in the head, well...
So. I get what you're wondering: how in the world do those two have a romance? Especially when one's a Ghost?
Well, for the second question, I'd direct you to the Vanguard Commander, for starters. Kind of hard not to make it work when your wife from the Time Before is your Ghost....what, you didn't know? Have you HEARD Osiris and Sagira talk to each other? They're the EPITOME of the 'arguing like a married couple' joke.
As for the first one...well, that's why you came to Cayde for the story...wait, it's not? You came to collect on a bet?
...huh. So you did...if I gave you the details on how it all started, would you consider the bet settled?
You will? Sweet. Might as well take a seat, we'll be here a while.
So, as far as I'm aware...I guess the first place you'd have to go to find out where it started would be the Lunar Siege. You know, where we found NERV-Luna while it was under assault from the Fallen and the Hive...
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/Central Complex, NERV-Luna/
The little newbie had asked for stories, from the Time Before. Asuka-2 had obliged, much to Mari's delight.
To think, it had only been a little over three months since they had rescued the little scamp from the Cosmodrome, so it was only natural that he would have wanted some more details about the old world. After all, not every Guardian had the best memory...and even fewer held a desire to remember. Not necessarily because they were weak (as her Teutonic Titan would allege)...but because knowing just how much humanity had lost could be pretty depressing. And why focus on depressing stuff, when there was a Last City to fight for?
Mari wondered if Shinji Ikari knew just how much of Asuka's favor he had won, by simply asking about the past...even if he didn't much like it.
"So. You remember everything?"
"...I remember more. The puzzle...is more visible. But there's still a lot of...fog."
"I see. You at least feel better about your past life?"
"...no. I feel worse." Ooh, that was going to get under Princess's goat something fierce.
"Say what?!" Her Guardian got to her feet, looking incredulously at the stoic Hunter. "Even through all the battles I went through, the sheer sensation of piloting Eva was fantastic!" Which was one hundred percent true, because duh. "Do you have no sense of adventure or excitement?!"
'Ah, it's just like old times.' Nostalgia could be a hell of a drug, especially when it involved a fiery redhead with the most entertaining temper in all of space and time.
Shinji's jaw tightened, and he spoke with barely-constrained anger. "...in every battle, people died. Everything that Eva felt, I felt...every claw, every tooth, every injury...it was a war that seemed to have no end. I was a Pilot because there was no other choice. I remember a pervasive sense of hopelessness. And remembering that is supposed to make me feel better?"
Asuka-2's response was completely predictable. And completely undiplomatic. "Oh please. Like you weren't aware of what you were getting into when you agreed to be a Pilot! The time to say 'no' would have been long before that, you baka!"
BAM.
The pink Ghost actually blinked as the kid slammed his fist into the locker behind him. His entire frame was shuddering with anxiety, and that anger was beginning to leak out. "...the day I found out about Eva...was the same day I battled the Ahamkara for the very first time."
'Oh wow...that...that really sucks.'
"I had no training. No warning. I had nothing." Shinji's blue eyes burned with indignation. "So don't compare yourself to me!"
"...hmph." Asuka-2 sighed - because really, how could you argue against that? - and slowly sat back down on an aged bench. That brief bout of her youthful impetuousness departed, and with it went Mari's nostalgia. Now, there was only the aged weariness that was part and parcel of the Crimson Exo's modern reputation amongst the Guardians. "...sounds like it sucked."
"Yeah. It did." The kid exhaled, and all of that the tension left his body like steam from a tea kettle. "...but I do remember one thing very clearly. I remember how powerful Eva could be." He stiffly bowed. "Arigato." Standing back up, he began to walk away, with his Ghost trailing behind him. The entire air between the two Evangelion Pilots was uneasy, restless, and agitated.
'...well. This is awkward.'
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You ever wonder how certain things could change history? I think some of those literary buffs in the Cryptarchy call it 'for want of a nail'. Not sure why. And I'm not talking about big things, like if Evangelion Unit-02 didn't actually show up to stop Crota during the Clash of Giants, or if we lost Twilight Gap. I'm talking about the little things.
Quite frankly, it would have been easy for them to leave it at that, to let things simmer for a while. If Ikari's distaste for the Crucible wasn't so well-known, I imagine they could have settled things there. But they didn't.
But that's Mari for you. She likes butting in.
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Well, it was time to make it un-awkward. "So...where ya goin'?"
Shinji Ikari stopped, slowly looking over his shoulder at her.
Mari ignored Asuka-2's curious glare, floating over towards the young Hunter. "I mean, I get that this story wasn't exactly what you wanted. And again, I get that Princess isn't much of a story-teller-"
"Screw you too, Mari."
"-but I don't think it's a good idea to just leave it there. I mean, we Eva Pilots have to stick together, right?"
Mari. What the HELL are you doing? Her Guardian's thoughts were accusatory.
Mari's mental reply was seamless, even as she continued talking out loud to Shinji. 'Come on, I know you're still curious about the kid's Ghost.' Because honestly, the idea that Yui had simply forgotten to tell her Guardian that Ghosts had souls was impossible to swallow, even if Mari wasn't quite as paranoid about the possible reasons as Asuka was. 'This way, you can get your answer now instead of stewing about it.'
"...you know Shinji, we COULD use her help."
Shinji sighed, turning towards his Ghost. "Yui-"
"Well, there's no harm in asking, right?" she chirped. "And I'm sure Eris wouldn't say no."
"Ooh, you're going on a mission with creepy-chan?" Mari's petals spun, because this was juicy stuff. "She's kind of a loner, ain't she? What possessed her to ask you for help?" Because really, there was no way that the kid sought out Eris as a teammate for a mission.
Shinji looked back and forth between the two Ghosts, before finally acquiescing. "...it involves Unit-01."
And just like that, he had piqued Asuka's attention. "...oh?" The Exo's blue eyes narrowed. "Your Evangelion still exists?"
"...according to Eris Morn, yes. Her mission involves reclaiming it."
Asuka-2's eyes gleamed. "Is that a fact?"
Mari's eye winked with glee.
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"HEY! ERIS!"
The leader of the fireteam - comprised of Omar Agah, Sai Mota, Jaren Ward, and Shin Malphur - turned around, looking at her erstwhile sixth teammate: Shinji Ikari. But he was not the one that had shouted. Rather, it had been a very familiar Exo. "Asuka-2. This is a pleasant surprise."
"It always is. Heard you're going hunting for a certain Evangelion. You have room for one more?"
Eris briefly glared in Shinji Ikari's direction. She still had her misgivings about the boy's character and fortitude - despite Cayde-6's words to the contrary - but his presence was an honest necessity if they were going to rescue Unit-01 from the Hive. That he had somehow managed to catch the Crimson Exo's attention was...shocking, to be honest. But Eris was never one to turn down a trump card. "For someone of your caliber? Always."
"Sweet. You gonna brief us on the way?"
"Of course."
"Where are we headed anyway?"
"To Old Japan. To the region once known as Hakone."
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As six jumpships - plus one - flew back towards Earth, Mari took the opportunity to finally get back to a topic that she had been dying to get more answers on. So naturally, she opened up a comm-link to everyone on Eris's fireteam, because she knew that extra voices would help her get the juicier details! "So, billy-kun...mind explaining to me how you and Misato Katsuragi became a thing?"
The Hunter's response was predictable. "Ehh?!"
"Oh come on, did you seriously think I was going to let that go?"
"C-Come on, is this really the time-?"
Sai Mota's interruption was swift and brutal. "Wait. We talking about the Iron Lady? This kid got with the IRON LADY?"
"I know, that's what I said!"
"...pretty impressive," complimented Jaren.
"Right on, kid," acknowledged Omar. "Mind telling me how exactly you managed to pull THAT off? Maybe offer me some tips?"
"Like you would ever need them, Omar," remarked Sai before turning her merciless questioning onto Shinji. "Okay kid, I'm going to need details too. Starting with how far you've gotten! We talking first base, second base?"
If Mari still had a face, her grin would have been very cattish. "Oh, judging from how Misato talked about it, it was a full home run."
Sai Mota's exclamation of disbelief was loud. Very loud.
"...lucky bastard," said Omar, sounding both in awe and somewhat jealous.
Shinji's response was a mix of choking on his own spit and stuttering out a bunch of gibberish.
"I think you're making my Guardian short-circuit from embarrassment," remarked Yui. And with that, the channel to Shinji's jumpship cut off.
All Mari heard before Asuka cut the channel to everyone else was an explosive sigh of irritation from Eris. "At least I know I'm not the only one who's curious!" She glanced back towards her Guardian. "And now the ice is officially broken!"
"...Mari."
"Yes?"
"SHUT. UP."
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...well, it's not like Asuka's Ghost has ever been FAMOUS for being tactful.
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/I have no idea where this is going
//and I have no idea how long it'll go
///but hey, let's have some fun while it lasts!
Damn it Ultra you make me look like a madman in front of my class! Anyway, i'm glad i finally found this. I've followed your fics for a long while now, starting from binge reading MFE one night.
Well, i dont have much to say except for thank you @Ultra Sonic 007 . Your fics always made my day![]()
PREACH IT BROTHER!BUT GET IN THERE AND GET THAT SKANK AWAY FROM YOUR GUARDIANS MAN!
Congratulations Ultra, you just locked yourself into writing us an entirely new timeline.
BUTTERFLYING INTENSIFIES!
She should have gone with "I'm a Titan. Your existence is now invalid."