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Again, if Neville's scar hurt while in Quirrel's class, I'd be much happier.
(hey you know what maybe the toxic fumes from their potion were irritating the scar tissue, I'm sure that's it)
Deathly Particles [Harry Potter AU]
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Again, if Neville's scar hurt while in Quirrel's class, I'd be much happier.
(hey you know what maybe the toxic fumes from their potion were irritating the scar tissue, I'm sure that's it)
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The mistake of blaming Neville, or the mistake of partnering with him?
FullNothingness
Mostly DHMO.
He is complaining about having headaches all the time and bad dreams... I don't think he is complaining about only right there and then.
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It's obvious. There is no Voldemort.
Ivy's mother staged the whole 'Death Eater' thing via copious application of obliviates and memory changing potions and memory charms, with a bunch of help from Gilderoy Lockhart. Neither of them liked the way the wizard society was working so they tried to force through some change.
Frank and Alice Longbottom were some of the few wizards who figured it out and stood against them, so they had to be removed from the picture. Gilderoy, generally useless twit that he is, botched an obloviate that went off course and smacked into Neville, accidentally implanting all the real memories of Gilderoy into the baby Neville, while leaving a scar.
And now that he's growing up those memories are affecting him, trying to get him to remember what really happened on the night his parents died, but painfully clashing with a mind set in 10 years worth of experience.
I don't know why you guys can't see what's right in front of your faces.
Ivy's mother staged the whole 'Death Eater' thing via copious application of obliviates and memory changing potions and memory charms, with a bunch of help from Gilderoy Lockhart. Neither of them liked the way the wizard society was working so they tried to force through some change.
Frank and Alice Longbottom were some of the few wizards who figured it out and stood against them, so they had to be removed from the picture. Gilderoy, generally useless twit that he is, botched an obloviate that went off course and smacked into Neville, accidentally implanting all the real memories of Gilderoy into the baby Neville, while leaving a scar.
And now that he's growing up those memories are affecting him, trying to get him to remember what really happened on the night his parents died, but painfully clashing with a mind set in 10 years worth of experience.
I don't know why you guys can't see what's right in front of your faces.
1.5: The Restricted Section
BeaconHill
Lost Among Carbon Fields
Deathly Particles
Book 1: Ivy Potter and the Mirror of Erised
Chapter 5: The Restricted Section
Book 1: Ivy Potter and the Mirror of Erised
Chapter 5: The Restricted Section
WITHDRAWN
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Special thanks to my beta readers GlassGirlCeci, who receives a needle with two eyes, and Adept Arcanist, who receives a needle with two points.
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Mother Nyx
Mother of Elpis
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Lmao, Hermione, please.
Doing things like that will ruin the ship.
Doing things like that will ruin the ship.
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The dialogue feels a bit stilted at times. Hermione sounds too old when talking to Ivy about the restricted section, and Quirrel saying "You got me" to an eleven year old, with no chuckle or anything, struck me as very odd.
Other than that, great chapter! Detentions with Professor Mom ahead!
Other than that, great chapter! Detentions with Professor Mom ahead!
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So Quirell isn't Voldemort here? Intresting...
And we saw in 1.4
Neville's scar hurt in Potions. Could this mean that Lily out of all people has Voldemort here?
That would fuck up Ivy pretty badly, but wpuld be a cool twist!
Really loving this story
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Can't tell if this is ominous foreshadowing, regarding the title, or you being a deliberately misleading author. Or both.
I mean, people are mostly liquid by volume. They're like potions.
A few days before school started:
"Just thought I'd let all my other co-workers know that I gave Ivy her father's invisibility cloak, so if you want to keep her out of anywhere after curfew make sure you set up a charm."
"So... out of the library?"
"Yeah, that should cover it."
"I'll just charm one of the books in the restricted section to 'shout' at her to go back to sleep in my voice every 5 minutes, in that case."
"Oh, see if you can record it! It'll be hilarious! She'll probably trip over half the library trying to run away."
Just checking here: Quirinus was in Ravenclaw, correct?
It almost sounds like you're saying he's the head of it (my house), but I'm guessing that's not the case.
Ah, 'duelling'. Is that what kids call it these days?
Yeeeeah. It really does seem that Hermione sicked Flitwick on Ivy. Like, that kind of thing genuinely deserves a prank retaliation. Or just cutting off the budding friendship entirely. Like, that is a tattletale to the highest degree. This wasn't to protect Ivy or anyone else, it was to get Ivy in trouble. That's genuinely malicious, even if Hermione doesn't think of it in those terms.
Though, there is a chance it wasn't her, so maybe.
Though, there is a chance it wasn't her, so maybe.
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wtdtd
slow thinker, with crippling abundance of time
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What happened?
TheMagister
Lord Magus
BeaconHill removed most of her HP stories due to JK's anti trans crusade. The only ones remaining these days are the trans Harry ones.
Honestly this thread could probably be locked at this point, I doubt this story is going to get reposed anytime soon.
wtdtd
slow thinker, with crippling abundance of time
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…Seems counterproductive, but oh well.