Brothers: A Tale of Two Alchemists (An Adventure of Alchemy, And Good Intentions)

The Flamel school is actually considered very basic. Serviceable, very adaptable to situations, but very basic. Basically, anyone can learn it, and anyone can use it, unlike the other schools.
Oh so that was a 'You think you get into a prestigious role like this only knowing that basic shit.' exclamation.

[X]Wander the City: You are going to wander around the city, maybe you can see the great works of Howlard Streetpainter, or the Statutory of Gildran the Marbleborn.
 
Mentors Worry
Mentors Worry

Barristan Riley was not a very patient man. In fact, he was irritable, much of his time he only wished to maintain his bookstore, and enjoy the twilight years of his life in peace. He did not want to repeat the mistakes and dwell upon the mistakes he had made in the past.

But the Telegram he had received from his last two students worried him greatly. They were coming south, their reasons unknown to him. Perhaps it was just a visit. That was what he hoped, but he was not nervous. He knew the boys would not abandon their mother and father without reason.

He hoped that Estelle was okay. She was too good of a person to be wrapped in the life he had spent years trying to get out of.

If Mars had indeed continued his research as Barry had suspected when he could no longer teach the boys…

He did not wish to think about such things. Such things should be left in the past, where they belonged, not brought back to the present because of the benefits.

The door's bell rang, and the door opened. The heavy sounds of footsteps of boots marching entered Barry's ears. "We're closed." He stated, not noticing anything from the person who entered his home and place of business.

"You're the only one here Barry." The man spoke. Ahh… The new blood who has been making so much of a ruckus since joining the Retinue. Colonel Gavin Freemen. Last he bothered listening to one of the boys reading the newspaper, The young Colonel was rising through the ranks faster than any man in the Retinues history. This was the third time the upstart had barged into his home to speak to him, and despite the young man's obvious intelligence and wit, he was dreadfully annoying. And persistent.

It reminded him of Nero and Ares when they first demanded that he train them in the Art of Combat and Alchemy.

Perhaps it was the only reason Barry tolerated him. He was too much like his favorite students to push away.

"Go away," Barry ordered. But now was not the time to chat… He had to think about the boys, to find out why they were coming south. "I have no time nor want to talk to you."

"I'm not alone this time." The youthful voice replied.

"Who else is here?" He asked.

"Hello, Barry." The second voice stated. "It's been a long time."

Fucking hell, it was a reunion of the decade. "Kailvin." He turned, trying to face the counter as to at least partially face the men who had entered the store. "I'm retired. I've been retired from the retinue for 40 years. I have no want, nor need to come back to that life. So buy something or get out."

"It's about Mars." Kailvin replied.

You froze, feeling your blood cool in your veins. The boys… oh by the gods, not the boys. Barry found himself standing up straight, slamming his hands down onto the table. "What happened to the boys!? Estelle? Are they alright!?" You knew that Telegram was a few weeks old… but a lot of things can happen in a few weeks.

Barry felt a calming hand on his shoulders. "That's why we're here. It worked. They're alright."

The realization finally dawned upon Barry what just happened, and he collapsed into his chair. "By the gods."

Then the colonel spoke. "The report came in yesterday from one of my men. The signs were all correct to point to the ritual."

The Changing ritual… the only ritual that could possibly create a Philosopher's stone.

"He used his sons as the-" Barry whimpered, trying to process what had happened. "Mars couldn't have cracked the Lille Equation. That is not possible, it's been stumping all the alchemists who studied it since-"

"Since the Dawn War, we know," Kailvin stated. "Mars has disappeared, taking all of his notes with him. His wife has not seen him, nor has he tried to kill his sons since the experiment, so it seems he still has a use for them."

"So what do you need me to do?" Barry asked.

The Colonel than cleared his throat. "I think it may be best if they enter the Retinue. They are already coming south, so convince them to join."

"NO!" Barry found himself screaming. "I am not going to let you turn them into murderers!" Barry than felt his counter. There was a sticky liquid coming from his knuckles. Blood.

The two men were silent. "The civilian branch exists for a reason-" The general stated, but Barry was not going to have it.

"I know… but that will still put them under your command, you butcher." Barry growled. "I still remember what you did at Ponsia."

"Would you rather you let them be at the mercy of their father?"
The general asked. "Especially when he has done the impossible?"

With the words the colonel then said. "Thank you for your time Barristan."

The door opened, the bell dinged. "Also." The general stated. "When they come in, I will ask them about what their father did, and if they remember what their father did to them."

"I can't lie to them," Barry replied. "I need to tell them the truth about their father, it is in they're right."

"And would you rather they not be protected?" the general asked.

Barry weighed his options before he relented. "Fine."

"Thank you Barristan." Kailvin replied.

And the door shut behind the two men, while Barry got onto his knees and prayed to Altosk.

AN: Enjoy
 
After The Talk
After The Talk:

Prince Alexander was very pleased with the Interview with Nero Schwarze. The boy was definitely as bright as his spies told him he would be, he had the tact to keep quiet and not ask stupid questions from him and he was socially awkward enough to manipulate if given the right information.

Nero was perfect… save for one glaring character flaw that would make him all but useless.

Nero seemed to take more from his bastard pacifist of a teacher than he would have liked. Sylvia had told him that he was a follower of Altosk. He had suspected that Nero only paid lip service to the lord of knowledge, as all but the most studious of alchemists give as mere courtesy. But instead, the boy was like his teacher Barristan. A true believer, if not in practice, then in spirit.

He would not do for Alexanders plans of course. Pacifism and mercy had no place in his revolution, even if it was an internal one between ideologies, rather than men with power deciding one man's ass should sit the throne instead of another.

It could be worse however… The Empire could be like the Koryo Alliance, where the only way things seem to get done is through one nations bullying of another.

The Unification Wars were long past, the political inertia from the first emperors had stabilized the empire into what it is today. A safe society, of a great nation, with a large standing army that cracked down on anything resembling dissidents, trying it's best to remain afloat as the world continues to get smaller with the rapidly advancing technologies.

It was a fragile thing, and Alexander knew that the worst could happen as quickly as they could get better. And he knew that he could very well be the last emperor.

But while he was not a student of Alchemy, he did know the fundamental principles of it. To Create Something, something of Equal Value must be given.

He was not a fool, he knew the old system of autonomy for some and total rule for other states was not going to work any more, not with the telegram, not with the train and the interconnected nature that the empire was becoming.

One man could no longer rule the empire, and bend the nation to his will through strength and brutality.

Alexander than walked past Sylvia and she followed close behind. "What do you think of the boy?" He asked.

"He's certainly not what I expected as a student of Barristain Riley." She replied with a cold monotone voice. It seems she was still maintaining the veneer of professionalism, even when they were alone. "Though he certainly has conviction within him."

Dammit all. They were alone, she could at least drop the voice. "I think he's exactly what we should have expected." Alexander replied as he stopped and looked out the window. "He won't serve in the military, that much is certain, but knowing any student of Barristian, he wants to help people better their lives in any way he can. It would work marvelously if he had the right challenges to face, and if he completed them admirably. It would do wonders to the Retinues reputation, and give me more political bargaining power with my father."

That made Sylvia nod in agreement. "What the General? You know how he feels about underages members joining the retinue."

"The general will accept the decision as the boy has made the choice on his own and has received permission from his guardian, as is within his right to do so under the law." Alexander replied. "And he has also requested a civilian post, so he won't be wandering around in a bloody battlefield."

"And what if the Chancellor wants to move him to court?" Sylvia asked.

"Wilfred won't, I'll make sure of that." Alexander stated.

At the mention of his father's long serving Chancellor, Sylvia stiffened next to Alexander, and he felt her hand wrapped around his fingers. Oh now she wants that… oh well. "Just be careful okay."

"I always am." Alexander replied.

Alexander than wandered away, Sylvia letting go of his hand and not following him to the Generals office.

General Tremere was reading some paperwork as Alex entered, but the mand did not stand in attention, as so many officers did in his presence. One of the many perks of being a hero of the Empire. "Alexander." He said.

"General." Alexander replied taking a seat. He than slide over the folder to him. "Schwarze is the one we need."

The General's sole eyebrow raised quizzically. "How so?" He asked.

"He's Exactly like Barristian." Alexander stated.

"In what way? Barristian isn't what I would call perfect." The general replied.

Alexander could see the twinkle in the General's eye, as he always seemed to have when he was lying about something. "Although he has not shown me his abilities yet, I am certain he could pass any test we throw at him." The twinkle was gone now, and the general leaned forward. "And I am very confident that we can use him for our purposes."

"What do you propose?" The General asked.

"We make him our runner." Some messages had to be delivered in person. The telegram offices were still not filled with his men yet to where he can safely send telegrams to his allies. "The only problem is, he would need a position directly under me or you to make that happen without causing any suspicion from the Chancellor." He replied. "And we don't have one, not one we can fill without sacking one our allies and making them go to Wilfreds camp."

"It would seem rather strange for a freshly recruited member of our retinue to be given a high ranking position? That would raise eyebrows?" The General replied.

"True… but you must remember who trained him." Alexander could see the idea's forming in the Generals head.

"Barristian won't like it." The general responded.

"He doesn't have to, as long as we keep him safe, and he does his job properly." Alexander replied.

The general leaned back into his chair. "Fine… I'll look through the records, see if I can dig something up from old positions that we can use from back during the Unification Wars."

Alexander nodded. "See that it gets done general."

And with that, Alexander walked out of the room.

AN: Enjoy.
 
That made Sylvia nod in agreement. "What the General? You know how he feels about underages members joining the retinue."

"The general will accept the decision as the boy has made the choice on his own and has received permission from his guardian, as is within his right to do so under the law." Alexander replied. "And he has also requested a civilian post, so he won't be wandering around in a bloody battlefield."
Is this the same General that tried to convince Barristan to make the boys join?
Seems there are a lot of plots up in the air at once.
 
Is this the same General that tried to convince Barristan to make the boys join?
Seems there are a lot of plots up in the air at once.
Yes. As for everything being up in the air, this is more... introducing characters and their motivations, and each subsequent arc goes into those plot lines in detail.
 
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  • [X]Wander the City: You are going to wander around the city, maybe you can see the great works of Howlard Streetpainter, or the Statutory of Gildran the Marbleborn.
 
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[X]Wander the City: You are going to wander around the city, maybe you can see the great works of Howlard Streetpainter, or the Statutory of Gildran the Marbleborn.

Art!
 
Wandering the City
Wandering the City:


Nero and Ares found themselves wandering the Imperial Capital. The sights and sounds of the bustling city was almost too much for the two boys to take in. the machines of industry burned into the night as smoke looked over the city like a black plume of smoke. Cars drove past them, honking their horns as they wandered off the main roads and onto the stone sidewalks.



Everything looked so nice and clean. Stores were stocked not with the basic goods of survival, like so many others up north, but with toys, dresses, suits and all other matters that only high society could afford.


Nero did not know how to feel about it, but considering that every now and then, he saw a store advertising rifles and pistols for commercial or self defense use, along with restocking ammo for soldiers who wished for more training with their personal weapons, he was sure that much of the city still did not forget about the honor and duty that was expected of them by the Emperor.


Some parts of the streets were cordoned off so to prevent damage. Behind the barriers was paintings on the black road.


And each painting reminded Nero of home.


Some showed a starlit night just like the one that would come tonight. Others showed a house on a hill with the sun shining brightly.And the one that Nero and Ares saw was a smiling family, sitting beneath an oak tree. But all of them captured the beauty of the countryside.


Ares stopped at one of the flower shops near the Art you were standing by, staring into the window with longing eyes.


"What's wrong?" Nero asked as he stood next to his brother.


"The Lavender is in bloom right now." He said quietly. "We should mail some to mom and tell her we are okay?"


Nero sighed, it was a weary one, one that made him think back and regret leaving without saying goodbye.


"Yeah… we should." Nero said, and both boys walked into the store, the bell ringing.


"Hello." The man behind the counter was a short stout man with plump cheeks and a long flowing black beard. He wore a green shirt, brown pants and an apron over both. "How may I help you?"


"Do you do deliveries?" Ares asked.


"Depends on where they're going?" The owner replied."Though it will cost a little extra anyway."


"Can you send a bouquet of flowers to Greenfield, Address 243 on Saltstrung street?" Ares asked.


"Greenfield…" The owner did clicked his teeth and tongue as if he was trying to remember something. "That's in Newbury right?"


"It is sir." Nero replied.


The owner gave a smile. "That will be twenty marks."


Twenty Marks! "You think you can lower the price a little more?" Ares asked.


"Listen kids, I have to keep these flowers fresh for the week long train ride for these to get there?" The man stated. "So don't try and bargain with me like I'm some country bumpkin in the middle of the sticks, I have customers to serve and money to make." The man replied.


It was than you saw the cracked and broken radio that as behind him,it looked busted, with many of the parts strewn besides it, a screwdriver risting on the shelf. "What about if we fix your radio?"


The man's eyes widened, before he turned back to face it. "That old piece of crap? Hasn't worked for two weeks, I'm just going to buy a new one."


"Perhaps we could save you some money if we fixed it?" Nero replied.


The man looked absolutely shocked. "Kid, if you can fix that radio, consider that order done for free."


Nero turned to his brother. "Do you want to do it, or shall I?"


Ares shrugged. "I don't know, we should let fate decide?"


"Fine." Nero replied, holding out his hand. "Best of three?"


The man was visibly confused, when Nero glanced at him for a brief moment. "Sure." Ares replied.


The two boys hands shook up and down three times before finally Nero's hand became a fist, and his brother was a flat hand.


Nero's eyes narrowed, and the hands shook up and down again. This time, Nero's flat hand was against Ares' two fingers.


"Aww." Nero groaned. "Best out of five?"


"No." Ares replied.


The owner of the store looked perplexed at the whole affair. "What are you two, alchemists?"


Ares did not answer, only pulling out some chalk from his pocket. "Aww, I'm going to get my hands all dusty."


"I could always do it for you?" Nero started with a cheery smile.


"Bite me bro." Ares shot back.


Soon the transmutation circle was made, the symbols of iron, steel, sand, glass, tin, silver and gold were drawn within the circle. Nero picked up all the parts and pieces of the radio he could see and put them gently down onto the center of the circle.


"Is this all the parts of the radio sir?" Nero asked the owner of the store. "Because if we are missing one thing, this will fail and break down your radio into its base components."


The man nodded. "That's everything."


Ares nodded, before placing his hands over his chest in a prayer position, before placing his hands down onto the circle.


Energy released, blue lightning came from the circle and shot upward, and the circle was engulfed in light.


A moment later, the light subsided and the radio was all put together, as if it was brand new.


"There… Plug it in and see if it works?" Ares stated to the owner.


The owner did indeed plugged in the radio, and the radio sprang to light with music.


"It worked!" The man said. "You two did it."


Ares scratched his head sheepishly. "Yeah, I did. Now, could you deliver the flowers to that address please?"


The man smiled. "Of course." he bent down and handed over a slip of paper and a pencil. "Just put the address here and I will send them as soon as I can."


"Thank you." Ares and Nero said at the same time.


"You fixed my radio, probably saved me 300 marks, the least I can do." The man replied.


The boys than quickly left the store.

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The Statue in the park was of General Julian Sextius Flavius, the man who brought victory to the Unification Wars against the Clans of Newbury and Folklands, waging a devastating campaign of revenge for the death of the fifth army when they went in to pacify and incorporate the lands into the Empire's Territory. Widely considered the greatest statue of Garlen Marbleborn, it is a testament to his skill as an artist and a sculpture that he captured such life like features on both the man himself, and of his horse .


As boys who grew up in Newbury, Nero and Ares were surprised that the man even had a statue.


But too many Schwarzen nationalists were running amok in the universities, saying that the man's methods were the only way that the continent could be united.


Gently forgetting the fact that the empire executed him for killing civilians.


Ares just looked at it with disgust. "Wanna be good men of the Shire and Vandalize that basterds statue?"


Do you vandalize the statue?:

[]Yes

[]No


If you do not, what do you?:

[]Spar: It's been awhile since you got some exercise. And fighting in the dark is good for keeping on your toes.

[]Telegram Mom: You need to tell her that you and Ares are Alright. And hopefully, apologize to her.

[]Go back to Barry's: you need to get a lot of rest tonight.

AN: Enjoy.

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[X]No
[X]Telegram Mom: You need to tell her that you and Ares are Alright. And hopefully, apologize to her.

Curious statue and curious dead army.
 
[X]No
[X]Telegram Mom: You need to tell her that you and Ares are Alright. And hopefully, apologize to her.
 
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  • [X]No
    [X]Telegram Mom: You need to tell her that you and Ares are Alright. And hopefully, apologize to her.
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[X]No
[X]Telegram Mom: You need to tell her that you and Ares are Alright. And hopefully, apologize to her.
 
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