Blooming From A Seed To A Tree (Project Moon Crossover Quest)
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WilyMachineKing1
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Don't forget the sass!
[X] What has been going on in the Facility right? What's the current status of each department and rooms?
[X] Are there other Abnormalities loose in the Facility like Standard Training Dummy-Rabbit?
[X] How are you all here?
[X] Are there other Abnormalities loose in the Facility like Standard Training Dummy-Rabbit?
[X] How are you all here?
Interlude: Obervations from a Demon Marshall
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
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How long has he been here? He wondered as he paused from his prayers begging for punishment. It had been some time since he had arrived and longer since he was forcefully, and another when he was forcefully fused with what can be considered records from across timelines from this place. It was almost like his true self from the Throne itself was summoned.
He remembered how he found Saber and mistook her for Jeanne.
He remembered creating and aiding a facsimile of Jeanne that soon become her own entity.
He could remember everything, the wars, the Grand Order and so much more. And so, he wept and prayed for more and more punishment, as repentance, here, in what surely was hell as demons prowled the halls outside his cage. All of them in different forms, some humans, either humanoid to a perfect replica with some changes on the scale, to truly horrifying things so strange he could barely wonder how they functioned, before dismissing that as Demons never truly making sense, the Demon Pillars being a good example of it.
Like this one creature, a rather horrifying thing that was some strange mixture of a bat and a dog made from blood and shadows, a large slobbering maw filled with jagged teeth and a blood red eyes filled with hunger and insanity. Its wings, large enough to form a shield around its body was bent and folded to be less of a hassle when walking through the halls. It's claws were sharp enough to tear anything unfortunate to shreds as the blood splatters on his windows told many a story of whatever came across it's path.
Alongside the Demons, he would also see what he could infer as fellow damned souls, though they did seem rather doll-like in appearance than regular humans to be honest. Their blood was also akin to red paint, however, their screams of pain were real, and he prayed for their salvation.
Not his.
Never his, for this is was he belongs for all his sins.
The strange people would often pass by here, occasionally stopping to look at him in confusion and would speak amongst themselves. Though far away, he would often hear certain words being thrown out, the one he heard was 'Abnormality'. Hmm, could that be how they refer to the Demons prowling around? Odd but every being has their way to refer them but he will not judge. He also did not condemn them for warily looking at him, not once going over to open.
It's the least he deserved for what he has done. Oh damn that Prelait. Damn him and his wicked tongue.
Damn those that set Jeanne to the pyre.
But most of all.....
Damn him for allowing himself to fall to evil.
Gille De Rais cursed himself eternally, content to stay in this hell for penance of his crimes, for he deserves this and more. With hope the size of dust that he could be forgiven and join with Jeanne.
Alas, Gille knew that will never happen to him.
He remembered how he found Saber and mistook her for Jeanne.
He remembered creating and aiding a facsimile of Jeanne that soon become her own entity.
He could remember everything, the wars, the Grand Order and so much more. And so, he wept and prayed for more and more punishment, as repentance, here, in what surely was hell as demons prowled the halls outside his cage. All of them in different forms, some humans, either humanoid to a perfect replica with some changes on the scale, to truly horrifying things so strange he could barely wonder how they functioned, before dismissing that as Demons never truly making sense, the Demon Pillars being a good example of it.
Like this one creature, a rather horrifying thing that was some strange mixture of a bat and a dog made from blood and shadows, a large slobbering maw filled with jagged teeth and a blood red eyes filled with hunger and insanity. Its wings, large enough to form a shield around its body was bent and folded to be less of a hassle when walking through the halls. It's claws were sharp enough to tear anything unfortunate to shreds as the blood splatters on his windows told many a story of whatever came across it's path.
Alongside the Demons, he would also see what he could infer as fellow damned souls, though they did seem rather doll-like in appearance than regular humans to be honest. Their blood was also akin to red paint, however, their screams of pain were real, and he prayed for their salvation.
Not his.
Never his, for this is was he belongs for all his sins.
The strange people would often pass by here, occasionally stopping to look at him in confusion and would speak amongst themselves. Though far away, he would often hear certain words being thrown out, the one he heard was 'Abnormality'. Hmm, could that be how they refer to the Demons prowling around? Odd but every being has their way to refer them but he will not judge. He also did not condemn them for warily looking at him, not once going over to open.
It's the least he deserved for what he has done. Oh damn that Prelait. Damn him and his wicked tongue.
Damn those that set Jeanne to the pyre.
But most of all.....
Damn him for allowing himself to fall to evil.
Gille De Rais cursed himself eternally, content to stay in this hell for penance of his crimes, for he deserves this and more. With hope the size of dust that he could be forgiven and join with Jeanne.
Alas, Gille knew that will never happen to him.
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WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
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- Reno Nevada
Voting is now over. Hope you enjoyed the interlude I made.
Kalibrius
God of reflection
- Location
- The other side of the mirror
A glimpse of that which is in the darkness and the souls wandering lost beyond the reach of the light
A glimpse at that which dwells in Sheiruth
The Bloody Phantom and its kith
And a glimpse of the latest arrival to the Extraction chambers and their view
A glimpse at that which dwells in Sheiruth
The Bloody Phantom and its kith
And a glimpse of the latest arrival to the Extraction chambers and their view
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WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
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- Reno Nevada
Give us your thoughts, don't be ahead to tell us what you think.
a man who is forever mired in his awareness and regret ... Indeed, he ended up in the very place where he should have been. But it's still sad. the abandoned shell is full of regret, and the people are chained by their sins and regrets. Yes. He really ended up where he was supposed to be.
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
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- Reno Nevada
Yes. Yes he is. He would fit in with say Netzach or Chesed. And would be praying constantly at One Sin for forgiveness.
And uh, incase anyone is wondering, for fanart, such as you Mercy or just being curious in general, Gille currently looks like his Saber self but with elements from his caster self like his robe or collar. Along with the demon and angel from his final ascension from Saber. Because why not?
Of course, I don't mind trying to draw Gill, but as a person not too familiar with fait and with what exactly I need to look for as references... Could you please give me links to those caster incarnations that you mentioned (By the way, I just figured out one more reason why Typhon is the perfect X to live in Fate's world. They have the same hairstyle as many Sabers! Especially when they go into their teenage form. And, as they say, they are blondes! With several purple streaks, but... It's not so important, the main thing is the same hairstyle! Just a little fun fact)
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
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- Reno Nevada
.....Oh my God you are right! Their already a saberface! All we need now is multiple versions of ourself such as an adult version with Latoria bodystyle. If you know what I mean.
Also here:
Saber: Gilles de Rais (Saber)
Caster: Gilles de Rais (Caster)
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
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- Reno Nevada
I kid I kid.... kinda.
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
- Location
- Reno Nevada
That, and he's kinda like a fish.
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
- Location
- Reno Nevada
Yeah that's fair. We're practically everywhere at this point thanks to the Purple Tear in the Light.
Typhon: I can accept being a girl but this might be slightly excessive.
Also Typhon (subconsciously): MUST BECOME BIG. BIGGER THAN ANGELA!
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
- Location
- Reno Nevada
Yes, we have inheritance Lisa's Tsundereness.
Kalibrius
God of reflection
- Location
- The other side of the mirror
Could be worse
Could have inherited Carmen's less than stellar medical knowledge
The odd thing if plague doctors is that they act professional medical but operate under a faulty premise
The doctors thought their masks would protect them
Carmen thought the symptoms were the disease
'Feed a fever, kill a cold'
Carmen's solution suppressed the fever ie the stable personality of city dwellers and only enhanced the cold ie the environmental conditions that forced the 'symptoms' to be viable
Carmen is charismatic........ but definitely wasn't educated in medical matters
Could have inherited Carmen's less than stellar medical knowledge
The odd thing if plague doctors is that they act professional medical but operate under a faulty premise
The doctors thought their masks would protect them
Carmen thought the symptoms were the disease
'Feed a fever, kill a cold'
Carmen's solution suppressed the fever ie the stable personality of city dwellers and only enhanced the cold ie the environmental conditions that forced the 'symptoms' to be viable
Carmen is charismatic........ but definitely wasn't educated in medical matters
WilyMachineKing1
Executive Manager of Limbus Company
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- Reno Nevada
I'm going to be honest with you, I have no idea, but I think there's no right way. At least, I think so. Could be wrong.
Kalibrius
God of reflection
- Location
- The other side of the mirror
Simple
You remove the cause of the conditions which runs into what Angela is tackling
The head, it is by the heads by design the city acts as it does
Regardless of why it has become malignant and strangling the city
If it were not for the hardiness of its citizens then it should have imploded but the head makes it horribly sustainable
It is only by removing the cause that any other measure of recovery and improvement stick
You remove the cause of the conditions which runs into what Angela is tackling
The head, it is by the heads by design the city acts as it does
Regardless of why it has become malignant and strangling the city
If it were not for the hardiness of its citizens then it should have imploded but the head makes it horribly sustainable
It is only by removing the cause that any other measure of recovery and improvement stick
*It had ben some time since he had arrived and longer since he was forcefully*
This entire paragraph slipped to present tense, when the beginning was in past tense, so:
*He could remember everything, the wars, the Grand Order and so much more. And so, he wept and prayed for more and more punishment, as repentance, here, in what surely was hell as demons prowled the halls outside his cage. All of them in different forms, some humans, either humanoid to a perfect replica with some changes on the scale, to truly horrifying things so strange he could barely wonder how they functioned, before dismissing that as Demons never truly making sense, the Demon Pillars being a good example of it.*
Some other little changes to the thing:
-Knowing where to put comas is difficult and this time you didn't have enough in the second sentence. An advice I can give is to try and tell the sentence out loud, but that requires knowing the normal rhythm that English's supposed to have... which I can't be sure you have yet. Well, in that case I can tell you that practice makes perfect, continue writing and reading in english in a real life environment like you're doing, learn from your mistakes, and you will become better. Another little advice about learning any language I can tell is this: Try to stop Translating to do it, the language is independent of yours and learning how to speak it as such is how you get really good at it. Not that it's easy, but, once again, practice, practice, practice.
-Same little problem with a *missing* coma in the third sentence, also, the *barely wonder how they functioned* was missing a little thing before it to make the sentence flow correctly, added a *so strange*.
Its in all cases, it's is the contraction of *it is*, its is the form of it equivalent to his/her/their/your and since we're on your and it's a very common mistake too, you're is for you are, your was just explained.
And don't worry, native speakers make these mistakes all the time too.
Alongside, in one word.
Technically, would can be correct here, and that's one example where Grammarly wouldn't help you, because it's better to use could.
Let me quote Encyclppedia Brittanica on that one:
*Could is used to say that an action or event is possible. Would is used to talk about a possible or imagined situation, and is often used when that possible situation is not going to happen. Should is used to say that something is the proper or best thing to do, or to say that someone ought to do something or must do something.*
Either move the rather to after doll-like or replace it by a more here. Both works, don't have the exact same meaning, but it's close enough as to not make a difference.
Were, not was, you are using Screams as the subject, so plural and not singular form.
Sentence changed to present tense here, the first is should be was, the rest is good (and technically, the sentence was good, it's just that the rest of the narration is in past tense).
*the one he heard the most*
How instead of why.
You slipped to present here, and *their way to refer to them but he will not judge* don't flow well:
*Odd, but for every being there was a way to refer to them, so he would not judge, nor would he condemn them for warily looking at him, not once going over to open.*
I have to admit the first part had me a little stumped on how to make it flow because it's not how I think, so doesn't come easily.
The least; and had instead of has, still past tense narration.
Deserved.
Knew instead of will know. You are talking about something the is true in the present in a past tense narration, not something in the future.
Well, finished, I do get the feeling you got a little better, so there's that.
Or I could be getting inured due to the exposure, one of the two.
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If I had to guess, he's actually inspired by the fish people of lovecraftian literature rather than a frog.
edit2:
As a funny little example of the fact that your/you're its/it's is a really easy mistake to make, I just had to correct one in my own explanations.
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