Blooming From A Seed To A Tree (Project Moon Crossover Quest)

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WilyMachineKing1 said:
Not to that level, I think, it's just more like, is it good? Is it bad? That kind of stuff, but right now, going to improve, so, let's get this heavy stuff out of the way and have some fun.
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That's the spirit!

So, things I was wondering for the quest, I am curious how Gilgamesh would have reacted to us, in fact, let's take all the options that were presented at the time and try go see what they could've given us:

-Irrisviel and Saber: we may have managed a conversation, but if we actually feel as strange as implied by some comments, Saber would have probably reacted to us, and Kiritsugu would definitely not have trusted a random kid approaching his wife. May very well have lead to a fight, and one against a servant that is better at close range combat than Caster and has actual backups. We as voters probably would have tried our best to not make it a fight.

-Alexander the great (and his sidekick): guy would 100% have asked us to join him at some points, least likely to go for a fight amongst the options.

-Gilgamesh: Depending on what he feels in us, could go from a philosophical discussion about humanity to *Ennuma Elish!*. The more we feel like a foreigner, the more towards the second one we get on the scale.

-Berserker's master: once again, a big part is how the servant react to us, if he goes on a rampage, well, that one's simply going to be a fight, but unless he goes for it as soon as we appear, I think we would have looked at what he was suffering from, and tried to help. We may very well have finished a conversation with him by going on a crusade against Zouken.
 
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-Berserker's master: once again, a big part is how the servant react to us, if he goes on a rampage, well, that one's simply going to be a fight, but unless he goes for it as soon as we appear, I think we would have looked at what he was suffering from, and tried to help. We may very well have finished a conversation with him by going on a crusade against Zouken.
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All very good points but you made a mistake. It would just start the Crusade against Zouken very early because evntually we will face him either way. Muhahahaha!

Also on other points you are very accurate on them actually.
 
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You're a grey area to this world
One could say X fits too many criteria to fit him truly any where
X has authority like a divine yet isn't one, Is akin to a Dead apostle or True Ancestor yet is undeniably human, a body of Foreign Light that is Humanity personified
One could say instead of a 404 they're 040 Too many found
Xs dualistic nature is confusing everything something fierce, there's a reason why in the beginning alaya was confused
Not helped by you blatantly shifting history's course and the Light enabling timelines every which way
X is a walking timeline maker with much of the light being saturated into texture of the nasuverse being analyzed to hell and back
And part of the reason why it isn't focused on X so much..........
The City is having a Tuesday
And Gaia and Alaya are seeing the worst trainwreck they could ever imagine from their newly introduced neighbor
Beasts all over the city from their perspective
And also laughing at Chaldeas attempt at mooching off the city going horribly right in all the wrong ways
And the outer Gods are getting lessons over tea from their new sunny neighbor....... and amaterasu is annoyed by it
Typical city Tuesday
Train wreck they can't take their eyes off of to the others on the Nasuverse side
 
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Voting is almost over. The final tally shall occur around tomorrow. If you don't see it, it's because I am going to see Puss In Boots (Depending on things like the weather) or I forgot.
 
again I watch video reviews about the characters of van peace ... And I just imagine Carmine (Kamen X) who managed to find friends, a goal, perhaps desires ... And somehow they end up finding himself in the same situation as Carmen herself once was. On this fragile platform when all eyes are on you. when exactly you are a symbol that will lead to something more. And now... He's stuck. Stuck between the desire to help them all make their dreams come true, the desire to do something amazing and incredible, to decide his own destiny ... And the painful realization that no matter how hard he tries, no matter how much he invests ... His best will never be enough . It took him literally ten thousand years just to carry out one stupid plan... And the worst thing is, he loves his friends. He knows that he should tell them about his problems, that he can rely on them ... But he does not want to ruin them with his problems. He himself is not very important. Replaceable material, without his own name (He knows that this is actually a lie ... But all this thinking is too ingrained in his mind. And most importantly ... He is afraid to open up to him. They have all already seen some of his unsightly sides .. "But what if one day, his worries or trouble becomes too much for them? What if they decide to leave him? And a lot of such doubts. I just think it's funny, so digging into the probabilities)
Yeah... I really should just play gatcha and don't worry about anything
 
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again I watch video reviews about the characters of van peace ... And I just imagine Carmine (Kamen X) who managed to find friends, a goal, perhaps desires ... And somehow they end up finding himself in the same situation as Carmen herself once was. On this fragile platform when all eyes are on you. when exactly you are a symbol that will lead to something more. And now... He's stuck. Stuck between the desire to help them all make their dreams come true, the desire to do something amazing and incredible, to decide his own destiny ... And the painful realization that no matter how hard he tries, no matter how much he invests ... His best will never be enough . It took him literally ten thousand years just to carry out one stupid plan... And the worst thing is, he loves his friends. He knows that he should tell them about his problems, that he can rely on them ... But he does not want to ruin them with his problems. He himself is not very important. Replaceable material, without his own name (He knows that this is actually a lie ... But all this thinking is too ingrained in his mind. And most importantly ... He is afraid to open up to him. They have all already seen some of his unsightly sides .. "But what if one day, his worries or trouble becomes too much for them? What if they decide to leave him? And a lot of such doubts. I just think it's funny, so digging into the probabilities)
Yeah... I really should just play gatcha and don't worry about anything
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Sounds fun.
 
Right so, the movie today is booked out so me and my family are heading to it on Sunday, so..... Voting is now over? For some reason I feel more disappointment in not going to the movie than this. Huh, well, even then, could make a reference, but who knows enough about my ramblings!
Scheduled vote count started by WilyMachineKing1 on Mar 6, 2023 at 2:29 AM, finished with 79 posts and 17 votes.
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Let's go spy on our employees! Hmm, no, I mean.... Let's go invade their safe space! ...Wait no, still doesn't work.... Let's meet our agents?

I know!

Let's prove we are a responsible adult!

There we go!
 
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    • Employee Quarters it is. It's a lot more safer you can tell, and also filled with a lot less clowns as well, so less likely chance of both rage quitting and death, but mostly the former. So, you headed down the more safer tunnel, safer begin the relative word here, hearing the chatter, talking and various methods of communications of your Agents that you liked to hear from.

    Good, you needed something more familiar than this place slowly falling into ruin. As you got closer, you soon arrived to your desired location, and to your joy, you saw your Agents and Clerks there, who all stopped the moment you have entered. Looking at you in shocked surprise as they all just stared at you.

    "...Hi." Was all you said awkwardly, waving you hands in front of them all, and instantly you were jumped on by what is best described as a horde of white rabbit shaped dummies who were constantly chanting your name amongst other things as well. Well, you can say you didn't expect to find this Abnormality here. You honestly forgot about it. or rather they know that you see it has the apparent ability to duplicate itself, to be here.

    "So, this is what you look like manager?" An Agent said as you managed to finally get yourself out of the pile of rabbits who were still clamoring around you happily, The Agent, known as Sam, said to you. Sam was wearing the EGO Gift of Today's Shy Expression, the reason why is because he believed himself to be ugly so he had to hide it behind a mask, that mask was currently Today's Expression. "Well, I'm glad to finally put a face to the name, Sir, but something tells me that the reprieve is only temporary before the shit storm starts again. So let's get you up to speed over a meal, let the others rest as we do so." Sam then turned to one of the Rabbits, gently tapping it's head to get their attention. "Hey, you guys think you can handle perimeter duty as me and the Manager talk?"

    "Yes! Yes!" It chanted before zooming off as it was followed by others, and soon you were taken to the Cafeteria and you had some food being ordered as Sam turned to you, the mask shifting into a curious expression.

    "So, what do you want to ask?"

    What Questions do you want to ask? Pick 3
    [ ] What has been going on in the Facility right? What's the current status of each department and rooms?
    [ ] Are there other Abnormalities loose in the Facility like Standard Training Dummy-Rabbit?
    [ ] How are you all here?
    [ ] Write Ins

    AN: While this is short, I thought this was fitting since you will be asking quite a few questions. Also, while this is happening or after the voting, I will be doing an Interlude, who, you can take a guess as I do it. So, have some fun voting, plans are welcome as always.
     
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    • [X] What has been going on in the Facility right? What's the current status of each department and rooms?
    [X] Are there other Abnormalities loose in the Facility like Standard Training Dummy-Rabbit?
    [X] How are you all here?
     
    [X] What has been going on in the Facility right? What's the current status of each department and rooms?
    [X] Are there other Abnormalities loose in the Facility like Standard Training Dummy-Rabbit?
    [X] How are you all here?

    These make perfect sense to ask, unless we ought to mind any possible changes.
     
    [X] What has been going on in the Facility right? What's the current status of each department and rooms?
    [X] Are there other Abnormalities loose in the Facility like Standard Training Dummy-Rabbit?
    [X] How are you all here?
     
    [X] What has been going on in the Facility right? What's the current status of each department and rooms?
    [X] Are there other Abnormalities loose in the Facility like Standard Training Dummy-Rabbit?
    [X] What is the current status of the EGO armory?
     
    [X] What has been going on in the Facility right? What's the current status of each department and rooms?
    [X] Are there other Abnormalities loose in the Facility like Standard Training Dummy-Rabbit?
    [X] What is the current status of the EGO armory?
     
    [X] What has been going on in the Facility right? What's the current status of each department and rooms?
    [X] Are there other Abnormalities loose in the Facility like Standard Training Dummy-Rabbit?
    [X] What is the current status of the EGO armory?

    Asking about the state of the E.G.O. armory makes sense to me.

    Edit: rereading the first line, did a word get dropped out of the first question?
     
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    WilyMachineKing1 said:
    lot more safer
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    WilyMachineKing1 said:
    more safer
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    Just safer without the more in both cases, the rule is that you add er to the word if it's a short one (one or two syllables, except for the exceptions, of course) or you put more before the word if it's longer than two syllables, except for the exceptions.

    WilyMachineKing1 said:
    less likely chance
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    less chances, no need for the likely.

    WilyMachineKing1 said:
    safer begin the relative
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    *safer being a relative*

    You would use the if you told that it was *the operative word*, but it's a relative word. The first tells that safer is a singular exception, the second tells that safer is relative to the environment.

    WilyMachineKing1 said:
    safer begin the relative word here, hearing the chatter, talking and various methods of communications of your Agents that you liked to hear from.
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    You should put a period after here. And the second part lacks a bridge between chatter and talking, you also don't convey your idea properly by telling you hear the chatter, I'd say:

    *According to the chatter, from talking and the various other methods of communications of your Agents that you liked to listen to.*

    WilyMachineKing1 said:
    As you got closer, you soon arrived to your desired location, and to your joy, you saw your Agents and Clerks there, who all stopped the moment you have entered.
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    Period after there. Sentence is long enough as is and *the moment you entered* no need for the have.

    WilyMachineKing1 said:
    you said awkwardly, waving you hands in front of them all
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    *awkwardly said* and *your hands*

    WilyMachineKing1 said:
    and instantly you were jumped on
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    Coma after instantly.

    WilyMachineKing1 said:
    amongst other things as well.
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    No need for the as well.

    WilyMachineKing1 said:
    or rather they know that you
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    Coma before and after they, it's a small aside to indicate a correction to a previous point, so it is put aside by the comas.

    And now, not know.

    WilyMachineKing1 said:
    Today's Shy Expression
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    The abno is *Today's shy look*

    WilyMachineKing1 said:
    "Well, I'm glad to finally put a face to the name, Sir, but something tells me that the reprieve is only temporary before the shit storm starts again. So let's get you up to speed over a meal, let the others rest as we do so."
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    Not a grammatical correction but I can't help but think that the reaction is a little flat, no surprise at us seemingly being a child? No remark on us looking a lot like Tiphereth?

    Even just a little reference to that would be good somewhere around this part, as is they react a little too calmly IMO.

    If you don't want to change this part, you can include him asking some questions about it in the next update between our questions. In fact, that should work quite well.

    Toki_kung said:
    [ X] What has been going on in the Facility right? What's the current status of each department and rooms?
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    There's a space between you first bracket and the x, vote won't count like this.

    [X] What has been going on in the Facility right? What's the current status of each department and rooms?
    [X] Are there other Abnormalities loose in the Facility like Standard Training Dummy-Rabbit?
    [X] What is the current status of the EGO armory?
     
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