Bit Of A Stretch, But Doable (BNHA SI As Gentle Criminal, Set Before Canon)

[Philosophysics]

If you aren't satisfied, then definitely, take the time to redo it. I can see what you meant about cramming a bunch of stuff into the story. I will admit that I felt that when we 'somehow' had a big chunk of 1-A just 'happening' to show up at the gym. That said, I really enjoyed this story because we got to see a "settled in" SI. We didn't have to go through the entire culture shock and all of that, we got to see someone who had settled in and was actually living a life in a new world, which I though was very cool.

So, don't feel pressured to keep this if you feel like you can do better, but I hope that the reboot does keep that 'lived in' feeling of the original.

Click to shrink...

I might actually take out the SI aspect. Or if I do keep it, it'll be the really fuzzy kind.

Also i like that part. I mean it's fun seeing somebody react to being dropped in a new world, but that's been done so many times.

If you want something more like that, i suggest trying out my Feline Flighty Fairy Tail SI. I only have two chapters out right now, but it's a similar feel in that the MC is already settled in and used to the world.

I think i'm going to try writing more third person for the reboot. It seems to be working better for me and i can switch POVs.

ALSO, you have no idea how much i'm freaking out over you being here.

Anyways, it looks like i'm about to go forth with the reboot anyhow

Now next question to EVERYONE.

Would you like a link to a folder where you could see what could've been?

 

[Doccer]

Yes

 

[Philosophysics]

Old Version - Google Drive

drive.google.com

HOLY SHIT! it's been two months since I promised and it's bee ncrazy and i'm SO sorry.

Anyways, here's the link to what could've been.