Best. Workout. Ever. (Dark Souls SI)

Usandru said:
Hmm. Actually, the greatest issue I see is that Vince's reaction seems... odd. Why, upon being confronted with such complete devastation, should he get angry at the SI? It just seems like a weird thing to latch onto in the wake of it. I'd think he would rather become quite agitated and confused while trying to figure out what was going on. Only later, once everything got explained, would he get (somewhat reasonably, really) pissy at the reckless actions. The SI didn't screw up and had a good plan, but all the same, not having the support of half the group when making the next attack is actually a pretty valid reason for being annoyed, and something Oscar himself should probably take a moment to chat with the SI about it - not because he was wrong, but because he could have been "more right" - once things settle and they have a moment in private.

Now Petrus segueing into a lecture and being his usual prissy, sermonizing asshole self, while trying to score some verbal points off the SI and getting into an argument seems reasonable, because Petrus is an asshole like that, but Vince really should be more restrained at first, unless I've misread everything rather badly.

In essence, I suppose you could say that just because the SI wasn't wrong, doesn't mean he did the right thing either, and if those points are included, it'll feel much more vivid, because the SI (aka. protagonist) shows his flaws again, which tends to help scenes like this.

(not being called out on stuff tends to have bad effects on the credibility of most characters)
Yeah, it was probably Vince that was probably making me not totally happy with that. My thought was that he sees her like a baby sister, and when she is put in danger* might loose his cool. I'm kinda basing this off reactions of my cousins, but I've been told that they are nuts. I change it in the edit. He's more of a background event for most of it, and the important part at the end probably doesn't need to change terribly.

In regards to my reaction though, that would be because i myself am a really low key and sedate person. I also don't like conflict, and i generally try to go out of my way to try and avoid it**. I'm not a doormat, but it generally take a fair bit to set me off. Much more then being yelled at for something that i was in the right about. For me, that was a bit OOC, but understandably so considering that that I'm in a crypt full of things that i can't kill, and surrounded by people who aren't terribly fond of me at the moment. Probably and more nervousness to the final version though.

Oscar is going to give me a bit of a chewing out about alienating my allies. Its kind of a running thing with me, though it gets more hostile and dangerous the less humanity i have. I really don't play terribly well with others and I work much better when left to my own devices. Doing so right now, however, has a better then average chance of getting myself or others killed.

*even if its just in his own mind.

**Hence, why I took off with Nico and Reah without bringing it to the attention of the other three. Yes, it wound up causing me a headache in both the long and short term, but only because Reah was so damn loud with her bomb.***

***In my mind. It likely wouldn't have ended well in the social department anyway.
 
@Dealing with Oscar: well, there are a fairly limited number of plausible ways to deal with it, so... :p

I dunno when I'll have the next part done, but I think I'll have it be from where I left off, until the first bit of Firelink. Seems like a good segment.
IronFox said:
Yeah, it was probably Vince that was probably making me not totally happy with that. My thought was that he sees her like a baby sister, and when she is put in danger* might loose his cool. I'm kinda basing this off reactions of my cousins, but I've been told that they are nuts. I change it in the edit. He's more of a background event for most of it, and the important part at the end probably doesn't need to change terribly.
Thinking more on it, I suspect that the reason it doesn't quite work is probably more the first person POV, which makes it seem sudden. Without any really clear build-up to this personality so that the reader can infer the causal chain themselves, and without the 3rd person description that would spell it out, unusually powerful reactions seem odd and rather jarring.

Not sure if I can suggest a way to handle it right now though. The structure of your fic means that you're essentially stuck dealing with thing from your own POV, which makes it tricky to properly explain stuff from outside it. Not dealing with that problem was basically why I abandoned 1st person in favour of 3rd person too, so...

Interludes will have to do, I guess? POV switching to expound a bit on things you can't properly show but are important to the story. Not sure if Vince warrants one, but if you want to make the situation a key moment, it'd be my suggestion to flesh it out.
In regards to my reaction though, that would be because i myself am a really low key and sedate person. I also don't like conflict, and i generally try to go out of my way to try and avoid it**. I'm not a doormat, but it generally take a fair bit to set me off. Much more then being yelled at for something that i was in the right about. For me, that was a bit OOC, but understandably so considering that that I'm in a crypt full of things that i can't kill, and surrounded by people who aren't terribly fond of me at the moment. Probably and more nervousness to the final version though.
Soft reaction is just a personality trait, yeah. Worked for me, though Petrus managing a decent snipe and scoring some points would fit, I think. At most, it seemed a bit one-sided.
Oscar is going to give me a bit of a chewing out about alienating my allies. Its kind of a running thing with me, though it gets more hostile and dangerous the less humanity i have. I really don't play terribly well with others and I work much better when left to my own devices. Doing so right now, however, has a better then average chance of getting myself or others killed.
The fact you've set your "playthrough" up as a cooperative thing makes this even more delicious. :p

(I'm planning one some key character interactions for my thing too, but the general approach is far more "you're stuck all alone with no help, now die you sucker" :D)
 
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Modified the previous scene, and added in more. Still note sure I'm happy with it, but its better.

Sorry things are progressing slowly, its just that I keep getting distracted with other projects, then i forget about this, then something happens to remind me.

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Slowly the sound started to return. Predictably, said sound was shouting. Reah clearly hadn't been deafened in the first place, as she turned down the hall and yelled something that I still couldn't quite make out.

I could see just fine though, and Vince's worried expression was the first that I saw coming out of the shadows. After a brief pause to look around, he went straight to Reah and began babbling out worried questions. Oscar and Petrus strode through the murk shortly after. I couldn't see Oscars face, but Petrus was looking less than pleased.

Ok, seriously. One necromancer, and his room full of lackeys. I'm pretty sure any of the knights could have dealt with it by themselves. Oscar certainly could have, Petrus probably could have, and Nico wasn't exactly freaking out at the concept of facing the bone-heads either. Had I just taken Nico, I'm sure that we would have just gotten light praise at taking the initiative. Never mind that it probably would have turned out much more difficult had I done so.

I think that this is agitating me slightly. Reah is competent, and I'm about ninety percent sure that Nico would have punched me through the face had he thought that Reah was in any real danager.

Words slowly began to become clearer, and I begin to make out Vince and Reah's 'conversation' and… Oscar's chuckling? Well, at least someone is amused.

"…-eem to have made something of a mess through you then, Milady." I finally caught, hidden beneath Vince's fretting.

"Y-yes." Reah stammered. "I did not think that they would grant such power to aid one such as I."

"I told you that you didn't get to use that helpless maiden shtick anymore." I grumbled.

"What were you thinking, risking the lady like that?" Petrus grunted, looking at me coldly "She could have been killed. Do you have any idea-"

Ok, I've just been dragged into a terrifying crypt -that I've been very pointedly trying to not concentrate on so I don't freak out-, to fight skeletons and necromancers. I can't even put down the damn Skeletons for good. I, of all people, know how dangerous that this place is. I am the only person in the group at the moment that doesn't have a way to deal with the most common things we are likely to deal with. I'm well aware -more than anyone else here- what may or may not be lurking down here. Still, I took a breath, and forced myself to stay calm. Protecting Reah was his job, and despite having one of the clerical knights with me -which should absolve me of all of this hostility by the way, since Nico didn't object to my actions- I was still the one who took her away from the main group.

"-She is clearly not suited for this sort of fighting, and yet you put her right in the thick of it." He finished, "So what do you have to say for yourself?"

It might have be a little residual 'hollowness' from my last death. It might have been the stress of being cast as the bad guy despite having done the smart thing and dealt with a threat before it could build into something more dangerous. I might have just had enough of the condescending bull that was served up to me every time Petrus opened his mouth. It might even have been the raging hate I had for the sheer idiocy of people blatantly ignoring the devastation that 'innocent little girl' was capable of.

"Ok, no. 'What do I have to say for myself'?" I growled at him, "What I have to say for myself, you overbearing prick, is that Reah was in no danger. I expected Reah to eliminate the skeletons guarding the necromancer with a surprise attack, so I could put a Bolt into it without getting carved to pieces."

Petrus Scowl deepened, "Nothing ever goes the way we expect. There were a dozen things that could have gone wrong and-"

I stepped away from the wall and returned the glare petrus was giving me. "If that failed, Nico and myself would have been more than enough to block up the passage. Nico has a divine weapon -all of you do- so at the worst it would have been a waiting game until the deadties were finally put down. The Necromancer would have been easy pickings after that."

Vince had finally stopped his fretting over Reah, and listened to what was being said, though Nico was careful to keep between him and myself. I considered the thought prudent considering how hostile his expression towards me was.

Petrus stood his ground though "What if the necromancer had joined in on the attack? I have nothing but respect for the wards of Astora, yet the magical flames such creatures conjure are fit to reduce a man to in an instant." He gestured at my worn surcoat, "How long would it hold under such an assault? And what of Nico, who has no such protection at all?"

"Even in the absolute worst case scenario of both me and Nico dying stupidly, we would have bought enough time for her to run back to where you were arguing." I ground my teeth a bit, "Then, Oscar could have ashed them like he did the others." I took deep breath to try and cool my rising anger, "Instead, Reah made all of that pointless by calling down the fury of your gods, and turned everything in the room to dust and bloody smears. She turned the room-" I gestured to the rubble around us, "-into dust and smears. My precautions were pointless. I was pointless. Nico was pointless."

Vince and Petrus glanced around, and seemed to truly notice the debris around us for the first time. I wasn't sure that they understood the sheer amount of power to would have taken to cause this kind of collateral.

"Taking all of that into account, please keep in mind that while I might be a dirty godless heathen, and I might be a little bit reckless, I am not, however, stupid. You all brought me along for a reason Petrus, and it certainly wasn't due to my crossbow or skill with a sword. Consider that, and perhaps trust in the judgement of your fellow knight." I finished by nodding at Nico, who simply grunted and nodded back.

"Indeed," Oscar said, preventing what would have no doubt been an awkward silence. "And now, let us continue." He turned to Petrus, "I trust that Lady Reah will indeed be continuing with us?"

"Err… yes." Petrus nodded, slowly, as if somewhat dumbstruck, "Yes, that might be wise."

"Objections, Vince?"

Vince looked for a moment like he was going to anyway, but buckled "No milord." He shot me a fiery glare, "Not so long as she remains close."

"Well!" Oscar clapped his hands together, "Now that that is done, let us see if we can find the entrance to the catacombs proper."

"I believe that the stone plate in the room we were having our discussion in would be the gate." Petrus noted, "Perhaps there is a mechanism to open it?"

Well, there was a way in from what i remembered in the game, and it would make some sense if you considered it an extension of the graveyard. But then, why have an above ground graveyard in the first place? Something didn't make sense here, but i couldn't put my finger on it.

"I'm not entirely sure there will be." I noted. "Why would anyone bother to bury anything up top if there is a convenient way in?"

"The gods may be inclined to open the way." Reah said quietly.

Oscar nodded, "It may come to that. However, let us see if Petrus' mechanism exists before we go troubling them." He patted me on the shoulder, "Come. We can cover more ground if we split up."

I noticed... something in his voice, and i nodded confirmation. I turned to the rest of the group, "Meet back in front of the stone plate if no one finds anything?"

A chorus of grudging assents, then me and Oscar left the clerics to pick through the rubble.

Silence followed for a couple of minutes as we walked. It was becoming increasingly clear that Oscar didn't really think there was a mechanism, but that he wanted to talk to me away from the group.

Why he wanted a private conversation was becoming increasingly clear. It also agitated me. I made a bit of a show picking around looking for a device, and he did the same. Still, we couldn't hold it off forever.

"You're going to chastise me." I growled at him.

He nodded, "I am going to chastise you. But not for the reasons you think."

"Oh?" Seriously. What did i do wrong there?

"First, let me say that I approve of you taking the initiative. I approve of you being careful and taking Nico. I'm not sure I approve of you taking a non-combatant into a dangerous situation without more backup, but I am certainly not going to argue the results." Oscar sighed, and leaned up against, "Indeed, what you did was objectively correct given the circumstances. It was a rational decision, and indeed solved several problems."

"So where did i screw up then? Because we wouldn't be having this discussion otherwise." I asked. I won't lie, I just wanted him to get to the point. I knew it was a good move, though I didn't know how good it was at the time, but stoking my ego wasn't exactly the point of being chewed out.

"To the point then." Oscar said, "The problem is that people of seldom rational, and while it was a good move in regards to usage of our assets, it was a poor one for diplomacy and group cohesion."

He continued, "You have not made yourself Vince's friend. In addition, you have also undercut Petrus' authority." He sighed, "in addition, while bringing along Nico was an excellent move tactically, it also means that he could be seen as an accomplice to any of the perceived crimes of yours." He fiddled with a few straps, "I do not think that will be the case, but the possibility is on the table."

I frowned, "Ok, really?" i shook my head "I don't seriously think that anyone could be that stupid."

"Not all of us can be forces of rationality." Oscar noted, "And those afflicted with brotherly love can be less rational them most under the best of circumstances."

hadn't thought of that. I should have, I've seen plenty of people act like idiots for the dumbest reasons, but I'd more or less assumed that i was dealing with intelligent people here-

No, I was dealing with intelligent people. That's not the problem. The problem was that I'm dealing with people in general. Something that is surprisingly hard to remember when the people you're surrounded by technically aren't suppose to exist. Hell, its hard enough for me to remember when I was dealing with people period. When its at the front of my mind I do alright, but otherwise... I guess avoiding social activity because its hard wasn't my best call.

Not that being in a crypt was doing anything for my thought processes.

"I'm... Not terribly great with people." I admit quietly, "I work better when I'm left to my own devices."

"I'm beginning to note that pattern myself." Oscar said gently, "T'is strange. You were able to cover my own slip back at firelink, yet..."

"I made a pretty colossal goof here?" I snorted, "Easy to explain. Reah's devout, and honestly too humble for her own good. When she got huffy about the miracles thing, I put her on the spot with something that made sense." I adjusted my own straps, "Conversation's are easy. One can react to the reactions, and with a bit of wordplay can change the meaning, or clarify, or feign having used the wrong words. Doing stuff with people is much harder, because I can't see the reactions until its too late, and I can't exactly say that I accidentally made off with Reah to fight deadites."

"Indeed, and much harder to apologize for, especially when you have truly done nothing wrong but offend sensibilities." Oscar noted, before changing the subject, "I do not see anything that may constitute a gate mechanism. Perhaps we should rejoin the clerics?"

"Probably." I agree, letting him do so gratefully, "I just want to get this mess over with as soon as possible. I hate this place."

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SB Bonus
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Gwyn stepped through the gateway and stared out at the subterranean city of the dead.

For city it was. The marble walls gleamed in the pale blue light of the glowing spheres Nito had commissioned instead of the lamps that were more commonly used. Gwyn brushed his fingers gently over the engravings on the surface closest to him. The vines depicted were touched with ebony and stretched out as far as the eye could see. It was almost certainly done by magic, and Gwyn privately suspected that Nito had done much of it himself.

There were several mausoleums lining the 'street', a testament to the family that was entombed within. The closest had simple silver filigree, and the ebony engravings twisted into images depicting the lives of dead.

On the other side of the street, a great fissure in the ground. Peering over, the lord of sunlight could see more tombs, and caskets lining the walls. Every one different, and yet each precious, just as the lives of those who dwelt within. Each placed with loving care. Each granted their due rest.

Yes, Gwyn thought, the dead have certainly been paid due respect.

"Well? What dost thou think?"

Gwyn turned to his fellow lord, "T'is beautiful Nito. Thou hast an artist's hand."
 
Very nice. All of it. Works much better now.

I might be able to think of something, but we're at the point where I'd have to make some significant effort to do so. And that's a good thing in itself. ;)

(I haven't really worked any on my own thing... but I guess I should look at that after I work through the next section of my Ornstein thing Real Soon Now)
 
Grosstoad said:
Anyway, depressing things aside, I don't get the Lords' snippet. Is it now, before, or crack?
The Lords' snippet basically requires having spent a bunch of time on the setting to really appreciate, since almost everything we know about them comes from inference.

I could say more, but I don't have the time right now. It's spoilery too, but if anyone is interested I don't mind writing about it for a bit.
 
Grosstoad said:
I got my copy of Dark Souls today.

. . . Too bad I made my pre-Easter pledge to not play any computer games for the period.
And I also pledged myself to finish New Vegas, Skyrim, Borderlands (1&2), Mass Effect (all)...

Damn it.

I also got NuXCOM. Rrrr.

Anyway, depressing things aside, I don't get the Lords' snippet. Is it now, before, or crack?
Well, good luck in your pledge and game finishing once you get to that point.

In regards to the Lords snip, its something that happened before. SB bonuses are canon snips that aren't necessary to understand whats going on, but expand the world or give a point of view that wouldn't be shown otherwise. The trade off is that I don't post the absolute finalized chapter here, instead linking to FF.net.
Old Soul said:
GRRR!!!! SHOW ME THE HYENA!
He'll show up, don't worry. He'll also be just a bit more clever here.
 
Short update, mostly to ensure people that I've not forgotten about this.

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The clerics didn't have any more luck then we did as it turns out.

"Nothing." Petrus grunted, "Unless you found something?"

Oscar shook his head, "I am afraid not." he looked at Reah, "I hope that the gods will be willing to aid."

Reah didn't bother with words. She just turned towards the object in our way and started her prayer.

Seeing as how I didn't feel like going deaf for a second time today, I started stalking quickly down one of the hallways. Nico clued in right away, and followed at a brisk pace.

"Where are you going!" Vince yelled after us, "You'd best not be getting into mischief!"

"We're not going far." I tossed off behind me "We'll be back after Reah's door knocker."

I covered my ears before the thunderclap drowned everything from the rest of the group out.

"That was cruel." Nico murmured once the echoes had subsided.

"I didn't see you give 'em any warning." I riposted before doubling back.

Maybe Oscar had a point about my lack of diplomacy skills being an issue. And maybe i was just a little petty. Still, they should have clued in that anything that could cause the level of devastation we wanted was probably going to be loud. And forceful.

The knights were in a pretty sorry state. It was pretty clear from the way he had face planted that Oscar had decided that I had bailed for a reason, but he reacted to slowly to escape. Reah, for her part, was alternating giving me baleful looks for not acknowledging that this was the gods work, and apologizing profusely to the downed warriors.

Myself and Nico were sure to remain carefully stoic. Hilarious as it was, laughing at ones superiors -be it via combat skill or organization- wasn't exactly a clever move.

More seriously, the blast did what it was supposed to do. The metal plate itself was still intact, but the stone around it had broken away enough that we could squeeze through.

I glanced at the armor the clerical knights were using.

Make that me, Oscar, and Reah could slip through, and the rest of our party could work on widening the gap while we scouted ahead.
 
IronFox said:
Short update, mostly to ensure people that I've not forgotten about this.

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The clerics didn't have any more luck then we did as it turns out.

"Nothing." Petrus grunted, "Unless you found something?"

Oscar shook his head, "I am afraid not." he looked at Reah, "I hope that the gods will be willing to aid."

Reah didn't bother with words. She just turned towards the object in our way and started her prayer.

Seeing as how I didn't feel like going deaf for a second time today, I started stalking quickly down one of the hallways. Nico clued in right away, and followed at a brisk pace.

"Where are you going!" Vince yelled after us, "You'd best not be getting into mischief!"

"We're not going far." I tossed off behind me "We'll be back after Reah's door knocker."

I covered my ears before the thunderclap drowned everything from the rest of the group out.

"That was cruel." Nico murmured once the echoes had subsided.

"I didn't see you give 'em any warning." I riposted before doubling back.

Maybe Oscar had a point about my lack of diplomacy skills being an issue. And maybe i was just a little petty. Still, they should have clued in that anything that could cause the level of devastation we wanted was probably going to be loud. And forceful.

The knights were in a pretty sorry state. It was pretty clear from the way he had face planted that Oscar had decided that I had bailed for a reason, but he reacted to slowly to escape. Reah, for her part, was alternating giving me baleful looks for not acknowledging that this was the gods work, and apologizing profusely to the downed warriors.

Myself and Nico were sure to remain carefully stoic. Hilarious as it was, laughing at ones superiors -be it via combat skill or organization- wasn't exactly a clever move.

More seriously, the blast did what it was supposed to do. The metal plate itself was still intact, but the stone around it had broken away enough that we could squeeze through.

I glanced at the armor the clerical knights were using.

Make that, me, Oscar, and Reah could slip through, and the rest of our party could work on widening the gap while we scouted ahead.
*Snort* Bwahaha.

I wonder who else you guys will finally start to recruit?
 
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Lengthened, and slightly altered.

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The clerics didn't have any more luck then we did as it turns out.

"Nothing." Petrus grunted, "Unless you found something?"

Oscar shook his head, "I am afraid not." he looked at Reah, "I hope that the gods will be willing to aid."

Reah didn't bother with words. She just turned towards the object in our way and started her prayer.

Seeing as how I didn't feel like going deaf for a second time today, I started stalking quickly down one of the hallways. Nico clued in right away, and followed at a brisk pace.

"Where are you going!" Vince yelled after us, "You'd best not be getting into mischief!"

I briefly considered the idea of warning people of the dangers of being in an enclosed space with what amounts to a bomb, then decided it would take long enough that I'd wind up in the blast zone. "We're not going far." I tossed off behind me "We'll be back after Reah's door knocker."

If that wasn't enough of a warning, they deserved everything they got. I covered my ears before the thunderclap drowned everything from the rest of the group out.

"That was cruel." Nico murmured once the echoes had subsided.

"I didn't see you give 'em any warning." I riposted before doubling back.

Maybe Oscar had a point about my lack of diplomacy skills being an issue. And maybe i was just a little petty. Still, they should have clued in that anything that could cause the level of devastation we wanted was probably going to be loud.

The knights were in a pretty sorry state. It was pretty clear from the way he had face planted that only Oscar had decided that I had bailed for a reason, but he reacted to slowly to escape. Reah, for her part, was alternating giving me baleful looks for not acknowledging that this was the gods work not hers, and apologizing profusely to the downed warriors.

Myself and Nico were sure to remain carefully stoic. Hilarious as it was, laughing at ones superiors -be it via combat skill or organization- wasn't exactly a clever move.

More seriously, the blast did what it was supposed to do. The metal plate itself was still intact, but the stone around it had broken away enough that we could squeeze through.

I glanced at the armor the clerical knights were using.

Make that, me, Oscar, and Reah could slip through, and the rest of our party could work away at it.

"You could have warned us." Oscar grumbled as he stumbled up behind me, "You knew exactly what was going to happen."

"Honestly," Pffffft no, "You guys knew what she was about to do. And since you came running after you heard a loud noise, I thought you'd put two and two together."

"I did, but not soon enough." The Astoran shook out the cobwebs. "Reah does not get to use the innocent maiden ploy anymore."

"That, is exactly what I've been saying." I agreed. "Vince and Petrus are still going to buy it though, I'm sure."

"Vince certainly, Petrus I am less sure about."

While the clerical party was picking themselves out of the dirt, Oscar and I investigated the gap. We discovered that my assesment was more or less accurate. We couldn't fit through as is, but enough of the area was cracked that our hole in the wall could be widened. It took us a few minutes, but eventually we made the opening big enough for us to fit through. Petrus, Nico, and Vince were going to have to either strip out of their armor, or open the gap even more though.

What they decided didn't concern me at the moment though. I wanted to get an idea of what we were creeping into. "I'm going to slip through, and take a looksie at what we're dealing with."

Oscar nodded slowly, "Be careful, I'll wait here in case something tried to get at our friends while they are occupied."

I wasn't sure if i considered any of the clerics 'friends' per say. Maybe Nico. Regardless, I nodded and moved as quietly as possible through the gloom.

I hate tombs. Yes, I've said it before, but it bares repeating.

The walls had a strange cracked look to them, and they were covered with racks of skulls. The various individual crypts were broken down, and caskets had clearly been broken into for the corpses within. Place was like it came straight out of a horror B movie set. Except, you know, actually scary since it wasn't a damn B movie set.

Tough times,
Demand tough talk
Demand tough hearts
Demand tough songs
Demand...

Ah Rush. Probably inappropriate, but it made me feel better.

Allowing the music to calm me down, i continued to take stock of my surroundings. Something bothered me though. The place really did look something like a b-movie set. The racks clearly weren't integrated with the architecture, and the walls themselves looked strangely bare save for the cracked effect.

Almost like the place was unfinished, or maybe-

A clack of bone on stone broke me from my thoughts, and caused me to take cover behind a casket sticking off the wall. Once i had determined that whatever made the noise hadn't seen me, I peered around the stone. Three skeletons slowly stalked towards my location, their necromancer master holding a lantern crafted from a skull to illuminate the area.

I guess that Reah's door knocker called some of the inhabitants to to see who it was. If i tried to go back and warn the group they would see me for sure. If i just hid they would probably see me, and then I'd be screwed.

Well, if I'm going to get found out anyway, i might as well be found on my terms.

Moving slowly enough not to start chinking I pulled my crossbow from its holster. One shot, then the bastards would know where I was. I drew a bolt, and my coin and heaved.

My eyes closed and my heart beat faster as i heard my armor click. Still, they didn't, and the string slipped over the catch. The bolt fell into place.

We can circle around like hurricanes.
Dance and dream like lovers...

My heart beat and breathing slowed, and I brought the weapon up.

One shot.

I stepped around the corner, and dropped into a kneel. The Necromancer blinked at the shadow in front of it, startled. Just as I'd hoped. The shot wasn't a snapshot, but it wasn't that well aimed either, just a shot at the center of mass from about ten meters.

I didn't wait to confirm the kill, i just dropped the crossbow, and checked the impulse to draw my sword. I had something that would work on these things, but steel wasn't it.

The skeletons rushed forward, and i brought my shield up. Two of them blocked the third, and both of their sabre's harmlessly skittered over my barrier. My hand flashed up, and a burst of fire and force painfully erupted from it. All three Skeletons were caught in the blast, but only the two closest were scattered.

Still, it bought me time, and i slammed my shield into the last and drove past it to their master. The Necromancer writhed as it clutched the stub of wood sticking out of its body, but retained enough awareness to realize what was going on.

I pulled my right arm back, and wove the combustion matrix around my fist. The necromancer raised one of its arms and i felt a similar web forming around it. It was just a tad distracted though, and its matrix wasn't nearly as potent and it could have been.

Still almost as nasty as mine though. It was going to hurt.

The spear of flame that lanced from the summoners hand slammed into my shield arm like the fist of the butcher, and i bit back a yell. I was too close, and had too much momentum for it to stop my charge cold though, and my fist lashed out. The swing crashed into it's face, and i triggered the pyromancy flame. The blast ripped the head of the dark undead to shreds and horribly seared my hand. It did what it was suppose to though, and i whirled around.

The two I had dropped stopped coming back together, but the third still stood. It was moving much slower though, and more clumsily. Like a puppet that still tried to move after its strings were cut.

I deflected its next swing and lashed out with the same arm, sending it to the same blackened fate as its fellows.

Uncorking my flask painfully, I made a note to have spend more time on the actual fire part of pyromancy; regardless of my previous opinion of just using self actualization spells. It probably wouldn't be as useful elsewhere as here, but honestly i couldn't afford to be wrecking myself like this.

Hands mended, I inspected my armor to see the damage. The plates on the upper arm had been bent and blackened, and i could feel the unpleasant amount of heat still radiating of the steel. That gave me resolve to never let anything get a full fledged spell off at me since I was pretty sure I would have lost the arm were that the case. As is, i felt lucky that it didn't break.

You had a point Petrus, I'll give you that. I'll never tell you to your face, but i will concede the point.

I knelt down over the corpse of the necromancer, and made a point of searching the body. Estus flask? Yes, and pocketed. Lantern? Check, though I'd never use it myself for fear of making myself a target in the dark. It had a bit of silver filigree that I tucked away too.

After my looting, I picked up my crossbow and started to head back to the entrance. That was more then enough fun on my own for one day.
 
You must be kidding. Laughing at other players is such a tiny part of why it is awesome. Winning over a truly troublesome boss, or exploring the world are ten, nay, a hundred times more satisfying than watching some poor other player suffer.

Unless it is on something that you used to have trouble with, and now clear trivially, of course. :p
 
The Steam version is pretty good, but uses Windows Live, which may be a problem (hasn't been for me so far, but there are complaints), and the port is... shoddy. It works perfectly fine, but playing it you can tell that using keyboard-mouse means you're doing something wrong. :p

(I still cleared the whole thing and murderstomped my way through all the non-DLC lategame areas, despite being rather shoddy at dodging, relying extremely on target-lock, and barely even knowing where the parry button was, so it's not crippling at all, even if you'll need to fiddle a lot with keybindings)

The Dark Souls Fix mod is pretty cool too, and along with the Dark Souls Mousefix, most of the port issues are mitigated even further.

But I didn't use either for my first playthrough, so again, not required.
 
Internet is kinda a problem. It's pretty much required.

Windows Live autoinstalls, AFAIK. Same with Steam. Simple stuff, really.

The real issue is that Dark Souls, especially Dark Souls windows version, rather requires internet access. There are hoops to jump through for offline, but I'm not familiar with them.
 
Just another short update. Mostly to show that i have minimal appreciation for architecture. Probably going to need to edit this somewhere into the last bit, but whatever.
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In the meantime, I dragged my mind back to an earlier subject. The racks of bones and the walls. I made a point to examine them closer as I walked.

The racks were cobbled together from rotted wood, rough stone, and what looked like dried tendons. They were grisly, and seemed pretty flimsy too. I couldn't figure out what the purpose of them was.

Wait. Necromancers work with skeletons, not zombies. I guess they'd need something to put the body parts on so they could- Nope, not going there. I don't feel like making myself sick by continuing on that train of thought. The smell all but confirmed it for me though.

Moving on to the walls. I noticed that on closer inspection, were made of marble, and the 'cracks' seemed to make some sort of design. There were black flecks inside the cracks too, though the grooves had been cleared out pretty well. Perhaps a legitimate artistic touch that had been defiled, rather then a horrible abomination? Glancing over the rest of the walls revealed that if that were the case, it would have been one hell of an undertaking.

The two things didn't jive. Of course, all that told me was that the necromancers were horrible squatters and the filigree told me that bodies weren't the only thing they were looting.

I took a moment to look over the place, and mentally blot out the racks and imagine what the catacombs might have looked like before their current residents. I could make out streets, and there the various tombs lined the walls similar to houses in a populated area. It almost looked like it might have been...

No.

Maybe.

It looked like it might have been a city. I'll freely admit that given the context that Nito was one of the three lords that everyone knew about, it made sense. Gwyn had Anor Londo, and the Witch had her City of Izilith. Given that, Nito probably made this his equivalent.

A city for the dead.

The realization that I was trekking through what was probably one of Lordran's three greatest cities did nothing to sooth my nerves. In fact, I think it made it worse. Cities were big places, which means that I was going to be dealing with a veritable army of necromancers. Or something much, much worse.

I tried to come up with a song to shake the new cloud of unease, but everything i thought of just made it worse via dissonance.

I sped up my pace, and realized just how far I had strayed. Strange how time flies when you're poking around getting the lay of the land. Still, the return back to the rest of the group was thankfully uneventful, despite feeling as though I was being watched the whole time.
 
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Going to need to re-write this, and the last couple of sections so they flow together better. Probably re-wite some of this to make a bit more sense.

I'm tired, and haven't been sleeping, but i figured that I have put off an update long enough. Needless to say, I'll probably look at it after I'm finally rested, and want to beat past me with a rusty crowbar.


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Oscars voice echoed out, through the darkness, "Truthfully, It is because knowing could cause him to lose hope faster." He sounded considerably more somber then usual. And... kind of tired.

I crept in closer, but still made sure to keep enough distance i wouldn't be noticed. Something was afoot. I appear to be the subject of this conversation, and given that, I'd rather get the story that they didn't seem to want to tell me straight.

"But, there are hollows that still-"

Oscar cut Vince off, "You are still young Vince. Every undead has died at least once. Some can take several deaths before they even begin to go insane. A noticeable portion do not ever become violent." He sighed, "The 'sane hollows' are simply those who have found a long term coping mechanism,and don't value humanity as much anymore."

Wait. What?

"There is not a curse that drives undead insane, Vince." Oscar said softly, "A lack of humanity Will cause the form to become that which we call hollow. It can deaden all but most powerful emotions. It can make it difficult to empathize with others. Often, it will cause a great desire replenish it. The hollowed state of body can fog the mind, but will not drive it mad.."

My blood ran cold.

Petrus spoke, "Death is traumatic, yet while it never gets easier, it hardly gets more difficult either." he chuckled, "Indeed, what we call 'hollows' are nothing more then those like ourselves who have simply gave up on living. Some after a crushing existence of hundreds of years, some after a single particularly traumatic event."

They lied.

Why would they lie?

"All they crave is bless'd demise, so that they might be able to escape the world for just a little bit longer."


Melancholy settled around me like a choking miasma. I tuned out everything else they said. none of it mattered more then what i had dumped on my plate.

Keeping me in the dark was a kindness? Throwing me to the abyss without telling me that I'm not truly immune? I am just like every other Undead. Doomed to eventually go mad with despair. Trapped in a land that wants nothing more then my eternal suffering. With nothing I can do about it.

...

Except, I'm not like the others. I know about everything. The memories are faded, possibly inaccurate, but I have them. I know more about the whole picture then anyone else other then the primordial serpents.

Further more, I don't even originate from here, and my endgame is simply getting home.I got here, so obviously, there is a path. I just need to find it.

So the question is, what does this knowledge change? It lets me know that Oscar and Petrus are somewhat closer then i had thought, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. It tells me that Oscar is actually pretty good at deception. Everything else was supposition. I didn't know reasons, and while the lie was something of a betrayal, i was keeping my own secrets, and bag of lies.

Ultimately, not being special for an undead meant nothing.

Now, what do I change.

Everything I want too. I can do anything if I throw myself at the problem enough times. And right now, I want the damn Art of Kindling. I want the Clerics to stay fine. I wan-

A black gauntlet clamped around my face, and the last sound I heard was the snapping of my own neck.
 
LONE WOLF 666 said:
This is bullshit. Why did they snap his neck?.
The knight snapped my neck because i was close to a bunch of allies, and it didn't want to alert them. See, unlike other Black Knights that are written to be unstoppable killing machines, mine are comparatively vulnerable. To wit, Oscar would be able to duel one and hold his own, and with the help of a cleric or two would be able to at least drive it off. Reah could potentialy kill one if she spoke her prayer quickly enough, and followed up with something nasty.

To make up for the comparative weakness, my knights are clever. They will use divide and conquer tactics. They will group up and fight as a unit. Utilize terrain, and make traps. Ambushes. Lightning spears from vantage points we can't get to. Snap the necks of anyone alone and inattentive. Basically, imagine tuckers kobalds, where the kobalds are instead a single thousand year old, two meter tall, super strong suit of armor. Further more, this thing just overheard two potential causes that make undead go hollow. It's going to try and break us.

By the way, this whole extrapolation of the Catacombs Black Knight was done from the tendency it has of jumping down on unsuspecting players while they try and deal with the Wheel Skeletons. So please. Give me ideas.
 
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