Bad Girls Do it Better (Multicross Conference Call Spin off)

So I've been talking to Pachy and I've been thinking about doing a rewrite of this fic. It might seem premature but there are certain issues like pacing, world building, not enough node chatting, Homura not being reluctant to jump into nodechat, that have been bugging me. It'd be a much better story if I manage to rewrite it, but it'll mean the story will be going backwards for a while not forwards.

What do you guys think?
You're not too far in yet, a re-write now would probably be a good idea if you think the pacing needs a re-work.

The pacing is probably too fast too, Toga went from, "I'm going to be a hero!" to, "I want to be Stain! I want to kill Stain!" in three paragraphs.
 
Chapter 6
(Please comment! Your feedback is awesome!! Also I've rewritten Chapter 5 and the previous chapters, please check them out! Also sorry for not updating here for ten months. I have a backlog of chapters for you guys!)

Homura knelt on the rooftop, looking through a pair of binoculars at the warehouse window. She'd borrowed it from the JSDF on a whim, and it was paying off.

Activating her time stop, she jumped down and entered the warehouse through the door, bypassing the guard stationed outside. The warehouse was large, but Homura knew all the spots for storing cash by now. Unlike the Merchants, the ABB and Nazis were considerate enough to keep their stacks of cash in duffle bags, making it easy for her to store it in her shield's pocket dimension. She even found a safe, which she broke by smashing it on the concrete floor with her enhanced strength. Then she decided to go upstairs and check for more money in the rooms. Opening the first door by ripping it off its rusty hinges, she instead found a crying woman curled up in a corner on a dirty mattress.

It took Homura a moment to remember, but Aisha's words about the ABB's human trafficking came back to her. Unfamiliar emotions surged through Homura that she had trouble identifying; Was it disgust? Rage? Or that long dead feeling of horror?

She had to resist the urge to go around and personally put a bullet into each members' head. Homura walked over to the girl and placed a hand on her hand, grasping it as soon as she came into the time stop with her.

"W-what? Who are you? Are you with the Dragon?" the woman said, frightened.

"I'm here to rescue you. Don't let go of my hand. Do you know where the rest of the girls are?" Homura asked.

"There are more down the hall. I-I hear them because the walls are thin," she said, sniffling. Her watery eyes were full of hope and Homura looked away as she pulled her to the next room. They formed a strange human chain of girls and women holding hands. Homura warned them not to touch any of the gangsters that were around. She didn't want to have to get into a fire fight while one of her hands was occupied. Homura led them a couple of blocks away and let go of the time stop, quickly going for a grief seed to suck up the corruption in her gem. They didn't let go immediately, so Homura cleared her throat and looked at them all.

"You're all free to go," Homura said, hoping the first woman would stop clutching her hand like a barnacle..

"B-but where do we go?" one of them spoke up.

Fuck. That was a good question.

"Are any of you from here?" Homura asked. All of them shook their heads and spoke up about how they were from the Philippines and China and Taiwan and so on ...

hAkemi: Aisha, where is the police station?
aLaborn: ugh it's so fucking late homura.
hAkemi: Aisha, I have human trafficking victims from the ABB.
ModDog: Oh no, are you okay?
aLaborn: fucking hell. fine, what street are you on?
hAkemi: The corner of Grove and Richardson.
aLaborn: great so you'll want to go up four blocks and take a right one block and then left two blocks. good luck explaining this to the police.
hAkemi: I was planning on leaving after.
aLaborn: homura. do any of them speak english?

Homura looked upon the group with a grimace. "Do any of you speak english?"

They looked at her strangely. "You've been speaking Tagalog to us," one of them spoke up.

"You're talking in Chinese …" another said, trailing off.

Well, fuck. Homura sighed. "Alright, follow me."

She led the nervous group of women, but halfway there they were interrupted by a kid on a flying skateboard and another teen with a suit of clocks. Homura stared at them placidly, though inwardly tense. These must be the Wards.

hAkemi: Aisha, who are the Wards with the flying skateboard and suit of clocks?
aLaborn: uggggh, they're kidwin and clockblocker. now let me sleeep.

"Lilac, you're under arrest for robbing the banks of Brockton Bay," Kid Win declared, his hands on his pistol.

"These women are ABB human trafficking victims," Homura responded, ignoring his declaration. She kept her eyes on Clockblocker, rather than Kid Win.

"Let me guess, you found them while stealing from the ABB?" Clockblocker said dryly. Homura shrugged. "You look pretty young, have you thought about joining the Wards instead of being a thief?"

Homura almost rejected it out of hand, but upon second thought, considered the offer. Maybe Tinkers could think of a way of curing magical girls, or even just a way of getting rid of corruption without having to cannibalise other magical girls.

"Maybe," she said, surprising herself. "But, not right now."

Desummoning herself, Homura found her vision back to normal with a pipe bomb in front of her. Sighing, she pushed away from the desk and started pulling out the cash bills from her shield in order to count them. She had a long night ahead of her.

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Himiko woke up blearily to an unfamiliar ceiling. Concrete, instead of the wooden paneling of her room. She sat up from the guest bed to look around the bare room. It didn't have much decoration, and Himiko got the feeling it didn't get used much, from the dust she could see. Still, it was enormously generous for Angeline to have let her sleep here. Himiko slid out of bed and carefully walked to the kitchen for breakfast. She was doing a fry up of an egg and making rice when Angeline stumbled out of her room, her beautiful hair in a crow's nest.

"Oh, a girl could get used to this," Angeline said cheerfully.

"I, uh, hope you don't mind the imposition," Himiko said, nervously.

"No, I don't mind. I usually eat cereal in the morning so this is nice," Angeline explained. She rubbed the eye sand from her eyes and headed to the bathroom. When she came out, Himiko had pulled out side dishes and laid out a modest, but decent breakfast for the two of them. Angeline had fixed her hair and her face was clean.

"Ah, thank you, Himiko," Angeline said, smiling at her. They sat down to eat, but not five minutes in, Angeline cleared her throat.

"I was a runaway too," Angeline said, making Himiko freeze. "My dad was a real bastard."

"Uh, I …" Himiko mumbled.

"It's okay. You can stay as long as you want, Himiko," Angeline assured her. Himiko began to blink back tears.

"H-how did you know?" she asked, shocked.

"You're a teenager in a school uniform out in the middle of winter. It's not a hard conclusion to make," Angeline said dryly. "But don't worry, I won't make you go to those useless Child Guidance centers."

"T-Thank you."

"Don't worry about it," Angeline said, shrugging. "Just don't steal the silverware."

Himiko shook her head. "I would never-"

"Relax, it was a joke," Angeline said, frowning. "You're awfully wound up tight, Himiko."

Was she? She tried to release the tension in her body and found herself releasing a lot of it though her mental stress never went away. Himiko wondered for the first time if she would ever leave her parent's shadow.

"So I work in the evenings and usually sleep in the morning," Angeline said, interrupting Himiko's brooding. "So I don't go back to work until a little while. How do you feel about Mario Kart?"

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Aisha groaned as she pulled her hands down her face. Coding sucked. It was after school and they were in the same computer room as last time, with the rest of the dorks. While the look on his face when she presented him that graphics card was priceless, the beginner's code class Drew was giving her was frustrating.

He rolled his eyes, but waited patiently for her to stop being overdramatic.

"Ugggh," Aisha grumbled, going back to staring at the PC.

"It's just defining constants, it'll be better for you in the long run," Drew reminded her.

"Yeah, yeah," she said, tapping at the keys slowly and carefully.
aLaborn: hey guys I wanna try the help command again. we didn't really look at it last time and drew told me a bunch of stuff about how to use help commands.
Azula: Fine, I'm not doing anything at the moment.
hToga: Same.
hAkemi: I will not be bothered.
aLaborn: /help

A subject catalogue has been opened in your head! Please use 'help (subject name)' to read an entry.
aLaborn: /help query name color

Subject catalogue limited to subject 'name color'.

Aisha smiled as the massive amount of knowledge shrank to a small couple of commands. She browsed through them to find the one she wanted. Drew was looking at her funny.

"Why're you smiling?" Drew asked.

Oh. "I remembered something funny my brother said," Aisha lied easily.

aLaborn: ha!
alaborn: /open color wheel all
aLaborn: /set name color C621BC
aLaborn: im purpleeeeee
Azula: Hmmm, this doesn't seem particularly hard …
Azula: /set name color D33300
Azula: Excellent.
hToga: Oooh.
hToga: /set name color 00B3B3
aLaborn: homura set a color to your name too!
hAkemi: This is frivolous.
aLaborn: don't worry, we'll be cool enough for your shortcomings homura.
hAkemi: …

Aisha sighed as she finished the exercise and stretched her fingers out.

"Good job, Aisha," Drew said. "Wanna do some more or play some video games?"

"Video games," Aisha exclaimed. "I can feel my brain melting out of my ears. The cube game was pretty fun last time."

"Sure, let me set it up," he said, turning to his pc. "So you have a brother, Aisha?"

"Yeah, he's a big pain in the ass," she said, clicking on the game on her pc to boot it up. "How about you?"

"I'm the oldest of several sisters," he said, wryly. Aisha wondered if that's where he got his patience from.

"Bet that's why you keep your hair so short," Aisha remarked. Drew grimaced.

"Yeah, they really wanted to keep braiding my hair," he muttered. "It's not particularly great to show up to school in ribboned braids."

Aisha snorted. "I used to force Brian to be my practice doll for hair when I was younger. Don't worry, you're just doing a universal older brother service."

Drew frowned again, but was interrupted by the update finishing. "Ah hell yeah, it's time for some puzzles."

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"You're terrible at Pai Sho," Azula informed Bok Nam, after taking another piece from her. She tossed it in the growing pile of pieces in the bucket next to them.

Bok Nam laughed as she airily moved a piece. "You're the one who's way too good. Who taught you the game?"

"My father," Azula said absently as she assessed the board.

"The Firelord right?" Bok Nam asked, causing Azula to widen her eyes and stand up in a firebender stance.

"Who told you!?" she demanded, flames licking from the end of her fist.

"Whoa, whoa calm down. It's kinda obvious, from your eyes. I've never seen someone from the Fire Nation with eyes that golden," Bok Nam explained, holding her hands up.

"Oh." Azula relaxed her arms and crossed them with a frown. "How frustrating to be found out so easily." Perhaps the others had a solution?

"Eh, it's only because I spend so much time looking at them," Bok Nam said, grinning. "No one in the audience can see how cute you are."

Azula stared at her as a blush deepened over her face. "Y-you dare flirt with me?!"

Bok Nam stood up and gave her a kiss on the cheek. "I dare."

She walked off, leaving a flustered Azula and a Pai Sho set.

Azula: She just kissed me on the cheek!
aLaborn: who?
Azula: Bok Nam!
aLaborn: lmao
Azula: That's not helpful Aisha!
hToga: Do you like her back?
Azula: I don't know! She's a peasant and I'm royalty anyways! It'd never work out!
aLaborn: oooh forbidden class love. sounds like gay shakespeare.
hToga: Isn't that just regular shakespeare?
aLaborn: shit, you got me there.
Azula: Stop referencing things that I don't know and help me!
aLaborn: go think about it.
hAkemi: Make a pros and cons list.
hToga: I don't know, romance isn't about what's best for you.
hAkemi: … True.
Azula: You're all useless!
aLaborn: useless lesbians unite.

Azula huffed and stomped off. Useless!
 
Chapter 7
It was a pine forest clearing, with a beautiful sparkling blue pond. The trees' leaves were an odd pink purple while the trunks were a dark grey. It was an alien yet beautiful scene created by holograms, but Homura couldn't care less and Tattletale was typing at something on her phone. The girl was slightly frazzled when Homura had arrived with the money, saying that she needed to cash in the favor after the meeting. Homura was finishing pulling out the last of the cash from her shield's pocket dimension and putting it onto the cart when Toybox showed up. It was two people, a girl carrying two luggage cases and the other man holding a wicked looking gun. Tattletale, standing against a tree, straightened up with a smile.

"How are you doing, Pyrotechnical and Bauble?" she asked.

Pyrotechnical gave her a suspicious look but Bauble shrugged. "Pretty good since we're getting a ten million payout."

"The money's all here," Homura said, gesturing to the stacks on the cart. She focused her stare on the luggage cases. "Are those the devices?"

"Yeah, but before I give it to you, I have to show you how it works so you don't end up turning yourself to glass," Bauble explained. She laid the luggage case on the ground and opened it up. It was a pylon with a big sphere at the end of it and a button on top.

"This is the end you want the glass transformation to happen," Bauble said, pointing at the stick end. Then she pointed at the sphere end with the button. "You push the button on this side to activate it. Simple enough right?"

Homura nodded and grabbed the luggage cases while Pyrotechnical grabbed the cart of cash.

"Good doing business with you," Pyrotechnical said, as they walked back to their portals. Homura and Tattletale arrived back in a dirty alleyway. Homura opened the bags and started shoving the pylons into her shield quickly, but Tattletale put a hand on her shoulder, stilling her movement.

"Akemi, I want to cash in the favor," Tattletale said, anxiously. Homura nodded for her to continue as she restarted putting the pylons into her shield. Tattletale closed her eyes with her fists clenched. "I need you to kill Coil. He's my boss, and a crime lord.

"I tracked down his location to one area tonight. He's in an underground base at Clark Avenue and Central Boulevard, there'll be a sewer gate," Tattletale explained, pulling up one photo of what he looked like on her phone. It was a slightly blurry photo of a man in a black bodysuit with a white snake coiling around the suit. "Look … He's been holding-"

"You don't have to go into detail. I'll do it," Homura said, pulling out a desert eagle out of her shield and looking it over.

"But-" Tattletale started, before Homura glared at her.

"It's fine," Homura grunted out. "I don't need the reasons, just the details."

" … Thanks, Homura," Tattletale said softly and sadly. Homura leapt onto a rooftop and stopped time. It wouldn't be the first time she had killed in cold blood, she contemplated. Using Tattletale's details that she acquired through text on her phone, Homura prowled the area until she found the sewer gate and entered. There looked to be a half finished door that she walked through easily. From there, it was simple enough to sweep until she found the top of the base, an unlocked office in which a man of Coil's description was sitting in a chair, with a mic headset on his head. She placed the gun next to Coil's head, careful not to touch his skull, and fired twice. Satisfied her grim work was done, she left the base in short order.

aLaborn: hey anyone dare me to put an entire bag of marshmallows in my mouth.
hAkemi: That seems unwise.
Azula: Again, references I don't understand. What are marshmallows?

(❍ᴥ❍ʋ)​

Angeline adjusted her tube top and skirt hurriedly, while slipping into a pair of red heels.

"You sure you'll be okay?" she asked, concerned. Himiko nodded while wondering what kind of workplace would allow heels and a tube top. Maybe a bar?

"I'll be fine," Himiko reassured her, while handing her the bento box that they'd prepared together. Angeline took it gratefully and blew her a kiss.

"See you, Himiko!" Angeline said, hurrying out the door. Himiko sat down and wondered what she should do. Well if she was going to ask for help, she should at least explain her situation.
hToga: Hey guys, I kinda got a roof over my head now, so you don't have to worry about that. But I don't know what to do now that the owner's gone. She's very nice by the way.
aLaborn: i guess that means you don't loot the place.
hToga: Aisha!
aLaborn: hey i said don't loot the place.
Azula: I could give you some lessons on fighting. I know how non benders fight.
hAkemi: I can only give you firearms lessons and I doubt the neighbors would approve of the noise.
hToga: Yeah, Homura, I don't think I can do that. Maybe later. As for Azula's offer, I'll take it up!
hToga: /summon Azula

hToga is attempting to summon Azula. Azula, please do '/summon accept' or '/summon decline'
Azula: /summon accept

Azula appeared in the living room, looking imperious as ever as she took everything in.

"Hey Azula!" Himiko said.

"Hello. How fascinating," Azula muttered, as she walked over to the TV and searched it all over, accidentally turning it on at one point. She jumped back as a cartoon show about All Might turned on.

"It's sent on invisible waves I think? Think of it as a really fast flipping book," Himiko explained. Azula turned her head away with effort and pressed the button again to turn it off.

"It's very interesting, I admit, but I really should be teaching you. I could feel my brain rotting as I watched it," Azula said, with Himiko nodding in agreement.

"Okay, so what are we going to learn first?" Himiko asked, excitedly. Azula frowned, inspecting her carefully.

"You have very little muscle mass," Azula said, disappointment clear in her tone. Himiko pouted, but didn't say anything.

"We'll have to start at level zero," Azula said, cracking her knuckles. "You're going to learn how to fall."

Himiko swallowed at Azula's wicked grin.

(❍ᴥ❍ʋ)​

Azula eventually finished with Himiko and left her with a bunch of instructions on what to do while she wasn't there. Azula was mucking out the elephant mandrill's pen, because she had drawn the short straw that she was sure Bao had somehow rigged. She saw Bok Nam approach her, blindfold in hand. Azula looked at her with suspicion and asked, "Are you here to kidnap me?"

Azula: Bok Nam's planning something. She has a blindfold.
aLaborn: oooh kinky.
Azula: That is not what I meant and you know it.
aLaborn: that's what i meant and you know it.

"In a sense," she drawled. "Don't you want to be kidnapped?"

Azula looked around her and grimaced. "Good point. Take me away before Bao gets here."

Bok Nam fastened the blindfold around Azula's eyes and took her hand. "Trust me, you're going to love this. It's a great surprise!"

Azula did not like being blind, but the feeling of Bok Nam's hand around hers was nice. They walked for a long while, with Bok Nam chattering all the way and Azula slipping in her barbs at the other circus performers. Finally, Bok Nam stopped and took the blindfold off.

"You'll need your eyes for this part," Bok Nam advised. They were standing in front of a thick wall of bush. It didn't look thorny, but Azula wasn't looking forward to walking through it.

"I could just burn through it," Azula suggested, producing a blue flame in her hand.

"Not everything is solvable by fire," Bok Nam replied, folding her arms.

"Then you're not using enough fire," Azula said, with a sniff. Nonetheless, she extinguished the flame in her hands.

"Look, there's a worn path already here, let's just use it," Bok Nam said, exasperated. She was still smiling though, and she took Azula's hand to guide her through the path. It was surprisingly worn and well used. They finally broke through to the other side where there was a cliff overlooking an enormous lake. The orange sun was setting in the distance, hanging low in the sky.

"So … you brought me here for a lake?" Azula asked, looking over the edge fearlessly.

"Just wait for it," Bok Nam whispered, smiling fiercely.

"I don't see any …" Azula trailed off as a small shining light appeared on the lake's surface. Then another appeared, and another, quickly blossoming into a rainbow of colors that shifted and flowed around. They were fish, what kind Azula had no idea, but their scales were so bright and polished that they reflected the setting sun's light in a dazzling display. Azula found her breath taken away at the sight. They moved in spirals and circles, the shoal mixing to make new colors and shapes. Painting their pictures on the blank canvas of the water.

She remembered the first time she firebended and the awe that had welled in her chest at the sight. That same feeling was in her chest again.

Bok Nam walked over to a stunned Azula and took her hand. They spent the rest of the time like that, hand in hand.

(❍ᴥ❍ʋ)​

What the fuck did Homura do?

Aisha had covertly stolen a newspaper today in order to get a better picture of the epic fuck up Homura had caused. The Empire's capes had all gotten outed today, and there were fights across the city as the rank and file came out to defend their capes. CPS had almost confiscated Purity's baby but got turned into dust for their efforts. It was an ugly incident, even for Brockton Bay. She was headed to school, because the fucking administrators couldn't see the problem of their students having to go to school right now. Aisha sighed as she put the newspaper down and looked outside to see Hookwolf barreling towards the bus she was in.

"Fuck!" she screamed as she pulled the old woman she was sitting with down to the ground. He crashed into the top half, shredding it easily as he nearly stabbed the both of them with a metal knife leg. Armsmaster was close behind on his motorcycle and jumped off onto Hookwolf, stabbing deeply into the mass of metal. Aisha screamed as his weight caused the knives to push down on them, cutting into Aisha's cheek deeply.
aLaborn: i need help hookwolf is about to sashimi the fuck out of me!!!!!
aLaborn: wait none of you can fucking get this asshole off of me. fuuuuuuuuuuuuuck.
ModDog: Aisha are you okay!?!

Hookwolf finally got out of the bus, staggering as he did so. Armsmaster jumped off, unable to pull his halberd out, and pulled out a metal baton that buzzed with electricity. Aisha helped the old woman up, her cheek bleeding profusely, and tried not to look at the people who hadn't been fast enough to hit the ground. Bailing out the bus door, the bus passengers started to run for it. However, Aisha heard a grunt of pain and turned to see Armsmaster facing down Stormtiger, Cricket and Rune. It seemed they had flown here on Rune's rock platform. Curling her fists, she remembered she was a fucking cape now! She didn't need to take this shit in her city anymore.

aLaborn: homura i need your help!
hAkemi: I'm … occupied. I'm sorry.
Azula: I can assist.
aLaborn: shit! fine azula get out here and fuck em up.
aLaborn: /summon Azula

aLaborn is attempting to summon Azula. Azula, please do '/summon accept' or '/summon decline'
Azula: /summon accept

Azula appeared with a vicious grin and launched herself at Cricket, who barely avoided the fiery hook kick that turned into another fiery kick that burned her forearms. Aisha swallowed as she realized that the attention was on her now and started running for it.

"The black girl summoned a projection! Kill her!" Stormtiger shouted. Rune started flying after her, flinging rocks and other projectiles. Aisha was getting battered and slowing down as she ran out of breath.

aLaborn: Azula, kinda need help here!
aLaborn: Azula?!!
ModDog: Are you in danger Aisha?! Get out of there!
aLaborn: I'm trying!

Aisha swallowed as a crazy plan occurred to her, but Rune would get her eventually by attrition if she didn't do anything. She turned around and jumped on a nearby car in order to jump onto Rune's low flying rock. Tackling the nazi, she knocked her from her rock perch to the ground and started punching her the way Brian had taught her. It seemed Rune had training as well as she grabbed Aisha's third punch and slammed her elbow into Aisha's face. Aisha reeled back, her nose broken as Rune flipped her to the ground and started choking her, fury etched on her face. Aisha saw a group of people out of the corner of her eye and started waving at them for help.

To her horror as they came closer, she realized they were Empire as well.

She couldn't breathe and they were coming and she was going to die no no no-
 
Chapter 8
(Thanks to Juff for this chapter, it would have been a mess otherwise. Also please comment on the story, your words give me life!!)


Homura landed on the tree outside of Madoka's room. She wanted to personally check in on the girl as she hadn't done so in a while. Madoka looked sad for some reason, staring at her phone. Homura grimaced as Madoka noticed her appearance and ran over to the window to open it. She stuck her head out and stared at Homura with a focus she hadn't seen in many loops.

"Homura, Mami needs your help!" she exclaimed. "Also, you can come inside like a normal person."

Homura frowned, before jumping to Madoka's windowsill and sliding inside. Madoka swallowed, but mustered her courage.

"I told her what you told me and she asked Kyubey if it was true and …" Madoka trembled. "It said it was true. She didn't take it well. I've been calling her ever since, but she hasn't picked up. I'm afraid she'll do something terrible."

Homura gave a small sigh. "She's a very stubborn person, Madoka."

"Homura, she's a kind person. Please help her." Madoka gave her a watery-eyed look that Homura tried to resist, but failed miserably.

" … fine." Homura held out her arms to Madoka. At her questioning look, Homura said, "I'm carrying you there, it's faster."

"Oh." Madoka blushed and let herself be scooped into a bridal carry. Homura jumped out of the window, off the tree and onto the rooftops. They traveled to Mami's apartment in silence while Homura tried to not enjoy the feeling of Madoka clutching her tightly. It was only broken when they had to take the elevator up to her apartment as her room had no balconies.

"Homura …" Madoka started.

"Yes?" Homura prompted, staring at the rising number of the elevator.

"How did you know Kyubey would be interested in me?" she asked, quietly.

"I just knew," Homura lied.

"Oh." Madoka nodded.

Once they got up there, Madoka knocked firmly.

"Mami?" she called out, but there was no response. Madoka gave Homura another pleading look that she couldn't resist again. With a sigh, she channeled magic into her leg and kicked Mami's door off its hinges.

The entire place was trashed. The teacups were broken, the TV was cracked, and the furniture was smashed. In the middle of it all was Mami. Lying down, she had one of her ponytails loose and tea stains all over her front. More alarming was the fact her soul gem was in her hand, glowing nearly black. Homura was next to Mami in a second, with a grief seed pressed to her gem. This close to Mami, if she witched out, Madoka would be caught in the labyrinth next to the witch herself.

Mami didn't say anything as her gem cleared, but looked at Homura with dead eyes. Homura carefully slid her hand into her shield, grasping an assault rifle. She didn't want to kill her, but Mami was always dangerous once the truth was revealed to her. If she tried to restrain Homura with her ribbons, Homura would have to kill her.

"Why are you here?" she whispered in a small voice.

"Madoka asked me to come," Homura said, simply.

"Then leave! You know the truth! This life is pointless!" Mami shrieked, sitting up and trying to smash her soul gem. Homura quickly grabbed her wrist, and was caught in a test of strength as both girls siphoned magic to their limbs.

aLaborn: homura i need your help!
hAkemi: I'm … occupied. I'm sorry.
Azula: I can assist.
aLaborn: shit! fine azula get out here and fuck em up.

Homura felt mildly bad about ignoring the node, but she had to pay attention to this escalating situation. "Mami!" Madoka cried out, running towards them. Shit.

Madoka hugged Mami, who stiffened before slowly relaxing. Mami's face crumpled into tears and let go of her soul gem which Homura snatched out of the air..

"Why?! WHY!!?!" she screamed. Homura sighed tiredly as she fished for another grief seed.

"Because the Incubators are assholes, who set us up for failure for the purpose of making us energy to use," Homura explained, as she carefully watched Mami's gem. "Because life is hard and there's no reason."

"Then why do you go on?" Mami asked. Homura swallowed, pointedly not looking at Madoka.

"There is someone precious to me whose happiness I want to guarantee," she said quietly.

"I see," Mami said. "I have no one precious to me …"

"We can be your friends, Mami," Madoka said, grasping Mami's hands. Homura stilled her face, willing away the grimace that threatened to form. Mami fortunately seemed occupied with Madoka.

"Truly?" Mami asked, her eyes lighting up.

"Yes, absolutely!" Madoka said. She hugged Mami again, both of them crying together as Homura frowned. She felt uncomfortable, out of place. Homura didn't belong here, she realized, but she couldn't leave either.

She supposed that this was her burden to bear, always protecting Madoka, but never quite being with her. Homura was now a liminal space, a person who was going to be always in between. But she had accepted this. She was going to defeat Walpurgisnacht and make sure Madoka's happiness was protected.

Non sum dignus, Homura pondered.


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Aisha was lying on the ground in a daze surrounded by people. Sounds of fighting came around her, and she stood up slowly as she realized that she was in the middle of a group of nazis. Holy shit. Oh, shit shit shit. She raised her arms in front of her face when one of them came near her. But he just walked around her, as if she didn't exist. Her eyes widened. Did she have powers?

She softly prodded a nazi as a test, who stumbled and nearly hit the ground from it. She looked at her hands, then felt her nose. It was no longer broken. Super strength and regen. Cool.

"Damien, you fucker! Don't fucking push me!" he shouted.

"Fuck off, Phil!" Damien replied back, flipping him off. Rune glared at them all.

"You start fighting, Kaiser gave me the go ahead to smash you into the asphalt," she threatened.

These fuckers really didn't see her. Hah! Aisha grabbed a large rock and turned to Rune, who was heading back to the fight. Aiming carefully, she whacked Rune one right in the head and toppled the teenage nazi. The platform immediately collapsed down at an angle, causing Rune to slide down and hit the ground with a crack. The nazis around her fell into a panic.

"Someone fucking hit Rune!"

"Is she okay?!!"

"Who did it?! Who fucking did it!!?"

Aisha strolled away and headed to the fight against Hookwolf, Stormtiger, and Cricket. At some point, Assault and Battery had joined the fight, and Azula was fighting back to back with Armsmaster. She felt stronger, better than ever, and she walked behind Stormtiger in order to punch him in the liver. He yelped as he went down and curled up in himself.

"Retreat!" Hookwolf shouted, backing away as he covered Cricket's retreat.

Aisha flipped them the middle fingers and walked to Azula. "Hey, Azula, I think I have powers now."

Azula didn't respond, warily watching Hookwolf run away.

"Shit, you can't hear me can you? Uhhh," Aisha said, going to her mental chatroom.

aLaborn: azula can you hear me? test test.
Azula: Yes? Where are you anyways?!
aLaborn: im right next to you.

Azula looked around, her eyes sliding off of Aisha, even though she was waving her hands wildly in front of Azula's face.

Azula: I don't see you.
aLaborn: yeah i think i got powers.
hToga: really??
aLaborn: yea they're kinda awesome and kinda fucking suck. no one can see me. i don't think i can turn it off.

Aisha grimaced as she tried really hard and found nothing had changed. This … was bad. How the fuck was she supposed to live like this? She found herself automatically reaching for her phone, but realized that Brian wouldn't be able to pick her up if she wasn't registering to anyone. She still called him though, out of a lack of options.

"Aisha? You okay? Did you go to school? I'm sorry, I'd let you skip if I could-" Brian babbled.

"Chill the fuck out, Brian," Aisha said, tapping her foot. "I got powers."

Brian sucked in a breath in horror. "Oh my god. Wait. What? You already have powers."

"Well technically no, according to ModDog. He's kinda insistent this chatroom in our heads is an outside influence," Aisha explained.

"That's … concerning. Do you need me to pick you up?"

Aisha shook her head even though Brian couldn't see her. "No, this power makes me invisible or something to everyone around me and I can't turn it off."

"That's …" Brian trailed off.

"Awful shit, I know," Aisha said, grimacing. "Hey, at least I can heal and get stronger now."

There was suddenly a commotion on Brian's side. "Lisa, what are you-" Brian sputtered.

"Aisha, it's Lisa, hi, here to give unwanted advice," Lisa piped up cheerfully. "Join the Wards."

"What?" Aisha blurted out in surprise. "I was thinking of the Undersiders."

"If you join the Wards, they'll fast track Brian's custody of you," Lisa explained. "I'm working on it, but it's much slower because I have to make it look legal. Plus they'll help you adjust to your powers. Hell, Armsmaster might be able to invent something to turn it off."

"What?! Lisa what the hell are you talking about?!" Brian yelled in the background. "Give my phone back, agh, Alec!!!" There was a commotion in the background and Aisha waited impatiently for them to get their shit together.

"As a compromise, you're on speaker phone," Lisa announced.

"That's because you guys are nosy fucks who were only supposed to help me move," Brian growled. His tone softened as he turned his attention to Aisha. "Aisha, you don't have to go to the Wards. Lisa can do the same thing as the Protectorate."

"C'mon, the Undersiders have cookies," Alec piped up. He then suddenly yelped.

"Well, I suppose I could get resources for you guys, but it wouldn't be as good as the Protectorate," Lisa said.

"The Wards have to be all picture perfect goody two shoes and brown nose the public. That's not my scene," Aisha argued.

"Your ability is really strong, they'd be willing to compromise with you. Brian could probably negotiate good terms, like no publicity stunts. You don't have to be perfect to be a Ward, Aisha," Lisa explained.

Aisha really didn't want to be a Ward. Though the prospect of never being able to have one on one interactions ever again was unappealing as well. She weighed the options and came to a decision.

"Okay," she muttered, petulantly.

aLaborn: azula can you get me a marker from armsmaster? i need to communicate with him.
Azula: Fine, but he keeps trying to recruit me for his army.

"I need a marker from you," Azula said, holding out a hand expectantly. Armsmaster stared at her.

"Do you want an autograph?" he asked, frowning.

"No, just give it to me!" Azula snapped, irritated. He pulled out a marker from his boot and handed it to Azula. Aisha yoinked it, causing Azula and Armsmaster to jump, and Aisha started writing on a nearby wall.

HEY I AM A PARAHUMAN
I WANT TO JOIN WARDS
CAN'T TURN OFF POWER
CAN COMMUNICATE BY TEXT
8=D

Aisha grinned. She'd just drawn a dick with Armsmaster's marker. Today was looking up. Armsmaster, however, nodded solemnly once Aisha backed away from the wall.

"Are you with this parahuman?" Armsmaster asked Azula.

"Yes, but I tire of your questions. I will not join your army. Goodbye." Azula disappeared. Armsmaster looked around the area where Azula disappeared in fascination.

"No residual energy left over, a very clean teleport," Armsmaster muttered. He shook his head, then looked in the wrong direction of where Aisha was. "Don't be scared, we've dealt with people in your situation before. I'll call a vehicle to escort you to headquarters, and we'll work things out. Also, we will need to talk to your guardian—"

'Ugh', Aisha thought as he carried on, 'Brian better not do a 'I'm your Father Figure so I have to take over your life' thing.'


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Himiko was jolted awake by the door shutting close. That was the sign that Angeline had left for her job, so Himiko walked out to eat dinner. However, she spotted Angeline's bento box left on the table. Oh no, she must have forgotten it!

hToga: Hey guys how's it going?
aLaborn: they're doing some lame ass thing called power testing to me. apparently i get stronger and heal faster when more people are in my stranger field and people forget about me totally.
hToga: That's kinda cool!
aLaborn: yea, but my own brother can't recognize me in the field.
hToga: Oh. I'm sorry.
hAkemi: That is understandably distressing.

Himiko grabbed it and ran out the door, but quickly realized she had no idea where Angeline worked. She ran back inside and looked around for some clues. She eventually found a magnet on the fridge that was shaped like a beer, which said 'Alibi Bar' with some numbers under it.
Azula: I think you all are missing the point. Aisha is now essentially invisible. She can do whatever she wants.
aLaborn: eh I have to still be careful with cameras, apparently they still catch me though iI turn into a blur.
Azula: They're teaching you your limits. How alarming.
aLaborn: ; )
Azula: Is that … a winking face?
aLaborn: god azula's like teaching a boomer the internet sometimes.

She figured it was probably Angeline's workplace, and looked it up on the computer before heading there. It was nearby, fortunately, and Himiko spotted Angeline standing on the street in front of it with some other women. She was starting to have an idea of what Angeline actually did as she crossed the street with her bento box. It explained a lot, really.

Azula: I do sometimes make things go boom, but that's hardly a sign of ignorance.
hToga: My classes never taught me about boomers.
hAkemi: Neither did mine.
aLaborn: omg no one gets the joke. stupid alternate dimensions.

"Angeline!" Himiko exclaimed, running up to her. "You forgot your bento box!"

"Himiko!" Angeline looked surprised. "How did you find me?!"

"There was a magnet for this place on the fridge," Himiko explained, handing the box to Angeline.

hToga: Aisha, knowing you, it was a bad joke anyways.
aLaborn: hmph. you guys just don't know good humor when you see it.
hAkemi: Obscure references to personal historical facts and penis jokes are not good humor.
aLaborn: all our universes have different histories! how am I supposed to tailor it to them! slso my penis jokes are great and you know it.

"Is this another cutie the one you've taken in, Angeline? She's adorable!" one of them gushed.

"Her haircut's terrible though," another remarked, shaking their head.

"Her dye's coming off too, you'll want to touch that up," someone said from behind Himiko, making her feel self conscious.

aLaborn: anyways lemme try out something I learned from the help menu.
aLaborn: /set nickname <aisha>
aisha: fuck yea!
hToga: oooooh, let me try!
hToga: /set nickname <Himiko>
Himiko: Now I'm not so formal!
Azula: /set nickname <Firelord_Azula>

"Hey, give her some room, you vultures. You can critique her fashion some other time," Angeline scolded, pushing some of them away. "You can go home, Himiko, thanks for bringing my dinner, you're a lifesaver!"

Himiko smiled. "No problem, Angeline!"

Firelord_Azula: Perfect.
aisha: but you're not the firelord.
Firelord_Azula: I will be! Once I topple my idiot brother and his friends!!
aisha: isn't your brother like, guarded by asian jesus?
Firelord_Azula: … I'm guessing you mean the avatar?
aisha: yeah. i mean i guess we could help you, but i'm not sure azula for president is a good idea.

Himiko walked back to the apartment, whistling happily.


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Firelord_Azula: Excuse me?
Himiko: Yeah, I have to agree with Aisha. You're terrible at teaching me how to fight.
Firelord_Azula: I don't have to be good at teaching to rule!
aisha: maybe, but you definitely burned me and you definitely are fifteen. would not vote for.
Firelord_Azula: what the hell is a vote?

Azula had been carving a knife for Bok Nam, so she could defeat her enemies, when she smelled smoke. She stilled, then stood up in alarm when she heard screaming from the village. Bok Nam was there! As she ran to the village, Bao caught her by the shoulder.

"Niu, Fire Nation troops are attacking the village! We have to leave!" he exclaimed.

"Not without Bok Nam! She's still there!" Azula yelled back, shaking his arm off and running towards the village. She bumped into two Fire Nation soldiers, who slid into a stance at the sight of her.

"Surrender or face the wrath of Firelord Azula's soldiers!" they yelled at her. She stared at them in disbelief before remembering she looked like an Earth Nation peasant, not a Fire Nation princess. Then there were more screams and Azula snarled.

"I don't have time for this!" she hissed before sweeping them away with a huge burst of fire from her leg. They were launched into the palisade and knocked out as Azula ran through the burning village.

"Bok Nam! Bok Nam!" she yelled, before hitting the village square and stopping at the sight. There was a large man that Azula absently recognized as General Akagi, looming above Bok Nam, who was clutching at her leg, screaming in pain. Azula didn't even realize that she'd shot the lightning bolt until it was over and the General was dead. She ran to Bok Nam and slid to her knees to the girl.

Firelord_Azula: Homura, how strong is your healing magic?
hAkemi: Not terribly. I had to use a lot of magic to heal Sayaka's violinist.
Firelord_Azula: Shit.

"You have to let me see the wound, Bok Nam," Azula said, quietly. Bok Nam was crying, but stopped trying to hide it. Azula didn't wince, but it was bad. The poultices she knew how to make for minor burns wouldn't cut it for this. The herbalist for the circus was good, but Azula honestly didn't know if they were going to be able to save the leg.

"Bok Nam, I'm going to pick you up," she murmured. Bok Nam shook her head fearfully.

"No no no …" she moaned. Azula grabbed her anyway, and Bok Nam gave a short scream at the movement. That was when Azula realized that the soldiers were watching her.

"Princess Azula …" they murmured before dropping to their knees. The sight didn't fill her with the usual pride. Instead, a strange rage filled her. She pierced them all with a severe glare.

"Take me to your healer or I'll execute you all," Azula intoned.
 
Chapter 9
(This is going to diverge significantly from Conference Call canon. Also looking for a beta.)


The next day, they were in a shopping mall dining room, meaning Sayaka, Homura, Madoka, and Mami. Madoka had dragged Mami back to her house and had wrung a promise out of Homura to join them for breakfast tomorrow. So there they were, Sayaka staring suspiciously at Homura, Mami and Madoka chatting like old friends. Eventually Homura felt the need to clear her throat. She caught all their attention and looked at Madoka.

"Madoka, why did you bring us all here?" she asked.

"Homura … something horrible is going to happen isn't it?" Madoka questioned, her eyes boring into Homura's. "I've been feeling a terrible dread this entire month and you feel it too."

"Yes. But I've taken care of it. It'll go down once and for all." Homura declared, eyes narrowing in determination and a new confidence.

"What is it?" Sayaka questioned. Homura fell silent, debating whether or not to tell them. Mami would be a valuable asset to bring in, but Madoka could not contract and Sayaka was very prone to self destruction if contracted. But she made the mistake of looking into Madoka's eyes and found she could not deny her anything.

"Walpurgisnacht." Homura said, softly. Mami gave a small gasp.

"A witch made up of other witches. The ultimate witch." Mami explained, eyes wide. "I'll … I'll have to call Kyoko."

"Wait a minute, I'm going to need more of an explanation. I know this is bad, but what exactly does Walpurgisnacht do? And who's Kyoko?" Sayaka demanded.

"Walpurgisnacht will wipe out much of the city. Normal people believe it's just a terrible storm, but it's much more than that." Homura said, before taking a sip of her water.

"Kyoko is a … a colleague of mine. We disagreed on methods, but if I appeal to her better nature, she'll help us." Mami said.

"I have some grief seeds if appealing doesn't work." Homura said blandly. Mami winced.

"Curious. How do you know Walpurgisnacht is coming?" Kyubey asked from a neighboring table.

Homura had turned into her magical girl outfit and was in the middle of pulling out her gun when Sayaka grabbed her wrist.

"We're in a mall!" she hissed. Homura scowled but slid the gun back inside her shield. Mami's gaze however was very unfriendly.

hAkemi: Incubator is here.
aisha: that fuck? shoot him.
hAkemi: I tried.

"What do you want Kyubey?" Mami said sharply.

"Well I wanted to know if Sayaka and Madoka reconsidered their decision to not become magical girls." Kyubey said, cocking its head.

"No way!" Sayaka exclaimed angrily, with Madoka shaking her head no.

"You both have significant potential, Madoka especially. She could become the strongest magical girl in the world." Kyubey said, slinking his tail around. "Riches, power, nothing would be out of her reach …"

"She's also become the strongest witch in the world." Homura spat.

"She'd be helping stop entropy, Akemi. The trade off-,"

"Enough," Mami said, furious. She was standing up with her hands on the table. "You're nothing but a sociopathic salesman! Get out of my sight before I shoot you."

Kyubey seemed to stare at Mami for a moment, before running off and disappearing. Mami slumped to her chair in tears.

"I can't believe I let him live in my apartment all those years." she whispered. Madoka walked over to Mami's side of the table to hug her, Sayaka as well. Homura just awkwardly patted her shoulder.

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Azula paced the room, waiting for the healers to come out of the room. Homura was there in the room with Azula, as she had brought some kind of strange gel that she claimed helped burn wounds. They had applied that, as well as the other poultices. They refused to let her in the room, which infuriated her to no end. She was the firelord! But even Homura said it would have been a bad idea and told her to let the 'doctors' work. So she was. Letting the doctors work, that is.

Firelord_Azula: This is awful! Waiting is awful!
Himiko: That's how it is, Azula.
aisha: we explained germ theory already, right?
Firelord_Azula: Yes, yes small animals live everywhere and cause disease, I know.
Firelord_Azula: But it doesn't erase the fact that I don't know if she'll be okay!

Finally, they came out of the room, looking pleased and exhausted.

"We've treated her thoroughly, Firelord." The Fire Nation healer explained, kneeling down in front of her rightful monarch. However, Duong the circus healer sat down on the side and started fishing for her pipe on the inside of her coat.

"She'll walk with a limp for the rest of her life, but she'll live. No more circus life for her." Duong said, smoking it as soon as she could. "The only way she'd get better care if we got her to a waterbender healer."

The Fire Nation healer glared at Duong. "A savage's water arts cannot compare-"

"Quiet." Azula snapped. The healer fell silent.

She contemplated what to do for a second and then started heading into Bok Nam's healing tent.

"Firelord Azula-," The healer protested, before falling silent again at Azula's glare.

"Just don't go sticking your hands in the poultice and she'll be fine." Duong grumbled.

Azula pushed past the flaps and entered. She grimaced at the strange smells but knelt next to Bok Nam who seemed to be in a fitful sleep. Azula grasped her hand and thought about her next move.

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The office was austere, empty of any personal touches or colors with its white and grey palette. The chairs were at least comfortable, surprisingly enough. She thought offices only had shit chairs. It was evening by the time they had sorted the guardian mess, as they had ended up arresting her mom and dealer boyfriend of the week when the PRT sent over some officers. It was a good thing too, Aisha could see her mother pilfering what Aisha got from this PRT deal for more drugs. Brian was successfully contesting in court so he got brought in as Dad's stand in. Director Piggot was fucking fat, but Aisha didn't think it was by personal choice going from the diamond hard eyes. Maybe some unlucky genes? Brian and a lawyer called Quinn Calle was on either side of her like they were her sentinels or something. She liked Quinn, he was funny and cool.

aisha: this lady's looking at me like i killed her puppies in front of her.
Firelord_Azula: So she is … salty?
aisha: hah. yeah, nice one.

"You and your little friends, Aisha Laborn, have caused a lot of trouble for us," she said, laying her steepled fingers on the table. She looked into the monitor at the video feed featuring Aisha, who shrugged in response. "Homura Akemi stole the entire wealth of Brockton Bay including the gangs. I'm surprised she didn't pry up floorboards at the rate she was going."

"She had her reasons," she drawled out.

"Well with the economic destabilization of all the gangs and the unmasking of the Empire capes, the situation is very volatile," Piggot narrowed her eyes at her. "People are dying in droves every day because of her stunt."

Aisha opened her mouth but Quinn's hand was suddenly on her shoulder.

"My client, while deeply sympathetic about the loss of life, has nothing to do with it," Quinn said, smiling. It tugged at his scar that went across his cheek.

"Calle," she sneered. "You can't spin this into gold this time. She killed Rune."

"What?" Aisha blurted out, with Quinn's hand tightening on her shoulder.

"Your thrown rock with your untested powers killed Tammi Shepard, otherwise known as Rune," Piggot explained, glaring. Aisha blinked, not knowing how to feel. On one hand, she killed someone. On the other, it was a nazi.

aisha: hey guys i killed someone.
Firelord_Azula: First time?
aisha: ah yeah, but theyre like the worst kind of scumbag so I don't know how to feel about it.
Himiko: What do you mean?
aisha: they think people with really pale skin and blonde hair should rule the world and black people should die.

"And her intervention helped Armsmaster, maybe, dare I say, even saved his life. How would he have fared against four Empire capes by himself?" Quinn said smoothly. Piggot gave a quick scathing glare at Quinn.

Himiko: Oh. Those people.
aisha: you have them too? Shiet.
Himiko: Their movements pretty much died out when quirks became a thing, but we have the history books on that.
hAkemi: My world doesn't have those kinds of things. Perhaps wishes took care of that.
Firelord_Azula: That's ridiculous! You rule by right of birth, not by how you look!
aisha: that's stupid too you know.
Firelord_Azula: No, it's not!

As Quinn and Piggot debated terms, Aisha sunk into her chair and the chat as it was getting interesting.

aisha: then how come you get to be Firelord when you're second in line.
Firelord_Azula: Because my brother is a weakling and weaklings are not worthy to be Firelord!
aisha: how come the waterbender isn't Firelord then?
Firelord_Azula: Augh, you're so insufferable!!

"How does a probationary Ward position sound then?" Piggot gritted out, knocking Aisha out of the conversation.

"What does that mean?" Aisha asked warily.

"It means you go to school and get decent grades." Brian said dryly.

"What?! That's totally cramping my style Brian!" Aisha protested.

"It's a good deal," Quinn Calle said, giving her a look. She backed down, grumbling.

aisha: girls I have to sign something.
hAkemi: Make sure it's not your soul.
Himiko: Was, was that a joke?
hAkemi: Hm.
aisha: as funny as that was, we need to focus! should i sign it?
Firelord_Azula: Well, is it a good deal? The very best you could extort?
aisha: yeah, we have a good lawyer.
Firelord_Azula: Then take it, peasant.
aisha: thanks bitch. xoxo

Aisha made a rueful expression before leaning forward. "What do I have to sign?"

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Himiko yawned as she woke up, stretching her arms up. She glanced at the clock. 7:00 AM. Frowning, she jumped out of bed and looked around the apartment, but couldn't find Angeline.

Himiko: That's weird. Angeline isn't here.
ModDog: The person that's housing you?
Himiko: Yeah, she's usually here in the mornings. I'm going to see where she is.

After getting dressed and doing her morning ablutions, she ran out to the street where Angeline usually was, but no one was there except a short woman in an expensive looking coat. Her skin was lightly dusky and her eyes were dark pools of black. Himiko slowed down but before she could consider heading back to the apartment, the woman waved at her.

"I ain't police," she said, beckoning her over. Her accent was rough and her japanese even coarser. "And we might be able to help each other."

"What do you mean?" Himiko said warily.

"The girls around the parts told me that the red headed woman that disappeared," something in Himiko's chest hurt suddenly. Angeline! "Takes care of a little thing like you."

"What happened to Angeline!?" Himiko burst out, her catlike eyes glowing incandescently.

"She was taken by some bastard serial killer I'm looking for. I'm Ligaya," she held out her hand which Himiko took numbly.

"Serial killer …" Himiko said, troubled by a sudden vision of red.

"Yeah, he killed the wrong girl back in europe and now he's got a delicious bounty on his shoulders," Ligaya grinned. "You're going to help me nail the bastard too."

"How?" Himiko asked, angrily.

"My quirk is called 'Divination', in which, with a piece of hair or blood or something from the target, I can track down people," Ligaya said, winking. "The only downside is that every time I use the item, it decays so that's why I haven't found him yet. I ran out of the uh, thing I was using."

"But if he took Angeline, you could use her hairs from the hairbrush she was using," Himiko realized.
 
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I remember this! Nice to see it's actually been updating.

(Looking back after writing this out, I'd just like to note that it's much easier to write criticism than praise. Rest assured your story has far more good points than bad.)

Your Homura has been spot-on if you chose one of the earlier loops, and pre-Trigger Aisha was unspecified enough that your version fits.

I'm afraid I can't comment on Himiko, never having seen MHA through anything other than fanfic, where she's usually a minor villain.

Your Azula seemed off to me from the first chapter, though, relative to canon. I'm aware that mental breaks tend to have rather severe changes in mannerism, but the style of Azula's seems to be dissociative rather than causing regressive behaviors, and even child!Azula didn't really act childishly, from what we know of her past; so her reaction to Ty Lee's bringing her to a circus, and the quickness with which she returned to her, both seemed unrealistic.

Azula seeking/accepting a romantic relationship to fill the void in her heart is also contrary to her canon characterization. The fact that she was playing Pai Sho and mocking others' skill at it shows that she had sufficiently recovered her defense mechanisms to again have very predefined roles that others are allowed to have with respect to her. The specific roles might have changed to be less denigrating, after her defeat at Katara's hands, but she shouldn't be mentally capable of considering a romantic relationship as anything other than aversive and ridiculous.

Still, these contradictions are only visible at all because you did a good job depicting your characters' mental states and actions. And the narrative (including their ways of using the resources of each other's worlds) is good as well. Nice job!
 
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Watched! I dunno much about Himiko, but I'm enjoying your choice of the other characters.

Can you give us a sense of the timeline? Clearly this started pre-canon for Worm and pre-comics for Avatar, but i'm curious how much time has past. Also, I'm assuming that time is passing in a 1:1 ratio?

And lastly, a small criticism, I find it highly unrealistic that Piggot would try a claim like "all the wealth of the bay" when a lawyer like Calle is in the room. That's the type of simplistic language hyperbole you use on a 12 year old. Piggot trying to use a line like that shows her incredibly weak hand. They have nothing on Aisha, not even a reasonable case against her killing Rune. Plus, I'm betting they haven't gotten her to actually confess with a guardian in the room. In these circumstances, Aisha could potentially get away with asking for the moon. A competent Attorney like Calle would list his demands and then let Piggot know that if she doesn't like it, they'll pick up and move to Boston. Some director somewhere wants a cape that is always a credible threat. You would literally never know if who you are fighting has backup. Plus, she could be used more like a protectorate cape since she can get the Youth Guard to forget about her.

I'm also somewhat surprised that Aisha would give up the secrets of the chatroom. She could just go with "I can summon a projection" or some other much more plausible explanation. In any case, the original Conference Call explored the PRT response to this, so if you don't want to, that's cool too. I can totally understand being more interested in going in a different direction.

Anyway, super excited that this is back. Glad you got a beta, if you need more/want more detailed feedback, feel free to PM.

Excited to see whats next :)
 
Watched! I dunno much about Himiko, but I'm enjoying your choice of the other characters.

Can you give us a sense of the timeline? Clearly this started pre-canon for Worm and pre-comics for Avatar, but i'm curious how much time has past. Also, I'm assuming that time is passing in a 1:1 ratio?

And lastly, a small criticism, I find it highly unrealistic that Piggot would try a claim like "all the wealth of the bay" when a lawyer like Calle is in the room. That's the type of simplistic language hyperbole you use on a 12 year old. Piggot trying to use a line like that shows her incredibly weak hand. They have nothing on Aisha, not even a reasonable case against her killing Rune. Plus, I'm betting they haven't gotten her to actually confess with a guardian in the room. In these circumstances, Aisha could potentially get away with asking for the moon. A competent Attorney like Calle would list his demands and then let Piggot know that if she doesn't like it, they'll pick up and move to Boston. Some director somewhere wants a cape that is always a credible threat. You would literally never know if who you are fighting has backup. Plus, she could be used more like a protectorate cape since she can get the Youth Guard to forget about her.

I'm also somewhat surprised that Aisha would give up the secrets of the chatroom. She could just go with "I can summon a projection" or some other much more plausible explanation. In any case, the original Conference Call explored the PRT response to this, so if you don't want to, that's cool too. I can totally understand being more interested in going in a different direction.

Anyway, super excited that this is back. Glad you got a beta, if you need more/want more detailed feedback, feel free to PM.

Excited to see whats next :)

So for the timeline, I would say almost a month has passed for all of these characters. Yes it's getting close to Walpurgisnacht for Homura. And time is passing in a 1:1 ratio.

And as for claim all the wealth of the bay, I guess that's true, not sure what to replace it with. Also Aisha cannot really get away with asking for the moon. The Protectorate put it together that Aisha was the one who threw the rock, they're not stupid.

Aisha's projection thing would get ruined by azula as soon as azula figured out she could use it as leverage.
 
Calle holding all the cards is cancelled out by the PRT being the PRT. They've got more leeway than our American police.
Even being right, it's an uphill battle. Maybe the Youth Guard can finagle more, but they'd also be on Aisha's case at that point. Literally.
 
Aisha's projection thing would get ruined by azula as soon as azula figured out she could use it as leverage

Ah, legit. I did not think of that.

Calle holding all the cards is cancelled out by the PRT being the PRT. They've got more leeway than our American police.

This has been on my mind recently: https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13214317/1/A-Matter-for-Lawyers
I guess it depends on the authors interpretation of the relative power of the PRT and the courts. I could see it go either way, and it is really Iolande's call how that balance works in their fic.

As for the Youth Guard, I can see Aisha using her power as soon as she walks into a meeting room and the rep forgetting what they are supposed to be doing 😁 She would totally get in buckets of trouble for it, but that is IC for her...
 
It's back! Three cheers, and then three more, and so on! I was excited to see a single notification for this, let alone so many chapters all at once (plus revisions)!

I was always keen on seeing where this fic would go, but I must say that the recent chapters make that feeling all the sharper. The way in which people and their stories are changing is the best part of things like this, and it seems like you've set yourself on an interesting path with all of them, rather than any one of them being more of a "stable" timeline that more closely resembles canon (as, I assume, Toga is dealing with things she didn't in your world's "canon" time, since this way she had tips on how to escape and get further away which she'd have otherwise lacked, plus a better support structure that might let her be helped in ways she'd have been otherwise hostile to).
Non sum dignus, Homura pondered.
I know the latin, but that didn't stop me from reading this as "non sum dingus" for a couple of seconds.
Kyoko is a … an colleague of mine.
Looks like maybe you had "ally" or something here before changing it to colleague?
 
Interlude 2
Ligaya knew the script by heart as soon as she saw the girl's determined eyes.

"You have to let me come," Himiko burst out, as soon as Ligaya entered the apartment. She ran over to Angeline's bedroom to grab her hairbrush from the vanity.

"No way, kid. You're an amateur and I ain't interested in splitting my profits," Ligaya said as she pulled out Angeline's hairs from the hairbrush and into a ziplock baggie. Kids. They're so foolish.

"She's my friend!" she snarled. "I don't want your profits!!"

Ligaya rolled her eyes. "Even more reason for you not to come. I'm a professional, you're not. You'll end up getting someone killed."

"I can turn into people! Can't that help?" Himiko asked desperately.

"I … hm," That was a good quirk for the situation. The bounty target had preferences. Ligaya considered the girl in front of her. "Just by touching or something?"

"No, I uh, need their blood," Himiko said awkwardly. "I don't get their quirk either."

"Workable." Ligaya nodded, mind racing. It was a risky plan, but she didn't get her millions by playing it safe.

"Come with me," Ligaya said, standing up abruptly to walk out the apartment. Himiko followed after and they ended up in front of a rental car, a SUV car. Getting in, Himiko buckled up and looked at Ligaya for a long moment.

"So what's the plan then?" Himiko asked.

"First, we find where the ratfucker is hiding and figure out the layout of wherever he's staying," Ligaya explained, pulling out of the parking lot.

Himiko accepted it and stayed silent the entire time she drove. Every thirty minutes, Ligaya would take a hair out and it would decay into ash. But despite her concentration, a part of her found it entirely creepy that the girl was as silent as a graveyard. Kids usually couldn't stand silence, found it stifling. That tendency was helpful on a few bounties, but it looked like Himiko was one of those rare stoic types? Though that didn't really fit with how the girl normally behaved...

Ligaya was shaken out of her thoughts by a thrumming response from her Divination. The target was dead ahead. She frowned. It was a busy downtown street, full of people, and he had the gall to be in a first floor apartment. Bastard could cause a fucking panic if they did this during the daytime and he got out. Wondering how he got the money for a downtown apartment, she drove to the shittier parts of town and drove around for a specific target.

"Who are you looking for?" Himiko asked, frowning.

"Leggy redheads," Ligaya said absently. "The bounty target has a strong preference."

"That's disgusting," Himiko muttered, giving the window a dark look.

"Well, kid we're going to be kicking the shit out of him soon so-, Bingo!" Ligaya pulled over to a young woman with red hair and bright red scales all over her body. Her slinky black dress seemed loose on her boney frame and the woman jumped as Ligaya pulled up.

"Hey, hot stuff-- " the redhead said with an unconvincing smile.

"I'll give you five thousand dollars if you give me some blood," Ligaya interrupted, pulling out the cash from her wallet.

"Wait, why? You're not going to clone me and send the evil clone after me to kill me and replace me in my life are you?" she said, alarmed.

Ligaya stared at her, making her shift uncomfortably.

"I read a lot of sci fi novels, okay?!" she exclaimed, embarrassed.

"Anyways, five thousand dollars for some blood and no questions, got it?" Ligaya snapped, handing her half. "See, some goodwill? The rest after."

"Fine, okay," the woman grumbled. Ligaya produced a combat knife from her coat, making the woman flinch.

"Don't worry, I'm not going to cut your hand. This isn't a fucking anime, I know that shit will fuck you up," Ligaya reassured her. "Gonna go for a shoulder cut, alright?"

"Alright, just make it quick," she grumbled. "I'm Ritsu by the way. Should know my name if you're going to do something like this."

Ligaya nodded as she carefully, but swiftly made a cut on the Ritsu's shoulder. She pulled out a small jar and started getting some of the pouring blood into the jar. Noticing Himiko staring in a hungry way, Ligaya wondered if she was dealing with a vampire. Oh well, she's bargained, worked, and dealt with worse.

Closing the jar, she gave the rest of the money to Ritsu and they drove off.

"Now what?" Himiko asked in a small voice.

"Now, we wait before the sun sets. You go in as Ritsu as a hm, ramen solicitor. Keep his attention for five minutes while I get in from the back and get your friend Angeline out. Then I take him down once she's out."

"What's his quirk?" Himiko asked, frowning.

"Ah. He has quills that grow out of his back and arms. They're full of a paralysing agent that'll freeze your body and keep you conscious," Ligaya explained, driving into an illegal parking spot.

"That's fucked," Himiko said, aghast.

"Yup," Ligaya said, shrugging. "Here's a bluetooth earbud so we can hear each other during the operation."

"Alright," Himiko said with determination. Ligaya shook her head as she put in hers. Hopefully nothing would go wrong.

(❍ᴥ❍ʋ)​

"That's a large regiment," Sokka commented, as he looked through the spyglass. They were on top of a large plateau, one of many that surrounded the area. "She's got about 5,000 soldiers, Zuko, give or take."

Zuko frowned even as Toph grinned. "We can take them!" she declared.

"We shouldn't. They're not the real enemy, most of them are just farmers," Zuko said, shaking his head. "Do you see her, Sokka?"

"Gimme a second, everyone's wearing the same thing-, hey I found her!" Sokka exclaimed. "She's … in the middle of the encampment. Of course she is."

"Firelord, I could make the shot," Huang said. Aang frowned at the lethal suggestion and gave the yuyan archer a hard stare that she returned.

"No! Absolutely not!" Zuko snapped. "You were brought to capture her, not kill her!"

"My apologies, Firelord. I only wish to serve," Huang immediately kowtowed and Zuko sighed.

"Stand up." Zuko said, exasperated. "Anyways, I know what to do."

Katara started shaking her head. "Zuko, that's insane."

"I agree with Katara. We should just have Toph grab her and I'll energy-bend her," Aang argued.

"What's going on?" Sokka asked, blinking. "Cause I'm not getting this conversation."

"He wants to do another Agni Kai with her," Toph said, with a small sigh.

"It's the only way to gain legitimacy in the eyes of the people," Zuko argued back.

"It's a fast way of getting injured again!" Katara snapped. "That lightning from her last time did a number on your organs."

"Zuko is right though, the nobles of the Fire Nation want a solid Firelord, not one with a sister running around that might stir up rebellion," Toph backed him up.

"Which is why I'll take her firebending away," Aang argued. "Ozai lost legitimacy in the eyes of everyone when I did that."

"I don't want you risking your life like that Aang," Katara said, surprising Aang. "What you told me … You don't really want to energy-bend again do you?"

Aang grimaced. "Not really."

"Then let me do this Aang!" Zuko yelled. "No one but me has to get hurt!"

"Okay time out guys, this is getting really heated. How about we sleep on it and decide in the morning?" Sokka interrupted, making a x sign with his arms. No one was happy as bedrolls were taken out from Appa and everyone crawled in.

Zuko carefully pretended to sleep and two hours later he crawled out of his bedroll and stealthily crept to Appa. He climbed up to see Sokka, Katara, Huang, and Toph sitting in the saddle. He nearly fell off but managed to get control of himself in time.

"What're you guys doing here?" he hissed in a whisper.

"I know you," Katara said blandly as she handed him the reigns. "You're going to get hurt doing something this stupid, I might as well be there."

"Your schemes are kinda transparent Zuko, you gotta work on that," Sokka commented.

"I'm not stupid," Toph explained dryly.

Huang opened her mouth but Zuko glared and she shut it.

"Yip yip Appa. Quietly, please." Appa gave him a look, but rose up silently and they headed into the encampment.

(❍ᴥ❍ʋ)​

Kyoko sat on the plush couch opposite of Mami and her entourage chewing on a stick of pocky. It was weird as fuck for Mami to call her out of nowhere, especially after their unfortunate split, but Kyoko had relented to hear her out on the condition of a grief seed. Speaking of which, the Homura girl pulled one out of her shield and tossed it to her. She caught it and inspected it, seeing it was empty. Nodding approvingly, she put it on aside.

"Alright, what d'ya want?" Kyoko asked, raising an eyebrow. Madoka and Sayaka didn't seem to have the rings of magical girls. Were they normal people?

"We want your help against Walpurgisnacht," Mami told her.

"One's coming? Here?" Kyoko sat up straighter, eyes widening. "How do you even know this? Is grim and broody here a precog?"

"Of a sort," Homura said, enigmatically.

Kyoko frowned at her response, before mulling it over. She could skip town, forget this whole mess. It was tempting, except for the fact that she'd have nowhere to go. Everywhere had pre-established magical girls who'd gladly kill Kyoko to maintain their slice of the pie.

"Alright, but what's in it for me?" Kyoko drawled.

"What kind of response is that?!" Sayaka burst out, glaring at her. Mami put a hand on Sayaka's shoulder, quelling her anger, but Homura was the one who spoke up.

"Miki, you're here as a courtesy of Mami. If you do not agree how we do things, you can wait outside," Homura said, coldly. Ouch. Kyoko barely made herself stop snickering at the girl's red face. Sayaka huffed and crossed her arms, but stayed silent.

"Grief seeds," Homura said, pulling out five of them out of her shield between her fingers. "Five now, five later."

"How about ten now and ten later?" Kyoko counter offered. She was no stranger to bargaining.

"Ridiculous. Six now and six later," Homura spoke, after a moment of silence.

"Alright, seven now and seven later." Kyoko leaned forward, grinning.

"Acceptable," Homura intoned. Sayaka looked ready to slug Kyoko.

"And a meal at the fanciest meat restaurant in Mitakihara," Kyoko threw in.

" … Acceptable," Kyoko observed that Sayaka's shade of red couldn't be healthy.

"Got something on your mind, Saya-chan?" Kyoko asked, grinning wolfishly at the girl.

"Yeah, your attitude! How can you be so selfish with the entire city on the line?!" Sayaka yelled, standing up. Homura's face turned flat but Mami touched her on the shoulder, shaking her head. Kyoko tilted her head, giving a curious look at Sayaka.

"Easily. Life's not flowers and puppies as a magical girl and it'll eat you and spit you out dead if you're careless," Kyoko spat out before biting onto another pocky stick.

"I know the truth about it all!" Sayaka's fists were white knuckled. "But you can't put a price tag on all these lives! Don't you live here after all?!"

Kyoko laughed, a weary sound of pain.

"I haven't lived here for a long time,"
(❍ᴥ❍ʋ)​

Missy was looking forward to meeting the new Ward. It was a young girl according to the rumor mill. She could show her the ropes and be the senior for once! Missy Biron, senpai extraordinaire.

The door rang out with a tone and Missy pulled down her visor. Time to shine!

Armsmaster came in by himself and Vista blinked. "I thought the new Ward was coming."

"Yeah, what gives?" Clockblocker asked, turning towards him on the couch.

Armsmaster nodded as he handed everyone a video camera. "She is. Look through the video."

Vista looked through and saw a gorgeous young girl through the camera, whose curls were dyed purple in the front. Her dark skin was unblemished and her curves were a perfect hourglass shape. Vista smiled widely and waved.

"Hi, I'm Vista," she exclaimed. There was an overlapping chorus of greetings from the others.

"Hi I'm Sentinel," she said, grinning back. "Oh you guys should totally meet the girls!"

Armsmaster turned to her abruptly. "I don't think that's necessary."

"They're probably going to end up meeting them anyways," Sentinel said, waving him off. "They're mostly harmless."

Vista blinked in alarm as three girls appeared out of nowhere around Sentinel. They were all of east asian descent, but had a variety of hairstyles, clothes, and eye colors.

"This is Azula, Homura, and Himiko," Sentinel said, pointing out each girl in turn.

"I'm a little busy Aisha," Azula said, testily. She had a military uniform that reminded her of Ancient China. Her hair was short, barely touching her shoulders. Her eyes glowed a golden light, that Vista had a hard time believing was real.

"Hey, ixnay on the name," Sentinel reprimanded, though she didn't sound that upset. "We talked about this."

"So you're the one who robbed the banks and the gangs," Aegis spoke up suddenly, staring at Homura. "You caused a lot of problems. A lot of people are dying."

Homura matched gazes with Aegis. Her clothes were somewhat reminiscent of a catholic school girls' wear and her purple eyes were dead inside as she coldly looked at him. Vista almost shivered.

"I am sympathetic to your city's plight and understand my part in the state of it." Homura pronounced at last. "Rest assured once I finish with my problem, I will be willing to cooperate."

"What problem?" Kid Win asked, curious.

"She has to kick the ass of an Endbringer -level monster." Sentinel explained, delighted as they all paled.

"That's impossible!" Aegis burst out.

"I have seen it defeated before. It is not impossible," Homura explained, in a dead tone of voice. "We have also observed that your monsters have different properties than ours."

"How are you even going to do it? What's your plan?" Armsmaster asked, in a quiet voice.

"I'll tell you how it goes afterwards," Homura offered. "We have an alien in our world that works against us. I will not risk exposure."

"That's kinda paranoid Homura," Sentinel said, "It's not like it can come here."

Homura shrugged awkwardly.

"Anyways, let's expose Azula to the joys of ice cream!" Sentinel grabbed the arm of Azula and started pulling her towards the kitchen.

"Not my chunky monkey!" Clockblocker cried out running after them.

Vista chuckled, but stopped the moment Himiko started bleeding red from her blouse and staggered to the floor. Armsmaster was already yelling into his helmet, but Vista ran to her side and started applying pressure to the wound. Himiko had strangely beautiful spiky hair the color of dune sand. Her catlike eyes darted with fear as she gripped at Vista's hand.

Suddenly, Homura was next to her. She knelt down and a strange purple glow appeared from her hands.

She frowned. "The wound is not closing. Perhaps …"

"It's still in me on the other side." Himiko explained, her voice raspy. "D-don't worry, I got him …"

Homura disappeared and so did Azula, just as an emergency team burst through the doors. They pulled Vista off of Himiko and carried her to the stretcher. Vista had the sudden impulse to pull out the video camera and saw Sentinel yelling at Himiko.

"Accept the damn invite, Himiko!"
 
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Homura continues being the coolest one around, with Himiko as a close second.
 
(A small scene that won't make it in the story because it can't fit. I still like it enough to publish it.)


Brian was filming her with a video camera that she was pretty sure he bought just for this and she resisted the urge to run out of view and confuse him again. It was more sad than funny at this point. They, along with PRT officer Jones, were heading to Armsmaster's office so he could give her an introduction to the Wards. The officer had his own video camera in his helmet so he could keep track of her as well.

"So I managed to get less publicity stunts for you, but that means more patrolling. I also made sure that they knew to take your costume suggestions with a grain of salt and- stop texting!" Brian snapped, trying to grab at the phone that Aisha was texting Drew with. Aisha dodged out of his hands easily, but put the phone away in her back pocket.

"C'mon bro, I was listening." she said with a shrug.

"Then what did I say?"

"You … said the stuff."

Brian sighed. "Look, just make a good impression with the wards okay?"

"Sure," Aisha said, grinning far too sharply.

Brian dragged a hand down his face while changing the subject. "So any thoughts about what your superhero name is going to be?"

"Bootyslayer," Aisha responded, smirking.

"No,"

"The One True Thot," Aisha emphasized each word with her hands.

"Never,"

"Beautylicious?"

"Aisha, no."
 
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