Very pleased to see this update, only found it on SV after the, hiatus I guess? So I never had a chance to comment.
So I don't know all that much about Mage, so I can't speak to that, but...rather a lot of this is reminding me of Demon. Very very heavily reminding me of Demon, in fact. With Agents Butcher and Baker, which are exceedingly Demon names, to the stuff with the general rotting of stuff against the holy light stuff, and what may have been an Angel over the city...I'm q worried. The God-Machine is not your friend.
I'm also concerned that Taylor's powers may entirely literally making the world a fundamentally worse place.
Is that another story? Link please?
I was actually thinking this was much more like a SensiblyTainted story. Lots of psycjology, overcoming problems, and adventure tied into a great story.
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