A Young Girl's Delinquency Record (Youjo Senki/Saga of Tanya the Evil)

It occurs to me that just like the Congo belonged to King Leopold Ii in the OTL, the Congo is the Kaiser's personal fiefdom here.

The Germanians were wondering what Tanya's plan was? Clearly it's Ruining the Kaiser and turning The empire into a Democracy, possibly through war if necessary.
That seems unlikely. For one, the territory was held by the french here, not the Belgians (Belgium is a part of the empire here). Even ignoring the complicated political maneuvering that resulted in the congo being in Leopold's personal hands, there is no french crown for it to have been the private property of and it would thus be very weird for the kaiser to have made it his in the peace treaty.
 
That seems unlikely. For one, the territory was held by the french here, not the Belgians (Belgium is a part of the empire here). Even ignoring the complicated political maneuvering that resulted in the congo being in Leopold's personal hands, there is no french crown for it to have been the private property of and it would thus be very weird for the kaiser to have made it his in the peace treaty.
"That is good to hear. Better than the quagmire in the Congo."

"Indeed. Having it declared the Kaiser's personal property was a mistake. He's pretty much given free rein to the corporations to do whatever they please," mused Rudersdorf.

"You don't know the half of it. I have to field constant complaints from the garrison commander about Captain Grantz."

"Isn't he one of Degurechaff's? What has he been doing?"

"Refusing to massacre the locals when they object to being enslaved, apparently."

Is it unlikely? Because It's Clearly his in this story now...
 
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Tanya really needs to get some sample of the magical mind enchancing drugs.

It might even have combat uses for short burst of faster thinking (I think that is how it works, except at high dosages you cant control what you want think about).
 
I realized I might need to clarify in-story how old everyone is. Tanya turned fifteen this year on September 24, and Visha is about to turn twenty in January 1929. I've added a couple lines to chapters 14 and 20 mentioning this.

Also, this now has a Tropes page that I invite you all to contribute to.
 
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official staff communication Just here to have a brief word. The Staff has had their attention drawn to the scene at the end of the most recent chapter. After examination, it has been determined that @Gremlin Jack has successfully managed to ultimately avoid violating Rule 6: Appropriate Content on SV in that section. It is, however, right on the borderline between what is and is not permissible, as we take the sexualization of minors and involvement of minors in sexualized situations very seriously.

I would take a moment to urge that people remember that they generally should not attempt to replicate this feat. It is a very delicate and difficult line to balance, especially for those without significant technical writing skill, and attempting to mimic an example so close to that border of permissibility increases the difficulty yet further. Or to phrase it another way, don't try this at home kids.

Gremlin Jack has been very helpful and cooperative with this matter, taking such steps as adding the "Mature" tag to the thread, clarifying the ages of the characters involved (see the post above), and reassuring us that things will be toned down from this level and kept under control going forwards until all characters involved are above the age of majority. We are very grateful for their cooperation, and hope the readers will show similar levels of restraint and good behavior.

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I think the real tragedy here is the over sized pizza slice that the empire calls a capital ship in your avatar.
 
I think the real tragedy here is the over sized pizza slice that the empire calls a capital ship in your avatar.
It doubles as a giant bayonet doesn't it?


Dammit. Now I'm imagining Tanya as an imperial officer in star wars. Trying to get better treatment of non-humans, while being a tactical and strategic genius, at odds with tarkin.
 
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I realized I might need to clarify in-story how old everyone is. Tanya turned fifteen this year on September 24, and Visha is about to turn twenty in January 1929. I've added a couple lines to chapters 14 and 20 mentioning this.
Saying Tanya is fifteen is rather disingenuous.
She (arguably 'he' or 'they') has existed as a sapient being for somewhere around 40 years.

Biology is not the defining factor of a person. Not with gender. Not with age.


In other news I would be fascinated to know what the rank and file members of VIP think of the fact that their organisations got into a shooting war with the Imperial mage corps and won.
I imagine they take the 'Tanya runs your company' more as a matter to boast about than to deny.
 
Saying Tanya is fifteen is rather disingenuous.
She (arguably 'he' or 'they') has existed as a sapient being for somewhere around 40 years.

Biology is not the defining factor of a person. Not with gender. Not with age.
If you feel strongly about that, take it up with the mods, but as is, biological age is what counts, no 500 year old vampires alowed.
 
I'm just glad to see that the mods didn't decide to just lock the whole thread because of that, good going guys! Keep up the good modding.

Also, you too keep up the great work Mr. J. I hope that you too, like your name, will multiply and write even more if we douse the fiery passion of this story with some cold water after midnight.
 
You can always just have Tanya panic and say she isn't old enough for a relationship with Visha. (Which she isn't according to the forum rules) After Visha gets sufficiently blunt about her feelings.

But it will just be a stay of execution for poor Tanya.
 
I admit I got a bit passionate at the end there. I couldn't help myself. Visha, I, the rest of my troops, we were all ultimately temporary hires, here for just a few months. The real human resources to this business have always been the locals. Of course, Visha had simply been taking her cues from the previous operator, but just because something had worked in the past didn't mean it could not be improved upon. Looking at Visha, I could see she had wilted into her seat, seemingly on the verge of tears. Well, that won't do, I didn't want to actually discourage her from trying to improve herself.

Good teaching moment, but I feel the way it happened was a bit disingenuous, what with basically cheating to win.

When I was in Point Noir I'd taken a good hard look at the colonial business model and I could only shake my head in disbelief. The whole system still seemed to be operating on an 18th century paradigm where long-distance trade of any sort was a high-risk affair and you needed a ridiculous margin just to cover your risks. Few seem to have noticed we were in the 20th century where you could afford to make long-term plans, building infrastructure and goodwill in order to expand the market rather than obsess with immediate profit.

... Or they are sucking out all they can before the territory gets placed into full imperial legal compliance a couple years down the road? Like I can see them all being aware that the abuses aren't sstainable, and deciding that better to profit as much as possible before they get smacked on the wrist...

"It's just... here I've been fooling around with this one outpost. And you've already put together a plan to take over the whole country. I just... I just wanted to show you I could do something on my own..."

What's sad is that this could have been an important milestone for Visha, cause the power dynamics between them are still so skewed, this would have been an interesting way to resolve that a bit. Visha NEEDS to have success separate from Tanya, and prove to herself she ISN'T just a subordinate, or adjutant anymore. It could have been a point where the interactions gain a bit more respect and evenness... but nope



"Second condition: the deadline! Our initial plan stays in place. Come mid-January, you'll be selling this outpost and we will be moving on. I refuse to be stuck here any longer than that."

uh... wait what? Why? Isn't the trading post like half owned by the whole rest of the guys at this point? Couldn't they subfranchize it? Or at least ask them what they want? Tanya, you need to think about the stakeholders following you on your global travels, they need their own nest eggs and stuff too beyond just a salary!

Unless you offer to have them sell it to Cold Steel, for participation (shares) rather than cash??

As the year of 1928 drew to a close, the entire civilized world was seeing exports crumble and import prices skyrocketing. With all the world's powers scrambling to rebalance their economies, one particular side-effect went largely unnoticed. With the Empire now desperate for Middle East oil, a fortune in Imperial marks poured into the Turkmen Empire. At a time when the Turkmen were struggling with an uncertain economy and internal strife, what should have been a boon acted instead as a nasty inflationary shock to an already tottering system. It was hardly the only reason for what came next, but it certainly helped to hasten the inevitable.

This is the point that the business model she just began for Cold Steel could potentially fail, as she is dealing in luxury materials primarily, which get hit the most in this environment. What IS cool is the fact that there's trade with Colombia (for the guns) which diversifies the market pool somewhat.


The Cold Steel Trading Company was doing remarkably well, rapidly taking over large chunks of the Imperial African Company's trade networks. Instead of changing their business policies, the fools were whining to the government. I scoffed. They'd gotten so used to the government siding with them against the natives, they seemed to think they'd get the same consideration against fellow Imperials. I had, of course, made sure the top positions in Cold Steel were staffed with Imperial citizens in good standing.

... I wonder if she had made ANY overtures to the 203rd remnant posted at Point Noir though? You'd think she would at least signal to them that Cold Steel was owned by 203rd sympathizers, or something right?

Also, what is pushing her to move from Congo, beside her jumpiness at this point? I don't see it, unless it's cause of the proximity of imperial forces and the fact that she now has confirmation that they have hit squads out for her?

I'm assuming she is going to Turkmen Empire next? Wonder what part
 
prove to herself she ISN'T just a subordinate, or adjutant anymore
Something to work on. Thing is, Visha is so happy being her adjutant she is more worried about disappointing Tanya than actually caring about becoming an independent person.

Unless you offer to have them sell it to Cold Steel, for participation (shares) rather than cash??
Visha owns the trading post, she hired the guys.

I wonder if she had made ANY overtures to the 203rd remnant posted at Point Noir though?
Nope. But they will show up before she is done with the Congo.

Also, what is pushing her to move from Congo
The first rule of any fugitive, never stop moving. Plus, it is the Imperials sending out squads after her, and she is in Imperial territory. That is not a comfortable situation.
 
@Gremlin Jack I'm glad this is posted here! I thought this sketch I drew will never see the light of day after the thread got nuked on the other side.

Better run it by the mods before posting. Also, Tanya is not wearing a tie, nor will she ever wear one unless she adopts a male disguise first. Otherwise brilliant though.

Also, why does Visha look to be sad? Her expressions here should be mischievous and amused at how she is causing Tanya distress.
 
...maybe that should go to the QQ thread? That definitly has...implications, and the SV mods said that ch20 was riding the razor edge as is.

... but there are no explicit nudity, and it's already in spoilers. Bleh.

Better run it by the mods before posting. Also, Tanya is not wearing a tie, nor will she ever wear one unless she adopts a male disguise first. Otherwise brilliant though.

Also, why does Visha look to be sad? Her expressions here should be mischievous and amused at how she is causing Tanya distress.

I got rid of it, let's play it safe. I had to figure out a way to draw it so that so that Visha won't be naked, so I had Tanya holding out a jacket, hence the tie. Once the jacket is there, my mind supplied a dreamy face instead of a mischievous one, so that's what I drew.
 
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Warning: Yes that right there is an example of what not to do
yes that right there is an example of what not to do When I said that the instance in the story itself fell just within the rules and warned people to not attempt to replicate that, that was meant to be taken as encouragement to back away and play it safe, not to keep looking to dance around and on the line in new and exciting ways.

Since the initial post was removed on the poster's own violation, no further action will be necessary - but I have removed the copy of the image in question from the quote.

Thank you for your time, and please have a pleasant day~
 
Something to work on. Thing is, Visha is so happy being her adjutant she is more worried about disappointing Tanya than actually caring about becoming an independent person.

Well yeah ok, but part of not disappointing Tanya is becoming less of an automaton, and more of someone Tanya can trust to do things on her own right? The thing is that Tanya rightly thinks in paternalistic terms with Visha, because the power dynamics have always been fashioned in that way, but they don't have those barriers any more.

I guess it's just that, seeing Lena grow into her own, Lin and Jenny all evolve, I keep waiting to see similar evolution with Visha and really thought that is what was happening here, but at least it got the thought poked into Tanya's mind.

Visha owns the trading post, she hired the guys.

Ok, then I am very confused about the whole 'We can buy the trading post for less than 60K' as it sounded like the guys were all putting up half of their ivory as part of the capital for buying the trading post, and Visha was convincing Tanya to put in the rest... and Tanya turns around and has VISHA buy the trading post, taking the missing part as a loan from Tanya...

So I thought it was, Visha owning the majority, but the guys owning a not insignificant minority of the trading post... Which I thought was cool as it was a sort of coop / employee owned company type dealio.

Also would be a good model for interests in other franchised trading posts getting bought by groups of hunters.
 
Well yeah ok, but part of not disappointing Tanya is becoming less of an automaton, and more of someone Tanya can trust to do things on her own right? The thing is that Tanya rightly thinks in paternalistic terms with Visha, because the power dynamics have always been fashioned in that way, but they don't have those barriers any more.

I guess it's just that, seeing Lena grow into her own, Lin and Jenny all evolve, I keep waiting to see similar evolution with Visha and really thought that is what was happening here, but at least it got the thought poked into Tanya's mind.

I think that the main reason either Tanya or Visha don't think about changing the power dynamics in their life is because:

1) Visha is simply too used to Tanya being her superior and the one to give her orders, or the one to leave in charge because she is doing something else that in Visha's mind, is more important than what she herself is doing.

2) Tanya is used to giving orders, being the one to hold either the majority or all the power in the group, and her group is made out of remnants of people that were her subordinates. They don't want to disobey, but they also don't know that they can make suggestions to the plans, because Tanya is still the MAJOR in their minds.
 
On top it being what they are use to, some people are simply better at the supporting role then they are at leading. Visha just might not be a very good leader, but we've seen how well she excels in the supporting role with Tanya.
 
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