A Vampire Like No Other (OC, White Wolf-style Vampire in Gotham)

[X] Towards the alley. Even if she's also a criminal, Julius can't let a girl be attacked and robbed right in front of him, in his own backyard.
[X] Use Obscurification in yourself to make you hard to remember.
 
Are you going to be writing in other characters pov like you did with Julius mother or is it only going to be in those two perspective's Dark Lord Zero
 
Adhoc vote count started by Dark Lord Zero on Apr 25, 2024 at 3:57 AM, finished with 32 posts and 21 votes.


This update is gounna take a day or so, got a very busy day ahead of me.
 
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Chapter 1.7
Vitae: 10/10
Willpower: 2/5

If Julius' heart still beat, it would have been pounding with adrenaline as he moved towards what was almost certainly going to be violence. Excitement mostly, and a tiny bit of fear. After all, he didn't even have a disguise to keep the heat from coming back on him.

He felt his blood shift, but not deplete, as though the effect had taken so little as to be free. Julius felt something had happened to his clothing, but couldn't see anything himself.

That was enough thought, he was at the mouth of the alley now.

Poking his head around, he saw a big man, six and a half feet easily, holding a much smaller blonde woman against the wall by her neck with one hand. The girl's trenchcoat was open, and the entire front of her shirt had been torn off.

On the ground at their feet was a pile of assorted cash and a small cloth bag.

Julius had a vague inkling to say something. Something witty, that would get their attention. Unfortunately, nothing came to mind that wasn't also stupid.

It didn't matter in the end, as soon as he stepped into the open of the alley, both of them turned to him. The big guy growled. "Get lost, punk. This is Falcone business." The girl, meanwhile, sent him a begging look.

Julius charged the man, and discovered the difference between someone who technically knew how to throw a punch, and someone who had actual experience. Julius threw his punch, but the man just stepped back, and then countered with his own.

Julius staggered back, jaw suddenly very sore. Meanwhile the man shook his hand out and smirked. "Alright, I can kill you first." Dragging the girl along in his left hand, he pulled a big knife out of his coat.

Julius felt a spike of fear, his half drunken mind finally realizing that this was dangerous for reasons besides being detected. His blood nearly spasmed in its haste to strengthen Julius for this trial.

Activating Vigor: -1 Vitae.
Activating Resilience: -1 Vitae.
Activating Celerity: -1 Vitae.


Julius' flesh toughened supernaturally, his muscles twitched with inhuman strength, and the world seemed to slow down around him.

In an instant, Julius was no longer on the back foot. He surged forward and smashed the man in the jaw with enough force to make it crack audibly and send the man staggering back away from the girl. Then he kept going; stomach, chest, face, and more.

During that, the man apparently realized his only viable plan was to stab Julius through the onslaught. Unfortunately for him, despite Julius failing to dodge due to tunnel vision on his offense, the big knife meant to impale Julius' neck only managed a rather shallow cut on Julius' shoulder and upper back.

And then it was over, and the man was on the ground, unconscious and horribly bruised with (probably) several fractured bones and a broken nose, if the amount of blood on his face was any indication.

Turning around, he locked eyes with the girl, who was halfway through picking up the bag and cash from the ground. With the rest of the world still moving slower than usual, it was child's play for him to notice the flash of fear that came across her face, and the way she swallowed nervously.

He raised an eyebrow at her. "Poaching in Falcone's turf? Not smart."

Her eyes narrowed. "Neither was beating up one of his guys."

Julius shrugged. "That's a future-Julius problem."

They both paused, her with a raised eyebrow, and Julius with a cringe. He shouldn't have said that. The world came back into it's normal flow, while she seemed to analyze him. "What're you on?"

He rubbed the back of his head, sheepishly. "Might have had a bit much to drink. Anyway-"

"Holly." She cut him off. "And I don't like owing people… so what do you want from me?"

Julius finally, in the pause he was given here (and with the threat no longer taking up most of his attention), took the time to look her over. Miniskirt, that shirt used to be a crop-top, leather boots with inch heels, freshly applied makeup… and the fact that she wasn't bothering to cover up the missing front of her shirt painted a pretty clear picture; prostitute.

The cash and bag gave the impression that she was moonlighting as a thief. Or would that be sunlighting, since she seemed to be a lady of the night?

As Julius shook that stupid thought out of his head, he noticed she was starting to look impatient. So he asked for the first thing that came to mind…

[ ] A free session. He had enough cash to pick up a night at one of the seedier hotel rooms, and this would be a good way to figure out if he was even capable of those things.

[ ] A hug and a kiss. Kiss being a new code for bite. So far his favorite snack was the woman from earlier, and he was pretty sure he'd used up more blood than he could safely take from one person anyway.

[ ] Half of that cash stack. He could use a bit more spending money, especially if he was going to try and save up for a new car. Or a motorcycle, maybe.

[ ] Write In (Requires QM Approval).



Should been out two days ago but mom is a fukken drama queen and threw a hissey fit over dumb shit. Anyway, here you go.

...also if the free session option is going to violate the rules or sth, someone tell me and I'll remove it.
 
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So she got to see his face and knows his first name, that's bad. How well lit was the alleyway? Maybe all she got was the name. Either way the gangster is going to want payback and if he gets ahold of the prostitute again then she's going to talk. She seems reckless and stupid to rob people on Falcone's territory so trusting she'll do the smart thing is naive.

Time to look for another place to hide, bringing trouble to his Mom's doorstep seems foolish. This time he might get away with it but assaulting drunk people and fighting gangsters nightly puts his Mom's life on a timer. Eventually he's going to go home and find his Mom kidnapped or dead.

[] Write In (Requires QM Approval).
Rob gangster. Tell prostitute to leave town. Find another place to hide starting from the next night.
 
Approved


...'nother newbie question, how do I do that? Do I just like, find one somewhere and DM them?

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shadenight123



this is a linkvto the profile of a moderator that should be currently active. i have written no story here, so i dont know a lot, but i am sure you can ask them . maybe they know where to ask more questions.

[X] Write In .
Rob gangster. Check for phone and any way to identify him. Could be useful in the future.
Tell prostitute to leave town. Ask to exchange numbers,because we may want to coordinate stealing something at some point. We are fine if its just a burner phone.
Dont insist.
After she leaves- Drink from gangster.Do not kill. Find another place to hide starting from the next night.


is this ok as a plan?
 
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forums.sufficientvelocity.com

shadenight123



this is a linkvto the profile of a moderator that should be currently active. i have written no story here, so i dont know a lot, but i am sure you can ask them . maybe they know where to ask more questions.

[X] Write In .
Rob gangster. Check for phone and any way to identify him. Could be useful in the future.
Tell prostitute to leave town. Ask to exchange numbers,because we may want to coordinate stealing something at some point. We are fine if its just a burner phone.
Dont insist.
After she leaves- Drink from gangster.Do not kill. Find another place to hide starting from the next night.


is this ok as a plan?

Thanks, and yeah that's approved.
 
[X] Write In .
Rob gangster. Check for phone and any way to identify him. Could be useful in the future.
Tell prostitute to leave town. Ask to exchange numbers,because we may want to coordinate stealing something at some point. We are fine if its just a burner phone.
Dont insist.
After she leaves- Drink from gangster.Do not kill. Find another place to hide starting from the next night.
 
[X] Write In.
-[X]Rob gangster.
--[X]Check for phone and any way to identify him, could be useful in the future.
-[X] Tell prostitute to leave town.
--[X] Ask to exchange numbers, because we may want to coordinate stealing something at some point.
--[X] We are fine if its just a burner phone.
--[X] Dont insist.
-[X] After she leaves, drink from gangster.
--[X] Do not kill.
-[X] Find another place to hide starting from the next night.
 
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[X] Write In .
Rob gangster. Check for phone and any way to identify him. Could be useful in the future.
Tell prostitute to leave town. Ask to exchange numbers,because we may want to coordinate stealing something at some point. We are fine if its just a burner phone.
Dont insist.
After she leaves- Drink from gangster.Do not kill. Find another place to hide starting from the next night.
 
...'nother newbie question, how do I do that? Do I just like, find one somewhere and DM them?
i think the rules would be violated. you need to ask a moderator,at least.

I would seriously recommend checking first: Sufficient Velocity Rules on Allowable Content before telling someone to ask a moderator.
This is also because Moderators (in theory) Cannot Give Approval for Content to be posted

The Rules and Procedures of Sufficient Velocity
Rule 6: Acceptable Content on SV

Sufficient Velocity allows content which contain elements (such as sex scenes, drug use, and violence) which may be uncomfortable for some readers, as long as that content is handled maturely. We do not allow content which is pornographic, sexually or violently exploitative, or which exploits the participation of minors.

forums.sufficientvelocity.com

Content Review To Disappear Discussion

Well, yeah, of course we haven't announced the policy change, we haven't changed it yet. So any announcement of said, and discussion of said, would be pretty premature. As such, you'll forgive me if I speak a little abstractly here. We've tossed this thing back and forth several times, and we...
The reason for this is pretty simple: we don't want to do it any more. Beyond that it is an additional imposition of work on a forum where pretty much everyone is behind on something, it puts us in an increasingly uncomfortable position where we are exercising editorial control. By which I mean when a staff member signs off on your update or omake or whatever, that's not just an indication that it doesn't break the rules, it's actually SV's seal of approval. That makes us responsible for it to a greater than with other content on the platform.

Particularly, governments around the world are becoming increasingly interested in what happens with online platforms, and increasingly the people who run those platforms can be held responsible for what happens. Obviously I'm not Mark Zuckerberg so I'm not exactly, but I'm also not Mark Zuckerberg, and if something goes wrong I'll be bankrupted by the legal fees. There's a genuine risk at play.

You can always ask in the Private Answer Section of the forums about things, or even on the discord server, but I do not recommend asking moderation of the site to tell you whether something you are making for the forum is approved or not.

The rules are fairly well-outlined, and while there is some guesswork, moderators can be forgiving about content. Should rules be violated there is an appeal system, and it is intended to be balanced and fair, and having an infraction does not block you from continuing to write media (you just should be a bit more conscientious and sensitive about it)
If you want an example of how SV QMs can end up creating a situation that does need to be intervened in, and / or could cause a lengthy deliberation, there was recently a Quest that had been infracted (if I understand and recall correctly) at least once prior for a similar reason if not twice. This was because the choices offered necessitated an extensive discussion on the 'ethics' and 'merits' of sexual assault happening in the narrative. As grave as it is a thread and shit that went down, it'll probably also be a landmark appeal worth reading when it comes to Serious Business in writing nsfw content on the site.

The site already has nsfw subject matters, such as a couple essays on kink and queer sexuality (iirc one specifically on how the idea of 'pornography' is blurred when it comes to fetishes like rubber or latex).


My Recommendation:

The 'Mature' Prefix, as seen with the essay at the end, would be advisable in my view.
HOWEVER, Prefixes are reportedly going to be deprecated, and as such may not be worth relying on.
Currently "Mature" is an uncategorized tag, whereas "Mature Content" is not yet an existing tag. Creating a new tag is allowed for any thread OP or those with sufficient user privileges via account upgrades, and the tag wrangling system means that whether the tag is noticed by tag wrangling or not, you can submit a ticket so that mature content is relegated to being a Content Tag.


Review:

oh. huh. it was just one guy. I thought there were two because two voices maybe?
but that was so much easier than I thought it'd be. just one mook with a knife.
I'm personally not a fan of using this situation to gain a sexual favor. Even if the protag is a straight older-teen or whatever, I'm especially not for asking a sex worker who's just been put through being strangled and possible assaulted with having to get her rescuer off, or feeding on her because she's been through enough.


Voting Stuff:

[ ] Write In (Requires QM Approval).

[] Nothing, really.

[X] Write In (Requires QM Approval).
Rob gangster. Tell prostitute to leave town. Find another place to hide starting from the next night.

[X] Write In .
Rob gangster. Check for phone and any way to identify him. Could be useful in the future.
Tell prostitute to leave town. Ask to exchange numbers,because we may want to coordinate stealing something at some point. We are fine if its just a burner phone.
Dont insist.
After she leaves- Drink from gangster.Do not kill. Find another place to hide starting from the next night.

Hey folks, @lukethreadwalker @Narasan @H2F2 @Prof.MoreRight @MagnusTheRed
It may be worth using plan voting formatting here. The Vote Tally system interpreted all of these plans as the same "[X] Write In (Requires QM Approval)."

reformatted could be either Write In Plan "name goes here", or "name goes here" (requires qm approval if need be)
then the usual
-[X] action
-[X] action

ex
-[]Rob Gangster
--[]Check for Phone and ID, could be useful in the future
--[] Drink but Dont Kill after she leaves
-[]Dont Insist, Tell to Leave Town
--[]Ask to exchange numbers, may want to coordinate stealing together
--[] It's okay if it's a burner phone

This way Vote Tally will actually be able to tell the two plans apart.
 
[X] Write In .
Rob gangster. Check for phone and any way to identify him. Could be useful in the future.
Tell prostitute to leave town. Ask to exchange numbers,because we may want to coordinate stealing something at some point. We are fine if its just a burner phone.
Dont insist.
After she leaves- Drink from gangster.Do not kill. Find another place to hide starting from the next night.
 
[X] Write In .
Rob gangster. Check for phone and any way to identify him. Could be useful in the future.
Tell prostitute to leave town. Ask to exchange numbers,because we may want to coordinate stealing something at some point. We are fine if its just a burner phone.
Dont insist.
After she leaves- Drink from gangster.Do not kill. Find another place to hide starting from the next night.
 
Hey folks, @lukethreadwalker @Narasan @H2F2 @Prof.MoreRight @MagnusTheRed
It may be worth using plan voting formatting here. The Vote Tally system interpreted all of these plans as the same "[] Write In (Requires QM Approval)."

reformatted could be either Write In Plan "name goes here", or "name goes here" (requires qm approval if need be)
then the usual
-[] action
-[] action

ex
-[]Rob Gangster
--[]Check for Phone and ID, could be useful in the future
--[] Drink but Dont Kill after she leaves
-[]Dont Insist, Tell to Leave Town
--[]Ask to exchange numbers, may want to coordinate stealing together
--[] It's okay if it's a burner phone

This way Vote Tally will actually be able to tell the two plans apart.
This better?:

[X] Write In.
-[X]Rob gangster.
--[X]Check for phone and any way to identify him, could be useful in the future.
-[X] Tell prostitute to leave town.
--[X] Ask to exchange numbers, because we may want to coordinate stealing something at some point.
--[X] We are fine if its just a burner phone.
--[X] Dont insist.
-[X] After she leaves, drink from gangster.
--[X] Do not kill.
-[X] Find another place to hide starting from the next night.
 
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[X] Half of that cash stack. He could use a bit more spending money, especially if he was going to try and save up for a new car. Or a motorcycle, maybe.
 
[X] Write In.
-[X]Rob gangster.
--[X]Check for phone and any way to identify him, could be useful in the future.
-[X] Tell prostitute to leave town.
--[X] Ask to exchange numbers, because we may want to coordinate stealing something at some point.
--[X] We are fine if its just a burner phone.
--[X] Dont insist.
-[X] After she leaves, drink from gangster.
--[X] Do not kill.
-[X] Find another place to hide starting from the next night.
 
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