I meant no offense with my previous two posts and apologize for them. I knew that the topic would be touchy and even personal for some users and was worried that my lack of experience or knowledge on this subject, combined with the inherent difficulties of only text-based communication, would end up with me putting my foot in my mouth.

I had not realized that what Holly had meant when she repeatedly thought and talked about changing her name, she had meant her middle name as well as her first. The name Jane also seemed to come about with no expressed reasoning for the choice which also seemed at odds considering the effort that went into finding an appropriate first name. I was further surprised when no mention was made to the fact that her previous middle name, James, was her father's name, nor Holly's feelings toward that, especially considering how important James and Lily, and family in general, are to Holly. I did not, and do not, mean to imply anything else.

I firmly believe that people should do that what makes them happy and healthy, physically, mentally, and emotionally. What I had meant by 'a name is a name' is that if you want to change it to something else, you should, but also that's there is nothing wrong with a woman having a masculine name or a man having a femine name provided they are happy or fine with it for whatever reason. People should have the freedom to live their lives how they want and be happy.

I believe this conversation as a whole I had started concerning Holly's name has served no purpose and will be dropping it. I will not respond to any posts quoting or replying to this or either of my previous posts and request the topic die.

I meant and mean no offense to anyone, especially those in the Trans community, and if any has been felt, I apologize from the depths of my heart. I'm sorry.
 
I'm about 99% sure the Weasely Hair Change Potion is called that because of its creators. And Holly hasn't given up her parents' last name. But even given that, if she wanted to give him a stroke, she absolutely could.
 
Year Three, Chapter Fourteen
Year Three, Chapter Fourteen

Holly's return to Hogwarts was a nervous one. She felt emboldened by her new name, but she knew some people would try to twist it against her. She knew how to fight Dementors now, as was learning all kinds of new magic both in and outside of class. Sirius Black was still after her, and she knew that Voldemort was still out there. He might just be haunting an Albanian forest for now, but Holly knew that he would not be content to live out whatever life his dark magic had granted him.

"Thank you for the books, Holly!" Hermione said, hugging her as she entered their compartment on the Hogwart's express. Holly hugged her back, smiling. Neville Longbottom joined Holly, Hermione, and Ginny in the compartment, and they all had a pleasant time talking about their holidays.

"Oh look, Draco... it's Harry Potter and his freakshow," Pansy Parkinson said as she and Draco walked past Holly's compartment.

"Now now Pansy, Harry has changed his name - he must be truly afraid of Black to try something like that," Draco said.

Holly felt rage well up within her, and she wasn't alone. Ron got to his feet, as did Ginny.

"Get out of here, Malfoy. Or this time I'm not giving your wand back," Holly said. She was standing now, her own wand in her hand.

"You're brave enough on the train, Potter, but given how you've spent the year cowering from Black... well, if it was me I'd want my revenge," Malfoy said, and Holly felt a little nonplussed. Her revenge for what?

"Did you forget the last two years, Malfoy, or are you just inbred enough to want me to hex you?" Holly asked.

"Where are your goons, Malfoy? Busy beating up a first-year for some sweets?" Ginny asked.

"Do... do you not know Potter?" Draco said, sounding genuinely astonished. Holly looked at him, confused.

"He really doesn't," Pansy said, and the two of them started laughing uncontrollably. Holly slammed the door shut, thoroughly confused. What could entice her to actually go after Sirius Black - what, she wondered, had Black done to her that would make her seek out an extremely dangerous dark wizard?

"He was probably just messing with you, mate," Ron said.

"Malfoy would like nothing better than for Black to get you, Holly," Hermione said, worried.

They tossed around a few theories, but none of them made much sense. Soon enough Malfoy's bizarre taunt was forgotten, and everyone turned their minds towards exploding snaps and Bertie Bot's Every Flavour Beans.

That night, Holly slipped out of the Gryffindor common room under her invisibility cloak and headed towards one of the collapsed secret passages Fred and Geroge had shown her on the Maurder's Map. As she walked, she noticed something odd about the map - up in the boy's dorms, Holly could see a second tiny dot in Ron's bed, labelled 'Scabbers'. None of the other pets, save Mrs Norris, showed up on the map. Holly wondered if the twins had added him in as a joke, or something. Holly knew they were pretty good at runework and enchanting.

She kept the map out and made sure to take a detour around Snape. After fifteen careful minutes, she tapped her wand in the correct order on the seven panels, then slipped into the secret passage. Much further down there had been a cave-in, but behind the first bend was stable enough for Holly's purposes.

She first cast an anti-fume spell, conjuring an enchanted wind to softly blow potions fumes away. She'd have to set up some runes in the future - her spell would only last a few hours - but it was good enough for now. She set up her spare cauldron, the potions supplies she'd bought in Hogsmeade, and got to work. The first thing she needed to brew for the Animagus ritual was a human-safe sticking solution, to hold a mandrake leaf inside her mouth for a month.

That was a simple enough potion, and Holly quickly set it to brewing and started to read the book on Basilisk's she'd borrowed from the library. It was a fascinating read, but she didn't see what bill could have been referring to. She did see that the first wizard to have hatched a Basilisk - Herpo the Foul - was said to have 'invented many other magicks of the evilest nature'.

As she stirred her sticking solution, Holly noticed something odd. Herpo the Foul was born in 576 and died in 462, which wasn't an unusual lifespan for a wizard, but the book had a typo in it - not unknown for wizarding books - and said he'd been born in BC but died in AD. That really was odd, Holly thought. Maybe she should ask Hermione to help her look him up.

Then her sticking solution was ready, and Holly dipped her Mandrake leaf in it. She carefully dipped all of it save the stem, and then placed it in her mouth - on the inside her left cheek. The sticking sensation was odd, and Holly ran her tongue over the leaf. That was perfectly safe - the solution only stuck once - but it was a very strange sensation.

"Say, Hermione, do you know anything about Herpo the Foul?" Holly asked her friend the next morning.

"Oh, I came across him last year. He bred the first Basilisk and invented some dark curse called Fiendfyre. Why, Holly?" Hermione said.

"You know Ron's brother Bill, the curse breaker? He wanted to hear what had really happened in the Chamber, and he said something odd about Basilisk venom - that being coated in it might have let Gryffindor's sword destroy something he wouldn't talk about. I looked up Basilisk's to see if someone else had used the same example, and the book had this really weird error - I think they put an AD on Herpo's date of death instead of a BC," Holly explained.

"That's... that's odd. It wasn't Serpents Most Foul, was it?" Hermione asked.

"No, it was The King of All Snakes. Why?" Holly said.

"Because I remember the same error, and if it's been repeated twice..."

"What, Hermione?" Holly asked.

"If it's been repeated twice, it might not be an error," Hermione said, her voice barely above a whisper.

"That's nearly a thousand years - even wizards don't live that long," Holly said.

"Some wizards do," Hermione said, quietly, and Holly felt very stupid. Nicholas and Perennelle Flamel had done just that, and Holly had touched the Philosopher's Stone they used to do so.

"But he can't have had a Philospher's stone - Flamel invented them, and on one else has been known to make one since," Holly said.

"We need to do more research," Hermione said, and Holly agreed. They agreed to meet in the library after class and try and find out what the truth was about Herpo the Foul.

"Patil, Parvati?" Snape called out as he took the roll in potions class that morning.

"Here," Parvati responded, looking at Holly nervously.

"Potter, H- Holly?" Snape said, sounding like he was choking the words out. He still refused to look at her.

"Here," she said, and Holly wondered what was going on with the surly Potions Master. This was getting absurd - Snape's reaction to Holly's transition was at first sneering bigotry, as many of the Slytherins, but what had caused him to act like this, Holly wondered. Had Dumbledore talked to him, and this was his compromise?

After classes, Holly met Hermione at the library and they tried to research Herpo the Foul further. Every book they could find printed the same date of death, 462AD, though a few didn't include a date at all. Accounts of his death were fairly consistent, with his own curse being turned on him and burning to death along the with Statue of Zeus in Constantinople.

"What magic could allow him to live so long?" Holly said, feeling like that was a crucial element to the Dark Wizard's tale that had clearly been left out. Even biographies of the man refused to discuss it, with the only hints being descriptions of his long life as having been granted by 'the darkest of magic'.

"Something too dark for the Restricted Section, which worries me... Holly, I don't think we'll find an answer here. But the Diary... you said Riddle seemed to think he could use it to come back?" Hermione said.

"Yeah he... oh," Holly said. Had the Diary been more than a memory preserved in ink and paper - or was there some sort of dark magic that would allow such a being to live for a thousand years? Herpo the Foul had been a constant presence in the Mediterranean for nearly a millennium, with even Emperors paying him tribute.

From what they'd been able to find, Herpo the Foul had only been killed after his enemies tricked him into a powerful magical trap and then unleashed his own cursed flames against him. Fiendfyre was apparently a very dark curse that summoned beasts made of cursed fire that devoured all they touched, multiplying as they did so. Most books regarded them as uncontrollable, though some books noted that throughout history, a few powerful dark wizards seemed to have some measure of control over it - Herpo, Salazar Slytherin, and Voldemort were all reputed to have controlled it.

Given that Herpo had been burned to death by Fiendfyre he summoned, Holly doubted that the control was that absolute.

They gave up searching in the Library, and Holly remembered her promise to teach Hermione the Patronus charm after the Christmas break. They'd met back up with Ron and Ginny at that point.

"Hermione, did you want to get started on the Patronus charm?" Holly asked as they all sat at dinner.

"Oh, yes please Holly - if you have the time," Hermione said.

"I wouldn't mind having a crack at it myself, mate," Ron said.

"Oh yeah, I wanna try too," Ginny said.

"I guess that's fine - it is a really difficult spell, and you just might not be old enough, Ginny," Holly warned, but the four of them found an unused classroom all the same. They cleared a space in the centre, and then Holly went to the front. She felt silly, like she was wearing clothes far too big for her, but she explained the basic theory of the Patronus charm, the wand motions, and the incantation.

They were only able to practice for about half an hour, and only Hermione had been able to get a puff of silvery mist from her wand, but it was a good start. They returned to the common room in good spirit, and the girls sat around the fire chatting about nothing in particular as Ron went up to put his books away.

He came down holding a bedsheet, stained with a streak of fresh blood, and his face white with rage.

"LOOK AT WHAT THAT MENACE DID TO SCABBERS," Ron shouted, tears welling in his eyes. He shook the bedsheet in Hermione's face, and Holly felt an awful paralysis. She hated taking sides between her two best friends, and Holly knew this would be a serious row.

"Ron, Crook-" Hermione began, but Ron cut her off.

"I FOUND THIS ON THE FLOOR... AN ORANGE CAT HAIR!" he shouted, showing Hermione the price of cat hair. It did look like it could have been Crookshank's, but...

"THAT COULD HAVE BEEN-"

"YOUR CAT KILLED HIM-"

Holly had an idea. Nobody was looking at her - all eyes were on Ron and Hermione - so she quickly got out the Map. Shielding it from prying eyes with her body, she scanned it desperately hoping it would show her what she wanted. He wasn't anywhere in the tower or the rest of the castle, and just as Holly felt despair grip her she glanced at the map of the grounds and saw the tiny dot she was looking for. Scabbers was alive and near Hagrid's hut.

"Mischief managed," Holly whispered as she put the Map away and stood up. "Come with me, you two," Holly said, and as they both ignored her she started to bodily drag them.

"Geroff!" Ron said, and Hermione turned to look at Holly sharply.

"You two need to come with me, because I need to show you something in private... and you too, Ginny," Holly said. The four of them followed Holly up to Ron's dormitory room, which was thankfully empty.

"What did you need to show us?" Ginny asked.

"This. I solemnly swear I'm up to no good," Holly said, touching her wand to the map. Ron and Hermione, who had been shouting at each other the whole way up, fell silent.

"What - what is that?" Hermione asked.

"It's a map of the castle - Fred and George gave it to me at Christmas. They pinched it from Filtch years ago, but that's not important right now. What's important is this," Holly said, and showed her friends the little dot that said "Scabbers".

"He's alive!" Ron said, his voice hoarse.

"Wait, who's that other dot near him? I can't make it out - and it's gone. Does Crookshanks show up, Holly?" Ginny asked, and Holly shook her head.

"That's... odd," Hermione said, not looking at Ron.

"Don't you try and make Scabbers into -" Ron began, but Hermione looked at him.

"I'm - I'm sorry, Ron. I don't want Crookshanks to hurt Scabbers, but he's a cat. Cats chase rats!" Hermione said.

"Yeah, well," Ron said, but Ginny cut him off.

"Well what? Come on, Ron. Everyone else with a rat keeps them in a cage when they're not there. There are cats running all over this tower - even Percy kept Scabbers in a cage at school," Ginny said.

"I was going to say we should go get Scabbers," Ron said, defensively. Holly was sure that wasn't what he had planned to say, but she was happy to pretend otherwise.

"We can't go outside after dark - especially not Holly," Hermione said.

"Can I borrow your cloak and the Map, mate?" Ron asked, and Holly nodded. They all went downstairs, though Ron was under the cloak and slipped out of the portrait hole without being noticed.

Holly still wanted to know why Scabbers alone of all the student's pets turned up on the Map. Something about it felt wrong to her. Still, Ron returned after about half an hour with Scabbers in tow and without an issue. He and Hermione were still a little touchy with one another, but Holly thought she'd defused the situation admirably.

Holly woke to distant screams and the sound of spellfire.
 
but what had caused him to act like this, Holly wondered.
Maybe because you're starting to resemble your mother perhaps?
"It's a map of the castle - Fred and George gave it to me at Christmas. They pinched it from Filtch years ago, but that's not important right now. What's important is this," Holly said, and showed her friends the little dot that said "Scabbers".
You're getting quite good at cutting problems off at the knee, ain't ya Holly?
Holly woke to distant screams and the sound of spellfire.
Whelp, looks like Sirius found Pettigrue...
 
I appreciate all the little divergences in this story. It'd be kinda boring to read if everything but Holly's gender was identical to canon. It helps that they all feel like plausible changes, like it's just a matter of chance that things didn't go that way in canon and the butterflies in this fic made the proverbial coin come up tails instead of heads here. The animagus thing, for example, feels like something that definitely could have happened in canon if Harry had been in a slightly different headspace at the time.
 
I'm liking how Bill accidentally put them on the path to learning about the Horcruxes, and I'm very curious to see where that little thread is headed. I've been enjoying the read so far, many thanks!
 
Just had to say once more how much I appreciate the way you've handled Holly being transgender. Just… the tone you set, your matter of fact about the whole thing. She's a girl, she's not ashamed. People who mock or disagree are asshats but not enough to ruin her day or stop her being happy because her friends have her back. And on we go to the next step in the yearly adventure. It's just so well handled.
 
Holly still wanted to know why Scabbers alone of all the student's pets turned up on the Map. Something about it felt wrong to her.

Interesting that in this story, Peter has hidden for so long that the Map identifies him as Scabbers.

Even if Holly were to present it to Remus, he might not make the connection. And Remus can't use the Map himself, because he's currently Hogwarts staff.
 
Interesting that in this story, Peter has hidden for so long that the Map identifies him as Scabbers.

Even if Holly were to present it to Remus, he might not make the connection. And Remus can't use the Map himself, because he's currently Hogwarts staff.

Is that last one a factor in this fic? I seem to recall Remus using it in the book, though I may be misremembering, and unless "Moody" only took it so that Harry couldn't spot him...though I suppose Bartholomew Crouch may or may not have counted as staff, depending on who signed the paperwork...
 
Year Three, Chapter Fifteen
Year Three, Chapter Fifteen

Holly grabbed her wand and leapt out of bed, ignoring her roommates' murmurs of protest. She ran down the stairs as fast as she could, even as bangs and shouts echoed from the common room. She held her wand out in front of her, dressed in pyjama pants and an oversized muggle t-shirt, and rounded the last corner before the common room.

Jets of light were deflected in every direction off of a shield charm, and Holly felt her blood run cold as she saw the man casting it. Sirius Black was in the centre of the common room, holding off what seemed to be the entire Third-Year boy's dorm room by himself. Dean, Ron, Neville, and Seamus were on the boy's stairs, casting spells at Black. Percy Weasley was stunned on the floor of the common room, and Holly realised that Black was using Percy's wand.

"Stupefy!" Holly shouted, her stunning spell slamming into Black's shield with a sound like a struck gong. He turned towards her, eyes wide. She didn't let up and whipped her wand towards him once more. "Fulmina! Confringo! Bombarda Maxima!" Holly shouted, sending curse after curse at Black.

He dodged her lightning cruse, disarmed Dean, and blocked the other two with Dean's wand in his left hand. She sent another crackling bolt of lightning at him, and that broke his shield, but Black dodged the stunner she followed up with. He stunned Neville, who fell bonelessly down the stairs. Ron and Seamus went down with him, all three boys landing in a heap at the bottom of the stairs. Holly could hear more and more students coming to check out what was going on, and smoke from all her blasting curses filled the common room.

She advanced on Black, rushing to take cover behind a solid-looking sofa. Black sent a disarming spell her way, but she deflected it back at him and sent Percy's wand flying. Ron had managed to get back up and was firing more stunning spells at Black.

"Fulmina!" Holly shouted, and her curse cut through Black's left-handed shield charm. Black managed to just avoid the curse and reached into his grimy jacket. He threw out some kind of powder, and then everything went dark. For just a moment Holly thought she saw a pair of yellow eyes in the darkness, and then she conjured enough wind to blow the darkness powder out of the open portrait hole.

"Is everyone okay?" Holly shouted, her ears ringing from all the curses in an enclosed room.

"We're fine. Neville and - Holly, you shouldn't be down here!" Ron shouted, but Holly shook her head. She used the counter-stunning charm on Neville and Percy and picked up Percy's wand from where Black had apparently dropped it. She handed it back to the groggy Head Boy, and Holly noticed a bruise on the back of his head that definitely hadn't been caused by a stunning spell.

Professor McGonagall rushed through the portrait hole in her cat form, transforming as she landed after leaping through. She pointed her wand at them for a moment, then let it drop to her side.
"What on earth has been going on?" she asked, gesturing to the state of the common room. Sofas had been exploded, bits of wood lay everywhere, and a few small fires burned. Percy put them out with silent water conjuring charms.

"It - it was Sirius Black, Professor," Ron said.

"Black? Merlin, are you alright Potter? How did he get up the staircase?" McGonagall said.

"He didn't go into the girl's dorms. I woke up to see him standing over my bed with a bloody great knife in one hand and Percy's wand in the other. I - well I disarmed the knife off him, and then we fought him down the staircase," Ron said.

"And by Merlin, what possessed you to run towards Black Miss Potter?"

"I didn't know it was Black! I just heard shouting and spells going off," Holly said.

"And everyone is unharmed?" McGonagall asked.

"Black punched me fairly hard, Professor, but nothing Madam Pomfrey can't fix," Percy said.

"The other teachers should be here soon - we'll take you then, Mr Weasley. Fifty points to Gryffindor for a most sterling defence of the tower - and you, Miss Potter will head back up that staircase!" McGonagall said.

"I'm going, professor," Holly said, feeling the tension drain out of her. Everyone was alright, Black had been forced to flee, and she'd got there in time.

"How did Black get in, Sir Cadogan?" Holly heard McGonagall ask the portrait.

"That dirty-looking fellow? Told me he was a Gryffindor and had the password to prove it," Sir Cadogan said.

Holly waved the various girls on the stairs back up, and she was immediately bombarded with questions in her dormitory room. She gave a basic summary of what happened, but even as she did so something began to eat at her. Black hadn't used any even slightly dark magic during the fight. He'd cast no curses, not even normal duelling ones. All Black had done was cast disarming, stunning, and shield charms.

That, Holly thought, was not the style of a deranged mass-murdering Death Eater who'd once killed thirteen people with a single blasting curse. Black, who everyone seemed to be certain was after her, had only cast a single disarming spell at her.

The next morning, Holly and Ron were the heroes of the hour. Ron was telling the story to anyone who'd listen, and if he left out the bit where he'd been sent falling down the stairs by an unconscious Neville, Holly didn't begrudge him that. Quite a few people whispered about her disarming Black, but Holly was growing more and more convinced that once he'd been discovered all Black had been trying to do was leave without hurting anybody.

"Rushing down there was very reckless, Holly," Hermione said once the four of them - her, Holly, Ginny, and Ron - got some time to themselves.

"I - I don't think any of us were in danger," Holly said quietly.

"What do you mean? You were duelling Sirius Black?" Ginny said.

"Maybe we were. But Black didn't cast anything more dangerous than a stunning spell. The only thing he cast at me was a disarming spell," Holly said.

"That knife was bloody scary, mate... but I think I have to agree. Not to say that I wouldn't love to have outdueled Sirius Black, but he wasn't trying all that hard," Ron said.

"Maybe he didn't recognise you, Holly," Hermione said.

"I've been all over the papers for the past year. If he knew the password..." Holly said.

"Maybe he's not after you," Ginny said quietly.

"If he's not after Holly, then what was he doing breaking into Gryffindor tower?" Ron asked.

"What could he have been looking for in your dormitory room, is the question," Hermione said.

"I've got no bloody clue, that's for sure," Ron said, and none of them could come up with what Black had possibly been doing. There was one thing Holly, and all of them, knew for sure - whatever he was, Black wasn't mad. No madman could fight off five people at once and not hurt a single one of them.

Security was tightened considerably throughout the school. Holly was only allowed on the grounds for Quidditch practice, and that was supervised by a teacher - usually McGonagall herself. Two hitwizards were stationed at the portrait hole at all times, checking students for dark artifacts and magic. A team of Aurors swept the castle from top to bottom and found no trace of Black.

On the Saturday after the break-in, however, Holly had no time to think about Sirius Black because Gryffindor was due to play Ravenclaw. She was escorted down to the Pitch by McGonagall and made sure to put her wand on a wrist holster hidden just up her sleeve when she changed into her Quidditch robes. That was normally the sort of thing a cheat might do, but she'd been strictly instructed to do so in case Black appeared at the game.

"Alright team, you all know what to do - we're the best damn team in this tournament, and it's about time we won the cup. Go out there and crush those Ravenclaws - and Potter, don't let the fact that you go all doe-eyed whenever Chang gets near you stop you from knocking her off her broom!" Wood said in the changing room, and Holly blushed. Cho Chang was very pretty, and a good seeker besides.

They marched out onto the pitch, and Holly thought that the lineup of the short, slender Cho (as most seekers were) and six lanky-to-burly upper-year boys that made up the Ravenclaw team looked faintly comical. Wood shook Roger Daive's hand, and Holly laughed as Lee Jordan started to speak in the commentator's box.

"And we have Holly Potter for the Gryffindor side flying for the first time in the Hogwarts league with a Firebolt. The Firebolt, the fastest production broom ever, tops out at -" Lee began, but McGonagall cut him off.

"The match, Mr Jordan, not the brooms, if you would,"

"Right, right. They're up in the air and - and Katie Bell of Gryffindor takes possession of the ball, dodges a bludger, and passes to Spinnet..." Lee Jordan shouted into his microphone as Holly roared upwards on her new Firebolt. It really was nothing like her nimbus - she could feel the immense G-forces on her through the sharp turns, and the wind blowing her braided hair back as she accelerated to top speed near-instantly.

A bludger came rocketing towards Holly, and she dodged out of the way with ease and turned towards the Ravenclaw beater. She shot forwards at tremendous speeds, just missing him, and he was so shocked that Fred was able to send him flying straight off his broom. His partner caught him and led him back to the broom, but the time that took was time Fred and George were free to wreak havoc.

"And Potter's flying like she means to hurt somebody! With her broom's acceleration, she can dip in and out of the main level of play whilst Chang is forced to stay aloft... and they've seen it! Chang and Potter are racing towards something!" Lee Jordan said. Holly didn't hear anything else, because she and Cho were both racing towards the glint of gold they'd both seen at almost the exact same time.

The snitch was riving fast, a deadly sharp dive, and as Holly raced after it she heard Cho give off a shout of alarm. Three cloaked figures were making their way across the ground, and without so much as thinking about it Holly whipped out her wand. "EXPECTO PATRONUM!" She shouted, conjuring forth a doe formed from silver light that charged towards the Dementors and scattered them like bowling pins.

Holly had no more time for that, though, as she and Cho raced across the surface of the pitch just ten feet above the ground. The Snitch flew with tremendous speed into a banking turn, and both Holly and Cho struggled to stay with it. Cho couldn't, pulling up and out, but Holly just managed to stay with the Snitch. She put on one last burst of speed, stretched out her arm, and grabbed the Snitch out of the air.

There was an enormous cheer from the crowd as Holly held the Snitch aloft, Lee Jordan continued to extoll the virtues of the Firebolt, and Holly looked around to see what had happened with the Dementors. She saw then that the cloaked figures had not been Dementors after all, but rather Malfoy, Crabbe, Goyle, and Marcus Flint. Malfoy had apparently been sitting on Goyle's shoulders.

All four of them were lying in a heap, having panicked at Holly's oncoming Patronus. Holly felt like a great weight had been lifted from her shoulders as she descended to join the rest of the team in laughing as Professor McGonagall stormed over towards the Slytherins. Gryffindor was now solidly in the lead for the Quidditch cup - so long as Hufflepuff didn't crush Slytherin, all they needed to do was win their last match against Hufflepuff and the cup would be theirs.
 
Holly looked around to see what had happened with the Dementors. She saw then that the cloaked figures had not been Dementors after all, but rather Malfoy, Crabbe, Goyle, and Marcus Flint. Malfoy had apparently been sitting on Goyle's shoulders.

Slytherin trying to pretend to be dementors as a "Dirty trick" to distract Holly,or something else going on with sneaking around?
 
Hahaaa oh man, Snape had to have seen her patronus now.

And Holly seeing Sirius not cast anything dark's clearly set suspicions up for her...
 
I'm loving this story, especially the ludicrous speed update rate. That said, I have a question about this part:

"After you and Malfoy went down, the Slytherin team scattered from the Dementors. Wood and Angelina managed to stay on the pitch, and she put enough points through the hoops before anyone else got back that we won on points," Fred said, grinning. Harry smiled.
Did you change the rules of Quidditch at all? I thought that the game would have ended as soon as Holly touched the snitch in the previous chapter.
 
I'm loving this story, especially the ludicrous speed update rate. That said, I have a question about this part:


Did you change the rules of Quidditch at all? I thought that the game would have ended as soon as Holly touched the snitch in the previous chapter.

I think what shes saying is that the Griffindoor chasers got enough points that, even though the Slytherin reserve seeker caught the snitch, it didnt make up for their deficit of points.
 
"After you and Malfoy went down, the Slytherin team scattered from the Dementors. Wood and Angelina managed to stay on the pitch, and she put enough points through the hoops before anyone else got back that we won on points," Fred said, grinning. Harry smiled.

"I bet Flint wasn't happy about that," Harry said.

"Nearly cursed me right in front of Madam Hooch," Wood said, pausing for a moment. "That was after he'd asked for the match to be called on points without realising we'd scored a dozen goals while his entire team was gone, mind you," Wood continued. Harry laughed uproariously, despite the pain it caused her.

Both captains agreed to call it on points, so they did.
 
"It might. Basilisk venom is capable of destroying even powerfully magical objects, even a... never mind. Thank you for telling me this, Harry," Bill said.

Does make sense that a professional curse-breaker who explores ancient cursed tombs knows about dark and obscure magic.

She did see that the first wizard to have hatched a Basilisk

I've always been a fan of the idea that the 'hatch an egg under a toad' is deliberate misinformation, because basilisks are ludicrously dangerous and they'd rather anyone who tries to make one mess around with eggs and toads rather than do the research as to how to *actually* create one.

"That's nearly a thousand years - even wizards don't live that long," Holly said.

"Some wizards do," Hermione said, quietly

Also like the idea that Horcruxes aren't the *only* dark method that people have come up with to become immortal. Just the one that most dark wizards and witches know better than to use. In school Riddle was a charismatic and talented manipulator, as Voldemort he rants and throws temper tantrums. Tearing your soul to ribbons probably not all that adviseable.

There was one thing Holly, and all of them, knew for sure - whatever he was, Black wasn't mad.

Well, he's not mad, but all that time in Azkaban definitely hasn't done him any favours. His emotional control is shot to shit.

"And we have Holly Potter for the Gryffindor side flying for the first time in the Hogwarts league with a Firebolt. The Firebolt, the fastest production broom ever, tops out at -" Lee began, but McGonagall cut him off.

"The match, Mr Jordan, not the brooms, if you would,"

Given how she never actually bans Jordan from commentating, you have to wonder whether McGonagall enjoys playing the straight man in their duo commentary.

And Holly seeing Sirius not cast anything dark's clearly set suspicions up for her...

Wait till she finds out he was sent to Azkaban without a trial or even being charged.

Just thinking now, but it should be possible to get Fudge onside for Black if it's framed as fixing the mistakes of the past. After all, it wasn't Fudge who sent Black to Azkaban without a trial, that was Bagnold.
 
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