A Melody of Water (A Song of Ice and Fire X Puella Magi Madoka Magica)

So far this story seems to be going well. I can't wait until she starts interacting with the main story in some way.

Here's a bit of clunky dialogue I noticed:

"I'm so sorry," Sayaka said. "Thank you for your kind words, but they are not needed, and besides, apparently she is happy where she is so all I can do is be happy for her. I just wish she would come see her parents in person. Anyway enough with this old man's rambling keeping you from your errands."

I think that the second dialogue bit is supposed to be spoken by Benjamin, right? If so, you should probably put it into its own paragraph. It's a bit confusing the way it is right now.

The green bits are punctuation corrections that I feel make the sentences flow smoother, and the orange bit is superfluous. You could remove it and nothing would be changed.
 
So far this story seems to be going well. I can't wait until she starts interacting with the main story in some way.

Here's a bit of clunky dialogue I noticed:



I think that the second dialogue bit is supposed to be spoken by Benjamin, right? If so, you should probably put it into its own paragraph. It's a bit confusing the way it is right now.

The green bits are punctuation corrections that I feel make the sentences flow smoother, and the orange bit is superfluous. You could remove it and nothing would be changed.


Thank you, that was very helpful.
 
While the story is decently written and I'm curious to see where it goes, there hasn't been all that much going. We're 15k+ words in and its all been setup, with the 5th chapter finally getting to the point where plot might happen. While I don't have any inherent problem with slowboiling setups, the sad reality is that most fanfics will die long before they are finished, which means that setup heavy stories are often prone to dying before the plot can even go much of anywhere.
 
While the story is decently written and I'm curious to see where it goes, there hasn't been all that much going. We're 15k+ words in and its all been setup, with the 5th chapter finally getting to the point where plot might happen. While I don't have any inherent problem with slowboiling setups, the sad reality is that most fanfics will die long before they are finished, which means that setup heavy stories are often prone to dying before the plot can even go much of anywhere.

Don't worry the plot will be moving forward soon.
 
A Melody of Water: Chapter 6 A Blooded Salmon
A/N: Thank you all for being so patient here is the next chapter, shout to my beta reader STOP for correcting the many errors I missed without you this fic would be of a much less quality!




A Melody of Water: Chapter 6

A Blooded Salmon




The sun was rising over River Spit, its orange and golden light bathed the village in glories glow, Sayaka, Sir Clifford, Benjamin and Anna stood outside the door to the home of David Warren. Anna knocked on it twice a few moments, later David pushed the door open, the cheery smile on his face indicating that he didn't seem to be bothered by being woken up so early or more likely he was already wide-awake and was just getting ready for work.


"Why hello, Anna, Benjamin, Sir Clifford, Sayaka, I'm guessing by the fact that you're all out so early means that you want to rent my cart."


Anna nodded her head, "that's right, we're short on ale and Sir Clifford and Sayaka have both volunteered to go down to Erenford Keep," She handed David the bag.


The stable man inspected the coins briefly, "Everything seems to be in order, very well then, come with me and I show the cart."



The knight, blue haired girl, and the innkeepers followed David to the stable until he stopped near the entrance to the stable. "Wait here while setting the cart up," David said he went inside to do just that. Leaving Sayaka, Sir Clifford and the innkeepers waiting for the David. For a short, a period of time everyone stood in silence until Sayaka broke it.




"So what is Erenford Keep like?" Sayaka asked.


""It's a grand old keep that according to what I heard has been around since the crowing of Aegon the Conqueror," Benjamin explained.


"It's also noisy, overcrowded and home to the some of the most frustrating and money-grubbing merchants ever to walk the Riverlands," said Anna angrily.


"They're not that bad Anna," Benjamin responded, Anna gave him a look annoyed, "Well some of them are," he admitted.

"A little bit of important advice," Anna said to Sayaka, "when you're trying to buy something from a merchant, their items will always be of better quality than when they bought it."




It was at that moment David emerged from the stable, "Ok I've got everything ready, follow me please."


David led the group to the back stable where they were met with the sight of one of the grey palfreys, Foot attached to a cart with thick leather reins. The cart was a relatively small simple wooden rectangular box that was beginning to show signs of ageing. Overall it was very plain, bland and sort of ugly but practical which was the point of everything made by smallfolk.


David rubbed Foot's main, he turned to Sir Clifford, "a few things of note before you rid off Sir Knight, firstly I have placed a small sack of oats in back of the cart to make sure that Foot would have something to eat if he gets huger, secondly," the stable man's voice become a great deal stern as his eyes hard, "I know this should go without saying but I want Foot back in one piece if anything happens to him your employer will be the one to for pay it, isn't that right Benjamin."


The innkeeper sighed with frustration, "Don't worry David. Sir Clifford will take good care of your horses- no reason to get ratty about."


David's mannerisms returned to normal, "I just want to make sure my boy is taken take care of Benjamin." He then handed the reins over to Sir Clifford, the knight then proceeded to get onto the cart, while Benjamin hauled a sack filled with supplies into the back.


Sayaka was just about to joining Sir Clifford when Anna spoke up, "You know it's kind of strange I haven't know you very long yet, I feel the same sense of nervousness if I was allowing my own daughter to go off on an errand."


Sayaka's cheeks become a pinkish red, "thanks, that's sweet of you, I guess," she said while rubbing the back of her head awkwardly.


"Just promise me you will be alright."


Sayaka smiled brightly, "I promise."


The moment Sayaka made that promise Anna pulled her into a small hug. It lasted for a brief time before Anna pulled away.


"Good luck out there and remember a barrel of ale is worth two silver stags," Anna said.


Sayaka simply nodded and turned to join Sir Clifford on the cart. She pulled herself onto the spare spot.


"Are you sure you don't have anything else to do before we leave," Sir Clifford said.


Sayaka shook her head, "no let's go."



"Very well then," with that Sir Clifford pulled the reins gently, causing Foot to start trotting forward out the village. When the cart reached some distance away, Sayaka looked back, at River Spit. The humble familiar village that now looked truly small against this big strange world. She turned back her mind focusing on the journey ahead.



The countryside of the Riverlands was a mismatch of open green fields that looked absolutely stunning in the light of the morning sun and patches of thick woodland. The overall picture was very pretty. But what really stood out to Sayaka was the silence, apart from the song of birds in the distance, the occasional howl of light wind, sounds of the cart wheels turning and the odd grunt from Foot the countryside was completely silent.


Granted River Spit was much quieter than Mitakihara but there was still continuous a string of background noise, such as sounds of children playing loudly, the sounds of boats entering and leaving the river, small conversations between people, the sound of a blacksmith hammer hitting and footsteps of folks walking up and down the dirt road.


There was none of that here, which created a sense of isolation that Sayaka never felt before, like the only things that existed were the cart it's and contents, Foot, Sir Clifford and herself. There was something odd relaxing about it.


For a while the blue haired girl and knight sat quietly taking in the scenery, both of them lost in thought. However, the journey would take a whole day and thus some time into the journey one of them would have to break the silence.


"Have you ever been to Erenford Keep before," Sayaka asked trying to create a conversion.


"We'll I have a run few errands before, mostly to buy iron tools. River Spit doesn't have a blacksmith because forages are expensive and no one has the training to use one."


"Is what Anna said about the Erenford Keep merchants true?"


"Well I have only haggled with the smith; he has been pretty straightforward and honest so far, but my experience as a hedge knight has taught me that you're more likely to meet cheap merchant than a fair one."


Somehow that didn't surprise Sayaka, unfortunately. She wouldn't pretend to be an expert on economics, (in fact outside of the basic essentials she wasn't very good at mathematics general,) but she had been to the grocery store a few times with Miss Kaname who knew a lot about the subject. According to her, stores used all kinds of psychological tricks, to get people to buy their stock. Like making everything x.99 instead of whole prices to make the items feel that tiny bit cheaper.



It didn't really matter much in the big picture, especially when compared the many terrible things going on in the world, but Sayaka didn't like those practices because it felt dishonest even if they did work.



Sayaka thoughts on economics came to an abrupt end when she suddenly realised that her conversation with Sir Clifford had come to a sudden halt. She began to wonder whether or not to try to keep it going; she eventually decided to keep it going.


"Why did you become a hedge knight in the first place?" She asked while staring at Sir Clifford's face, which was fixed ponderously on the dirty road ahead as if he was trying to decide whether or not to answer her questions.


"My father was Lord Oswell Brightstone. A few days before he was to be married, he decides to have one last night out with a lowborn woman he had grown fond of, they started drinking, didn't stop and I was the result."


"I don't think his wife was happy about that."


Sir Clifford chuckled, "you have no idea. Anyway I was born a few months after my half-brother Rufus, my father then raised us both and when we reached the age of eight he made us both squares, we trained under both him and Brightstone Keep's master at arms. We both served him right through unlit the end of Robert's rebellion, after which we were both knighted. Not long after I left to begin my career as a hedge knight."


"Why did you leave?" Sayaka asked.


"To be honest, I felt like a waste, Rufus was the heir father wanted, that not say he didn't have any affectations for me, but he and Rufus clicked in a way. I never could, so I choose to go off and make my own way, I could have joined the Night's Watch but being restricted to one frozen location held no appeal. That and the organisation has fallen hard from the band of noble heroes guarding the realms to a band of glorified outcasts, thieves, murderous and other terrible criminals, fighting a bunch pity primitive raids, so I wasn't in a rush to join."


"So you decide to become a hedge knight instead."


"That's correct, a life travelling the land seeing every sight the Seven Kingdoms have to offer, going from place to place of my own will, that was the life for me. So not long after been knighted, I made my case and afterwards, my father gave me some money, a horse, some armour and couple of weapons, then I went off and began my journey."


Sir Clifford smiled fondly at the memory.


"Why did you stop?" Sayaka asked.


Just like that the knight's mood was reduced to ruin, leaving an old tried expression of regret.


Sayaka immediately realised her mistake.


"Sorry, I didn't mean to bring up unpleasant memories."


"I know," Sir Clifford said his voice sour.


The silence returned but it was awkward now, 'great job Miki, once again you to put your foot in your mouth.' Sayaka considered trying to make an apology but ultimately decided against it; it would probably just made Sir Clifford feel worse.


For a while, the duo just sat in the cart. The uncomfortable quiet that felt oddly disconcerting next to the lovely summer day environment. After what felt like forever Sir Clifford speaks, "I…." before he could get a word in he was interrupted by a violent ruffling of a nearby bush. A man tumbled out, his body was a bloodied mess, covered in cuts both deep and small. His left eye was swollen red, surrounded by dark purple rings, his nose twisted and broken. His brown bearded was messy and covered in dirt, like his damaged and tattered leather outfit.-


Because of his sorry state it took some time for Sayaka to recognise. "Lord Glint!" She shouted as she jumped off the cart, followed by Sir Clifford.


The two of rushed towards the injured lord who was struggling with great difficulty to keep himself from collapsing onto the dirt road. Sayaka and Sir Clifford were able to catch him and provide support just in time.


"He….l..." All attempts to form words were drowned out by consistent panting and breathing.


Sir Clifford looked at the wounds, "these are some nasty wounds. We need to get him treat immediately. Help me walk him to the cart the sack Benjamin gave us should have something we could use for bandaging up the wounds."


The two of them slowly guide Lord Glint to the cart at sluggish agonising pace, not helped by Lord Glint's painful breaths for air. However the task was eventually completed and Sir Clifford started pulling bandages out of the supply bag.



"Do you know by any chance how to use these?" The knight asked.


"Yes, I learned how to use bandages during SPR sections." said Sayaka too focused on the current crisis to care about her secret.


"Good, let's start patching him up," Sir Clifford tossed some bangers to Sayaka and bent down to Lord Glint, "Listen this will hurt a bit but we need you stay still, can you do that?" Lord Glint nodded.


While bandages were being added, Sayaka considered using her magic to heal Lord Glint but then a chilling thought interrupted her. As far as she was aware, there weren't any witches in this world, which meant if she used her powers a curse would begin to grow, corrupting her soul gem until she became a witch. After that, no one could stop her. Sayaka as Oktavia von Seckendorff would remain a permanent blight upon the land, an invisible force spreading terror and death like a mix between the boogieman and the plague. Worse still since the familiars of a witch could wander off and devour people unlit they became a copy of the witch that spawned them, the disaster would continue to escalate in size until all life on this world was completely destroyed.


That was one other reason why Sayaka was reluctant to use magic, the second and shamefully the stronger one, was the horrifying idea of having to return to that hell. Only this time without any hope of being granted the relief of death, no she couldn't go back there, she just couldn't!


So Sayaka kept trudging along, slowly and carefully doing what little she could to mend some of the damage that had been inflicted on the knightly Lord.



"That should do, until we get to the keep, where the maester can fix you up properly," Sir Clifford said standing up.


"What's happened to you?" Sayaka asked.


Lord Glint to a deep breath in order to compose himself and get control of his breathing, "On the way to tourney, we set upon by brigands, they caught us completely off guard but worse still whoever they were they weren't ordinary brigands, their armour and weapons were of a high quality and was and there was great number, my men didn't stand a chance they were slaughtered until my son and I were the only ones left."



Sayaka clenched her fist in anger; she had witnessed death before when Mami die horribly but that was at the hands of a witch, at the time she thought about witches in the same vain as wild animals or natural distresses. Now that she knew what it is like to be a witch, blame them for their actions. But this cold blooded murder, that was something else altogether.



"How are you still alive?" Sir Clifford asked.



"They would have killed me, to if hadn't bartered with them, I claimed to know Lord Erenford and that he would give then a large ransom if they let I and Symond, it worked but they kept Symond as a hostage to make sure I kept my word."


"Will you be able to?" Sayaka asked this time.


Lord Glint hung his head low, "the truth is I only met Lord Erenford briefly at one of Lord Frey's feasts, so the only thing I can do is go to Lord Erenford, throw myself on his mercy and hope he is generous enough to provide a ransom."



"Maybe we could rescue Symond," Sayaka suggested.


"No!" Lord Glint rejected strongly, "you would only end up getting yourselves killed."


"But," Sayaka was interrupted by Sir Clifford. "He is right Lord Erenford is the best option we have."


"But every moment we waste, Symond is at greater danger!"


"Sayaka," Sir Clifford said calmly but sternly, "I understand, wanting to help, I would love nothing more than to run down fight my way through the bandits and rescue the boy but the only thing I would accomplish is getting myself killed which wouldn't do anything to help Symond."


"I could help!"


"How would you help, Sayaka even if you could fight we would be outnumbered unless you have a way of tip things in our favour."


Sayaka opened her mouth ready to boldly declare the existences of her magic, then stopped. No magic was too unstable; using it would be an unnecessary risk. So as she much wanted to charge in she chooses to wait. Mind reluctantly made up Sayaka bowed her head in defeat.


Sir Clifford made no comment as he turned towards Lord Glint. "Right then, Lord Glint can you pull yourself into our cart or will you need assistance."


Lord Glint tried to pull himself up but gave up after a few seconds, "it seems I'm going to need your aid."


Both the knight and the girl immediately walked over to the Lord and carefully got to his feet and put him in the back of the cart. Once that was done, the two of got onto the cart and the journey continued.


As the drama came to a temporary halt, the silence of nature returned. But the once tranquil and relaxing atmosphere was replaced by one of uncomfortable dread and tension. It was only slightly broken by very low quiet sobbing.




Sayaka turned her head to Lord Glint whose head was low in shame. "Lord Glint…."



"Those men, trusted me, I was supposed to command in times of crisis instead I got them all killed, my family only owns one small village, I knew all of those men personally, how am I going to explain to their families they won't be coming home?"


Sayaka was about say something along the lines of 'it wasn't your fault,' but then decide against it. After all, if she was in his position, she would be blaming herself and been told that you 'shouldn't blame yourself' would have only made her feel worse. So the best she could do was offer Lord Glint silent company and understanding.




Erenford Keep was quite impressive. it didn't even come close of the grandeur of Winterfell or Casterly Rock but its four tall grey walls stood proudly and boldly against the backdrop of nature. The piece of flourish was the dark pink banner that depicted a golden heron eating a fish, draped over the main gate.


Sayaka would have normally been impressed by such sight but the current crisis and agonising speed at which the cart moved put her in the mood where very little could impress her.

The gate of the keep was wide open and the two guards stationed just outside made no attempts to bar the group, allowing the cart to enter the interior with no difficulty.


The setup inside Erenford Keep was a great deal busier than River Spit. People were hurrying up and down the courtyard as they rushed to do the various task, many were yelling trying to make voice heard over the noise of animals, wood cutting, blacksmith hammering metal in shape and merchants trying to sell their items.


As the cart that was carrying the strange girl with exotic blue hair and the very beaten up man slowly rolled its way inside, people began to naturally stop to take in the bizarre sight some only took a quick look before returning to their business, most kept watching while occasionally whispering among themselves.


The group ignored the onlookers and got down to business. Sir Clifford and Sayaka helped Lord Glint out of the cart and then with their aid he limped forward towards the holdfasts at the centre of the courtyard. It was a fairly large three-floor building made of stone and wood. Its large doors were firmly shut making it clear that its occupants were not interested in being disturbed. That was not a good sign in this case.


A guard wearing leather and chain mail armour, armed with a spear approached them.


"Halt!" he yelled, "State your name and business."


"I'm Sir Thomas Glint, Lord of Salmon Stream. I request an emergent audience with Lord Erenford." Lord Glint said with as much authority he could muster in his beaten up state.


"Wouldn't you want to see the maester?" The guard asked.


Lord Glint shook his head, "the maester can wait. I need to see your lord now!"


The guard made no further comment and immediately rushed into the holdfast. Some time later he returned, "Lord Erenford has agreed to see you, you may enter."


He then pushes the holdfast's doors open which allowed the group to step inside.


The interior was a was a graceful mix of homely and authority. The wooden and stone walls looked as strong as the four walls outside; a large brown carpet was draped across the floor which ended at the small flight of stairs that lead to a finely crafted wooden chair complete with cushions.


Sitting on the chair was a man. He was starting to show signs of ageing; his face had more than a few wrinkles and his dark brown hair was already well on the way to becoming completely grey. His main article of clothing was by far the smartest and most expensive looking Sayaka had seen from this world so far, a dark blue doublet fitting for a member of the nobility. Another noticeable thing about the man was his posture body language, in contrast to Lord Glint's who most the time came off as warm and humble, this guy was clearly someone who had a strong degree of pride and demand for respect; not the kind of person who would be willing to exchange small talk with random inn workers.


Off to the left of him was an even old man. He was one completely bald with blue eyes and a very long neck which hinted that his body was very skinny underneath the large brown clock. Strangely around his neck, a was losses multi-colored chain, a result of each link been made up of a different metal, including, gold, iron, steel, silver, lead, black iron and copper.


Off to the right was a much younger fellow with black hair, who was wearing a padded chain mail vest.


"I'm Benjicot, Lord of Erenford Keep, who are you? And what is this emergency you spoke of." The man in the chair spoke with a natural voice that displayed very little emotion.


Lord Glint took one difficult step forward, "My name is Lord Thomas Glint, and I'm not sure if you remember me but we met during the feast Lord Fry held to celebrate his marriage to your daughter."


Lord Erenford scratched his chin, "Yes I do remember you: we both commented on the questionable quality of the soap. So what is your emergency?"


"My son and I were heading towards to Lord Bracken's tourney with a small party of bannermen when we were ambushed by a band of twenty-five heavily armed brigading; all of my men were killed and after that, they took all of my possessions. They were about to kill my son but I was able to convince them that you would be willing to pay them twenty-five gold dragons in return for his safety, after that I struggled my way here until these two," Lord Glint pointed to Sayaka and Sir Clifford, "Picked me up and transported me the rest of the way."


"So in, other words your son's life is my hands, I suppose I could pay the ransom but I need to know where the exchange would take place."


"I can show if you bring me a map."


Lord Erenford turned to the man wearing the chain, "Maester Jonos, get us map immediately."


"Of course my Lord," Maester Jonos said while bowing his head, he then walked over to the nearby cupboard and pulled out a very large roll of parchment, then walked up to Lord Glint and unrolled it showing that a detailed map of the Riverlands. Lord Glint then pointed to a spot just outside a piece of woodland.


"This is where the exchange is supposed to take place."


Lord Erenford stared at the map for a brief moment, and then he stood up from his chair. "I have decided that I will pay the ransom," he announced.



"Thank you Lord Erenford," Lord Glint said. Sayaka suddenly noticed something was off about the way Lord Glint spoke those last words; something familiar but she couldn't quite put her finger on it.



Lord Erenford turned to the man in chainmail, "Sir Forest I need to assumable some men, we are going to need some blades on hand if this is going to go smoothly."


"I will see to it right away, my lord," Sir Forest said as Sir Clifford stepped forward.


"My lord," he said, "my name is Sir Clifford. I would like to volunteer my services until the end of the crisis.


Lord Erenford considered it for a moment, "very well, having an extra sword wouldn't hurt. Go to the blacksmith, he normally has spare arms lying around."



Sir Clifford nodded and head out to get his some new weapons.


Lord Erenford turned to Maester Jonos, "Maester Jonos, our guest is injured and has waited long enough to be healed."


"I don't need to be…."


"I think you should take the offer Lord Glint," Sayaka said. Lord Glint looked like he was about to protest but then he abruptly stops.


Maester Jonos approached Lord Glint, "come with me to my study, I will have you back one piece in no time. Young lady, I think you should come with me. I find it easier to perform healing if have I have someone to perform more mundane tasks. "


With that Sayaka and Maester Jonos helped Lord Glint walk into the study next door.


"My Lord," Sir Forest said hesitantly, "sorry if I am speaking out of turn, but do think it is wise to submit to the demands of these criminals?"




Lord Erenford shook his head, "of course not, the moment boy's safety is secured I will slaughter those don't surround and hang those that do as a warning to those that dare break the law on my land, does that trouble Sir Forest?"


Sir Forest smiled, "of course not, my Lord.



Maester Jonos' study was very similar to Septon Road's bedroom with the exception of a few details. Firstly, it was a little bit bigger and comfier looking than Septon Road's room; it was much brighter because it was wasn't underground, where the sun couldn't reach it, and most importantly, there were a lot more books, enough to least fill every book shelve.


In the centre was a small, round, wooden table, surrounding the table were three chairs. Sitting at on one of those was Sayaka who was holding onto Lord Glint, in order to keep him still so Maester Jonos could stitch up Lord Glint's wounds. It was what Sayaka could only describe as a very icky process involving wounds been pulled open more so Maester Jonos could take a look at them. He would sometimes pull maggots out from a small box table and (much to Sayaka's cringing) place them inside the wound so they would to eat at all the infected flesh. Sayaka understood why it was necessary but did Maester Jonos really have to keep referring to them as cute little things.


Lord Glint was taking all of it the best he could; only occasionally in pain, though it was obvious he was struggling since he would grit his teeth with every stitch.


"You were lucky Sir Clifford and Sayaka found you when they did," Maester Jonos said as he finished the final stitch, "That should do. As long as you keep resting and do not put any unnecessary strain on your body, you will recovery with only a few scars. Now get some rest. You can use the guest room."


Sayaka had started helping Lord Glint out of his chair when Maester Jonos rang a little bell. A tall woman with light brown hair wearing simple servant garb walked into the room, "Sherry would you be so kind as to help the girl bring Lord Glint to the guest room while I lead the way."


Sherry nodded, "of course, Maester Jonos." Sherry then took Maester Jonos place and Lord Glint was then taken down the hall into the guest room.


It was a simple room with a large bed in the middle; any other features were meaningless to Lord Glint who simply pulled himself into the bed and closed his eyes trying to sleep.



Maester Jonos, Sayaka, and Sherry all left the room to give him peace.


"Sherry, thank you for your assistance, you may leave."



Sherry nodded and walked away, leaving only the Maester and the blue haired in the hallway.


"So he is going to be ok, right?" Sayaka asked.



Maester Jonos rolled his eyes, "as I explained before, all that Lord Glint has to do is rest and he will heal."


Sayaka suddenly felt rather offended, by Maester Jonos attached but chooses not to comment on it.


"So why do you wear that chain?"


"Oh this thing," Maester Jonos held up the chain proudly, "this is my Maester's chain. It took my many years of study to earn."


"What is a Maester chain?"


Maester Jonos raised an eyebrow, "you don't know? I guess I should not have been surprised given your odd appearance."


Sayaka chooses not comment on the tone or the words Maester Jonos used.



"Well you see, each link in this chain represents a different mastery of a certain skill," He held up the iron chain, "for example this link is earned by mastering the study of warcraft. Once a Maester has earned enough links, he renounces his family name and all rights to inherit, and then he is assigned by the citadel to a castle, where it is his task to provide counsel and advice to its Lord, even if control of the castle changes hands, for a Maester's loyalty is to the realm as a whole. "



"So what happens if the castle ends up in the hands of a Lord which are worse than the one before?"



"That is one of greatest questions a Maester can face. Do you remain loyal to those that you have served for years in spite of your vows or stick to your vow even at the detriment to realm? Personally, I would choose the latter."


Maester Jonos' philosophical lectures were suddenly interrupted by the creaking of a wooden door being pushed open. Sir Clifford stepped through it wearing a shiny new set of chainmail armor.


"Sorry for interrupting, Maester Jonos but I must speak with Sayaka."


"No need Sir Knight, I have other duties I need to attend to. And just one more thing, if you wish to check on Lord Glint's condition, I will give the guards instructions to let you into holdfast."


Maester Jonos walked down the hall and disappeared behind a corner.


Sir Clifford turned to Sayaka, "Lord Erenford is now ready to head out and just keen to give you this." The knight gave Sayaka a bag of coins. "This is the money Benjamin gave us for the trip, I need you get us a room at the inn."


"How could you be thinking about…?"


"There isn't anything else for you to do!" Sir Clifford grabbed Sayaka by the arm and stared her in the eye. "Lord Glint has been treated to and the boy's life is in Lord Erenford's hands, but we made a promise to Benjamin to get this job done and it would be wrong for us to ignore it."


Sayaka gave him an unconvinced look.


"I promise, I will see to it that Symond is safe. Just try to focus on what you can do."


The girl sighed and finally relented, "alright, I will trust you, Sir Clifford."



Not long after Sir Clifford left with Lord Erenford's men. Sayaka got a room at the castles inn, which was twice the size of the one in River Spit. It wasn't too hard to get a room. After getting some disbelieving looks from the innkeeper, Sayaka showed her the money and the innkeeper accepted without any additional comment. The room was nothing special too; just two small beds in a room that were barely big enough to fit them both in.


Afterwards Sayaka went looking for the ale merchant. It was pretty easy to find thanks to large sigh with the ale barrel on it. The set up for the stall was as simple as they got, wooden counters where money could be looked at and exchanged. Behind it stood a fairly short fat man wearing white clothing, whom was looking around in bored fashion, behind him were multiple large barrels of ale. Off to the left, two boys around Sayaka's age were chatting with each other.



"Excuse me," she said as she approached the man at the counter.

Instantly the man stopped gazing around, focusing his attention on Sayaka, he was now visibly annoyed.


"What you want, girl?" he said with an aggressive tone, "I don't have time to deal with little snorts so unless you're buy something which I highly doubt, get lost."


Sayaka resisted the urge to call jackass out and forced herself to get right to business. "I work for Anna and Benjamin Smith the innkeepers from River Spit. They sent me to buy ale for them."


To prove what she was saying was true, Sayaka opened the bag to show the silver and copper coins inside.


The man smiled with greed in his eyes as body language he allowed his to become more relaxed. "How can I help you miss?"




Sayaka took two silver coins out of her bag and placed them on the counter. The man picked up a coin with his fat figures and started staring very intensely at the edge of both them, after that, he bit both coins.


"They seem to be genuine but I'm afraid this isn't enough."


"What? But I was told two silver stags was enough?"


The ale merchant smiled, "normally that would be true but you see this ale is something special; a bit more expensive."


Sayaka was less than convinced, "why can't I just buy the regular stuff? And no, don't care if it 'tastes' better."


The ale merchant shrugged, "Sorry, all out of the regular stuff, now are you going to pay up or what, either way, it's an extra fiftieth copper starts."


Fiftieth copper stars! That's what all the emergency money Anna had set aside, which was probably why the man was charging that exact amount. But she had no way of proving.


"Hey there!" Sayaka and the ale merchant turned towards the direction of the shouting. A tall man with a short slim bread and blond hair with a long sword by his side approached the stall.



"Sorry to interrupted, but I couldn't but overhear that you were selling a fancy set of new ale, you see I have only been able to drink the same kind of cheap ale from the nearby inns and I have grown tired of the taste."


The ale merchant rolled his eyes, "what's your point?"


"I was just wondering if I could sample, a sip of your tasty ale," the man with the long sword smiled.


"Only paying customers to get a sample."


The man with the long sword shrugged, "ok then, but don't you think it would be a good idea to have someone test your new ale, so they can verify that your ale is actually different and you're not making up a story to trick young maidens out of their money."


The ale merchant groaned, rubbed his forehead, "you know what, I can't be bothered with this shit," he grabbed the two silver coins off the contour, "just tell me where your cart is then we can get out of each other's hair."


Sayaka pointed to the cart that she and Sir Clifford had arrived in that morning.


"Paul, Greg!" The ale merchant yelled at the two boys who had been standing around and talking behind the counter. When his yelling reached their ears they flinched. The ale merchant didn't care.


The boys not wanting to have to endure their employer's wrath immediately picked up the barrel and pulled it onto the cart.]


"You have your bloody ale now so are going to leave?"


As much Sayaka would love to rip into the jackass, she had more important things to do, so with her business settled she started turning away. She stopped and turned to the man with the long sword, "Thank you."


The man smiled and shook his head, "don't thank me, to be honest only helped you to annoy the fat ass."


"Why?"


"I was recently ripped off by some a merchant and just felt like getting some revenge by proxy ."


Sayaka raised a cornered, "who are you."


"Philip," he answered, "and you are young miss?"


"Sayaka Miki," she said.


"Sayaka- Miki," Philip repeated her name, emphasising each part as if to savour them. "Well it was nice to meet you, Sayaka Miki," Philip then abruptly turned around and wandered off into the hustle and bustle of the crowd.


The sun had begun to set by the time Sayaka returned to the holdfast to check on Lord Glint. The high stone wall's particulate glowed against the red and orange horizon. Though they still paled in comprise to the glorious sight of the glass architectural of Mitakihara.


When Sayaka asked to be let in, the guards did as Maester Jonos instructed and let her in without issue. When she reached Lord Glint's room, Maester Jonos was outside having just left it.


"Miss Miki," he greeted politely, "I assume you're here to visit Lord Glint. You can go right in. He is wide awake."


Sayaka nodded, "how is he?"


"Physically he is the same as before but mentally he seems to be very on edge, not surprising given that his son is still being held by brigands, hopeful your presence might reassure him a bit."




Sayaka opened the door and entered the room. Lord Glint was sitting up in bed, his head low.


"Lord Glint, I came to check on you."


"I'm…" The Lord stopped and exhaled, "I can't take this anymore, Sayaka I need to confess something."


A wave of unease washed over Sayaka, "what is it," She asked reluctantly.


"I didn't tell you the whole story, I did make a deal with the brigands but what I offered wasn't gold but Lord Erenford." The unease was shattered by unpleasant shock. "In the exchange for sparing my son, I promised to lure Lord Erenford into a trap."


Sayaka rushed out of the room, "Maester Jonos!!"


The Maester turned around, "What is wrong Miss Miki?"


"Lord Glint, he just claimed that Lord Erenford is heading into a trap!"


Maester Jonos expression became stone cold, "guards!!" he commanded while marching towards Lord Glint room, several men rushing to his side.



When he got there Lord Glint was still sitting in his bed, head still low. "Lord Glint," Maester Jonos spoke calmly while giving him an icy cold look, "explain you."


Lord Glint raised, his head so that his eyes meet Maester Jonos, "After my party was slaughtered, the brigands demanded that I play a role in their scheme, they have twice the number of men more than what I calmed before, they will catch Lord Erenford off guard while the other half distracts him."




Maester Jonos turned to the guards, "get as many men as you can, I don't care who they are, then move as swiftly as you can. Hopeful we might be able to just about prevent a disaster." He then pointed to specific guard, "I need you to guard Lord Glint. Make sure the door remains locked and no one gets in unless I grant permission, as for Miss Miki…." Maester Jonos turned around only to find that the girl with blue hair was no longer there.



"Where did she go?" A guard asked.


"Never mind her, focuses on takes at hand!" Maester Jonos said letting all thoughts about Sayaka slip from his mind.


Sayaka leant against the one of the walls of Erenford Keep, her mind overrun with panic. Had the ambush already happened, was everyone already dead, if so how was she going to…? 'Breath Miki, breath.


Sayaka calmed herself down and then began staring at her soul gem. It would take awhile for anyone from Erenford Keep to reach their lord in time. There wasn't a horse or man that was quick enough but, if Sayaka ran full force with magic accelerating her the whole time, she might just make it in time.



But if she did that she might turn…! No, she wouldn't hide behind self-severing cowardice when people's lives were at stake! If she was about to turn into a witch, then Sayaka would just have to take her own life.


Casting all doubt aside, Sayaka focused her will to make the magic flow. For the first time in ages, the ring on Sayaka's finger transformed into blue light before reforming itself into a golden and blue egg-shaped gem, which floated just above her hand. Sayaka grabbed it, there was a flash of light which ripped away the simple beating up peasant clothing and its place was something far more spectacular.


A leather-like corset with the lower half that was coloured white and blue, below the corsets, was a short blue combat skirt, below that her legs were protected by leather-like white stockings. The worn shoes had given way to dark blue shoes with small heels. Her arms were warped in blue like fabric material which started three-quarters of the way up before end at her hands, which were concealed behind white gloves. Bringing it all together was a flowing snow white heroic collar cape and golden hair clips shaped like music notes.


Sayaka gave a brief moment to take in the nostalgic sight of her magical girl outfit. She thought of something, it probably wasn't a good idea to be going doing all this weird magic stuff without some sort of disguise. So with just a thought Sayaka made a slight alteration to her cape design, by adding a hood. She pulled it over her face and jumped with inhuman might over the walls of Erenford Keep


Meanwhile unknown to Sayaka Miki, Philip had been watching her from around the corner, smiling playfully.
 
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So she DOES still have her magic! I'd wondered.

Of course, actually using it is probably really dangerous, since unless she has a steady stream of Shadowbinders from Asshai to eat, she's liable to witch if she runs out. Maybe moving to Essos would be a good idea, they have a lot of spare witches and warlocks lying around.
 
According to her, stores used all kinds of psychological tricks, to get people to buy their stock. Like making everything x.99 instead of whole prices to make the items feel that tiny bit cheaper.
I'm pretty sure that this isn't true in Japan, where Sayaka is from. I'm pretty sure that things are priced more normally. It doesn't seem like they apply that particular psychological trick.
 
"That is one of greatest questions a Maester can face. Do you remain loyal to those that you have severed for years in spite of your vows or stick to your vow even at the detriment to realm? Personally, I would choose the latter."
Uh I hope you meant served here, or else I think this maester may have misheard the vows he was supposes to swear.
 
Well, I figured he was just a guy who spotted clear magic. If you insist, of course, he could be something magical instead of the obvious mundane... :V
 
So, how soon will the natives start worshipping Sayaka as a manifestation of the Maiden?
 
A Melody of Water: Chapter 7 Magical Might
A Melody of Water: Chapter 7

Magical Might​



Sir Clifford gazed up at the sun that hung low in the sky. Sunset would start soon. A normally beautiful site that made Sir Clifford feel a sense great uneasy. He wasn't the only one with that mindset.



"It will be night soon my Lord, the perfect time for an ambush," Sir Forest noted glumly.



"I couldn't agree with you more, hopefully, our scouts will return soon and we can get these 'negotiations' over with," the moment Lord Erenford finished his sentence two men returned to the group.



"My Lord," one of the men bowed, "we have scouted the area and found a large group of a suspicious looking man standing in the middle of the grove, there were twenty-five of them in total and they were all heavily armed."



"Elaborate solder," Sir Frost commanded.



"Most them were wielding one-handed axes, and wearing chainmail for protection."



Lord Erenford considered the scout's information, "not too unusual given that most large brigand groups tend to be better armoured, but still, it's strange, there should at least be rumours about a group like this but this is the first time I have heard of them."



"They might just be a new group," Sir Frost suggested.



"That is probably true, but we should prepare for the worst," Lord Erenford turned to Sir Clifford, "we will leave ten men outside the grove, so they can act as reinforcements or go to get help in the worst case scenario, I will put you in charge of that group."



"Of my Lord," Sir Clifford complied, "but why me, wouldn't one of your own be a better choice."



"You're an anointed knight, that makes you more qualified than any other of my men outside of Sir Frost and he will need to lead the men in cause I'm injured," Lord Erenford explained.



'I'm afraid, I am a pretty poor example of an anointed knight,' Sir Clifford thought bitterly. After what happened the last time he had lead men, Sir Clifford wasn't keen to be in charge but he chooses not voice the objection, out of a desire to get the trade over with and make sure that Symond was safe.



The grove where the meeting between the Lord's men and the brigands was to take place was pretty much what you would expect a small clearing of grass and flowers in the middle of a thick woodland.



Lord Erenford and Sir Forest entered on horseback along with many foot soldiers from the south. He was wearing thick chain mail armour and wielding a castle forged steel sword, his men wearing a cheaper version of some armour and were mostly wielding spears.



The brigands were standing on opposite side, wearing chain mail like the Lord's soldiers and were all wielding one handed axes just as the scouts had reported. With the exception of one very large muscular man, who was holding a big intimidating battle axe, resting by his side. While his body language was relaxed cool and confident, his face told a different story. There was something wrong about the way he smiled and his eyes had a malicious look to them. That suggested that this was someone who took great pleasure in doing terrible things.



"Welcome, you must be Lord Erenford," the brigand greeted with the mouth of yellowish brown teeth.



Lord Erenford gave him a cold look, "save your worthless pleasantries, I'm here for the boy you kidnapped, hand him over and I might show you mercy."


The brigand was unimpressed by Lord Erenford attempts at imitation, "there's no need to get so angry." The brigand turned to his men, "boys bring out the little Lordling."



Two men and one boy came out from behind a tree. The boy was very young and had short brown hair. This was probably Lord Glint's son.



"Hand over the boy," Lord Erenford ordered.





The brigand smiled in a condescending manner, "show us that you have gold we were promised."



Sir Forest grabbed sake from the side of his saddle, opened it up and pulled out a golden coin.



"We have kept our end of the bargain; now keep yours," Lord Erenford's voice becoming a harsher-a sign that he was growing impatient.



The brigand gave the sack of coins a greedy look, "very well then, we will exchange both at the same time." The brigand's men started pulling and pushing the boy towards the centre of the grove. Sir Forest handed over the bag of money to one of his men, who started walking forward to meet the criminal in the centre.



When two groups met the Lord's man place the bag of gold into the hand of one of the criminals, who barely acknowledges the existence of the Lord's man. Meanwhile, the second criminal shoved the boy into the arms of the Lord's man. The trade completed the three returned to their groups without exchanging a single word or glance.



They got halfway there when suddenly, "AHHHA." The terrible sound of a man crying in pain came from Lord Erenford's party. Every man, they're gripped weapons, "What have you done?" Sir Forest directed his accusation at the main brigand, who was grinning in a very smug manner.



"My men have just dealt with your pathetic reinforcements." Right after the brigand finishing that sentence, Sir Clifford appeared from behind Lord Erenford party along with eight other of his men. Each had a dagger to their throat, each dagger was held by a brigand.



The main crook's grin grew wider, "here are my demands drop your weapons and surrender otherwise we will slit the throats of our captives and just in case that isn't enough to get you to surrender," the brigand raised his right arm.



Around the grove, there were sinister sounds of footsteps walking across the foliage. Lord Erenford and Sir Forest drew their swords as the tension began to reach fever pitch.



Slowly from out of the shadows of the trees, men emerged from three different sides, armed with crossbows, each loaded with iron tips that could shred the Lord's men with easy if released.



Lord Erenford glared at criminals defiantly for a brief moment, before admitting defeat. He dropped his weapon at his horse's feet, Sir Forest followed his lead reluctantly his sword discard into the mud. Soon all of the Lord's men followed suit.



Lord Erenford sighed glumly, "right, I admit it, you caught me but can you least tell who people are, you went through a lot of effort to get me here and crossbows aren't cheap, you aren't just a group of random criminals!"



"I suppose there is no point in hiding it. After all, what point is there in our glorious mission if no-one knows who we are, or what god we follow?"




The mention of the word 'god' made Lord Erenford cringe. He suddenly had a very strong premonition where this would be going and he didn't like at all.



"We are, the ones who follow the old ways, the only true son of salt and rock, we are The Drowned Ones!" The main brigand declared with great zeal.



Just like that everything started to click into place these people weren't just random group of unusually heavily armoured of criminals. They were the one thing that all River Lords hated and dread, a group of fanatical iron born.



"So what do you want us for?" Lord Erenford asked.



"Simple we wish to ransom you off to Lord Frey; you see we need to make name for ourselves and good way to that sack a large payment out of rich well know house, you possess a good amount of men and land and your house has been loyal vessel the Fery's since it was first founded."




Lord Erenford rolled his eyes, "yes those would all be good reason to pay for my release, but there is one big flaw in this entire scheme, Lord Frey values pride far more than anything else. If you try to get even a just penny out him of the only thing he will give you is the noose."



This statement of fact didn't seem to have any impact on the band of criminal fanatics.



"Do you really think you would be able to convince us you are worthless enough that we would be kind enough to let you go?" The main Drowned One said dismissively.



"So what are you going to do now?" Sir Forest spoke up, "I highly doubt you have the means to keep all of us locked up while waiting for Walder Frey to pay up."



The Drowned Ones all started grinning viciously, their leader looking practically bloodthirsty, "that would be a problem, except we only need Lord Erenford."



It immediately dawned on everyone what was about to happen. "Shit," Sir Forest cursed under his breath.



"Fellow Drowned Ones! On my mark cut these green lander scum to pieces!"



As the command was given the Lord's men began reacting in many ways, some started making desperate pleas for their lives, other started cursing their enemies, some tried to make one last prayer to their gods, others simply closed their eyes waiting for the dreaded end.



The leader of Drowned Ones raised his arm, ready to give the order. When he suddenly he noticed something out of the corner of his eye, deep within the shadows cast by the trees, it was a tiny spark of blue light. For a moment he just stared at it as if doing so would somehow result in him recognizing the course being the spark. There was a low whooshing noise, followed by the feeling of air being disputed as an object flew through it.



He turned around to see that the man closeted to him was staring down at the pile of splinters and screws that used to be his crow bow, just a few inches away, embed in the ground, shining in the light of the setting sun ground was a short cutlass.


It was the kind of weapon that was often used by pirates that sailed in the narrow sea and coast used primly for close quarter combat in tight spaces and like every sword ever made was not designed to be thrown.



"What fu….." Before the zealot could finish swearing, a rain of swords emerged from shadows. Blades flew wildly seem to be aimed with the intention of destroying the crossbows, some hit their mark most did not. Luckily for the Drowned Ones, the person throwing the swords had apparently decided to make the blade of their weapons blunt. The result was that any zealot unfortunate enough to be struck by the storm of swords ended up with brush and broken bones rather than been impaled.



When the storm finally passed every single crossbowman was lying on the ground moaning in pain, while everyone just started in complete shock and confuse, which was just the opening that Sir Clifford needed.



While the zealot holding him hostage was still trying to figure out what just happened, Sir Clifford slammed the back of his head right into the nose of the other man.



There was the sound of bones cracking as the zealot yelled in pain and placed both his hands on his nose, away from the knight's neck. This left Sir Clifford free to pull his sword from his scabbard and then slam the pommel onto the zealot's forehead. An incoherent, swear left the zealot's lips as he fell to the ground while clutching his head.




With his captive dealt with Sir Clifford turned to deal with the Drown One closeted to him. The hedge knight charged forwarded aiming the tip of his blade at the head of the zealot, who was forced to let go of his hostage in order to dodge the blow. The zealot locked eyes with Sir Clifford; he gripped his dagger tightly ready to engage in combat with a difficult opponent, only to be tackled to the ground by the very man he had just been holding captive.



"Drop your weapon!" Sir Clifford turned around to see that the man yelling at him was yet another zealot. His blade still at his captive's throat, his movements were shaky and his face was starting to sweat all the signs of a man on the verge of panic.



Luckily before he could cause any harm a cutlass flew out from the trees, slamming into his neck and causing him to fall over in pain. The same happened to all of his fellow ambusher rendering all captives free.



"Here this is our chance men!" Lord Erenford declared, "Grab your weapons and cut these iron born down."



The lord's men immediately swiped their weapons off the ground and charged forward fiercely. The Drowned Ones all attempted to draw their axis, some were successful others weren't. The battle that followed was a swift, brutal and bloody one.



The Drowned Ones were hardened men, compelled by faith. But with half their number line on the ground from broken bones, they were quickly overwhelmed by the Lord's men.



Seeing that his contribution would be unnecessary, Sir Clifford began looking for Symond who had been forgotten amongst all this chaos. He looked around and found that the scared little boy running away into trees followed by The Drowned One's leader.



Sir Clifford cursed under his breath and rushed off in pursuit of the criminal, in order to stop him from harming Symond.





That one moment when everything had gone wrong, would be forever burned into Symond's memory. At first, everything seemed peaceful and all of the father's men had been laughing, all excited for the tournament. Symond had just finished listening to his father telling a story about the Dragon Knight. Then suddenly there were yells pain, the clash of weapons, and the silky sound of blood been split.



Before he even knew what happened, he had a knife to his throat, the lifeless bodies of the party lying motionless and bloody on the dirt road, and his father on his knees begging for their lives.



After a long scary argument, Symond was dragged away kicking and screaming to some dingy cave. Tied up to a rock and just sitting there crying, desperately wanting to wake up in his warm bed. Until the man guarding Symond punched him in the stomach and threatened to do much worse, pulling out a dagger and very lightly pressing the tip against his skin just to drive the idea home.



After that Symond just sat along in miserable silence. The only time he got any attention was when the guard feed him some tasteless bread.



Eventually, a big scary man showed up said a few things to the guard and the rope that Symond was tied up with was slowly untied and Symond was once again been dragged around, this time, he was too terrified to resist.



Then Symond got to the grove, the people who kidnapped him met with a band of armoured. The armoured men showed the bandits a bag of coins and then bandits sent him over to the armoured men. Just when things couldn't get any worse, the bandits had crossbowmen come out of hiding and were preparing to kill the armoured men. Then the trees started firing swords at the crossbowmen then the two groups started fighting each, and there were noise and blood and Symond started to get a flash of memory about the ambush. He couldn't take it anymore; he had to get way from the fighting.




Symond ran away without thought or care to direction or destination, he needed to get away from noise and violence. He kept running until suddenly, his foot tripped over a fallen branch.



Symond cringed with pain as he started pulling up.



"Where do you think you're going your little brat," Symond turned around to face the low cruel vicious voice, to see the tall man from the cave who was now armoured with a battle axe, staring down at him, and smiling with a monstrous look on his face. He reached his hand and grabbed Symond by the arm tightly.



Sir Clifford moved through the trees as fast he could, spurred on by the memory of his past failure and determination not to repeat it. He reached the area just in time to see Symond on the ground being dragged upward by the Drowned One's leader. Sir Clifford started stepping out from behind a tree he was using as cover.




"You're going to be my key out of this mess, now come…."



"Stop right there!" Sir Clifford stopped as Sayaka's commanding yell interrupted the Drowned Ones leader's sentences, causing him, Symond and Sir Clifford to turn around to face her, she was wearing a show white hooded cape and pointed a cutlass at the zealot. The rest of her outfit had a very odd theatrical look.



A number of questions ran through the hedge knight's mind, how did she get here? Why was she wearing those odd clothes and most importantly what was that fool thinking, taking on a dangers criminal!



The zealot smirked, before letting go of Symond and grasping his battle axe with both hands, "what are you, some sort circus act?"



Sayaka didn't seem to be the least bit imitated, "drop your weapon and surrender, I won't ask you again." She placed a strong emphasis on the last part of the sentences.



The iron born's eyes suddenly become alight with bloodlust, "you think I'm going to be scared by some clown, fine then! Prepare to face the wrath of the Drown God!"



The zealot charged forward his axe raised ready slice Sayaka in two. Sir Clifford jumped out from behind the tree he was using as cover and started moving to interpret the attack.



Sayaka put one foot forward, there was a blur of white and blue, then battle axe was suddenly broken into two pieces rendering it useless.



The zealot's mouth hung wide open, his body shaking, staring in complete and utter shock at Sayaka who was now glaring at him with frosty cold eyes.



"How?!" The zealot demand his voice filled with panic, "how could you be moving so fast, no ordinary human could move like that! What are you?!" The zealot pulled out a dagger, "you Storm God w…."


Sayaka moving with superhuman speed delivered a massive punch to the jaw of her opponent; tiny drops flowed out of his mouth as one of his teeth was knock out. The zealot collapse to his knees, his breath was heavy as he started directly into Sayaka's haunting eyes.



"You're going to kill me now aren't you?"



Sayaka didn't say anything. She raised her arm; the cutlass became bathed light before vanishing and been replaced by a thick metal club. Without a moment hesitation, she brought it crashing down into the man's stomach. The zealot then fell, face first into the dirt, while gripping his belly.



"You're not worth it," Sayaka muttered with disgust, while the club disappeared.



The villain laid on the ground defeated, the mysterious maiden standing victoriously over him, her snow white cape flapped heroically and gracefully in the wind.



The maiden turned and bent down to Symond's level hand outstretched, her face hidden by the shadow of her hood.



"Are you alright?" The maiden's voice was warm and kind, things that Symond desperately needed.



He didn't answer the question instead he let his eyes tear and buried himself into her chest. The maiden wrapped her arms around the boy and embraced him in a hug. Symond didn't know how long he spent crying, but finally of his tears were all spent.



The maiden broke the hug and then gently wiped away Symond's tears, before placing a hand on his shoulder.





"Symond, I need you to listen to me, you remember Sir Clifford from the River Spit inn," The maiden pointed in a direction behind Symond. He turned around to find the hedge knight was standing next to a tree his eyes fix on the maiden.



Symond turned back to the maiden, "he will take you to your father and make sure you get there safely. Can you trust him?" Symond nodded.



"Good," the maiden then gave Symond a quick hug before letting go again.


"See you around," The maiden then leapt to impossible heights and vanishing into the shadows cast by the trees, leaving Symond incredibly awestruck.



The light of day had completely faded by the time Sayaka returned to Erenford Keep, now the moon and stars dominated the sky and free from the restraints of modern light pollution they looked absolutely spectacular.



Sadly Sayaka was not in the mood to enjoy it. The relief granted by knowing that Sir Clifford and Symond were safe and the joy of doing a good deed, had given way to the inevitable dread of what she needed to do next.



Sneaking back into the keep was mercifully easily, thanks to her ability to jump great heights in a single bound, the cover of darkness and the fact that most of the guards were out.



Once she was over the walls Sayaka dismissed her costume and carefully snuck her way back into the inn. The front room was empty with the exception of an inn worker at the desk, who was half sleep and barely paying attention.



Sayaka entered the room and sat on one of the beds, time for the moment of truth. Sayaka transformed her soul gem from its ring form to its egg form. Sure enough much to her dismay, there was a tiny spot of black at the bottom of the otherwise blue gem.



Sayaka's mind began running through all kinds of possibilities, each of them more terrible than the last. But right before the implantation could really sink in. A deep blue flame erupted within the gem making it shine brighter than ever before. When the flames abruptly died down the black spot of despair was gone.


Sayaka stared at her soul gem, feeling so confused that any emotion of relief that normally came when her soul gem was cleansed didn't manifest.



Meanwhile, somewhere in the deep vast expanse of the Omniverse a god-like being stared at the mortal called Sayaka Miki and laughed, feeling quite pleased with themselves.

A/N: Thank you to my beta reader STOP for his hardwork editing
 
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I dunno if the Ironborn would be quite like that.

It's also a little bit of a cop-out to just have her grief handwaved like that. Oh well.

Still, Sayaka will have to answer some pointed questions soon.
 
It's also a little bit of a cop-out to just have her grief handwaved like that. Oh well.
Not necessarily. Its likely that she has traded one godlike overseer of questionable motivations for another. Remember the previous chapter's end. Every time Sayaka uses her powers, she's putting her life in the hands of 'Philip' or whoever he works for.
 
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