A Colorful Oath (Kampfer, Marvel)

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[x] Try to reach out to her.

Now's not really the time for exposition (unless she wants it, anyway), but she might take it the wrong way (or just wonder if she imagined things) if we just clam up.

Then again, I'm horrible at social situations, so feel free to correct me on this.
 
Are people waiting to see if I stick with this before voting? Whatcha think? No wrong answers, no pressure to answer, I'm just curious.
 
people will typically wait until there is a larger amount of updates before starting voting in threads. They only get excited about a quest or even story thread when there is a critical amount of interest, or a good amount of personal appeal. And the fastest way to garner both is to wow people with something familiar at teh start. It's why most popular stories will cleave st the start to a canon, like ten thousand hp fics, then diverge. It's not a reflection of your writing, it's fine even f I personally think you should broaden your range of ideas from Kampfer\jumpchain\power fantasy. If you think back to your most popular fics theyre probably the jumpchains or that very old and long one that was about getting templates i don't quite recall then you kept at it.

It feels you're tired chief. It shows in the longevity of your fics dcereasing. Trying something else might excite you to write again.

[x] Try to reach out to her.
 
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Sorry about this guys. I'll get a chapter written up and posted no later than tomorrow. I just didn't sleep well last night and woke up reently.
 
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[X] Try to reach out to her.

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Madison lay in bed with you clutched to her chest. You watched her wrestle with the events of the day as she silently cried. She was alive, but it was hard for her to see that as a positive. It was sometime after midnight when you decided to talk to her. Detective Stacy and Gwen went to bed hours ago. No one else should be awake at this hour.

"Do you want to talk?" You whispered.

"So you can talk? I wasn't imagining it…" Madison didn't really answer the question, but she didn't remain silent either. Progress?

"I can talk and I can listen too," you said softly.

"What did you do to me? Why couldn't you just let me be with my family?" Madison asked wearily.

Two very loaded questions for different reasons. You were fairly certain there were no Moderators here. That would make explaining the powers easier. The reason for saving her was even easier. However, you had a harder battle ahead. She needed to be convinced to live. Now that she didn't have adrenaline pushing her to act, depression was dragging her down.

How will you handle this? (Appeal to her personality traits)
[] My friends know they can rely on me, no matter what.
[] I'm loyal to my friends, not to any ideals, and everyone else can take a trip down the Styx for all I care.
[] A powerful person killed someone I love. Some day soon, I'll have my revenge.
[] Write-In (Benefit tbd)

AN: Short update I know so I'm making the vote equally short. If no one else votes for an entire day I'll close the vote. Okay? Cool.
 
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[X] I'm loyal to my friends, not to any ideals, and everyone else can take a trip down the Styx for all I care.
 
[] My friends know they can rely on me, no matter what.

I know it's probably not going to win at this point, but the most popular answer seems dangerously close to tribalism IMO.


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[x] I'm loyal to my friends, not to any ideals, and everyone else can take a trip down the Styx for all I care.

Forgot about the character sheet ^_^;
 
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[X] I'm loyal to my friends, not to any ideals, and everyone else can take a trip down the Styx for all I care.

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You decided to appeal to her sense of loyalty and help reignite her fire.

"Let's take it in reverse order. Why couldn't I let you die? Because when you die, that's it. There are no second chances. All of your potential is just lost. That isn't what your parents would want. Your friends would be sad as well. Could you do that to them? No, of course not, because that isn't you. You are someone who cherishes her bonds of friendship, and anything else can go hang," you said with quiet vehemence.

Did it work?: Roll 29 + 10 (Appealing to values) = 39 req roll 24 = Pass!

Madison watched you with confusion at first before realization dawned. The pain was still there, but it was tempered by her sense of loyalty. Maybe it wasn't the most eloquent speech, but it worked to pull one teenage girl from the precipice. She lightly stroked your fuzzy back with a thoughtful expression. The silence stretched out, yet it didn't feel uncomfortable. Finally, after what felt like ages, she nodded. Message received.

"Now, what did you do to me? I…I never used a sword before…or moved like that…" Madison said hesitantly.

"Right, so what I did was turn you into a Kampfer. It's Google Translate German, don't worry about it too much, because that's not the important thing. The Bracelet of Oath, the white bracelet on your wrist, allows you to transform into a more powerful version of yourself. I'm not totally clear on the concept, but I can give you the highlights. You're a Schwert Type Kampfer. The most physically powerful type with a similarly powerful weapon. You can learn martial techniques much faster with a further boost to swords. All of your physical capabilities are heightened. You're not Captain America, but you're no slouch either. At a minimum, you can leap thirty feet in the air, run as fast as a horse, heal quickly from most injuries, and hit very hard. Moreso than a normal Schwert Type," you tell her. The information filed itself neatly in your mind, but there were large gaps. You didn't know specifics, only generalities.

"That's bananas…" Madison summed it up perfectly. This shit is bananas. Especially for a normal girl who never imagined a life like this.

"You don't even have to do anything with it. This is your life, your time, all I am is…"

[] "...a guide."
[] "...a friend."

AN: I won't end the chapter for every choice. This one isn't a minor decision, but it's not critical for the next scene.

Madison managed to fall asleep after a couple false starts. She squirmed fitfully throughout the night as her subconscious turned over the day's events. You couldn't do much for her, but your presence seemed to help. Just as she managed to fall into a deeper slumber, there came a knock at the door. Your charge grunted something unladylike before sitting up. One side of her hair was askew from epic bedhead. Gwen softly called through the door.

"The bathroom's free. Breakfast'll be ready in a few minutes," she said. Light footfalls could be heard moving away from the door.

Your charge left you on the bed as she went to do battle with the shower. Her steps were slow, mostly from exhaustion, but there was still sadness. She wouldn't instantly bounce back from basically being orphaned in a single day. Madison came back to get changed. After staring at her wardrobe for a few minutes, she selected a plain t-shirt and pajama pants. The girl almost left again but stopped to get you first. With her hair down and carrying a stuffy, she looked much younger. Detective Stacy wasn't at the table, but Gwen was there.

"Hey Maddie…How are you feeling?" Gwen asked before swiftly cringing. Madison pretended not to notice.

"Not so good. I'm still tired. School today?" Madison's answers came out short. Not because she was mad, but due to lethargy.

"School…? No school today, Maddie. It's Saturday," she replied.

"Hnnn…" Madison grunted with relief. At least you think it was relief.

"Pete's coming over a bit later. I, uh, I could go to his house if you like or just reschedule," Gwen quickly backpedaled. Madison sighed heavily.

"No, that's okay, it's fine. You don't have to change your plans. It might do me some good," Madison reflected with a bittersweet smile. The talk you had helped clear some things up for her. While it wasn't a magical cure-all, she wasn't isolating herself either.

Was there something you forgot?: Roll 100, req roll 25 = Pass/Perfect Crit!
AN: This is a weird thing to get a major crit on, but okay. Because this is so unusual, you're getting a choice of boon.
[] Level + 1
[] Choose another Bracelet Boon
- [] Blue I - Con x Lvl Bonus HP
- [] Red I - Act Twice
- [] Purple I - Dex/Con + 6
- [] White II - Unstoppable - ¼ of the Damage bypasses defense
[] Unremarkable - You are unremarkable unless you do something outrageous.

AN: I can't justify continuing the chapter here since the last choice could heavily impact things going forward.

Level Progress can be affected by a number of things. How much did she fight, learn, train, what have you. She would have Leveled Up here, but I'll wait for the vote to see if I should just roll it all together.

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[x] "...a friend."

Seems like the thing to do. If nothing else, she seems like she could use one.

[x] Choose another Bracelet Boon
- [x] Red I - Act Twice

Could be the gamer in me, but boost to 'Action Economy' seems very useful.

That said, White II also seems tempting; mostly due to be incredibly useful 'late-game' (where we'll presumably be dealing with villains with invulnerability or who can no-sell most types of damage).
 
[x] "...a friend."

[x] Choose another Bracelet Boon
- [x] Red I - Act Twice

I'm also choosing the act twice cause more actions is usually a net boon no matter what.
 
[x] "...a friend."

[x] Choose another Bracelet Boon
- [x] Red I - Act Twice
That said, White II also seems tempting; mostly due to be incredibly useful 'late-game' (where we'll presumably be dealing with villains with invulnerability or who can no-sell most types of damage).
Yeah, though taking it early just means people prioritize you and swat you to death.
 
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