7 Ghosts (Claymore X Worm AU crossover)

Chapter 17: Night Messenger
Chapter 17: Night Messenger

Before me were two children. They moved in synch. They fought as a single entity. Even their breaths were synchronized and fell with an even staccato. It crescendo until at least they fell to their knees. The droplets upon their chin hit the earth, but they were not in synch.

"You look and feel like you are fighting together, but I can feel in your youki. There is too much hesitation." I said looking at Elda. "And too much fury in you." I turned to face Hilda. Her youki jumped like lightning dancing between states.

"I don't think these two can go any further." I said. I did not comment on their ambition, but relished in their disappointment.

"That matches our own analysis."

***

Don't find me. Don't find me. Don't find me.

I closed my eyes. Seeing the darkness around me just made me more afraid, even though it looked the same with my eyes closed.

"Come out trainee Raphtel. Your punishment for harming your prospective handler will only get worse the longer it takes to find you."

....

My heartbeat soars. My ears become deafened. My soul deadens.

"Get the old number 10 in here already. This is getting ridiculous."

Why aren't they searching this closet? It's right here isn't it. I wait, and wait. I hear another girl--older and colder than me.

"All I can hear is a cloud of static. She's somewhere nearby but I can't tell where. It's...odd."

Don't find me. Don't find me. Don't find me.

***

"What was I like?"

"You danced in the sky with as much elegance as you frolic on the earth. But your wings were just silly ornaments. You tore them off, and then pulled yourself up into the sky with a hundred spider legs."

"How grotesque. Even as a beast I would not become so inelegant. Perhaps what you see truly is a reflection with everything flipped."

"It is merely one possibility and it diverged a long time ago. But there is one thing to take away. Your speed was unmatched even by the strongest warrior of that time. Yet, you were defeated."

"I can see why you are not more popular, Ysildre. Are your predictions always this dreadful?"

"Not always, but I've also seen worse. I once met a wanderer, who I saw fusing with another and dying. Then being reborn as an avatar of destruction."

"No spider legs?"

"No spider legs."

"Is there anything I can fuse with?"

"I believe I will take my leave. See you later number 1."

***

Her blade was a mere shadow. I couldn't see it. Only perceive it through the movements I felt my hand taking.

It was curious that I couldn't sense it. Where was the youki going, or what was it becoming?

The youma became diced into pieces. The spiked rib it wielded fell to the ground without ever drawing a drop of blood. The awakened still did not move.

"Do you still not see how futile this is? Even if you kill every Yoma everywhere the people will simply choose another monster to unite against. You will go from necessary evil to the final evil. You will be repaid in castigation and ostracization. The Organization has no use for Hunters without prey and you will be disposed of as the tools that you are." She extended her hand to me. A completely human hand. A gesture of openness and vulnerability.

"Shut up. You don't know me and you don't know jack." Like we'll ever kill all the yoma.

"You want to run, don't you. They always want to run."

She turns towards her man. I need to go now. She might seal my exit. I just need to figure out how to extend the move that only surrounds my sword arm over the rest of my body. My speed is laughable compared to hers, but if I can get my technique's stealth function to conceal my youki signature for just two or three minutes at a time I can lose her in the forest.

"I don't care. You're the worst monster of all. I'm human. Until the day I die." I give myself to it. Not 30% or 50% but 80%. Every fiber of my being dancing upon that cusp. The knife edge is bright and gleaming and seductively promises me eternity and rest. I stay standing upon the blade.

"What is she doing?"

Control it and mold it. The sword is my flesh and my flesh is the sword. The youki is my flesh and the flesh is my sword. My sword is my flesh and my sword is my youki. It moves. I don't.

I leap for the hole in the wall our fighting opened up a second ago. The exit is too far away. She watches me leave with amusement. Bitch. I vanish and enter the darkness.


***

I awoke. It the morning sun peaking through a canopy of leaves paints a shadowy pattern upon everything before me. It reminds me of my state of mind. Half Clare and half the unnamed Claymore from that memory Teresa copied.

"Slap."

"Come on wake up, Clare."

"I'm up. I'm up." I declare. Rising and finding my feet are full of pins and needles.

We had entered a meditative trance to conserve oxygen inside Erin's Other Room. Judging from my surroundings she had taken us out of it and I did a quick scan. I couldn't detect the youki source that had been in the distance when we first began.

"So it worked."

"Like a charm. Good job, Erin."

I finished processing the memories I'd recalled. My own attempts to comb through for techniques or gifted Claymores who were adept at hiding their youki had not really born fruit. There were just too few examples and I didn't really understand the mechanics of how they did what they did. Worse yet, I had no memories from Priscilla, so I also couldn't guess how she was so skilled at concealing her youki.

I turned to look at the town just below us again. We had been traveling south for several days making good time by having Ophelia carry Erin. We tried to suppress our own aura and avoid roads and towns, but we needed to restock before we tackled the wall. We took a chance and entered this town to buy supplies. It was possibly the last place we could do so in Toulouse. As we were leaving Ophelia had felt a vague presence at the very end of her detection range.

As planned, Erin opened her room and brought us both in, and we'd tried to reduce our oxygen consumption by meditating and reducing our heartbeat. Still, there were three of us and Erin needed to stay awake and conscious.

Periodically Erin popped us back into the real world to reset her room and the oxygen in it. She did this repeatedly for an hour before waking Ophelia to check if the presence was still around. Fortunately, it had passed out of range for her. We kept it up for another half hour hoping that if she did return the vague presence would be dismissed.

"Erin, do you need a break?" Asked Ophelia.

"No, besides you'll be carrying me." She said with an odd emphasis while looking away.

Ophelia scooped her up and we took off lightly jogging once more.

We reached the wall a little before sunset. Neither of us wanted to climb it in the dark, but we decided it would be safer to make camp on the other side of it. We were still a little spooked by what had happened earlier.

Erin clung to Ophelia's back as I followed them up. I reassured Erin I'd catch her if she fell off. It helped that she was no longer carrying that big axe. We had convinced her to sell it and buy a halberd instead. It had taken a chunk out of our bandit slush fund and yoma spoils of war, but we have been replenishing that as we go.

Our climb was a lot like scaling a dangerous tree. I was bloody from thorns I'd missed in the twilight when I made it to the top. Halfway up I had started just sinking my sword into it periodically and using it as a hand hold to pull myself up.

"What a view." Whispered Erin. Compared to the Awakened I'd seen the wall was more than twice as tall as all of them. Only Isley might have reached half the height of the wall.

"What do you think it's like over there?"

"I don't know. They've spent over a year without any support from the Organization or the Saints Order. They could have been overrun by Yoma, or they could have been massacred in the fight that between Abyssal Ones. We certainly never had Red Dust Storms in the south before it got cut off."

Below us for hundreds of kilometers stretched green fertile grasslands, but I could also see nearby signs of forests that had been knocked over or picked bald by the fierce storms that occasionally raged. In the distance rose the Slovanská Mountains. What I didn't see, however, were orderly planted fields or moving caravans.

"Their army looks like ants." Said Ophelia as she looked down at the activity going on in the distance to the East. They'd breached the wall by building an array of reflectors. With the concentrated sun they'd somehow burned their way through with a flash that even we'd seen from around 10 km away. What we didn't know was how they were inhibiting it from regrowing.

"And ants can lift several times their weight. Plus they work collectively to solve their problems."

"I just wish they'd go faster. I don't like how long it's taking them to funnel through their hole."

I agreed. Even when we got down we might need to find a good vantage point and then just wait for them to move deeper into the territory before we tried to make our run to harvest the venoms we needed. We needed quills from the Crocodile Monitor and venom sacs from any subspecies of the Hobo Spider. It would be even better if we could harvest acid from the Green Tree Ant, but that was the lowest priority.

"Let's review our plan." Said Ophelia. "When we get down there we need to find someplace to watch them from and then after they move out and have attracted most of the attention of the predators in this region we can try to scurry in and out as discreetly as possible. If we're unlucky and meet anything we can't handle we split up and try to lure it to the humans."

"Aren't you being a little overcautious. I mean sure we know something terrible exists down here that has been wiping out all the scouts, but what are the chances we'll run into it, and, yes, I know I'm tempting fate here but I think there's no need to be so cautious." Said Erin when I rolled my eyes at her.

"That's the thing. I don't think we'll run into it, but that'll be more because we don't present an appealing target then that they can't find us. You shouldn't ever underestimate an Abyssal One. Not even in terms of their youki sensing."

"An Abyssal what?"

"Abyssal Ones are the nicknames the Organization gives to most dangerous three Yoma in the world." Cut in Ophelia with glance at me. "They're in a different league from the rest of us. I once looked up the information on Riful of the West. Did you know she can even regenerate from half of our head? Our only hope is to rely on the fact that Warriors and other youki beings just aren't appealing meals. I fully expect Luciela, Priscilla or even damn Elda to be able to detect us and it's only a question of whether they want to go after us or the buffet in front of them."

"Elda's the one you said the cleansing hand had been hunting, right? I don't think that should be a problem. If they could put up a wall like this what are the chances it's not dead."

"Why are you so certain the Cleansing Hand is the one who erected this wall. It could have been the Awakened Being."

"If there's one thing I know better than you I think it's the capability of the 'god-touched.' This is beyond any one of them. This could only have been a group working. No way did this monster Elda do this even if she was the best barrier builder in the world."

"By the way," I asked. "How do you Rabonians reconcile that some yoma and awakened beings can carry powers?"

"I think they see it as the monsters possessing 'god-touched' and stealing their gifts." She said uncomfortably. "I don't pray as often as I'm supposed to, but they say if you're faithful enough then even if they can possess your flesh they won't be able to use your gifts."

We looked at each other. I wasn't sure how true it was for Yoma, but I wanted to at least explain the truth about what Awakened Beings were. Still, I'd trust Ophelia's power in handling this.

"Given that us warriors can awaken powers even after turning into half-human half-yoma hybrids I'm not so sure that it's them possessing powers so much as them actually awakening it. That said, even the Organization never had a good theory for how powers appeared and come about, so it might very well be divine intervention."

"That's an interesting point of view. I never really thought of my ability as a blessing given how I received it. It always seemed more like compensation from the heavens. I suppose you Claymores would have even more to be compensated for than us."

I turned back to Mucha. It was awe inspiring, but also intimidating. Unless she'd moved on, Priscilla was wandering somewhere within this land. If I met her I didn't think I could control myself well enough to not try to kill her. Try despite the utter hopelessness of it all. I had just enough strength to see how feeble I was. I drew my sword again. Then leapt from the wall swinging on branches on my way down.

"Taking the quick route, eh." Proclaimed a crouching Ophelia.

"NOOOO."

***

That evening I helped train Erin with her new polearm. I had a theory that Erin's power, which required touch, could be extended to anything that her blade touched just like Jacklyn's power did. Unfortunately, we couldn't seem to get it to work. Regardless, she was getting better at fending me off, or leveraging extra reach for more powerful blows. If she could find a Yoma she probably could even give it a fair fight.

Ophelia sat down to the side meditating. She was working on increasing her sensory range as much as possible. It was one of the harder areas for a warrior to improve in, but it was going to be critical to our future survival. I kept half of my attention outwards, though, checking with my own senses for anything.

"Why do you fight like that?" Asked Erin as she collapsed in exhaustion.

"Like what?"

"You're constantly rotating styles. I didn't realize it when I first saw you fight Heather, but you're kind of a jack of all trades fighter aren't you?"

"No, or at least I'm not aiming to be one." I said as I recalled using everything from my pommel to my fists and feet to beat her reach advantage. I had thrown her onto her back countless times and never the same way twice.

"Part of it is that I need to hold back in our matches since I don't actually want to hurt you, so it gives me a lot more options than I'd use in an actual fight." I said. She didn't need to know the primary reason my fighting style was a patchwork of a dozen or more styles of combat. I glanced at Ophelia, but she still seemed to be meditating.

"Great." Said Erin sarcastically.

"Don't be so discouraged." I said. "We were all tadpoles once."

"Some of us still are." Joked Ophelia. "Whoever you are. Reveal yourself."

What? I don't sense anything.

With a woosh a figure appeared on one of the tree branches in front of us. She was a tall with a blindfold covering her eyes. I could feel no aura, but the blade in her hand announced her identity nonetheless.

"Hello, welcome to our camp. I'm Ophelia Victoria. What is your name, surprise guest?" Ophelia asked.

The figure above us paused. "The Blind Sentinel," she said at last.

It wasn't enough for her power. Pseudonyms didn't count or we'd have plenty of intel on the saints. "In that case, what are you doing out here?" Ophelia asked.

"Investigating. Why are you here?" She responded. Her dress wasn't the armor of a warrior. If only I could see the symbol on her sword. It might help identify her, but it was dark and she was too far away.

"We're just preparing for a trip to the south. We have some things to pick up."

"The Organization wouldn't have sent you. Are you seeking to hide?"

"Yes, but first we want to get some suppressants."

Ophelia was sharing a lot, but we weren't getting nearly as much in exchange. I focused on our guest. Her stance was confident, her movements earlier hinted that she was at least a good deal faster and agile than me. I felt that if I was to face her my only hope would be to defend and hope she had some visibility problems if I brought her into harrier terrain. No, I don't think she'll have any problems with visibility regardless of terrain. Psychology. She's only mentally vulnerable, and it's only for a limited time.

"If you're willing to come with us we can share with you a cut." Invited Ophelia.

"No."

"Don't move." Ophelia yelled at Erin. She had been preparing something. Was it the smoke bomb we'd given her? It would have been a waste to use it here against this opponent.Whether for a throw or to charge I couldn't guess. She froze, however, at Ophelia's shout. "I'm sorry, but if that's the case is there anything else we can do for you."

"Move farther away. You're too close." She nodded in the direction of the army.

Huh?

Ophelia winced. "We can suppress our aura further if we move carefully."

"No. If you have no suppressants just leave." Her face and body then paled. Within seconds she'd collapsed into a pile of ash that was lifted away by a breeze.

"Damn."

"What was that?" I asked Ophelia. Erin behind me collapsed in shock.

"A first class warrior and power-user. She was announcing with her final move that we weren't even worth her time to recruit. She just wants us to leave before we can attract trouble to them, or lead trouble back to them. I need time to think."
"You said you were first class?" Asked Erin without giving her any pause.

"Yes, but even without using any youki I could tell I would have lost if I fought her. What did you pick up Clare?"

"Nothing. Maybe her power was interferring, but all I got was that she could be manipulated with mind games. I have no clue how that would work, though."
"Fine. Then we'll have to take her advice." She said bitterly.

We packed up and left within fifteen minutes. As we were leaving we felt something entering the very edges of our sensory range. It was three awakened beings. We ran as fast as we could. Had she sensed them? Is that why she came to our camp?

***

By the way, in case you didn't know Elda (mentioned in volume 4) and Hilda (mentioned by Ophelia and appears in an special extra chapter) may be the same character. I've heard the reason they were spelled differently is because of a translation error (Elda is literal translation of エルダ while Hilda is supposedly the European name that was romanized into Japanese as Elda).

In honor of this Easter egg, I've made Elda and Hilda twins in this fic who are research subjects in the soul link project after Luciela and Rafaela (where they just used sisters) and before Alicia and Beth (where they used twins and broke down their individual identities starting from when they were babies).

Also, Erin's new weapon is a Halberd. I actually considered giving her a bardiche (long handled axe basically) or a glaive, but I like the idea of having three weapons in one (axe, point to stab, and hook/thorn on the back to pull mounted enemies towards you).

1. Priscilla (unknown epithet)
2. Kujira of the Nothingness
4. God-eye Galatea
6. Heat Haze Hilda
7. Older Sister Ophelia/The Voracious Cannibal
13. Eva
19. Eliza
29. Jacklyn
30. Wendy
32. Clare

Note: These rankings are the last known rankings of these warriors. Its possible they have gotten a lower number as lower warriors died or been pushed up if new high rank warriors joined the ranks like Alicia and Beth.

***


Omake: A History of the Cleansing Hand Part I

The grandfather of the Cleansing Hand was a man named Neptune Verilius. He was a doctor by trade and styled himself a scientist when time permitted him to exercise his hobby. He was a believer in the elder gods, but argued mankind should not simply accept soft-minded explanations that things are the way they are due to divine intervention.

He believed everything could be traced back to natural causes and sought to establish them for everything. His favorite had to do with the difficulty to produce dyes the same color as the sky. He believed blue was the most difficult color to produce artificially because it was the highest of colors and, thus, the most suitable for the floor of the Heavens.

However, the theory he was most notorious for had to do with the contagious nature of the Yoma infection. Through experiments he identified that Yoma could be "created" through introducing Yoma flesh and blood into cattle. He found their intellect inferior to natural Yoma, but they possessed the same instincts to hide their true nature while hunting and feeding on their brethren.

He crossed the line and was declared a heretic when he treated a dying man with yoma flesh and blood. The man made a full recovery and then lost the ability to stomach anything but raw meat. The subject was killed by Neptune when he discovered the man whose life he saved having killed his own son and wife. The only member of his family he managed to save was his daughter.

Still, Neptune was driven out, and his own daughter was taken away by the Organization. For a time it is said that he even worked within the Organization. What he did, however, is not known.

It was years later that he reemerged with a new wildly controversial and dangerous thesis--Yoma were not shapeshifting monsters but a disease. It may even be possible to cure it. His main emphasis, however, was on preventing transmission. He believed clean disposal and quarantines could help fight and eventually exterminate the plague.

He took his results to the Holy City of Rabona, to the council of nobles in Lille, to the merchant princes of the Mucha's Grand Mines. They all refused to back or support any of his changes. Several of them such as the cremation of remains and keeping working men isolated and testing them for signs of infection were just not acceptable.

He eventually found a sympathetic patron in the North, but before even a village to village incentivized roll-out could begin he was assassinated. His plans and research forgotten with his death.

It was resurrected by the founder of the Cleansing hand two years after the first "God-touched," Naomi of the Wild Winds, appeared. The founder was one of the early partners of Naomi and was consumed with an obsession about destroying the Yoma. He actually came into contact with Neptune's research in Lille where he sought a poison that would interfere with yoma regeneration.

The effect of the founder presenting Neptune's research and proposals was wildly different then the effect of Neptune presenting it. His words had weight and earned the ear of many with power and influence. Within a year towns all over began the practice of cremating the body parts and victims of yoma murders with the church's blessing, and all implements that had contact with it were either buried or washed and then stored for a year.

Of course, not all of Neptune's ideal code of conduct were implemented. Many found his demand for working men to be segregated and kept away from the crops and livestock for weeks until they could be completely tested too onerous.

Still, decades after Neptune's research had finally borne fruit. It is truly regrettable that the Heretic, who resurrected and spread his teachings far and wide, could not be satisfied with this.

***

Author's Note: I plan to tell the history of the Cleansing Hand in three parts: the start of the movement, its radicalization, and the split of it into the Cleansing Hand and the Red Hand.
 
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Chapter 18: The One Clothed in Dust and Ash
Chapter 18: The One Clothed in Dust and Ash

Our flight lasts well into the night. They are relentless. We stay under the densest forest cover we can find, which is nowhere near as dense as we'd like. When we pull up to rest Erin takes out a paper packet and adds it to water before downing it.

"What was that? It smelt strongly of blood." I said.

"Uhh, no-nothing."

"Don't tell me that was nothing when it's in your hand. They can probably smell that from three fields away. Come on, breaks over thanks to Erin." Said Ophelia.

I felt a bit of pity for Erin, but agonized over how to express it. Before I could make up my mind though I was overtaken by a fierce stab of fear. They were back. It wasn't just three anymore, though. It was just two.

Ophelia froze. "Two, we might be able to take two." She muttered.

"Let's keep moving." I whispered. "We can stop whenever we want, but we should keep our options open."

We might be able to take two weak ones, but depending upon how far away the third was this could easily turn very ugly. We had been studying them all night just as they had been studying us. I was fairly sure these were not former single-digits based upon how slowly they had been chasing us and how they would take breaks.

"I dislike all this running and hiding. We can take these two." She firmly declared while putting down Erin. "Erin, I want you to enter your room here, and don't come back for an hour. We'll swing by to pick you up an hour from now."

"Break a leg, not an arm, you two." Said Erin.

"Sure, wait what?"

"Uh, it just means 'good luck.' Nevermind, I'm sorry." She finished awkwardly.

"Thanks Erin. Stay safe." I said.

"I'll make my own luck." Ophelia pronounced brashly before she taking off with me hot on her heels.

I felt a heavy fear. This would be my second Awakened Being fight, and this time it was 2 vs 2. Of course, the last time I realized Ophelia had been holding back a lot. "Her record, after all, wasn't just for show," I thought as I tried to reassure myself.

"You're nervous, right, sister? Relax. I'll take them both down, but I may need you to draw some fire in the beginning. My power won't work on them unless I know their names, but it does work on you. If you were about to die I should have gotten a sensed that. Just don't get too close and fight defensively. If you see a weakness don't just shout it out. The Awakened Being last time was stronger than either of these two, but it also turned and targeted you when you blurted out its weakness."

"Then how can I share it with you?"

"We'll speak in code. Don't just blurt out his weakness. Say a lot of things throughout the battle and when you want to point out a weakness say 'Victoria' and then attach a 'not' in front of it."

"Got it. Make it a negation."

"And Clare. Don't go above 55%."

We both entered battle ten seconds later. From a long distance air spears began flattening branches and bushes around us. They weren't hard enough to kill us, but they were aiming to knock us down and separate us. We weaved. Never separating too far.

"Is that the best you can do? My grandmama blows harder on her soup than this." Shouted Ophelia who picked up a large stone and heaved it at the closer of the two. It looked like a spiny hedgehog with slightly longer legs whose joints were also heavily spiked and defended. The other one had three heads joined together atop a giant hairy body. His arms were oversized and thicker than three tree trunks tied together. At first, I'd thought he was using some aerokinesis power, but he was shooting the blasts of air from only his arms that seemed to have some sort pistons on the back. It might just have been an aspect of his biology.

Whatever it was he paused for a second when Ophelia nailed the hedgehog in the side of the head. It did only superficial damage, but afterwards he concentrated all his firepower on Ophelia.

"Warriors, if you wish to leave these lands we'll permit you to withdraw. Don't be fools. You have no idea what you're interfering with." Said the Hedgehog being with cold fury.

"Why are you even chasing after us?" I asked. "Normally don't you leave us alone unless we attack you on a hunt."

"Fools. Do you think we don't know what you're down here to do? This was a hunt the minute you marched down here, and we're more than capable of turning the tables on you."

Ophelia reached the nearest one, and tried to keep it between her and the shooter. He stopped shooting and turned his attention to me. I suppose given how much farther ahead Ophelia was he'd accomplished his objective of splitting us apart. As he charged at me, Ophelia began dancing through the female Hedgehog's forest of spines.

"Victoria, those don't detach. Only long range." I said. Then focused on my own opponent.

With a leap I tried taking off to the side while focusing more of my youki into my legs and my right arm. If I couldn't be at Ophelia's side I at least wanted him nearby with his back facing Ophelia.

"Then we're both fools." I tried to dodge into the air as he fired again, but he somehow released a wide blanket blast of air that hit me mid-jump and knocked me high into the air. He didn't seem to chain his moves well, though, since he didn't try to hit me again until I had already landed on the ground.

I dodged his fist and then tried to cut the back of his forearm open as I sprinted past him. The cut was shallow. Barely ten centimeters deep.

It would be concerning if I wanted to win. Still, he turned faster than I wanted him to. I suddenly realized how I should have fought him. I needed to not let him get close and have him rely on his arm air blasts. They wouldn't do a ton of damage, but if they hit they would force me back buying me time to recover.

It was too late, though. He was already in close. I danced back from several blows, and then sank my sword into the soil to vault over his last punch. I landed on his fat arms and sprinted up with a small youki burst. The main principals of fighting an Awakened Being were still the same as for fighting a human. The fighter with the longer range weapon generally had the advantage. Unless the warrior had an Archer power this was probably the Awakened Being, but once you closed to inside the range of their physical attacks the advantage could flip. If you were close enough to them it could become difficult for them to hit you. You also had a much smaller range of motion necessary to swing your weapon, so their speed advantage broke down.

Unfortunately, my opponent was no fool. Before I could reach his face he blasted a large gust out of both arms. This threw us both back, but it was worse for me. I fell off his body, and tumbled my way to my feet again.

In front of me and a little to my right, I could hear screaming. The female, hedgehog being had been seriously injured. Suddenly I also felt a third youki source. It would be here in thirty seconds.

"You may have been stalling, but so were we." My enemy declared as he stood up and pointed his arms at me. But he did not attempt to attack me. He was waiting for their third partner to arrive. A cowardly move since he had the advantage, but I too froze and stared at my opponent. More details were coming up. His arms were probably tiring and their output had fallen since the beginning of the match. He also seemed to have an easier time just expelling large quantities of air compared to compacting and sending more concentrated and directed blasts. If I wanted to win this I needed to keep the pressure up and exhaust him more since he seemed overly reliant on this trick. Instead I continued to wait and watch.

"She actually did it." Pronounced my enemy in shock. Ophelia had beheaded the hedgehog using the lapse in concentration it had when it detected its third comrade.

It's body language now began to fill with fear and doubt.

"I think things are back to being 2 on 2. Care to imagine how this will play out?"

"Stop." A flying being landed between me and Ophelia. It looked like a rhinoceros beetle but instead of two wings it had four. It had clearly rushed here, and exceeded my estimates of 30 seconds by cutting that time almost in half.

"I have a proposition for you that will see us both leave without further casualties." It said with a stately confidence as it took in the battlefield.

"Oh, Ms. Nameless, and what if I just want to keep going and see if I can't turn my victory into a spree?" Said Ophelia with a sadistic smile.

I felt their youki turn more violent and further fine tuned my youki distribution. Ophelia had not ordered me to go cap my youki usage at 55% arbitrarily. If we used too much we might attract even more attention to this area, but 55% was just enough to use a new trick I'd learned recently. If I focused it in my arm that had once been an awakened being's then I could pull off techniques that would normally require 75% to do slowly. The one I prepared myself to do right now was to elongate my arm in a sharp burst.

"No. You may be able to kill one of us with time, but I won't fight you. We'll both target your friend over here and she can barely handle fighting the weakest of us. Together we crush her before both turning on you."

"Tell us, did a one-eyed warrior come with you in the human's entourage?"

"I don't know. I sensed no warrior's youki from within the army." I said.

"You wouldn't have sensed her youki. She has spent years suppressing it to infinitesimal levels."

"There was one warrior I know for certain that is in that group with no detectable aura. She wears a blindfold, but she could have one eye."

"Fine. Close enough. If you wish us to withdraw you must be our messengers to that party. Tell them, especially any Claymore there that we will hold a service to honor he Empress of the South in two days. If she wishes to take part then come under truce with any she wishes to invite."

Could these Awakened be trying to invite a warrior to a ceremony for an Abyssal? Madness.

"Okay. We can do that, but we'd like a favor as well." Argued Ophelia.

"After you killed Carmilla I don't see why we owe you anything. We may not have been drawn together by anything except necessity, but she was still our ally."

"An ally? Don't you mean your meatshield." She said, giving a nod to the one I'd been fighting. "Hey, I'm not asking for much here. Just tell us what your objective is."

The newcomer tensed but I could see new flaws become exposed. He was confident in his strength and durable exoskeleton, but Ophelia hadn't just cut the enemy. She had torn off limbs with her bare hands. She could do the same with his head or wings if he wasn't in the air. Their teamwork was also lackluster, especially since his partner was preparing to cut and run.

"Are you even sure it would be 2 vs 1? While you could kill me, fighting here would also surely cost this fellow his life." I said gesturing to the enemy I'd been fighting. "Why would he throw himself into that when you're not very close and he could retreat instead."

"Okay. A favor for a favor. You haven't been here long enough to observe the true threat in this land. The dust storm just hides its form. If you enter it then you can see the devourer herself. She consumes everything--humans, yoma and Awakened Beings. The most terrifying aspect is that she's growing stronger. For every youki user she eats her own aura grows deeper and darker. She has turned almost everything of south of the Slovanská Mountains and north of the Raptor's Bay into wastelands."

"So how does grouping up let you fight her? If all three of you are still in the same league as us you might as well just run and hide." I said.

"Don't act like a fool. We're not in the same league as you, whereas that one," it said glaring at Ophelia, "is a true monster."

"Guilty as charged."

"We all work together because we don't want any of us consumed by her and making her even stronger. We can't fight her but we can evade her. Now will you carry our message or not." It declared while priming pointed barbs that emerged from the joints in its exoskeleton.

We took their offer and withdrew. As we took off to pick up Erin they split up the corpse of Carmilla and carried if off.

"Friendly fellows aren't they. It's too bad I never caught their names, but lets just try not to run into them again."

"Sure." I said. There was a lot to take in, but I concentrated on what I could fix--my bone fracture. I was not going to let Erin see me with it. I refused to consider who their Devourer may be, or how much stronger she could have grown since being born...

***

After Clare and Ophelia left and after the two Awakened Beings marched off in another direction, a boulder that was not a boulder stirred. It rippled like watery clay and, as if molded by some divine hand, shook until it emerged as large wild cat. With one last shake of its coat a dusting of gray flakes was sent flying to reveal glistening fur midway between auburn and gold.

In a single lope it left the clearing and began making inhumanely fast strides towards the East.

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Omake: The History of the Cleansing Hand Part II

The Heretic is the founder and father of the Cleansing Hand. Some say he was Saint Henry before losing his sanity fighting yoma. Others say he killed Saint Henry and even attacked Saint Naomi before being driven off and sent scurrying into hiding. The truth has likely been suppressed, but whoever he was he wielded impressive powers over wood.

What is known and verifiable is that he almost instantly came under heavy opposition from the nascent Saint's Order and church of Rabona. At the time, though, they had little in the way of direct power outside of the Holy City itself. They were satisfied with attempting to blackball him from major markets, ruin his social and political standing, and ban him from many of the most influential cities of the time. It is even claimed that one town he entered in a religious fervor greeted him by pelting him with feces and dung.

None of this truly mattered. The core of the Cleansing Hand was not the merchants, hedge nobles or city lords. It was always in the little people at the end of the road who had lost so much they had little left to live for.

It is not surprising that a man who preached sacrifice for the sake of future salvation would attract a coterie of followers with little to nothing to lose. One of the first initiation rights into the Cleansing Hand that survived even when others were watered down was to swear upon the graves of your forefathers to execute their code unto everyone. Even if it should strike within their own household they will follow the rules unto their mother, unto their father, unto themselves, and even unto their children.

It is said that the Cleansing Hand was nearly destroyed in the second year after it became active because a yoma managed to infiltrate inside their own headquarters. They followed the rule of segregation and the rule of half, and after dividing their members and finding symptoms in a few eople in one of the two groups that half was annihilated. Rumor and folklore would have you believe that the Heretic himself executed his own wife to follow the code. It is possible, however, that this was merely a rumor spread among the masses to improve recruitment and retention. After all, there were a lot of new openings to fill.

Overtime their fame and notoriety spread until every town, village and hamlet lived in fear and hope that they would succeed, but purely by acting elsewhere. The lengths they went to cemented in the populace's mind that Neptune had been right and such grave sacrifice must mean there is something of grave importance to it. Their beliefs were also likely strengthened by traditional victim-blaming practices that had led many villages to cast out the close family of whoever the Yoma took the face of. Now, instead of throwing them out of the village many villages used the even older custom of stoning to take care of the "future Yoma." In cities the more civilized approach of exiling them became enshrined into law, although, quite a few did not make it very far once outside the city walls.

It was at this point that the church began to be appalled at the savagery and took it upon themselves to enact more drastic measures to curb the new deadly practices. Raphael and Father Damien implemented the Code of Safe Passage guaranteeing the rights of the family of the bereaved safety until they could reach a refugee camp that was to be closely guarded by the Saints Order.

Despite initial fears that it would become a breeding ground of new Yoma, the refugee camp became a town, Saintshold, without being subjected to an attack by the Cleansing Hand. They likely allowed it to go unmolested for three reasons: the extent of the security, the need to not antagonize or distract the Saints, who did more and more yoma extermination work, and the idea that these high-risk carriers would be better off consolidated in a single place under the eyes of the Saints than spread across the continent.

With time the refugee camp, grew into a city that was said to be half the work of Artisans and half the work of Rabona herself. It even began to attract non-refugee migrants.

A more severe problem than the refugee camps was facing the Cleansing Hand. Over time the popularity of the Cleansing Hand had begun to wane as more of their work became enshrined into law or custom. Moreover, the sight of many of the populace's favorite saints being divinely touched while fleeing from the Cleansing Hand was taken by some as a call to stop. Finally, victims of the Cleansing Hand, especially those who became saints, fought fiercely against the Cleansing Hand and weakened the group.

The desire to scale back efforts, the questioning of whether there was a need for their efforts with the creation of Saintshol, and finally the rise of more saints with the capability to detect yoma all led to schisms within the organization. They would bring about an even more hate filled and reviled movement.

***

For those not familiar with Claymore male Awakened Beings would be very rare if all awakened beings were former warriors, since the Organization has taken to transforming just girls into hybrids because they can resist awakening longer. The Organization also creates male hybrids for another purpose that hasn't been revealed yet.
 
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Chapter 19: The Assassin
Chapter 19: The Assassin

We argued and eventually decided to go through with delivering the message. It made a decent excuse to be visiting their camp, and if we had to stay away we at least wanted to try to exchange some information with them before we were driven off again.

Still, we found a safe place and rested before approaching them in the morning.

We received a cold reception when we arrived at the army's camp. It had three general color tents. The gray tents of the Rabona church that most of the soldiers, transport and service personnel, medics, and engineers slept in. A far smaller number of green tents that I saw saints take flight from to approach us, and multicolored tents pushed off to the side that I could only assume held sellswords and mercs.

We were delayed by the camp watch until someone could arrive to verify our identity. Basically to check that we weren't yoma in disguise. This gave me plenty of time to stew in regret that I hadn't copied the memories of the Awakened Being I had fought.

While we were waiting and as the level of boredom, especially around Ophelia, reached dangerous levels rumors and curiosity raced ahead of us. Fliers arrived to check out the commotion including a man who I recognized from the Valkyrie Company.

"Erinyes, what are you doing here?"

Erin helped but then turned to face him. I hadn't noticed but she had tried to keep us between her and them.

"Hello, Tom. I've joined a new mercenary band, so you don't have to worry about me anymore."

"Worry? The hell. How do you expect us to stop worrying. You're supposed to be halfway home by now."

"I am. I'm taking the scenic route. Tell the others there's no need to worry. These two are incredible. They beat a voracious yoma all by themselves last night."

"So you want to poach our 'Gatekeeper Erinyes.' Impossible. Even if you could offer her the moon she's already got way better partners." Declared Ophelia.

"Pshht. What would she need the moon for? Besides, she's rich enough she could buy it herself anyway."

"Oh."

That...

"Why aren't you decked from head to toe in the best gear available, in that case?" I asked as my mouth raced ahead of my brain.

"The steward of the estate doesn't actually know or approve of what I'm doing out here." She said while rubbing her head.

Ophelia still looked shocked. It must be twice as surprising for her if she didn't realize her power wasn't going to tell her about potential worldly resources regardless of how substantial they might be.

"Look it doesn't matter. What matters in this world is personal power. You can't just pay people to fully protect you. You can only use your wealth to have yourself avenged. We're south of the wall anyway, so it's too late to go back alone. I might as well stay where I am."

"You wouldn't happen to be connected to the Goldenrod family would you?" Asked Ophelia.

"No, I'm from the Gale family. I haven't heard of the Goldenrods in a long time."

"Sister," yelled Ophelia as she tackled Erin in a hug.

"Wait, you never said you had a sister." Said Tom in confusion.

"Just ignore them. Ophelia's speaking nonsense." I shared.

At that point our verifier arrived. Just like last time she was clothed in black with a blindfold concealing her eyes. But I looked closer this time, and thought I saw the edges of a scar poking out from just above and below her left eye.

"Hello, we came this time bearing a message for you. I hope you won't mind our intrusion." I said with a bow.

"Very well. These aren't yoma." She told the guards. Towards a girl behind her she instructed, "figure out what these three are before they arrive at the Captain's tent."

"Aren't we going to take them to Father Vincent?"

"No."

She began walking off then and with a confused look to the guard we figured out we were to follow her. While we walked Ophelia chatted with the girl shadowing Rafaela. Her name was Lyta Trevor, and she was a recent "god-touched" and a second gen saint. Apparently, most of the children of the older saints were also being touched and gaining power. She wouldn't tell us about her mother, but they hoped that with enough training she'd be able to spot yoma in disguise just like her mother.

The gray tent we arrived at was several times the size of its neighbors and each entrance had a few guards on each side.

"Halt."

"Messengers from the South. I have confirmed they aren't yoma." The Blind Sentinel turned to Lyta.

"They're two in front are too cold to be human. They seem to fit the range for Claymores. The and a human god-touched who has used Might." She said with distaste. "They have told no lies except that one about her vow of sisterhood. I need to ask you three something else, though, before we can proceed. Are you concealing any further weapons upon your person? If so, you must surrender them."

We looked at each other. Erin's 'Other Room' held our blades and her polearm.

"Me and Clare don't carry any weapons. Since we're the only ones who received the message we'll report it. Erin, sorry, but can you wait outside with these gentlemen."

"Partially true. You don't carry any weapons, but you are weapons." She noted.

"Ms." One of the guards said to our escort. "Do you mind waiting for Saint Knights Roland and Kay? They should be here to meet Captain Ricardo in five or so minutes."

"Fine."

After chilling our heels, the two knights in armor (that was not quite as shiny as I pictured), appeared and we were escorted in. I rather felt it was a bit much considering our message itself was little more than the dust storm's a monster, the Awakened Beings or as they know them the "Voracious Eaters" are working together to avoid the dust storm monster, and an invitation for a warrior I was pretty sure had been beside us the entire time.

"Yo, Ricardo. We bring greetings and ill tidings." With her theatrical nature Ophelia strode in without a care in the world.

"Captain Ricardo."

"At ease, men. First, what are you warriors doing here in the first place?" said Ricardo.
"We're trying to harvest some animal parts. If you can get them for us we'll be willing to make it worth your while."

"We can talk about that later. What is this message you said you had."

"Please. Let's first observe introductions. So many people I've never met. My name is Ophelia Victoria. She's Clare, and my companion outside is Erinyes Gale. Who might you fellows be?"

"Captain Ricardo of the 1st Crusader Infantry Unit. He's Saint Roland and Sir Kay. Finally, behind me is my Vice-Captain. You don't need to know his name." He finished with an air of finality.

Ophelia sighed at the laconic descriptions. "There are two parts. We have a message we were told to deliver, and we have information to trade."

"The message is free?"

"Yes, we were attacked and a condition to let us go was that we deliver a message." She frowned. "It is private and frankly I doubt you'd find it of any use, so it would hardly be fair to trade it. I plan to pass it on to the Sentinel here, and then let her see who else she thinks it should be passed to. Suffice to say that it shouldn't affect the army since it is not information on an attack, enemy or plot."

"I didn't come here to hear you yammer on about private messages. If you have information to deliver than deliver it." Bristled Kay.

"First, what I'd like is either supplies or information on what you've scouted, especially threats or major surviving population centers."

***

After some negotiation we three things. The South had people but most appeared to have hidden themselves in mine shafts, so there were certainly no markets or massive movements of people.

The Awakened Beings were not harassing or attacking the army. Neither were the yoma. If they wanted to eat they found some isolated survivors, but mostly they were lying low too.

Lastly, the red dust storm was nowhere in sight to the east, or west as far as their scouts had found.

In exchange we shared with them what we'd learned about the storm's true nature, and the response by the south's former apex predators. We were met with silence and then disbelief. Our source was untrustworthy, after all.

While the outrage and planning reached a fever pitch we were forgotten momentarily. I turned over a few choice memories from Lyta that I had copied earlier. Her introduction to Father Damien and Captain Ricardo along with a dozen and a half other saints confirmed my guess. She knew next to nothing about their plans and had only recently awakened her powers. She didn't even have extensive memories of how the saints trained their God-touched. Given her ability to sense body temperatures and lock-in/maintain temperatures around her, I suspected she might just be their least useful yoma sensor.

I looked around the room. I wanted to get a copy of someone else's memories, especially one of the head saints who would know a lot about their training.

My ploys, however, failed. They were not interested in handshakes, nor did they appreciate me approaching any of the leaders in that room. Worse, because of their armor I would basically have to kiss them to get anything.

Unfortunately, we were not invited for the next part of their meeting. It sounded like they arguing over how many more high altitude patrols to do, and stepped up evacuation plans.

"If you see them again tell those fiends a common enemy has not made us allies so long as they continue feasting on humans. Now, please leave."

"Alright. We have no intention of meeting them again, though."

I couldn't help feeling as if we'd slightly misplayed our hand. They wouldn't be going very far South since there seemed to be pressure to prioritize the evacuation of the mine refugees they'd discovered.

We took our leave with our blindfolded guard shadowing us. Together with Erin we made our way out of camp. Before we left Tom offered us another pack loaded with more supplies that he claimed was the least he could do if she was going to be as stubborn as a rock. She hugged him before pushing him away when he tried to return the hug.

Finally when we had left the sentries behind us we turned to the other former warrior there.

"Can you tell us if you wear that blindfold to conceal silver eyes, or a ghastly scar?" I reached for it. She avoided me.

It was a risk, but one Ophelia had encouraged me to take. I saw the wisdom. She was unlikely to cut us down before she heard our message.

"That's no concern of yours."

"Fine." Ophelia said more courteously than I'd ever heard her before. "But this message was meant for a one-eyed warrior. It would be a shame if we delivered it to the wrong person."

"Will you at least draw your sword and please allow us to see it?" I begged.

She waited a second and then shrugged. With a flourish her blade appeared before us. Two bowed out wings with three lines stretching up above it. The center one longest of all. It was not one I recognized, which meant something. She was old. Even older than Teresa or Hysteria.

"The message they wished us to pass is an invitation to any warrior who wishes to join them in two days for a service to honor Luciela. They say it will be held under truce, which will even extend to guests you bring. What they did not say was where it would be held, though. A strange omission." I said.

"Not necessarily." Cut in Ophelia. "This is an empress, which has fallen. I imagine whatever they have in mind will be flashy enough for us all to recognize. I'm more curious about why they're holding it now."

Erin glanced between us. The tension in the air obvious even to her. "Do you plan to go?" She at last couldn't resist asking towards our guest.

I felt it then. It thickened in the air. It didn't feel like youki, but whatever it was felt real. Heavier than air and more dangerous than killing intent.

"The Claymore you brought an invitation for is dead. There will not be any attendees from this camp."

Before we could I could process what she'd said and respond, I felt the pressure vanish. The spot where she had been was empty.

Erin was the first to fill the silence. "Sh-should we give the message to some others. Since it wasn't her perhaps we didn't give it to the right Claymore."

Ophelia shook her head. "If there are any others it doesn't matter anyway. She was the only one who'd dare to attend such a gathering anyway. Do you really think we can trust their claims of a truce? She'd probably be fine either way, though, given her power."

"Plus, we gave it to the right warrior." I hesitantly offered. "When I went for her blindfold I moved from a spot that would've been a blind spot if she had been blinded in the left eye."

"But she dodged you."

"Yes, but she dodged me too quickly. She moved the exact instant I started moving. She had her attention on me at that time. To be specific, she had her attention on the person in her blind spot." I locked eyes with Erin and Ophelia before continuing.

"I think she trained to overcome a past weakness. She had a shortcoming when she lost that eye and drilled herself into eliminating it. The blindfold isn't about hiding her silver eyes or a distinctive scar. It's part of training for a technique she's nearly mastered."

One she has spent a long time working on. I realized suddenly what she was. She had become the perfect assassin. Her youki's utter silence, her ability to operate in complete darkness, and even her disposable clones all melded into a power set that let her hit way above her weight class--a weight class I already knew was in the very low single-digit territory. If I wanted to kill Priscilla I would have to become a warrior like her.

***

Lyta Trevor's power is like a better version of Uiharu's Thermal Hand (from A Certain Scientific Railgun) which means if she activates her power near a campfire the camp fire's heat will neither decrease nor increase. What happens to the extra heat it is generating from burning? Well, her power first of all prevents the energized molecules from radiating heat outwards and thus letting it escape, and then also stores or suppresses the fire from generating additional heat that would push the temperature above what it had been when she activated her power. Likewise if you had a freezer full of frozen food, her power would preserve everything and keep it from defrosting. Thus, her thinker power is more of an accessory, but works because yoma, Claymores and humans naturally keep different normal body temperatures.
 
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Interlude: The Devourer
Interlude: The Devourer

Hunger. It had once been insatiable. Then it had become a bearable ever-present ache. Now, it was driven by something else entirely. A fear as fathomless as the abyss, and as unreadable as the tides or the moon.

At night when I remember that being I witnessed all I can do is shout my fury and hatred at the stars. This land, my land no longer feels like my own. I am simply a traveler on it once again. As I was long ago when we two were one and I was powerless to protect my sister.

Its not enough. Never enough. But I hate to feast and eat knowing the faces and feeling the thoughts slide past me each time. My sister would never forgive me. She hated it when she saw me long ago.

Should I have taken her too? Carried her off whether she wanted to or not? I sometimes wonder what I'm doing here? How can what was broken ever be fixed?

For a long time I thought I just needed to wait for her to awaken. She was no longer in their ranks so when the time came she would have no one to send a black card to except me. When she came before me I would awaken her forcibly. That's what Sheila was for, and she had become quite an expert at that.

Instead, she eschewed all usage of youki. Her aura diminished until it was no larger than a dust mote. Had she rejected me?

It doesn't matter, now. I never had the strength to protect her. She never needed to be protected. She had hidden and become invisible, while I had arrogantly roared from the heights of the Slovanská's peaks to the edges of marsh locked edges of Mucha lost to time and even insulated from Yoma--but not from me.

I was so blind.

The wind denies me even my tears. It rips everything from me and offers me a hollow promise. I can feel the gap between us closing--by mere dust motes. Even if I gobble down all of Mucha it will take decades to get anywhere close to her might.

My only hope is to devour Riful and Isley. But the Lord's of the West and North are no fools. Whoever I don't attack will crush me from behind after we both tire ourselves fighting. That doesn't even include the other danger. What happens if they awaken again? If their powers are anything like mine they could turn the tide in an instant. There is no way to predict the victor.

I hate my powers. They remind me of my defeat. Of my lowest moment. That I am no more than the sand beneath her feet or the dust upon her cloths. Beneath her sight or concern.

No, I don't hate my powers. I hate that they're connected to her.

I am tired.

Were we ever meant to live centuries. Isley once wandered through decades ago and challenged me to debate about it. Splendid times those were back when the world made sense.

His claims that we are in defiance of nature and the order of our world seemed like spiritual nonsense. How could I be unnatural when I feel so alive and vibrant with a ribcage snapping in my mouths. Does he think we ought to become herbivores? Not even warriors can manage that. We are the apex predator.

I understand what he means now. She wasn't of this world. She defied all sense.

Decades wouldn't cut it. They would put us on the same level but something tells me she won't remain at her level. She'll continue to grow more powerful.

If the moon was jealous of the sun should itself to devour the stars? If the stars weren't enough should it seek to devour the dawn.

I'm a fool. A fool who even knows she's a fool.

It is time to dine. Hate me. Fight me. Kill me.

I am not truly alive if Isley is right. Why then should I fear death? I'm sorry sister. I am still the failed experiment. I will probably not be able to become your shield or your sanctuary. But I will try. If I fail then I will finally be able to find out which of us were right, Isley.

***​

Omake: The History of the Cleansing Hand Part III

Rig Verilius was a nephew of Neptune Verilius, which granted him a certain cachet of legitimacy within the Cleansing Hand. However, he was a very different man from his uncle.

In 52 FFF, the Heretic sought to moderate their rules to accompany new forensic discoveries from saints and scholars guild members, who had taken Neptune's research seriously and devised chemical treatments to better tackle the problem. He was met with stiffer opposition than he expected.

In some, rejecting chemical solutions was natural considering what it may have meant. The murders, their sacrifices, everything they'd fought to do could have been done with some miracle liquid or gas from these artisans. It made them criminals and murderers instead of saviors if the problem could tackled so easily.

For many others it had ceased or never was about possible yoma contagions. The violence, fire and pain were a purpose unto themselves.

The Heretic was defeated by Rig Verilius and chose to leave the organization. At the helm of the New Cleansing Hand his first order of business was moving them closer to Saintshold, which had become a major center for commerce.

He then began to add pillaging from the half who they exterminated to their usual practices. When that brought greater heat from saints he also declared that their opposition was no more than expected. He argued that the source of the powers of the "God-touched" was a mutation from of yoma plague. He argued they were the "god-cursed" not the "God-touched" and the miracle treatments they tried to foist onto the Heretic were no more than their attempts to weaken and divide the Hand. With heir new revenue source he promised to expand their operations and bring in more men with better arms.

The one mistake he failed to account for was the effect of this new doctrine on the remaining God-touched within his ranks. They strongly rejected this and split from the group taking many of the oldest members.

Rig without the benefit of God-touched to counter the saints or the church were tracked down and suffered a series of humiliating defeats. Eventually the remaining members of the Cleansing Hand broke apart into many smaller gangs and villagers who became tougher to harass by merit of being so decentralized.

Although some would continue to call them The Cleansing Hand another nickname became even more popular for these gangs--The Red Hand. The most infamous groups were led by "God-cursed," who seemed to relish in their infamy.

Meanwhile, the separatist members of the Cleansing Hand claimed that they were the only ones following Neptune and the Heretic's true vision. Ironically, instead of continuing to slaughter their way through villages hit by yoma according to the Heretic's rules they began a campaign targeting voracious eater yoma groups and the Organization in the East. They too apparently became victims of ideological drift until their infamous battle at the end of year 53 FFF. Their tactics interestingly enough would not have been possible in the old Cleansing Hand that had been 99% humans without any powers. They invented a new style of combat that concentrated on employing a team of God-touched with enough mobility to drag their battle over 100 km of rugged jungle.

This battle with a monstrous giant yoma ultimately resulted in the creation of the Briar Wall, and a cessation of communications with the South. Whether they were the victors or losers was never confirmed, but their members have claimed it was not a wall built for retreat but a wall to imprison.

Nevertheless, to many within Toulouse this became the last straw. The Crusaders spent a time searching and attempting to eradicate the remaining Cleansing Hand members. This campaign was far from successful. It is said, that for every member of the Cleansing Hand they caught they strung up to homeless vagrants beside him to appear to be winning their war. Pressure only eased as worries increased over the difficulties of communicating or taking down the infamous wall.

The Cleansing Hand, which had struck fear into the hearts of countless had forever changed the world, but to most its greatest days of glory were behind it. Ironically, despite the Saints fierce hatred of them, they were greatly shaped by their policies and the consequences. By some estimates the Cleansing Hand had even been the traumatic catalyst for 25% of the God-touched receiving their powers.

The man Rig, or Rigaldo Verilius, was reportedly stabbed through the heart and left for dead a few years after the separatist faction split off. In some towns on the outskirts of Toulouse the day of his death came to be celebrated as a holiday. Such was their hatred of the Cleansing Hand and especially of the founder of the Red Hand.

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Author's Note: Rig's ties to the Verilius family were confirmed by the Verilius family's patron--the man who had first sponsored Neptune's work.
 
Chapter 20: The Calm Before the Storm
Chapter 20: The Calm Before the Storm

I felt slightly bad for Erin. She had pulled out a crossbow from her "Other Room" and had spent the day trying to nail some of the Ridgeback lizards. Her aim was near perfect, but it only hit where the lizard had been not wherever it dodged to.

The fundamental issue was the arrows were too slow. In contrast, me and Ophelia managed to compensate even with our somewhat less than aerodynamic claymore. I did so by heaving a stone at the lizard first it would predictably react by springing forward right into where my Claymore could cleave into its torso.

Ophelia just threw her Claymore so swiftly it instantly became a lizard shish kabob.

After a two days we had the easy half of the supplies. The lizards were not able to easily hide or blend in, so seeing them from afar was not an issue. The hard part would be finding the spiders. If there was a market we'd probably be trying to earn enough Beras to just by them.

Instead, tomorrow we'd be overturning logs and ripping up rotting stumps. Oh joy.

"What the?"

Far away I felt a dozen, no, more than a dozen potent signatures spring up. Two youki signatures dwarfed the others.

"Elda" whispered Ophelia as she started at a crown of spikes rising up to several times the height of the tallest Oaks. Then it stretched further and I realized the spike was no more than the exoskeleton of a tremendous snake. No, the necks and heads of a many snakes that were all conjoined at the base.

"Who is the other one?" I couldn't help but ask. It felt just as powerful which would make it low single digit.

"I don't know. It's not noticeably bigger like Elda."

Fortunately, they were moving away from us. Towards the north.

"Are they trying to make a break for the wall? Or the opening in the wall?" It would make sense. This wasn't-

I felt it then. A rumble that echoed through my soul, then my marrow and finally into all the blubber attached to it.

My eyes ached, but what I saw was merely a dust storm springing out from nowhere. Fifty kilometers to the West and ten or fifteen to the North. She must have been a little south of that part of the wall.

But to my youki sense, it was like the distant roar of a tidal wave coming on fast. Not of water but of pure solid youki. I braced myself and, yet, nothing could prepare me for what an Abyssal felt like. I felt as if a tens of eyes watched me and a hundreds tongues licked over my body before leaving.

"The devourer."

It occured to me then that if she could sense me from all the way over there.

"Just how large is her range."

"It's probably not very precise. The eye of her generation was Aurea." Said a disturbed Ophelia. "If she had this kind of range and great precision then she'd have been made the eye instead."

We watched a storm form around her. It began moving decisively on a collision course with the migrating Awakened Beings.

Ophelia sighed. "Judging by her pace she's clearly going to catch up to them, but she's not in a rush to. They'll reach the army before the devourer reaches them. If they can get past them some of them will even make it to the hole they made in the wall, especially if she detours and slows down to devour the army." Ophelia said slowly and calmly as she nibbled on her index fingernail.

"Why isn't she going for the refugees or the army?" Asked Erin.

"She must want to devour their youki. That group wasn't assembled to help them avoid or fight her. After all, they just gathered all of the food she could want in one place. It's to help them breakthrough and escape."

"Is this what that ceremony was?" I said with a laugh. "A suicide run with low odds and every man for him or herself once they make it across."

"Why go through the army?" Wondered Erin "I mean, the Saints have brought a lot of people and the crusader faction have been preparing devices and joint operations for a long time precisely to fight something like this. If you guys can hop the wall with time and effort I would think that they could too."

"That's probably why the Devourer was waiting near the wall. She'd pick them off as they climbed. Also, Erin," said Ophelia placing a hand on her shoulder. "I wouldn't worry about those dozen and then some Awakened Beings. Beating them would be brutal but doable. They're facing an Abyssal, though. An Abyssal whose own typhoons winds will scour the flesh from any attacker or weapon. They're fucked. We're fortunate not to be in her path."

She took affront to that. "Grisha's fields can stop arrows. Tom can lift Heather and Jeager up above the storm and lower them into the eye of it. Heather's can throw advanced bombs down like they were rocketing towards the earth, and Jaeger can assist or block any counterattacks. This doesn't sound too hard to counter."

Even I had to giggle at that thought. But it was also terrifying. Was this what humans without youki senses or experience fighting high rank voracious eaters thought? "That wouldn't work. I could dodge her throws at 50%. If I sacrificed my arm to execute my technique I could take down Tom and then pick the other two off from afar. Now imagine something a hundred times stronger than me. Who regenerates instantly from damage unless you've dealt a dozen or more lethal blows. That you won't even be able to see it move in human form much less when it takes its awakened form."

"Slaughter." Whispered Ophelia. "And they'll pick the fight. They're too aggressive to run from it until they realize they can't even make it bleed."

"We should help them then. At least warn them." Said Erin at last sounding suitably scared.

"Impossible." Why would they believe us? Even if we ran all the way there would we even beat the Awakened Beings there. Would they be willing to hear advice in the middle of a battle?

"Do you mean impossible to get there in time or impossible to get them to listen? If you believe you know something they don't and can get us there I'll make them listen." She studied me before turning to Ophelia.

"People used to tell me it was impossible to fight the yoma, too, you know. I'm still weak, but if it's just a bunch of old men with dust in their ears I'll show you how possible it is."

"Erin, I understand you want to help, but do you understand what you're asking of us." Said Ophelia in a low tone. "To risk our lives to try to help humans who hate us. Who would cast us out if they saw us in their towns without a crisis. Rabona is even the chief offender. Now, you want us to go and charge into lethal danger to help them reject us once again!"

Erin flinched back as if slapped. Whatever she meant to say was silenced. At last, she whispered, "it's the right thing to do. That's never easy and rarely rewarding. Aren't Claymores heroes, though? Don't they do the right thing anyway?"

Ophelia let loose a hollow self-deprecating laugh. "My mother and father were killed when I was 8. My older brother captured for his power and I was tortured in their catacombs for the sake of these people's safety. Do you really thing any of us volunteered to be heroes?" Ophelia turned to me too, and I couldn't meet her eyes.

"I'm sorry to shatter your illusions, Erinyes Gale, but we're not heroes. We're women. Chosen not by God but by greed and selfishness. Did the church or your saints risk themselves to reach down into the pits of the East to save the seven others who died before they even killed their first Yoma? I'm not a hero, and neither are they. We survive and defy our destiny to die. That's what it means to be a warrior."

Ophelia, warrior number 7, said all this without a tear in her eyes, but I could see her shoulders ever so slightly shaking. As Erin took all this in her eyes filled with horror.

I didn't need to say anything more but I wanted Erin to understand us. "We don't call ourselves Claymore, Erin, because we aren't swords or weapons for others. We are soldiers who were drafted as children."

I turned to witness the army send up fliers. They were trailing some sort of ribbons or chains. The activity within the camp seemed to be speeding up. Whatever they had planned for this scenario was now being rolled out.

"I, I'm sorry. I'm sorry to both of you." Erin said bowing down at the waist. Her fists clenched at her sides clutching handfuls of her pants. "I was wrong to ask that of you as Claymore. I can see you don't really owe us a thing."

Ophelia sighed and pulled her back upright. "But."

"I feel like I have to try anyway. Just as you have lost precious people, I don't want to watch others lose people precious to them. Each of those people over there has parents or a wife or kids. I don't want to anyone else to have to go through what I have. I'm sorry, but if you really wish to stay then I'll need to go there by myself. I may arrive in time to render some aid to survivors."

"You know," I suggested, "that blindfolded warrior will probably tell them everything me and Ophelia have told you. If they're at all willing to listen they'll take her advice and try to move out of the way. Then again, maybe they're also thinking of their families back home and what will happen if they leave open the hole they created in the wall and some of them slip through, especially the Devourer. They could have every expectation of failing and want to try anyway."

I looked at Erin and hoped she understood the parallel I was drawing to her. I think she did get it. For a few minutes we descended into silence and dim memories.

"You're right. It's all pointless. Apparently we've already lost and Toulouse will become a feast for them. Is that what you're saying." She said angrily. If it weren't for my power I'd have been offended. She wasn't upset at me, though, but at her own powerlessness. It reminded me too much of myself.

Ophelia shook her head. "No, if she attacks Toulouse either the Organization or one of the other Abyssals will move to attack her. They have the firepower to take something like her down, but they'll probably hesitate. They'll all want to be the last to move not the first."

Ophelia shook. Her whole body weakened for a split second. I rushed to catch her before she could fall.

"My power is still saying the same thing--our best option is to stay here. We minimize our losses and danger. Our enemies exhaust themselves fighting each other after they steamroll over that army. The only wildcard is that warrior from earlier." She shook her head.

"But you won't stay here. You'll go even if you have to do so on foot."

"Yes. Your goals led you here to gather these ingredients. Well, my goals led me here to do the greatest good I can manage."

I looked away. She reminded me of Jacklyn. Not in her fighting or appearance, but her moral code. Jacklyn who'd broken down after she lost Elise. Who wanted to just be a good leader.

"Fine. Damn." Said Ophelia loudly in resignation. "I don't want to do this, but I've lost so many and my power says I'll lose you too if I let you go off alone now. I said you were my sister. Family doesn't get to pick and choose when to stand by one another."

Huh? That was not what I'd expected.

"Clare, I'll be carrying Erin over there and we'll try to ve a quick talk with them. I want you to stay here, keep your head down and stay out of trouble." She was going to leave me. Suddenly I felt very afraid. My throat choked on the words I was about to say.

Words that may have been "I'm going too," or "good luck." I couldn't decide. Erin turned to me and smiled.

"Don't worry about us, and stay safe, Clare. I'll see you soon again." She reached out then and hugged me.

Suddenly I pictured Teresa trying to throw me away or get me to stay with a new family. How I'd thrown off the cloths she had bought me, rejected the normal life she wanted for me, and challenged her to take me. It hadn't been the right thing by any logic, but she took me anyway. I said I wanted to avenge her, but I felt farther away from her than ever before.

I felt ashamed.

"NO, I'm coming too." I said firmly. Alright with a small quiver to my voice.

Ophelia then smiled and launched herself at us both. It felt so warm. My face felt like it could burst into flames.

We left immediately. Ophelia scooped up Erin with an arm around her waist and took off in a leap trailed by a scream.

As we raced towards the army's camp, I felt a small shadow on my heart. I followed Ophelia, but I didn't trust her to follow me. Even now I didn't want to show her my back. It wasn't right, but my power was screaming at me not to do it. I wished I never had this power to recognize weaknesses. That I could greet Teresa after falling in the same manner she had.

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That last line says some real unflattering things about Clare's mental health. In Canon it was hard to see how immature she was partly because she was so taciturn, but she was fundamentally a young heavily abused girl who'd imprinted on the first woman to help her and even wants to stick with her despite Teresa's attempts to drive her away. The fact that she inadvertently causes Teresa's death destroys her and causes her to be so eaten up in guilt that she tried to turn towards revenge. At the core, though, Clare is still that child inside, which is what made me love the manga ending.

By the way, I think they're slightly exaggerating the invincibility of Abyssals in that there are actually some really bad power combos that could mess up even Abyssals. They all require indirectly fighting it by, for example, mastering it, exiling it via mover powers, or poisoning it with a designer drug that gets around her regeneration (e.g. by encouraging cancer).
 
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damn you write fast.

Ophelia and clara is a strange but fun combination that i wouldn't have really seen working out given how canon turned out, still it does work well in this scenerio .

Anyways curious where your going with this.
 
Chapter 21: The Malice of Mankind


By the way, I've splintered the next chapter just in case the violence gets close to violating any rules.


Chapter 21: The Malice of Mankind

Fifteen minutes before we arrived a storm began to gather overhead casting everything in a gloomy overcast shadow. Five minutes before we arrived we saw the sky lit up by an array of thunderbolts. They struck rods in the sky that transmitted the bolts through chains to the coming horde that were suddenly enveloped in metal nets.

Metal nets that were melted by acid, shredded by dozens of invisible blades or simply ripped apart by the titans who did not slow down.

Barriers of leaves and ice shattered under the counter assault of air blasts, boulders and lances as thick as a tree trunk.

"This was dumb. I just want everyone to know I am doing this under protest."

"Shut up, Ophelia." I screamed.

The storm's rain lashed us as the trees around the perimeter of the Army's camp came alive. They tore their own roots up and began stumbling at slow plodding pace into an orderly line of defenders. A flying saint lifted another I couldn't clearly make out through the rain to touch each tree one by one. Each one that was touched began to lightly glow.

When the Awakened reached their lines the trees moved like calvalry rather than like he plodding workhorse speed they had before. Awakened began to trip or be tackled. One with three heads, two on her shoulders and one embedded in her torso, got pierced through the chest by a thick branch that was lifted and grew until it tore the chest and head in half.

From the camp, a flock of hundreds of birds lifted into flight and began to attack the enemies that had been tripped or tackled.

"Toys. What are these toys?" A being from behind the initial wave lifted itself up above the others and spread wings made of what looked like dozens of tentacles. Her long hair draped across her face is also a mass of tentacles. Suddenly, they all snap forwards wrapping around the trees grasping several Awakened. Then with an echoing crunch like thunder their wooden bodies shatter.

But the Awakened on the ground do not rise. From their wounds smoke and then blue flames erupt. Fueled by the payloads carried by the flock earlier they quickly expand to engulf their whole body and all the wood chips covering them.

"Halt," Cry out guards from the back of the army as we approach. "Identify yourselves. If you don't stop and surrender right now we'll be forced to assume you are part of the attacking force."

"You, you, do we look like a ten meter tall monsters. This is an emergency. We were here two days ago and we have more information for your leaders."

They glanced at each other as another peal of thunder roared overhead. "That doesn't matter. New security protocols have been implemented since that other monster sneaked in disguised as a human. If not for that demon, Captain Rachel would be slicing them apart right now with water saws or crushing their organs with water pressure. Anyway, there are no exceptions."

"What about the Blind Sentinel? She was with us that day and can detect yoma. Can't she verify our identity?" I didn't like the idea of pulling her off the frontlines, but it might be for the best.

"Phah. That coward disappeared as soon as they appeared. She and her companions are deserters and good riddens."

The other rearguard added. "If she was here I'd be the first to string her up and hand her over to the enemy. Do you want to know why they're here?" He said pointing at the frontlines. "They demanded we hand her over, and the leadership spit in their faces and is digging in their heels pretending she's still here."

While they griped I was transfixed by something only me and Ophelia sensed.

"Duck." Ophelia screamed taking Erin and herself to the ground face first. I joined her simultaneously.

In front of the camp Elda's eight heads crouched low and breathed out furious waves of pitch black lancelets. They spearhead through the camp at chest height. Past their melted barriers and sheared through armor like paper.

The both guards got lucky. Neither died, but one was twisted almost entirely around as it slammed into and through his right arm.

I heard heavy breathing and hesitated to get up until I realized it was me. I was hyperventilating.

"It's okay, Clare. She can't do that again anytime soon. Her energy feels weak right now." Said Ophelia who had climbed to her feet.

She turned to the guards. One of which was trying to tie a tourniquet on the panicking one lying in the grass.

"Screw protocols. We need to go now or there won't be an anyone to save. If you want you can tell them we beat you up and threatened your mommies, now come on Clare and Erin." Declared Ophelia.

We took off running. We didn't dare do major leaps given how much more attention it would attract and the chaos on the ground that didn't guarantee us an empty landing spot.

As we passed we attracted the stares of countless soldiers. Their faces were long and tight. Religious pendants and pictures clutched in hands that weren't filled with a bow and arrow or reloading trebuchets.

We headed towards the largest tent. In minutes we were at the core of the camp. Armored knights who tried to stop us we threw aside as gently as possible. Not a single came up to confront us. They were probably all at the front.

Before we could reach the largest tent, though, it was sliced vertically then horizontally then diagonally dozens of times in the blink of an eye. I couldn't even see the attack of the one who did it.

"Fuck." Cried out Ophelia before she closed her eyes. In second she took off in another direction. I followed and whispered my own prayer. I had never been devout but I felt if there was anyone listening they shouldn't care. I had enough good karma built up as it is today, I felt.

"Claymores. Back in our darkest hour." Said a stern looking old man sitting down in the tent Ophelia had led us to. He was dressed like a man of the cloth and sat surrounded by standing military men and advisors around a table, but I knew the truth.

"Yoma," I cried grabbing my sword before I saw the entire room tense and also grabbed their weapons.

"Stand down, Clare. This yoma is Father Vincent Gregorovitch and the commander of the army. I found it interesting that the other day we were received by commander Ricardo without even the supposed leader showing his face." Said Ophelia with a grim smile.

"I am not a yoma, for now." He said with a sigh. He raised his cowl and pulled down his robe to show us a sickly green vein. "Time is short but my infection has been slowed by my faith and drugs supplied by the faithful."

"And probably your stubbornness." Muttered the bearded man beside him.

"What are you here for?" Father Vincent asked us.

"We're here to find out why you haven't begun retreating already and to make sure at least some of you poor bastards make it out alive." Said Ophelia.

"We also want to make sure you understand just how strong the Devourer is and don't mismeasure your relative strength."

"We're aware, now if you want to help then go to the frontline. There's little else you can do unless you plan to runoff now." Said the bearded aid rudely.

"Hansel." Said Father Vincent with a glare. "He has a point. We have no plans to face Luciela. For now our only hope is to trust Rafaela to take care of it, and try to buy her as much time as we can. Claymore, I don't think you should have come. This is our grave, but it doesn't have to be yours. I am glad you came to offer your assistance. It fills me with a bit of hope."

"Wait, did you just say Rafaela, and Luciela." I asked, in disbelief. That was the Abyssal of the South and her number 2. Hadn't Priscilla awakened down here? Shouldn't she have defeated Luciela? Where was Priscilla? Could she have actually lost?

"Oh, you might know her as the Blind Sentinel." Continued Vincent. "I remember when she was used to barely be willing to string two words together. She's come along way. I'm surprised they call her a blind sentinel instead of a mute one. Anyway, you should probably go, but can you take someone with you? Lyta?" he called

"She's indisposed. First, I heard someone say 'Blind Sentinel?'" Said a pale blond young woman who walked in behind us. In her wake the two men standing at the entrance collapsed from countless small cuts. One fingernail, stained with blood, she licked clean, while the other hand gripped Lyta by the scruff of her neck.

"Quicksword Ilena, former number 1." I whispered. Her long elfin ears twitched.

"Oh, someone who recognizes me. Where have I seen you. That's right. Teresa's kid. Well, you ought to know I was demoted after Priscilla appeared. She deserved it. I didn't. I was only ever #1 because Teresa was too lazy or traitorous to show her real strength."

I leapt forward towards thin air. Even my hands were empty.

"Ahh, this is nostalgic. I always regretted leaving my own behind. I was too emotional. I went back for it afterwards, but it was already gone." She said from beside me holding my Claymore. "I would leap back if I were you."

I threw myself backwards as Ophelia leapt in from a different angle. Her sword vibrating like a tightened spring. A whirlwind pushed me back even further before I landed. The only sign of who had done it was the scarred floor surrounding Ilena.

Ophelia landed on her back on the opposite side he tent. Her armor shredded but only a light cut on her face actually drawing blood.

"Ilena. Rafaela is not here. By now she is probably a good ways towards confronting Luciela." Said Father Vincent without a trace of fear as he directed his men to keep their weapons sheathed.

"I had figured as much while going through the camp. It was clear if she was here she'd have begun playing her tricks to hit and run. You do realize how upset this makes me and my comrades. We came here to capture and offer her as a prize to her sister." She said emotionlessly. "It's a pity. I had hoped your commanders had been misinformed."

"What have you done with them, monster?" Cried one of the advisors clutching a bomb.

"Nothing. I am not a sadist. In any case, that means there is just one step left in your plan. Your own deaths."

"So you know everything."

"Yes. It's quite bold. Vicious. Even an Awakened would never think to slaughter all of their own comrades to form a single attack to throw at a God. Is this that thing called the 'Might of the Weak.'"

"This has nothing to do with our strength or weakness. This is human spirit. We build upon one another and even if you can crush me with a single hair, you will be broken across the back of the human race."

"You jest well old man. I almost wish you had powers. If you did then I could clearly see you. The moment you were broken like the rest of us. The things you betrayed. The people you've crushed to stand here in your hypocrisy. The human spirit is malice. You do not sacrifice the willing. You crush others beneath you and build monuments to their selflessness upon their corpses. If you defeat her it will not be through your teamwork or power. It will be because you are the greater monster." She tossed an unconscious Lyta at him so that she landed on her back on the table in front of him.

Ilena tossed my sword back at me. "Keep it child. It does not want to be separated from you I see. Sharpen it and show more commitment to your strike."

Ophelia tilted her head and asked something I had been too distracted to notice. "You haven't awakened, or at least not completely? Why are you with them?"

"It must be my hair. You're wrong. I have awakened. My hair still looks like this because I still have my stigmata. I never lost it because I came back completely."

"It's reversible?" Ophelia said in shock.

"No. You're thinking about it wrong. You've already awakened, Claymore." She said before walking out completely. I wanted to rush up to her back and stab her a thousand times. To scream at her 'what was the point of killing Teresa if you were going to break the code later too?'

Erin held me back. She saw me filled with blood lust and grabbed my arm. No, she clutched it tight to herself until I lost sight of even Ilena's shadow.

"Claymore's please take Lyta and go. The rest of us must stay here for our plan. She is right that it is a monstrous plan, but if it goes well we may be able to defeat one of the three emperors. At the price of everyone here that is an acceptable price. I believe the only mistake was that Lyta should not have been sent with us. She is too important."

Towards that resolve we could only nod and mutter as I grabbed Lyta. Ophelia picked up Erin who looked embarrassed at being carried away in front of our audience. Behind us the pitch of the battle had changed. When we had been coming here I had been speechless at the overwhelming attacks that were meeting immovable objects. Things had devolved into a slaughter. Erin closed her eyes, and clutched me more tightly while Lyta was still unconscious.

Just as we had made it a handful of steps outside the perimeter they appeared. Several Awakened including two I recognized. They were the flying rhinoceros beetle and oversized hairy muscle head. The third, however, was the giant eight-headed form of Elda.

"So these are the ones who killed, Carmilla. I was disappointed with what these so-called Saints could do. Show me the might of the current generation warriors." She declared as four heads headed towards me and another four towards Ophelia.

We towards each other. "Erin, now!"

The second all four of us touched we disappeared. Erin had taken us into her Other Room.

I put down Lyta in a corner and then met Ophelia's eyes. This was not a fight we wanted to be in, and to make matters worse we couldn't just hide in this room for forever. We needed air and the longer we waited in here the more of the army was slaughtered. If we lost that distraction we could face far more than just three.

"Do you know Elda's full name?"

"I just know her nickname. Dynamite Elda. She supposedly had a piercing attack that didn't do a good job of piercing through her opponent. Instead it was supposed to have a kick like a mule and knockback the enemy. I think that's what her breath attack is based on. It's just so powerful now that it goes through the enemies through pure blunt force rather than sharpness."

"Great."

"No, it really is something. I didn't tell you, but nicknames can also work if you've discarded your name entirely and associate your identity with that name. As long as you consider it your own it's enough for a starting point. I think when we get out of here our best chances of surviving is to take down the weaklings. Big arms is yours again because it was missing one of its heads. It's probably even dumber thanks to that injury. I'll somehow take down the beetle while keeping Elda's attention mostly on myself."

"Do you really believe you can handle that?" I said worriedly. This wasn't

"What I believe is unimportant. It only matters if I'm correct. Don't worry, Elda and probably the others have already gorged themselves on human flesh. This is after dinner exercise and we are the mice ready to outwit three more cats."

With that she nodded to Erin. And we both stepped out of her room into the light of our battlefield.

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Author's Note: A typical Awakened Being takes four claymore to fight. That's the equivalent of 4 saints. But they also need at least one single digit which is like having one elite saint with a highly combat capable power. Thus, facing over a dozen awakened beings requires them to have 48 saints or God-touched with at least 12 having highly potent powers and lots of fighting experience with it. They don't have that. They weren't even given the best saints. Instead they were given a novice detector like Lyta precisely because they didn't want to risk anyone irreplaceable.

That still doesn't fully capture how screwed they are. Elda and Ilena are in that group. Those two alone as awakened high ranking single digits can alone crush group of 48 saints with 12 elite saints. If you didn't catch it there are a few other low ranked single digits like the unnamed one Ophelia originally defeated in canon was also part of the assault.

By the way, in case you're wondering if Ilena is an Abyssal one, she isn't. Her temporary status as number one was only because her power was deemed potent enough to make her more dangerous than Teresa who always held back. The thing is awakening only improves the quality of ones youki. Since she was really #2 material in terms of her youki and application of it the effect of Awakening made her about as strong as an awakened #2 + with an especially potent ability.
 
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Interlude: Rafaela
Interlude: Rafaela

I failed my sister 23 years ago. Then I failed her every year since. I used to think it was enough that I suffered and paid a price for my failure. That isolation was my penance and meditation was my tithe.

I was wrong. I was just running.

Bishop Kamuri was the one who helped me leave my cave. Where the land meets the sky he sought guidance from their Goddesses spirit. She sent him to me. And through him she sent me back into the world--to train. I had a goal again. A duty to the one I owed everything to.

I would end this.

It is funny how a goal becomes fuzzy over the years and your original purpose can become lost. I blame the angels or whatever the hell brings us our powers. Rodo seemed to think it was Rabona herself, but I've seen their face. I can't remember it, only the horror. I'm pretty sure that wasn't Rabona.

It's funny that I gained my powers on the second worst day of my life. I heard it was supposed to come on your worst, but nothing could top that day, and I suppose the angels, demons or fairies were just too busy doing fairy things for the first five decades humanity was sickening and dying to drop off any powers.

I felt it then. The inner curtain of her power. I had been running towards her, but now I was running inside of her. So many things I've learned in my search to kill her and they all keep telling me how screwed I am.

"Hello, Sister."

Wherever she is ahead of me, I need no words to know her response. This reunion has been decades in the making. Once I would have favored fighting her from afar. Elegant fencing maneuvers that could spin circles around my sister's rawer brawler style. Now seeing the swirling wall of wind before me growing larger I can't help gulping down.

She's much bigger from up close.

Does she remember me? Will she want to speak to me first or just kill me? If she asks me why I refused to go then I have an answer prepared. One I wrote years ago. It is still mostly true.

I hope she just doesn't ask.

My power quivers in the back of my mind like an eager pooch humping my leg.

I don't use it again. I could avoid this, but I need her to let down her guard. I am not going to be taking her down by sneaking a double behind her and just breaking her back.

Suddenly the winds died. The cloud above our heads was pushed down and with a womp settled below our feet as a dusting of gray flakes that seemed to leech the color from the grass, the hills and everything else in the valley.

Across from me stood a woman. She studied me and then the blade in my hand before I felt a small smile break out across her face.

The wind sheared apart as a sharp fragment rose leapt from my feet to slice the side of my face. To slice apart my blindfold. I felt it fall and for the first time in 23 years I saw her. She wore a torn and blood stained dress. Her hair was elegantly brushed and tied into two pigtails. She was frowning as she took in the hollow scars on my left side. I felt a bit of embarrassment as I angled my body to the left.

Her arms were almost buried in the many folds of her dress, but one pale arm poked out. It was thin with one nail painted just like I remembered. I held up my own arm. Slid off the thin glove on it, and let her see my nails as well.

Her smile was like the sun on the first day of spring. Warm and all-encompassing. I could feel it all around me.

"I've come."

"I know. I missed you."

"I'm sorry it took so long."

"I'm sorry about your eye."

"It was my fault."

"It wasn't. It was destiny."

We fell into silence. Behind me far, far off I could feel out frontline crumble as the forces surged ahead and began feasting. I felt the two foolish warriors begin to flee and another begin her approach.

I needed to buy a little more time.

"Gonal. Have you gone back to see it?"

"Yes, I did not stay long. Tell me what it was like to be a heroic wanderer?"

"Poor. If I couldn't hunt I would have starved."

"I want to do that one day. And be a pirate. And a princess high up in a tower. No, I want you to be the princess and I'll be the dashing knight riding out of the dawn."

"No, you'll be the Dragon coiled around the base of the tower."

"That too." We giggled. Then laughed. Then cried.

"Why did you change the color? Oh, it still looks good Raph, but I always thought you would be into something sharper and brighter."

"Green was hard to come by, but a lot of ladies color them blue."

"Oh, well you know why I chose red." She said wiggling her fingers.

"Yes, I do."

"But you don't like red. You hate it."

"Yes."

"Do we have to do this? I know a cave not far from here but it's deep. It stretches all the way to the Slovanská Mountains. Sheila spent decades eating fish of all things. They stink but I think I could learn to live with the taste."

"And when the fish are all gone."

"Then I will eat the birds. And when they run out I will hunt the wolves."

"The birds will starve from the lack of fish and the wolves will hunt humans for lack of fowl to eat until they are slaughtered too."

"Do you want this to work or not? All I hear is hatred."

"I love you."

"But it's not enough."

I think of a fruit I was shown in the north. A fruit of a new garden for our species. I am glad she doesn't know about it. We would never be allowed in, after all. It was a kingdom made for that man and that man alone. Nor do we deserve to be let in.

The awakened were spreading out further but also slowing down. They must have gorged themselves. They probably won't hunt every last straggler down. Even now I sense a few beginning to run to the north.

"You seem distracted. Is our reunion that boring to you?"

"No, but their lives are on my conscious. It was my plan, after all, that led us to this point."

"No, there are many other players on the board. Ilena, the church, me." She said shaking her head. "The world doesn't revolve around you Raph. None of us alone could have made this possible."

"You're right. How much of it was true? Were you going to eat them? Are you still planning to eat them?"

She tilted her head. "That depends on what you've heard. Yes, I was going to eat them, and now it's up to you. Do you still want to leave together for that cave by the seaside? I can even hunt them down and kill them first if you want."

"No, I have had enough running. Lucie, I just want this to be over. I am tired."

"Then let's rest together." She said holding out her arms. "We can fight later."

"No, we can't." I whispered as the earth began to shake. Something new and massive lifted itself up from beneath the human's camp. It was dark and reptilian but stood taller than all the other awakened beings. It grasped one by the head and began to chew on it.

"Ahh, that's what you've been waiting for."

"Yes, it will take more time for it to reach here, though."

"So you have thrown away quantity for quality. What is it? It has no youki." She said as two tails emerged from beneath her dress and stretched out around us in a wide ring.

"The lesser evil." I said as I got into a crouch and the ground beneath my feet began to vibrate.
 
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I'm thinking of giving up on calling my chapters from alternate perspectives interludes. It feels a little silly when they are every three or four chapters.

Also, what do you think of spoiler tagging more chapters with graphic violence like chapter 21. I mean I can't exactly have a claymore fanfiction without some bloody decapitations, a few torn off limbs and maybe a few cities worth of people getting eaten. There also may need to be a lot of fire in the future. Should I continue to spoiler tag especially violent chapters?
 
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Also, what do you think of spoiler tagging more chapters with graphic violence like chapter 21. I mean I can't exactly have a claymore fanfiction without some bloody decapitations, a few torn off limbs and maybe a few cities worth of people getting eaten. There also may need to be a lot of fire in the future. Should I continue to spoiler tag especially violent chapters?
I feel like it's probably unnecessary just for violence. Just put a 'graphic violence' (or 'canon levels of violence') tag on the whole thread. It is a Claymore crossover, as you say.
 
Chapter 22: Clare of the Avenging Smile
I've tagged the thread with the violence and gore tags as you suggested, and added a warning about it being true to canon in that respect to the top of the first post. Hopefully that's enough, but if it's not I'm sure people will tell me. I'm definitely not looking to make it gratuitous, just realistic. As it is, due to the nature of Clare and Ophelia's powers their fights tend to be less flashy and more cerebral than I think they were in canon. Anyway, let's get to the good stuff.

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Chapter 22: Clare of the Avenging Smile

I ran out the gate immediately kicking it up to 20% and made a left turn towards my opponent. He was standing staring at something in the distance. I refused to look. My world narrowed down to just me and his buddies and him.

"I believe you two are my dance partners." Ophelia said behind me. "But are you sure two is enough. Do you want to call more? Perhaps four Awakened against me would be fairer given that is how we traditionally handle monsters."

My own target finally noticed me. He turned to wind up a punch. There was no point to using his air blasts this close. But instead of a punch his fingers speared forward. As I made an evasive maneuver to the left, I felt a force pull me closer to the left hand's fingers. A vacuum? Immediately afterwards, a right hook almost slammed into my side.

The only thing that saved me was my power screaming out since the moment he tried to spear me. His stance had completely committed himself to a powerful hook, which telegraphed the blow even with his feint.

I leapt over his blow and then took it up to 40%. I attacked his left ankle. The big hairy ape was already pretty unbalanced with such huge arms relative to the rest of his body. His three heads were probably a way of compensating for that, but he had lost one earlier in the battle.

Committing too much to that blow just made it easier to topple him. Unfortunately, being dozens of times heavier than me made even his falling body a weapon. He pinwheeled his arms after my blow until he was falling towards me. I tried to get away from him but when I turned my back to him he used the opening to take a shot with his air blasts.

I was knocked into a nearby rock formation. I quick burst of youki to my vitals fixed any critical bruising, but I as I jumped back into the fight I was just the slightest bit slower. I needed to end this quickly.

Behind me I felt Ophelia engaging the two others. Elda had not used her signature attack, though. I suspected she was holding back out of arrogance. Either that or she was worried about friendly fire.

I uncoiled the knots of youki in my two arms with a surge of power. Even as I weaved closer I felt the tension in my limbs wind tighter and tighter. Then the minute I was in a blind spot I released both at his other Achilles tendon. My limbs extended like a yomas, their awakened being physiology being more malleable to such transformations.

He hit the area behind me as I danced between his now considerably less mobile legs. I needed to being him down to cut off his head. There was no way I was going to get the speed or power to slice it off while in the air, after all, but I knew only one way to do it.

"Nice try girly." He laughed at me as steam began to rise from his ankles. I watched in horror as both of them regenerated, only now they were also covered by a thick plate. Was it a power or was he a defensive type?

I had no time to think or analyze my failure as he launched his ten fingers again at me in lances that I only barely dodged. It made tatters out of my coat, but neither of us cared about that. He was expending very little energy doing this while I was beginning to breath heavily.

"Hahaha, this is fun, but I feel like I'm missing the main event. You should look at your partner's fight. I don't know how she's doing it but she's awakened only her four limbs."

I refuse to rise to his bait and keep my eyes on him. Nevertheless, I check her youki and am shocked. She's pretty far away, but now looping back moving closer at an incredible speed.

"Your fight is here. Don't get distracted." I say as I pull out a stick and swallow it.

"Drugs. I've already seen that trick earlier. Those humans should have just run. It didn't make any difference."

"No. Poison." I said as I felt the Might break down in my body. This time he came at me with both hands raised over his head. He slammed them down together in a blow that despite dodging rocked the land so hard I found it tough to maintain my footing.

I pumped up my youki to 50% and then crouched down to place my hand on the ground before rocketing at his face directly.

He saw me coming and prepared to smack me out of the air. My hand was tightly clenched on my Claymore. The Claymore that since the day I began training I was told would be my life and if it ever fell from my hand would be the same as my death. The Claymore I'd slept with and even sometimes worken up with cuts from.

As his arm came at me I threw my Claymore at it. I intentionally aimed to have it impact on the broad side so it would bounce off instead of becoming impaled and trapped in his flesh. The hit combined with the recoil from my throw made his blow miss.

Without a weapon, I landed on his shoulder. I was immediately moving and concentrating every last bit of youki into my right arm. I even pulled the scraps of youki out of the Might in my belly to fuel the transformation of my arm into an awakened appendage that I sank into the back of his neck.

He tried to shake me off, but I was firmly rooted up to my elbow and then let my arm grow and further bloom. It was like a tree emerged from the from of his throat as his chin was forced up to the sky.

Unfortunately, while almost severing his head this alone did not completely do the job and I was trapped by my own appendage. I felt the center of his gravity tip back. Whether by intention or design he was falling onto his back and going to crush me.

My left hand grabbed my right shoulder and began twisting as I used my feet to tear my body away from my right arm.

It was as if my whole body had been on fire. Caught in a conflagration that was spreading from that arm and then I had suddenly been doused in cold water. Nevertheless my power screeched at me that now wasn't the time. I was 54 kgs minus one arm and about to be crushed by something that weighted tons. I threw myself into a roll and just cleared one of his fat heads.

Before he could recover I scrambled on three limbs to my fallen Claymore. I was never letting it out of my hand again. I ran to my fallen foe with my Claymore clutched in my left hand. Several heavy blows and the deed was done. His two remaining heads rolled until they were face down in the mud.

I took a second to catch my breath and then threw up the poison in my stomach. As I wiped my cheek I turned towards Ophelia's fight. She had awakened all four limbs. Her two arms had become long multi-jointed aquamarine colored scythes. Meanwhile her legs had twisted into a red tail like a serpent tipped with a ridge of spines down the back, and sticking out of it rows of legs like a centipede running down it on both sides.

I had never seen anything as repulsive or terrifying as that before, but she moved with a serpentine grace that belied her disgusting form. Attacks flowed around her like water almost as if they weren't even aimed at her, but then I realized she'd bent her tail or leaned back and was no longer traveling in a straight line like before.

Unfortunately, her opponents were lightly damaged. I wasn't sure how much I could help without my right arm.
"Could I even recover it?" I thought as I saw it sprouting like a cursed bush of spines and shells from his neck.

"Lazy-ass Clare, get your butt over here?" Ophelia shouted at the top of her lungs. Ophelia didn't bother checking if I responded because she was bringing the fight to me as she fled towards my location.

"So, the young one managed to defeat Sebastian. It serves him right. He was never a true warrior."

I rose and met the eyes of the rhinoceros beetle awakened who had said that. "And I have a name, Clare of the Avenging Smile. These hands may never save anything, but I can damn well avenge anything." I spat.

Ophelia smiled in pride. "I second that name. Why let the world define us. Choose your own destiny." She said waving a scythe through the sky hard enough I could feel the wind from its passage. "Now Clare I need your advice."

Suddenly I understood what she wanted. I wouldn't be able to contribute noticeably to the fight in an offensive manner, but I could advise her.

The beetle was obviously more heavily injured. At first I didn't notice any obvious weaknesses. It just seemed like a--FLIGHT. It can't dodge well in the air, which is why it has four wings and when it appeared the other day it was flying low to the ground. But getting it into the air and then getting a clear shot would be tricky. After all, a key to any such battle is to defend well any critical organs.

Elda began laughing. "Is this what you've been stalling for? You think a bit of tactics will reverse your position." She was easier. Although, Ophelia had only managed to blind one head it was clear from her motions that all eight heads were behaving like that one injured head. It was obvious that damaging some heads mattered a lot more than others. I bet Ophelia even damaged that head in particular at the direction of her powers, but didn't understand why she needed to do it.

"Ophelia use your special weapon on their legs. You'll be vulnerable to their aerial attacks, though. Also, Victoria don't try to counterattack them in the air. They're too maneuverable. Your hits on the big one also haven't done anything to her. You need to hit somewhere else."

"Got it. Wish me luck, sis." She said with the widest shit eating grin I'd ever seen her give. It also didn't reassure me that she did it with a face full of fangs and eyes that burned like an amber pyre.

"Good hunting." Four of Elda's heads suddenly pointed skyward and let loose projectiles that crashed into a boulder soaring above our heads. It shattered and as the shards came raining down onto our heads everyone began moving together.

I retreated backwards while keeping my eye on the action behind us. But in my mind I was scanning to try to find who had thrown it. But there were no longer any major youki sources around us. Several were fleeing to the north, but the rest had disappeared.

Ophelia opened things out with a rush while crouching very low to the ground. Her scythes aligned with their ankles. Mr. Beetle went air born, while the hydra danced while the three of its undamaged heads, which had not fired earlier, took deep breathes.

I kept looking for a weakness or opening. An allergy that was useless. A fear of centipedes, but she had already grown used to fighting Ophelia's current form. Nothing.

Ophelia began moving defensively again as she was sandwiched between Elda and the other one. I quickly realized this was not accidental but by design. She wanted to ensure Elda didn't feel comfortable firing her breath weapon.

I saw hints of her rippling sword in her scythes movements. They were unpredictable frequently changed speed and angle of approach to counter attack against any attack that was too bold. It explained why the flying being hadn't tried using the large horn on her face and was going for hit and run chip damage.

Two gashes opened in Ophelia's side from such flybys. There was a pattern in his movements, but I felt no need to yell it to Ophelia. Ophelia was arrogant, brash and reckless. She would take a hit or two if it lets her land twice as many blows. She'll feast on an awakened in front of her squad mates rather than take the time to store it and snack on it in private later. She is unreserved and unapologetic about it.

But in combat she is a genius. She has been in more awakened fights than most of the current single-digits and certainly more than any other warrior her age. Her survival is not luck but talent.

The third flyby was timed to coincide with one of Elda's claws reaching out to smash down on her tail at the thickest joint. She flipped her tail partway over so the claw scraped off only the top layer of skin. From the new wound on her side iron hooks sprouted and embedded themselves in Elda's claw.

Simultaneously, she whispered. "Already awakened, huh." She said as the Rhinoceros beetle awakened took off another pair of her centipede legs. Before it could make its getaway, though, it found her arm before it. She had bent her vibrating arm backwards at a 90 degree angle. Anatomically it looked wrong somehow, but she had it in position the minute he attacked her legs.

Ten cuts appeared in the flying being from top to bottom. Three in its head, four on its thorax and three on its abdomen. Each running in the same direction like someone with a shaking pen had drawn a line down its body.

Ophelia's scythe reappeared to my eyes and snapped back to the front of her body like a spring finally uncoiling. It was dripping in blood and guts, but not for long. Ophelia brought it to her mouth and a long tongue stretched out and slathered up and down it in ecstasy.

"Your blood." She said. "It lacks something. Faith? Confidence? Hope? Joy? No, I think I know your problem. You are dogs of the highest power. What you lack is audacity and it fills your blood with cowardice." She swung her arm down and the rest of the blood splashed onto the ground.

"So you two have defeated both of them." Said Elda with disquieting calmness. "Is this the power of your teamwork? Why didn't it work for me then? Or could it be your powers are highly compatible. Well, I myself happen to have some experience with compatible powers. Do you know how I survived that awful day with Cleansing Hand? I'll give you a hint." Three of her heads suddenly released their attacks in three random directions. Before either of us could respond. Ophelia was suddenly nailed in the back by almost a dozen rods that pummeled her into the dirt.

Then she turned to me and her injured head began healing. Elda opened her mouth. "We screwed up," I thought. The arrogance she had carried throughout this entire fight had vanished. Now we were facing a former number 4, Dynamite Elda, who was holding absolutely nothing back.

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Author's Note: Elda has a power that is very similar to Quiver's but she's using it like Isley's homing projectiles. What makes it different from Quiver's power is one tiny defensive twist. Also, I'd like to clarify that just like their previous awakened being fight they're using the same simple code to disguise Clare's intelligence message. It's a bit sloppy of Clare and Ophelia to not change the code since if the survivor reported the whole fight to the others then they might have worked out the code. Thus, these two could conceivably have known the code or that it was in code. That said, the awakened were too arrogant to do any detective work or code breaking, so all's well that ends well, I suppose.

I hope you like Clare's nickname. It's a homage to Teresa, and a reference to the fighting style she's developing. Much like in canon she's trying to build skills to fight enemies above her level and not at her level since her end goal is Priscilla. Thus, her fighting style works better against, for example, a single awakened being than against an army of yoma.
 
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Also, I'd like to clarify that just like their previous awakened being fight they're using the same simple code to disguise Clare's intelligence message. [/quote
I thought that was obvious but I have enough experience to say that it's probably best you put it in your author's note as you did, since not everyone catches everything.
 
Interlude: Lilith
Interlude: Lilith

I watched the Demon hurl one last chunk of soil and rock before turning to follow the bait one of the clones carried.

"How are you holding up, Diana?" I asked as I felt it shift beneath me.

"Good." She said with her eyes closed. Like me she was dosed with Might, clinging tightly and tied down to its back. It was even more important for her given her smaller arms and lighter mass. "It's going in the right direction at last. We were worried for nothing."

"I wasn't worried." I disagreed. This was fate.

Below I watched a single one of its strides clear a length as long as my home village of Doga. To think I would be doing something like this.

Can you see me mother? Father? This is the sort of woman your daughter became. I wonder if we'll be able to step on their grave? We'll probably just go over it.

"Can you see Raffy?" Diana asks me.

"No, she's too fast or we're too high up. It doesn't matter. It's too early to ask her to pull us out. Now let me concentrate. This one feels like a damn mountain." A half truth given it is no easy task to lighten something like this, but it's a task for my spirit not my mind. I just tire of her prattle.

I looked down at my feet. I climbed onto it barefoot. My left foot is bleeding, but it's not severe.

"I baptize you in the blood of the almost innocent." I smirk down at my ride. I am no innocent. I could have been. Making loads lighter or magnitudes heavier isn't a particularly dangerous power, but it sure is useful. But I've never been one to walk the walk or talk the talk. When others went barking and begging to those fat men in pristine white cloth bought with indulgences, all I can do is hold back my desire to retch.

Rafaela's battle with her evil sister is kicking up to some next level shit. The cyclones alone drill through solid rock like an afterthought, while I can see dozens maybe even fifty dots slithering through the dust and dirt. They couldn't sell tickets to this and I'm living it. No I'm carving my way into history. It sets my heart aflame and makes me almost wet myself.

"That, Diane, is how gods wrestle. If Rabona were here she'd be pissing her pants too."

She scrunches up her nose at that. Kids and their pets.

"Should we try to get it throw some stones?" She wonders. Those stones she's looking at are bigger than a horse, but I humor her.

"Naw, even if it listens it's just as likely to hurt Rafaela. Just follow da plan." And what a plan it is. How many people would have dared to sacrifice hundreds to save tens of thousands. How many of those kings and queens of old would have used themselves as bait? Would have deceived their own army and could steal victory from the buttocks of defeat. Then the crowning moment of her awesomeness will even be an act of Sorocide. She's like a hero from one of the stories. Or maybe she's right and she's a villain. I wonder who the church will choose to take all the credit for this after it's over.

"Rafaela! REVOLUTION!" I shouted at the top of my lungs.

"SHhhh. What happens if they see us up here. You know their vision and hearing is better than ours."

"Let them. Cheer for her Diana. Look at that ugly wildcat. She has more hungry mouths than a soup kitchen and Rafaela has been feeding her nothing but dust, dirt and doo doo." Well, almost true. I see a trail of several of the ordinances she picked up from the camp. An expanding ring in the desert where they fight of grey blue mold. A white fire that gives off no smoke. Petrified trees and a gargantuan shelf of rock that looks like it was cut smoothly enough to slide down.

"You can beat it, but save some of it for us!" I proclaim.

If I die here I won't get another scoop of that ice cream delight. I'll never see the monsters and humans working side by side in a land of ice, or that lightning magic the Saints have devised, but, damn, it might even be worth it.

Half the distance to the fight has been crossed. Did Rafaela manage to bring the fighting closer? No, I think this Demon is speeding up. Even he is excited. He wants to join in the carnage. The blood that was spilled and the blood he spilled were no more than appetizers.

"Let's signal Rafaela to pick us up. We need to get off this lug soon or we might get drawn into that fight." I said. My power worked better with close proximity, but if I strained I could manage it as long as I maintained a line of sight. Diane nodded as I took out the jarred Yoma heart. With a heave and a Might assisted throw it sailed off to land in a lake nearby. A lake quickly accumulating a fine layer of red ash.

She would ought to sense the youki leaving the Demon.

A dozen years ago the gods descended upon our dustball and elevated a few of us to fix it. Today I, Lilith Fucking Bainwright, am playing a part in doing what they should have just done in the first place--killing the unkillable. Today the Devil of the South will meet her match. When all the devils and devil makers die there will be just one more type of immortal to take care of--the false Gods themselves. For such is the Creed of the Hand.


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AN: Lilith was fun to write because she's so crude. She's probably closer to a member of the Red Hand than a member of the Cleansing Hand given her beliefs that everything is messed up or corrupted and the solution is to kill it with fire--even Rabona. Her power is also pretty fascinating because it's not too strong on its own, but in the world of Claymore it's a fantastic support power. She can basically store weight. Thus, when she's collecting weight the item she's targeting will only weight at most a third of its actual weight. She eventually needs to reset the scale by releasing back the stored weight and if she times it right she can drastically increase the weight right as a blow is being struck. Unfortunately, this isn't particularly potent when used on herself because she's can only make things up to a third of their weight or on the opposite end up to three times their weight. But when you're dealing with skyscraper size beings that can mean a ton of speed or alternately power.
 
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Chapter: 23: The Rippling Sword
Chapter 23: The Rippling Sword

When she released her breath attack a part of me knew I was dead. I had screwed up and yet most of me was just furious that I hadn't given Ophelia better advice. My own dream was either already accomplished or a mere pipe dream, but hers wasn't.

Before they could hit me, though, they were swatted out of the sky by Ophelia's tail, which then went on to curl protectively around me.

"Do you really think you have the luxury to protect anyone? That's not the providence of the strong, but of the unspeakably powerful. Like me." Elda said as two of her heads stretched out and ate the spent rods Ophelia had knocked off course.

"So you can reload faster that way?" Observed Ophelia as her hand shifted back into a normal hand with extra long claw-like fingers, so she could grab the rods near her and hurl them far away from them both. "Cute trick, but the human body is more than 50% water. And my body is around 75%. You won't be bruising this wave."

I sensed Elda's toes burrow into the earth. I prepared myself to dodge. Ophelia had shielded me from attacks from all sides, except from below.

Instead of appearing beneath me, though, they surfaced around other used ammunition that was spread out across the battlefield. The toes opened up like flowers and surrounded the rods, and then disappeared back into the ground before Ophelia could react.

Elda studied us. "So you wish to challenge me with your defenses. What if I do this?" She declared as four of her heads shot out more dark bruisers. I felt Ophelia's tail tense around me, but they headed towards Ophelia's mainbody. She weaved, and dodged, but any that missed simply turned back around in long looping arcs to hit her again. Moreover they all were aimed at her torso--her human torso.

She snarled and began to drag on the limb she'd trapped earlier with her hooks, as she herself shot towards Elda. Her tail unfurled from around me and followed her body as she approached Elda through a solid rain of rods.

"Desperate." Smirked Elda.

The four heads, which had fired prepared to intercept her. As she broke through a dust cloud kicked up by the impacts she was covered in large violet splotches ringing a sickly yellow. She weaved between three of the heads before the fourth caught her by her hair. That she tore out to escape. Suddenly she tossed up a bomb. It was the smoke bomb we'd purchased ages ago.

It went off and I couldn't see the fight near Elda anymore, but I watched a lump in Ophelia's tail shudder and shake up her body until it disappeared into the smoke.

Suddenly the smoke was all blown away as someone landed an incredibly loud attack. It blasted into the ground and left a broken scar upon the earth.

Elda turned to look at. "Wow. I take back what I said earlier. That was almost impressive. How did you do that?"

"Shut up." Ophelia swore. One eyeball was missing and her scythe, now lined with tiny cracks, lay embedded at the source of the fracture in the ground. "You did it again didn't you. Your power doesn't just affect your projectiles." She snarled.

"Yes, I confess I can alter the path of anything near me. Or to be precise, anything near me or any part of me such as my projectiles. You should give up on landing a blow on me. Maybe you'll kill me with your bad breath."

They traded blows a few more times half-heartedly as Elda reloaded. Elda remained talkative, but what she said did no more than confirm my thoughts. "The only way you could hurt me is if you have an attack that can attack everywhere. That's how the Cleansing Hand pushed me back, you know. They couldn't land any blows, so they simply tried to crush me from both sides with a 300 meter thick wall of death. You didn't realize, did you, that the wall has varying thickness. They've only broken through at one of the thinnest parts."

Complete area control.

"How is she so strong?" I wondered.

"You should know numbers mean little. She was strengthened to the greatest degree possible by the Organization at the time due to her importance to the Soul Link project." Said a tree beside me.

"Huh?"

"Shhh."

Ophelia began to take another beating as she was forced to retreat step by precious step. I watched for weaknesses, but with eight heads she could easily cover all possible openings. Only her mobility had been affected earlier in the fight, but it was meaningless when she was fighting like heavy artillery with such versatile defense. I kept being distracted by the obvious weaknesses on our part. Ophelia's powerful attack earlier had taken a lot out of her. She was a highly flexible and adaptable fighter who had developed the Rippling sword technique to take advantage of that flexibility. The highest peak of that was what she was demonstrating now. Flowing with the opponents blow, absorbing some damage from them, but also storing most of the force behind them within vibrations in her body. Then letting it all loose in one concentrated burst.

She needed to take damage, though, to store damage, and she'd already used it once. This would be her last move one way or the other.

I prepared the only move I could think of. Right before she went on the offensive I would try to throw my own blade. It would be a left-handed, one-armed throw. I pumped my youki up to my safest maximum right now--65% and aimed for the center of her body.

Ophelia let loose a swarm of lances from within her wounds. Minor chip damage at worst, but the way they deviated around Elda suggested the range for her own power--a merely a couple sword lengths. She had been scratched last time because she couldn't completely move out of the way, but it was all superficial damage.

"It's time to end this." Declared Elda. As four jaws opened with fresh projectiles gleaming within.

"I couldn't agree more." Growled Ophelia.

The instant before Elda fired her jaws snapped shut. The shots backfired and blew several of her jaws off. At the same time a familiar lump finished moving up her tail and into her chest. Her right scythe slammed forward and stretched across the intervening distance.

And a tree that was not a tree released a surge of youki.

The eighth head--the one Ophelia had injured early on in the fight, the one I had pointed out should be attacked again, and the one that had spoken the least throughout the entire fight--was obliterated. Bloody chunks sprayed out across the field and even landed within the ruins of the Army's camp.

"Victory." I thought.

"A pyrrhic one." Whispered my power.

"Oh no." Said the tree beside me that morphed into a Warrior with long, flowing straight hair. "She's lost control."

I dropped the sword I had forgotten to throw, and raced towards my older sister.

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Author's Note: Ophelia's Rippling Sword style is a lot better than it was in canon partly because she's used her power to help her come up with ways to further improve it. She's also fighting much better with her Awakened limbs than she did when she Awakened in Volume 7 because she's isn't suicidal and just phoning in this fight.

The special guest who showed up in this chapter, by the way, was detected by Rafaela way back in her Interlude as being on her way. So that should tell you that she wasn't there until late into the fight, and wisely chose to disguise herself and wait for the perfect moment to strike.
 
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Chapter 24: One Last Thing + Extra Scene
Chapter 24: One Last Thing

(Rafaela POV)

There's something glorious and magnificent about a fight where you need to hold nothing back. A lifetime ago as a warrior I would relish in the dance and fury of combat. I could never get enough of it.

Today, I was in top form. I could even see half of her blows, and not just the scars left behind in the landscape. It was like a game. Unfortunately, it was painfully obvious that although I could go all out, and indeed had died over a hundred times in this fight, Luciela was not willing to go that far. If she had simply used her aerokinesis to pick me up--all iterations of me--and then destroyed me in midair then this fight could quickly be over.

I had single-use weapons that could get me out of that position once, but until now I had been careful to never let my core use them, so I could continue to split and generate more copies of them. All it would take was trapping all of me in midair twice and I would be done.

She didn't. She pushed me over and over to increase my youki usage. Each time I had to resort to larger and larger groups of clones. Each with 1% of my youki. Still, I never brought out more than fifty at once.

She knew I didn't want to draw on large amounts in a single body or I'd lose stealth, but it was beginning to look inevitable as my exhaustion mounted. If I used 10% per a body, though, I'd be limited to a mere 7 bodies and each would be lit up like a lantern to her youki sense.

I pulled another technique out and moved with a timed burst of youki that curled through my toes, around my ankle joint, up my calf and exploded in my anterior muscles.

There was no balance to it, but a slick layer of youki reduced my friction as I put a hand out to steady myself.

There are two types of warriors, in my opinion. It wasn't offensive or defensive types. That might affect the way your body worked, but in terms of combat the only two styles were soft and hard. Hard styles relied on raw strength and power to overwhelm your opponent. They were common among younger warriors especially young, high ranking geniuses. Most awakened beings also gravitated to using a hard style because they found their pure power so easy to use to bludgeon their foes.

Soft styles were more common among older warriors, who had hit their cap in training speed, power or youki. They knew there were stronger opponents out there and sought to generate a style that could let them win even from the weaker position.

My sister had been a genius, who at 12 had developed the Gluttony skill to temporarily increase her storage of youki by manipulating stored fat. She refused to let her strength or speed define her and always sought "tricks" to eke out more power. A soft style user to her core.

I had been brash and overconfident with the power and capabilities of my body. I wanted to bring it all out, but it was inevitable given how I relied on it that I would be placed as number 2. I didn't mind. I considered myself strong enough and for everything else there was my sister.

Today we fought with each other's styles. I used every dirty trick I'd learned through decades of survival to make my clones just a tiny bit more effective in the face of pure power.

It was proof we were both dead and dreaming. My sister would never fight like this, and neither would I face her in this manner. Luciela was dead. Rafaela was dead. All that remained were two warm corpses dancing upon a pile of dust and ashes.

"Your puppet is here." Mentioned Luciela with amusement. Interrupting the frenetic pace of our fight.

I dodged a giant fist by transferring my core from this fragment to another one of my clones. In a second I was witnessing the body and dirt road where I had been standing buried beneath tens of tons of pulsating flesh.

"He isn't my puppet."

"You can't even fully control your trump card." She said in astonishment. Then with a laugh she began walking with stately grace towards it. "Very well, let us see how it tastes." She pronounced while licking her lips.

She vanished as a tornado sprouted between its legs and obscured its entire torso.

I began replenishing the clones, and repositioning them to better cover the battlefield minus where Diane's demon stood.

With a screech like metal on metal the arm of the Demon came off. Seconds later. Luciela reappeared between demon and me. She was bent over with one arm resting on the ground and blood dripping from her face.

"It's sweet."

Seconds later the blood, and fallen arm vanished. A surging roar above distracts us as two fists come down with blinding speed compared to the blow that had been launched at me. As Luciela dodged it, the demon's tail appeared over his shoulder and slamed her into the ground hard enough to leave a long trench.

"It is stupid. It's fragile and slow. It takes forever to build up and can barely last the length of a single battle. This is by far the most difficult power to use I have ever seen." I declared as ten clones leapt into the trench before being bisected an instant later as two nets are released over the trench.

Above my head one of the demons feet stand up and slowly stamp down destroying two of my clones.

"But, anything less would be meaningless in a battle between us." I begin running and circling the battle leaving behind clone after new clone.

Luciela tears through the nets like taffy before snapping out towards my two nearest clones and hurling them like projectiles at the shin of the Demon.

"True. Then if we're taking the glove's off, let me tell you a secret. My power is not aerokinesis." As she stands with two arms slightly outstretched, I feel the earth below me begin to shake.

"I've moved our fight in this direction because below us lies the ruins of Egon. It was decimated in the fight between me and that one-horned being. Now the corpses here shall rise for me again."

With a eerie creaking, the land began pouring dust, bone fragments and detritus up into the sky to form a giant ball overhead. I needed to interrupt that. Even as the demon's tail came down from overhead Luciela's tails moved to parry it.

"Take this." She cried ignoring all of my clones.

Two seconds later the ball had landed on the demon's head--blocking its mouth, eyes and ears. It's claws went to its face trying to claw it off, but it was like sand that returned to its place no matter what it did.

While I had landed a few minor blows her body began to increase in size again as the wounds healed. She sprang forward and with fang and claw removed a leg causing the Demon to pitch forward and fall to the ground.

A second later it had been restored, but the facial obstruction remained there.

"Damn. That's the only thing that seems to work, but I wanted that mass to surround and restrain you, Rafaela."

I charged and began weaving in youki wires. They were too weak to restrain Luciela, but the big problem was that the Demon had no idea where Luciela was. I could still direct him if I could take advantage of his tactile sense.

Suddenly I felt like I'd been tackled from behind by a boulder as I felt myself propelled forward, right into Luciela's claw. Half a dozen sets of fangs within her skin sank into my flesh drawing a cry from me.

"There's just one option left than." She said as I felt my strength leave my body.

"Wh-at-are?"

"I'm draining you of youki. Everyday I will drain you like this so you can't escape me. If I can't awaken you I'll hold you like this until I can find Sheila and get her to help me." I tried to shift to another clone body, but it failed.

Behind us I felt one of my clones carrying someone closer as I grew more frantic. Even trying to draw on my youki to break her hold didn't help. It just slipped my grip and made me feel weaker.

"Do-you-really-think-me Awakening will-change-my-mind?" I squeeze out.

"I can only try."

Suddenly I felt a shadow looming over us. Luciela released her grip and I instantly tried to jump to another clone body.

Above us the Demon was still blind, but someone was using the lure to directly attract it.

I ignored my own injuries and sought Luciela. She was nowhere to be found but I sensed her beneath us. I felt the earth rumble. It was centered right below the Demon. Nothing I had would reach her that far below the surface.

Soon the demon's right leg collapsed into a sinkhole. With a crack I heard something in his leg break.

When Diane resummoned it, that only fixed the damage to it's leg. The demon was still trapped.

"Rafaela. You put far too much faith into your tricks. As your older sister, a word of advice is to never trust something you've shown me once before. You have assembled a truly impressive set of skills, but none of them are reusable because I can figure out how they all work after seeing them just once or twice. For example," with a twist of her fingers she sends out beams of youki that disrupt the youki lines I'd set up to try to direct it with tactile sensation.

"Now give up this foolishness. You didn't really think you could beat your older sister did you? Subconsciously I bet you came here expecting to lose and then being forced to join me. I understand. You can't live with willingly joining me, so I'll spare you from any internal conflict by just taking your choice away."

"You're right. I could never join you." I glanced over at the Demon which was still struggling and then at the crater where Luciela had grabbed me. A tattered piece of fabric lay on the edge of the crater. It was from something Lilith had been wearing. She would have had a bit more bait to lure it with.

"What do you think we're aiming for here?" I said.

"Hmm," she said cocking her head. "Killing me obviously, but I don't see why I'm more important than the West or North unless you're also trying to reclaim the South for humankind. Don't worry. There are still quite a few humans here in hiding. I was concentrating more on hunting Awakened Beings and yoma packs."

"No, the humans are here to destabilize the Abyssal armistice. After you are gone Riful and Isley will have little to hold them back." 15 clones were left. 85%. Would 15 be enough? It would have to do.

"Also, they came here because you are the only one of the three they foresaw they could destroy." I said. I released my youki. Waves of it began to surround me like baptismal fires. The air between me and Luciela began to bleed and waver.

It was as if I stood upon a vast sea with a bucket. I dived in. At first it was easy. But then the pressure mounted. Past the point where my eyes and face transformed. I felt my body swell and deform under the pressure. Others would have shattered or drifted under the distraction of siren call of pleasure, but I had a goal. Deeper and deeper. To the fathomless depths where a droplet could weigh as much as a lake. I was reborn.

"You even awakened to kill me." Said Luciela with a frown. "Did you think you would have the same desires after awakening?"

"Luciela." I began to reach up and out. My body unfolding like a sea of tentacles.

My clones all took out a package. A present from the man in the north. They threw the dried pieces to the tentacles.

"Are you hungry? There should be a body in that crater, but it might be a bit pulpy. Maybe you'd prefer fresh meat." Said Luciela sniffing the air. "Your companion is over in that direction."

"Luciela." The red haze upon my vision began to dissipate as I took in the nutrients. Or rather the empty sweets. I remembered now that it would not hold long.

Luciela finally noticed I had eyes for only one thing. I released a pulse of youki to set up a field around us. Everything within it I could feel within my mind. As Luciela prepared to take evasive action my tentacles began approaching her from all 360 degrees. She was boxed in.

We wrestled against a backdrop of me. For every chunk she tore off I became hungrier and ate pieces of her. Every tentacle I landed on her became food for her. Yet, it poisoned her from within, but that only increased her ferocity.

The pain swelled and I could see in her eyes rationality begin to abandon her as well. When she at last had my neck wrapped up in a two-handed chokehold, all I was was fear and violence. Her power sapped me of strength but I could form offshoots of my body whenever she activated it. As she drained the last of my strength from the trapped shell in her clutches I wrapped my tentacles around her neck from behind. Then with a colossal twist I broke her neck.

I twisted it one and a half more times until it popped off. Then I swallowed it. As battle wound down and the pain finally subsided I felt movement behind me in my field. I turned to find the 15 other mini-me's using youki lines to lure the Demon into attacking me. It had even torn off its own leg and for some reason that was not being restored.

I couldn't
remember what I had to do now. There was something important I had to do. The demon was at last in range. The ball of detritus and bone had fallen away. Its face was filled with a rictus of hatred. I felt disgust at it and myself as I recalled what I had just eaten. At last, I remembered the thing I had to do.

I froze as its fist came down slowly. I began to screaming as it came down again and again until my screams softened into silence.

***

As the two corpses were crushed together, their fading youki was pressed into one. It mixed and a matched like two puzzle pieces that didn't quite fit but were shoved together anyway. The two pieces, though, made it work. They wanted to be one.

But what was left had no form. No substance for the youki to cling to. The youki was forced to return to the depths from whence it came to slumber peacefully.

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Luciela is I actually moving around the ground up dust and dirt of her victims. Her power's theme is absorption, since she can absorb the energy on contact of other youki beings and add it permanently to her own if she kills the being with her power. Telekinetically moving things she's sapped is just a by-product.

Rafaela's powers are interesting in that she can only create a clone where she is and it looks a bit like mitosis. She can, however, freely switch her real body with a clone so you can't just target the one that's generating the clones.

Her power also is limited in that her youki pool is divided between her clones, so the more clones she has out the smaller percentage of her total youki that can be accessed by any one body. This is an even bigger disadvantage when you take into the difference in quality of youki. The jump in power going from 0% to 10% is small compared to the increase in power when going from 50% to 60% because the quality improves as you access more of it. I think the diving and water pressure analogy used in the story is a good analogy for it. Fortunately, Rafaela's fighting style of using 0% and her youki-less stealth mode means she isn't affected by this downside.

By the way, Rafaela's awakened form is based on a sea anemone's body. Diana's construct will also begin shrinking soon in the absence of any conflict to fuel it.

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Extra Scene: Two Perfect Claymores

Two figures stood watch on a small cliffside. It was supposed to have been three, but the third had left.

The two figures said nothing. Their pitch black uniforms did not represent their state of mind. They were empty. Emptiness isn't dark. It is formless. Colorless.

They could not see the Beings that came in pairs. The horizon was blocked off by an enormous wall with a hole in it. But they could sense them coming now.

"Are you sure they can do this?" Asked a man behind them nervously. He was dressed extravagantly with frills and coiffed hair. Beside him was a man covered from head to toe in black. Only his coal black eyes were visible.

"Relax. You have paid for our services and for us to bring our best. We did not come here to be humiliated."

"Then why did that other warrior leave. I thought there should be four per a voracious one. You brought three and one of them didn't even stick around to do anything."

"These two are more than enough. She was just extra insurance to ensure none of them escaped our notice by tunneling far beneath the surface or flying high through the sky. After she located them and ensured that we were in position to take out any that were heading to Toulouse her job was done."

"But what if-"

"Shhhhh" he said holding a finger to the annoying bureaucrat's mouth.

The leaves beside them began to tremble. The two black figures staring at the hole in the Briar Wall did not respond at all to the tremors.

"The ones out there are creatures that have gotten around the army and two dozen saints. Plus some of the most prestigious mercenary companies around."

"If they were really impressive mercenaries they would have known better than to accept that contract."

Two figures stepped through the scarred gap. Then another two. Finally, several sad looking yoma skulked in carrying baggage twice their size.

"Toulouse. Finally. This is where we part company, I guess." Said one of the monsters in the front, who bore a fat, rounded shell, no arms and a heavily armored head on top without any neck.

"What's this? A welcoming party? But why are they wearing black? Did you dress up for your own funeral?"

"Galatea was right. A mere four. Very well, there's no need for you to go all out numbers 1 and 2." Said the man in black who stood up and began to walk away.

"What? Don't leave me. You fools. You should have summoned sixteen witches."

Behind them both of the Claymores drew their blades. They were weapons, and it was time for them to do their duty. Even if their opponents were simply too unworthy.
 
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Chapter: 25: Sisters + Extra Scene 2
Chapter 25: Sisters

"Ophelia." She was hunched over panting. Her youki danced up and down unpredictably. I could feel the almost palpable exhaustion in it.

"Stay back. I'm fine." She lied. Seconds later an upswing in her aura set the dirt swirling away from her. Her aura, though, felt wrong. I finally recognized the problem.

"Your limbs have fully awakened, and your body's youki is too weak to command them. Their youki is instead flowing back into your body instigating and provoking it." I said. I could fix this. Then I realized I was missing my sword. Idiot.

"I agree we should cut them off." Said the other warrior beside me right before leaping forward to do precisely that. Ophelia reacted by smashing her own scythe against the coming Claymore. The heavily cracks in it finally gave way as pieces of it were turn off. Still, it threw her attacker into a backflip that she landed gracefully.

"Shut up. You think I don't know that." Her face pulsated. "I'm not in control. Even if you take them off. I'll just bleed out and die. I don't have the energy to heal from that."

Her youki surged again before settling back even weaker than before. She was right. She'd awaken, or she'd die.

"Very well. Warrior number 7, Ophelia, how would you rather die?"

"Wait!" I said.

"Your only options are to be slain here now as a human or to awaken and then die as an Awakened Being."

I wracked my brain before I realized I should be using my powers. Ophelia's vulnerabilities were her overconfidence. Her power gave her a slice of reality that she attempted to actualize, but she may fall short of it. She refused to believe in the state of the world who where anything short of that came about, though.

"You're not perfect, Ophelia. You know I knew all along what you've been planning. For a month I've known you were waiting for the right time to kill me. Your power is weakened in the presence of other Knowledge Bearers. We can work around each other's plans. Now, shut up and work with me. She's wrong. There's a third option. I've seen it before in the past. The limit isn't a hard limit. You can walk away even from 99% if you have the will."

I watched her eyes go wide with fear and uncertainty. She looked off to the side for a second.

"The key is your will. Maybe that's what Ilena meant. You can't give up just yet." I advanced slowly. Arms at my side, I stepped into Ophelia's range. She hesitated.

Suddenly behind Ophelia, Elda rose. She stirred the dying embers of her youki for one last bout of spite. Only one head attacked us. It generated no rods. She fired her sharpened teeth itself at us. Ophelia reacted before I could even begin to move. She curled around me.

Teeth as long as spears but as wide as my forearm pounded us, but none came through. None but one. It slipped through one of the holes in her side and spearhead me through the chest. Seconds later I heard the warrior, who'd threatened Ophelia, attack Elda's dying form.

I fell to the ground looking down at the entry point. It had been a weak attack. At full strength it would have punched a whole straight through me. But if I was at full strength, I also would have avoided letting it land on my vitals.

I looked up to see Ophelia hovering above me. She was weeping. Her face...I reached up a hand. It shakily made its way towards her face.

She was saying something.

It didn't matter.

Teresa.

And Ophelia.

Her face was normal. I caressed it and felt my power, no, Teresa's power pull on me to do something.

I did.

Then I slept. I descended and sought Teresa. Would she welcome me with open arms again? I could almost hear her laughter.

"Rest well, my sweet Clare."

And so I did.

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(Galatea, #4)

With a final chop the last head had been bisected. I turned around to find #32 already dead, and Ophelia not far behind her. I screwed up. It was only further emphasized when I realized Ophelia had somehow reverted back fully--suppressing her awakening despite every indication of having crossed her limits earlier.

Was what #32 was rambling about earlier right? What had she been told by Ilena? She had been among the wisest and furthest along the path of the sword I'd ever seen. I could entirely believe that she had some pearl of wisdom the rest of us missed.

When I saw number 32 I felt a mix of regret again. I couldn't even recall her name, just her rank and that she had been Ophelia's newest protege. If only I'd been faster or left sooner. I wasn't planning on going back anyway. Not with the recent actions by the Organization and considering they finally finished my replacement. I'd hoped to join them and they had far exceeded my expectations.

The two of them defeating three Awakened Beings and with one of them being Elda herself--it was unprecedented by anyone short of the number 1. Alright, they did have my help at the end, but it was only a bit.

I reached Ophelia and tried to do that synchronization some of the defensive warriors specialized in. It was useless. All her implants made her youki aura like a schizophrenic chimera. I couldn't match it.

"Leave me alone. I don't mind dying now. I won." She said sobbing. "I have nothing to fear from death ever again."

She was delusional. She also clung to number 32 like a limpet even when I tried to make her lie down. As I felt her youki weaken and then disappear I took off running. The final Abyssal aura in the clash to the Northwest had died too, but there was another one coming now from far further west. She was still a long ways off, and if I was fast she'd never sense me. I had a feeling she would just pass over anyway. She would be checking out the other battlefield and verifying Luciela's demise and that the other Abyssal was dead too.

"She may not even eat some retrieval squad members if they were too slow." I thought with dry amusement.

As I passed over rivers and hills, I felt behind me a tiny mote of youki suddenly appear from the battlefield I had just left. It had appeared from out of nowhere.

Had one of them survived?

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Extra Scene 2: A New Adventure

I leveraged my bag up and snuck out through my bedroom window. I only made it a few steps before I was startled by the sight of a young child in a dark cloak in front of me.

"Priscilla. I can't take you with me. You should stay here with the villagers and be safe." She shook her head mutely, and came forward to hug me tightly. I sighed.

I had found Priscilla several months ago in the desert around Doga. She had collapsed, and I had taken her back, put her in my brother's empty bed and nursed her back to health. Since then she had tried to cling to me and follow me everywhere. I had put off going to find my brother long enough, though.

"Priscilla, you know I care for you, right? That's why I want what's best for you, which is remaining in this village. Where I'm going is no place for young girls." She only clutched me tighter.

It would help if I knew she'd be treated well in my absence, but I had a feeling my neighbors abhorrence of strangers and suspicions on my family would bias their judgement even with the months she'd spent living among them.

"Zaki, what would you have done?" I wondered.

The answer was not the one I wanted. I had a feeling he would not be running off into the night to go look for kidnappers in the vain hope that they'd what? Release him if I asked him nicely. All go to sleep and leave their keys out for me to release him, so we can run away together.

In the end, taking Priscilla was not going to make this journey any more or less foolish. It was far too late for that.

"Who do you take after?" I said to her while rubbing my nose with a slight smirk.

"Fine. But you have to promise to do everything I say. Do you understand?" I said.

She nodded enthusiastically. I'm such a softy.

We set off together to the West. In the direction the kidnappers tracks had fled.

***

Author's Note: So the real and the fake pair of sisters are both dead (maybe). I guess this fic is over. Should I do a FrozenXGame of Thrones crossover with Elsa and Anna coming down from beyond the wall instead of White Walkers? I might manage to not kill those sisters.
 
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Interlude: Xavier + Extra Scene 3
Author's Note: a short mini-chapter with an update from the team Isley talked about dispatching.

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Interlude: Xavier

"Great, we missed the whole show."

"Relax, Sonata, Cassie's field may work in a group of people, but it'd never protect us in a cross-country trek."

"I know. But all we can see are those two warriors."

"Wrong." Said Cassie. "We can see those two and the reaction of the people around us."

"Also, I'm sure they're aware they're being watched. So what is this then?" I asked rhetorically.

"A demonstration" whispered little Charlie.

"Yes, so the reaction by the church, and West is very important."

"Well, they seem pretty impressed. Except that young grinning maniac."

"He's important," said Charlie taking his eye off the telescope. "I think he's one of the three most dangerous I've come across in Toulouse."

Sonata took down his analysis.

"So what's the verdict?" I asked.

"Their opponents are trash. Both of you are much more dangerous than them. But, the warriors themselves are the most dangerous thing I've seen after Isley. Even worse than that woman from earlier today."

"More dangerous than Agatha and Rigardo put together?"

"Definitely."

Sonata let out a whistle that earned her a glare from Cassie.

"So Abyssal class, huh." It was worse than we expected. This also was worrying. They had been prepared to throw these two against potentially an army of awakened. That would have meant they were prepared to demonstrate their full potential to the church, saints, West and North. It was a reaffirmation of the Abyssal armistice. The Organizational was bold enough to throw their hat into the ring rather than wait for a potential war between Riful and Isley to cripple their rivals.

What was their angle?

"Not necessarily. They could be part of some plot that is dangerous. For example, one of the researchers in the Farm and one of the Scholar's Guild artisans gave off levels close to Agatha's and there's no way they're close to as strong as her." Charlie brought up.

"Good point."

"None of these guys sound too happy, huh." Added Sonata who began to smile like she was contemplating some new outlandish prank on the people around us.

"Of course not," scoffed Cassie. "The Organization just walked all over the remains of the army that destroyed their army. Did they even suffer a single injury?"

"No." Said Charlie as from behind his telescope.

"I wonder how they'll spin Luciela's fall." Said Sonata.

"They'll probably say Rabona saw her faithful sacrificing themselves for a higher purpose and rewarded their faithfulness by summoning down divine fire to eliminate her. After all, the light show earlier and the tremors were visible even from here."

"Can we go home now?" Asked Charlie. I sighed. I had a feeling Rigardo would want us to collect more info on what Riful did and where she went after she left.

"I last thing and then we'll return."

"About time. Our Homunculi Fruit are beginning to smell awfully 'fresh.'"

"There's an alternative." Added Cassie. "Plenty of cows no one will miss on our way back."

"No," I said with almost painful self-discipline. "As badly as you may want it we can't afford to leave a trail. The saints have got even better investigative teams then the East. If they figure out our identities we won't be able to make future trips down here again."

I watched Charlie head drop. Spoiled. A part of me wanted to remind him of the reality of just who he traveled with, but Isley's message to me right before we left always kept me from going through with it.

"We'll stick with the church's group for another day. Then we head south even if they don't and find out where Riful went. Don't forget the suppressants." I said as an aside to Sonata.

"Got it boss." She said in a seductive trill.

I wonder if she would like me as much if she knew I used to be number 47. It was meaningless and yet to some like Rigardo it meant everything.

The humans to my right and left began to posture and jockey for position. Funding, new recruits, facilities and the best trainers were all meaningless. They needed to wake up soon. Powers couldn't be trained, only youki. They had made a tremendous leap forward, but they weren't about to skip half a century of work in a handful of years.

The future was broad, but the past was deep.

***

"What should we tell them about that warrior?"

"What can we say other than Charlie's warning and her curious message?"

"Why would she ever think our king would be interested in leaving on a journey?"

***​

Extra Scene 3: The Empress' Plunder

"This is all your fault."

"I'm sorry, Riful."

"If you only you weren't so slow. I should have gone ahead or just carried you. Having those samples stolen right out from under us ruined the romantic atmosphere of this stroll anyway."

"But it was just a corpse. You didn't even want it before we got there."

"Yes, but anything the Organization wants probably has some hidden value. We may have gotten some of it, but they had first pickings."

"Bastards. But, uh, we did confirm she's dead."

"Yes. But that just means more problems for us. That man is closer to Staff than me, so I had hoped to pit them against each other first, especially with that new livestock he made off with. Now, any such attempt is going to be transparently an attempt to weaken him before war."

"Okay...You can beat him. I believe in you."

"Just shut up, Dauf. And walk faster."

"Yes, Riful."

"Hmm, that's weird. The ones fighting here were impressive but I thought they all died or fled. Now there's a trace of youki. Stop Dauf. Let's go down there to talk."

"Two girls. That one has the trace."

"She looks like a heavy Might user. Those taste weird. Hey, maybe we should dose her up with that new stuff, Extremis, and see what an overdose does to her."

"She's burying the Claymores. Did you see what she did with that shovel? She's got powers. We're not throwing away a useful birdy like her just to test some drugs."

"Then what about the other one."

"She might prove useful too. But if she's not I'll let you play with her. Now grab them and let's get back to my temperamental daughter. It's so amusing being a mother at my age, but I suppose I'm more of an aunt than a mother."

"Do you want to be a real mother, Riful? Ouch."

"Don't be a wuss. And men should only offer what they can deliver."

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End of Part 1
 
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Note: I just decided to change the name from the last chapter to Charlie instead of Charles. It just sounded a bit weird given he's supposed to be quite young.
 
Part II - Chapter 26: The boy and the girl
Part II

Chapter 26: The boy and girl

"200 Bera. She's scrawny. She won't be much good for anything beyond maintaining a cover. With her dead eyes I'm not sure she can even manage that."

"Her blood tastes sweet, though. Give it a taste."

***
"Look, Lia." The boy placed a hand on the ground and with a thump the dirt was repelled in a perfect circle. When he took his hand away a deep hole had formed in the earth about the width of his hand. He did this several times until the hole was large enough to lower our rope and bucket into. With a splash I knew he had succeeded.

"Can you imagine this whole area? We'll sink wells into it every farm and revive the town. Grandmama will be so embarassed." I giggled. Over his shoulder I spot someone. It's that mean boy who pretends to be my brother's friend. He's upset. I don't say anything. If I do it will just cause problems, and for today it's just me and my brother.

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Stroke. Stroke. Stroke.

"...so the sea gods rejected the pleas of the mortals. That day they sank the islands of Rukon and Eisley. Our people were among the few survivors because we had been sent here as emissaries and traders."

I sat back and with my eyes closed I imagined the waves and the pain of the gods. Stroke. Stroke. Stroke.

"Our hair." I said.

"Yes, this hair." She said running her fingers through it again. "Is the symbol of our people. Teresa was a even more popular name there because the fire in our blood and that shines on our head all the way down our backs is a reminder of the blessing of our summer goddess."

"Why didn't Teresa save our people then?" I asked looking up at her through my dark auburn bangs.

"Why don't any of our gods intervene? Perhaps these trials were meant to strengthen us, or they approved of the punishment. We certainly had some oppressive kings and princes." She said bouncing the comb against her chin.

"The church says it's because Teresa and Clare don't exist." I sing songed. Then I yelped. She'd yanked on the comb to undo a knot.

"Perhaps. But you shouldn't believe everything they say, Teresa. They don't know as much as they think they do about Rabona."

I felt a tiny tear form from the pain. I focused on it until my eyes were gushing and then turned to my momma for sympathy.

"Oh, I'm sorry." As she shushed and comforted me while I sank into her embrace. The sea monsters, ocean graves and goddesses all faded away in a perfect peace. I pretended I was there once again and that this wasn't all just a memory. Then I opened my eyes.

The rowboat we were on was nearing the shore of the island. I felt it--my enemy--and I felt pity.

***

"You've already awakened, Claymore."


***

I woke gasping for breath. My mind as jumbled as my body felt.

I wanted to cry out from the pain and return to my dreams, but the pain sank it's claws into me and refused to let me return.

I opened my eyes to the window. There were no bars or locks. Those were unnecessary.

I left to begin my work. The Empress' captured Innovators and Artisans occasionally called on me to help with temporarily insulating devices or parts from heat or the cold, but generally I was helping provide climate control with part of the food supply.

At first I'd tried to hide my powers. Make it seem like I was a normal human, so I'd have reduced security and might even get extracted. Half a day with the giant yoma was all it took for me to change my mind and start demonstrating my powers as flashily as possible. I felt bad for Erinyes. She kept quiet about my powers and for it we were both punished when I revealed them.

I am not proud of what I've done since. I've dreamed about being rescued ever since despite my conditions not being that awful. As one of their God-touched I am treated like a prized pet, and that's what worries me. What would they think if they knew? My mother would disown me. Do they even know I'm alive? I heard the rest of the army was annihilated despite their eventual success.

I am probably listed on a memorial somewhere with my family proud of my martyrdom. Coming back from the dead as one who fled with the help of Claymores who even died protecting me...They might just order me to abandon my name. Then they could bury poor Lyta Trevor and I'd have to go by something else like Lyra or Lynna.

It scares me how easy that might be too. Over the past six months I've noticed a drastic shift in my tastes and thinking. I have developed an obsessive interest in swordsmanship and working out. I also found myself craving meat, juicier the better, even before receiving Extremis.

One day I saw the guards practicing. They were lifting and holding huge weights and running lap after lap with lighter weights. Yet, I laughed. I slapped a hand over my mouth and quickly fled, but some part of me could only mock and find such efforts silly.

I also used to be shy enough people teased me all the time. "Lyta the flower girl" or "Ms. Lyta the saint wannabe," they called. I can't imagine taking that anymore.

When I asked to join the blue faction in training, at first they mocked my efforts as a golden pet imitating its master. I was overwhelmed with anger. I would have decked him, but a colder part of me saw his jealousy, ambitions and despair. I turned it all on him with insults and mockery directed to the weak points in his inflated pride.

I nearly died that day. My attacker, on the other hand, had his legs broken and did not receive treatment for two days. When Erin returned what had happened a week later she even wanted to put me on suicide watch. I'm not suicidal, though, or at least I don't think I am.

Perhaps Neptune was right, and whatever contagious factor exists I've caught. In that case, taking more Extremis really doesn't matter. I'm a lost cause and the best thing I can do is keep myself far away from humanity.

I do have a dream. A selfish one, and because of it I don't care what may be best. If the cleansing hand or red hand want to burn me at a stake they'll find I'm rather fireproof. At least, I think I am.

I finally arrived at the cafeteria and quickly enter their cellars. The doors here have no locks. A rather foreign concept to me, but it makes some things more convenient.

Within the first cellar I find the first of twenty deep pits with vats of human tissues. Somehow they've got human flesh growing down here like a fungus. It's disgustingly putrid, and it needs just the right temperature. The Silver King in the North offered it to them ages ago, I hear, and Riful took it begrudgingly. After a year studying it to figure out the catch, they finally concluded the only catch was that they'd need ice to grow it in Lautrec. Ice that Isley was in the perfect position to export or to prevent shipments of if we went to any other Northern merchants.

I've reduced their need for ice by two thirds, which makes me valuable enough to be considered a gold servant. Free from the experimentation like the bronze, and not everyone's bitch like the silver.

Still, in the hierarchy of Riful's castle all servants are subhuman. As I begin the day's work I pop another pill of extremis into my mouth. It's bitter and burns going down, but minutes later I feel as if I'm more myself than ever before.

I love it.

I hate it.

I move from cellar to cellar. Adding it to the active range of my collector power. Afterwards I can feel them just under my skin. Like twenty cups of water that make me feel bloated. I need to sit down. My seat in the hallway is backless so I push it up against a wall. After I sit down I close my eyes and concentrate on that new thing in the back of my mind.

Some traumatic circumstances have in rare cases resulted in "second touches" for a saint. They once again fall unconscious and awaken without a memory of what occurred but with new changes in their powers that expand or cripple their functionality. Sometimes it is good, and sometimes it is very bad.

After I awoke in Dauf's clutches I found myself in just that predicament. Fortunately, it had left my original powers alone. The knowledge aspect of my power, though, was vastly expanded.

As soon as my eyes close a book appears before me in my mind. I open my eyes and begin turning pages with my hands. I can do it without my hands but it feels faster this way. I turn it to "E" then "U" then "R," "O," "P," "A," and then A-V-I-G-N-O-N.

Her name, Europa Avignon, had been hard to find. At first, I'd looked up "Europa the Lazy," but despite being her nickname she did not truly acknowledge it. Honestly, I probably should have known better. I think she is just too lazy to make people stop calling her that.

On the page that appears, are stats and facts. Listed almost in bullet-point, but in a strange font that seems to blur unless I look at it straight on.

Europa Avignon
- Age 25
- Subordinate of Empress Riful
- Subordinates: none
- Youki S
- Strength A
- Agility A+
- Spirit B
- Perception A
- Leadership D-
- Fighting Style: False death - ? (Yoki-suppression and regeneration type)
- Loyalty: D
- Traits: Lazy, goes with the flow, easily distracted, and glutton.
- Fulcrum: Use access to food and play on her gluttony and laziness.
- Potential: Could easily escape Riful's territory taking you with her if she finds you interesting or useful enough. Will likely lose interest in you quickly or be too lazy to properly guard you.
- Disposition: Does not perceive you.
- Recommendation: Take Extremis.

It was the same as yesterday. Sometimes new things were added even when I hadn't seemed to learn anything useful over the course of the day. It was confusing but all powers seemed to be like that. I had a few guesses what spirit meant based on overheard conversations, but even Erin, didn't know much about how voracious yoma's powers worked. A curious point was that I only got that category when analyzing Voracious yoma, not any of the regular yoma.

Anyway, the biggest issue for me was her disposition. I was still invisible to Europa. While a few others, also seemed to have the potential of helping me escape and not eating me afterwards Europa was probably my best shot, but getting her interest was harder than I expected, not to mention how would she respond to my offer? I was only reassured by the thought that she was unlikely to report me to Riful unless she visited soon after. Europa was just too lazy, which was why Riful had her parked semi-permanently behind the main gate with instructions to eat anyone unauthorized going in or out.

She was also not the last line of defense, just in case she got "killed" and invaders made it past her.

I turned off my power and the book in front of me disappeared. I'd tested it a few times and no one else seemed capable of seeing it.

As I repositioned myself to ease a muscle pain I noticed a boy stick his head down the corridor. I didn't recognize him from anywhere. He was definitely not a commander, soldier or gold servant. If he was a bronze servant he could even be beheaded and eaten if he was found near the flesh factories.

"Boy, come here quickly," I gestured. "This hallway frequently has people passing through. You should hide in the closet until the coast is clear."

I'm right. I see it in his fear and relief. When he runs towards the closet I opened for him I realized he's dragging a girl behind him. Suddenly, I am consumed by a hatred that makes me want to strangle her, and a fear that makes me feel as fragile as glass.


***

Teresa is derived from either the Greek word θέρος, meaning "heat" or "summer," or θερίζω, meaning "to harvest." Hence why I picture her as a summer goddess, while her twin sister and the other goddess of love, Clare, is going to also be a winter goddess. Interestingly, Clare has its roots in the word Clarus meaning bright or clear.

In regards to her new Knowledge Bearer power, it's not 100% accurate since it is modeling and inherently omits certain types of info. It also is vaguer than you would think with anything vaguely like a "Like" such as shard behavioral interjection being classified under that category. Certain types of people won't have some information while the power might supply additional information on other aspects. The book form is really a representation of what it's designed for--supplying chronological records for the future on various threats. It has a high synergy with certain other Knowledge Bearer powers since searching for things alphabetically is not the only way to go about it but some of those options are restricted.

***

Omake: An Outside Perspective

"For the last time, I am not brainwashed. The one you speak of had the misfortune, apparently, of not being turned away by Teresa's killers. I serve Lady Riful of my own freewill, and have served her even before arriving at this strange land of magic."

"Then, who are you and how can you wear my dead friend's face? The only body animator or puppeteer I ever met could not prevent their subjects from rotting."

"...I've listened and let you pry this long out of respect for my counterpart here, and curiosity about her life. Still, don't infer I am some foul bodysnatcher."

"Are you her twin then? Separated by the evil machinations of...I mean just separated."

"No, and there's no need for you to know anything else. Good day, Erinyes Gale, and do not allow this interruption to cause you to fall behind on preparations for your smuggling run. Dauf may not run a tight ship, but I do." With that the Warrior with a Claymore, but without armor or a symbol left the room.

She proceeded down the hallway, into a rarely used armory, and then collapsed.

"All these options and you still couldn't think of anything better to do than to seek empty vengeance. I really was a fool." She muttered to herself.

She looked down at her hand. A hand that was striated with dark bands beneath the skin. A scar of her unique method of hybridization. She clenched her hand and then focused on regenerating the damage she'd naturally accumulated that morning.

After restoring herself, she proceeded to the practice yard. She liked to work out in public whenever possible. Any loss in surprise was at least made up for by the intimidation factor. It expressed confidence and inspired a bit of respect. There were enough rebellious murmurs with Riful's adherence to a fear based foundation.

In the yard, she saluted a few members of the white faction of the guards. One of Riful's best ideas was to integrate awakened and power users together and train them alongside each other, but in entirely separate factions. It produced friction, but also made large, organized coups more difficult.

As she settled into her first practice routine, she let her body go limp and directed it entirely by youki. It was a hair too slow. Like running but with the right steps out of sync with the left. Still, it was almost complete. A perception style that blended Teresa's practically precognitive abilities with physical feints--the Illusion Sword. When she fully mastered it she intended to leave the west whether Riful wanted it or not. In her heart wasn't a hunger for vengeance, but a hope of revival.
 
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Am enjoying the story, mostly. An impressive amount of writing, and a pretty decent bit of worldbuilding to match the crossover changes.

Do have to say that it hurts a fair bit on the technical side. A large number of technical errors, missing words, and poorly-structured dialogue. A lot of it goes beyond "mildly confusing", into largely nonsensical. Most large dialogue segments suffer a horrible lack of context — who is speaking (not just the name of the person, but being unable to even identify which of the named or unnamed characters is speaking any particular line), spatial context, temporal context, environmental context, and so forth. There's also a lack of individualized voices, which makes most speakers sound the same. It's like being in an empty room full of faceless ghosts, all speaking past each other.

I'd go through and give a proper C&C, but the sheer quantity of writing makes that a daunting task.

Still, there's enough going on to keep things interesting, so still waiting to see what else is coming.
 
It would be more constructive/helpful point out errors as they come up. You're not going to be able to convince me to go back and copy edit my whole story. Even if you don't do it every chapter or in every case like a beta would very bit still helps. For now, I'm too lazy and not invested enough to go back and fix anything unless people point out the specific mistake.

As for vague dialogue that doesn't make it clear who the speaker is, I think this is a legitimate criticism I'll try to do better about going forward. Part of it is it's a pain to go slowly and carefully to give every character an individualized speech pattern or add he "he said" "she said" to every short line especially if they're having a rapid back and forth. Also, I may omit it sometimes as in the Omake above specifically because it's meant to be mysterious who is talking. Sort of like the teaser at the end of an episode with shadowed figures speaking that will be fully revealed later. That said, I might be evoking less curiosity and more just frustration, which would be a problem.
 
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