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  1. Alivaril

    Revision (PMMM AU)
    Threadmarks: Prologue

    An unusually short post, but hey, it's chargen. Sitting in the back of a car, you try to keep calm and avoid letting terror sink in. Things have been a bit hectic lately and you have no idea what to do about it. [] Low magical girl potential, ability to become a MTG mage. Your father...
  2. Alivaril

    Ignition (MTG/Multicross, Planeswalker PC)
    Threadmarks: 0.1: Contract?

    If the PC seems bland and severely lacking in the emotions department for all of 0.?: that's cuz she had almost no personality to speak of. It was still in flux. "Life isn't fair." you mutter. You've started to really hate that phrase. It's an excuse, a rebuke, and a taunt all rolled...
  3. rkyeun

    Pokemon Nephri
    Threadmarks: 0 | Intro/Rules

    Welcome to Pokemon Nephri. This is a thing I'm trying. This story takes place in the future according to our calendar, but with tech not far advanced from our own, in a different region from any of the games, following one primary and two secondary protagonists on their pokemon journey, with...
  4. Alivaril

    Fragmentation (Original Superhero Setting)
    Threadmarks: 0.1 / Character Creation

    Original 
    2018 Note: I apologize for the handful of grammar mistakes in the earlier chapters of Fragmentation. I'll probably come back and fix them sooner or later. You wake up in a featureless void populated only by spinning shapes of various color and size. You dimly recall that this should be the...
  5. Sereg

    Puella Magi Restitutione Divinus (PMMM Post-Rebellion)
    Threadmarks: 1

    Your name is [] Write-in and as far as you've always believed, you are a perfectly ordinary student of Shirome. Your family might be slightly wealthier than average, but that's the case for many students of your school. However, as you take a shortcut down an alleyway on your way home from...
  6. IcePickLobotomy

    Family Matters (NGE AU)
    Threadmarks: 1: Start of Darkness

    It was a sweltering cloudless afternoon. Unadorned crosses stretched across the valley as far as the eye could see in ordered rows. Shimmers of heat wavered in the distance, rolling off the baking ground. A small group of people stood around one cross, sweat adorning their faces as the sun beat...
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