Divergent Codex: The Revised History of the First Contact War (Mass Effect)

The final battle was basically the entirety of galactic civilization throwing everything they had to buy enough time to get the Crucible into position with hopefully as little damage to it. Choosing the reject option results in the Reapers getting the uppr hand and exterminating everybody.
Hm? Yes, the reapers win the conventional fight even if things go perfectly I mentioned that but it's implied to be close enough that it's possible a stronger galaxy could take them so I don't think not taking the crucible is a death sentence merely a significant increase in difficulty that's not worth only five points.
 
[X] …a small outpost. (+2 DP)
[X] …a sizable research station. (Canon) (+0 DP)
 
Hm? Yes, the reapers win the conventional fight even if things go perfectly I mentioned that but it's implied to be close enough that it's possible a stronger galaxy could take them so I don't think not taking the crucible is a death sentence merely a significant increase in difficulty that's not worth only five points.

...Not really? Remember, this is a single battle. The galaxy had to pull in every single reserve they had and then some for this one push. Meanwhile, Reapers still had many ships on other planets doing their harvests. Earth was no doubt fortified because of the Citadel being there, but it was not the Reaper's everything, unlike the Galaxy.
 
[X] …a ruined crater. (+5 DP)

I'm going to go ahead and make it clear that I think the idea of us not having advanced eezo tech doesn't mean we're magically going to discover an entirely different tech tree from the rest of the galaxy. We're just going to be technologically inferior to the Citadel species, and that's not the end of the world.
I think it'll make humanity inferior yes, but only due to their tech lacking the same maturity as the Citadel powers. It'll lead to some interesting workarounds though, which will be fun to see.

[X] …a ruined crater. (+5 DP)

[X] …a ruined crater. (+5 DP)

I agree with everything you guys said.
 
We should probably start making more omakes, since we'll probably want/need the points.
 
The Mar'num Corridor (Potentially Canon)

The Mar'num Corridor


The Mar'num Corridor is a narrow section of the Relay network that connects Batarian space with the Terminus Systems. Although officially claimed by the Batarian Hegemony, the Corridor remains only slightly less lawless than the neighboring Terminus clusters. It is known to be home to various pirate groups, slavers, and a handful of mining outposts operated by the Hegemony, making the region largely avoided by most law-abiding citizens.

The development of the Mar'num Corridor by the Batarians began around the year 2432 (Galactic Standard). Officially, this expansion was attributed to the Batarian population reaching a threshold for a comfortable life within their system, necessitating the colonization of nearby systems. Unofficially, the primary motivation was the Hegemony's desire to establish a transfer point between its home world and the Terminus Systems.

The Mar'num Corridor has since become the second largest black market in the galaxy, but unlike Omega, it is entirely controlled by the Batarians. The Corridor's development has led to the strengthening of numerous criminal organizations, resulting in brutal raids on various colonies.

The Mar'num Incident


The Mar'num Incident was precipitated by a series of escalating pirate raids that plagued Citadel colonies close to the region. In the years leading up to the incident, numerous attempts were made to negotiate a peaceful resolution to the growing lawlessness in the Corridor. The Turians, in particular, sought to engage the Batarian Hegemony in discussions aimed at curbing the activities of the rampant pirate groups that were increasingly threatening trade routes and civilian safety. However, as the raids intensified and the situation deteriorated, the Turians found themselves with no viable options left.

In 2547, the Turians made the controversial decision to launch a military strike against the pirate bases within the Mar'num Corridor, viewing it as a last resort to protect their interests and restore some semblance of order. Unfortunately, the fallout from this raid was catastrophic; many of the pirate bases targeted were officially listed as Batarian colonies, igniting a significant political firestorm. The Turians were compelled to compensate for the losses incurred by the Batarian colonies, but they refused to return the slaves taken during the raids and did not impose serious penalties on the officers involved in the operation.

In response to the perceived injustices, the Batarians demanded additional punishments for the Turians and the establishment of a special status for their colonies in the Mar'num Corridor. When the Citadel Council refused these demands, the Batarians took drastic measures by closing their embassy in the Citadel and severing diplomatic and economic relations with the Council. This decisive action effectively transformed the Batarian Hegemony into a closed rogue state, further entrenching the divide between the Batarians and the Citadel races and setting the stage for ongoing conflict and lawlessness in the region.

A Century After the Mar'num Incident


One hundred years after the Mar'num Incident, the Corridor remains a hotbed of criminal activity and lawlessness. The Batarian Hegemony has continued to assert its control over the region, but its governance is characterized by corruption and inefficiency. The black market thrives, with the Corridor now serving as a major hub for illicit trade, including weapons, drugs, and slaves. Criminal organizations operate with relative impunity, often engaging in violent turf wars that further destabilize the area and endanger the lives of innocent civilians.

Efforts by the Citadel Council to restore order have been met with staunch resistance from the Hegemony, which claims to be making progress in policing the area while simultaneously allowing criminal organizations to flourish. The political fallout from the Mar'num Incident has left a lasting rift between the Batarians and the Citadel races, with diplomatic relations remaining strained and largely non-existent. Many Council races view the Hegemony as a rogue state, and their opinions on the situation vary significantly.

As a result, the Mar'num Corridor has become a symbol of the ongoing struggle between lawlessness and order in the galaxy, with its future uncertain. The legacy of the Mar'num Incident continues to shape the dynamics of power in the region, as both the Hegemony and the Council grapple with the consequences of their actions a century ago.
 
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[X] …a sizable research station. (Canon) (+0 DP)

When I wrote this omake, I had two main ideas in mind.

First, since we are heading towards the First Contact War, it's crucial to bolster the Batarians' forces and their presence in the system. This would create a genuine threat to humanity, allowing the conflict to escalate before the Citadel intervenes.

Second, I wanted to consider the developments in the galaxy over the past 200 years. In the canon, the Batarians severed ties with the Citadel after humans began colonizing the Skillian Frontier, a region the Batarians were already actively pursuing. In 2171, the Batarians requested the Citadel Council to recognize the Border as an area of "Batarian interests." When the Council refused, the Batarians closed their embassy and effectively became a self-contained rogue state. Since they were so freaked out about something like this in the canon, sooner or later they would have done it even without humanity.

Regarding the Turian attack, it's important to note that the Batarians were widely disliked, and many were unwilling to allow them to establish a new criminal stronghold. The Turians, unable to tolerate this, took decisive action.

I think, that humanity is likely to gain some galactic sympathy for attempting to address the Batarian threat, even if it means resorting to extreme measures. Some may even speculate that the Batarians themselves activated the relay, further complicating the narrative.
 
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[X] …a sizable research station. (Canon) (+0 DP)

Do we need a reminder that if humanity doesn't have at least a little bit of eezo tech we're going have millions of humans snatched by slavers? We don't need to make up the deficit this way, the costs outweigh the gains too significantly when we could easily make it up through one or two omakes.

While the above Omake puts a crimp in the following statement, we cannot rely on an infinite stream of Omakes from Leon.
 
Human History Prior to the 2148 Discovery and Subsequent Formation of the Systems Alliance (Non-Canon)
Human History Prior to the 2148 Discovery and Subsequent Formation of the Systems Alliance

2086: The United States of America exits NATO following an increasingly isolationist electorate and begins pursuing isolationist policies, causing the global economy to stagnate and mass economic slumps to engulf much of the world. Russia's President at the time is subsequently overthrown in a coup by Russian revanchists in the government, and swift embargoes against it as a result follow suit, and the Russian economy stagnates.

2096: Following an increasingly radicalized election with President Kaitlin Cheung elected to government, Canada and Mexico are both invaded and forcibly inducted into the newly declared United North American States. Outrage at the forced annexation results in the November 1st attack on the Statue of Liberty, kickstarting off the Second American Civil War between multiple secessionist factions and government figures declaring the others illegitimate, splitting the armed forces in the process. The resultant civil war causes global economic collapse.

2097: The newly revanchist Russia invades former Soviet and Russian Empire territory to 're-establish Russian dignity', with little aid given to said invaded countries due to economic chaos within the European Union and the ongoing civil war in Europe, causing their collapse. Armenia, Azerbaijan, Georgia, Kazakhstan, Kyrgyzstan, Tajikistan, Turkmenistan and Uzbekistan fall in short order. Meanwhile, Libya is declared for under an extremely revanchist pan-Arabian government.

2098: The People's Republic of China attempts an invasion of Taiwan following the collapse of the United North American States into civil war. The initial invasion attempts fail due to Japanese and Asian SEATO members entering into the war on behalf of Taiwan and conducting an incredibly successful blockade, forcing a white peace. Mass reorganization of the Chinese Central Committee and Politburo begins and proceeds following this national humiliation. The global economy begins to recover. Libya declares war against Algeria, then Morocco.

2099 - 2102 : The global economy mostly re-establishes itself, and Russia subsequently invades Ukraine. NATO joins the war in favour of Ukraine, but are forced backwards due to military budgets being slashed into the dirt during recovery and are forced to subsequently accept a humiliating peace treaty following the capituation of everything east of Germany. Mass discontent rocks Europe following economic and societal turmoil within those nations, as Russia declares a national victory. Meanwhile, the Arab states declare war on Israel and successfully triumph, but are rocked by nuclear detonations in return while Libya successfully defeats both Morocco and Algeria on the field of battle.

2103: Revolutions rock Europe as a furious population begins overthrowing increasingly unpopular governments following the second economic collapse as a result of the First European War, and civil wars and coups begin following suit. NATO disintegrates as a result, but is replaced with the European Internationale as communist revolutions succeed in overthrowing their governments and defeat every other contender, which declares revanchist intentions against Russia and a declaration to 'free Eastern Europe from Russian tyranny' and begins arranging the overthrowing of neutral governments within Europe in favour of communist ones. Russia prepares for a second European War.

2101: The Second American Civil War concludes with the Pacific Command Centre triumphing, declaring itself the true United North American States following the defeat of the Cheung Presidency and the collapse of secessionist armies in the field. Reconstruction begins, but major concessions are given to its constituents in order to pacify them. Meanwhile, the People's Republic of China re-organizes into the Chinese People's Federation, with the New Leftists leading in favour. Threatening movements are made towards South Korea.

2104: The Second European War begins as the European Internationale challenges CSTO on the field of battle. With military budgets set to an all-time high and organized uprisings within the occupied Eastern European states, CSTO is swept aside and the European Internationale plunges itself like a dagger into the heart of Russia, successfully decapitating Russian high command during the attack on Moscow. Though the cost on Europe itself is high as what nuclear bombs Russia managed to rebuild following the Nuclear Disarmament Treaty of 2069 rock the continent as one last act of spite, Russia eventually declares unconditional surrender following nuclear retaliation by European Internationale members who also managed to scrounge up nukes to create.

2105: Extremely high feelings of unity within Europe results in the formation of the European Union, as borders are cast aside in favour of economic, political and cultural unification within Europe, resulting in the world's second superstate being born. Meanwhile, China declares war on the Pacific Defense Treaty Organization (composing of Japan, South Korea, the Kingdom of Thailand, Malaysia, India, New Zealand and Australia) with the aid of its partners within the East Asian Defense Initiative (composing of China, Vietnam, Laos, Indonesia, the Phillipines and the Myanmar puppet government)

2107: The war concludes in China's favour, with India being humilated and pushed back in the wake of a resurgent China and most of Asia conquered by the new hegemon of Asia. The East Asian Defense Initiative declares victory, as the Chinese People's Federation declares itself the world's third superstate while annexing most of Asia or putting them under puppet governments while conceding any territorial demands by its partners to appease them. Meanwhile, an increasingly unified Arab world successfully unite into the Pan-Arab Federation following succeeding triumph after triumph against nations perceived as 'Western-influenced puppet states'.

2108: In the wake of the declaration of four superstates (The United North American's Union, the European Union and the Chinese People's Federation) a united front amongst begins to crystalize, resulting in the formation of the Union of Incorporated States, a global alliance against influence by the superstates by uninvolved states in the Decades of Strife.

2110: With the devastation wreaked upon the world by the European Wars, the Great Asian War and the Second American Civil War, the resultant global hegemons of the world gather to discuss peace. The Chinese People's Federation, the United North American States, the European Union and the Pan-Arab Federation agree to- hopefully- never go to war on Earth again, in the wake of billions of corpses resultant from the war.

2128: A new generation dawns. Humanity, following rapid repopulation of the Earth and fixing up as much of it as possible, begins to reach for the stars, competing with one another in hopes of colonizing the cosmos. Space technology is dusted off as the final frontier begins being eyed up once again by the new generation. Space exploration and colonization fervor reaches new heights as all the nations of the world throw enormous portions of their budget into space exploration technology. Russia and India are both deemed 'completely purged of its reactionary tendencies' and the Union of Soviet Socialist Republics returns to life alongside the Socialist Republic of India.

2140: The first Mars landing attempt succeeds by China, which rapidly begins mining on Mars. They are soon followed by the European Union, the Second USSR, the United North American States, the Eighth Brazilian Republic, the Socialist Republic of India, the Socialist Republic of Vietnam, the Republic of Indonesia, the Australasian People's Republic, the Second Argentine Republic, the Pan-Arab Federation, the Second Republic of Turkey, the Scandinavian Union, the People's Democratic Republic of Korea, the Federal Democratic Republic of Ethiopia, the Second Republic of South Africa, the Republic of the Phillipines and the Lao People's Democratic Republic.

2144: The European Space Agency manages to claim the title of first to establish a permanent settlement on Mars, though the other superstates and countries involved in Mars rapidly begin to create permanent settlements as well, and the Union of Incorporated States finally joins in on colonization on Mars.

2148: European miners discover prothean ruins on Mars.

My brain has some weird ideas sometimes, and when I saw 'United North American States' and 'Second American Civil War' on the wiki, my brain just went 'but how far can we really go on making this alt-history' and went to town.
 
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Human History Prior to the 2148 Discovery and Subsequent Formation of the Systems Alliance

My brain has some weird ideas sometimes, and when I saw 'United North American States' and 'Second American Civil War' on the wiki, my brain just went 'but how far can we really go on making this alt-history' and went to town.

So the world is largely communist here huh? Speaking of which, I never understood why all planquests always drift towards communism, it's as if 1989/1990 never happened. I always find it so unbelievable when you look at the historical examples, not only that communist states are founded, but also that they are economically successful for some reason.
 
We voted for humanity to have an extra 2 centuries of development, and I really don't want this quest to devolve into "Humanity! F- Yeah!" If the QM thinks that the "ruined crater" is worth 5 DP, then it's objectively 5 times less important than the 2 extra centuries of development we already got. I don't magically think we're going to invent new tech trees out of nowhere like some people are generalizing the "ruined crater" voters, but I think it's incredibly boring having a humanity without any weaknesses or flaws. Protagonists (and in this quest, "humanity" in general is a protagonist) are interesting because they try to succeed in spite of their flaws, not because they lack any at all. (And as for the "we can just write omakes to not deal with the consequences of DP debt", I really don't think that'll work long- (or even short-)term; the QM made the Divergence Points mechanic as a balancing tool, and if the quest becomes unbalanced because of omake DP, I imagine there will start to be limits on them.)
 
I am sorry if you don't like "Humanity! F- Yeah!", but I am going to keep voting that way because that is what I think works best and wish for. As Protagonists for Humanity, I shall keep staking the deck in Humanities' favor.
 
I am sorry if you don't like "Humanity! F- Yeah!", but I am going to keep voting that way because that is what I think works best and wish for. As Protagonists for Humanity, I shall keep staking the deck in Humanities' favor.
Even if a giant DP debt fucks us over?
 
Its called slowly getting rid of it and picking some option that favor anyway. I don't think that 5 is worth it lol. I don't mind the 2 gain or 0 gain.
...but we aren't slowly getting rid of it? We've only voted for a single option that reduces the DP debt so far (and it was only by 2). The rest has come from omakes, which I already explained probably won't be viable long-(or short-)term.
 
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